1. Ch1ka's Normal (3,87 stars, 251 notes)
2. Easy (1,71 stars, 150 notes)
3. Hard (4,92 stars, 462 notes)

1. 02:28:460 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down so it's in line with (1) in the same combo.

1. 00:08:026 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid up and (4) by 1 grid to the right, so it makes a nicer cross shape.
2. 00:29:765 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid up to stay in line with (2). Move (4) by 1 grid up to fix distance.
3. 00:31:504 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks a little weird. Try placing them like this. Also, to do so, turn off distance snap when you move (1) into position, but turn it on afterwards. The spacing between the last combo and this one is a bit larger than the current scale but it doesn't look confusing or wrong. (if you made the nazi changes above)
4. 00:43:678 (1) - Consider adding a clap on a tick at 00:44:547.
5. 00:56:721 (2,3) - (nazi) Move (2) by 1 grid up. This forms a nice triangle between the start of slider (2) in the previous combo, the end of the previous slider and this note. Also, move (3) by 1 grid down and 1 grid left. Looks better since later on there will be a note on exact position.
6. 02:08:895 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks a little weird. I suggest to switch to grid level 4 and reposition them in the line to get better spacing. Like this. They are positioned a bit lower than before as well, so you will need to position the next combo (sliders (1) and (2)) by 1 grid down as well, spacing after that looks okay.

1. HP drain +1.
2. 00:22:808 (5) - New combo.
3. 00:26:721 (7) - ^
4. 00:29:765 (6) - New combo and fix the spacing between current (6) and (7) to match the combo's spacing.
5. 01:19:221 (7) - (nazi) 1 grid down and 1 grid to the right. It looks better.
6. 02:27:156 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) by 1 grid down and 1 to the left. Do the same with (4). This way 1-2-3-4 will shape a square.
7. 02:28:243 (1,2,x) - Just like the above, but move them to the right instead of left. After you do this change this, move (5) by 1 grid down and 1 to the right, (6) by 1 grid right, and finally (1) by 1 grid to the right. Spacing looks okay afterwards.
8. 02:45:634 (8) - New combo.
9. 02:46:069 (1) - Remove new combo.

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
00:21:069 (1) - right 1 grid?
00:35:852 (3,4) - (3) whistle, (4) remove whistle? no
00:42:591 (2) - right 1 grid
02:00:199 (1) - up 1 grid
02:13:460 (2,3,4) - uneven spacing?

[Normal]
no problem

nice map, 07th is good~

All fixed, thank you

Ayeen wrote:

Ayeen's comments:

General:
Preview points is kinda ouch ( sound like can hit by stick)
The whole map is kinda out of the beat for me, maybe just me ( I cant feel the intensity of music within the map)
No kiai time for all difficulty? I want my fountain

Easy:
Dont want to bother

Chika normal:
I think SV 1.4 fit better for normal
Other than that, I cant comment much

Hard:
1/2 beatsnap divisor for hard while easy n normal 1/4? Rarely occured

No need kudos..... that not a mod at all >.<

Despite my harsh comment, here some star

Anyway, here is your kudosu.
Preview time is fixed. Thank you for wasting time for my map

Ayeen wrote:

Ayeen's comments:

Chika normal:
I think SV 1.4 fit better for normal Sorry, but i dont think so
Other than that, I cant comment much

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Nothing to point out.

Easy
Seems fine.

Hard
There are lots of added notes that didn't make much sense, and some were really surprising.
As much as I like the sliders in the beginning, it's better to start all diffs at the same point. Your call.

Not much to say. Very good job, that's a pretty nice map.

Ok, I removed this sliders in the beginning of [Hard] diff, so it's starts as [Easy] does. Thanks for mod, Odaril

jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
00:45:417 (4) - new combo here because your are breaking your pattern
00:54:113 (3) - you should remove the whistle off this because everytime the organ tone has gone down at the end of your pattern you have not put a whistle, and everytime they have gone up you have put a whistle, they go down here so = no whistle ;p

Hard
01:44:656 (1,1,1,1) - feels like waaaaaay too much spinning tbh, it felt like spinner spam and thats never a good thing and it didnt really add anything good to the map either, maybe turn it into a break like the other diffs are?
02:22:808 (1) - placement here could be better, feels waay too close to the combo before, tbh placing it like in this pic would giving it more readable spacing and create a better overall pattern due to it being in the middle of both combos

SPOILER

02:31:721 (6,1) - put the new combo on the (6) to follow your pattern


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maps are great tbh, fix these things up and you might see a bubble

All fixed! Removed spinner spam and made break there
Thank you very much~

jericho2442 wrote:

well all to say is enjoy your floaty thing

James2250 wrote:

Audio lead-in isn't really needed on any difficulty? I guess 0.5 if you don't want the lyrics to start so fast

Easy:
00:45:417 (1,3) - might as well continue clap pattern on these?
00:59:330 (1,3) - ^

Call me back and I will rank (you don't need to kudosu this)

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Aww, thank you!!
Also, gratz Ch1ka with first rank guest diff :>