DeRandom Otaku wrote:

oh and my suggestions might conflict with above mod since i started typing this hours ago xd
[Insane]

1. 00:05:407 (1) - The sound on the slider head is kinda unique compared to its surrounding and it should rather be emphasized so you may wanna unstack it and leave it DS'd for emphasis ~ or increasing the DS for it from the previous notes will emphasize it even better I actually think the music is calm here but I'll wait for more opinions
2. 00:05:757 - Try to bring down volume for these slider ticks and slider ends since it just doesnt sound nice right now I don't think it sounds that bad and this is actually the only slider here that has that many ticks.. I'll see what the others say
3. 00:09:091 (3,4,1) - This flow is quite weird actually since the movement is almost linear and playing these kind of flows feels kinda awkward , Atleast in my opinion Hmm, tried to do something different there
4. 00:12:249 (4,1) - Could definitely improve this blanket Made a tiny improvement
5. 00:13:126 (2,4) - Actually , Try moving these 2 or 3 pixels to left so they become more linear with 00:13:301 (3) - Made a change there.
6. 00:17:600 (4) - Overmapped , I really dont hear a beat here in the song . Even at 25% playback i hear no sound I agree. Fixed
7. 00:17:600 (4) - You dont really need this NC since u already have an NC at 00:18:214 (1) - And NC'ing 00:17:863 (1) - just feels over-NC'ing which is not so nice Ok, fixed
8. 00:24:354 (2) - The vocal goes really intense here if u listen closely so u may increase DS for it aswell for emphasis Increased the DS
9. 00:28:652 (3) - My Eyes caught this one lo but . yeah i know this is very nazi but it triggered me ~ Do equal spacing for 00:28:389 (2,3,4) - Fixed
10. 00:42:249 (2,4) - Blanket bad Yeah, whoops. Fixed
11. 00:44:880 (1,3,4,5) - They look like a mess with stacking turned on Will wait for more opinions
12. 00:58:740 (1,2) - This pattern might be a bit misleading since the visuals look like ur 1/2 patterns I'll see what others say cause I want that pattern to be a bit difficult.
13. 01:04:003 (3) - i dont really like it for the fact that it ends on a much louder piano sound than it starts from so u should rather make it clickable aswell Wishkey also mentioned this so fixing it now
14. 01:12:775 (1,3) - That tiny overlap looks bad maybe try to blanket 3 and 1 Followed your suggestion
15. 01:20:933 (4) - This is overmapped aswell . i guess I can hear a beat in the background so keeping it as is for now
16. 01:31:196 (1,2,3,4) - This is just not fine atleast in my opinion since it tricked me during testplay ~ 01:31:196 (1,2) - These are 1/4 while 01:31:722 (3,4) - These are 1/2 while u have the exact same spacing between these ~ well majority of players are gonna hit 01:32:249 (4) - Much sooner just like i did I agree. Increased the spacing there

[Normal]

1. Try doing OD 4.5 mayb since 5 seems quite high here Yeah, already changed this
2. 00:05:407 - As i said about emphasizing this sound in insane . in normal i guess try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/snzVD/5fba351eb7.jpg so that 00:05:407 - THIS will be clickable Followed your suggestion
3. 00:15:056 (5) - Try changing it with a 1/2 slider since there are 1/4 sounds in the song which are'nt being represent by just a single circle. Atleast in my opinion Ok, fixed
4. 00:18:740 - There must be a circle actually . You are ignoring a very important vocal here for no reason I don't map every single vocal otherwise it will be too much imo, but I decided to map this one out.
5. 00:43:477 (1,2,3) - I dont recommend u do this since i had one of these patterns in my map and i was forced to change it to get the bubble xd but the point is that 00:44:880 (3) - Starts appearing before 00:43:477 (1) - totally vanishes so yea it can bug majority of noobs Lol, lowered that slider a bit so it's not overlapped
6. 01:49:442 (4,6) - Try copy-pasting same shapes here for nicer visuals Ok

[Easy]

1. 00:14:705 (3) - You should probably finish this on 00:15:056 - and add circle at 00:15:407 - cuz of those 1/4 sounds in bg Followed your suggestion
2. 00:29:442 (1) - 00:32:249 (1) - literally the same vocals but not same rhythm D;;; Made them similar
3. 00:49:091 (1) - ok this shape rather looks weird and its not symmetry from both ends aswell Tried to improve it
4. 00:51:898 (1,2) - This would look much much more nicer if u copy paste the same shape . Just try doing it I think it looks fine >.<
5. 00:51:898 (1,3) - Also that tiny tiny tiny overlap is very noticeable in gameplay and it just looks really bad Yeah, fixed
6. 01:00:319 (1) - This being symmetry on both ends is not quite good imo since theres a noticeable change in rhtyhm at 01:00:845 - Hmm, did something
7. 01:48:038 - i know this is an easy difficulty but still adding a circle here wont hurt at all . But seriously tho , please add one . else it feels way to empty ~ Same for 01:59:266 - Ok, added circles there
8. 01:48:038 (1) - Also , This is supposed to end on 01:48:038 (1) - right? since that would make much more sense. dont worry about the recovery time tho ,it will still be enough i guess Already fixed this.

good luck!~

Thanks so much for the mod~

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

oh and my suggestions might conflict with above mod since i started typing this hours ago xd
[Hard]

