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Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-06-22T08:07:34+00:00

yo o/ m4m from my queue

[Shiawase!]

00:08:904 (2,3,4) - i'd move this a bit more down from 1 considering you increased the spacing on 00:08:198 (5,6,1) -
00:12:610 (7) - you could try and curve it to where 6 was going https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5446168
00:20:904 (10) - you could curve this a little bit better http://puu.sh/pBCii/da8bd45a12.jpg
00:25:492 - maybe add note here?
00:28:845 (3) - i'd rotate this 14 in the selection center to fit the movement with 2, you could always reapply the blanket to 4 if you're going to do it :p
00:35:375 (1) - spacing kinda wonks here, i'd move this down and then blanket with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5446193
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - from a design standpoint i think these jumps are kinda counterintuitive, for 1-4 you can hear how the notes are going down the scale so i'd gradually reduce spacing for these, and for 5-7 you hear how it goes up the scale again so i'd gradually increase it
00:42:081 (1) - just me but i'd increase SV here a little bit to emphasize the "yes" sound thingy
00:48:787 (1) - consider ncing these since they're a change to 1/3
01:13:140 (4) - same for these

[Hard]

00:45:787 (2) - would change this into a note and slider to be consistent with 00:34:492 (2,3) -
00:48:787 (5) - again would ncs these personally
01:09:610 (1,2) - same as 00:45:787 (2) - but if you like that pattern then i'd just change 00:34:492 (2,3) - to 2 repeat sliders
01:13:140 (3) - same as 00:48:787 (5) -

Nice diff!

[Thievley's Advanced]

Why is your preview point different than all the other diffs?

00:09:257 (5,6) - not perfectly stacked?
00:35:375 (1) - i'd move this red anchor slightly more down, kind of hard to recognize that curve
00:48:787 (2) - would nc these as you did the same thing with 01:13:140 (1) -

[Easy]

00:17:728 (2) - you could blanket this with 1 a little bit better

Good diff!

good luck with your mapset c:

Stjpa

886 posts

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-06-22T16:35:27+00:00

ezek wrote:

You know why I'm here, right? :p

Easy
00:07:845 (2) - You should remove that repeat and use the downbeat for another slider or a circle, and I don't say it just because it is a downbeat; the sound there is very important and it should be more emphasized, you know? I actually never realized that the tail is on a downbeat, otherwise I'd have changed it myself lol. Thanks for noticing!
00:25:140 (4) - oh! Design idea! What if you use the same position as the slider that was before the previous slider, like this, it's a nice repetition effect, don't you think? \:D/ True.
00:29:728 (1,2) - Sorry for telling you this, but I can't resist to tell you that you can still improve this blanket :v ;_;
00:36:434 (3) - I think the pattern would look more neat if you stack this note with 00:35:022 (4) - somehow~ Done.

Hard
00:12:610 (2) - This slider looks too squished compared to the other ones, you may wanna expand it a little, at least like this so the map looks more visually consistent~ Yeah but this slider is intended to emphasize the weird sound she makes. I rotated the slider a little to make it look a bit better.
00:41:022 (1,2) - Sorry again. ;__;
01:03:081 (2) - Look at that spacing~ Derp.png

Shiawase!
00:42:081 (1) - Is this NC intentional? Yes. The spacing here changes before a new downbeat appeared, so I wanted to highlight it this way.

That's all I could find~

I hope this is good enough for you, good luck! ^^

Xilver wrote:
yo o/ m4m from my queue

[Shiawase!]

00:08:904 (2,3,4) - i'd move this a bit more down from 1 considering you increased the spacing on 00:08:198 (5,6,1) - Yup.
00:12:610 (7) - you could try and curve it to where 6 was going https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5446168 To make it more predictable? True.
00:20:904 (10) - you could curve this a little bit better http://puu.sh/pBCii/da8bd45a12.jpg The shape has the direction from where the stream would keep moving if there actually wasn't this slider, so I'm gonna keep it (also the difference is barely noticable :p)
00:25:492 - maybe add note here? I used to have something there, but since it's not really audible it's more like a bad idea. Same reason why I don't have a circle after the 1/3 sliders at the end.
00:28:845 (3) - i'd rotate this 14 in the selection center to fit the movement with 2, you could always reapply the blanket to 4 if you're going to do it :p Ok dad.
00:35:375 (1) - spacing kinda wonks here, i'd move this down and then blanket with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5446193 I like the flow how it is atm and also I'm using exactly 2.0x DS for every downbeat so the flow / spacing consistency would be screwed up a little if I don't change it anywhere else too.
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - from a design standpoint i think these jumps are kinda counterintuitive, for 1-4 you can hear how the notes are going down the scale so i'd gradually reduce spacing for these, and for 5-7 you hear how it goes up the scale again so i'd gradually increase it You are right but in the whole diff I'm emphasizing faster vocals with jumps. Using anti-jumps here would be really meh to play. That's why I'm using lower DS for the jumps here, to at least make it not hard as the other faster vocal jumps that have drums on it.
00:42:081 (1) - just me but i'd increase SV here a little bit to emphasize the "yes" sound thingy That would be kinda unpredictable considering that there's no part anymore where I could to the same and the jump here comes out of a sudden anyway, so I dislike buffing it.
00:48:787 (1) - consider ncing these since they're a change to 1/3 Aye.
01:13:140 (4) - same for these

[Hard]

00:45:787 (2) - would change this into a note and slider to be consistent with 00:34:492 (2,3) - The difference there is that both sliders are more oriented to the vocals and actually emphasize them while the other one is simply mapped to the drums (or at least more focused on them).
00:48:787 (5) - again would ncs these personally Changed.
01:09:610 (1,2) - same as 00:45:787 (2) - but if you like that pattern then i'd just change 00:34:492 (2,3) - to 2 repeat sliders
01:13:140 (3) - same as 00:48:787 (5) -

Nice diff!

[Thievley's Advanced]

Why is your preview point different than all the other diffs? She never updates the diff when I change it after using her changes after mods. ;_;

[Easy]

00:17:728 (2) - you could blanket this with 1 a little bit better Ok.

Good diff!

good luck with your mapset c:

Thanks for the mods guys. <3

Nekomata

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Nekomata 2016-06-23T22:35:58+00:00

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Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-06-24T19:43:15+00:00

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Lasse

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3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-06-25T12:54:29+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/431010

[general]
drum-hitfinish2 is way louder on the right channel and pretty quiet overall
lots of silence after most hitsound files wating a good amount of space
this should fix everything: http://puu.sh/pFtVy/52ad157709.zip
other stuff seems fine

[hitsounding]
00:11:375 - 00:12:610 - would work well with gradually increasing hitsound volume to match the song volume //same for 01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where are the hitsounds ;_; at least some soft whistles
01:11:022 (1,2,3,4) - might want some finished or sth for this part
01:19:493 - whistle on spinnerend for piano would fit

