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Tegomass - Kiss~Kaerimichi no Love Song~ (TV SIZE)

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Topic Starter
HeatKai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 5 June, 2011 at 11:17:30 PM

Artist: Tegomass
Title: Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size)
Source: Lovely Complex
Tags: TristanShi Samiljul Mekadon Atsushi Otani Koizumi Risa
BPM: 132
Filesize: 11174kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.76 stars, 297 notes)
  2. Hard (4.64 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Hw&TS's Taiko (5 stars, 361 notes)
  4. mekadon's Easy (1.88 stars, 75 notes)
  5. Normal (3.95 stars, 139 notes)
Download: Tegomass - Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size)
Download: Tegomass - Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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taNa
8-)
Starrodkirby86
Just helping a newbie mapper.

I'm not going in-depth until things get serious here, i.e. after 8 stars and plenty of mods, but I will give a general opinion of it all. :)
And that, there are a lot of traits that show it's a newbie map, but you have some ideas of where you're going, and that's a good start. We'll just need to get your map refined, cleaned, and ironed out of any minor errors before ranking.

Some of these things include slider shapes, pattern placement, and combos, but, as I said before, I'm not going to go in-depth. I'll leave that up to future modders. xD

Some changes from the first version:
[Little JumpingStreams]:
  1. 00:36:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Timing moved to have a less confusing pattern.
  2. 00:44:296 (1,2,3) - Spaced farther out.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
HeatKai

taNa wrote:

8-)
thanks taNa
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Just helping a newbie mapper. Kirby , I have a feeling . XD

I'm not going in-depth until things get serious here, i.e. after 8 stars and plenty of mods, but I will give a general opinion of it all. :)
And that, there are a lot of traits that show it's a newbie map, but you have some ideas of where you're going, and that's a good start. We'll just need to get your map refined, cleaned, and ironed out of any minor errors before ranking.

Some of these things include slider shapes, pattern placement, and combos, but, as I said before, I'm not going to go in-depth. I'll leave that up to future modders. xD

Some changes from the first version:
[Little JumpingStreams]:
  1. 00:36:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Timing moved to have a less confusing pattern.
  2. 00:44:296 (1,2,3) - Spaced farther out.
Good luck!
TTTL
☆ミ
Topic Starter
HeatKai

TTTL wrote:

☆ミ
yeay :D
y u c a
hi~:3

General

not change combo coloer?
set preview point(both diff)

Normal

00:03:614 (4) - new combo
00:05:887 (1) - too ugly Orz....
00:08:160 (2) - new combo
00:27:705 (3) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - ^ and end time 00:30:660



Little JumpingStreams

00:00:660~00:11:114 - add more hitsound
00:18:160 (7) - new combo
00:35:091 (5) - ^
00:45:432 (4) - end time00:45:887
00:46:114 (x) - add note and new combo
00:59:523 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:296 (9) - new combo
01:24:750 (1) - too ugly Orz....


both diff can more add good note

good luck :3
Topic Starter
HeatKai

y u c a wrote:

hi~:3

General

not change combo coloer?
set preview point(both diff)done

Normal

00:03:614 (4) - new combo
00:05:887 (1) - too ugly Orz....
00:08:160 (2) - new combo
00:27:705 (3) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - ^ and end time 00:30:660

all fixed

Little JumpingStreams

00:00:660~00:11:114 - add more hitsound
00:18:160 (7) - new combo
00:35:091 (5) - ^
00:45:432 (4) - end time00:45:887
00:46:114 (x) - add note and new combo
00:59:523 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:296 (9) - new combo
01:24:750 (1) - too ugly Orz....

fixed
both diff can more add good note

good luck :3
the love shaped slider kinda hard to make , so it's ugly xD
thx for the mod :)
mekadon_old
[Normal]
Slider Velocity is a little too high IMO. About 1.2 should be fine.
00:02:250 (3) - Could be shaped better
00:05:887 (1) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - wtf
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fits unperfectly. Notes before it feels easier. Make Slider+slider+slider or whatever.
00:44:182 - kiai flashes are irritating IMO
00:49:978 (8) - 1 grid right (grid size 4)