1. You will want to nerf ur HP and OD here cuz its a bit too high for this level of diff ~ Especially The HP since its even higher than insane right now Yeah, fixed that~
2. 00:04:179 (1,2,3,4) - i dont really get it , pitch is getting intenser here and u started using easier rhythm Will wait for other modders. . so no change yet
3. 00:11:021 (5) - imo this should actually be 1/1 since u can hear an emphasized sound in the song at 00:11:547 - so there should be a clickable object for it Okay, followed your suggestion.
4. 00:14:529 (6,7,8) - 00:15:056 (9) - Tbh u should swap the circles with reverse sliders since the drums at 00:14:529 - are much fainter so a slider would suit it better and since the melody gets intenser at 00:15:056 - you should better change it with circle for proper emphasis Yeah, fixed
5. 00:16:284 (3,4) - Wrong DS? intentional? well if its intentional , u should also add extra spacing for 00:15:407 (1) - since it supports almost the same sound Was not intentional. . so fixed.
6. 00:18:214 (1,2) - 00:18:740 (3,4) - DS is 1.3 here while its supposed to 1.2 if i m not wrong Fixed >.<
7. 00:19:617 (6,7) - Spacing here is close to 1.1 which u should fix aswell Okay, tried my best.
8. 00:22:073 (4,5) - Rhythm sounds kinda awkward here since theres no particular sound at 00:22:336 - which u need at use the slider end for . Instead u should end the slider at 00:22:249 - since thats where the vocal and the hi-hat sound is Okay, followed your suggestion
9. 00:40:670 (1) - Actually , Add more spacing here to emphasize the new stanza and that loud cymbal Okay
10. 00:49:793 (3) - This shouldnt be a repeat slider actually . It should finish at 00:49:968 - because you are leaving an important vocal unclickable at 00:50:143 - which is pretty soso Okay, did so.
11. 00:54:529 (8,1) - Try to leave them DS'd Actually since stacking a note with intenser sound gives them no spacing emphasis Yeah, fixed
12. 01:16:722 - tbh adding a note there wouldnt hurt at all since the song is getting stronger very fast and there is an important drum sound there Uhm. . I don't really hear a drum sound here. . so no change. But I will wait for other modders opinion.
13. 01:28:038 (9) - This is not good at all . A slider end at the start of the new stanza and where there is a strong cymbal sound with intense melody sound is just bad af ~ tl:dr make 01:28:389 - clickable , PLEASE ~ Same for 01:42:073 (8) - . Make 01:42:424 - Clickable Yep, changed
14. The part after kiai has really weak emphasizing tbh ~ Sliders like 01:49:793 (6,7) - 01:53:301 (8) - 01:56:108 (9,1) - Which end on much louder sounds dont play well AT ALL Okay, fixed.
15. 01:54:880 (5) - As i said before , Try to not stack louder beats under other notes for much better emphasis ^
16. 01:59:266 (7) - Maybe add an NC here to be consistent with other difficulties Already fixed~

good luck!~

Thanks for the helpful mod~!

[Easy]
00:09:793 (2) - you should add nc this note cuz there is exist strong beat for nc. if you nc this note then you can make 2 downbeat nc next notes
00:11:196 (1,2,3,4) - you can make more perfectly these note and sliers to triangle
00:15:407 (4) - add nc
00:22:424 (3,4) - fix ds plz
00:37:863 (3) - add nc
00:37:863 (1,2,3) - you can make rhythm like this. it's pretty better than now 01:48:038 (5) - how about nc this note?
01:59:266 (4) - ^

[Aihuro]
00:13:828 (4) - add finish at slider head
00:15:757 (2) - ^
01:39:442 (7,1) - how about increase ds? cuz 01:39:617 - there is exist strong beat for jump
01:56:459 (10,1) - swap nc

[Insane]
00:56:108 (4) - add nc?
01:07:161 - how catch the vocal sound? it's too strong for ignore
01:20:933 - there is no 1/4 rhythm i recommend remove note
01:28:301 (8,1) - how about increase ds? it so weird
01:31:196 (1,3) - you can make more perfectly blanket
01:38:038 (1) - add nc?
01:54:880 (5,1) - swap nc?

i'm shit modder xD GL!

[General]

1. 00:24:354 - hitsound is a bit too loud
   
2. add some 5%-volume line at the tail of 3/4-slider?

[Easy]

1. 00:14:003 - no sound here, maybe use this rhythm: http://b1.loli.io/images/B8xw.jpg
   
2. 00:15:757 (5,6) - http://b1.loli.io/images/em0B.jpg
   
   I know you don't want to follow red-line-sound, but it's heard really weird
   If you really don't want to change rhythm, then at least make volume much bigger then the music, just like 01:18:214 (2) - and 01:26:986 (3) -
   
3. 00:37:863 (3,4,5) - 01:00:319 (1,2) - same.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:389 (4,5) - no need to use 3/2 here, 1/1 work well. Though you want to follow the instruments, sound at 00:08:740 - and 00:09:442 - is much more important then 00:08:915 - and 00:09:617 -
   
2. 00:12:600 (1) - ^
   
3. 00:34:354 - make it clickable http://b1.loli.io/images/mm6y.jpg
   
4. 00:42:775 - add note
   
5. 00:55:933 - ^
   
6. 01:38:038 (4,5,6) - this rhythm may be more comfortable: http://b1.loli.io/images/nmKj.jpg
   
7. 01:58:915 - this sound is special, make it clickable: http://b1.loli.io/images/6jpw.jpg

[Hard]

1. 00:42:073 - this sound is not really important, because drum and vocal are at 00:41:898 - and 00:42:249 - , so you can use this rhythm: http://b1.loli.io/images/omom.jpg
   
2. 00:44:880 - 00:50:494 - ^
   
3. 00:55:933 - add note?
   
4. 01:40:143 (2,3,4,5) - http://b1.loli.io/images/WmOv.jpg
   
5. 01:49:442 - no sound here, and 01:49:266 - is important

[Insane]

1. 00:42:073 - this sound is not really important, because drum and vocal are at 00:41:898 - and 00:42:249 - , so you can use this rhythm: http://b1.loli.io/images/Ymbd.jpg
   
2. 00:47:687 (1,2) - ctrl+G in rhythm?
   
