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Panic! at the Disco - The Ballad of Mona Lisa

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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 07 de julio de 2011 at 11:15:29 p.m.

Artist: Panic! at the Disco
Title: The Ballad of Mona Lisa
Tags: Krisom vices and virtues
BPM: 124
Filesize: 10544kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Calm! (0.71 stars, 126 notes)
  2. Nervous! (2.78 stars, 199 notes)
  3. Panic! (4.8 stars, 363 notes)
Download: Panic! at the Disco - The Ballad of Mona Lisa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WARNING: Don't press 'CTRL + Z' while editing, it will mess up the Storyboard.

from the album "Vices & Virtues" (Track #1)
Thanks to Lybydose (Timing help)

Spread
  1. Calm! (Easy 100%)
  2. Nervous! (Normal 100%)
  3. Panic! (Hard/Insane 100%)
  4. Panic! Sliders! is a collab between Krisom and me.
  5. Note: I won't add any other diff to this mapset.
Skin & SB
  1. SB (100%)
  2. Skin (100%)
  3. Hitcircle, overlay and ticks made by MathiasXII (Contease) (tweaked)
  4. About the missing apostrophe: The font I used doesn't have that character so I couldn't add it, plus the official video doesn't use apostrophes either.
Lybydose
Might not be 100% perfect. Don't really have a map to test play to confirm it, but it should be very close. You'll be able to map it though, and small tweaks can be made later if necessary. Also the timing on the drums is slightly off occasionally, blame the drummer I guess.

BPM//Offset

124//135
125//60,135
127//62,055
124//77,176
125//113,950
127//115,870
124//130,995
127//177,431
127//203,897 <== not completely sure about this one
124//207,677
Krisom
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Bump.
Verdisphena
>w<
Luvdic
Panic!

01:03:708 - Add finish
02:08:389 (5) - 1/4 later. Just like the way you did with 01:08:078 (2) -
02:10:751 - Add finish
03:09:950 (5) - 1/4 later

Only krisom parts had problems =o!!

jk... irc modded gonzvlo parts... and he refuses to do most of my suggestions =[
HellDawn
N1 ;)
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Thanks for supporting, I'll be done with "Normal" in a couple of days.
narakucrimson
Holy sliders

Excelent work guys!
braian5234
Panic! ♥
narakucrimson
Ok revise cada slider, cada cosita varias veces, y creo que no hay ningún tipo de error apreciable en el mapping - además de que hay algunos de los sliders más ingeniosos que he visto. Así que:

[SB]
  1. No me terminan de convencer las luces de fondo :/ Siento que no dan suficiente énfasis, no sé...
    ¿Qué te parece ésta imagen?
    SPOILER

    (La primera es la png con transparencia)
    Creo que se luce más, además, te va a resultar más fácil ubicarla y moverla si usas el parámetro BottomCentre y ubicas el nuevo centro encima de los focos de luz.
  2. Creo que algunas luces en la parte inferior, unos "lightnings", que podrían ser simples degradés, harían un poco más vistoso al SB :3
Nada más, solo ese par de cosas :3

No creo que esto merezca kudosu xD

Bueno, suerte con esto :3 cualquier cosa en la que pueda ayudar - quizás del SB -, a las órdenes :O
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok revise cada slider, cada cosita varias veces, y creo que no hay ningún tipo de error apreciable en el mapping - además de que hay algunos de los sliders más ingeniosos que he visto. Así que:

[SB]
  1. No me terminan de convencer las luces de fondo :/ Siento que no dan suficiente énfasis, no sé...
    ¿Qué te parece ésta imagen?
    SPOILER

    (La primera es la png con transparencia)
    Creo que se luce más, además, te va a resultar más fácil ubicarla y moverla si usas el parámetro BottomCentre y ubicas el nuevo centro encima de los focos de luz.
  2. Creo que algunas luces en la parte inferior, unos "lightnings", que podrían ser simples degradés, harían un poco más vistoso al SB :3
Nada más, solo ese par de cosas :3
Omg, thanks Naraku! I was looking for some help with those things but I wasn't about who could help me, thanks a lot again <3
Ruisu-kun_old
Un pequeño aviso: Desaparecieron sus nombres en el kiai time :C