[pati]
00:02:551 (5) - spacing here is too much, the song is just starting to build up. putting the largest jumop of the whole intro here doesnt work.
(yes 00:05:375 (4,1) - is technically bigger, but due to how slider=>circle plays it's actually not)
not even cymbal on 00:08:551 - gets as much spacing
00:06:787 (5,6,7) - angle into triple is kinda awkward, why not sth like http://i.imgur.com/iIGAqGu.jpg or sth
00:10:492 (3,4,5) - spacing like the other two triples here makes more sense (or increase spacing for triples gradually with the buildup, but only havin one stacked and the two right after with the same spacing is weird)
00:16:492 (5) - would rather but a change in the stream on a more musically significant beat like 00:16:316 (3) - 00:16:669 (7) -
00:21:787 (1,2,3) - makes more sense
00:23:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - music pretty much repeats itself, so suddenly having it this compressed makes no sense
00:27:257 (3,4,5,6) - 5 is really awkwardly positioned with the circular movement you build up before. going for either an actual flow break (green) or fitting with before (red) is way nicer http://i.imgur.com/pkusGDF.jpg
00:32:551 (1) - could be more spaced to emphasize cymbal, right now it's kinda low compared to some jumps you put on less significant beats like 00:33:257 (4) -
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - one musical pattern but you nc it like there was some significant 1-2 pattern. making this a single combo fits better
00:42:081 (1) - could consider extending this to 3/4 since it seems like it's meant to emphasize the vocal, skipping over weak drum should be fine in that case
00:48:787 (1,1,1) - doesnt really fit. they might be snapped correctly, but you get the strongest sound on a slidertail and also but a 1-2 pattern when the song is going in a 1-2-3 pattern emphasis wise http://i.imgur.com/iFWnEV9.jpg or even http://i.imgur.com/Nr2uWFt.jpg where the slider helps transition to new snap fit better
same for 01:13:140 (1,1,1) -
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could be organized way cleaner (similar overlaps, equal visual spacing, ...) while still playing well and feeling less "random"
01:04:669 (5,6,7,8,1) - really awkward fast-slow-fast movement that continues in the same direction http://i.imgur.com/dnPgy1v.jpg even sth like http://i.imgur.com/gSZhG4y.jpg would be less awkward
01:08:022 (7,8) - you also might want to decide whether to space those or not lol // 01:10:140 (4,5,6) - // 01:05:199 (7,8,1) -
01:08:905 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - whole part has pretty high spacing and then suddenly this when the music doesnt change

[i]
00:06:434 (4,5,6) - ew pretty linear speedup ; \ some more acute angle here would be nice, like putting 00:06:963 (6) - on 00:06:081 (2) - or sth that keeps the structure
00:08:198 (5) - if this gets a jump 00:07:845 (3) - should too, it's liek the same thing
00:09:434 (5,6,7) - would reduce spacing for the triple so you get a nice increasing thing on 00:09:169 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which fits the song nicely here. or put equal spacing on all 3
00:09:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not immediately start with a square? looks much more organized http://i.imgur.com/6yVY6aH.jpg
00:20:022 (2,3) - mapping it like this once is kinda weird since it's just a triple/rep.slider all other times. if you want variation at least do it more often/consistently
00:42:081 (1) - some for of sv change/unique shape or anything to emphasize the vocal (which seems to be your idea here judging from the nc) better would be good here
00:44:904 (5,6,2,4) - generally for overlap patterns like thise actually having them overlap the same amount, maybe even the same angle/mirrored makes for much cleaner visuals
01:07:846 (4,5,6,1) - more acute angle would make this speedup play much better
01:10:669 (6) - no jump for this finish ;_;

so many spots like 00:42:963 (4,5) - where you could actually use the outer parts of the playfield afterwards but it seems to always transition back to the middle which makes feel really center heavy : \

[h]
00:10:845 (5) - might actually want to fix spacing here cause it makes 5 get a followpoint unlike the others which looks weird lol
also fixing some other patterns where autostacking throws off your even spacing by a noticeable amount, like for example 00:15:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be great
http://i.imgur.com/sH2wZpC.jpg like the main reason ds is used is for nice even visuals, nobody is going to misread a pattern cause of a sudden 0.2x change, but if not even the visual thing is given then gg ds
00:11:728 (1) - doesnt need nc spam, you didnt even do that on insane and it doesnt really fit patterning or music // 01:01:140 (1) -
01:10:140 (2) - rip any for of emphasis, suddenly shifting to this which even puts cymbal on a repeat ;c
besides the visuals being killed by distance snapped stacks this seems mostly fine

[e]
00:35:022 (4,2) - why not just sth like http://i.imgur.com/BuVbwVj.jpg for bit better readability instead of suddenly having 00:36:434 (3) - pop up under the hitburst
01:09:610 (3,4,1) - really easy to misread for beginners, movement on 3 leads more towards 01:11:022 (1) - which also appears way before you have to hit 01:10:669 (4) - try sth like http://i.imgur.com/H8PyOqi.jpg ?
01:15:257 (1) - i'd start this later to let people actually click that last strong sound

gl

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-06-25T15:13:59+00:00

lasse

Lasse wrote:
[pati]
00:02:551 (5) - spacing here is too much, the song is just starting to build up. putting the largest jumop of the whole intro here doesnt work. lowered the distance now
(yes 00:05:375 (4,1) - is technically bigger, but due to how slider=>circle plays it's actually not)
not even cymbal on 00:08:551 - gets as much spacing ok
00:06:787 (5,6,7) - angle into triple is kinda awkward, why not sth like http://i.imgur.com/iIGAqGu.jpg or sth naah i wanna keep this
00:10:492 (3,4,5) - spacing like the other two triples here makes more sense (or increase spacing for triples gradually with the buildup, but only havin one stacked and the two right after with the same spacing is weird) made it same with the others now
00:16:492 (5) - would rather but a change in the stream on a more musically significant beat like 00:16:316 (3) - 00:16:669 (7) - done
00:21:787 (1,2,3) - makes more sense
00:23:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - music pretty much repeats itself, so suddenly having it this compressed makes no sense changed
00:27:257 (3,4,5,6) - 5 is really awkwardly positioned with the circular movement you build up before. going for either an actual flow break (green) or fitting with before (red) is way nicer http://i.imgur.com/pkusGDF.jpg nice drawing skills changed
00:32:551 (1) - could be more spaced to emphasize cymbal, right now it's kinda low compared to some jumps you put on less significant beats like 00:33:257 (4) - sure
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - one musical pattern but you nc it like there was some significant 1-2 pattern. making this a single combo fits better will keep it
00:42:081 (1) - could consider extending this to 3/4 since it seems like it's meant to emphasize the vocal, skipping over weak drum should be fine in that case nice idea
00:48:787 (1,1,1) - doesnt really fit. they might be snapped correctly, but you get the strongest sound on a slidertail and also but a 1-2 pattern when the song is going in a 1-2-3 pattern emphasis wise http://i.imgur.com/iFWnEV9.jpg or even http://i.imgur.com/Nr2uWFt.jpg where the slider helps transition to new snap fit better alright changed into something better
same for 01:13:140 (1,1,1) - lol but they're all same except for 01:13:140 (1) -
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could be organized way cleaner (similar overlaps, equal visual spacing, ...) while still playing well and feeling less "random" done
01:04:669 (5,6,7,8,1) - really awkward fast-slow-fast movement that continues in the same direction http://i.imgur.com/dnPgy1v.jpg even sth like http://i.imgur.com/gSZhG4y.jpg would be less awkward kinda changed but you might still find it awkward
01:08:022 (7,8) - you also might want to decide whether to space those or not lol // 01:10:140 (4,5,6) - // 01:05:199 (7,8,1) - no change
01:08:905 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - whole part has pretty high spacing and then suddenly this when the music doesnt change its weird that you think music doesnt change here

Thanks for the great mod!