3. 01:16:108 (7) - end at 01:16:459 - ?
   
4. 01:28:301 (8,1) - this's tooooooo difficult in a bpm171 insane. this should only be used in ex diff

GL~

[C u r i] wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:793 (2) - you should add nc this note cuz there is exist strong beat for nc. if you nc this note then you can make 2 downbeat nc next notes I don't want the NC's to be too short
00:11:196 (1,2,3,4) - you can make more perfectly these note and sliers to triangle Made a slight adjustment
00:15:407 (4) - add nc Yeah, done
00:22:424 (3,4) - fix ds plz Done
00:37:863 (3) - add nc Fixed
00:37:863 (1,2,3) - you can make rhythm like this. it's pretty better than now Followed a bit of your suggestion

asd

01:48:038 (5) - how about nc this note? Ok
01:59:266 (4) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:56:108 (4) - add nc? Ok
01:07:161 - how catch the vocal sound? it's too strong for ignore Keeping my current slider. It's not necessary to map that red tick imo.
01:20:933 - there is no 1/4 rhythm i recommend remove note Since you are the second person to point this out, I'll remove that note
01:28:301 (8,1) - how about increase ds? it so weird I've fixed the DS there
01:31:196 (1,3) - you can make more perfectly blanket I don't want (3) overlapping (1) but I did try something
01:38:038 (1) - add nc? I'll wait for more opinions
01:54:880 (5,1) - swap nc? No, the current NC is fine

i'm shit modder xD GL!

Thanks for the mod~

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]

1. 00:24:354 - hitsound is a bit too loud I agree. Added a 40% line at these places
   
2. add some 5%-volume line at the tail of 3/4-slider? I'm not sure where you want me to add this line

[Easy]

1. 00:14:003 - no sound here, maybe use this rhythm: http://b1.loli.io/images/B8xw.jpg Followed your suggestion
   
2. 00:15:757 (5,6) - http://b1.loli.io/images/em0B.jpg I like that rhythm. Fixed
   
   I know you don't want to follow red-line-sound, but it's heard really weird
   If you really don't want to change rhythm, then at least make volume much bigger then the music, just like 01:18:214 (2) - and 01:26:986 (3) -
   
3. 00:37:863 (3,4,5) - 01:00:319 (1,2) - same. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:08:389 (4,5) - no need to use 3/2 here, 1/1 work well. Though you want to follow the instruments, sound at 00:08:740 - and 00:09:442 - is much more important then 00:08:915 - and 00:09:617 - Followed your suggestion
   
2. 00:12:600 (1) - ^ ^
   
3. 00:34:354 - make it clickable http://b1.loli.io/images/mm6y.jpg Followed your suggestion
   
4. 00:42:775 - add note Ok
   
5. 00:55:933 - ^ Not this one. Because of the strong finishes I rather just want the sliders.
   
6. 01:38:038 (4,5,6) - this rhythm may be more comfortable: http://b1.loli.io/images/nmKj.jpg Followed your suggestion
   
7. 01:58:915 - this sound is special, make it clickable: http://b1.loli.io/images/6jpw.jpg ^

[Insane]

1. 00:42:073 - this sound is not really important, because drum and vocal are at 00:41:898 - and 00:42:249 - , so you can use this rhythm: I'm fine with my current pattern, but I'll wait for more opinionshttp://b1.loli.io/images/Ymbd.jpg
   
2. 00:47:687 (1,2) - ctrl+G in rhythm? I think it's better if 00:48:038 - is clickable.
   
3. 01:16:108 (7) - end at 01:16:459 - ? I agree. Done
   
4. 01:28:301 (8,1) - this's tooooooo difficult in a bpm171 insane. this should only be used in ex diff Yeah, fixed this, lol

GL~

Thanks so much~

hi
[Easy]
00:35:056 (1,2) - curve 2 less for better blanket?
01:46:459 - personally, i dont like this rhythm. cuz it missed pretty strong sound / different rhythm that exists no where else in the song. i'd map it by sacrificing drums on 01:45:231 (1,2) - and follow vocals instead in order to map this 'more important' sound http://puu.sh/spsIn/0658acce6d.jpg but up to you lol
01:56:810 (2,3) - this isnt rly fitting with music lol try change rhythm to same with 00:16:635 (3,4) - sounds a lot better

[Normal]
00:26:284 (6) - since u have been following vocals in this combo, i dont think the upbeat is necessary to map since u ignored all similar sounds like 00:25:582 - so change to just circle on tail would be enough imo
00:31:898 (5) - try move it to 00:31:722 - cuz drums is pretty strong and should be more prior than vocals on 00:32:073 - to map imo?
01:15:933 - i would rather end slider here and map this than just make a slider go over the sounds but ok i guess
01:27:512 (5,6) - 5 is stronger than 6 bcuz it has snares and vocals on both head and tail but its still mapped same with 6? i'd recommend you try change 6 to just circle on head since u can highlight 5 better that way
01:58:389 (5,6) - try ctrl+g this rhythm? have better impact imo cuz then these same sounds are mapped the same

[Aihuro's Hard]
uncheck widescreen support
00:08:301 - not sure about ignoring this but map 00:08:126 - cuz they sound pretty same to me so both 1/4 ticks should be mapped i think lol
00:15:319 - same here, this one is even more noticeable sound
00:41:635 - missed 1/4 lol why ignore this when u map all 1/4s before (e.g. 00:36:986 (6,7,8) - 00:31:371 (6,7,8) -
00:59:529 - 01:00:845 (2) - same, dont be afraid if the map will have too many 1/4s lol it would make sense to make the map harder as u play longer if song can support it
01:16:108 (6,7) - tbh this linear flows a bit bad but who cares rly
theres actually a lot of ignored 1/4s in kiai, u should map some xd i believe it plays better than just 1/2 mapping with ds the whole verse, also the sr might just get buff up to around 3.2 which would actually work better for spread
01:34:529 (2,3,4) - try make triangle or something for better aesthetics
01:47:161 (3,4) - these are noticeably different sound but theyre map with same rhythm wow i'd change (3) to 2 circles instead cuz u can make both drum sounds clickable that way