Littleblahblah
OD feels low. Make it higher by 1.
00:15:205 (11) - Spoils the ENTIRE STREAM. Remove whistle and add finish.
00:34:750 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - reminds me of AngelHoney lol
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no no no modders will rage when they see this.
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Also, resized the BG to reduce lagging. (My old PC lags, so after resized it seems fine at 72fps or so)


lacks difficulties IMO.

starring when I feel like I want to star it so don't ask me yet ;3
Topic Starter
HeatKai

mekadon wrote:

[Normal]
Slider Velocity is a little too high IMO. About 1.2 should be fine.
00:02:250 (3) - Could be shaped better
00:05:887 (1) - ^
00:29:750 (7) - wtf
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fits unperfectly. Notes before it feels easier. Make Slider+slider+slider or whatever.
00:44:182 - kiai flashes are irritating IMO
00:49:978 (8) - 1 grid right (grid size 4) all fixed except for kiai xD

Littleblahblah
OD feels low. Make it higher by 1.
00:15:205 (11) - Spoils the ENTIRE STREAM. Remove whistle and add finish.
00:34:750 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - reminds me of AngelHoney lol
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no no no modders will rage when they see this.
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ for the new combo stream later. other fixed.

Also, resized the BG to reduce lagging. (My old PC lags, so after resized it seems fine at 72fps or so)


lacks difficulties IMO.

starring when I feel like I want to star it so don't ask me yet ;3
all done :)
the BG also thanks mekadon :)
Cute Bunny
[ Normal ]
00:04:750 (6) - spacing
00:26:569 (2) - new combo
00:33:387 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)stick or (4) move [ x:88 y280 ]
00:37:023 (1) - No signs of the slider so -.-

[ Little JumpingStreams ]
00:05:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing. all fix or spacing
00:15:205 (11) - move [ x:345 y:296 ]
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why new combo? All remove combo
00:52:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

oh... Something more is not enough D:
But, you can become a great mapper
Good luck ^_^;

EDIT :: IRC remod // STAR~
regenz
overall general :o

AudioLeadIn: 1996 change to AudioLeadIn: 2000
enable custom color even you don't use any different colors form default.
delete tags Lovely complex Tegomass because it's already at artist and source.

Normal

General
Slider velocity is to high for normal plz reduce it.
lower all volume to 70 percent for soft sounds. (Little JumpingStreams also )


00:04:750 (6) - wrong space
00:05:887 (1) - make this more a bit good shape it's fine now but can better
00:15:205 use normal sound with 30 percent volume here.
00:22:705 (1) - can you change this to more varies of notes.
00:31:569 (1) - change this same like previous slider ? for vocal fit.
00:45:205 (4) - clap
00:47:023 (2) - clap
00:45:432 (5) - finish at tail
00:47:023 (2) - clap
00:48:841 (6) - clap
00:49:296 (7) - whistle at tail
00:49:978 (8) - clap at tail
00:50:887 (1) - change this to some note not fit for spin
for hitsound placing at BIG white tick star form this place(00:53:387 (6) -
whistle at 3rd whitetick place clap ( if you don't understand ) place whistle at big white line(1st) next white(2rd) don't place next white (3rd)place clap next white don't place (4th) ok there are big white line(1st) again so place whistle and it's loop i think u got it now.
00:57:023 (3) - change to the spinner end at 01:00:205 start same as slider. (this is apply to Little JumpingStreams also )
01:14:523 (1,2,3,4) - delete this
01:15:659 (1) - move this to 01:14:750 and end at 01:17:023

Little JumpingStreams

hmm there are a lot of things you should learn the things that you are do at this difficault call overmap
00:29:296 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this stream not fit the songs
00:31:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - also ^

and newcombo colour we have a purpose when newcombo color
when 1. hard predict note and have tricky that it ''ll make a player play more easier.
2. Jump distance change everthings
3. for vocal lyric change
4. etc

No just place like 00:42:478 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - oh this is rainbow ... nono

also 00:04:750 (6) - about 1/4 return also about all of slider that have return you MUST make return slider tail see Clearly.
01:24:750 (1) - try more to make it good shape .it's ugly .