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Stjpa

886 posts

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-06-25T16:38:40+00:00

no answer = accepted

Lasse wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/431010

[general]
drum-hitfinish2 is way louder on the right channel and pretty quiet overall
lots of silence after most hitsound files wating a good amount of space
this should fix everything: http://puu.sh/pFtVy/52ad157709.zip
other stuff seems fine ty fam

[hitsounding]
00:11:375 - 00:12:610 - would work well with gradually increasing hitsound volume to match the song volume //same for 01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where are the hitsounds ;_; at least some soft whistles
01:11:022 (1,2,3,4) - might want some finished or sth for this part I like it how it is.
01:19:493 - whistle on spinnerend for piano would fit

[i]
00:06:434 (4,5,6) - ew pretty linear speedup ; \ some more acute angle here would be nice, like putting 00:06:963 (6) - on 00:06:081 (2) - or sth that keeps the structure
00:08:198 (5) - if this gets a jump 00:07:845 (3) - should too, it's liek the same thing Except that there isn't a drum sound. :p
00:09:434 (5,6,7) - would reduce spacing for the triple so you get a nice increasing thing on 00:09:169 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which fits the song nicely here. or put equal spacing on all 3
00:09:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not immediately start with a square? looks much more organized http://i.imgur.com/6yVY6aH.jpg
00:20:022 (2,3) - mapping it like this once is kinda weird since it's just a triple/rep.slider all other times. if you want variation at least do it more often/consistently The drum hit here is way louder than all the others which is why I put a kickslider here.
00:42:081 (1) - some for of sv change/unique shape or anything to emphasize the vocal (which seems to be your idea here judging from the nc) better would be good here
00:44:904 (5,6,2,4) - generally for overlap patterns like thise actually having them overlap the same amount, maybe even the same angle/mirrored makes for much cleaner visuals
01:07:846 (4,5,6,1) - more acute angle would make this speedup play much better
01:10:669 (6) - no jump for this finish ;_; Because I'm still following vocals. The finish hitsounds are just there because there are some in the music.

so many spots like 00:42:963 (4,5) - where you could actually use the outer parts of the playfield afterwards but it seems to always transition back to the middle which makes feel really center heavy : \

[h]
00:10:845 (5) - might actually want to fix spacing here cause it makes 5 get a followpoint unlike the others which looks weird lol
also fixing some other patterns where autostacking throws off your even spacing by a noticeable amount, like for example 00:15:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be great
http://i.imgur.com/sH2wZpC.jpg like the main reason ds is used is for nice even visuals, nobody is going to misread a pattern cause of a sudden 0.2x change, but if not even the visual thing is given then gg ds
00:11:728 (1) - doesnt need nc spam, you didnt even do that on insane and it doesnt really fit patterning or music // 01:01:140 (1) -
01:10:140 (2) - rip any for of emphasis, suddenly shifting to this which even puts cymbal on a repeat ;c As in Insane.
besides the visuals being killed by distance snapped stacks this seems mostly fine

[e]
00:35:022 (4,2) - why not just sth like http://i.imgur.com/BuVbwVj.jpg for bit better readability instead of suddenly having 00:36:434 (3) - pop up under the hitburst
01:09:610 (3,4,1) - really easy to misread for beginners, movement on 3 leads more towards 01:11:022 (1) - which also appears way before you have to hit 01:10:669 (4) - try sth like http://i.imgur.com/H8PyOqi.jpg ?
01:15:257 (1) - i'd start this later to let people actually click that last strong sound What? D:

gl

Come[Back]Home

1,785 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2016-06-25T18:01:38+00:00

M4M from your queue

general
Check AiMod please, preview time isnt the same in every diff

Easy

00:22:669 (1) - This one is too high and touches the hp bar which is unrankable. Same here 00:24:081 (3) -
00:45:257 (3) - and here 01:08:905 (2,4,1) -
00:59:728 (1) - This needs an NC for consistency since this one has a NC aswell 00:12:787 (5) -

Normal

00:06:963 (7) - No 1/4 in Normals please, even as a repeat slider. Its okay when the bpm is like 120, but 170 is too high for that. Sam here 00:22:316 (4) -
00:09:257 (5,6) - If you stack, stack properly.
00:25:492 (1) - As far as I know its not allowed to have 5% volume on Easy and Normal, you should reconsider it.
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - Same here, Normal players cant expect or handle the switch from 1/2 to 1/3. Same here 01:13:140 (1,2) -
01:01:140 (1) - I wouldnt do that since you can barely see the circle if you play standard skin, it a bit confusing for newer players aswell.

Hard

00:12:257 (2,2) - I think a blank would make the whole pattern look better
00:59:375 (4,1) - Those are too high and touching the hp bar. Same here 01:05:375 (1) -

Insane

00:12:434 (6) - How about moving this one somewhere around 246/216 for a square jump, it fits with the music.
00:34:492 (4) - I would move this one too 339/353, so it will go better with the movements from the circles before.
00:36:610 (4,1) - I think the jump after (1) would be better to play if the spacing between (4,1) would be the same as before.
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps look really messy to me, like they were placed randomly without a second thought, may be just me though. I think there are many better patterns to use than this.
01:05:375 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here, should be the same as here 01:05:728 (2,3,4,5) -

Pati's Shiawase!

00:09:875 (3) - I would place this oner here 393/308. It goes better with the stream before
00:12:787 - Unnecessary timing point
00:25:316 (1) - This one does not need a Nc
01:03:610 (5) - Move this one a bit up please, its almost out of the screen

Cool mapset~ Good Luck!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-06-25T19:51:37+00:00

01:15:257 (1) - i'd start this later to let people actually click that last strong sound What? D:

basically means "add a circle here and start spinner some ticks later" lol

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-06-25T20:06:57+00:00

◙

applied everything that cbh said (thanks a lot cbh)
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Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-06-26T18:55:36+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
M4M from your queue

general
Check AiMod please, preview time isnt the same in every diff

Easy

00:22:669 (1) - This one is too high and touches the hp bar which is unrankable. Same here 00:24:081 (3) - Fixed from previous mod already. Also, touching HP bar is not unrankable. :p
00:45:257 (3) - and here 01:08:905 (2,4,1) -
00:59:728 (1) - This needs an NC for consistency since this one has a NC aswell 00:12:787 (5) - Probably fixed in the last mod too? Idk, at least it was correct here.

Hard

00:12:257 (2,2) - I think a blank would make the whole pattern look better I wish people would read the previous mods. :<
00:59:375 (4,1) - Those are too high and touching the hp bar. Same here 01:05:375 (1) -

Insane

00:12:434 (6) - How about moving this one somewhere around 246/216 for a square jump, it fits with the music. Completely rearranged them because the flow was awkward.
00:34:492 (4) - I would move this one too 339/353, so it will go better with the movements from the circles before. Aye.
00:36:610 (4,1) - I think the jump after (1) would be better to play if the spacing between (4,1) would be the same as before. True.
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps look really messy to me, like they were placed randomly without a second thought, may be just me though. I think there are many better patterns to use than this. The first for circles are completely for the drums since the vocals are barely audible, which is why I'm just spacing them out little more rather than going a different direction. And after 4 I kinda break the flow with direction changes that are mapped to the vocals.
01:05:375 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here, should be the same as here 01:05:728 (2,3,4,5) - Oops.

Cool mapset~ Good Luck!

Lasse wrote:
01:15:257 (1) - i'd start this later to let people actually click that last strong sound What? D:
basically means "add a circle here and start spinner some ticks later" lol Used to have that, but it's kinda unpredictable imo.

