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Daisuke - Moshimo (TV Size)

posted 2016-05-24T19:21:46+00:00

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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-14T01:23:33+00:00

Thanks for modding !
💞 = Lovely Appreciated !
🌟 = Cool !
✅ = Fixed as you suggested
🌠 = Fixed other way
🍒 = Keep for now...
💌 = Commenting
💫 = Confused
❌ = Disagreed !
💢 = !!!

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
Turn off widescreen support on Light Insane
Why no custom hitsounds? xD

Moei's Normal
Use OD & HP 4 with AR 5 for the proper diff spread
This is why i hardly makin easier diffs x'D
Imo your DS is too large :v 1.6 is too hard imo, you should use between 1-1.2. It seems unbalance that easy is using 1.1 then a big jump tp 1.6 :v How can you expect beginners to pass this kind of normal x-x it's like a rabbit jumps for them fyi
✅I'd blame the modder before this who suggested ds 1,5 (i wont type who xD)
00:07:793 (3) - You can make this just a circle for simplicity of the rhythm
✅oke
00:12:105 (6,7) - I would prefer that this is just a 1/2 reverse slider cuz (6)'s head and (7) have the same sound
✅fair enough xd
00:21:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems kinda unbalance with 00:15:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that objects has no 1/2 rhythms but why suddenly spam it on that drum part, the density of the song doesn't differ that much so I would suggest that add some 1/2s at 00:15:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and remove some at 00:21:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's like a sudden diff spike imo
🌠remake
00:38:918 (3) - Why did you ignore the downbeat?
💫eh eh where ? owo
01:08:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo this is too dense, i think you're being abusive with the 1/2 rhythms here cuz you heard vocals right? it's not like that you can remove some of it to reduce density
✅yes, too dense. i wonder what i can remove uwu. i could use some suggestions here xD

Sorry for the short mod but I feel that this needs more work on aesthetics. I just feel demotivated to mod atm xD goodluck :3

thank you

update 15th

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Jonarwhal

1,216 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-09-15T01:36:42+00:00

NM from the queue~
[General]

Change the "Shippūden" in the tags to "Shippuuden" because you can't use accent marks.
Normal is missing the video file.

[Easy]

can't find anything...

[Normal]

Missing video file in .osu, as mentioned in general.
and that's all I can find...

[Hard]

Raise your AR to at least 7.5, preferably 8
00:00:668 (2) - consider Ctrl+H and ~468|94 for less overlap
00:56:918 (2,3,1) - Fix blanket
01:05:168 (1,2) - Make these identical
01:13:605 (5) - stack with the tail of 01:12:293 (4) - this
01:14:168 (1,2,3,1) - Fix blankets.
01:27:480 (1) - For more spinner recovery, change this to a circle placed 01:27:668 - here.

That's all I hope I helped take a star~!!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-15T03:12:55+00:00

Jonawaga wrote:
NM from the queue~
[General]
Change the "Shippūden" in the tags to "Shippuuden" because you can't use accent marks. - updated tags :3
Normal is missing the video file. - fixed
[Easy]
can't find anything... <3
That's all I hope I helped take a star~!!

thanks for modding!~

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-09-16T00:33:31+00:00

Jonawaga wrote:
NM from the queue~
[General]
Change the "Shippūden" in the tags to "Shippuuden" because you can't use accent marks.
[Hard]
Raise your AR to at least 7.5, preferably 8 LOL, i had it at 7.5, but then reduced it to 7 becuase of a mod and now im getting told 7.5!!!???? K i'll keep 7.5 honestly prefer 8 tho, but I'll do 7.5
00:00:668 (2) - consider Ctrl+H and ~468|94 for less overlap I honestly believe this is fine as it is
00:56:918 (2,3,1) - Fix blanket fixed, i think
01:05:168 (1,2) - Make these identical fixed
01:13:605 (5) - stack with the tail of 01:12:293 (4) - this yah might as well
01:14:168 (1,2,3,1) - Fix blankets. looks good to me
01:27:480 (1) - For more spinner recovery, change this to a circle placed 01:27:668 - here.confused, but this is fine as it is
That's all I hope I helped take a star~!!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14640
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuuden shippuden opening op 12 Frost b_r_o_k_e_n broken O-Moei
BeatmapID:991372
BeatmapSetID:460046

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,-1018,"moshimo.avi"
0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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ConsumerOfBean

443 posts

Joined April 2015

ConsumerOfBean 2016-09-17T22:08:56+00:00

from q

Easy

For this SR od could be raised but doesn't actually matter ^^

Normal

00:03:668 (1,2) - blanket if u want to be th ecoolest
01:24:668 (4,5) - not perfectly straight with 01:24:668 (3) - triggered

Hard

00:49:605 (4,5,1) - stacks like this are a pet peeve of mine, just personal tho
01:27:480 (1) - put it in the very middle? small thing i'd like for aesthetic

Light Insane

01:00:480 (10,1) - RIP hd players xd

Insane

AR8.5 so DT farmers can be filthy please?
This feels like it needs a higher OD, maybe 8 (or 8.2 if u want extra pp

)))))))))))))))))))))))))

Dreameme

200pp wtf

The set is nice and polished. Sorry for short mod (but it's a NM so whatever xd)

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-18T01:37:05+00:00

💞💞💞 Normal all fixed thankiess

💞💞💞

misha and the bear

Lest be honest, me hoping Easy could lower the star even just 0,2 xd cuz normal cant get higher anymore

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-18T02:53:11+00:00

FailureAtOsu wrote:
from q
Easy
For this SR od could be raised but doesn't actually matter ^^ - yee i will keep the od for now :3
Light Insane
01:00:480 (10,1) - RIP hd players xd - added a nc there, that would help a little :p
Dreameme
200pp wtf - loool
The set is nice and polished. Sorry for short mod (but it's a NM so whatever xd)

xD
Thanks for the mod!! :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-09-19T00:18:36+00:00

FailureAtOsu wrote:
from q
Insane
AR8.5 so DT farmers can be filthy please?
This feels like it needs a higher OD, maybe 8 (or 8.2 if u want extra pp )))))))))))))))))))))))))

lol'd

ar8.8-->8.7
od7.6-->7.8

this is (hopefully) final, i like these settings

yeppers

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shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-16T18:33:37+00:00

NM from my queue

[Dream]

00:10:793 (6,7,8,9,1) - rotate by 9 degrees
00:15:293 (5) - stack this on top of 00:15:668 (1) - for better looks
00:15:480 (6) - move down a little to give it more space from 00:15:105 (4) -
00:16:793 (3) - stack this on top of 00:17:168 (1) -
00:17:543 (2,3,4,5) - make square: https://puu.sh/rL6tx/b01fc0d41c.png
00:18:293 (6,7,1) - space like this: https://puu.sh/rL6ww/1e83c6ebd2.png
00:19:230 (3) - move this to (320, 208)
00:26:730 (3) - move down to (279, 321)
00:29:918 (4) - move up to (328, 164) to avoid overlap with 00:28:793 (5) -
00:34:980 (6) - overlap with 00:35:355 (2) - doesn't look good
00:36:105 (1,2) - idk if these should be stacked
00:39:105 (6) - move left slightly to (184, 256)
00:39:480 (2) - move up to (312, 101) for better flow?
00:40:230 (3) - move to (368, 256) to avoid overlap with 00:40:793 (5) -
00:40:605 (4) - move to (208, 192) for better flow and stack with 00:41:918 (5) -
01:25:605 (1,1) - ctrl+G, because the music doesn't warrant this big of a jump

[Light Insane]

00:12:293 (2) - curve should be more smaller like this: https://puu.sh/rL8ii/1507e00cb2.png
00:15:480 (5) - move down to (88, 216) to avoid overlap with 00:14:543 (2) -
00:44:824 (3,4) - stack like this for clarity: https://puu.sh/rL8Ag/f42e3e1887.png
00:47:168 (1,1,1) - this type of overlap should be fixed, since it causes confusion IMO. 00:48:855 (2,3,4) - this type of overlap is totally fine, as it fits with the music.
01:01:793 (8,9) - move down a little to (304, 328) and (332, 328) for smoother curve

Frost's Insane is great! Can't find anything to nitpick on.
Dream and Light Insane have jumps that can be structured into better-looking patterns, and a lot of overlaps in it seem unnecessary and make the maps look less clean.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-10-16T21:16:39+00:00

samcircus wrote:
NM from my queue

[Dream]
00:10:793 (6,7,8,9,1) - rotate by 9 degrees - i wanna keep them fully horizontal, but it looks kinda messy since i moved (5) before, i think i fixed
00:15:293 (5) - stack this on top of 00:15:668 (1) - for better looks - stacked on (1) tail
00:15:480 (6) - move down a little to give it more space from 00:15:105 (4) - - moved a bit closer to (5) instead
00:16:793 (3) - stack this on top of 00:17:168 (1) - - i like how that overlap looks
00:17:543 (2,3,4,5) - make square: https://puu.sh/rL6tx/b01fc0d41c.png - (5) would be so far from (6), keep the current pattern
00:18:293 (6,7,1) - space like this: https://puu.sh/rL6ww/1e83c6ebd2.png - will keep the overlap for now
00:19:230 (3) - move this to (320, 208) - yeah
00:26:730 (3) - move down to (279, 321) - moved
00:29:918 (4) - move up to (328, 164) to avoid overlap with 00:28:793 (5) - - fixed
00:34:980 (6) - overlap with 00:35:355 (2) - doesn't look good - fixed i think, or at least it looks better :p
00:36:105 (1,2) - idk if these should be stacked - for me at least i hear a volumen increase from 00:36:293 - so the first 2 notes stacked makes sense
00:39:105 (6) - move left slightly to (184, 256) - wanna keep the ds constant
00:39:480 (2) - move up to (312, 101) for better flow? - yeah
00:40:230 (3) - move to (368, 256) to avoid overlap with 00:40:793 (5) - - that overlap looks good for me
00:40:605 (4) - move to (208, 192) for better flow and stack with 00:41:918 (5) - - keep for now
01:25:605 (1,1) - ctrl+G, because the music doesn't warrant this big of a jump - right, stacked on 01:24:668 (1) - to nerf the jump and keep the pattern
[Light Insane]
00:12:293 (2) - curve should be more smaller like this: https://puu.sh/rL8ii/1507e00cb2.png - yeah changed
00:15:480 (5) - move down to (88, 216) to avoid overlap with 00:14:543 (2) - - i feel the jump kinda forced that way, moved (2) a bit down instead
00:44:824 (3,4) - stack like this for clarity: https://puu.sh/rL8Ag/f42e3e1887.png - nice
00:47:168 (1,1,1) - this type of overlap should be fixed, since it causes confusion IMO. 00:48:855 (2,3,4) - this type of overlap is totally fine, as it fits with the music. - i dont think it is confusing, sice the nc on every overlap gives a better reading on them imo
01:01:793 (8,9) - move down a little to (304, 328) and (332, 328) for smoother curve - fixed
Frost's Insane is great! Can't find anything to nitpick on.
Dream and Light Insane have jumps that can be structured into better-looking patterns, and a lot of overlaps in it seem unnecessary and make the maps look less clean.

thanks for the mod!!! :3

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Mun 2016-10-18T21:56:09+00:00

Yo! Here from my queue with hitsound edits.