**** I can't Deep mod here becoz you need to do a lots . it's better to remap.
you need to know how to mapping (to get rank)
*** If you want to make a stream try to follow some songs that have a good fun drum it's don't overmap at all if you follow drum.
but i don't think this song fit for stream.
** I can't give you star. because your map is still need to improve a lot.
* Goodluck
LuPiiTa
hehe
☆~
Topic Starter
HeatKai
All fixed. :o
mekadon_old
btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
Topic Starter
HeatKai

mekadon wrote:

btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
if i use that offset , should i snap first ?
mekadon_old

heatwave95 wrote:

mekadon wrote:

btw offset: 658
sounds better imo
if i use that offset , should i snap first ?
no. Also don't kudosu that post.
Topic Starter
HeatKai
=.=
April_old
goodness~ :)
Topic Starter
HeatKai

April wrote:

goodness~ :)
thanks :D
TristanShi
Topic Starter
HeatKai

TristanShi wrote:

:) Let's make it!
hey , you make the ending , i take starting .
so i clear all beats first ~
Mapper 31
TristanShi
AngelHoney
Little JumpingStreams

00:04:521 (5,6) - hmm..spacing? D:
00:46:112 (1) - ^

diff name get win ._.

Normal

00:52:021 (1,2,3) - spacing...Orz
01:02:248 (1) - start at 01:02:476 ?
01:10:203 (5) - return -2 ?

:) :)
Topic Starter
HeatKai

AngelHoney wrote:

Little JumpingStreams

00:04:521 (5,6) - hmm..spacing? D:
00:46:112 (1) - ^

diff name get win ._.

Normal

00:52:021 (1,2,3) - spacing...Orz
01:02:248 (1) - start at 01:02:476 ?
01:10:203 (5) - return -2 ?

:) :)
thanks angelhoney :3
Sure
Hi~


[LJS]
00:04:521 (5) - move postion to x:296 y:152
00:10:885 (15) - new combo here
00:11:339 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:158 (9) - new combo / I'd like to move it to somewhere.(For example) It disturbs catching next stream.
00:14:067 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:680 (4) - (nazi) make it horizontal
00:44:180 / 00:44:521 / 00:44:862 / 00:45:356 - Burrrrrn! Unrankable way now. Delete them all. Then turn on kiai at 00:46:112
00:46:112 (1) - finish
01:24:748 (1) - make it looks better please.


[Normal]
00:10:885 (1) - too far from center.
00:37:021 (1) - Under the slider isn't good for easiest diff.
00:44:180 / 00:44:521 / 00:44:862 / 00:45:356 - NO. I already mentioned it.
00:45:430 (5) - finish at end of slider
00:49:976 (8) - new combo
01:03:385 (2) - spacing


I can't mod Taiko.
You need improvement.. >_<
Topic Starter
HeatKai

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~


[LJS]
00:04:521 (5) - move postion to x:296 y:152
00:10:885 (15) - new combo here
00:11:339 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:158 (9) - new combo / I'd like to move it to somewhere.(For example) It disturbs catching next stream.
00:14:067 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:680 (4) - (nazi) make it horizontal
00:44:180 / 00:44:521 / 00:44:862 / 00:45:356 - Burrrrrn! Unrankable way now. Delete them all. Then turn on kiai at 00:46:112
00:46:112 (1) - finish
01:24:748 (1) - make it looks better please.


