1. Forever Alone (4,83 stars, 838 notes)

ezek wrote:

As requested, just a quick glance~

General

1. Why do you have two background images in the folder? Remove the one you're not using (if you're not planning to use it somehow)~
2. You should add some SB with your names so players and modders know who mapped which parts~

Insane Collab

1. 00:11:402 (1,2) - You can add whistle hitsound on the beginning of these sliders, fits well with the music~ Also, I would set the volume on their ends to 10% since the background music isn't that loud~ill let hitsounds last thing untill the map is more fixed
2. 00:15:637 (1) - You can reduce this spinner's volume too~done
3. 00:18:460 (1,2,3) - Just as my first suggestion, add whistle on the beginning and reduce volume on the ends~
4. 00:22:696 (6) - Select the note, set normal sampleset (like this) and add finish hitsound, fits well with the music imo~
5. 00:23:401 (2) - There's nothing to map on the end of this slider ;w; You should delete the next note and extend the slider like this fixed
6. 00:23:931 (3,4) - If you follow my previous suggestion, you can delete these notes and replace them with a slider, they fit and play well imo, the pattern would look like this fixed
7. 00:27:637 (6,7,8) - Delete these and use a repeat slider like this. It will feel better while playing and also emphasizes the vocals done
8. 00:38:931 (7,8) - Same here^ done
9. 01:57:107 (8) - There is no reason to place a note here, absolutely no beat. I see you have done this on different parts of the map, please remove those notes where there is no noticeable beat to map. I know that you are trying to do this to make your map harder, but placing notes where there is no sound to map is called "overmapping" and is not acceptable. fixed ill keep going through the map and fix them
10. 03:24:284 (9) - The beat and the vocal start at the white tick, why did you place it there?

fixed

In general, you need to work more on your hitsounds (sadly, I can't help you with that because hitsounds are not my thing and it would take me a long time), there are a lot of sliders which you can reduce their volumes on the end so they fit better with the music. There's also more things involved, but let's leave that for more people to check your map. I may come and look at it again depending on how you improve it later.

ill leave hitsounds for later but sure will do

For now, good luck and don't give up!

tyy ezek youre rly helpful

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ NM from in-game PM

General

1. Add combo colours
2. Add some tags (maybe "drum and bass dnb")
3. Maybe change "Collab Insane" to "Alone" or "Lost"?

since its a collab ill change to Not Alone xD

Collab Insane

1. 00:15:637 (1) - delete
2. 00:24:107 (5) - NC done
3. 00:34:696 (2,3) - this sliders can looks better i fixed most of them
4. 00:41:049 (3) - ^
5. 01:34:696 (1) - ^
6. 01:40:696 (2) - ^
7. 01:41:931 (3) - ^
8. 01:47:225 (5) - ^
9. 01:48:107 (1) - ^
10. 01:53:049 (7) - ^
11. 01:57:460 (2) - ^
12. 01:58:343 (5) - ^
13. 02:01:343 (2) - ^
14. 02:04:343 (5) - ^
15. 02:39:549 (5) - ^
16. 02:40:872 (8) - ^
17. 02:50:225 (2) - ^
18. 03:43:166 (1,2,3) - ^
19. 04:00:284 (2,4) - ^
20. 04:12:107 (6) - ^
21. 04:15:637 (6) - ^
22. 04:50:225 (5) - ^
23. 04:55:872 (7) - ^
24. 04:58:696 (8) - ^
25. 00:41:931 (6,7) - this pattern can looks betterfixed
26. 01:29:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
27. 01:55:519 (8,1) - ^
28. 02:51:460 (5,6) - ^
29. 03:38:578 (2,3) - ^i like these :/
30. 03:37:166 (2,3) - ^...
31. 01:25:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add 1 repeat for this slidersdone
32. 01:37:166 (2,3) - not in rhythmall remapped and fixed
33. 01:38:401 (2,3,1,2) - ^
34. 01:49:872 (6,7) - ^
35. 01:59:401 (2,3,4) - ^
36. 02:09:637 (5,6) - ^
37. 02:15:725 (2) - ^
38. 02:22:696 (4,5,6) - ^
39. 02:39:107 (4,5) - ^
40. 02:51:460 (5,6) - ^
41. 02:12:107 - 02:12:284 - add something done
42. 02:15:725 - 03:57:107 - use soft hitsounding done for both
43. 04:42:460 - 05:15:990 - ^