[Insane]
00:09:091 (3,4,1) - idk but space 1 more or change shape? cuz when i look at how the pattern is arranged, i think the fact that its same shape with 3 make its a bit harder to notice that spacing is actually higher than 3->1 cuz pattern is almost symmetric here, so 1 currently has almost no emphasis to it
00:45:933 (6,1,2) - this gap might be just a bit difficult to read bcuz of the current ar, maybe move 2 or stack under 1 so it looks different from 6->1?
01:28:038 (5) - pls try to give more emphasis to this, u could try one of these:
- change 3,4 to kickslider
- add nc on 5
- space 4 -> 5 more
- change direction of flow from 5
01:41:898 - lol pls atleast change previous note to 1/2 slider to map this

good luck

Deppyforce wrote:

hi
[Easy]
00:35:056 (1,2) - curve 2 less for better blanket? Fixed
01:46:459 - personally, i dont like this rhythm. cuz it missed pretty strong sound / different rhythm that exists no where else in the song. i'd map it by sacrificing drums on 01:45:231 (1,2) - and follow vocals instead in order to map this 'more important' sound http://puu.sh/spsIn/0658acce6d.jpg but up to you lol Followed your suggestion
01:56:810 (2,3) - this isnt rly fitting with music lol try change rhythm to same with 00:16:635 (3,4) - sounds a lot better Cool, fixed

[Normal]
00:26:284 (6) - since u have been following vocals in this combo, i dont think the upbeat is necessary to map since u ignored all similar sounds like 00:25:582 - so change to just circle on tail would be enough imo It's not quite the same as the other vocal that you have pointed out and there's also a vocal on that red tick so rather keeping it as it is for now
00:31:898 (5) - try move it to 00:31:722 - cuz drums is pretty strong and should be more prior than vocals on 00:32:073 - to map imo? Yeah, I agree. Fixed
01:15:933 - i would rather end slider here and map this than just make a slider go over the sounds but ok i guess Rather want to follow the long vocal and have a longer slider for variety
01:27:512 (5,6) - 5 is stronger than 6 bcuz it has snares and vocals on both head and tail but its still mapped same with 6? i'd recommend you try change 6 to just circle on head since u can highlight 5 better that way I see what you mean, but there's still a vocal on the red tick at 6 and I want that mapped out.
01:58:389 (5,6) - try ctrl+g this rhythm? have better impact imo cuz then these same sounds are mapped the same This tick 01:58:915 - has to be clickable, so no change

[Insane]
00:09:091 (3,4,1) - idk but space 1 more or change shape? cuz when i look at how the pattern is arranged, i think the fact that its same shape with 3 make its a bit harder to notice that spacing is actually higher than 3->1 cuz pattern is almost symmetric here, so 1 currently has almost no emphasis to it I decided to change the shape
00:45:933 (6,1,2) - this gap might be just a bit difficult to read bcuz of the current ar, maybe move 2 or stack under 1 so it looks different from 6->1? While testplaying I could read it fine, but I'll definitely wait for more opinions
01:28:038 (5) - pls try to give more emphasis to this, u could try one of these: I changed the distance as well as the direction of the flow
- change 3,4 to kickslider
- add nc on 5
- space 4 -> 5 more
- change direction of flow from 5
01:41:898 - lol pls atleast change previous note to 1/2 slider to map this Ok

good luck

Thanks so much for the mod~

[General:]

• Maybe some more tags would be nice?

[Easy:]

• 00:05:231 (2) - x:12 y:276?
  00:05:407 (1) - Start this on the white tick. Makes more sense in terms of the music.
  00:15:757 (2,3,4) - Complicated thing to read for beginners. Consider simplifying this to: [img]blob:http://imgur.com/b2e0287a-a8f1-4802-a5e1-93f060b463f6[/img]
  00:37:863 (1) - This slider shape is really unsightly. Perhaps you could throw a bit of pizazz in there? Like curves or a shape?
  00:51:898 (1,2) - Tail of (2) would look better if it were the same distance away from the arrow of (1) as the head of (2) is from the head of (1)
  01:14:354 (1,2) - Move (2) up to add to the flow.

[Normal:]

• 00:33:652 (4) - x:444 y:348?
  00:55:407 (2) - Move this up to fix the flow break here.
  01:02:775 (6) - x:280 y:128
  01:26:284 (2) - This intense curve really doesn't fit. Flatten this out a bit.

[Insane:]

• 00:13:126 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of this overlap. Choked me up multiple test times.
  00:28:740 (4) - Do a 1/2 slider here to keep the pace of the map up.
  00:29:091 (5,6,1) - Space this normally. No reason to do this.
  [list:1337]00:41:371 (3,4,5) - here too.
  01:06:459 (2,3,4) - here as well.
  01:28:915 (2,3,4) - Here too.
  01:32:950 (2,3,4) - Here as well.

00:58:740 (1) - Silence the slider end.
01:02:775 (5,1) - Make these at least touch.

• 01:35:407 (1,2) - Here too.

01:12:249 (3,4,1) - Confusing. I would remove the anti-jumps to fix this.
01:26:810 (1) - Silence slider end.
01:30:319 (3,4,5) - Stream would do better.
01:37:161 (2,3) - Space these out because it's the fastest part of the song.
01:38:038 (5) - NC

• 01:38:564 (6,7) - Here too

[Afterword:]

• Insane was a bit messy, but the streamy bits are fun. Good luck getting this ranked!