[Normal]
00:10:885 (1) - too far from center.
00:37:021 (1) - Under the slider isn't good for easiest diff.
00:44:180 / 00:44:521 / 00:44:862 / 00:45:356 - NO. I already mentioned it.
00:45:430 (5) - finish at end of slideri'm gonna stay like that. :)
00:49:976 (8) - new combo
01:03:385 (2) - spacing


I can't mod Taiko.
You need improvement.. >_<
thanks for the mod :) all fixed~
Muya
Hi :)

-General-
  1. Title Rename to " Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size) " Full Submission with Title/Artist Change -- Mistakes
-Norma-
  1. 00:05:885 (1) -
    SPOILER
    264,136,5885,6,0,B|296:112|360:112|400:176|368:264|256:320|256:320|144:264|112:176|152:112|216:112|248:136,1,630
    plz try
  2. 00:28:385 (4) - 1grid right
-Hard-
  1. 00:13:385 - http://gyazo.com/936936595f9bf00a132cf6c22cac53d8.png
  2. 01:20:885 - (1) end at 01:23:839
  3. 01:24:748 - start at 01:24:294 &
    SPOILER
    224,272,84294,6,0,B|112:208|48:112|96:-32|224:-16|256:96|256:96|288:-16|400:-32|464:112|400:208|288:272,1,900
+star.
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Muya wrote:

Hi :)

-General-
  1. Title Rename to " Kiss ~ Kaerimichi no Love Song ~ (TV Size) " Full Submission with Title/Artist Change -- Mistakes
-Norma-
  1. 00:05:885 (1) -
    SPOILER
    264,136,5885,6,0,B|296:112|360:112|400:176|368:264|256:320|256:320|144:264|112:176|152:112|216:112|248:136,1,630
    plz try
  2. 00:28:385 (4) - 1grid right
-Hard-
  1. 00:13:385 - http://gyazo.com/936936595f9bf00a132cf6c22cac53d8.png
  2. 01:20:885 - (1) end at 01:23:839
  3. 01:24:748 - start at 01:24:294 &
    SPOILER
    224,272,84294,6,0,B|112:208|48:112|96:-32|224:-16|256:96|256:96|288:-16|400:-32|464:112|400:208|288:272,1,900
+star.
fixed~
-s4B-
*~
banvi
hi :D

[General]
remove enable countdown all diff

[Normal]
00:10:885 (1) You should set center because this is really soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set.
00:13:385 (4) new combo
00:25:430 (4) new combo
00:26:567 (1) remove new combo
00:27:703 (2) new combo
00:44:294 (1) same as 00:10:885 (1)
00:49:976 (8) new combo
00:50:885 (9,10,11,12) hmm , I think this is confusing and hard to read for beginner player. Can you try changing position or pattern?
00:53:385 (4) new combo
01:24:748 (1,2) remove whistle?
01:24:748 (1,2,3,4) This rhythm pattrn don't really fit imo. I suggest this.
[attachment=0:73a9f]1.jpg[/attachment:73a9f]

[Little JumpingStreams]
HP +2? This is too low. :o
00:32:930 (8) add clap instead of finish?
00:42:021 (2) move 1 grid right
00:45:430 (4) new combo?
00:56:567 (n) add note?

Taiko diffs are fine to me.
Good map for your 1st map. :D
GL&star ;)
Topic Starter
HeatKai

banvi wrote:

hi :D

[General]
remove enable countdown all diff

[Normal]
00:10:885 (1) You should set center because this is really soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set.
00:13:385 (4) new combo
00:25:430 (4) new combo
00:26:567 (1) remove new combo
00:27:703 (2) new combo
00:44:294 (1) same as 00:10:885 (1)
00:49:976 (8) new combo
00:50:885 (9,10,11,12) hmm , I think this is confusing and hard to read for beginner player. Can you try changing position or pattern?
00:53:385 (4) new combo
01:24:748 (1,2) remove whistle?
01:24:748 (1,2,3,4) This rhythm pattrn don't really fit imo. I suggest this.
[attachment=0:b783d]1.jpg[/attachment:b783d]

[Little JumpingStreams]
HP +2? This is too low. :o
00:32:930 (8) add clap instead of finish?
00:42:021 (2) move 1 grid right
00:45:430 (4) new combo?
00:56:567 (n) add note?