A side note: I think your offset is late. Try 860. It was very disorienting to play this map as an acc player, as I was getting tons of 100s (being early) on such a low-OD map.

http://puu.sh/rNAUG/e54bed6090.osz is the full edit. The only diff contained in this osz is a hitsounding diff with the note placement of your [Dream] difficulty, you can copy these hitsounds over pretty easily. (If you don't have hitsound copier, t/131540 has what you're looking for)

In the rest of this post, I'll drop the individual parts, in case you want to apply the hitsounds yourself.

http://puu.sh/rNBa7/b01869acbe.rar contains all of the hitsounding .wav files I added.

Daisuke - Moshimo (TV Size) (missa1912) {Dream}

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 80734,82234,82797,83172,83734
DistanceSpacing: 4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:hitsounding diff
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuuden shippuden opening op 12 Frost b_r_o_k_e_n broken O-Moei
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.4
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Originally, hitsounds weren't fitting, and they also weren't consistent. I hope this remedies that, but if there are any parts you object to, feel free to change or remove them.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-10-19T15:46:53+00:00

Mun wrote:

Yo! Here from my queue with hitsound edits.

A side note: I think your offset is late. Try 860. It was very disorienting to play this map as an acc player, as I was getting tons of 100s (being early) on such a low-OD map. - willl recheck the offset later

http://puu.sh/rNAUG/e54bed6090.osz is the full edit. The only diff contained in this osz is a hitsounding diff with the note placement of your [Dream] difficulty, you can copy these hitsounds over pretty easily. (If you don't have hitsound copier, t/131540 has what you're looking for) - the drum samples sounds amazing >w> , but the soft ones x.x, after some resources i found a soft clap that i like and your drum samples, seems finally a solid hitsounding ;a;

In the rest of this post, I'll drop the individual parts, in case you want to apply the hitsounds yourself.

http://puu.sh/rNBa7/b01869acbe.rar contains all of the hitsounding .wav files I added.

Daisuke - Moshimo (TV Size) (missa1912) {Dream}

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 80734,82234,82797,83172,83734
DistanceSpacing: 4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:hitsounding diff
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuuden shippuden opening op 12 Frost b_r_o_k_e_n broken O-Moei
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.4
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Originally, hitsounds weren't fitting, and they also weren't consistent. I hope this remedies that, but if there are any parts you object to, feel free to change or remove them.

Thanks a lot, this was really helpful :3

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-10-23T20:33:16+00:00

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I recommend that you fix this:
Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
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Abbreviation Legend

Difficulty Settings:

HP bar - Health Points bar
CS - Circle Size
AR - Approach Rate
OD - Overall Difficulty
SL - Stack Leniency

SV - Slider Velocity
SM - Slider Multiplier
STR - Slider Tick Rate

DS - Distance Spacing
BSD - Beat Snap Divisor

Design:
CC - Combo Colour (e.g. CC1, CC2, CC3,...)
BG - Background

Other:
ApC - Approach Circle
CP - Combo Pattern
SR - Star Rating

General
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There is a clearly visible gap between Normal and Hard. Not just SR wise but also the mapping differences add a huge difficulty jump. When comparing E to N, it's a gradual increase of difficulty level. It's the same with H and Light I. They gradually increase in level but when looking at N to H and comparing these two, the jump is big. From difficulty to difficulty, they gradually increase in level except these two. Normal is obviously very consistent and slow paced whereas Hard has several spacing variations and is paced a lot faster. In addition, Hard has a SV of 1,4 while Normal has 1,00 and Light Insane has 1,3, which I can't quite understand. Not to mention the huge difficulty settings spikes. Especially CS, OD and AR. This should be looked into before this goes further into ranking process.
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Easy
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:50:168 (1,2) - Only a blanket that could be polished a bit more. Ctrl + G on the 1/1 slider and then use the ApC as guideline to make the blanket better. Ctrl + G the 1/1 slider after. http://puu.sh/rSQl3/4b486563de.jpg

Normal
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:14:168 (3) - Moving this a bit more to the left would make the flow a little better. Try 358/301
00:37:418 (1,3) - Slider gap blanket could be polished up a bit. It doesn't look so neat right now http://puu.sh/rSQuo/d61a0b7e93.jpg

Other Issues:
00:13:418 (2,4) - Not 100% stacked as intended.
What I really noticed from the KIAI til the end is that you placed your elements all into a clockwise circle. That get's bland after a while. Highlight 00:50:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - and you'll see what I mean. Going into a different direction sometimes wouldn't be wrong. It would make gameplay more interesting. It's nothing that would be in the way of ranking this but keep it in mind for future mapping.

Hard
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

01:12:668 (1,2,3) - Placing them all in one spot blocks the gameplay a bit since everything else was pretty fluent. Try a trianlge pattern maybe
Stack 00:34:980 (6) - with 00:35:168 (1) - to make the flow better and also less blocky ^ It will make better transitions between the patterns. Same with 00:52:980 (6,1) - 00:55:230 (3,4) - 01:16:980 (5,1) - (for reference 00:55:980 (6,1) - 00:56:918 (2,3,1,2,3) - plays a lot smoother)

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:19:605 - There's a strong drum here that should be mapped. (If you agree make the 3 circles into a triangle pattern or smth similar maybe like this http://puu.sh/rT3ka/32a1fced3c.jpg. It would play nicer. Totally up to you how you'd arrange them)

Spacing:
00:06:105 (3,4,5) - Imo, they should have consistently spaced jumps since they are mapped to the drums and the drums sound the same.

Combo Pattern:
01:10:418 (1) - Remove NC for consistency

Light Insane
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This "light" Insane is not a "light" Insane. It's a normal 08/15 Insane. Why complicate things? That's just silly. Whoever says otherwise doesn't know how to handle their difficulty level naming.

Rhythm & Pattern:

00:02:730 (5,6,7) - I know you want to emphasise the vocal with the jump from 5 to 6 but after that the 6 to 7 spacing just doesn't fit. Stack 7 with the slider end of 6 and make a downbeat jump like you intended between 00:03:480 (7,1) -
00:01:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you really want to follow the vocals and add emphasis here then 00:02:168 (2,3) - should be reversed as 00:02:168 (2) - is on the downbeat and also a much higher tone than these two 00:01:980 (1,3) - so it would only be reasonable to have the jump from 1 to 2. The pattern 00:01:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - would fit to the vocals 100%.
00:06:668 (1,2) - and 00:07:230 (3,4) - have the same drum sounds but the jumps are different. Doesn't really make sense.
00:08:543 (2,3) - According to the guitar that this is mapped to, that jump between 2 and 3 shouldn't exist. At the end of the slider is the highest pitch of the guitar. To emphasise that, there would have to be a different pattern and rhythm. Placing a jump between 00:08:543 (2,3) - is wrong because the music isn't strong enough at this point so it shouldn't be emphasised. So when focusing on what you want to map to and adding emphasis appropriately, this rhythm 00:08:543 (2,3,4) - should be this one instead http://puu.sh/rT49o/eaa8eccf4f.jpg and have a jump between 2 and 3. I hope you can comprehend and apply what I'm trying to tell you.
00:15:293 (4,5) - When listening to the vocal, the circles should be a slider. It's sung as 1 element, barely separate. Same like here 00:14:168 (1,2,3) - it fits much better. For reference: 00:20:918 (3,4) - works better as 2 circes because it supports the vocals more.
00:36:105 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 00:59:730 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 01:06:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - That's too long and hard for a "light" Insane. Simplify it to make it appropriate for this level.
00:19:418 (3,4) - 00:20:918 (3,4) - The vocal intonation is exactly the same, yet the spacing for each of these is different which makes no sense to me. And then you have 00:25:418 (3,4) - 00:26:543 (2,3) - 00:27:293 (5,6) - consistent.
00:29:168 (1,2) - This jump also doesn't fit. Nothing to emphasise. There are many of these in this difficulty. Idk why you place most of them so randomly when there are clearly so many vocals and drums that could be emphasised instead.

Spacing:
00:38:730 (2,3,4) - No. Please don't use such spacing for such a difficulty level. It's not appropriate. Aside from that, the whole pattern isn't appropriate for this difficulty level either. It's way too challenging. Try to replace this with something that fits this level. Change also on 01:06:668 (1,2,3,1) -

Combo Pattern:
01:25:605 (1) - Redundant NC.

Insane
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:18:668 (1,2,3,4) - The flow is breaking here that's due to this slider's shape 00:18:668 (1) - and the cursor redirection from left to right between 00:18:668 (1,2) - While 00:17:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - had a circular movement, 00:18:668 (1,2,3) - plays weird. Play around with this a bit to make it better.