Star~!
Krisom
GONZALO VILCHEZ DE LAS MERCEDES RAMIREZ MO ME HAS AGREGADO A LOS TAGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS


A tu pieza sin postre >:(
gyt
Hi! My mods are bad and you know it :D

preview point?
remove some unused images in folder (trash.png, open.png (there are 2 copies), comboburst.psd :o, Brendon-e1297229332391.jpg)

[Calm!]
some objects aren't snapped
00:27:231 (4) - add new combo?
00:27:957 (2) - can be difficult to follow, maybe - add 1/2 slider or circle at 00:27:715?
00:38:844 (1,2) - reduce spacing?
01:00:135 (4) - add new combo?
01:04:417 (2,3) - not in stack?
01:11:976 (2,3) - ^
01:07:724 (5) - add new combo?
01:22:498 (2,3,4,5,1) - not equal spacing
03:06:879 (5) - add new combo?
03:20:580 (4) - ^
03:20:580 (4,5,6) - reduce spacing?

[Nervous!]
some objects aren't snapped
03:10:186 (4) - move to 03:10:068 to follow vocal? I fail here two times before get it.
03:10:423 - add note here? or you may place slider from 03:10:186 to 03:10:423

[Panic!]
01:00:135 (1,1,1) - align maybe?
01:15:047 (1) - awesome slider :)

Nice map, sliders and song. I think SB will also be good. Star!
Aleks719
Mona Lisa said me "Star this map!"
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

gyt wrote:

[Calm!]
some objects aren't snapped
00:27:231 (4) - add new combo?
00:27:957 (2) - can be difficult to follow, maybe - add 1/2 slider or circle at 00:27:715?
00:38:844 (1,2) - reduce spacing?
01:04:417 (2,3) - not in stack?
01:22:498 (2,3,4,5,1) - not equal spacing
03:20:580 (4,5,6) - reduce spacing?

[Nervous!]
some objects aren't snapped
03:10:186 (4) - move to 03:10:068 to follow vocal? I fail here two times before get it.
03:10:423 - add note here? or you may place slider from 03:10:186 to 03:10:423

[Panic!]
01:00:135 (1,1,1) - align maybe?
Done most of the suggestions, thanks :3 ( The suggestions I removed, are the ones I skipped )
NotShinta
General:
I decided to mod this because I couldn't nazi All The Small Things enough, then I decided I love the song enough to download the album. Horray.
I hope you like nazi mods, because that's all yer getting.
Oh, yeah, put Krisom in those tags there.

Panic!:
Congratulations, you two have managed to map the greatest map ever! Pat yourselves on the back
01:11:976 (1,2) - Deja vu, but move these closer to the slider, keeping symmetry?
01:13:866 (5,7) - Move one midget grid to the center each. Yes, I'm due back in the clinic on Tuesday.
01:15:047 (1) - I am fairly sorry, but this isn't entirely symmetrical. :{ If you move the start and end points, at least the points will be~
02:51:398 (4) - Add a whistle?

Nervous!:
00:30:376 (1) - Personally, I'd remove a repeat here for guitar magicalness.

Calm!:
00:30:376 (2) - This repeat is slightly awkward, in my honest opinion; the first half is obviously to the guitar, while most of the second is to the vocals. It's not too bad though.

I was going to find a picture of a ferret and put something funny underneath it to show my approval for this, but then I felt kind of tired. So have a star too. Oh, go on, take a pink star too. Maybe 2.
Krisom

NotShinta wrote:

General:
I decided to mod this because I couldn't nazi All The Small Things enough, then I decided I love the song enough to download the album.WHY CAN'T I SEE YOUR STAR THERE THEN?!

