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Niva
This beatmap has already bubbled five times now...
Go get this ranked HellDawn ><
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Aleks719 wrote:

HellDawn = baka.
You re forgetful u didnt fix preview point (Aleks=Baka)
Thank you Nivalis <3
James2250
Hummmmm a lot of rebubbles on this...anyway here are some suggestions to look over

-Make sure the start/end of all of your kiai times are snapped on every difficulty (for some of them they are snapped on the blue tick before the note which doesn't look good while playing etc)
-I would expect some sort of hitsunds at places like 01:00:410 and 01:50:642 etc on every difficulty where the backgroud pulses just to emphasize those parts more
-Your first BPM sounds pretty early towards the end of it, I would try and get your timing double checked again if possible
-For the map starting straight away (even if it is a spinner) I would try and include more than a .5 audio lead-in
-Seeing as the first 2 difficulties are both made by you (I think?) the kiai on them needs to stay consistent
-You need to include an approach circle in your folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay

Dance:
-The kiai should start at 02:35:333 like the other difficulties have it to start on the main part of the chorus instead of before it
00:17:154 (1,2,3,4) - this could be more creative than just being stacked in 1 place
00:22:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - combo placement here seems to change randomly, try and make them follow a consistent pattern
00:39:828 (6) - new combo to follow your next pattern
00:59:014 (1,3) - why not stack these? It doesn't look good while playing at the moment
00:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would expect hitsounds here to match the other parts of your map where the song gets louder (same for places like 01:50:642 (1,2,3,4)
02:39:868 (5,6,1) - keep your spacing equal here

Wild:
-This difficulty sounds much quieter than the other currently difficulties have doesn't fit the song as much, I suggest you raise the volume on almost all of the sections slightly (the volume of the map compared to the song sounds the best on 'Dance' at the moment)
00:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - personally I would expect claps or something on these like the other difficulty
00:28:316 (1,2) - kind of odd anti jumps in a place like this, try and space them out more
00:31:107 (1,2) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:572 (4,1,2,3) - the spacing on all of these shouldn't really be the same
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - nazi: patterns like this could look much nicer by making them match each other more
02:10:177 (5,1) - space out more
02:24:170 (2) - lower this slightly so it doesn't go through the HP bar

Aleks' Rhythms:
-I find it strange that you choose kiai time to use 0.75 slider speed, I would expect kiai to go faster than the mapset in general not slower
02:42:310 (1) - very close to being silenced, try and raise the volume on it slightly more

Nivalis' Rhythms:
02:42:310 (5) - same as Alek's

Overall the mapset is fairly well put together, I suggest you try and get a few more mods before a rebubble just to polish things off more though
Niva
Topic Starter
HellDawn

James2250 wrote:

Hummmmm a lot of rebubbles on this...anyway here are some suggestions to look over :(

-Make sure the start/end of all of your kiai times are snapped on every difficulty (for some of them they are snapped on the blue tick before the note which doesn't look good while playing etc) OK
-I would expect some sort of hitsunds at places like 01:00:410 and 01:50:642 etc on every difficulty where the backgroud pulses just to emphasize those parts more k
-Your first BPM sounds pretty early towards the end of it, I would try and get your timing double checked again if possible Aleks <3
-For the map starting straight away (even if it is a spinner) I would try and include more than a .5 audio lead-in 2?
-Seeing as the first 2 difficulties are both made by you (I think?) the kiai on them needs to stay consistent Fix'd
-You need to include an approach circle in your folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay Ok

Dance:
-The kiai should start at 02:35:333 like the other difficulties have it to start on the main part of the chorus instead of before it Fix'd
00:17:154 (1,2,3,4) - this could be more creative than just being stacked in 1 place Fix'd
00:22:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - combo placement here seems to change randomly, try and make them follow a consistent pattern Fix'd
00:39:828 (6) - new combo to follow your next pattern Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,3) - why not stack these? It doesn't look good while playing at the moment Fix'd
00:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would expect hitsounds here to match the other parts of your map where the song gets louder (same for places like 01:50:642 (1,2,3,4)Fix'd
02:39:868 (5,6,1) - keep your spacing equal here Fix'd

Wild:
-This difficulty sounds much quieter than the other currently difficulties have doesn't fit the song as much, I suggest you raise the volume on almost all of the sections slightly (the volume of the map compared to the song sounds the best on 'Dance' at the moment) Fix'd
00:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - personally I would expect claps or something on these like the other difficulty Fix'd
00:28:316 (1,2) - kind of odd anti jumps in a place like this, try and space them out more Fix'd
00:31:107 (1,2) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - remove new combo Fix'd
01:26:572 (4,1,2,3) - the spacing on all of these shouldn't really be the same Fix'd
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - nazi: patterns like this could look much nicer by making them match each other more Fix'd
02:10:177 (5,1) - space out more Fix'd
02:24:170 (2) - lower this slightly so it doesn't go through the HP bar Fix'd