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-06-29T18:14:51+00:00

Kisses

Advanced

00:04:316 (1) - I think decreasing the angle would be better. Just for the fact it looks nicer funny, this is how i had it before
00:45:257 (1,2) - How about turining these into a 1/1 slider. It seems more fitting, it makes it easier and doesnt create a massive bulk in note density in this measure compared to the rest okay!
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - This could be a lot easier to read and make it less clustered visually if you made a few tweakshttp://puu.sh/pyUkI/909cb54c24.jpg I feel like it's better the way I have it now because of the arrows on the repeats. it would be more natural imo for the player to follow where the slider is pointing back to, rather than to have to reach to a hit circle on the side. i mean it could work, but i'll just keep it this way for now.
some inconsistencies in your NC pattern such as 00:08:904 (4) , 00:41:022 (4) , 00:05:728 (4) . In these cases the NC pattern is once every 2 measures instead of every 1. Though imho I think you should change the entire NC pattern to every 2 measures as some combos are very very short. I saw a combo length of 2 a few times oh shoot thanks for pointing those out lol, and i'll stick to the combo length i have now, the only reason some notes reach up to only two is because they are mostly 1/1 sliders that carry 2 beats within in each, equaling up to my nc'ing every 4 beats

Spread between Easy and Advanced - It would be overlook-able if it was just the SR we were looking at but the easy diff is 95% 1/1 patterns and the advanced has blue ticks mapped such as 00:06:787 (6,7) . Imho it doesnt create a suitable spread at all.
Also the note density between the diffs is also an issue to me as some chains in the advanced ( such as 01:00:434 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) ) are 2 levels above the easy diff.
Another thing that urks me is the SV choice. The SV between the 2 diffs is only a difference of 0.1. Even if these were easy and normal the SV is difference is seriously low (and I checked timing points in the advanced diff use x1 SV); to me it looks like it was done purely to create and pleasant looking SR between the 2. Heck even the spacing in the advanced diff is quite low. The spacing in Easy diff is x1 at 0.95 SV and the advanced uses x.9 at 1.05 SV; if you do the maths you find out the spacing in advanced is actually lower than Easy.
Because of the points mention above I recommend talking to Thievley and ask them to either reduce the object density in some places and slightly increase the SV and spacing and rename the diff to 'Thievley's Normal' or, ask them to Increase the SV and spacing a lot more and adding a normal in between easy and advanced.
[]
^ok so I wrote that before actually looking at the hard diff (which is very hard) and now im not entirely sure anymore. Though I still think and increase SV and spacing is needed regardless. The only reason I placed those settings was to make a suitable transition from easy to hard (pretty big gap to cover imo). But yeah, i agree with most of what you've pointed out, and so i've raised the spacing to 1.0x and i'll change the sv a few ticks higher to 1.20 x.

ezek

Thievley's Advanced ♥

Hi Thievley! \:D/ Ayyy ezek :33/

00:51:257 - Your diff is the only with an extended break, you may wanna remove that for consistency~ the breaks in other diffs used to be extended, dunno what happened o.o but alright
00:06:787 (6,7) - This may result confusing to players since that repeat slider is too compressed and with another note stacked on the top ;w; What about using just 1/2 like this, adding NC on the downbeat and removing it from the next note? It's more readable~ Or also you can just unstack so it can be seen easily like at 00:22:316 (4) - already unstacked
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - What about placing them like this for easier readability i fixed this issue by increasing sv and spacing a bit, so it should be a little more readable as it is now!

Xilver

[Thievley's Advanced]

Why is your preview point different than all the other diffs? asiodjaoisdjioas i don't know it took me a while to update my diff so stjpa probably changed that on me buuuu, fixed now!

00:09:257 (5,6) - not perfectly stacked? something weird happened when i clicked the time link and i couldn't find what you pointed out aaa, may have been because of the changes i made prior to replying to this mod D:
00:35:375 (1) - i'd move this red anchor slightly more down, kind of hard to recognize that curve removed red anchor instead
00:48:787 (2) - would nc these as you did the same thing with 01:13:140 (1) - instead i'll remove nc from 01:13:140 (1) and nc here instead 01:12:434 (1) -, for consistency with my 4 beats per nc :p

thanks for the mods!

Vell

359 posts

Joined October 2013

Vell 2016-07-08T19:25:40+00:00

[Pati's Shiawase!]

00:09:787 (2,3,1) - I dont really like the spacing of those. it seems to be the only time where they are spaced like this so maybe go for the same as 00:06:963 (6,7,1) -
00:42:434 (1) - nc not necessarily because of sv change but more so that the faster sv on 00:42:081 (1) - will be more clear so its easier to sightread

[Insane]

00:14:904 (7) - shortening this slider by 2 ticks like u did with this one 00:16:316 (5) - so the player has to start to stream at the strong beat again feels alot smoother and consistent (I have seen u already rejected that idea, but I will still mention it because I think it does play weird how you have it right now)
00:19:140 (5) - ^
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - this angle looks kinda weird, make it straight so it flows better into the edged slider
SPOILER
00:49:492 (1) - maybe space it in line and with the same spacing as the other 2 sliders
SPOILER
01:11:728 (3) - making this into a 1/2 slider + circle for better emphasize on the the vocal?

[Hard]

00:25:316 (7,8) - 2 circles? would feel better being able to click the last note before the break
01:10:140 (2) - im not sure with what the second repeat slider is supposed to go here, a circle + slider would play more with the song and wont ignore the strong cymbal sound

Sorry, couldnt find anything in Easy and Advanced.

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-10T00:30:20+00:00

No answer = fixed

Vell wrote:
[Insane]
00:14:904 (7) - shortening this slider by 2 ticks like u did with this one 00:16:316 (5) - so the player has to start to stream at the strong beat again feels alot smoother and consistent (I have seen u already rejected that idea, but I will still mention it because I think it does play weird how you have it right now) I changed the first one but kept the second one due the special melody and to emphasize the kickslider a little bit harder.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - this angle looks kinda weird, make it straight so it flows better into the edged slider
SPOILER
00:49:492 (1) - maybe space it in line and with the same spacing as the other 2 sliders I honestly don't understand this point, you gotta explain it to me ;_;
SPOILER
01:11:728 (3) - making this into a 1/2 slider + circle for better emphasize on the the vocal? I'm going for the full word rather than that syllable. I want the ending to be smooth.
[Hard]
00:25:316 (7,8) - 2 circles? would feel better being able to click the last note before the break I'd agree with it if the downbeat here was clickable, but this way the slider is mapped to the drums. I silenced the sliderend for the reason I mentioned.
01:10:140 (2) - im not sure with what the second repeat slider is supposed to go here, a circle + slider would play more with the song and wont ignore the strong cymbal sound
Sorry, couldnt find anything in Easy and Advanced.

_IxApplePie_

246 posts

Joined November 2013

_IxApplePie_ 2016-07-19T13:53:25+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue.

my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175

Shiawase!

00:42:434 (2) - NC
00:52:669 / 00:54:081 / 00:55:493 / 00:55:846 / 00:56:199 / 00:56:375 - note? Just a suggestion only. Ignore if you want
00:58:669 (2,3,4) - equal spacing? quite weird imo
I think you can delete the last 4 green timing lines since it's the same.

Insane

yup. (this is also in Adv and Normal)
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you're following the music then maybe lesser distance as there's no heavy beat to emphasis
00:41:551 (2) - ee, don't so close to 00:41:728 (3), futher a bit.
00:47:375 (3) - ctrl g? so that you can flow downwards to 00:47:904 (4,1)
00:49:140 (2,1) - suggestion for the orange (1)
01:02:199 (7,1) - blanket or nay?
01:13:846 - note? since your previous kiai has it. (Your normal is until here though)

Hard

01:13:846 - note?