Taiko diffs are fine to me.
Good map for your 1st map. :D
GL&star ;)
All fixed :)
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • Kiai Time: 00:46:412 – 01:15:203
[Easy]


  • 00:10:885 (1): This slider is too close to the spinner. I suggest changing the spinner into a slider or some notes
    00:14:294 (3,4): A bit close
    00:19:294-00:20:658 : Try putting something in this small room.You can add two circles at 00:19:748 and 00:20:203
    00:22:703 (1): Too close to the spinner.You can end the spinner at 00:22:021 and add a circle at 00:22:476
    00:41:339 : Add a circle here
    00:43:839 : Spinner ends here
    00:44:294 (1,2,3): Change into a slider
    01:24:294 : BPM changed from here. You should find the right timing or add a break like taiko diff
[Little JumpingStreams]
Change the Diff’s name to LittleJumpingStreams or Little Jumping Streams
Hitsounds sound too random

  • 00:13:385 (2,3): Hard to understand. I suggest the slider’s repeat – 1 and add a circle at 00:13:953
    00:27:703 (1,2,3,4): The default red combo colour is hard to see here.
    00:36:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7): Maybe the only jump in this diff? Try adding more.
    01:27:248 (2): Offbeat
☆ STAR ☆
chocomint
~_~
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Cookiezi wrote:

~_~
T_T ?
aquabluu
[General]
Change 'Source' to 'Lovely Complex' (capitalize 'c')

[Normal]
00.03.612 (1-6) Move this entire thing one grid to the left, so (6) will be directly in the middle of the heart slider
00.05.885 (1) Now, I'm no expert in slider design, but this is ugly. Try this. http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot006-55.jpg
00.09.294 (4) Don't overlap the next slider
00.25.885 (3,4,5) Distance snap please
00.31.567 (1) End spinner at 00.32.476
00.44.294 (1) Three notes instead of a slider
00.46.567 (1) Distance snap
00.49.976 (1,2,3,4,5) Out of rhythm. Snap at 1/6 and do this

00.53.385 (1,2) Don't overlap
00.54.294 (3) One grid down
01.07.021 (5,6) One grid up, the both of them
01.26.112 (4) Remove slider and start last spinner here

[LittleJumpingStreams]
00.01.794 (5,6,7) Arrange like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot008-50.jpg
00.09.294 (8,9) One grid down for both
00.13.385 (2) Overlaps really badly with (11)
00.15.885 (2) Add whistle at end of slider
00.17.703 (6) ^
00.18.612 (2) ^
00.19.976 (5,6) Remove hitsounds, add finish hitsound at end of (6)
00.40.430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) Follow the vocals (snap at 1/6), these notes are really unintuitive
01.00.658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) Make the first slider symmetrical (V shaped, instead of leaning to one side) then copypaste for every other one, according to your own positions.
01.07.930 (1,2,3,4,5) Suggestion- Like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot009-43.jpg
01.24.294 (1) Same problem as in Normal- misshapen heart slider. Try this. http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot010-39.jpg

Goddammit follow the rhythm of the song and vocals >_> Especially on Normal. You could learn a thing about this song's beats through samiljul's Taiko diff, which is excellent.

Star.

