idk what makes you want to bring back this old pattern. There is no kind of long noise that could be supported by this mini LNs. there is only an emphasis which is kinda unecessary to follow by mini LNs. I guess protastic already said it that you did this just for the sake of inflating the SR.
tbf the regular jumpthrill itself is already fit the song intensity so there is no need to inflate them even further.
01:55:638 (115638|1) - could add one more note as they're the same snare as the others
Extra and Death - 02:01:013 (121013|3,121013|2) - Remove one note. its start fading out right here
someone also concern about this is not being kancolle related even tho the voice sample is indeed taken from one of those characther, Inazuma.
adding "Inazuma kancolle kantai collection" on the tags might be necessary for that