Good Luck!~

THX for mod it helped alooot

Lilyanna wrote:

THX for mod it helped alooot

• 00:22:696 (6) - try to blanket this note with the previous sliders?
  00:38:225 (4,5) - replaced those with a 1/2 slider?
  00:53:578 (5,6) - the spacing is smaller than before
  01:00:284 (7) - this slider doesnt emphasize anything
  01:17:754 (1,2) - ctrl+g (slider should start on white tick)
  01:17:754 (1,5) - stack
  01:19:343 (7,1) - stack them with ^
  01:20:049 (3,1) - ^
  01:45:284 (3) - nc here
  01:48:813 (3,4,5) - meeh,try something like this
  the whole dubstep parts feels p much off,try to focus more on the heavy wubs instead on anything else v:
  02:21:284 (1,2) - its not allowed to cover the reverse arrow of a reverse slider (ranking criteria)
  02:23:401 (5,6) - stack
  02:23:931 (6) - also ctrl+g so you have a circular cursor movement
  02:26:931 (1) - stack
  02:26:931 (1,3) - stack
  02:39:637 - vocal starts here,so the slider should start here too
  03:30:460 (8,1) - mentioned that earlier
  04:18:107 (4,6) - why dont just copy+paste it instead of making a new one here 04:18:460 (5,7) - ?
  i enjoyed the second half way more,way more stuff emphasized and in generell looked better in terms of aesthetics too!

Mazziv wrote:

ghi from my queue xd

[Not alone]

• 00:22:696 (6) - try to blanket this note with the previous sliders? done
  00:38:225 (4,5) - replaced those with a 1/2 slider? done
  00:53:578 (5,6) - the spacing is smaller than before fixed
  01:00:284 (7) - this slider doesnt emphasize anythingfixed
  01:17:754 (1,2) - ctrl+g (slider should start on white tick) fixed
  01:17:754 (1,5) - stack done
  01:19:343 (7,1) - stack them with ^ done
  01:45:284 (3) - nc heredone
  01:48:813 (3,4,5) - meeh,try something like this done
  the whole dubstep parts feels p much off,try to focus more on the heavy wubs instead on anything else v:
  02:21:284 (1,2) - its not allowed to cover the reverse arrow of a reverse slider (ranking criteria) fixed
  02:23:401 (5,6) - stackdone
  02:23:931 (6) - also ctrl+g so you have a circular cursor movementfixed
  02:26:931 (1) - stack ok
  02:26:931 (1,3) - stack ok
  02:39:637 - vocal starts here,so the slider should start here too fixed
  03:30:460 (8,1) - mentioned that earlier fixed
  04:18:107 (4,6) - why dont just copy+paste it instead of making a new one here 04:18:460 (5,7) - ?
  i enjoyed the second half way more,way more stuff emphasized and in generell looked better in terms of aesthetics too!

ok
gl with this map!

THX for mod always helpful

Mazziv wrote:

ghi from my queue xd

[Not alone]

• 
  04:18:107 (4,6) - why dont just copy+paste it instead of making a new one here 04:18:460 (5,7) - ? I want slider 4 to blanket slider 5. 5 and 6 are copy/pasted
  i enjoyed the second half way more,way more stuff emphasized and in generell looked better in terms of aesthetics too!

gl with this map!

Axon wrote:

From my queue

Not alone

stack 04:08:049 (3) - on top of 04:07:872 (2) I think it fits the difficulty of the map and it flows fine from testplays

This map looks awesome! Good luck <3

Axon wrote:

From my queue

Mod

Not alone

I think sv is too high for 170bpm, i suggest around 1.60 not changed

00:33:813 (6,7) - This has really bad flowi guess i keep it it sounds good to me

00:52:519 (2) - line this up perfectly with the slider end of 00:51:990 (1) Fixed

01:00:107 (7) - What rhythm is this slider following? remapped that part fixed

01:23:049 (1,2,3,4) - I feel this should be distance snapped to avoid confusion Fixed

02:23:931 (6) - I don't understand the rhythm this slider is following Fixed D:

02:26:578 (6) - flip this horizontal to blanket with 02:26:931 (1) and then connect 02:27:637 (2) with the head of 02:26:578 (6) here are some pictures if you don't get what i'm saying: http://puu.sh/pvB53/3a1dc7ff7e.png and http://puu.sh/pvBcv/661df8f878.png Done

stack 04:08:049 (3) - on top of 04:07:872 (2)

This map looks awesome! Good luck <3

Thank you for mod

HB24 wrote:

nice song btw

IRC

19:35 *HB24 is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1002295 Singularity - Alone (Au5 & Fractal Remix) [Not Alone]]
19:35 Lilyanna: yey
19:42 Lilyanna: wp
19:42 HB24: thx
19:44 HB24: 01:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - did u use DS for this stream
19:45 Lilyanna: i converted a slider
19:45 HB24: 01:30:460 (5) - put it somewhere else to emphasize it
19:45 HB24: its a strong note
19:46 HB24: 01:41:225 (1) - more spacing its almost touching
19:47 Lilyanna: u can copy post this on my thread u deserve a kds
19:47 Lilyanna: if uwant help
19:48 HB24: okey
19:48 HB24: btw
19:49 HB24: can u tell me
19:49 HB24: where are your parts
19:49 Lilyanna: xD
19:49 Lilyanna: okay
19:49 Lilyanna: i thought
19:49 Lilyanna: its clear
19:49 Lilyanna: cuz the  bad parts are mine
19:49 Lilyanna: first kiai is minde
19:49 Lilyanna: mine
19:49 Lilyanna: and all vocals
19:50 Lilyanna: are mine
19:50 Lilyanna: most vocals map
19:50 HB24: 03:41:754 (5) - stack it perfectly plz
19:50 Lilyanna: he did second kiai clearly and what comes before it and the end
19:50 HB24: with 03:41:049 (3) - 
19:52 Lilyanna: done
19:53 HB24: 01:35:754 (3,1) - polish this more
19:54 HB24: like this http://puu.sh/pwlzi/231f8798ed.jpg
19:55 HB24: 01:50:313 (8) - begins on the red tick
19:55 HB24: not blue one
19:55 HB24: dont even begin a note on blue tick
19:55 HB24: ever*
19:56 Lilyanna: okay
19:57 Lilyanna: just wanted to emphazies
19:57 Lilyanna: not beat
19:57 HB24: 02:01:166 (1,2) - more polish like this http://puu.sh/pwlMU/7905f8997d.jpg
19:58 Lilyanna: oh ye
19:58 HB24: 02:12:637 (5,6) - this spacing is confusing it makes me think 6 is on 1/4
19:58 HB24: so more spacing plz
19:59 Lilyanna: omg true xs
20:01 Lilyanna: fixed tho
20:06 HB24: 04:12:107 (6) - nc
20:06 HB24: sudden changes of sv require NC
20:06 Lilyanna: oh tyy
20:06 HB24: so that the player will know theres a change
20:06 Lilyanna: i made that slider for him btw xD
20:06 HB24: gg
20:06 HB24: looks good
20:07 HB24: 04:37:166 (3) - nc
20:08 Lilyanna: i think i know where the next new combo is xD
20:08 Lilyanna: 05:05:049 (5) -
20:09 HB24: yea

TY TY ure always helpful <3

captainlatias wrote:

Hi from my Queue

00:45:637 put this slider to the end of slider 2 and move slider after idk it sound fine to me so i keep till another mode say something
01:04:696 imo, put these into a triple stack, but don't have to changed looks better
01:06:460 give a little space to this slider from 2 Fixed
01:28:431 NC i dont think its needed they r streams
01:32:401 move this slightly more down Done
01:48:813 NC Done
02:33:637 move this slider up to where 7 is i think it looks fine
03:01:872 move slightly more to right okay ^^
03:04:343 move this to where 7 was previously i think if i do that it will look repeated and plus i dont want more big jumps
03:05:754 move more to right done
03:23:754 NC done
04:46:166 move to where previous 2 was i cant stack that its intentional its supposed to rotate

Hope it helps ! Map looks great !