Advanced

00:22:669 (1,2) - align then like 00:32:551 (1,2) - ? looks much better imo
same as the problem in Hard

Normal

Nazi blanket for this, soz! I only catch the obvious ones,
00:10:669 (2,3,4)
00:27:610 (2,3)
00:48:434 (4,5)
01:03:963 (3,4)

Sorry for the nazi blanket in Normal!!

Hoped the mod helps!

GL~

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-19T19:48:42+00:00

No answer = fixed

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue.

my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175

Insane
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you're following the music then maybe lesser distance as there's no heavy beat to emphasis Vocals are getting stronger.
00:41:551 (2) - ee, don't so close to 00:41:728 (3), futher a bit. Actually there's no way to solve it properly, but I moved the circle away (and basically broke the DS consistency here, but little inconsistencies like here aren't noticable).
00:47:375 (3) - ctrl g? so that you can flow downwards to 00:47:904 (4,1) Doesn't fit into my spacing concept.
00:49:140 (2,1) - suggestion for the orange (1) Wanna keep the triangle.
01:02:199 (7,1) - blanket or nay?
01:13:846 - note? since your previous kiai has it. (Your normal is until here though) First kiai has it because there's a sound unlike here. In Easy diff I even silenced the sliderend since there's nothing audible on it.

Hard
01:13:846 - note? As in Insane.

Normal
Nazi blanket for this, soz! I only catch the obvious ones,
00:10:669 (2,3,4)
00:27:610 (2,3)
00:48:434 (4,5)
01:03:963 (3,4)

Sorry for the nazi blanket in Normal!!

Hoped the mod helps!

GL~

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-19T22:36:14+00:00

Advanced

00:22:669 (1,2) - align then like 00:32:551 (1,2) - ? looks much better imo aaa but then 2 would make an ugly overlap with the end of 3
same as the problem in Hard it's fine as it is!

nothing changed, thanks for the mod though

HootOwlStar

750 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2016-07-20T15:32:28+00:00

lolz saw your queue if you couldnt tell btw *hea vy breathing*

[ez]

00:09:257 (5) - yehj a consider to make it flat, knda racist of me but actually against of curves which intended but dont make a perfect circular flow
00:12:081 (4) - mayb remove the reverse and extend the slider to 00:12:610 - it will be fine tbh since it doesnt really add too much difficulty and it will represent the rhythm more accurately
00:25:140 (4,1) - so prob here is that the distance-time concept is messed up here, you should increase the distance in between. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650666
00:43:845 (1,2) - pro tip ways to lengthen mods include providing tons of suggestions an d URL's https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650695 sodium hydride its just i cnt stand two sliders with same orientations but not similar appearing at the same time yea

[advanced]

could have named as normal. it does fit the difficulty gap between ez and hard + it is within the sr range
00:06:963 (4) - it brings the negative effect here since it is the odd one out + emphasizing the vocals is actually complete and precise enough. consider to change the note placement in 00:06:787 (3,4,1,2) - into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650772 (view the timeline bar)
00:41:022 (4) - missed nc

[hard]

00:12:610 (7) - circle is ald ok since for the current one slider end doesnt end in any music notes. same case in insane
00:45:257 (1,2,3) - yah im racist and also the rhythm doesnt quite fit imo since 00:45:963 - shouldnt be emphasized much idk. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650833
01:08:199 (1,2,3) - actually just want to fix between 01:07:493 (3) - and 01:08:199 (1) - but yeah https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650868 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650882

[shiawase]

00:02:728 (6) - consider move to the left side of (5) which is around x:12 since imo it provides a funner flow as of 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4) - . same suggestion goes to 00:43:668 (7) -
00:42:434 (2) - consider nc since sv change + new bar
01:13:846 (1,1) - both move to centre seem better

skipped insane bcos it seems fine. mapse t is quite nice tbh
yeh good luck btw

Halfslashed

Global Moderator

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2016-07-20T19:17:43+00:00

M4M - My mapset: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/477763

[Shiawase!]
00:05:022 (3) - Move down and rotate to make a better pattern (something like this: http://puu.sh/q8oZw/a116e9da30.png)
00:35:375 (1) -
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern itself plays fine, but you should separate 00:36:787 (1,2,1) from the rest to give the vocals more emphasis, and make the spacing on 00:36:963 (2,1) consistent with itself.
00:37:845 (1) - Offscreen note
00:38:198 (1,2) - These should use similar shapes for consistency (similar to previous sliders in the map). Maybe curve 00:39:257 (5) instead?
00:51:258 (1) - I hear what you're emphasizing in the music, but this isn't being emphasizes. You should either remove it or map more of the break section.
01:02:199 (7,8) - Angle felt off in play, move 8 down.
01:02:905 (2,3) - You should make these circles into a slider similar to this: 00:42:081 (1). The impact of the vocals is similar and the player will already expect another one.
01:13:140 (1,1,1,1) - You should probably be consistent with the pattern at 00:48:787 (1,2,1,2,1). Musically they sound similar, and both of them play well (my favorite part of the map too).
[Insane]
00:03:610 (3,4) - Move up for better flow.
00:06:963 (6,7,1) - I think something like this would flow better: http://puu.sh/q8pSU/2e9ef8b588.png
00:10:845 (3,4,5) - Linear flow would work better here.
00:16:140 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Inconsistent with 00:18:963 (3,4,5,6,7,1) and musically similar.
00:27:257 (2,3,4) - Rotate down for better flow, try not to go for linearity between 4 and 5.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - Try to make it flow better from the jump, similar to 00:06:963 (6,7,1)
01:04:316 (2,3,4) - Less flow here. Intentional?
[Hard]
00:24:257 (2,3,4) - Change to kickslider for pattern consistency.
00:40:492 (3) - Move to right for better flow.
00:42:787 (2) - Down and to the left for better flow (Linear works here).
[Advanced]
00:18:434 (1,2) - Match angles for consistency, something like this (also make sure to fix DS): http://puu.sh/q8qUH/7499302e7f.png
[Easy]
Couldn't find anything.

Good mapset, I hope I helped.

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-20T23:53:14+00:00

no answer = changed

HootOwlStar wrote:
lolz saw your queue if you couldnt tell btw *hea vy breathing*

[ez]
00:09:257 (5) - yehj a consider to make it flat, knda racist of me but actually against of curves which intended but dont make a perfect circular flow
00:12:081 (4) - mayb remove the reverse and extend the slider to 00:12:610 - it will be fine tbh since it doesnt really add too much difficulty and it will represent the rhythm more accurately Feels so wrong without having the sliderend on the downbeat. I thought about it quite long but it's just too weird with your suggestion.
00:25:140 (4,1) - so prob here is that the distance-time concept is messed up here, you should increase the distance in between. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650666 Fixed it differently.
00:43:845 (1,2) - pro tip ways to lengthen mods include providing tons of suggestions an d URL's https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650695 sodium hydride its just i cnt stand two sliders with same orientations but not similar appearing at the same time yea
[hard]
00:12:610 (7) - circle is ald ok since for the current one slider end doesnt end in any music notes. same case in insane But the vocals fam.
00:45:257 (1,2,3) - yah im racist and also the rhythm doesnt quite fit imo since 00:45:963 - shouldnt be emphasized much idk. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650833 Fixed it differently.
01:08:199 (1,2,3) - actually just want to fix between 01:07:493 (3) - and 01:08:199 (1) - but yeah https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650868 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650882
skipped insane bcos it seems fine. mapse t is quite nice tbh
yeh good luck btw