Rhythm & Pattern:
I feel like you placed your jumps randomly in some places. A lot of them don't really emphasise vocals or instruments. Some parts where you mapped to vocal in particular should be less jumpy cus it doesn't support the music. When the parts are less intense, the mapping should be as well. Namely 00:13:605 (4,5) - 00:14:543 (2,3,4) - 00:26:543 (3,4) - 00:34:418 (3,4,1) - 00:40:980 (4,1) - 00:43:980 (1,2,3) -

Spacing:
00:00:480 (1,2,3) - That's not properly readable because you used the same spacing for 1/4 and 1/2 elements. I suggest you move the 1/4 slider closer to the 1/1 slider to avoid this. It's highly irritating. (Same between 00:41:730 (5,6) - 00:42:480 (8,1) - / 00:38:543 (2,3,4) - 00:39:668 (1,2) - )
00:24:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Why.. Either make them have the same spacing, make 1 full stream consisting of circles or 1 full stream of sliders but this plays just awful with the slider jump. 00:36:105 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Plays so much nicer.

Hitsounds:
00:18:293 - Clap missing? 00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:23:168 (1,2,3,4) - 00:35:543 (3) - Try only using the drum sound on the head and tails of the sliders and not have it through that whole section. The sliderbody sound doesn't fit very well as it makes a clearly audible change between 00:22:793 (4,1) - . Although, honestly, the drum hitsounds don't fit so well to the song.

Combo Pattern:
00:11:730 (1,1) - 00:49:230 (1,1) - The NCs are not necessary. The spacing is the same. Don't spam for no reason.
01:25:605 (1,2) - NC swap because the jump is between those and not 01:25:230 (1,1) - and also because the slider is SV changed.

Other Issues:
00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - According to Fycho, this is classed as Extra stream and thus unrankable :^) It's nonesense but mentioning it anyway to make you aware.

Extra
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:23:730 (4,5) - Reversing these would flow a lot better since 00:23:168 (1,2,3) - is also circular movement. Same 00:26:730 (3,4) -

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:13:043 (2,3) - 00:13:793 (5,6) - They should have the same spacing honestly. The music is the same on these but the spacing isn't. That's better 00:14:543 (2,3,4,5,6) - . Think about it.
00:36:105 (1,2,3) - The stacking and unstacking combo is hard to play for a stream. Consider unstacking for smoother gameplay.

Spacing:
00:44:543 (2,3,4) - 00:41:168 (1,2,3) - 00:43:230 (3,4,5) - You mix your triples and stream spacing so randomly it's hard to read them when you have so many different kinds. 00:44:543 (2,3,4) - That one in particular should be addressed.
00:59:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 01:02:543 (2,3,4) - 01:05:543 (2,3,4) - 01:14:543 (3,4,5) - ^

Combo Pattern:
00:30:105 (1) - 00:47:730 (1,1) - 01:09:293 (1) - 01:10:793 (1) - 01:12:293 (1) - 01:19:043 (1,1) - 01:21:293 (1) - 01:24:293 (1) - NC not necessary. Remove it. They don't serve as indicators and are merely spam and only break your CP. It's perfectly readable and also reasonable without. For reference on the unncecessary stream NCs: 00:07:793 (6) - 00:10:793 (6) - you didn't have them here either and it worked fine. I get that the streams have different spacing but nonetheless, they are readable without NC.

Overall
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Honestly, the Light Insane, Insane and Extra need more work. The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard also needs to be addressed. A lot of jumps don't make sense in places where there are no strong instruments or vocals with higher pitch to emphasise. The hitsounding needs a bit more work too. Good luck ~

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Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-10-23T22:04:04+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Insane

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:18:668 (1,2,3,4) - The flow is breaking here that's due to this slider's shape 00:18:668 (1) - and the cursor redirection from left to right between 00:18:668 (1,2) - While 00:17:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - had a circular movement, 00:18:668 (1,2,3) - plays weird. Play around with this a bit to make it better. Made the transition more curvy.

Rhythm & Pattern:
I feel like you placed your jumps randomly in some places. A lot of them don't really emphasise vocals or instruments. Some parts where you mapped to vocal in particular should be less jumpy cus it doesn't support the music. When the parts are less intense, the mapping should be as well. Namely 00:13:605 (4,5) - Shortened. 00:14:543 (2,3,4) - Shortened. 00:26:543 (3,4) - The high-pitched sounds in the background fit this spacing increase nicely, imo. 00:34:418 (3,4,1) - Increased the spacing between the sliders a bit? These aren't jumps lol, but I guess they can be a bit more intense. 00:40:980 (4,1) - I don't see a problem here. 00:43:980 (1,2,3) - I don't see a problem here.

Spacing:
00:00:480 (1,2,3) - That's not properly readable because you used the same spacing for 1/4 and 1/2 elements. I suggest you move the 1/4 slider closer to the 1/1 slider to avoid this. It's highly irritating. Moved slightly closer, but the extra spacing is for extra emphasis on the note after the kickslider. (Same between 00:41:730 (5,6) - 00:42:480 (8,1) - Adjusted slightly. / 00:38:543 (2,3,4) - 00:39:668 (1,2) - Adjusted slightly. )
00:24:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Why.. Either make them have the same spacing, make 1 full stream consisting of circles or 1 full stream of sliders but this plays just awful with the slider jump. 00:36:105 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Plays so much nicer. All of these seem like more subjective issues. I love the way that these play, and I've never seen playtesters get too surprised by them/miss them. As for the spacing differences, the slider velocities are quite different, and the stream spacing was adjusted accordingly.

Hitsounds:
00:18:293 - Clap missing? 00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fixed.
00:23:168 (1,2,3,4) - 00:35:543 (3) - Try only using the drum sound on the head and tails of the sliders and not have it through that whole section. The sliderbody sound doesn't fit very well as it makes a clearly audible change between 00:22:793 (4,1) - . Although, honestly, the drum hitsounds don't fit so well to the song. Eh, I lowered the volume slightly in areas of sudden change. The drums fit in some occasions, but it's all kinda dependent on your skin's hitsounds while playing lol.

Combo Pattern:
00:11:730 (1,1) - 00:49:230 (1,1) - The NCs are not necessary. The spacing is the same. Don't spam for no reason. Pretty hostile, I like it.
01:25:605 (1,2) - NC swap because the jump is between those and not 01:25:230 (1,1) - and also because the slider is SV changed. In both of these instances, I chose to NC where I did for the sake of playability. Especially in the second suggestion, applying the changes you suggest feels incredibly awkward (at least for me?). The NC allows for a delayed reaction time because of the lack of follow points between notes, which is why I applied the NCs where I did. This has come up at least once or twice before, and I remain unchanged in my opinion on it. I moved the SV change to the note instead of the slider to hopefully stop most of the complaints on this.

Other Issues:
00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - According to Fycho, this is classed as Extra stream and thus unrankable :^) It's nonesense but mentioning it anyway to make you aware. That really is nonsense lol. It's not even that difficult, considering there's only 9 clicks in the stream part and one on the kickslider, and they're incredibly densely spaced. The kickslider even SHORTENS the length of the stream. Maybe Fycho should use streams more in their maps instead of non-stop cross-screen jumps. /me runs (sorry for trigger in advance)

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missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-10-24T03:52:12+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:

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Includes a suggestion / Suggestion:
I recommend that you fix this:
Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:
Abbreviation Legend
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Abbreviation Legend
Difficulty Settings:

HP bar - Health Points bar
CS - Circle Size
AR - Approach Rate
OD - Overall Difficulty
SL - Stack Leniency

SV - Slider Velocity
SM - Slider Multiplier
STR - Slider Tick Rate

DS - Distance Spacing
BSD - Beat Snap Divisor

Design:
CC - Combo Colour (e.g. CC1, CC2, CC3,...)
BG - Background

Other:
ApC - Approach Circle
CP - Combo Pattern
SR - Star Rating

General
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There is a clearly visible gap between Normal and Hard. Not just SR wise but also the mapping differences add a huge difficulty jump. When comparing E to N, it's a gradual increase of difficulty level. It's the same with H and Light I. They gradually increase in level but when looking at N to H and comparing these two, the jump is big. From difficulty to difficulty, they gradually increase in level except these two. Normal is obviously very consistent and slow paced whereas Hard has several spacing variations and is paced a lot faster. In addition, Hard has a SV of 1,4 while Normal has 1,00 and Light Insane has 1,3, which I can't quite understand. Not to mention the huge difficulty settings spikes. Especially CS, OD and AR. This should be looked into before this goes further into ranking process. - I agree on the SV, but others are fine imo, in CS easy has 3, normal 3.5 and hard 4, after that i dont see any problem on use another size tbh (3.6 on Li, 3.8 on insane), same with OD
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Easy
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:50:168 (1,2) - Only a blanket that could be polished a bit more. Ctrl + G on the 1/1 slider and then use the ApC as guideline to make the blanket better. Ctrl + G the 1/1 slider after. http://puu.sh/rSQl3/4b486563de.jpg - fixed
Light Insane
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This "light" Insane is not a "light" Insane. It's a normal 08/15 Insane. Why complicate things? That's just silly. Whoever says otherwise doesn't know how to handle their difficulty level naming. - hmmm probably i should rename the diff to just "insane", i put "light" on it cuz when i just finish it was 3.89* but now is 4* so the "light" part is probably no needed anymore

