TorNis wrote:

☆
Too bad background sparks are 1 frame but still looks awesome Thank you

whymeman wrote:

[Nivalis' Rhythms]

00:27:793 (2) - The clap would sound better being set at the third (last) note of the slider. Just suggesting this but try it out and see if it works for you better.
02:47:368 (3) - ^
02:52:949 (4) - ^
02:55:043 (2) - ^
02:56:438 (2) - ^

All done! (yes it sounds much better xD)

DarkDunskin wrote:

Why isn't that map already bubbled? ^^"

whymeman wrote:

*sigh*......

[Wild]

01:07:386 (4) - I thought this was going to be a new combo? Fixed.
01:32:851 (1,2,3,4) - This could have been made more neater. Rework slider (2) and adjust the spacing for (3) and (4) after. Make sure to keep the shape even with slider (1) as you redo (2). Using more than 4 slider curve points would help alot in this case. Ok

abalee wrote:

Wild:
01:45:061 (1,2,3,4,1) - thought it might be fuuny but does it looks better that placed like this? Oh Thank you Fixed
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whymeman wrote:

Huh....? What did you change this time?

Omg i fixed sb bugs

HellDawn wrote:

whymeman wrote:

Huh....? What did you change this time?

Omg i fixed sb bugs

[Wild]

00:00:410 (1) - This spinner is 1/4 too short and off beat. End it at 00:05:991 or could do before that at 00:05:642. 00:05:642

And PLEASE stop rushing to get your map ranked. You already popped your own bubble a few times after asking just about the whole list of active BATs. If you feel you need to do more changes on your map, then please do so before asking a BAT on your next mapset.

abalee wrote:

[Wild]
00:05:991 should be a better ending point at 00:00:410 (1)

Ventolin wrote:

Awesome!

Maxer_00 wrote:

Awesome beatmap,awesome song - a star for you!

1. 01:01:805 - 01:14:363
2. 01:52:037 - 02:04:596
3. 02:35:333 - 02:54:868

Mogsworth wrote:

Rebubbled.

Thank you

Aleks719 wrote:

kiai time and preview point fixed, thank you

Aleks719 wrote:

HellDawn = baka.

James2250 wrote:

Hummmmm a lot of rebubbles on this...anyway here are some suggestions to look over

-Make sure the start/end of all of your kiai times are snapped on every difficulty (for some of them they are snapped on the blue tick before the note which doesn't look good while playing etc) OK
-I would expect some sort of hitsunds at places like 01:00:410 and 01:50:642 etc on every difficulty where the backgroud pulses just to emphasize those parts more k
-Your first BPM sounds pretty early towards the end of it, I would try and get your timing double checked again if possible Aleks <3
-For the map starting straight away (even if it is a spinner) I would try and include more than a .5 audio lead-in 2?
-Seeing as the first 2 difficulties are both made by you (I think?) the kiai on them needs to stay consistent Fix'd
-You need to include an approach circle in your folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay Ok

Dance:
-The kiai should start at 02:35:333 like the other difficulties have it to start on the main part of the chorus instead of before it Fix'd
00:17:154 (1,2,3,4) - this could be more creative than just being stacked in 1 place Fix'd
00:22:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - combo placement here seems to change randomly, try and make them follow a consistent pattern Fix'd
00:39:828 (6) - new combo to follow your next pattern Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,3) - why not stack these? It doesn't look good while playing at the moment Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would expect hitsounds here to match the other parts of your map where the song gets louder (same for places like 01:50:642 (1,2,3,4)Fix'd
02:39:868 (5,6,1) - keep your spacing equal here Fix'd

Wild:
-This difficulty sounds much quieter than the other currently difficulties have doesn't fit the song as much, I suggest you raise the volume on almost all of the sections slightly (the volume of the map compared to the song sounds the best on 'Dance' at the moment) Fix'd
00:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - personally I would expect claps or something on these like the other difficulty Fix'd
00:28:316 (1,2) - kind of odd anti jumps in a place like this, try and space them out more Fix'd
00:31:107 (1,2) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - remove new combo Fix'd
01:26:572 (4,1,2,3) - the spacing on all of these shouldn't really be the same Fix'd
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - nazi: patterns like this could look much nicer by making them match each other more Fix'd
02:10:177 (5,1) - space out more Fix'd
02:24:170 (2) - lower this slightly so it doesn't go through the HP bar Fix'd

Overall the mapset is fairly well put together, I suggest you try and get a few more mods before a rebubble just to polish things off more though

James2250 wrote:

Aleks' Rhythms:
-I find it strange that you choose kiai time to use 0.75 slider speed, I would expect kiai to go faster than the mapset in general not slower Hummm... This parts were not kiai before, I want to leave this slowdown as is ;_;
02:42:310 (1) - very close to being silenced, try and raise the volume on it slightly more 10% -> 30%