Halfslashed wrote:
M4M - My mapset: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/477763
[Insane]
00:03:610 (3,4) - Move up for better flow. I like it how it is.
00:06:963 (6,7,1) - I think something like this would flow better: http://puu.sh/q8pSU/2e9ef8b588.png
00:10:845 (3,4,5) - Linear flow would work better here. It's already linear tho. :v
00:16:140 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Inconsistent with 00:18:963 (3,4,5,6,7,1) and musically similar. Variation.
00:27:257 (2,3,4) - Rotate down for better flow, try not to go for linearity between 4 and 5. Tbh it looks fine to me. Used this flow so often if I'm not mistaken rn.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - Try to make it flow better from the jump, similar to 00:06:963 (6,7,1) The one in the beginning has an emphasis because of downbeat, this one doesn't.
01:04:316 (2,3,4) - Less flow here. Intentional? Yes.
[Hard]
00:24:257 (2,3,4) - Change to kickslider for pattern consistency. The kickslider is mapped to a special sound in this part, so it's consistent atm.
00:40:492 (3) - Move to right for better flow.
00:42:787 (2) - Down and to the left for better flow (Linear works here). I really like the flow here. ;o

Good mapset, I hope I helped.

Will mod HOS' map now, the other one tomorrow.

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-21T01:17:36+00:00

vell

Vell wrote:
00:09:787 (2,3,1) - I dont really like the spacing of those. it seems to be the only time where they are spaced like this so maybe go for the same as 00:06:963 (6,7,1) - will keep them because they're fine for me
00:42:434 (1) - nc not necessarily because of sv change but more so that the faster sv on 00:42:081 (1) - will be more clear so its easier to sightread ooops yeah
thank youu

applepie

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
00:42:434 (2) - NC ok
00:52:669 / 00:54:081 / 00:55:493 / 00:55:846 / 00:56:199 / 00:56:375 - note? Just a suggestion only. Ignore if you want nah ill keep it
00:58:669 (2,3,4) - equal spacing? quite weird imo changed and fixed now ^^
I think you can delete the last 4 green timing lines since it's the same. ooops it wasnt supposed to be the same :d
thanks a lot

hotowl

HootOwlStar wrote:
00:02:728 (6) - consider move to the left side of (5) which is around x:12 since imo it provides a funner flow as of 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4) - . same suggestion goes to 00:43:668 (7) - aye
00:42:434 (2) - consider nc since sv change + new bar yep
01:13:846 (1,1) - both move to centre seem better kinda changed them but last one is still at center

thank yoooououuuou

halfs

Halfslashed wrote:
00:05:022 (3) - Move down and rotate to make a better pattern (something like this: http://puu.sh/q8oZw/a116e9da30.png) ok
00:35:375 (1) - no
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern itself plays fine, but you should separate 00:36:787 (1,2,1) from the rest to give the vocals more emphasis, and make the spacing on 00:36:963 (2,1) consistent with itself. did something
00:37:845 (1) - Offscreen note ooops
00:38:198 (1,2) - These should use similar shapes for consistency (similar to previous sliders in the map). Maybe curve 00:39:257 (5) instead? ye
00:51:258 (1) - I hear what you're emphasizing in the music, but this isn't being emphasizes. You should either remove it or map more of the break section. na na will keep it
01:02:199 (7,8) - Angle felt off in play, move 8 down. not sure why but ok
01:02:905 (2,3) - You should make these circles into a slider similar to this: 00:42:081 (1). The impact of the vocals is similar and the player will already expect another one. pls look at 2 and 5
01:13:140 (1,1,1,1) - You should probably be consistent with the pattern at 00:48:787 (1,2,1,2,1). Musically they sound similar, and both of them play well (my favorite part of the map too). yeah changed them

thanks a buch

.osu

hey stjpa

toybot

1,050 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2016-07-24T02:52:13+00:00

for m4m

[Pati]
00:39:610 (1) - isn't it supposed to be just clap with auto additions
00:44:551 (3,4,5,6) - this jump pattern is so large compared to all of the other jump patterns in this section, consider nerfing a bit
00:49:492 - uh, this break section isn't really needed, since it releases all the tension built up too early
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right now, the distance between each object hovers around 2.00x. to reflect the music more, you can increase the spacing as the pattern builds up
01:13:846 (1) - maybe you could try moving this to above (4), to create a sharp angle in (3,4,1) so you emphasize the drums more

[Thievly]
00:06:963 (4) - maybe the 1/4 slider is a bit too much for this diff, since the map is dominantly 1/1 and 1/2, and you only use 1/4 here
00:19:845 (1,2) - this is kind of an oddball in this section, wouldn't it be better to use just two 1/2 sliders so you don't miss 00:20:198 - ?
00:41:022 (4) - nc plz
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - arranging them in a line (aka moving (1) to x364 y230) looks cleaner

i think thats it, nice mapset

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-24T13:09:19+00:00

meep

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36787
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14198,19845,26904,38198,51258,56905,62552
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだらかぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Stjpa
Version:Hyperion's Platter
Source:
Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm thievley pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,209,164
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Will try to mod other diffs some time next week.

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-24T15:52:44+00:00

Halfslashed

[Advanced]
00:18:434 (1,2) - Match angles for consistency, something like this (also make sure to fix DS): http://puu.sh/q8qUH/7499302e7f.png i think it's fine as it is but thanks for the heads up about ds wew

toyboy

[Thievly] ow
00:06:963 (4) - maybe the 1/4 slider is a bit too much for this diff, since the map is dominantly 1/1 and 1/2, and you only use 1/4 here okay a lot of people have pointed this out now so i suppose i should change it, made it a 1/2 slider + a circle!
00:19:845 (1,2) - this is kind of an oddball in this section, wouldn't it be better to use just two 1/2 sliders so you don't miss 00:20:198 - ? i wanted a bit of variation from all the 1/2 sliders, also it highlights the snare drum nicely imo
00:41:022 (4) - nc plz lol whoops
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - arranging them in a line (aka moving (1) to x364 y230) looks cleaner a lot of people have suggested this already so i guess it wouldn't hurt to change it a

thanks for the mods!

update aay

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DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-07-25T09:55:31+00:00

From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions.

General

Check AiMod, you have conflicting tags. Make sure “jbhyperion” is in the the tags of all diffs since he has a GD.
Check AiMod, fix the title and artist name in Pati's Shiawase! since it didn't process the Japanese text right during the process on receiving the GD.
Uncheck “Widescreen Support” on Hyperion's Platter and Piku's Rain

Hyperion's Platter

00:12:081 (1,2,3,4) – It feels like (2) isn't properly spaced to me for pattern. I'd put (2) on X=304 so it feels a little more natural, at least from my perspective.
00:48:434 (1,2) – Feels a bit hard to catch because not much emphasis can be heard here, make it 1.80x spacing by putting (2) on X=96 then moving 00:48:787 (3,4,5) to X=336.

Piku's Rain

Your patterns and spacing look fine but I do have a spread concern with the AR being 9.2 since most Rains are 9 and under. Unless you have a specific reason for the AR being 9.2, I'd just make it 9 because it doesn't appear to affect flow at 9.

Good luck!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-25T12:06:03+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions.