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:02:730 (5,6,7) - I know you want to emphasise the vocal with the jump from 5 to 6 but after that the 6 to 7 spacing just doesn't fit. Stack 7 with the slider end of 6 and make a downbeat jump like you intended between 00:03:480 (7,1) - - ohhh, fixed
00:01:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you really want to follow the vocals and add emphasis here then 00:02:168 (2,3) - should be reversed as 00:02:168 (2) - is on the downbeat and also a much higher tone than these two 00:01:980 (1,3) - so it would only be reasonable to have the jump from 1 to 2. The pattern 00:01:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - would fit to the vocals 100%. - i totally ignore that downbeat tbh, fixed and also added a NC there cuz i forgot to
00:06:668 (1,2) - and 00:07:230 (3,4) - have the same drum sounds but the jumps are different. Doesn't really make sense. - changed to be the same DS
00:08:543 (2,3) - According to the guitar that this is mapped to, that jump between 2 and 3 shouldn't exist. At the end of the slider is the highest pitch of the guitar. To emphasise that, there would have to be a different pattern and rhythm. Placing a jump between 00:08:543 (2,3) - is wrong because the music isn't strong enough at this point so it shouldn't be emphasised. So when focusing on what you want to map to and adding emphasis appropriately, this rhythm 00:08:543 (2,3,4) - should be this one instead http://puu.sh/rT49o/eaa8eccf4f.jpg and have a jump between 2 and 3. I hope you can comprehend and apply what I'm trying to tell you. - idk why i ignore that guitar sound, when i put a clap theres to "emphasize" lol, fixed as you suggested
00:15:293 (4,5) - When listening to the vocal, the circles should be a slider. It's sung as 1 element, barely separate. Same like here 00:14:168 (1,2,3) - it fits much better. For reference: 00:20:918 (3,4) - works better as 2 circes because it supports the vocals more. - right, changed
00:36:105 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 00:59:730 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 01:06:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - That's too long and hard for a "light" Insane. Simplify it to make it appropriate for this level. - i change the name to insane so will keep this, also bpm isnt that high and spacing is not that much to be too hard
00:19:418 (3,4) - 00:20:918 (3,4) - The vocal intonation is exactly the same, yet the spacing for each of these is different which makes no sense to me. And then you have 00:25:418 (3,4) - 00:26:543 (2,3) - 00:27:293 (5,6) - consistent. - 00:20:918 (3,4) - has a different emphasize than the ones before, so the spacing increase makes sense, at least for me it does
00:29:168 (1,2) - This jump also doesn't fit. Nothing to emphasise. There are many of these in this difficulty. Idk why you place most of them so randomly when there are clearly so many vocals and drums that could be emphasised instead. - fixed

Spacing:
00:38:730 (2,3,4) - No. Please don't use such spacing for such a difficulty level. It's not appropriate. Aside from that, the whole pattern isn't appropriate for this difficulty level either. It's way too challenging. Try to replace this with something that fits this level. Change also on 01:06:668 (1,2,3,1) - - i agree on the kick slider, but the drum roll at that moment is so weird tbh, starts at blue tick and other than this pattern would so hard to play or just dont fit at all, no change at 01:06:668 (1,2,3,1) - the spacing doesnt feel that much with those sliders tbh, and the stream afterwards fit really well imo

Combo Pattern:
01:25:605 (1) - Redundant NC. - yeah, removed also 00:12:105 (1,2) -
Extra
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:23:730 (4,5) - Reversing these would flow a lot better since 00:23:168 (1,2,3) - is also circular movement. Same 00:26:730 (3,4) - - nice, fixed

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:13:043 (2,3) - 00:13:793 (5,6) - They should have the same spacing honestly. The music is the same on these but the spacing isn't. That's better 00:14:543 (2,3,4,5,6) - . Think about it. - right, remade the spacing in there, should be better
00:36:105 (1,2,3) - The stacking and unstacking combo is hard to play for a stream. Consider unstacking for smoother gameplay. - theres only 2 notes stacked, that should be fine imo

Spacing:
00:44:543 (2,3,4) - 00:41:168 (1,2,3) - 00:43:230 (3,4,5) - You mix your triples and stream spacing so randomly it's hard to read them when you have so many different kinds. 00:44:543 (2,3,4) - That one in particular should be addressed. - fixed(? idk
00:59:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - - removed the slider in here to make the stream nicer 01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 01:02:543 (2,3,4) - 01:05:543 (2,3,4) - 01:14:543 (3,4,5) - ^ - will keep last 3, plays fine imo

Combo Pattern:
00:30:105 (1) - 00:47:730 (1,1) - -keep this ones, makes the pattern easier to read 01:09:293 (1) - 01:10:793 (1) - 01:12:293 (1) - 01:19:043 (1,1) - - keep this ones 01:21:293 (1) - 01:24:293 (1) - NC not necessary. Remove it. They don't serve as indicators and are merely spam and only break your CP. It's perfectly readable and also reasonable without. For reference on the unncecessary stream NCs: 00:07:793 (6) - 00:10:793 (6) - you didn't have them here either and it worked fine. I get that the streams have different spacing but nonetheless, they are readable without NC. - no commented ones = fixed, mostly of those nc where there just because i dont like long combos, but its correct some of them are unnecessary
Overall
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Honestly, the Light Insane, Insane and Extra need more work. The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard also needs to be addressed. A lot of jumps don't make sense in places where there are no strong instruments or vocals with higher pitch to emphasise. The hitsounding needs a bit more work too. Good luck ~
Please include the code below in your mod reply and use the free space to give me additional feedback about my mod. (How you liked it, your thoughts about my mod, what I could do better, what I could include or exclude, anything that I should look into with more detail ... ). It will help me to improve my future mods. Any constructive feedback is appreciated. Thanks

Additional Feedback

What I liked: icons, the different sections in each mod aspect, explanations
What I disliked: answer this code madness D:
What you could improve: hmmm.. nothing to say, really impresive modding format tbh

Thanks for the mod!!! :3

Last edited by missa1912 2016-10-25T04:41:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-10-25T02:24:49+00:00

FailureAtOsu wrote:
from q
Hard
00:49:605 (4,5,1) - stacks like this are a pet peeve of mine, just personal tho no chanage
01:27:480 (1) - put it in the very middle? small thing i'd like for aesthetic might as well
The set is nice and polished. Sorry for short mod (but it's a NM so whatever xd)

took me a month to reply to this o_o, sorry mod was quite short so I didn't want to reply to it yet haha

BounceBabe wrote:
Hard

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
01:12:668 (1,2,3) - Placing them all in one spot blocks the gameplay a bit since everything else was pretty fluent. Try a trianlge pattern maybe I have no idea why I have it as 3 single note, changed into a 1/1 slider
Stack 00:34:980 (6) - with 00:35:168 (1) - to make the flow better and also less blocky ^ It will make better transitions between the patterns. Same with 00:52:980 (6,1) - 00:55:230 (3,4) - 01:16:980 (5,1) - (for reference 00:55:980 (6,1) - 00:56:918 (2,3,1,2,3) - plays a lot smoother) sure, actually looks better now

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:19:605 - There's a strong drum here that should be mapped. (If you agree make the 3 circles into a triangle pattern or smth similar maybe like this http://puu.sh/rT3ka/32a1fced3c.jpg. It would play nicer. Totally up to you how you'd arrange them) I have thought about mapping the drum, but I personally felt like it was a bit weird of translation into the drum when I was having it as single notes for the vocals, I'll consider changing it

Spacing:
00:06:105 (3,4,5) - Imo, they should have consistently spaced jumps since they are mapped to the drums and the drums sound the same. note 00:06:293 (4) - sounds a bit weaker to me and sounds a bit different compare to note 00:06:105 (3,5) - I'll consider doing it same distance if another mod suggest it, it does looks a bit weird going from a bigger distance into a smaller and then into another bigger distance

Combo Pattern:
01:10:418 (1) - Remove NC for consistency ops prob an error on my part haha, fixed

Update

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Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-10-25T11:59:51+00:00

okok. Ill use some taps to increase my star rating

All fixed

except the stack. It already stacked

http://puu.sh/rV0hK/819f347240.osu

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-10-26T10:27:44+00:00

Hey there!
Sorry for being late on the Weekly Lottery Queue

To everybody who is making Easy - Hard I forgot to mention within the mods: Keep in mind most suggestions are there to be more friendly towards the people this is directed to, if you think something plays fine because you think it's fine doesn't mean that beginners will think the same way as you

[Easy]

00:09:668 (3,4) - This was most likely placed intentionally this way to make 00:11:168 (4) - different but the visual flow is really off on this
00:09:668 (3) - NC? Since you NCed every 2 measures, this one should be consistent too, even if the combo only goes to 2
00:25:793 (2,3,4) - There is no reason really to end the sliders on downbeats. The vocals on the end of the sliders aren't really less intense than the vocals on the slider heads so the downbeats should be prioritized
00:27:668 (1) - Why not make this a more complicated slider shape? This straight slider looks really plain in comparison to the song
00:38:543 (2,3) - Again, I don't see a reason for the slider ending on a downbeat, especially when the vocal there is stronger than the vocal on the slider head
00:50:918 (2) - Same as above, these slider end on downbeats make no sense to me, the vocal is definitely more intense on the downbeat so that should be clickable
01:02:168 (1,2,3,4) - Why isn't this consistent with this 00:50:168 (1,2,3,4) - ? There is no reason as to why not.
01:11:168 (3) - 01:23:168 (3) - Same about the NC as above

[Moei's Normal]

Hai O-Moei o/
Where is the video?
Just something I noticed, your flow looks really edgy right now, consider making some points flow more smooth (like here 00:13:418 (2,3,4) - , all are straight slider, doesn't flow so good for beginners and looks really off)
00:04:418 (2,3) - Just for the aesthetics, why not blanket these?
00:15:293 (4) - There should be a 1/2 slider here imo since the song gets a bit more intense
00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not continue the 1/1 slider pattern like here 00:24:668 (1,2,3,4) - ? Would fit better here imo because the song doesn't get much more intense to add a diff spike
00:36:668 (8,1) - Switch NC to be consistent with the NC every 2 measures
00:40:418 (1) - It's not good to ignore the vocals here with this long slider, this part deserves to be mapped, even for a normal
00:46:418 (3) - What is this consistently snapped too? The head has no vocal but the tail does, so this feels weird
00:54:668 (4,5) - A 1/1 slider + 1/2 hitcircle would fit here more since the vocal is held here for a beat
01:09:293 (3,4,7,8) - I'd just stack this with the sliders after the hitcircles, because the hitcircles not being stacked gives for an unfitting diff spike

[B r o k e n's Hard]