Panic!:
02:51:398 (4) - Add a whistle?Sure, I'll remap that part anwyays.
SPOILER
324,24,162930,5,0
256,64,163172,1,2
188,24,163414,1,0
120,64,163656,2,0,B|120:104|44:104|44:104|100:124|100:176|44:192|44:192|100:208|100:260|44:280|44:280|120:280|120:320,1,449.999986588955,2|0
188,360,164865,5,0
256,324,165107,1,2
324,360,165349,1,0
392,320,165591,2,0,B|392:280|468:280|468:280|412:260|412:208|468:192|468:192|412:176|412:124|468:104|468:104|392:104|392:64,1,449.999986588955,2|0
312,56,166801,5,0
256,112,167043,1,2
200,168,167285,1,0
152,232,167527,2,0,B|204:260|240:236|256:222|256:222|272:236|308:260|360:232,1,224.999993294478,2|0
312,168,168253,1,2
256,112,168494,2,0,B|256:344,1,224.999993294478
256,336,169220,1,2
176,312,169462,2,0,B|180:276|204:248|256:224|308:248|332:276|336:312,1,224.999993294478
180,136,170672,5,0
120,188,170914,1,2
40,188,171156,1,0
80,256,171398,2,0,B|132:292|184:268|184:268|236:296|256:356|256:356|276:296|328:268|328:268|380:292|432:256,1,449.999986588955,2|0
472,188,172607,1,2
392,188,172849,1,0
332,136,173091,1,0
256,160,173333,1,0
256,192,173575,12,0,176478
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

NotShinta wrote:

01:15:047 (1) - I am fairly sorry, but this isn't entirely symmetrical. :{ If you move the start and end points, at least the points will be~
I've tried to fix this several times but the slider returns to its old form when I leave the editor, I think it's bugged :(
All the other stuff, done. Thanks <3
jolievie
star! I love Panic!
Behon
Calm!:
00:19:731 (1): Placing notes on some of the 1/2 points instead of the basic beats can throw beginners off. Move it back to start at 00:19:489 and extend it so that it still ends at 00:20:457.
00:53:602 (3): Add a finish to the end of this slider?
01:47:417 (3): See above.
03:19:399 (3): Same here.

Nervous!:
Nothing stands out as iffy to me here.

Panic!:
I kind of feel like the slider speed is beyond reasonable here. Maybe something like 2.30 instead?
Lybydose
Not a full mod, just some SB stuff:

00:08:360 - The way the "Ballad of Mona Lisa" curtain falls here and covers the "Panic at the Disco" lettering looks really lame. Do you happen to have an image that's like L-PanicG.png and L-Mona Lisa.png but without the lettering (just the curtains)? If so, it would look a lot better if you faded out the "Panic at the Disco" lettering (just the words, the curtain still there) and then faded in "Ballad of Mona Lisa", rather than having it fall down like that.

"She paints her fingers with a close presicion" - Should be spelled "precision"
"Id paid to see you frown" - Should be "I'd PAY to see you frown"

I see the lyrics turn red during the chorus, and are black for the rest of the song. Why are the lyrics during the 2nd half of the final chorus black though? It appears you just reused the same images from earlier in the song, but shouldn't you made an extra red set of lyrics for the end chorus?
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Behonkiss wrote:

Calm!:
00:19:731 (1): Placing notes on some of the 1/2 points instead of the basic beats can throw beginners off. Move it back to start at 00:19:489 and extend it so that it still ends at 00:20:457. Hmm it seems easy enough for me, I'll change it if someone else agrees with you :3
00:53:602 (3): Add a finish to the end of this slider?
01:47:417 (3): See above.
03:19:399 (3): Same here.