Hyperion's Platter

00:12:081 (1,2,3,4) – It feels like (2) isn't properly spaced to me for pattern. I'd put (2) on X=304 so it feels a little more natural, at least from my perspective. Sure, makes this a little easier so the following hdash is less jarring
00:48:434 (1,2) – Feels a bit hard to catch because not much emphasis can be heard here, make it 1.80x spacing by putting (2) on X=96 then moving 00:48:787 (3,4,5) to X=336. Done

Good luck!

Thanks for the suggestions!

Platter

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Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-25T16:51:29+00:00

toy

toybot wrote:
00:39:610 (1) - isn't it supposed to be just clap with auto additions oh yeah
00:44:551 (3,4,5,6) - this jump pattern is so large compared to all of the other jump patterns in this section, consider nerfing a bit dont really wanna nerf it cause its not that hard when you compare it to other jumps so i just increased distance of some other jumps
00:49:492 - uh, this break section isn't really needed, since it releases all the tension built up too early oh okay
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right now, the distance between each object hovers around 2.00x. to reflect the music more, you can increase the spacing as the pattern builds up nice idea
01:13:846 (1) - maybe you could try moving this to above (4), to create a sharp angle in (3,4,1) so you emphasize the drums more okay

thank you

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-26T14:58:39+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions. | lul hello there JBH's Platter

General

Check AiMod, you have conflicting tags. Make sure “jbhyperion” is in the the tags of all diffs since he has a GD. | Stjpa fixed it for me
~~Check AiMod, fix the title and artist name in Pati's Shiawase! since it didn't process the Japanese text right during the process on receiving the GD.~~
Uncheck “Widescreen Support” on Hyperion's Platter and Piku's Rain | Turned off widescreen support

Piku's Rain

Your patterns and spacing look fine but I do have a spread concern with the AR being 9.2 since most Rains are 9 and under. Unless you have a specific reason for the AR being 9.2, I'd just make it 9 because it doesn't appear to affect flow at 9. | Changed to AR 9

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Fixed some hitsounds and a spacing inconsistency along with this. Also throwing a star o/*

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36787
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.4

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Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだらかぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Stjpa
Version:Piku's Rain
Source:
Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm thievley pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
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RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2016-07-27T09:36:58+00:00

I'm not dead, sorry for the delay :')

Pati's Shiawase!

00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this can be edited a bit in order to make a perfect star? Looks a bit random currently
00:45:081 (6) - Move to 57|204 so you have a perfect star again?
00:48:787 (1,1) - This is quite a pointess suggestion, feel free to ignore it, but it feels like these two sliders are a bit too close, you could make a better triangle with 00:49:022 (2) - maybe
00:51:258 (1) - What if you delete this note and start the break here instead? (like insane diff)
01:13:846 (1) - You should really delete this note, since there's no sound on this beat and other diffs have no note on this beat!

Insane

00:20:022 (2) - Feels a bit out of place, since it's the only 1/4 kickslider in the whole pattern, turn it into notes? Or just into a repeat slider like 00:22:845 (2) -
00:37:140 (3,6) - Stack these?
01:00:787 (4,3) - This overlap is a bit weird, honestly
01:02:022 (6) - Move to 115|334?

Hard

00:35:375 (1,2,3) - Uhm, maybe you could move this whole pattern to the left so it's symmetrical to the center?
00:43:316 (4,1) - Pls stack xd

Thievley's Advanced

Should be Thievley's Normal, it's not really an Advanced
00:05:022 (2,3) - Please ctrl+g, flows muuuuuch better
00:27:610 (2,1) - Blanked could be better (super nazi, sorry)
00:43:845 (1,2) - Looks much better if you copy-paste the first slider, since it can be noticed that their shape is different
00:48:787 (2,3) - I don't recommend using 1/3 sliders in a Normal diff, but I'm not sure, so maybe just ask a BN (01:13:140 (2,3) - same here)

Easy

01:13:140 (4) - This slider should end on 01:13:728 - since in the other diffs you didn't put any notes on 01:13:846 - and this feels weird! It would be a 5/3 slider but it's not a problem at all.

This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star!

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-27T14:27:07+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Insane

00:20:022 (2) - Feels a bit out of place, since it's the only 1/4 kickslider in the whole pattern, turn it into notes? Or just into a repeat slider like 00:22:845 (2) - I feel kinda sick of answering that over and over xD. There's a higher pitched drum or whatever which makes the kickslider fit really well. People never had a problem playing it properly either. But if JBH says something to it I'll change it.
00:37:140 (3,6) - Stack these? It's a constant build-up so it would kinda ruin the system. :<
01:00:787 (4,3) - This overlap is a bit weird, honestly Fixed.
01:02:022 (6) - Move to 115|334? Fits pretty well to the vocals, sure.
Hard
00:35:375 (1,2,3) - Uhm, maybe you could move this whole pattern to the left so it's symmetrical to the center? Done.
00:43:316 (4,1) - Pls stack xd Oops.

Easy

01:13:140 (4) - This slider should end on 01:13:728 - since in the other diffs you didn't put any notes on 01:13:846 - and this feels weird! It would be a 5/3 slider but it's not a problem at all. Ok.
This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star! Thanks for the star. c: I don't think I should look for BNs already, but let's see what JBH says. Going to mod your map tonight!

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-27T15:03:53+00:00

rikih

RikiH_ wrote:
00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this can be edited a bit in order to make a perfect star? Looks a bit random currently i tried
00:45:081 (6) - Move to 57|204 so you have a perfect star again? done
00:48:787 (1,1) - This is quite a pointess suggestion, feel free to ignore it, but it feels like these two sliders are a bit too close, you could make a better triangle with 00:49:022 (2) - maybe uh okay
00:51:258 (1) - What if you delete this note and start the break here instead? (like insane diff) what if say im not like the other what if say i mapped that part naw
01:13:846 (1) - You should really delete this note, since there's no sound on this beat and other diffs have no note on this beat! okok

This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star!

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-28T18:36:08+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Thievley's Advanced
Should be Thievley's Normal, it's not really an Advanced sort of agree with this.. but i think it's fine as advanced
00:05:022 (2,3) - Please ctrl+g, flows muuuuuch better oki
00:27:610 (2,1) - Blanked could be better (super nazi, sorry) yup yup
00:43:845 (1,2) - Looks much better if you copy-paste the first slider, since it can be noticed that their shape is different alright!
00:48:787 (2,3) - I don't recommend using 1/3 sliders in a Normal diff, but I'm not sure, so maybe just ask a BN (01:13:140 (2,3) - same here) might consider changing this, but i think it's fine for now yep, will ask^

thanks for the mod~

click this stjpa!