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]

• Maybe some more tags would be nice? Hmm, I'll see if I can find some more, but it doesn't really matter how many tags you have.

[Easy:]

• 00:05:231 (2) - x:12 y:276? Fixed
  00:05:407 (1) - Start this on the white tick. Makes more sense in terms of the music. The music actually starts on the red tick so the current placement is fine
  00:15:757 (2,3,4) - Complicated thing to read for beginners. Consider simplifying this to: [img]blob:http://imgur.com/b2e0287a-a8f1-4802-a5e1-93f060b463f6[/img] The image doesn't work, but I think the current pattern is fine.
  00:37:863 (1) - This slider shape is really unsightly. Perhaps you could throw a bit of pizazz in there? Like curves or a shape? Yeah, changed the shape of the slider
  00:51:898 (1,2) - Tail of (2) would look better if it were the same distance away from the arrow of (1) as the head of (2) is from the head of (1) Did something
  01:14:354 (1,2) - Move (2) up to add to the flow. It'll overlap an other object

[Normal:]

• 00:33:652 (4) - x:444 y:348? Fixed
  00:55:407 (2) - Move this up to fix the flow break here. Ok
  01:02:775 (6) - x:280 y:128 Fixed
  01:26:284 (2) - This intense curve really doesn't fit. Flatten this out a bit. Should be fine

[Insane:]

• 00:13:126 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of this overlap. Choked me up multiple test times. I really don't think it's that difficult to catch. Will wait for more opinions though
  00:28:740 (4) - Do a 1/2 slider here to keep the pace of the map up. I placed a circle on the red tick instead.
  00:29:091 (5,6,1) - Space this normally. No reason to do this. Jumps like that is fine. Many mappers do it.
  [list:1337]00:41:371 (3,4,5) - here too. ^
  01:06:459 (2,3,4) - here as well. ^
  01:28:915 (2,3,4) - Here too. ^
  01:32:950 (2,3,4) - Here as well. ^

00:58:740 (1) - Silence the slider end. I don't really like silencing sliderends and in this case I don't really see a reason to do it
01:02:775 (5,1) - Make these at least touch. Not necessary. This is an Insane diff afterall

• 01:35:407 (1,2) - Here too. ^

01:12:249 (3,4,1) - Confusing. I would remove the anti-jumps to fix this. Will wait for more opinions
01:26:810 (1) - Silence slider end. Same reason as before
01:30:319 (3,4,5) - Stream would do better. I wanted to put in a bit of variety and not just use streams the whole time
01:37:161 (2,3) - Space these out because it's the fastest part of the song. Ok, did something
01:38:038 (5) - NC Fixed

• 01:38:564 (6,7) - Here too I like the current NC'ing pattern better

[Afterword:]

• Insane was a bit messy, but the streamy bits are fun. Good luck getting this ranked!

Thanks~!

Thanks for the mods everyone~

Cool, updated the set~

heyyy, sorry for taking so long! if you ever need any more mods just poke :3


and that's it I guess o: other stuff I could've pointed would have conflicts with arbitrary stuff, so I only mentioned relevant things ^^

nice map <3

Seto Kousuke wrote:

heyyy, sorry for taking so long! if you ever need any more mods just poke :3

mod

[normal]

1. 01:51:898 - you were prioritizing the vocals since beginning, important sound here, maybe adjust previous patterns to make it clickable ? Current pattern is fine as well imo

[Insane]

1. 00:21:021 (1) - Ctrl + G ? The way it is now have an angle that hurts the players aim and it's a bit unintuitive for the flow The flow looks fine to me. It almost forms a triangle so should be fine
   
2. 00:52:950 (5) - idk why, but this note looks a bit ''crooked'' ? maybe turn off grid snap a bit and make the 2 notes a bit more aligned ? o: Tried my best to fix this
   
3. 00:55:231 - with this pause and those 2 1/1 sliders like this, it feels weird and empty, specially because there is a sound here. I suggest you either add a note or increase the spacing of 00:54:705 (1,2) - Rather keeping my current pattern. Will wait for more opinions.
   
4. 01:12:249 (3) - increase the spacing? the idea is good but this note feels different and it is actually stronger than the other ones, the kind of pattern you used here is good, but all sounds must be the same intensity or at least the same kind. otherwise it feels unnatural Will wait for more opinions
   
5. 01:14:880 - there's an important sound here for the build up, I know you're following the vocals, but the used rythm also matches the build up and the lack of a note here may sound confusing to the overall rythm I feel the gap there creates a nice buildup and emphasizes the next object nicely.
   
6. 01:27:863 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - well, i usually don't ''judge'' looks and stuff, but this looks and plays really ugly/weird xD consider making a more fitting stream Tried to make the second part of the stream into a curve
   
7. 01:31:021 (7) - increase spacing for playability+ ? Will wait for more opinions
   
8. 01:39:617 (1,2,3) - straight lines like this usually hurt to play because they require many changes of speed ona single line of movement, you did that a lot of times but this one actually hurts more than the other ones Will wait for more opinions
   
9. 01:42:073 (6) - requeires more distance otherwise the players aim will already have a ''slow-down'' because of 01:41:547 (3,4,5) - , that slider only makes the slow down higher when it actually isn't the case on the song, more spacing would make it play better and also look way less clustered (and will even make a better motion to 01:42:424 (1) - ) I feel the spacing is big enough, but will wait for more opinions
   
10. 01:47:686 (5) - make the curve start here for an accurate reading, there's no need to break it at 01:47:775 (6) - , won't change the pattern that much and will make it feel better I don't really think there is any difference. Will wait for more opinions

and that's it I guess o: other stuff I could've pointed would have conflicts with arbitrary stuff, so I only mentioned relevant things ^^

nice map <3

Thanks~!

