HellDawn wrote:

whymeman wrote:

Huh....? What did you change this time?

Omg i fixed sb bugs

[Wild]

00:00:410 (1) - This spinner is 1/4 too short and off beat. End it at 00:05:991 or could do before that at 00:05:642. 00:05:642

And PLEASE stop rushing to get your map ranked. You already popped your own bubble a few times after asking just about the whole list of active BATs. If you feel you need to do more changes on your map, then please do so before asking a BAT on your next mapset.

abalee wrote:

[Wild]
00:05:991 should be a better ending point at 00:00:410 (1)

Ventolin wrote:

Awesome!

Maxer_00 wrote:

Awesome beatmap,awesome song - a star for you!

1. 01:01:805 - 01:14:363
2. 01:52:037 - 02:04:596
3. 02:35:333 - 02:54:868

Mogsworth wrote:

Rebubbled.

Thank you

Aleks719 wrote:

kiai time and preview point fixed, thank you

Aleks719 wrote:

HellDawn = baka.

James2250 wrote:

Hummmmm a lot of rebubbles on this...anyway here are some suggestions to look over

-Make sure the start/end of all of your kiai times are snapped on every difficulty (for some of them they are snapped on the blue tick before the note which doesn't look good while playing etc) OK
-I would expect some sort of hitsunds at places like 01:00:410 and 01:50:642 etc on every difficulty where the backgroud pulses just to emphasize those parts more k
-Your first BPM sounds pretty early towards the end of it, I would try and get your timing double checked again if possible Aleks <3
-For the map starting straight away (even if it is a spinner) I would try and include more than a .5 audio lead-in 2?
-Seeing as the first 2 difficulties are both made by you (I think?) the kiai on them needs to stay consistent Fix'd
-You need to include an approach circle in your folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay Ok

Dance:
-The kiai should start at 02:35:333 like the other difficulties have it to start on the main part of the chorus instead of before it Fix'd
00:17:154 (1,2,3,4) - this could be more creative than just being stacked in 1 place Fix'd
00:22:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - combo placement here seems to change randomly, try and make them follow a consistent pattern Fix'd
00:39:828 (6) - new combo to follow your next pattern Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,3) - why not stack these? It doesn't look good while playing at the moment Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would expect hitsounds here to match the other parts of your map where the song gets louder (same for places like 01:50:642 (1,2,3,4)Fix'd
02:39:868 (5,6,1) - keep your spacing equal here Fix'd

Wild:
-This difficulty sounds much quieter than the other currently difficulties have doesn't fit the song as much, I suggest you raise the volume on almost all of the sections slightly (the volume of the map compared to the song sounds the best on 'Dance' at the moment) Fix'd
00:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - personally I would expect claps or something on these like the other difficulty Fix'd
00:28:316 (1,2) - kind of odd anti jumps in a place like this, try and space them out more Fix'd
00:31:107 (1,2) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - remove new combo Fix'd
01:26:572 (4,1,2,3) - the spacing on all of these shouldn't really be the same Fix'd
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - nazi: patterns like this could look much nicer by making them match each other more Fix'd
02:10:177 (5,1) - space out more Fix'd
02:24:170 (2) - lower this slightly so it doesn't go through the HP bar Fix'd

Overall the mapset is fairly well put together, I suggest you try and get a few more mods before a rebubble just to polish things off more though

James2250 wrote:

Aleks' Rhythms:
-I find it strange that you choose kiai time to use 0.75 slider speed, I would expect kiai to go faster than the mapset in general not slower Hummm... This parts were not kiai before, I want to leave this slowdown as is ;_;
02:42:310 (1) - very close to being silenced, try and raise the volume on it slightly more 10% -> 30%

raimoncortese wrote:

rankrankrank<3 i waant all to enjoy this well-made beatmap

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Nice storyboard
The skin is all grey? I'd expect it to be a bit more "wild" lol. At least add some texture to the spinner so it's less boring and you can clearly see it spinning.
Set Tick rate 2 on all diffs k

Wild
Choruses are a bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit? Fixd
01:24:828 (1,2,3,4) - These antijumps are there for no reason - remove them? Moved
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - ^ okey flat.
01:44:712 (3) - ^no u.u
02:12:793 - Map through this little break? It seems kinda random and unnecessary. Pereira006<3

Dance
02:10:177 (1,2) - Whoops, looks like something messed up here. Move (2) forward a tick. O.o
02:12:968 (1,2) - ^ O.o

Pretty nice map

RandomJibberish wrote:

Nivalis' Rhythms
00:27:793 (6) - This follows nothing in the song Changed into slider
02:47:359 (2) - ^ Changed into 2 circles
02:52:940 (4) - ^ Changed into slider
02:55:033 (2) - ^ Deleted
02:56:429 (2) - ^ Deleted
As with the above diff, I'd be reluctant to bubble if these were kept
02:14:363 (5) - I kiiinda see what you're going for here, but I don't think it really works. I'd stick to a run of 1/2 beats or something I have no idea how I have to change this >< Unchanged

SPOILER

1. 00:59:014 (2,3,4,5) - May you add clap? I found it very nice... but isn't my map xP
2. 01:02:503 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider.
3. 01:05:119 (3) - Remove this clap.
4. 01:10:875 (4) - Remove the clap that is in the beginning of the slider.
5. 01:49:247 (1,3,5,6,7,8) - Add finish in these notes?
6. 02:18:549 - Silence this slider?... To do it you should put two inherited points, like this:
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:32:533 - End this slider at 02:34:626, then, add a note here: 02:34:975... Like this?
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:41:603 (3) - Remove this clap in the beginning.

RandomJibberish wrote:

Aleck's Rhythms Aleks'
00:33:375 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove this stream, it follows nothing in the music
etc etc... wtf, i know there are no music at blue ticks. But if 1/2 will be hardest thing in whole mapset (expect crazy jumps, but there are no jumps here)- it is not fun.
RandomJibberish, thanks but no. I won't remove it.

Just so you know, I'm 100% not going to bubble if the unnecesary 1/4 is not removed
This map has a bubble about 4 or 5 times. And this fucking 1/4 was good for others. Sorry, Helldawn, you can remove my diff from mapset if you want to get another bubble from RH. I won't remove 1/4 notes.

vivere wrote:

Mod about hitsound by request >.<

Sorry for the delay D: <3

[Wild]:

1. 00:59:014 (2,3,4,5) - May you add clap? I found it very nice... but isn't my map xP Fix'd
2. 01:02:503 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider. Fix'd
3. 01:05:119 (3) - Remove this clap. Fix'd
4. 01:10:875 (4) - Remove the clap that is in the beginning of the slider. Fix'd
5. 01:49:247 (1,3,5,6,7,8) - Add finish in these notes? Fix'd
6. 02:18:549 - Silence this slider?... To do it you should put two inherited points, like this: Fix'd
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:32:533 - End this slider at 02:34:626, then, add a note here: 02:34:975... Like this? Fix'd
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:41:603 (3) - Remove this clap in the beginning.Fix'd

Well... that's all

Star <3

Thanks a lot

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

SPOILER

If I want to add a black slider border on "Dance" diff:

Armin wrote:

[Aleks' Rhythms]
00:34:247 (1) - Maybe you now, but in this case the vocal voice is prevailing here. I'd suggest you to add three hiticircles on white ticks instead of this long slider, but it seems you want to follow a symmetrical pattern. Agree, fixed