EDIT: I know I'm being hard on you, this being your first map and all, so I apologize for anything that might arise from this. But hey, everyone's gotta start somewhere. Get as many modder's opinions as you can and see how other people arrange their notes on their ranked maps. Good luck!
Topic Starter
HeatKai

aquabluu wrote:

[General]
Change 'Source' to 'Lovely Complex' (capitalize 'c')

[Normal]
00.03.612 (1-6) Move this entire thing one grid to the left, so (6) will be directly in the middle of the heart slider
00.05.885 (1) Now, I'm no expert in slider design, but this is ugly. Try this. http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot006-55.jpg
00.09.294 (4) Don't overlap the next slider
00.25.885 (3,4,5) Distance snap please
00.31.567 (1) End spinner at 00.32.476
00.44.294 (1) Three notes instead of a slider
00.46.567 (1) Distance snap
00.49.976 (1,2,3,4,5) Out of rhythm. Snap at 1/6 and do this

00.53.385 (1,2) Don't overlap
00.54.294 (3) One grid down
01.07.021 (5,6) One grid up, the both of them
01.26.112 (4) Remove slider and start last spinner here

[LittleJumpingStreams]
00.01.794 (5,6,7) Arrange like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot008-50.jpg
00.09.294 (8,9) One grid down for both
00.13.385 (2) Overlaps really badly with (11)
00.15.885 (2) Add whistle at end of slider
00.17.703 (6) ^
00.18.612 (2) ^
00.19.976 (5,6) Remove hitsounds, add finish hitsound at end of (6)
00.40.430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) Follow the vocals (snap at 1/6), these notes are really unintuitive
01.00.658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) Make the first slider symmetrical (V shaped, instead of leaning to one side) then copypaste for every other one, according to your own positions.
01.07.930 (1,2,3,4,5) Suggestion- Like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot009-43.jpg
01.24.294 (1) Same problem as in Normal- misshapen heart slider. Try this. http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot010-39.jpg

Goddammit follow the rhythm of the song and vocals >_> Especially on Normal. You could learn a thing about this song's beats through samiljul's Taiko diff, which is excellent.

Star.

EDIT: I know I'm being hard on you, this being your first map and all, so I apologize for anything that might arise from this. But hey, everyone's gotta start somewhere. Get as many modder's opinions as you can and see how other people arrange their notes on their ranked maps. Good luck!
All fixed ! maybe :D
taiko_maniac1811
Nice~have a star :)
p.s may i make myself a taiko diff for this song,please~
Topic Starter
HeatKai

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Nice~have a star :)
p.s may i make myself a taiko diff for this song,please~
wait for " Mekadon Easy " first.
Topic Starter
HeatKai

heatwave95 wrote:

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Nice~have a star :)
p.s may i make myself a taiko diff for this song,please~
wait for " Mekadon Easy " first.
then you will make your diff :)
lepidopodus
Normal
00:26:567 (6) - Spacing is slightly longer than others.
00:31:567 (1) - Quite cruel spinner for Normal, how about extend it by a beat? (You need to delete 00:32:930 (1) if you do that.)
00:33:385 (2~6) - Spacing here is longer than other parts. A grid(lvl.3) or two can be tolerated but not this much, I guess.
00:38:839 (4) - I think you can keep spacing here...
00:44:180 (1,2) - Move these to 00:44:294.
00:45:430 (5) - Spacing is slightly shorter than others.
00:50:203 (1) - Spacing is wrong.
00:50:961 (2,3) - I don't think This is 1/3, snap them to 1/4. I mean, Move 2 to 00:50:998, and move 3 to 00:51:339. Don't forget that you need to reset spacing.
00:54:976 (1) - How about circle in 00:54:976, and then slider in 00:55:203-00:55:658?
00:57:021 (1) - Personally I don't like this spinner. I think circles and sliders would better.
01:01:567 (3) - Consider adding whistle here?
01:11:112 (6) - Check spacing.
01:18:385 (2) - ^
01:24:507 (T) - This timing section isn't needed.