Overall the mapset is fairly well put together, I suggest you try and get a few more mods before a rebubble just to polish things off more though
:D
Aleks719

James2250 wrote:

Aleks' Rhythms:
-I find it strange that you choose kiai time to use 0.75 slider speed, I would expect kiai to go faster than the mapset in general not slower Hummm... This parts were not kiai before, I want to leave this slowdown as is ;_;
02:42:310 (1) - very close to being silenced, try and raise the volume on it slightly more 10% -> 30%
Thanks for mod~

Helldawn, thx for fixing my preview

Download: Ruslana - Wild Dances (HellDawn) [Aleks' Rhythms].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn
:o
Aleks719
Timing fix for all diffs here.
Kd for that.

Download: Ruslana - Wild Dances, diffs.rar
Raimon
rankrankrank<3 i waant all to enjoy this well-made beatmap
Topic Starter
HellDawn

raimoncortese wrote:

rankrankrank<3 i waant all to enjoy this well-made beatmap
Ohh :D
SSkiLLeTT
8-)
RandomJibberish
General
Nice storyboard :P
The skin is all grey? I'd expect it to be a bit more "wild" lol. At least add some texture to the spinner so it's less boring and you can clearly see it spinning.
Set Tick rate 2 on all diffs

Aleck's Rhythms
00:33:375 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove this stream, it follows nothing in the music
00:43:840 (2,3,4) - Remove this triplet, it follows nothing in the music
00:55:003 (2,3,4) - ^
All the 1/4 in the map - ^

Just so you know, I'm 100% not going to bubble if the unnecesary 1/4 is not removed

Nivalis' Rhythms
00:27:793 (6) - This follows nothing in the song
02:47:359 (2) - ^
02:52:940 (4) - ^
02:55:033 (2) - ^
02:56:429 (2) - ^
As with the above diff, I'd be reluctant to bubble if these were kept
02:14:363 (5) - I kiiinda see what you're going for here, but I don't think it really works. I'd stick to a run of 1/2 beats or something

Wild
Choruses are a bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit?
01:24:828 (1,2,3,4) - These antijumps are there for no reason - remove them?
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:712 (3) - ^
02:12:793 - Map through this little break? It seems kinda random and unnecessary.

Dance
02:10:177 (1,2) - Whoops, looks like something messed up here. Move (2) forward a tick.
02:12:968 (1,2) - ^

Pretty nice map
Topic Starter
HellDawn

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Nice storyboard :P
The skin is all grey? I'd expect it to be a bit more "wild" lol. At least add some texture to the spinner so it's less boring and you can clearly see it spinning.
Set Tick rate 2 on all diffs k

Wild
Choruses are a bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit? Fixd
01:24:828 (1,2,3,4) - These antijumps are there for no reason - remove them? Moved
01:32:851 (1,2,3) - ^ okey flat.
01:44:712 (3) - ^no u.u
02:12:793 - Map through this little break? It seems kinda random and unnecessary. Pereira006<3

Dance
02:10:177 (1,2) - Whoops, looks like something messed up here. Move (2) forward a tick. O.o
02:12:968 (1,2) - ^ O.o

Pretty nice map
Thanx :)
Niva

RandomJibberish wrote:

Nivalis' Rhythms
00:27:793 (6) - This follows nothing in the song Changed into slider
02:47:359 (2) - ^ Changed into 2 circles
02:52:940 (4) - ^ Changed into slider
02:55:033 (2) - ^ Deleted
02:56:429 (2) - ^ Deleted
As with the above diff, I'd be reluctant to bubble if these were kept
02:14:363 (5) - I kiiinda see what you're going for here, but I don't think it really works. I'd stick to a run of 1/2 beats or something I have no idea how I have to change this >< Unchanged
Thanks for mod~

To HellDawn : My diff's tick rate already changed to 2

EDIT : I also created an experimental spinner circle to replace that plain gray circle. Feel free to use this if you want (:
Replace the old spinner-circle.png


Download: Ruslana - Wild Dances (HellDawn) [Nivalis' Rhythms].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn
To HellDawn : My diff's tick rate already changed to 2 K

EDIT : I also created an experimental spinner circle to replace that plain gray circle. Feel free to use this if you want (:
Replace the old spinner-circle.png No Gonzvlo created a spinner
Yusu Aoi
Great!!:))
Here's a Kudosu star!:))
vivere
Mod about hitsound by request >.<

Sorry for the delay D:

[Wild]:
  1. 00:59:014 (2,3,4,5) - May you add clap? I found it very nice... but isn't my map xP
  2. 01:02:503 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider.
  3. 01:05:119 (3) - Remove this clap.
  4. 01:10:875 (4) - Remove the clap that is in the beginning of the slider.
  5. 01:49:247 (1,3,5,6,7,8) - Add finish in these notes?
  6. 02:18:549 - Silence this slider?... To do it you should put two inherited points, like this:
  7. 02:32:533 - End this slider at 02:34:626, then, add a note here: 02:34:975... Like this?
  8. 02:41:603 (3) - Remove this clap in the beginning.
Well... that's all

Star <3
Aleks719

RandomJibberish wrote:

Aleck's Rhythms Aleks'
00:33:375 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove this stream, it follows nothing in the music
etc etc... wtf, i know there are no music at blue ticks. But if 1/2 will be hardest thing in whole mapset (expect crazy jumps, but there are no jumps here)- it is not fun.
RandomJibberish, thanks but no. I won't remove it.

Just so you know, I'm 100% not going to bubble if the unnecesary 1/4 is not removed
This map has a bubble about 4 or 5 times. And this fucking 1/4 was good for others. Sorry, Helldawn, you can remove my diff from mapset if you want to get another bubble from RH. I won't remove 1/4 notes.
Without changes.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

vivere wrote:

Mod about hitsound by request >.<

Sorry for the delay D: <3

[Wild]:
  1. 00:59:014 (2,3,4,5) - May you add clap? I found it very nice... but isn't my map xP Fix'd
  2. 01:02:503 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider. Fix'd
  3. 01:05:119 (3) - Remove this clap. Fix'd
  4. 01:10:875 (4) - Remove the clap that is in the beginning of the slider. Fix'd
  5. 01:49:247 (1,3,5,6,7,8) - Add finish in these notes? Fix'd
  6. 02:18:549 - Silence this slider?... To do it you should put two inherited points, like this: Fix'd
  7. 02:32:533 - End this slider at 02:34:626, then, add a note here: 02:34:975... Like this? Fix'd
  8. 02:41:603 (3) - Remove this clap in the beginning.Fix'd


Well... that's all

Star <3
Thanks a lot :)
Armin
[General]

What if you change your slider border? since your hitcircle overlay is black I'd suggest you to turn them in a black colour.
So, if you want to add a slider border go to your .osu diff and search [Colours], then add this:
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
Example:

SPOILER
If I want to add a black slider border on "Dance" diff:


[Dance]

oh, that slidertick's value

00:05:991 (1) - Please make it 1/2 shorter, it would follow drums (and it would follow the main rhythm XD)
01:15:758 (1,2,1) - 01:21:340 (1,2) – asymmetric sliders compared to the ones that you used at the start (here 00:24:479 (1) – for example)
01:10:177 (1) – whoops little jump, if you could fix it (maybe with a reverse selection) it would be better, but it doesn’t cause big problems during playing, so…it’s up to you ;p
02:14:363 (4) – I expected another repeat here o.o

Oh yeah whistles are just bad for me. Really, make their volume lower.
Rest is really enjoyable.

[Wild]

00:17:154 (5) - New combo please?
00:33:898 (3) - I expected a hitcircle instead of a slider
00:54:828 (3) - If I were you I'd follow the vocal voice here
01:07:386 (1) - lovely :3
01:24:828 (1) - Why don't you make this symmetrical?
02:42:650 (1,2,3) - 01:11:921 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the finish flood here

[Nivalis' Rhythms]

Your Audio Lead In is different from the others. Please change it to "1996" since your diff have the same start of the other difficulties.

Rest is fine, I don't like some of your new changes that you make at the map (I've played it in the past and I loved your diff and thanks to it now I am a Ruslana's fan ;P)

[Aleks' Rhythms]

00:34:247 (1) - Maybe you now, but in this case the vocal voice is prevailing here. I'd suggest you to add three hiticircles on white ticks instead of this long slider, but it seems you want to follow a symmetrical pattern.

Deserves (another) star, and a HEART.
Aleks719

Armin wrote:

[Aleks' Rhythms]
00:34:247 (1) - Maybe you now, but in this case the vocal voice is prevailing here. I'd suggest you to add three hiticircles on white ticks instead of this long slider, but it seems you want to follow a symmetrical pattern. Agree, fixed
Thanks~

Download: Ruslana - Wild Dances (HellDawn) [Aleks' Rhythms].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn
[General]

[Dance]

oh, that slidertick's value

00:05:991 (1) - Please make it 1/2 shorter, it would follow drums (and it would follow the main rhythm XD) Fix'd
01:15:758 (1,2,1) - 01:21:340 (1,2) – asymmetric sliders compared to the ones that you used at the start (here 00:24:479 (1) – for example) Fix'd
01:10:177 (1) – whoops little jump, if you could fix it (maybe with a reverse selection) it would be better, but it doesn’t cause big problems during playing, so…it’s up to you ;p No
02:14:363 (4) – I expected another repeat here o.oNo
Oh yeah whistles are just bad for me. Really, make their volume lower.
Rest is really enjoyable.