Hai B r o k e n o/
The flow was really weird on this one, I felt like it was way too edgy and a bit messy, sorry if I sound offending
00:00:668 (2,4) - This blanket looks really untidy because it overlaps the other slider and 00:00:668 (2) - is reaally close to the tail of 00:01:418 (4) -
00:05:730 (2,3,4) - This sequence is really confusing because the distance between 00:05:730 (2,3) - and 00:06:105 (3,4) - is the same, yet the time between objects is different for no reason, which also brings me to this, why not map this obvious beat 00:06:293 - ?
00:09:668 (1,2,3) - Why is the DS between objects different, this 00:09:668 (1,2) - and this 00:10:043 (2,3) - have the same sounds, so why is 00:10:043 (2,3) - more emphasized?
00:18:668 (1,2,3) - For aesthetics, make 00:19:418 (3) - a bit further away from the tail of 00:18:668 (1) - . doesn't look too neat
00:21:293 (4,1) - Even if you wanted to keep constant DS here, this deserves more emphasis
00:26:918 (4,5,1) - Again, this spacing doesn't make sense, 00:27:293 (5,1) - this is more intense than 00:26:918 (4,5) - , yet 00:26:918 (4,5) - has more spacing...?
00:34:980 (6,1) - I'd unstack this because you have a triplet here 00:36:105 (3,4,5) - which looks stacked the same but is 1/4 and could be misread due to 00:34:980 (6,1) - being 1/2
00:36:668 - This SV change is unexpected, it gets noticeably less intense yet the SV increases
00:43:043 (2) - There is no held sound here but there is a long slider, why?
00:49:605 (4,5,1) - Something here has to be unstacked to be more readable, you have 1/1 and 1/2 is the same stack
00:54:293 (4,1) - More emphasis maybe?
00:55:980 (6,1) - This stack ruins the motion of the kiai if you know what I mean, I'd unstack it to make it more comfortable, this also doesn't have to be consistent with the following stacks, so the stack doesn't really need to be there
01:00:105 (4,1) - Again, maybe more emphasis here?
01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4) - This should be at least a bit consistent with 00:51:668 (1,2,3,4) - since these sound very similar rhythm-wise. But instead you make 01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4) - small jumps
01:04:230 (4,5) - And this stack kinda ruins the flow too since you have rather big jumps before, the stack feels forced
01:12:668 (1) - Again, more emphasis should be here
01:19:793 - The snares aren't hitsounded from this point on (which can be done through claps), any reasons for this?
01:26:168 (1,1) - This slider comes really suddenly since this is not expected, especially within this short amount of time between the spinner and the object

[Insane]

00:13:418 (3,4) - This antiflow movement doesn't fit with the song imo, it comes rather unexpected
00:19:043 (2,3) - Again here as above ^
00:36:668 - 00:45:668 - The jumps between this part feel bigger than the part before that, any reasons for this? This part is noticeably less intense than that part
00:50:168 (1) - This has a custom hitsound I noticed, why don't the other diffs include this (or at least wasy)?
Also, the kiai needs more consistency imo
00:50:918 (5,6) - The distance here isn't as big as DS says, this combination is really easy for this diff and feels like small forced movement. You did use this more in the kiai, but it doesn't fit here imo
00:59:730 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This stream feels really sudden because the vocals are more obvious here and doesn't really emphasize the vocals, what about two kicksliders or sth like that to make the vocals more emphasized?
01:00:480 (1,1) - I'd increase distance between objects for more readability, also, one of these NCs is rather unnecessary
01:08:730 (2,2,2) - These sliders don't fit here because they don't follow the obvious vocals here. Even if this was not meant to follow the vocals, it feels weird leaving the vocals out here
01:17:168 (1,2,3,4) - This placement doesn't represent the build up correctly since the distance between objects are pretty much the same
01:18:293 (4,1) - Also, this doesn't have the emphasis it deserves imo

I did check the other diffs and I thought they were fine generally speaking, but I do have some comments about the diffs
Frost's Insane: This diff played rather well I'd say, but some parts really played better than others, as in like, the rather big jumps at the start and the end were the only thing that made me feel like this was 4.5*

Dream: Also played fine, but I felt like it could work more on flow, emphasis and aesthetics

GL!

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-10-27T11:08:58+00:00

_DT3

_DT3 wrote:
Hey there!
Sorry for being late on the Weekly Lottery Queue

To everybody who is making Easy - Hard I forgot to mention within the mods: Keep in mind most suggestions are there to be more friendly towards the people this is directed to, if you think something plays fine because you think it's fine doesn't mean that beginners will think the same way as you
I hope mine plays really well for them (since im still playing Easies lol)

[Moei's Normal]
Hai O-Moei o/
Hello !
Where is the video?
FTW my updates always miss video >_> i hope i didnt burden miccha so much
Just something I noticed, your flow looks really edgy right now, consider making some points flow more smooth (like here 00:13:418 (2,3,4) - , all are straight slider, doesn't flow so good for beginners and looks really off)
ah okok
00:04:418 (2,3) - Just for the aesthetics, why not blanket these?
oke
00:15:293 (4) - There should be a 1/2 slider here imo since the song gets a bit more intense
y
00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not continue the 1/1 slider pattern like here 00:24:668 (1,2,3,4) - ? Would fit better here imo because the song doesn't get much more intense to add a diff spike
I think its fine like this
00:36:668 (8,1) - Switch NC to be consistent with the NC every 2 measures
okei
00:40:418 (1) - It's not good to ignore the vocals here with this long slider, this part deserves to be mapped, even for a normal
oh wow, never thought of that
00:46:418 (3) - What is this consistently snapped too? The head has no vocal but the tail does, so this feels weird
rip my headset xD
00:54:668 (4,5) - A 1/1 slider + 1/2 hitcircle would fit here more since the vocal is held here for a beat
will keep for now
01:09:293 (3,4,7,8) - I'd just stack this with the sliders after the hitcircles, because the hitcircles not being stacked gives for an unfitting diff spike
stack hmm oke
I did check the other diffs and I thought they were fine generally speaking, but I do have some comments about the diffs
Frost's Insane: This diff played rather well I'd say, but some parts really played better than others, as in like, the rather big jumps at the start and the end were the only thing that made me feel like this was 4.5*

Dream: Also played fine, but I felt like it could work more on flow, emphasis and aesthetics

GL!
Thanx

http://puu.sh/rXgeu/156960a4f2.osu

ColdTooth

1,100 posts

Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-10-27T18:56:06+00:00

Hi, from my queue. I apologize for the wait.

[Easy]

Nothing at all, very solid difficulty

[Moei's Normal]

OD4.5

00:04:418 (2) - Copy and paste 00:03:668 (1) - 's slider, would flow better imo

[B r o k e n's Hard]

00:03:668 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel like these are just too bunched up together, it's ok to have a small jump from these sliders

00:51:668 (1,2,3,4) - The shape here doesn't feel satisfying, I would put 00:52:230 (3) - at x486 y76 and 00:52:418 (4) - at x392 y28 to make it feel more appetizing.

01:27:480 (1) - remove and extend 01:26:168 (1) -

[Insane]

00:13:418 (3,4,5) - Make these into a triangle for better flow

00:45:293 (5,3,6) - fix stack

[Frost's Insane]

00:04:793 (3,5) - stack

[Dream]

AR9.3?

00:02:918 (5) - fix blanket on 00:02:543 (3) -

00:36:668 (1,4) - fix stack

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-10-28T00:21:22+00:00

_DT3 wrote:
Hey there!
Sorry for being late on the Weekly Lottery Queue

To everybody who is making Easy - Hard I forgot to mention within the mods: Keep in mind most suggestions are there to be more friendly towards the people this is directed to, if you think something plays fine because you think it's fine doesn't mean that beginners will think the same way as you

[B r o k e n's Hard]
Hai B r o k e n o/
The flow was really weird on this one, I felt like it was way too edgy and a bit messy, sorry if I sound offending I personally would love to change a lot of areas now, but due to college I'm really busy and can't make enough time to change areas
00:00:668 (2,4) - This blanket looks really untidy because it overlaps the other slider and 00:00:668 (2) - is reaally close to the tail of 00:01:418 (4) - quite a lot of complain about this blanket, changed blanket
00:05:730 (2,3,4) - This sequence is really confusing because the distance between 00:05:730 (2,3) - and 00:06:105 (3,4) - is the same, yet the time between objects is different for no reason, which also brings me to this, why not map this obvious beat 00:06:293 - ? ops, I probably removed it on my last update by mistake haha
00:09:668 (1,2,3) - Why is the DS between objects different, this 00:09:668 (1,2) - and this 00:10:043 (2,3) - have the same sounds, so why is 00:10:043 (2,3) - more emphasized? i was emphazing the guitar drag parts with more distance 00:07:230 (3) - , 00:08:730 (2) - , 00:09:293 (4,1) - , 00:10:230 (3) - no change, if it really is an issue I'll just same distance snap it
00:18:668 (1,2,3) - For aesthetics, make 00:19:418 (3) - a bit further away from the tail of 00:18:668 (1) - . doesn't look too neat might as well, small adjustment
00:21:293 (4,1) - Even if you wanted to keep constant DS here, this deserves more emphasis 1.6 distance for note 1
00:26:918 (4,5,1) - Again, this spacing doesn't make sense, 00:27:293 (5,1) - this is more intense than 00:26:918 (4,5) - , yet 00:26:918 (4,5) - has more spacing...? the vocal here 00:27:293 (5) - sounds much stronger here on this part making, so I added a small jump here to empathize it, at least this is what I believe, no change
00:34:980 (6,1) - I'd unstack this because you have a triplet here 00:36:105 (3,4,5) - which looks stacked the same but is 1/4 and could be misread due to 00:34:980 (6,1) - being 1/2 no change
00:36:668 - This SV change is unexpected, it gets noticeably less intense yet the SV increases the beat of the music changes here, so I decided to increase SV slowly across this area
00:43:043 (2) - There is no held sound here but there is a long slider, why? changed into 1/2 slider + single note, but personally I don't seem to like it like this, I think i prefer the 1/1 slider, I think i did the 1/1 slider for a better feeling of translation into the piano or something xD
00:49:605 (4,5,1) - Something here has to be unstacked to be more readable, you have 1/1 and 1/2 is the same stack no change, i personally love it like this
00:54:293 (4,1) - More emphasis maybe? yah, I believe note 1 deserves more distance
00:55:980 (6,1) - This stack ruins the motion of the kiai if you know what I mean, I'd unstack it to make it more comfortable, this also doesn't have to be consistent with the following stacks, so the stack doesn't really need to be there unstacked
01:00:105 (4,1) - Again, maybe more emphasis here?
01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4) - This should be at least a bit consistent with 00:51:668 (1,2,3,4) - since these sound very similar rhythm-wise. But instead you make 01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4) - small jumps different vocals, each tick felt like it deserve a single note here for the vocals with small jumps
01:04:230 (4,5) - And this stack kinda ruins the flow too since you have rather big jumps before, the stack feels forced the pourpose of the stack was to stop the player in a jumping motion if you know what I mean, i feel as it stack is fine as it is
01:12:668 (1) - Again, more emphasis should be here yah it does, its also on downbeat too
01:19:793 - The snares aren't hitsounded from this point on (which can be done through claps), any reasons for this? vocal, I used single notes to empathize the vocals, thats why I also ingored the sound on 01:19:605
01:26:168 (1,1) - This slider comes really suddenly since this is not expected, especially within this short amount of time between the spinner and the objectI personally believe its fine, although i thought about removing it myself, but it felt weird to ignore the sound here because it is the end of the song, no change as for now
GL!