Done ^

Panic!:
I kind of feel like the slider speed is beyond reasonable here. Maybe something like 2.30 instead?
I know the slider speed is quite fast but I'm really pleased with it. I feel that it suits the song and my mapping style (Krisom's too)

Lybydose wrote:

00:08:360 - The way the "Ballad of Mona Lisa" curtain falls here and covers the "Panic at the Disco" lettering looks really lame. Do you happen to have an image that's like L-PanicG.png and L-Mona Lisa.png but without the lettering (just the curtains)? If so, it would look a lot better if you faded out the "Panic at the Disco" lettering (just the words, the curtain still there) and then faded in "Ballad of Mona Lisa", rather than having it fall down like that. EDIT: I made up my mind and I think I like the way it is now so not changing this :3.

"She paints her fingers with a close presicion" - Should be spelled "precision" Oops! Sorry, sometimes I mix languages

"Id paid to see you frown" - Should be "I'd PAY to see you frown" Fixed :3

I see the lyrics turn red during the chorus, and are black for the rest of the song. Why are the lyrics during the 2nd half of the final chorus black though? It appears you just reused the same images from earlier in the song, but shouldn't you made an extra red set of lyrics for the end chorus? Ok :3
The SB changes are not submitted yet, I will submit them when I fix the stuff of the next SB mod.


Thanks Behonkiss and Lybydose :3
Kenezz
Support Support!
Go Go Gonzy~~

PS: Sexy Sliders haha :P
Hyguys
WARNING! NAZI MOD INCOMING!

BLUE IS SUGGESTION!
RED IS ERROR!
GREEN IS DUE TO SIMMETRY!

Calm!
00:33:522 (5, Second Control point) What about 2 grids up? ;)
01:01:575 (7) A whistle would fit on this beat
02:42:930 (1) What about this? And vertical flip?
02:50:672 (1) Remove new combo and horizontal flip

Nervous!
00:18:038 (1) That makes me a sad HG. What about this?
00:35:094 (1) 1 grid right?

Panic!
00:46:828 (5) GONZ It does not fit
01:04:889 (3, Last control point) GONZ 2 grids up
01:52:014 (X) KRISOM Add a note here , then 1/4 late the spinner

Comment:Nice map! Sorry for the nazi mod! But i'm not gonna find a error on a gonzvlo map. ;)
PS:What the hell is that ''Brendon'' on SB? That thing scared me o_o
STAR!~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Hyguys wrote:

Calm!
00:33:522 (5, Second Control point) What about 2 grids up? ;) It wouldn't be symmetric
02:42:930 (1) What about this? And vertical flip? Ok, I'll consider it :o
02:50:672 (1) Remove new combo and horizontal flip Ok, done :3

Panic!
00:46:828 (5) GONZ It does not fit But I like it ;_;
01:04:889 (3, Last control point) GONZ 2 grids up Ok :o
No changes applied to Nervous!

Thanks :3
Krisom

Hyguys wrote:

Panic!
01:52:014 (X) KRISOM Add a note here , then 1/4 late the spinner
Nah, he starts holding the ntoe before that spot, so adding another circle would make it feel awkward
Encrypto
Awesome, star. :3
*unprepared Mod*
RobotoRaccoon
Starfish.
Luvdic
Storyboard:

What the hell with this? (http://puu.sh/29R6) Is storyboard still bugged? Cause at least the first chorus doesn't happens this (And yes, i have made full redl twice, and yes, i did delete the map's folder before the redl)
Okay, so never mind above, I'll guess that's the famous glitch, and it disappears if you exit the editor, and reenter. Although I'm not sure if this happens in normal gameplay.

Panic:

And I'll insist about ending some sliders at the red point, but meh, screw you cause you're too lazy to redo sliders ;D

00:20:215 (4) - Instead of this (http://puu.sh/29OV) try this: http://puu.sh/29P2
00:52:393 (5) - Delete
00:56:264 (5) - Delete
01:03:708 - Add finish, take out whistle
01:14:574 (8) - 1/4 later
02:01:775 (8) - 1/4 later, although ugh... with that slider in there, youll have to repattern a lot.
02:08:389 (5) - 1/4 later
02:10:751 - Add finish, take out whistle
03:03:336 (8) - You know what already right? >_>
03:09:950 (5) - 1/4 later

Nervous:

00:54:086 (5) - Extend by 1/2 (so it ends at 00:54:812)
01:05:598 (2) - Delete, I don't think that circle is soooo necessary.
03:19:871 (5) - Extend by 1/2
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

ErufenRito wrote:

Storyboard:

What the hell with this? (http://puu.sh/29R6) Is storyboard still bugged? Cause at least the first chorus doesn't happens this (And yes, i have made full redl twice, and yes, i did delete the map's folder before the redl)
Okay, so never mind above, I'll guess that's the famous glitch, and it disappears if you exit the editor, and reenter. Although I'm not sure if this happens in normal gameplay. Told ya the SB was bugged ._.

Panic:

00:20:215 (4) - Instead of this (http://puu.sh/29OV) try this: http://puu.sh/29P2 Re-made this pattern
00:52:393 (5) - Delete ^
00:56:264 (5) - Delete ^
01:03:708 - Add finish, take out whistle <-- Krisom
01:14:574 (8) - 1/4 later I've decided to follow the 1/2 rhythm seems way easier to read~
02:01:775 (8) - 1/4 later, although ugh... with that slider in there, youll have to repattern a lot.
02:08:389 (5) - 1/4 later
02:10:751 - Add finish, take out whistle
03:03:336 (8) - You know what already right? >_>
03:09:950 (5) - 1/4 later

Nervous:

00:54:086 (5) - Extend by 1/2 (so it ends at 00:54:812) It sounds better ending on the red tick IMO
01:05:598 (2) - Delete, I don't think that circle is soooo necessary. I've been adding circles following this rhythm like 5 times per chorus :o
03:19:871 (5) - Extend by 1/2 Same as above :3
Thanks :3
Beuchi
Hi~ :)

Storyboard Mod

~Thoughts and Suggestions~
- Really nice ambientation~ Both skin and storyboard are great!
- I already read the description, but I still think the missing apostrophes look really weird >w<; It's your decision though, I won't rage if you leave them like that :P

~Issues and Adjustments~
- I have no idea what's the cause of your bug, but it doesn't seem to happen here D: I exited the editor several times to test and I didn't lose the code in any of them... Pretty weird indeed ;~; I'll ask around.
- About the same code, I think using 115 as velocity between frames works better. 120 feels a bit slow.

General Mod

~General~
- The timing sections in [Panic!] have a volume of 89% instead of 90%. No, I'm not that nazi, I just found it funny >w<

~Calm!~
00:34:973 (1,2,3) - This sounds pretty weird compared with the rythm you're having around, I'd make something like this:

~Nervous!~
01:36:530 (1) - <3

~Panic!~
01:15:047 (1) - <3
02:51:398 (4) - <3
03:03:572 (1) - I'd move this some grids down so the arrow doesn't get blocked with the HPbar =x

Grat map~ Also don't kudosu, not worth D:
*star*

Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Mod :3
Done, thanks :3

I'll make a full submission soon

SPOILER

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Also don't kudosu, not worth D:
I don't agree D:
SapphireGhost
I'm writing this mod in purple, just for you!

[Calm!]
01:06:779 (3) - I don't really like notes under sliders in the easiest difficulty...

[Nervous!]
00:45:860 (1) - Map through the spinner? It's a bit short.
02:07:208 (1) - Remove the tiny overlap with (4).

You and your perfect maps.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm writing this mod in purple, just for you!

[Calm!]
01:06:779 (3) - I don't really like notes under sliders in the easiest difficulty... You're right, re-arranged this pattern

[Nervous!]
00:45:860 (1) - Map through the spinner? It's a bit short. Sure :3
02:07:208 (1) - Remove the tiny overlap with (4). omg an overlap D:

You and your perfect maps.[/color]
Thanks :3
Charles445
General
Why are all the storyboarded parts difficulty specific?
The BLights should stay put and rotate, not roll around the lamp

Calm
02:56:478 - Don't silence this completely. Make it 10% or something.