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-29T08:33:07+00:00

hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8(

Hyperion :
- CS 3,6 or 3,7 maybe? i feel a bit strange to see big fruits lol
- 00:11:287 - why not map this too if you 00:10:492 (3) - mapped this? that drum is stong
- 00:17:022 (1) - feel weird to see consistent spacing on new beat aka cymbal here, try spacing like 00:25:140 (5) - ?
- 00:29:728 (1) - try a bit further for emphasis vocal? imo x:364
- 00:34:492 (3) - x:88 for emphasis vocal?
- 00:43:845 (1) - remove finish, no cymbal D:
- 00:49:492 (5) - i hear weak cymbal here, how about make this note catch with dash like x:348?
- 01:01:140 - strong beat, also drum start in here which continue until 01:02:375 - so imo this should be mapped
- 01:13:845 (5) - imo current spacing is so low, x:288 instead?
- 01:15:434 (1) - if you arent going to lower volumes then why there are greenlines in here :^)

Piku :
- 00:20:287 - 00:20:640 - 00:20:816 - 00:20:992 - why not keep map them? they are strong enough and feel weird if one of them is skipped
- 00:22:051 - 00:22:228 - ^
- 00:40:845 (4) - x:304? imo hdash fits better for 00:41:022 (1) - due the vocal strength :C (also consistency with 01:06:610 (4) - )
- 00:43:845 (1) - no hdash for cymbal here but for 00:43:669 (5) - ? i cry
- 00:56:905 (2) - finish for cymbal
- 01:13:846 - map it i guess? there is still a music there even not drum (consistency with jbh /run)
- 01:15:345 (1) - same as platter

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8(

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-29T11:22:44+00:00

Xinely wrote:
hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8( Couldn't find any confirmation post in the other ranked mapsets, so will see what Stjpa has to say here

Hyperion :
- CS 3,6 or 3,7 maybe? i feel a bit strange to see big fruits lol Wai u h8 big fruits ;w; Seriously though I wanted this diff to be quite different from the Rain so I went for a lower CS than usual. I've never really been a fan of high CS Platters personally
- 00:11:287 - why not map this too if you 00:10:492 (3) - mapped this? that drum is stong Fair point, added a note here
- 00:17:022 (1) - feel weird to see consistent spacing on new beat aka cymbal here, try spacing like 00:25:140 (5) - ? I'd have to make a 1/4 dash and it plays really awkwardly for me. I would prefer to emphasize this more too, but that means leaving 00:16:934 unmapped and I'd prefer not to do that
- 00:29:728 (1) - try a bit further for emphasis vocal? imo x:364 Sure
- 00:34:492 (3) - x:88 for emphasis vocal? Yeah I like a hyper here, done
- 00:43:845 (1) - remove finish, no cymbal D: Copied hitsounds because lazy orz
- 00:49:492 (5) - i hear weak cymbal here, how about make this note catch with dash like x:348? Done, and added a better drum finish hitsound
- 01:01:140 - strong beat, also drum start in here which continue until 01:02:375 - so imo this should be mapped I prefer to only focus on vocals here since they are much stronger, mapping a repeat here breaks the smooth vocal line
- 01:13:845 (5) - imo current spacing is so low, x:288 instead? Done
- 01:15:434 (1) - if you arent going to lower volumes then why there are greenlines in here :^) I'm an idiot

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8( ayyy

Thanks for the mod!

Platter

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P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-29T11:27:46+00:00

Xinely wrote:
hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8( | Utaite.wikia - Attakain Dakara~♪ (あったかいんだからぁ♪) (Because It's Warm~♪)

Piku :
- 00:20:287 - 00:20:640 - 00:20:816 - 00:20:992 - why not keep map them? they are strong enough and feel weird if one of them is skipped | Ok done :c
- 00:22:051 - 00:22:228 - ^ | ^
- 00:40:845 (4) - x:304? imo hdash fits better for 00:41:022 (1) - due the vocal strength :C (also consistency with 01:06:610 (4) - ) | Yep, fits much better
- 00:43:845 (1) - no hdash for cymbal here but for 00:43:669 (5) - ? i cry | Don't cry :c Fixed
- 00:56:905 (2) - finish for cymbal | Oops, looks like I've missed that
- 01:13:846 - map it i guess? there is still a music there even not drum (consistency with jbh /run) | Yeah I guess
- 01:15:345 (1) - same as platter | Done

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8( | :c

Thanks for the mod!

Update

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TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
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Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm thievley pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-29T13:40:18+00:00

so title is should be "あったかいんだからぁ♪"

when current map's title is "あったかいんだらかぁ♪"

Edit : btw its for all diffs

Last edited by Xinely 2016-07-30T03:04:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-29T13:42:50+00:00

Oh I didn't notice I made a typo when typing it, sorry xd

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2016-07-29T21:14:24+00:00

hi u requested a shitmod?

here we fookin go!!1
(I'm just bringin suggestions!)

[General]

Fine map overall
The Easy diff isn't currently fittin' for an "Easy" diff at the moment imo since you follow almost every important sound with a looooooooot of 1/1 sliders! Also the fact that you don't really use 2/1 sliders (there are some but not many) is kinda weird and doesn't really fit for an Easy diff (1.6 sr op). I'd suggest ya to rename that diff into "Normal" knowing that there will be two normal diffs in that mapset but it's not that bad~ (some mapsets have that)
ALSO , a spread is usually made like that Easy→Normal→Advanced→Hard and not Easy→Advanced→Hard so you know...
Since almost combo colour look similar (3 orange-ish) , I'd suggest ya to get one brown , it'd be nice with the bg!

[Easy]

00:14:198 (1) - Even if there's a little break there you could space a lil bit the note since it has a .85 spacin' instead if a 1.00 one!
00:19:845 (1) - You can polish that blanket~
00:26:904 (1) - .72 spacin' here aswell and I don't know if it's easily fixable tbh

[Thievley's Advanced]

00:26:904 (1) - You could maybe move that slider a lil bit to the left so the transition with 00:27:610 (2) - will be smoother :
00:18:787 (2) - Really nazi but it's 0.9 ds instead of 1.0.

[Hard]

00:12:610 (7) - Why don't you keep a consistency with sliders like 00:11:375 (1) - ? I know you originally wanted to set something progressive with SV but reducing the curve here would give a better aspect of the whole pattern ( 00:11:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) imo.
01:11:022 (1,2,3) - Felt like you could better align these objects!It's up to you
Big fan of that diff lo

[Insane]

00:09:345 - I know what you wanted to map with the two different triples but in my opinion , that sound should not be ignored! (See how 00:14:904 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - is FLAWLESS :D )
00:36:610 (4) - Felt like you could increase the spacin' on that circle since there's a big kick c:
00:49:492 (1) - Maybe put it at 252|176 in order to make a sweet triangle with 00:48:787 (1,2) - since I noticed you like aesthetics in general!
00:56:552 - When I listened to that sound first, I thought you'd add a slow slider who could cover it but well , it's not too late
01:08:552 (2) - you could maybe align it with 01:08:199 (1) - ?(nazi)
01:11:022 (1,2,3) - I don't know about these since you ignored 01:11:199 - and 01:11:905 - and they feel important imo since you followed 01:12:522 - with 01:12:434 (1) - !

[Pati's Shiwase]

00:08:198 (5) - The spacin' could have been much higher here instead at 00:08:375 (6) - since you have a louder sound.
00:16:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm sure someone already pointed it but it'd be better to make that better to read since you did it very well at 00:14:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - for example!
00:36:610 (6) - Once again , the spacin' could have been much higher for the same reaosn mentionned above!

As I said it's a cool mapset you have there~

Good luck for rankin!

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-30T12:45:29+00:00

Fixed everything except .72 spacing in Easy (now Normal) and combo colours because the shade always switches between strong - soft so I don't see a problem at all there. Thank you for your mod! c:

Edit: And that suggestion for the 1/3 pattern because it's already a triangle but with a more appropriate spacing if you take a look on the spacing between both 1/3 sliders.

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-31T16:47:36+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
[Thievley's Advanced]

00:26:904 (1) - You could maybe move that slider a lil bit to the left so the transition with 00:27:610 (2) - will be smoother : okay
00:18:787 (2) - Really nazi but it's 0.9 ds instead of 1.0. yeah xd

thanks!

opaosjpiajsf

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