ColdTooth wrote:
Hi, from my queue. I apologize for the wait.

[B r o k e n's Hard]

00:03:668 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel like these are just too bunched up together, it's ok to have a small jump from these slidersno change

00:51:668 (1,2,3,4) - The shape here doesn't feel satisfying, I would put 00:52:230 (3) - at x486 y76 and 00:52:418 (4) - at x392 y28 to make it feel more appetizing. adjusted

01:27:480 (1) - remove and extend 01:26:168 (1) - well....might as well I guess previous mod mention this too haha

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missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-10-28T05:53:07+00:00

_DT3 wrote:
Hey there!
Sorry for being late on the Weekly Lottery Queue - np, also late response aswell D: really busy these days x-x

To everybody who is making Easy - Hard I forgot to mention within the mods: Keep in mind most suggestions are there to be more friendly towards the people this is directed to, if you think something plays fine because you think it's fine doesn't mean that beginners will think the same way as you

[Easy]
00:09:668 (3,4) - This was most likely placed intentionally this way to make 00:11:168 (4) - different but the visual flow is really off on this - moved (2,4) to make a smother transition and keep (4) shape
00:09:668 (3) - NC? Since you NCed every 2 measures, this one should be consistent too, even if the combo only goes to 2 - i was thinking on that, but nc for only 2 objects seems off even if i want them to be consistant
00:25:793 (2,3,4) - There is no reason really to end the sliders on downbeats. The vocals on the end of the sliders aren't really less intense than the vocals on the slider heads so the downbeats should be prioritized - im not trying to map vocals at that moment, in that part major of vocal is on red ticks, and drum sounds really well tbh
00:27:668 (1) - Why not make this a more complicated slider shape? This straight slider looks really plain in comparison to the song - yeah, changed
00:38:543 (2,3) - Again, I don't see a reason for the slider ending on a downbeat, especially when the vocal there is stronger than the vocal on the slider head - same response as adove i think
00:50:918 (2) - Same as above, these slider end on downbeats make no sense to me, the vocal is definitely more intense on the downbeat so that should be clickable - ^
01:02:168 (1,2,3,4) - Why isn't this consistent with this 00:50:168 (1,2,3,4) - ? There is no reason as to why not. - yee i agree on that, changed some patterns in there
01:11:168 (3) - 01:23:168 (3) - Same about the NC as above - same as adove i guess
[Insane]
00:13:418 (3,4) - This antiflow movement doesn't fit with the song imo, it comes rather unexpected - i think it plays fine, it comes from an antiflow slider 00:13:043 (2,3) - so should be ok
00:19:043 (2,3) - Again here as above ^ - ^
00:36:668 - 00:45:668 - The jumps between this part feel bigger than the part before that, any reasons for this? This part is noticeably less intense than that part - yeah, no much vocal and intrumental part intensifies
00:50:168 (1) - This has a custom hitsound I noticed, why don't the other diffs include this (or at least wasy)? - easy has it, i think...
Also, the kiai needs more consistency imo - hmmm.. i should recheck rhythms again
00:50:918 (5,6) - The distance here isn't as big as DS says, this combination is really easy for this diff and feels like small forced movement. You did use this more in the kiai, but it doesn't fit here imo - oh, fixed
00:59:730 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This stream feels really sudden because the vocals are more obvious here and doesn't really emphasize the vocals, what about two kicksliders or sth like that to make the vocals more emphasized? - yeah, the kicksliders fit really well
01:00:480 (1,1) - I'd increase distance between objects for more readability, also, one of these NCs is rather unnecessary - is ok like that
01:08:730 (2,2,2) - These sliders don't fit here because they don't follow the obvious vocals here. Even if this was not meant to follow the vocals, it feels weird leaving the vocals out here - i dont feel like mapping vocal at that moment tbh
01:17:168 (1,2,3,4) - This placement doesn't represent the build up correctly since the distance between objects are pretty much the same - but... thats why i was trying to do D:
01:18:293 (4,1) - Also, this doesn't have the emphasis it deserves imo - right, moved, should be better
I did check the other diffs and I thought they were fine generally speaking, but I do have some comments about the diffs

Dream: Also played fine, but I felt like it could work more on flow, emphasis and aesthetics

GL!

Thanks for the mod!! :3

ColdTooth wrote:
Hi, from my queue. I apologize for the wait.

[Easy]

Nothing at all, very solid difficulty - <3

[Insane]

00:13:418 (3,4,5) - Make these into a triangle for better flow - yeah

00:45:293 (5,3,6) - fix stack - fixed

[Dream]

AR9.3? - hmmm someone says than 9.3 was to much for a 160bpm song, so i let the current one for now

00:02:918 (5) - fix blanket on 00:02:543 (3) - fixed

00:36:668 (1,4) - fix stack - fixed

Thanks for modding! :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-10-30T04:45:32+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
[Frost's Insane]

00:04:793 (3,5) - stack sure lol

yayay ay ya y ay a

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:Frost's Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuuden shippuden opening op 12 Frost b_r_o_k_e_n broken O-Moei
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:7.8
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SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-10-30T17:52:07+00:00

more naruto

general

your soft-hitclap seems too low to me

dream
00:06:105 (2,3) - a better hit-clap is needed imo
00:23:355 (2,3,4,5) - improve this pattern
00:44:543 (2) - what about replacing this by 2 circles ?
[]
it's seems to me too messy, I think it still needed some improvement especially on aesthetic and flow imo

insane
00:05:543 (5) - try to copypaste 00:05:168 (4) - and replace it, it'll surely be better aethetically
00:23:918 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - not really a good flow it forced the player to make an awkward movement imo
00:59:168 (1,2) - ^
01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you should replace it by a slider and then ctrl+shift+f to make a great stream
01:12:668 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider will fit better

easy
00:09:668 (3) - NC ?
00:11:168 (4) - why not copypaste 00:09:668 (3) - as before ?
00:47:168 (3) - ^
00:30:668 (1,4) - try to avoid this overlap
01:02:168 (1,2,3) - what about trying to ctrl+j 01:02:918 (2) - to keep a circular pattern ?
01:11:168 (3) - NC ?
01:23:168 (3) - ^
[]
that's all for me, good luck!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-10-31T00:13:59+00:00

MugiwaraSekai wrote:
more naruto - agree

general
your soft-hitclap seems too low to me - i like that, otherwise to loud really seem awkward to me
dream
00:06:105 (2,3) - a better hit-clap is needed imo - yeah, sounds kinda bad, fixed, i think
00:23:355 (2,3,4,5) - improve this pattern - yeah, make it kinda better :>
00:44:543 (2) - what about replacing this by 2 circles ? - yeah
[]
it's seems to me too messy, I think it still needed some improvement especially on aesthetic and flow imo

insane
00:05:543 (5) - try to copypaste 00:05:168 (4) - and replace it, it'll surely be better aethetically - nice, changed
00:23:918 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - not really a good flow it forced the player to make an awkward movement imo - make the spacing a little bigger to kinda fix the movement
00:59:168 (1,2) - ^ - fixed
01:01:418 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you should replace it by a slider and then ctrl+shift+f to make a great stream - nicee, looks way better
01:12:668 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider will fit better - yeah

easy
00:09:668 (3) - NC ? - i dont like nc just 2 objects, but this has ben mentioned so many times, so i changed it now
00:11:168 (4) - why not copypaste 00:09:668 (3) - as before ? - i feel like (4) need a different shape, since the sound in there is more intense/loud than the 3 before that
00:47:168 (3) - ^ - same as adove
00:30:668 (1,4) - try to avoid this overlap - fixed
01:02:168 (1,2,3) - what about trying to ctrl+j 01:02:918 (2) - to keep a circular pattern ? - i feel it kinda weird in that form, keep the current pattern
01:11:168 (3) - NC ? - keep this one, even if i want consistency on combos i dont really see a nc necesary in here
01:23:168 (3) - ^ - fix
[]
that's all for me, good luck!

Thanks for the mod!!! :3

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-10-31T01:41:42+00:00

thx

http://puu.sh/s1gTU/2a78297946.osu

CrestRising

163 posts

Joined October 2012

CrestRising 2016-11-09T01:16:58+00:00

I really like this song, so I decided to mod it.

Easy

-01:02:918 (2) A bit of a nitpick, but I don't like how this slider is pointing to the top of the grid, which is opposite of the direction of flow. Maybe change it so it curves downwards instead of upwards. Otherwise, this difficulty is pretty polished and neat.

Moei's Normal

This difficulty is also pretty polished.

Broken's Hard

-00:02:168 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern looks a bit messy to be honest. Imo, it would look better in a star-like pattern, sort of like this

but a little less sloppy.

