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Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson - Hot Mess

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Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 April 2011 at 18:11:35

Artist: Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson
Title: Hot Mess
Tags: La Roux randomjibberish jarby
BPM: 127
Filesize: 5203kb
Play Time: 03:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.69 stars, 195 notes)
  2. Insane (4.8 stars, 463 notes)
  3. Jar's Normal (3.21 stars, 268 notes)
  4. RJ's Hard (4.68 stars, 430 notes)
Download: Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson - Hot Mess
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love isn't meant to complain
Last edited by Mashley , edited 5 times in total.
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Powerdrone
I started a Normal but it's terribad. If you like it then I'll finish it, otherwise Jarby is currently working on Normal.

Also I am obligated to star your beautiful map <33

Download: Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson - Hot Mess (Mashley) [Droney's Normal].osu
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
C'ause Loooooo-uh uh ove isn't meant to complain

Download: Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson - Hot Mess (Mashley) [RJ].osu
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Running away, hot messes etc

Download: Chromeo ft. Elly Jackson - Hot Mess (Mashley) [Jar's Normal].osu
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
I'm breaking your chain of guest diffs and lyrics.

Insane:
02:32:132 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the increased spacing here might be a bit too high. Also, it's hard to tell (4) is spaced differently from the other 3 unless you look in the editor, so that can be a bit hard. (and copypasta)
02:52:447 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I think you could do with making this consistent spacing. (and copypasta)

RJ's Hard
I stand by that you should call this RJ's Hard for consistency and love.
00:19:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Aah, aah, unsymmetrical. Nazi. (and copypasta (yes i did notice this myself punch me in the face))

Jar's Normal
Hey, dude, why don't you map the first half of the originalchoruses? It's not like you're mapping iNiS.

This mod post is shit and I should feel shitty I hope RJ likes nazing

P.S. Center the SB
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
I am not a pro modder so please take all these ideas as suggestions :)

[General]
- Some of your combo colors look very similar. Consider changing it, even a bit.
- Consider changing [RJ] to [RJ's Hard] to fit things better.
- On [Insane], AR8 and 127 BPM don't seem to fit for me but it's [Insane] so do as you wish.

[Easy]
00:32:605 (2) - This repeat could be slightly confusing for newbies but okay.
02:48:668 (2) - ^
02:51:030 (1,2,3) - Ahhhhh, really confusing stacking.
02:58:589 (1,2,3) - ^

[Jar's Normal]
03:06:384 (1,2,3) - These sliders aren't quite as pretty as the others and the repeats can confuse.
03:13:943 (1,2,3) - ^

[RJ]
00:49:377 (5) - Not perfectly symmetrical trololo
00:51:739 (4,5) - I don't see how this 1/4 follows the song.
00:53:392 (1) - Not perfectly symmetrical trololo
00:59:298 (4,5) - I don't see how this 1/4 follows the song.
Either deja vu or I've said this before
01:12:290 (break) - Dragging breaks is cool and stuff but this seems a bit long to me.
02:15:833 (1) - Spacing change. I guess this is okay...
03:17:959 (8) - Maybe new combo?

[Insane]
00:51:857 (4) - Remove?
01:06:975 (4) - ^
01:08:038 (slow part) - This part is a drain section which was rated 2.5 in the Mapping Techniques forum. It's not very harsh, but consider changing it a bit.
02:52:447 (1) - What? Move 1/2 tick back.
03:00:006 (1) - ^
03:07:920 (5,6) - ohohoho, not so copypasta anymore are we?

This is quality stuff, Mashley, have a twinkly thing.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
I'm just going to respond to everyone else's mod parts as well as mine to further clarify this and help your modding!

SapphireGhost wrote:

I am not a pro modder so please take all these ideas as suggestions :)

[General]
- Some of your combo colors look very similar. Consider changing it, even a bit. Not really.
- Consider changing [RJ] to [RJ's Hard] to fit things better. Yup
- On [Insane], AR8 and 127 BPM don't seem to fit for me but it's [Insane] so do as you wish.

[Easy]
00:32:605 (2) - This repeat could be slightly confusing for newbies but okay.
02:48:668 (2) - ^
02:51:030 (1,2,3) - Ahhhhh, really confusing stacking. I thought it was relatively straightforward. Not too much of a hard thing for new players to get.
02:58:589 (1,2,3) - ^

[Jar's Normal]
03:06:384 (1,2,3) - These sliders aren't quite as pretty as the others and the repeats can confuse. :(
03:13:943 (1,2,3) - ^

[RJ]
00:49:377 (5) - Not perfectly symmetrical trololo It's clearly intentional and not a snapping error
00:51:739 (4,5) - I don't see how this 1/4 follows the song. It follows the bassline precisely
00:53:392 (1) - Not perfectly symmetrical trololo It's clearly intentional and not a snapping error
00:59:298 (4,5) - I don't see how this 1/4 follows the song. It follows the bassline precisely
Either deja vu or I've said this before
01:12:290 (break) - Dragging breaks is cool and stuff but this seems a bit long to me. Typical RJ habit. I don't mind it.
02:15:833 (1) - Spacing change. I guess this is okay... Yep.
03:17:959 (8) - Maybe new combo? Probably better off with the new combo, up to RJ

[Insane]
00:51:857 (4) - Remove? It follows the bassline precisely
01:06:975 (4) - ^ It follows the bassline precisely
01:08:038 (slow part) - This part is a drain section which was rated 2.5 in the Mapping Techniques forum. It's not very harsh, but consider changing it a bit. You're right; it isn't very harsh!
02:52:447 (1) - What? Move 1/2 tick back. Doesn't necessarily need to follow the vocals.
03:00:006 (1) - ^ Doesn't necessarily need to follow the vocals.
03:07:920 (5,6) - ohohoho, not so copypasta anymore are we?

This is quality stuff, Mashley, have a twinkly thing.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Easy;

00:34:967 (1,2,3) - I'd have the 2 and 3 on their own without 1, personally, like this, maybe?
00:42:526 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:676 (1,1) - uuuugh this overlap is totally not fabulous

Normal;

01:05:440 (2,3) - This jump is just silly

RJ;

01:56:701 (6) - Object isn't snapped!

wonderful
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Jar's diff is a mess, and not a hot one. I guess love isn't meant to complain though. >=(
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Combo colors are cute, but the storyboard... ugh, that just doesn't work
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby

Larto wrote:

Jar's diff is a mess, and not a hot one. I guess love isn't meant to complain though. >=(
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