Seto Kousuke wrote:

heyyy, sorry for taking so long! if you ever need any more mods just poke :3

mod

[Aihuro's Hard]

1. 00:03:126 (7) - why the 1/1 ? would feel and play much better/loyal if you stick to the 1/2 rythm from before, the 1/1 change was perfect here 00:04:179 (1) - , that first one isn't necessary and also ignores important sounds Okii, fixed

and that's it I guess o: other stuff I could've pointed would have conflicts with arbitrary stuff, so I only mentioned relevant things ^^

nice map <3

Thanks for the mod!~

Hi, I'm only modding Insane since I'm not really good at modding lower diffs.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:473 The flow from the sliders to the squares feels awkward, I think that they'll flow better if they're like this
2. 01:47:336 The stream flow seems awkward? I figured this would flow better.

PyroBear wrote:

Hi, I'm only modding Insane since I'm not really good at modding lower diffs.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:473 The flow from the sliders to the squares feels awkward, I think that they'll flow better if they're like this I feel the current pattern flows fine
2. 01:47:336 The stream flow seems awkward? I figured this would flow better. Will wait for more opinions.

Thanks~

PS: Gave kudos because I still have to consider the last suggestion.

hey sorry later.

[Easy]

Hitsound:

1. 00:36:459 (2) - missing add whistle in begin, you have done other diff's and also other pattern on this diff, for consistency

Gameplay:

1. 01:00:319 (1) - sharpe of slider look unsymmetry, maybe make more symmetry for look nice design and in game like this https://puu.sh/sKyrL/dbf34be74f.jpg or something.

[Normal]

Gameplay:

1. 00:49:091 (1,2) - is not same sharpe as mirror because almost every pattern you always do it mirror example 00:27:336 (2,3), etc.... but on 00:49:091 (1,2), their sharpe are different
2. 01:08:038 (6,1) - My view that blanket is off as little

[Hard]

Gameplay:

1. 00:45:582 (1,2,3) - I don;t understand why there NC, you have other pattern similiar of this and that is not NC, maybe remove nc this for consistency.
2. 01:11:371 (10,1) - I don't know why you would make this jump for vocal high and rhythm right ? but as for you consistency of style you never make jump other pattern example in 01:14:003 (8,1) this have high vocal and rhythm but you didn't make as jump, another example in 00:54:529 (8,1) same rhythm but no jump. so if you care consistency then in 01:11:371 (10,1) shouldn't make jump. If you wanna stay as jump make another jump, you make jump when there hitsound of finish + vocal high + rhythm that I did gave example.

look nice but there some missing to make jump or no need make jump that I did explain before, for consistency of you style

[Insane]

Gameplay:

1. 00:09:091 (3) - (suggestion) you sure wanna keep slider 1/1 ? there actually high melody in red tic, if change slider to notes that make sense for follow song imo
2. 00:15:757 (2,3,4,5,1) - there look unsysmentric of triangules for me maybe make more nice symentric like this https://puu.sh/sKA0x/ab4fc6b963.jpg
3. 00:59:617 (4,6) - you not going make placement of mirror as 00:59:442 (3,5)? i mean this https://puu.sh/sKA5z/02c453a837.jpg
4. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - to make more symentric of triangules is possible IMO
5. 01:06:986 (4) - is kindy need NC if vocal + rhythm change like other pattern
6. 01:15:582 (5) - ^ same
7. 01:33:214 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this star formation look very unsysmentric

[]
sorry later and good luck.

Pereira006 wrote:

hey sorry later.

[Easy]

Hitsound:

1. 00:36:459 (2) - missing add whistle in begin, you have done other diff's and also other pattern on this diff, for consistency Yeah, fixed

Gameplay:

1. 01:00:319 (1) - sharpe of slider look unsymmetry, maybe make more symmetry for look nice design and in game like this https://puu.sh/sKyrL/dbf34be74f.jpg or something. Followed your suggestion more or less

[Normal]

Gameplay:

1. 00:49:091 (1,2) - is not same sharpe as mirror because almost every pattern you always do it mirror example 00:27:336 (2,3), etc.... but on 00:49:091 (1,2), their sharpe are different I did copy and paste here
2. 01:08:038 (6,1) - My view that blanket is off as little Tried to fix it

[Insane]

Gameplay:

1. 00:09:091 (3) - (suggestion) you sure wanna keep slider 1/1 ? there actually high melody in red tic, if change slider to notes that make sense for follow song imo The 1/1 slider follows the song better imo
2. 00:15:757 (2,3,4,5,1) - there look unsysmentric of triangules for me maybe make more nice symentric like this https://puu.sh/sKA0x/ab4fc6b963.jpg I decided to move (5) a bit to the left instead
3. 00:59:617 (4,6) - you not going make placement of mirror as 00:59:442 (3,5)? i mean this https://puu.sh/sKA5z/02c453a837.jpg The current placement ensures better flow imo
4. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - to make more symentric of triangules is possible IMO Current placement is fine as well
5. 01:06:986 (4) - is kindy need NC if vocal + rhythm change like other pattern Yeah, fixed
6. 01:15:582 (5) - ^ same Ok
7. 01:33:214 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this star formation look very unsysmentric Not supposed to be a star pattern

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sorry later and good luck.

Thanks~!

Updated Aihuro's diff. She fixed everything in the mod.

[Easy]
00:37:863 (1) - This shape is not approved. Also the flow from 1 to 2 is poor. An example of solution: https://puu.sh/tdife/c90c8a7e9e.png
01:00:319 (1) - ^ https://puu.sh/tdijv/d60704b11d.png
01:03:126 (1,2) - Not recommend such placement. Visual spacing will confuse new players.
01:05:933 (1,2) - ^
01:15:757 (3) - Just use normal shapes.
01:29:793 (3) - JUST USE NORMAL SHAPES
01:34:003 (1,2) - No blanket. No aesthestics.
01:43:828 (3) - This shape is of no use. The slider has no connection like blanket or parallel with other objects next to it.