-00:08:168 (1) I'm pretty sure this slider is supposed to be mapping the held-down guitar note, but you didn't map the same sound at 00:08:730 (2,3) with a one-beat slider as well, and this inconsistency bothers me a bit. Changing this to a half-beat slider and a circle like 00:08:730 (2,3) would be consistently mapping the drums, or changing 2 and 3 with a one-beat slider like this one would be consistently mapping the guitar, either of which are better than what you currently have now imo.

-00:15:668 (1,2,3) Imo, you should choose to either stack all half-beat circles or space them all out because trying to incorporate both stacking and spacing indicates a lack of consistency in mapping to me.

-00:28:230 (3) Maybe space this out more from 2 since you mapped the elongated vocal at 00:21:668 (1) with a jump.

-00:39:668 (1,2) I would add circles on the red ticks after these sliders, because having a break in pace with the one-beat pauses like this right when the song is building up is unfitting (also, if you're doing this to map the vocals, there are vocal sounds on the unmapped red ticks as well, so it still feels wrong in that regard.)

-00:48:855 (2) This should just be a circle since there's no sound you would want to map at 00:49:043 and you really want to emphasize the guitar here with mapping only the bare essentials.

-01:01:793 (5) I don't know why there's a jump here since I don't here anything that needs that much emphasis. If anything, its 01:02:168 (1) that deserves a jump because that's when the singer starts singing again and it indicates the start of the 2nd half of the chorus.

-01:04:418 (5) This is a lyric just like 01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4), so I really feel it should be jumped to like the rest of the star pattern and not just stacked behind 01:04:230 (4).

-01:14:730 Although it isn't a lyric, I would suggest adding a circle here since mapping every white and red tick with something but just leaving this one random tick empty breaks the pace for me when its unneeded and you're only loosely following the lyrics anyways.

-01:21:668 (1) See 00:08:168 (1)

Insane

-00:01:980 (6) I don't understand why this isn't stacked under 00:01:418 (5) like 00:00:668 (3,4) and 00:02:918 (5,6). It just seems inconsistent to me.

-00:06:668 (1,2) The distance between these too seems excessively small, especially when compared to 00:08:168 (1,2) and 00:08:730 (3,4).

-00:07:230 (3,4) ^

-00:22:230 (2,3) When pretty much every pair of half-beat sliders is blanked (like 00:14:168 (1,2)) or at least facing different directions (like 00:17:168 (1,2)), having these sliders facing the same direction is pretty inconsistent and doesn't play as well as the above examples where you can simply follow the sliders in a circle-like rotation.

-00:52:418 (5,6) It doesn't play badly, but it could play better if 5 was flipped horizontally and 6 was reversed (and maybe spaced more from 5 to keep the jump) sort of like this

because having 5 and 6 going the same direction is kind of awkward flow and not that fluid imo.

Frost's Insane

-00:01:418 (4,5) The jump at 4 doesn't need to be there since there isn't anything you would really want to emphasize there, so I would recommend to reverse selection here.

-00:13:043 (2) You seem to be emphasizing the snare sounds (the ones hit-sounded with a clap) with jumps in this verse, so it would make sense to have a jump here too.

-00:19:418 (4) This slider goes against the counter-clockwise rotation in this part of the verse, so you might want to considering swapping slider's start and end or something similar.

-00:48:293 (5) I dislike this jump here since the increase in spacing is too large and too sudden (the preceding section should at least hint at such a drastic jump with increased spacing, but it doesn't) and the beat its mapping isn't nearly as important as the guitar hit at 00:48:855 (2) yet this jump is considerably larger than that one.

The outro, starting at 01:19:605, is the section I have the most problems with. This map as a whole plays like a 4.10 star map (in fact, if you take out the outro, it is just a 4.09 star map) but then when the outro hits (which by the way is basically the same as the intro) you throw in these insane jumps that should have been in the chorus that just recklessly increase the difficulty, and when playing it I definitely wasn't expecting the jumps to be this extreme. You should heavily nerf the jumps in the outro because a .5 increase in star difficulty in ten seconds is just too much.

Dream

-00:07:230 (3) There should be a bigger jump to this circle imo since its mapping a pretty important part of the music (the guitar hit) while a simple drum hit at 00:07:605 (5), for instance, gets a much larger jump when it doesn't need it as much.

-00:21:293 (6) I would flip the slider around like this

so that it follows the clockwise motion set by 00:20:918 (4,5), and it would give more emphasis to the slider at 00:21:668 (1) since it would be reversing the flow of rotation instead of following it.

-00:26:730 (3) This lyric is pretty similar 00:27:105 (5) in terms of how they sound, so I feel the distance between this and 2 should be around the same as between 00:26:918 (4,5).

-00:36:105 (1,2) Why are these stacked and not spaced out like the rest of the stream?

-00:37:230 (3,4) These should be reversed in the timeline since you are primarily following the drums in this section and not the vocals (like how 00:40:230 (3,4) is).

-00:58:418 (5) Like 00:21:293 (6), curving this slider downward would allow it to flow more smoothly into 00:58:793 (6,7) since it would be following counter-clockwise rotation.

-01:01:418 (4,5,6,7) This looks off to me. I would move this more to the left and upwards of 1, sort of like this

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-11-09T06:54:54+00:00

CrestRising wrote:
I really like this song, so I decided to mod it. - <3

Easy
-01:02:918 (2) A bit of a nitpick, but I don't like how this slider is pointing to the top of the grid, which is opposite of the direction of flow. Maybe change it so it curves downwards instead of upwards. Otherwise, this difficulty is pretty polished and neat. - yeah, that part looks kinda bad, changed

Insane
-00:01:980 (6) I don't understand why this isn't stacked under 00:01:418 (5) like 00:00:668 (3,4) and 00:02:918 (5,6). It just seems inconsistent to me. - oh, fixed

-00:06:668 (1,2) The distance between these too seems excessively small, especially when compared to 00:08:168 (1,2) and 00:08:730 (3,4). - and that was my intention in there, make a jump coming from a blanket idk how to explain, and also if i move this i would need to ajust the stream afterwards and im lazy to do that xD

-00:07:230 (3,4) ^ - ^

-00:22:230 (2,3) When pretty much every pair of half-beat sliders is blanked (like 00:14:168 (1,2)) or at least facing different directions (like 00:17:168 (1,2)), having these sliders facing the same direction is pretty inconsistent and doesn't play as well as the above examples where you can simply follow the sliders in a circle-like rotation. - i did like that cuz music and mostly vocal start to change at that part, so i decide to make and "antiflow" pattern to to mark when the intensity start to rise

-00:52:418 (5,6) It doesn't play badly, but it could play better if 5 was flipped horizontally and 6 was reversed (and maybe spaced more from 5 to keep the jump) sort of like this because having 5 and 6 going the same direction is kind of awkward flow and not that fluid imo. - that type of rhythm is all over the kiai, i cant only change that part cuz doesnt seem different to the rest

~~will repond to this part tomorrow kinda late~~
Dream
-00:07:230 (3) There should be a bigger jump to this circle imo since its mapping a pretty important part of the music (the guitar hit) while a simple drum hit at 00:07:605 (5), for instance, gets a much larger jump when it doesn't need it as much. - both notes have the same spacing, and bigger to even bigger is not great looking tbh

-00:21:293 (6) I would flip the slider around like this so that it follows the clockwise motion set by 00:20:918 (4,5), and it would give more emphasis to the slider at 00:21:668 (1) since it would be reversing the flow of rotation instead of following it. - i kinda like the way it plays

-00:26:730 (3) This lyric is pretty similar 00:27:105 (5) in terms of how they sound, so I feel the distance between this and 2 should be around the same as between 00:26:918 (4,5). - yeah, but i dont want to move (4) and (5) will overlap so many things if i move it a bit farther, so i keep it for now

-00:36:105 (1,2) Why are these stacked and not spaced out like the rest of the stream? - cuz (2) has a sound in there, but not as intense as the rest of the notes in the stream

-00:37:230 (3,4) These should be reversed in the timeline since you are primarily following the drums in this section and not the vocals (like how 00:40:230 (3,4) is). - i did like that cuz in the song at 00:36:668 - a sound starts, kinda like a "dun, dun" in the background and (4) lands on it, so i wanted to make it clickeable

-00:58:418 (5) Like 00:21:293 (6), curving this slider downward would allow it to flow more smoothly into 00:58:793 (6,7) since it would be following counter-clockwise rotation. - i like how it plays, also (5) has that shape to kinda continue the triple of 00:58:230 (3,4,5) -

-01:01:418 (4,5,6,7) This looks off to me. I would move this more to the left and upwards of 1, sort of like this - yeah, moved

Thank you for taking the time to mod this :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-11-14T05:03:40+00:00

CrestRising wrote:
Frost's Insane
-00:01:418 (4,5) The jump at 4 doesn't need to be there since there isn't anything you would really want to emphasize there, so I would recommend to reverse selection here. Sure.

-00:13:043 (2) You seem to be emphasizing the snare sounds (the ones hit-sounded with a clap) with jumps in this verse, so it would make sense to have a jump here too. I don't think it makes too much of a difference, and I want to make the transition easier for players from the more intense section to the calmer section.

-00:19:418 (4) This slider goes against the counter-clockwise rotation in this part of the verse, so you might want to considering swapping slider's start and end or something similar. I like it.

-00:48:293 (5) I dislike this jump here since the increase in spacing is too large and too sudden (the preceding section should at least hint at such a drastic jump with increased spacing, but it doesn't) and the beat its mapping isn't nearly as important as the guitar hit at 00:48:855 (2) yet this jump is considerably larger than that one. Adjusted a bit.