Thx for mod and for trying

General

1. Plis choose combo colors
2. add tags

Not Alone

1. Reduce OD . OD 9 is way too high for this . OD 8 is fine
2. HP should be a bit lower since its a marathon map ~ u dont want people to fail at the final 5 seconds. it would be kinda sad ~ maybe set HP to 6 for now
3. 00:22:696 (6) - is not exactly in middle of 00:21:284 (4,5) -
4. 00:29:225 - u dont need an object here ~ start a 1/2 slider from big white tick
5. 00:34:696 (2,3) - u could make these shapes more consistent by moving the red anchor point to middle
6. 00:49:696 (8) - overmapped . remove it ~ its unnecessary
7. 00:58:696 (2) - start nc from here
8. 00:58:519 (1,2) - why are they so close tho?
9. 01:18:990 (6) - 01:19:696 (2) - 01:20:401 (2) - 01:21:107 (3) - 01:21:813 (3) - 01:22:519 (3) - 01:23:225 (3) - 01:23:931 (3) - 01:24:637 (3) - its actually pretty annoying how all these sliders end on the downbeat which is a big factor ... do something about these ... make the downbeats clickable for better feeling during gameplay
10. 02:01:166 (1,2) - fix blanket
11. 02:15:637 (2,3,4) - same spacing between 1/2 and 1/1 .. its confusing and can be unplayable ~ do something about it
12. 03:27:284 (7,8) - space them more
13. 05:11:754 (2) - here ~ sound is getting lower and u suddenly increased SV lol , its not needed

1. 
   why two backgrounds? 2.jpg is not used.
2. Add some tags, like "dubstep"
3. Set some combo colors

1. The two timing points 00:11:402 - (red timing, and green inherited) used different volumes. Even if green overlaps it, they should be the same.
2. 00:11:402 (1,2) - put these in the center
3. 00:21:284 (4) - NC
4. 00:22:872 - Put this green tick at 00:23:401 - here

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

Hi, from my q

MOD

00:33:107 (3) - very minor but i think you could make the spacing more equal there fixed
00:51:813 (2) - ^ fixed
01:02:931 (6) - blanket with 01:02:049 (4) ? done
01:22:166 (1,2) - spacing, it could be a bit lower. Or to the left, your choice fixed
01:24:284 (1,2) - Spacing, move to the right a bit maybe? fixed
01:29:049 (1) - the slider is a bit too high fixed

02:48:990 (1,2) - how about moving it down to make the 02:48:460 (5,1,2) spacing same as 02:48:460 (5,6) fixed

Don't you feel that 04:17:401 (2) - this slider don't fit in the continuation of 04:16:696 (1) ? I feel like it should end sooner and move that continuation slider in time so it fit the beat

i think its fine

Ok that's it, sorry for short mod, but your map is already great GL

thx alot for modding every thing helps

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi

General

1. Plis choose combo colors i dont get this
2. add tags

done

Not Alone

1. Reduce OD . OD 9 is way too high for this . OD 8 is fine fixed
2. HP should be a bit lower since its a marathon map ~ u dont want people to fail at the final 5 seconds. it would be kinda sad ~ maybe set HP to 6 for now fixed
3. 00:22:696 (6) - is not exactly in middle of 00:21:284 (4,5) - fixed
4. 00:29:225 - u dont need an object here ~ start a 1/2 slider from big white tick fixed
5. 00:34:696 (2,3) - u could make these shapes more consistent by moving the red anchor point to middle fixed
6. 00:49:696 (8) - overmapped . remove it ~ its unnecessary fixed
7. 00:58:696 (2) - start nc from here done
8. 00:58:519 (1,2) - why are they so close tho? they dont want to be left Alone..fixed
9. 01:18:990 (6) - 01:19:696 (2) - 01:20:401 (2) - 01:21:107 (3) - 01:21:813 (3) - 01:22:519 (3) - 01:23:225 (3) - 01:23:931 (3) - 01:24:637 (3) - its actually pretty annoying how all these sliders end on the downbeat which is a big factor ... do something about these ... make the downbeats clickable for better feeling during gameplay ure ofc right and fixed ty
10. 02:01:166 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
11. 02:15:637 (2,3,4) - same spacing between 1/2 and 1/1 .. its confusing and can be unplayable ~ do something about it fixed
12. 03:27:284 (7,8) - space them more fixed
13. 05:11:754 (2) - here ~ sound is getting lower and u suddenly increased SV lol , its not needed

well overall . i would say u still need more experience in mapping ~ dont give up .. GL!~