31's Taiko
00:47:476 (125) - How about matching this with vocal? I mean, move this to 00:47:362?
00:49:294 (133) - Similar with 00:47:476 (125).
01:02:021 (193) - ^
01:03:839 (201) - ^
01:18:839 (T) - End kiai here?

Hw&TS's Taiko
- Volume is quite loud, especially in the first part of the map.
- Personally I don't like streams in this map, this song is kinda calm but long streams are too 'heavy' for them.
- Pattern is kinda random to me. I'm kinda conservative, though.
00:04:748 (18~26) - Stream isn't good for this silent part.
00:26:567 (115~121) - I don't think this suit music, just k d k d would be ok.
01:15:885 (7) - Do not extent drumroll like this. Shorthen this by 1/1 or 1/2 and then add a note in 01:17:021.
01:18:839 (T) - End kiai here?
01:19:748 (X) - Map the break part.

LittleJumpingStreams
- The name of the diff is kinda wierd to me. Is it relevant to Hard, or Insane? I can't guess with that name.
- You need more hitsounds.
00:01:567 (4,10) - A grid (lvl.3) up?
00:02:248 (7) - A grid (lvl.3) down?
00:04:748 (6) - Hitburst of 2~5 covers this return slider. I think you'd better to make it more recognizable, for example, move the slider return to upside.
00:13:385 (2~12) - Kinda hard to read, move start point of this stream somewhere.
00:19:976 (5) - Uh, kinda sudden fishish to me.
00:24:180 (9) - Try removing this?
00:31:567 (1) - Check spacing.
00:37:476 (2,5) - Move a grid (lvl.3) left?
00:38:385 (6) - Move a grid (lvl.3) left and a grid (lvl.3) up?
00:38:612 (7~10) - Move 2 grid (lvl.3) left and a grid (lvl.3) up?
00:41:112 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I think constant spacing would be better.
00:51:112 (8) - I don't think this finish suit that much...
00:58:839 (6) - This is kinda confusing, how about moving the slider return upside?
01:00:658 (1~8,1~4) - Isn't it too repetitive?
01:08:158 (2) - Move 3 grid (lvl.4) right?
01:07:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, arrangement isn't that nice. Try making this regular pentagon shape.
01:14:521 (1) - Too many returns, maybe?
01:18:839 (4,5) - I think one slider would be better.
01:27:248 (X) - Add a spinner like other diffs?

Ok, I'm kinda crappy mapper so whatever.
I think this mapset needs some improvement. Well, making a ranked mapset is quite hard work, so good luck.
Mapper 31
Topic Starter
HeatKai

lepidopodus wrote:

Normal
00:26:567 (6) - Spacing is slightly longer than others.
00:31:567 (1) - Quite cruel spinner for Normal, how about extend it by a beat? (You need to delete 00:32:930 (1) if you do that.)
00:33:385 (2~6) - Spacing here is longer than other parts. A grid(lvl.3) or two can be tolerated but not this much, I guess.
00:38:839 (4) - I think you can keep spacing here...
00:44:180 (1,2) - Move these to 00:44:294.
00:45:430 (5) - Spacing is slightly shorter than others.
00:50:203 (1) - Spacing is wrong.
00:50:961 (2,3) - I don't think This is 1/3, snap them to 1/4. I mean, Move 2 to 00:50:998, and move 3 to 00:51:339. Don't forget that you need to reset spacing.
00:54:976 (1) - How about circle in 00:54:976, and then slider in 00:55:203-00:55:658?
00:57:021 (1) - Personally I don't like this spinner. I think circles and sliders would better.
01:01:567 (3) - Consider adding whistle here?
01:11:112 (6) - Check spacing.
01:18:385 (2) - ^
01:24:507 (T) - This timing section isn't needed.

31's Taiko
00:47:476 (125) - How about matching this with vocal? I mean, move this to 00:47:362?
00:49:294 (133) - Similar with 00:47:476 (125).
01:02:021 (193) - ^
01:03:839 (201) - ^
01:18:839 (T) - End kiai here?