I guess there are space for improvements in the pattern aesthetics in Easy diff. And it needs to be done before we could push it forward. You may find more modders and could poke me again in the future.

Regraz wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:863 (1) - This shape is not approved. Also the flow from 1 to 2 is poor. An example of solution: https://puu.sh/tdife/c90c8a7e9e.png Followed your suggestion
01:00:319 (1) - ^ https://puu.sh/tdijv/d60704b11d.png Tried my best to improve this
01:03:126 (1,2) - Not recommend such placement. Visual spacing will confuse new players. Changed the placement
01:05:933 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:15:757 (3) - Just use normal shapes. I don't understand what's wrong with this shape ... Changed the shape
01:29:793 (3) - JUST USE NORMAL SHAPES This one I changed a bit
01:34:003 (1,2) - No blanket. No aesthestics. This is not supposed to be a blanket. If it's not supposed to be one then it has to be aesthetically correct in a different way
01:43:828 (3) - This shape is of no use. The slider has no connection like blanket or parallel with other objects next to it. I just wanted to create an interesting shape to avoid using boring sliders the whole time.

I guess there are space for improvements in the pattern aesthetics in Easy diff. And it needs to be done before we could push it forward. You may find more modders and could poke me again in the future.

Will get more mods. Thx for the mod~

woof
random check on easy xd

Easy

1. 00:08:389 (1) - The red anchor can be put on 00:09:091 - for emphasizing the instrument as well like how you did on 00:11:196 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:301 (2) - maybe straight slider here works better for avoid looking miss-blanket with 00:14:705 (3) - ?
3. 00:25:933 - idk it's the only one you used normal sample on this part
4. 00:28:038 (3) - the shape can be improved i guess
5. 01:00:319 (1) - I think it will be finish on 01:01:547 -
6. 01:29:793 (3) - uhm yes I agree with Regraz, maybe blanketing with 01:28:389 (1) - will be great here
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:34:003 (1,2) - another suggestion, doing parallel thingy would be great as for visual flow.
   
   not rly perfect but ye like this

   
8. 01:39:617 (1,3) - idk maybe make them parallel?
9. 01:55:056 (3) - left side seems off xd

goodluck

edit: lo just ignore what u fixed from Regraz's mod since I had some same points with him so yeah

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GL nya! >o</

edit: I just saw that Regraz was looking for changes in structure and design. Because Aesthetics is kinda subjective and it is an easy I just accepeted everything you, I'll try to look again later

Corinn wrote:

woof
random check on easy xd

Easy

1. 00:08:389 (1) - The red anchor can be put on 00:09:091 - for emphasizing the instrument as well like how you did on 00:11:196 (4) - Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:301 (2) - maybe straight slider here works better for avoid looking miss-blanket with 00:14:705 (3) - ? Ok
3. 00:25:933 - idk it's the only one you used normal sample on this part It's fine
4. 00:28:038 (3) - the shape can be improved i guess Yeh, tried my best to improve it
5. 01:00:319 (1) - I think it will be finish on 01:01:547 - Already fixed that
6. 01:29:793 (3) - uhm yes I agree with Regraz, maybe blanketing with 01:28:389 (1) - will be great here Followed your suggestion
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:34:003 (1,2) - another suggestion, doing parallel thingy would be great as for visual flow. Followed your suggestion
   
   not rly perfect but ye like this

   
8. 01:39:617 (1,3) - idk maybe make them parallel? I think the current pattern looks fine
9. 01:55:056 (3) - left side seems off xd Yeh, tried to improve it.

goodluck

edit: lo just ignore what u fixed from Regraz's mod since I had some same points with him so yeah

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:16:635 (3,4) - personally i would prefer this to be mapped as 2 circles, not only are they very strong compared to sliders like this 00:14:705 (3) etc. but it doesn't do it just to have 00:16:986 as a passive beat (slider end), at least imo Ok, changed the (3) into two circles.
2. 00:36:459 (2) - normal sampleset on the reverse to match 00:35:056 (1) ? Yeh, you're right. I missed that one.
3. 01:26:635 (2) - I really don't like how 01:26:810 and 01:27:161 are skipped. I know it's quite tricky for an easy but consider try incorperating them in. A rhythm similar to this should be fine http://puu.sh/tfBK2/3495cdc797.jpg Followed your suggestion

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GL nya! >o</

edit: I just saw that Regraz was looking for changes in structure and design. Because Aesthetics is kinda subjective and it is an easy I just accepeted everything you, I'll try to look again later He mentioned aesthetics, so I'm not sure. I'll ask him if the diff looks much better now.

Thanks for the mods~

No kds.
[Normal]
01:00:319 (1) - AHHHHH the shape ;w; Use smooth ones please. It looks really weird and offplace.
01:06:986 (3,4,5,6) - Build a square with 3 4 5 and 6's head.
01:46:284 (3) - Not a good rhythm here. The downbeat is on 3's end. It should be on single circles or sldier heads.

[Insane]
00:58:740 (1,2) - This spacing looks not like 1/4 rhythm gap. Put them closer please!
01:38:564 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for better flow and readability.

Call me back!

Regraz wrote:

No kds.
[Normal]
01:00:319 (1) - AHHHHH the shape ;w; Use smooth ones please. It looks really weird and offplace.
01:06:986 (3,4,5,6) - Build a square with 3 4 5 and 6's head.
01:46:284 (3) - Not a good rhythm here. The downbeat is on 3's end. It should be on single circles or sldier heads.

Fixed everything. Thx

EDIT: Fixed everything in Insane too.

Good Luck!

Regraz wrote:

Good Luck!