Panic!
02:36:156 - New combo so the drain isn't so killer here?

Sorry I couldn't find more
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Charles445 wrote:

General
Why are all the storyboarded parts difficulty specific? Because [Calm!]&[Nervous!]'s SB is different to [Panic!]'s
The BLights should stay put and rotate, not roll around the lamp I used M commands to create this effect, I think it looks nice this way :<

Calm
02:56:478 - Don't silence this completely. Make it 10% or something. Ok, used this in Nervous and Panic too

Panic!
02:36:156 - New combo so the drain isn't so killer here? Ok
Thanks :3
lovhin456
Gonz! <3

General;
- Everything is good here ~

Skin;
- Is time to be picky with this skin ;D
- The hit300g and hit300k are the same, make them more different
- I'm curious, what is the star2 ? :3
- It would be nice if you added a pause-overlay, or when people pause the game it'll probably look like something like this
D:
- I really really like this skin <3

Calm!;
- 00:23:844 >> The slider would sound better if it started here in my opinion
- 00:30:376 >> Maybe add whistle to the slider's body?
- 00:45:860 >> ^
- 01:09:141 >> Remove clap and add finish ?
- 02:02:956 >> ^
- 02:10:995 >> End kiai here
- 03:04:517 >> Remove clap and add finish ?
- 03:27:677 >> End kiai here or maybe add a little fountain here ? I guess this goes for all diffs.

Nervous!;
- 00:30:376 >> Whistle to the slider's body ?
- 00:38:118 >> Add a note ?
- 00:45:860 >> Whistle to the slider's body ?
- 00:46:586 >> Remove whistle and add finish
- 01:36:530 >> Whistle to slider's body ?
- 03:10:423 >> Add a note ?
- 03:26:022 >> Add clap at the start
- 03:26:967 >> Remove the clap at the end and add clap at start

Panic!;
- 01:40:401 >> Add finish ?
- 01:52:014 >> Remove clap ?
- 02:52:607 >> New combo should start here ?

* Star ~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

lovhin456 wrote:

Lovely Mod
Fixed most of this stuff :3

Also, full submit done with the SB/Skin fixed.
Astom
$
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Astom wrote:

$
Kudosu given because Astom helped me with a big bug in my SB. Thanks again :3
Diasios
[Calm!]

  • • 01:15:519 (1) - Move this slider 1 square to the left. (grid level 4)

Flawless map.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

xxheroxx wrote:

[Calm!]

  • • 01:15:519 (1) - Move this slider 1 square to the left. (grid level 4)
Actually, 1 control point needs to be moved to the left to fix this slider, I've done this like 10 times already but it keeps getting back to it's old form. I think it's bugged :<

Thanks :3
arien666
And good luck for flawless mapset :3
Tadaki_Laka
my godness! perfect! :)
IceBeam
Hey there,Gonzie!

I'm late to mod this,sorry ;__;

Just throwing a star~
Great map,as always.

Hope to see it ranked soon ;)
0_o
Feel like a dick doing this, but..

Easy
01:29:272 (1) - This slider goes really really high. I think the debate is still out on whether it's rankable or not, but I did a quick poll in #modhelp and the consensus was that is was a bit much. This could be solved fairly painlessly by moving the entire section from the break to the next spinner down a bit. Or do something else, your call.

Hard
I noticed the storyboarded names appear for some parts of the map but not others, why?
01:02:055 (1) - THIS IS THE BEST SLIDER EVER.

Shmexy stuff.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

0_o wrote:

Easy
01:29:272 (1) - This slider goes really really high. I think the debate is still out on whether it's rankable or not, but I did a quick poll in #modhelp and the consensus was that is was a bit much. This could be solved fairly painlessly by moving the entire section from the break to the next spinner down a bit. Or do something else, your call. Okay, fixed \o/

Hard
I noticed the storyboarded names appear for some parts of the map but not others, why? I bugged the animations again, silly Gonz...
Full submitted, everything should be alright now, thanks :3
0_o
Awesome.
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