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Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi

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mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
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mjw5150
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月8日 at 16:16:25

Artist: Uehara Rena
Title: Todokanai Koi
Source: WHITE ALBUM 2 ~introductory chapter~
Tags: AQUAPLUS Leaf
BPM: 135
Filesize: 5127kb
Play Time: 04:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.7 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 469 notes)
Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi
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届かない恋
WHITE ALBUM2 ~introductory chapter~ OP
Last edited by mjw5150 , edited 11 times in total.
lorvd
26 posts
Joined March 2010
lorvd
（<ゝω·）绮罗星 ~☆
hp200006
13 posts
Joined February 2010
hp200006
啊...沙发被L大魔王抢了...
Last edited by hp200006 , edited 1 time in total.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
hey this is pretty nice
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[General]
Combo color为什么要用两个一样的黄和两个一样的蓝...这样不好读 删掉只剩一个


[Insane]
00:34:387 (6) - 尾部可以再往下一点 让slider看起来更圆
00:39:721 (2) - 拉远一点 至少不要和1贴一起
00:43:054 (2) - 123之间间距不一样
00:45:943 (1) - 可以再拖远一点 让7的尾部和1的尾部之间的距离看上去像两个正常note之间的距离 改完记得调整后面的slider
03:13:943 (3) - 尾部加clap
03:17:498 (3) - ^

还不错
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

eveless wrote:

[General]
Combo color为什么要用两个一样的黄和两个一样的蓝...这样不好读 删掉只剩一个


[Insane]
00:34:387 (6) - 尾部可以再往下一点 让slider看起来更圆
00:39:721 (2) - 拉远一点 至少不要和1贴一起
00:43:054 (2) - 123之间间距不一样
00:45:943 (1) - 可以再拖远一点 让7的尾部和1的尾部之间的距离看上去像两个正常note之间的距离 改完记得调整后面的slider
03:13:943 (3) - 尾部加clap
03:17:498 (3) - ^

还不错
fixed thx :)
-Chitose Sana-
12 posts
Joined August 2008
-Chitose Sana-
WA2 :D star
samuel_old
55 posts
Joined July 2009
samuel_old
can I make a guest diff ?
star~~~~~~ :)
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Overall
Type something in Creator's Words lol


[Easy]
There are some long combos. Place new combos to fix those.

00:38:832 (1,2) - consider make these into a 1/8 repeating slider? (There's an unmapped drum sound at 00:39:054)
02:11:498 (x) - add a note?
02:35:276 (2) - you should use custom slidertick for whistle, NOT here 02:35:943.
03:18:832 (5) - consider mapping until 03:19:721
03:47:276 (x) - there is a drum sound here, try mapping it?

Very nice~


[Hard]
00:39:054 (x) - there's an unmapped drum sound here: replace 00:38:832 (1) with 3 circles?
02:45:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try arranging these into a better circle
03:42:832 (6) - curve this slider?
03:48:610 (2) - compared this with 03:47:721 (9). Both are under the slider but are of different rhythm (1/8 vs. 1/16). I suggest you to differentiate them by using different patterns. (Check the entire map if required.)
03:51:721 (1) - consider silencing some sliderticks in this x0.5BPM section

Patterns aren't top-notch, but overall very good.

=============

Is your mapping teacher kioukiou? LOL
Star~
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
混蛋 赶快做我老婆!
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

samuel wrote:

can I make a guest diff ?
star~~~~~~ :)
of course :)

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~

Overall
Type something in Creator's Words lol


[Easy]
There are some long combos. Place new combos to fix those.

00:38:832 (1,2) - consider make these into a 1/8 repeating slider? (There's an unmapped drum sound at 00:39:054)
02:11:498 (x) - add a note?
02:35:276 (2) - you should use custom slidertick for whistle, NOT here 02:35:943.
03:18:832 (5) - consider mapping until 03:19:721
03:47:276 (x) - there is a drum sound here, try mapping it?

Very nice~


[Hard]
00:39:054 (x) - there's an unmapped drum sound here: replace 00:38:832 (1) with 3 circles?
02:45:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try arranging these into a better circle
03:42:832 (6) - curve this slider?
03:48:610 (2) - compared this with 03:47:721 (9). Both are under the slider but are of different rhythm (1/8 vs. 1/16). I suggest you to differentiate them by using different patterns. (Check the entire map if required.)
03:51:721 (1) - consider silencing some sliderticks in this x0.5BPM section

Patterns aren't top-notch, but overall very good.

=============

Is your mapping teacher kioukiou? LOL
Star~
mostly fixed
thx for modding
Creator's words will be typed later(i really don't know what to type now :(
and my mapping teaher is Mrs.DRS XDDDDDDDDDD
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Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Any mod i post is a suggestion and can be freely disregarded if you disagree.

Folder Check:

everything is good there.

Easy:

02:17:943 (4,1,2) - only a bit unsymmetrical

02:41:054 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing error. (there are more throughout this entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:53:721 (1) - remove new combo?

Wow i couldnt really find to much wrong. that was a very nice difficulty.

Hard:

01:39:276 (1,2,3,4) - tiny spacing error (more like it throughout the entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:22:387 (1,2,3) - a bit ugly

02:52:832 (4) - move to the left one grid point

Thats it. Both were very nice difficultys.

Star~
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Zelos wrote:

Any mod i post is a suggestion and can be freely disregarded if you disagree.

Folder Check:

everything is good there.

Easy:

02:17:943 (4,1,2) - only a bit unsymmetrical

02:41:054 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing error. (there are more throughout this entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:53:721 (1) - remove new combo?

Wow i couldnt really find to much wrong. that was a very nice difficulty.

Hard:

01:39:276 (1,2,3,4) - tiny spacing error (more like it throughout the entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:22:387 (1,2,3) - a bit ugly

02:52:832 (4) - move to the left one grid point

Thats it. Both were very nice difficultys.

Star~
mostly fixed
thx :)
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
8-) 渣mod 请选择性无视
[timing]
hard 强烈建议 SV调为1.4
02:43:165 (6) - del
02:54:498 (-) - add a note
↑
这图在长白线起小3连比较好 红线起节奏不是很好

排版我还觉得太随意了一点... :roll:
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150
Mrs.DRS神马时候成专业modder了lol
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
General
Shouldn't the last kiai section activate at 04:05:943 instead of 04:02:387?
Source should be White Album 2: Introductory Chapter?

Easy
02:22:832 (2) - Perhaps don't stack this? You already stacked 1/2 notes. Having a 1/1 stack may be confusing.
03:18:832 (3) - ^
03:19:276 (x) - Perhaps add a note here so the break won't start as odd.

Hard
03:19:276 (x) - Perhaps add a note here so the break won't start as odd.

Overall
Solid map. A Normal would be nice though :(

Edit: As the mapper stated two diff was fine, Bubbled.
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mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150
all fixed except:

NoHItter wrote:

Source should be White Album 2: Introductory Chapter?
i think it has no problem(as the LOGO write
thx for your modding :D
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
plz move your offset to 7721 (為了讓重拍子打在長白線上,這樣osucore聽了才爽!!!!)
音效的話已經相當穩定了,clap用的沒話說,接下來可以試試看跟著音樂來下一些finish
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Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi (mjw5150) [@_@].osu
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
羡慕嫉妒恨
lol
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
ok sounds better now
ranked
IkkiMinami
IkkiMinami
Easy and hard. it turns out easy all

Me thought hard difficult, it turns out easy
:( :(
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
This is a nice relaxing set. Great job! :D
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