[Wild]

00:17:154 (5) - New combo please?Fix'd
00:33:898 (3) - I expected a hitcircle instead of a slider Fix'd
00:54:828 (3) - If I were you I'd follow the vocal voice here
01:07:386 (1) - lovely :3
01:24:828 (1) - Why don't you make this symmetrical? Fix'd
02:42:650 (1,2,3) - 01:11:921 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the finish flood here Fix'd
RandomJibberish
EDIT: Well, I've discussed this with Aleks and came to the conclusion that our mapping approaches are completely different. I still don't really like those streams, but I can at least see there's a level of thought behind them. Also this map really doesn't need to wait any longer

hurp durp going back on my word I feel like the government
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Thank you :3
Teoki_old
liek
Natteke
— where's the credit to tieff for hitcirle skin?
— second offset is too early. use 141,385
Miu Matsuoka
Difficultly spread.....
EIII :o
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Natteke wrote:

—where's the credit to tieff for hitcirle skin? No! u.u
— second offset is too early. use 141,385No! thanx
Garven
Don't give kudosu if you refuse everything in the mod post.
Maddinho
Hey you.
I like your difficult easy.
This map is great and I didnt find any bad things while playing it.
Honestly said, the other diffs are too hard for me.
Greetz, Maddin.

Edit: sry I ask this here, but is it normal that it takes multiple months that a map is taken in ranking?
Armin
Oh god BATs please rank this.
|:
Andrea
Time to get out from Pending.

Ranked~
Selee
congratz~~ 8-)

The best Eurovision song in my mind besides Hardrock Hallelujah
Pereira006
yaaayyyy!!!
congraz~~ ^_^
Gonzvlo
You finally made it, congrats on your first rank!
dNextGen
o hey gratz man
Niva

Armin wrote:

Rest is fine, I don't like some of your new changes that you make at the map (I've played it in the past and I loved your diff and thanks to it now I am a Ruslana's fan ;P)
o.o...
Thanks Armin~ (Just realized this xD)

btw congrats on Rank Helldawn (:
vivere
Congrats for get your first map ranked!
Mastodonio
Finally! Congratulations!
DarkDunskin
haha good job! Congrats :D
Now get back to Alejandro ;)
UnderminE

Selee wrote:

congratz~~ 8-)

The best Eurovision song in my mind besides Hardrock Hallelujah
Raimon
LLOve ittt congratzzzzz for hard work :3
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Yay Thanx :)
Babble
So what language is this? Just curious.
Jarby

Babble wrote:

So what language is this? Just curious.
It's English enough to be tagged as such.

Lyrics
Just maybe I’m crazy,
The world spins round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

I want you to want me as I dance
Round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

Forever and ever go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing

Hey!

Desire
Inside you
My head spins round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

I want you
To want me
So I dance round and round and round
Hey, shi-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
Hey, shi-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

Forever and ever
Go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing

He-e-e-ey!

Dance forever, come and be mine,
Dance together, till the end of time
Dance together go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing
SmosherML
This Beatmap is great!!! :)
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Jarby wrote:

Babble wrote:

So what language is this? Just curious.
It's English enough to be tagged as such.

Lyrics
Just maybe I’m crazy,
The world spins round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

I want you to want me as I dance
Round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

Forever and ever go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing

Hey!

Desire
Inside you
My head spins round and round and round
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
shi-di-ri-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

I want you
To want me
So I dance round and round and round
Hey, shi-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na
Hey, shi-di-duy, shi-di-ri-di-da-na

Forever and ever
Go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing

He-e-e-ey!

Dance forever, come and be mine,
Dance together, till the end of time
Dance together go, go, go wild dancers!!

Day-na-day-na Wanna be loved
Day-na Gonna take my wild chances
Day-na-day-na Freedom above
Day-na-da-na-da I’m wild ‘n’ dancing
<3
Maxer00
Congrats! It's finally ranked, yipeee~ :D
narakucrimson
Damn, I just noticed that the spread is ugly :P

Even if this is fun to play and all, an Easy and 3 Insane-rated difficulties can't be right at all.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

narakucrimson wrote:

Damn, I just noticed that the spread is ugly :P

Even if this is fun to play and all, an Easy and 3 Insane-rated difficulties can't be right at all.
Shut... xD
mkaan
Easy too easy but 3 insane?
But i like your beatmap
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