The outro, starting at 01:19:605, is the section I have the most problems with. This map as a whole plays like a 4.10 star map (in fact, if you take out the outro, it is just a 4.09 star map) but then when the outro hits (which by the way is basically the same as the intro) you throw in these insane jumps that should have been in the chorus that just recklessly increase the difficulty, and when playing it I definitely wasn't expecting the jumps to be this extreme. You should heavily nerf the jumps in the outro because a .5 increase in star difficulty in ten seconds is just too much. 1) The outro is not the same as the intro in that the intro gets less and less intense as it goes on, while the outro gets more and more intense. 2) They should not have been in the chorus. I personally think that this section is much more intense than the chorus, especially the end of the outro. The chorus jumps and the jumps at the beginning of the outro aren't very different in spacing because of their similar intensities, while the end of the outro is much more spaced because of the increasing intensity.

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B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-11-15T00:45:08+00:00

CrestRising wrote:
I really like this song, so I decided to mod it.

Broken's Hard
-00:02:168 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern looks a bit messy to be honest. Imo, it would look better in a star-like pattern, sort of like this but a little less sloppy. star shape's better, adjusted

-00:08:168 (1) I'm pretty sure this slider is supposed to be mapping the held-down guitar note, but you didn't map the same sound at 00:08:730 (2,3) with a one-beat slider as well, and this inconsistency bothers me a bit. Changing this to a half-beat slider and a circle like 00:08:730 (2,3) would be consistently mapping the drums, or changing 2 and 3 with a one-beat slider like this one would be consistently mapping the guitar, either of which are better than what you currently have now imo. I personally don't really like doing 1/1 sliders from a red tick to red tick, no change, although I'll consider doing it, seems really reasonable to do

-00:15:668 (1,2,3) Imo, you should choose to either stack all half-beat circles or space them all out because trying to incorporate both stacking and spacing indicates a lack of consistency in mapping to me. I don't see an issue with this, but I'll consider doing it when I have more time to change areas

-00:28:230 (3) Maybe space this out more from 2 since you mapped the elongated vocal at 00:21:668 (1) with a jump.

-00:39:668 (1,2) I would add circles on the red ticks after these sliders, because having a break in pace with the one-beat pauses like this right when the song is building up is unfitting (also, if you're doing this to map the vocals, there are vocal sounds on the unmapped red ticks as well, so it still feels wrong in that regard.)yah you're right, changed the slider into a single note, improved distance into 1.4 for better empathizing

-00:48:855 (2) This should just be a circle since there's no sound you would want to map at 00:49:043 and you really want to emphasize the guitar here with mapping only the bare essentials.

-01:01:793 (5) I don't know why there's a jump here since I don't here anything that needs that much emphasis. If anything, its 01:02:168 (1) that deserves a jump because that's when the singer starts singing again and it indicates the start of the 2nd half of the chorus. the clapish like sound deserves emphasis becuase it's a different kind of sound that was only used during this time, although I agree with the note one slider should have more distance, adjusted

-01:04:418 (5) This is a lyric just like 01:03:480 (4,1,2,3,4), so I really feel it should be jumped to like the rest of the star pattern and not just stacked behind 01:04:230 (4). did adjustments

-01:14:730 Although it isn't a lyric, I would suggest adding a circle here since mapping every white and red tick with something but just leaving this one random tick empty breaks the pace for me when its unneeded and you're only loosely following the lyrics anyways. no change

-01:21:668 (1) See 00:08:168 (1)

sorry for late notice, no change on hitsounds

Update

osu file format v14

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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuuden shippuden opening op 12 Frost b_r_o_k_e_n broken O-Moei
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Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-11-16T06:08:19+00:00

nerfed the spacing at the end a bit (-0.07*)
doesn't change the balance of the set too much tbh so it's probably fine
~~and i won't have as many "i hate pp" complaints lmao~~

also applied new hitsounds
~~only added one finish and left the rest as it was but with the new hitsounds lmao lazy~~

osu file format v14

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zhuxiaoyan

533 posts

Joined October 2014

zhuxiaoyan 2017-02-07T11:16:38+00:00

"frost's insane"

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-02-09T23:18:57+00:00

why do i always pick maps monstrata modded fml

did you call him back ever? let me know before i check lol

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2017-02-10T00:53:27+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
why do i always pick maps monstrata modded fml

did you call him back ever? let me know before i check lol

xD
i did call him back, but he never come :c

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-02-11T08:24:33+00:00

ok

[general]
you want your offset to be -843

[dream]
00:04:219 (2) - this rhythm is kinda bad imo
00:04:407 - has a clear vocal start, so circle + slider rhythm would be better.

00:05:719 (2) - this is a bit annoying as a wide angle jump

00:07:219 (3,4) - imo instead of generic random jumps you could structure this better.
00:07:219 - 00:08:719 - 00:09:282 - 00:10:219 - all being new guitar notes, if you put sliders on them it would complement the song a lot better.

00:17:907 (4,5) - since the guitar is doing the same thing as it did in 00:17:157 (1) - this should also be a slider.

00:19:407 (4,5) - this sounds a lot better with a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7289810

00:24:657 (1,2) - is there a reason these two are not the same slider?

00:27:844 - the stronger vocal is on the red tick under the slider end. in fact, this happens quite a lot. I strongly suggest you go through the map and take a look at all the places that this happens.

00:36:657 - the rhythm here should, in my opinion, follow the guitar that is repeating a note rather audibly since there is little vocals and the guitar is the main instrument.

01:04:969 - a vocal here, better as a circle imo.

01:22:840 - re: this section, same thing with making a structure with sliders as the intro.

[Frost's insane]
00:04:219 (2) - same thing about the rhythm as the extra. this ignores a strong vocal on the white tick, so it's not a good rhythm to use imo.

00:16:219 (2,3) - this is kinda weird cuz the held out vocal is on 2, ctrl g work better imo.

00:24:094 (4) - eh this movement is weird out of a kickslider, better to point it in a different direction imo. you do this a lot, i recommend changing them all or changing none.

i don't like how you abandoned the structure you had in the first intro with the guitars in this section 01:23:714 - in favor of triangles, but i guess it kinda fits cuz the notes are in sets of 3. however, i think you should change it.

01:26:063 - mute this slider end?

[insane]

00:12:282 (5,6,7,8,1) - spacing should be consistent in the entire stream into 1 i think.

00:25:969 - new vocal on slider end

00:27:657 (1,2,3) - the rhythm here sounds better if you ctrl g these 3 notes.

00:33:657 (1) - http://puu.sh/tY7Jk/f9c49bc1e3.jpg better rhythm imo

01:01:782 - might wanna nc here or do something cool cuz of that drum hit.

01:23:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is different from the 2 measures right before it but in the song it's the same.

in all, the lower diffs are a lot cleaner than the extra. i didn't really mod it thoroughly, but if you'd like we can irc about some of its issues. i think you need to improve the extra before this moves forward.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2017-02-11T19:41:36+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
ok

[general]
you want your offset to be -843

[dream]
00:04:219 (2) - this rhythm is kinda bad imo
00:04:407 - has a clear vocal start, so circle + slider rhythm would be better. - ye, changed

00:05:719 (2) - this is a bit annoying as a wide angle jump - did some stuff in there

00:07:219 (3,4) - imo instead of generic random jumps you could structure this better.
00:07:219 - 00:08:719 - 00:09:282 - 00:10:219 - all being new guitar notes, if you put sliders on them it would complement the song a lot better. - i agree on the firts one, but the others i feel like the music is way intense to put sliders instead of jumps, like i did on insane.

00:17:907 (4,5) - since the guitar is doing the same thing as it did in 00:17:157 (1) - this should also be a slider. - i really dont see that, i keep the jumps cuz the guitar continues 00:17:907 (4,5,6) - but in 00:17:344 - theres only bass, i change it to a stack

00:19:407 (4,5) - this sounds a lot better with a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7289810 - b-but the drum at 00:19:782 - ;w;

00:24:657 (1,2) - is there a reason these two are not the same slider? - fix

00:27:844 - the stronger vocal is on the red tick under the slider end. in fact, this happens quite a lot. I strongly suggest you go through the map and take a look at all the places that this happens. - hmm changed

00:36:657 - the rhythm here should, in my opinion, follow the guitar that is repeating a note rather audibly since there is little vocals and the guitar is the main instrument. - changed

01:04:969 - a vocal here, better as a circle imo. - yes

01:22:840 - re: this section, same thing with making a structure with sliders as the intro. - same as the intro, music intense also drum and guitar

[insane]

00:12:282 (5,6,7,8,1) - spacing should be consistent in the entire stream into 1 i think. - ye, fix

00:25:969 - new vocal on slider end - it might be too much 1/2, since the vocals starts from 00:25:969 - so i wanted a less dense rhythm with some sliders

00:27:657 (1,2,3) - the rhythm here sounds better if you ctrl g these 3 notes. - it does

00:33:657 (1) - http://puu.sh/tY7Jk/f9c49bc1e3.jpg better rhythm imo - changed in a different way

01:01:782 - might wanna nc here or do something cool cuz of that drum hit. - yes

01:23:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is different from the 2 measures right before it but in the song it's the same. - opps, fix

in all, the lower diffs are a lot cleaner than the extra. i didn't really mod it thoroughly, but if you'd like we can irc about some of its issues. i think you need to improve the extra before this moves forward.

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2017-02-11T22:32:33+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
[Frost's insane]
00:04:219 (2) - same thing about the rhythm as the extra. this ignores a strong vocal on the white tick, so it's not a good rhythm to use imo. hesitant to change this bc i never followed the vocals anywhere else in this section + the vocal is actually after the white tick and is pretty noticeably off-beat

00:16:219 (2,3) - this is kinda weird cuz the held out vocal is on 2, ctrl g work better imo. fixed

00:24:094 (4) - eh this movement is weird out of a kickslider, better to point it in a different direction imo. you do this a lot, i recommend changing them all or changing none. i think it feels pretty natural because of the circular motion already established from the previous slider

i don't like how you abandoned the structure you had in the first intro with the guitars in this section 01:23:714 - in favor of triangles, but i guess it kinda fits cuz the notes are in sets of 3. however, i think you should change it. but how else will i make it an insane instead of a light insane?!?!? :thinking: (i'd prefer not to if possible because it's very high quality ofc ~~but we'll see i guess~~)

01:26:063 - mute this slider end? yea

no u

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