Hw&TS's Taiko
- Volume is quite loud, especially in the first part of the map.
- Personally I don't like streams in this map, this song is kinda calm but long streams are too 'heavy' for them.
- Pattern is kinda random to me. I'm kinda conservative, though.
00:04:748 (18~26) - Stream isn't good for this silent part.
00:26:567 (115~121) - I don't think this suit music, just k d k d would be ok.
01:15:885 (7) - Do not extent drumroll like this. Shorthen this by 1/1 or 1/2 and then add a note in 01:17:021.
01:18:839 (T) - End kiai here?
01:19:748 (X) - Map the break part.

LittleJumpingStreams
- The name of the diff is kinda wierd to me. Is it relevant to Hard, or Insane? I can't guess with that name.
- You need more hitsounds.
00:01:567 (4,10) - A grid (lvl.3) up?
00:02:248 (7) - A grid (lvl.3) down?
00:04:748 (6) - Hitburst of 2~5 covers this return slider. I think you'd better to make it more recognizable, for example, move the slider return to upside.
00:13:385 (2~12) - Kinda hard to read, move start point of this stream somewhere.
00:19:976 (5) - Uh, kinda sudden fishish to me.
00:24:180 (9) - Try removing this?
00:31:567 (1) - Check spacing.
00:37:476 (2,5) - Move a grid (lvl.3) left?
00:38:385 (6) - Move a grid (lvl.3) left and a grid (lvl.3) up?
00:38:612 (7~10) - Move 2 grid (lvl.3) left and a grid (lvl.3) up?
00:41:112 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I think constant spacing would be better.
00:51:112 (8) - I don't think this finish suit that much...
00:58:839 (6) - This is kinda confusing, how about moving the slider return upside?
01:00:658 (1~8,1~4) - Isn't it too repetitive?
01:08:158 (2) - Move 3 grid (lvl.4) right?
01:07:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, arrangement isn't that nice. Try making this regular pentagon shape.
01:14:521 (1) - Too many returns, maybe?
01:18:839 (4,5) - I think one slider would be better.
01:27:248 (X) - Add a spinner like other diffs?

Ok, I'm kinda crappy mapper so whatever.
I think this mapset needs some improvement. Well, making a ranked mapset is quite hard work, so good luck.
All fixed maybe :)
Stuartshen
Star~~~!!!!
ouranhshc
Folder Check
Your MP3 is 224Kbps - maximum allowed is 192


Normal
00:09:294 (4,1) - this overlap is ugly, maybe move (1) from under (4)
00:44:294 (1,2,3) - space these evenly?
01:26:112 (1) - silence this spinner?

LittleJumpingStream
00:26:680 (4) - make straight?
01:08:158 (2) - 1 grid left so it looks like this?

this diff ends in a different place than [Normal]. Make them end at the same place.
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Stuartshen wrote:

Star~~~!!!!
thanks~
Topic Starter
HeatKai

ouranhshc wrote:

Folder Check
Your MP3 is 224Kbps - maximum allowed is 192


Normal
00:09:294 (4,1) - this overlap is ugly, maybe move (1) from under (4)
00:44:294 (1,2,3) - space these evenly?
01:26:112 (1) - silence this spinner?

LittleJumpingStream
00:26:680 (4) - make straight?
01:08:158 (2) - 1 grid left so it looks like this?

this diff ends in a different place than [Normal]. Make them end at the same place.
thanks~
and all fixed ~
lepidopodus
Original mp3 is actually VBR, and explorer says 133 kbps. I'm not sure why Goldwave says 224 kbps though. (Maybe average 133kbps, maximum 224 kbps???) After I make this mp3 to 192kbps, the file becomes over 2mb and original mp3 file was close to 1.5mb. lol

http://www.mediafire.com/?9cpzqfl4k84b5m9
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