Thx a bunch

[easy]

1. 00:13:828 - add finish , sound nice imo
2. 00:32:600 - 00:32:950 - drum whistle instead ? just like 00:29:442 (1) -

[normal]

1. 00:06:635 (4) - introduce 1/2 slider right away with a notes next to them like this is a bit weird and awkward for player since they can get surprised by it imo the song doesn't sound like it would need 1/2 there tho , mapping only white tick here would be enough now
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo
3. 00:26:284 (6) - switching from vocal to instrument suddenly like this is not good for normal imo it can make player confused and surprised imo , delete the slider and make them a small break for player would be bette , also using only 1 circle white tick instead would also a better option too
4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - mm make them straight so it make pattern look more better in term of aesthetic
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there
6. 01:54:880 (3) - i think a 1/1 slider would emphasis the hold sound of the instrument here better and make rhythm flow better too
   

[hard]

1. 00:41:371 (3,4,5) - i think spaced 1/4 circles after slider is a bit too hard for hard , may be should just use stack instead imo that would make it a bit more reasonable for hard
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:54:880 - add finish so it will make it consistent with 00:13:828 -

[insane]

1. 00:21:371 (2) - you can move this to around x344 y184 to improve aesthetic a bit here
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo
3. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - spacing looks very similar from 1/1 to 1/2 , i think move 3 to around x260 y156 to stack with 1 and 2 would make the jumps here a bit better readability
4. 01:24:003 (5,6,1) - can move to around x272 y184 to improve aesthetic equality here 01:23:477 (3,4,5) - a bit
5. 01:27:161 (1,1) - I think spacing here is a bit too much , the beat there doesn't really need that high emphasis jumps tbh , i think lower spacing there would be better , try move 01:27:512 (1) - to around x112 y52 ?
6. 01:28:389 (1) - would be better to move this to around x512 y68 to make spacing looks more reasonable with the previous stream , the current one have sudden low spacing which doesn't make sense imo lol
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders here play pretty weird the beat here don't go like fast or sudden just the normal typical beat here so using so many 1/4 sliders like that just make thing play weird imo , i think this rhythm would express the beat here better
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:44:529 (4,5,6) - same but this one not severe like above , still i think this rhythm might be a better idea
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/trOFe/82937346b9.jpg[/img]
9. 01:53:126 (4,5,6) - same
10. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there
11. 01:56:020 (5) - sound overmapped here , i think rhythm will flow better if you delete this since i think the noticeable stream should actually start at 01:56:108 -

CelsiusLK wrote:

[easy]

1. 00:13:828 - add finish , sound nice imo Yep
2. 00:32:600 - 00:32:950 - drum whistle instead ? just like 00:29:442 (1) - Fixed

[normal]

1. 00:06:635 (4) - introduce 1/2 slider right away with a notes next to them like this is a bit weird and awkward for player since they can get surprised by it imo the song doesn't sound like it would need 1/2 there tho , mapping only white tick here would be enough now Fixed, only mapped out the white tick
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo Yep
3. 00:26:284 (6) - switching from vocal to instrument suddenly like this is not good for normal imo it can make player confused and surprised imo , delete the slider and make them a small break for player would be bette , also using only 1 circle white tick instead would also a better option too Yeh, only placed a note on the white tick
4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - mm make them straight so it make pattern look more better in term of aesthetic Fixed
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there Yep
6. 01:54:880 (3) - i think a 1/1 slider would emphasis the hold sound of the instrument here better and make rhythm flow better too Followed your suggestion
   

[insane]

1. 00:21:371 (2) - you can move this to around x344 y184 to improve aesthetic a bit here Done
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo Done, added the finish in other diffs as well
3. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - spacing looks very similar from 1/1 to 1/2 , i think move 3 to around x260 y156 to stack with 1 and 2 would make the jumps here a bit better readability Ok, fixed
4. 01:24:003 (5,6,1) - can move to around x272 y184 to improve aesthetic equality here 01:23:477 (3,4,5) - a bit Done
5. 01:27:161 (1,1) - I think spacing here is a bit too much , the beat there doesn't really need that high emphasis jumps tbh , i think lower spacing there would be better , try move 01:27:512 (1) - to around x112 y52 ? Yeh, I pushed the boundaries there a bit. Fixed
6. 01:28:389 (1) - would be better to move this to around x512 y68 to make spacing looks more reasonable with the previous stream , the current one have sudden low spacing which doesn't make sense imo lol Followed your suggestion
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders here play pretty weird the beat here don't go like fast or sudden just the normal typical beat here so using so many 1/4 sliders like that just make thing play weird imo , i think this rhythm would express the beat here better [/color]
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:44:529 (4,5,6) - same but this one not severe like above , still i think this rhythm might be a better idea Well, I also want something more challenging in this diff and when listening closely you can hear a beat here: 01:44:617 - so I want to keep it
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/trOFe/82937346b9.jpg[/img]
9. 01:53:126 (4,5,6) - same ^
10. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there Done, added on all diffs
11. 01:56:020 (5) - sound overmapped here , i think rhythm will flow better if you delete this since i think the noticeable stream should actually start at 01:56:108 - Yep and made some distance fixes as well

Thx~ Fixed aihuro's mod as well

oops looks like i forgot to say something about 01:04:003 (3) - insane
I think you should nc it too to make difference between 01:03:126 (1,2) - and 01:03:652 (2,3) - beat gap to make it easier to read lol

call me back

CelsiusLK wrote:

oops looks like i forgot to say something about 01:04:003 (3) - insane
I think you should nc it too to make difference between 01:03:126 (1,2) - and 01:03:652 (2,3) - beat gap to make it easier to read lol

call me back

Done

ok

Thx celsius and regraz for helping me with this map

nice gz! :d

Thanks wishkey

Congrats senpai~ />v</