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Daisuke - Moshimo (TV Size)

posted 2016-05-24T19:21:46+00:00

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missa1912

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missa1912 2016-07-11T01:41:49+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM Request from my q

[General]
add "Naruto shippuden" on Tags? - "naruto" is already in the source and "shippuden" in the tags already

[Easy]
00:02:172 (3,1) - are u sure about this overlap? - idk how to fix this without make everything else a disaster ;w;
00:27:672 (1) - weird slider imo - fix(?
00:42:672 (1,2) - imperfect blanket? - fix
00:53:172 (1,2) - i think blanket would be great - yeah, fix
01:23:172 (1) - remove NC and then add NC the next one - fixed

GL ~ and sorry for my terrible english and short mod ;w; - my english is bad too ;w;

Thanks for modding!!! :3

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-11T04:46:20+00:00

Thanks for modding, -NanoRIPE- !

Green reply = Mostly appreciated
Blue reply = Commenting
Black reply= Fixed !, but not following the suggestion entirely
Red reply = Disagree

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM Request from my q punya queue? omfg !!! must have a visit wkwk

[General]
add "Naruto shippuden" on Tags?

[Normal]
00:34:797 (4) - NC? (to reduce NC) Diskusi dengan teman dan lainnya, dan NC nya disini 00:34:984 (5) -
01:11:172 (1,2,3) - hmm weird pattern imo lelelel xd

GL ~ and sorry for my terrible english and short mod ;w;

Makasih Nan !. Fixed, kecuali yg merah ituh

Update 7th \:3/

Seemed having trouble with my diff if I used rar file. Let's try use nothing

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-11T08:17:56+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM Request from my q

[Hard]
00:06:484 (5,1) - how about stacked? sure
00:26:922 (4,5) - why u make it further? (its looks weird imo) vocal sound was a bit stronger, so I added some distance, I'll consider making it the same distance
00:32:172 - make it clickable (downbeat emphatize) *think again to make it clickable all these sliders are for the entire piano sound
00:33:672 - ^ sure I'll make this clickable
00:45:672 - ^ (strong beat here) this is fine, for vocal, maybe I will change it to 2 single note stack, doesn't seem bad idea
01:06:297 (4) - why u make it curve? (since the previous object is straight sliders) did some adjustments

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14640
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
BeatmapID:991372
BeatmapSetID:460046

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-1018,"moshimo.avi"
0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-07-12T09:35:19+00:00

m4m from queue

[If]

00:10:797 (1,2,3,4,1) - could probably space this out more
00:12:672 (1) - avoid doing stuff like this in your maps, diagonal sliders look kinda ugly when used like that
00:15:484 (1,2) - doesn't really make sense to follow vocals here, should just keep on with rhythm you did from before
00:17:547 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - should place them in this order imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591198
00:43:984 (6) - kinda ugly overlap with 00:43:422 (4) -
00:53:734 (3,4,5,6) - should just make these linear
00:54:672 (1) - same for this
00:59:453 (2,3) - could just move this so that it doesn't overlap 1
01:02:828 (3,4) - same here
01:03:672 (1) - move this to the right to avoid overlaps with 01:02:922 (4) -
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unnecessary spacing, no part of the song calls for such an increase

[Light Insane]

00:00:484 - base SV is too low in my eyes, consider increasing to 0.7x maybe?
00:06:297 (2) - probably want to make the downbeat here clickable
00:18:672 (1) - reduce curve a bit?
00:27:297 (5) - would change this into slider circle to make the downbeat clickable here
00:31:422 (3) - ctrl g?
00:41:172 (5) - i would change this to 3 sliders, having a slow slider like that is kind of off putting
00:51:672 (1) - ctrl g?
00:58:422 (4) - probably want to increase that to red tick for consistency
01:04:422 (5) - move down? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591253
01:12:672 (4) - ctrlg?
01:15:672 (4) - probably want to blanket this with 01:14:922 (3) -
01:17:172 (3) - NC?
01:26:172 (6) - ^

good luck c:

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-07-12T19:24:56+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
~Frosting's Insane~
01:17:547 (1,1) - It's quite weird to have such a close spacing in this speed up section. Rather ctrl+G formation of 01:17:922 (1,1) each will work better.

AAAA I'M NOT FROSTING OR FROSTXE, I'M THE TRUE FROST >:D

this is probably the most acceptable fix, although it still messes up flow a bit
doing it just to stop hearing the complaints :V

YAH

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Last edited by Frost 2016-07-12T20:52:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-12T20:44:16+00:00

Xilver wrote:
m4m from queue

[If]

00:10:797 (1,2,3,4,1) - could probably space this out more - ok
00:12:672 (1) - avoid doing stuff like this in your maps, diagonal sliders look kinda ugly when used like that - looks ugly but plays fine so no change for now
00:15:484 (1,2) - doesn't really make sense to follow vocals here, should just keep on with rhythm you did from before - i like to do this, mix vocal with other rhythms, like: 00:21:297 (6,1,2) - or 00:28:984 (1) -
00:17:547 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - should place them in this order imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591198 - yeah
00:43:984 (6) - kinda ugly overlap with 00:43:422 (4) - fix
00:53:734 (3,4,5,6) - should just make these linear - ok
00:54:672 (1) - same for this - on this one i think is actually ok, just fixed the blaket with (1)
00:59:453 (2,3) - could just move this so that it doesn't overlap 1 - fix
01:02:828 (3,4) - same here - ^
01:03:672 (1) - move this to the right to avoid overlaps with 01:02:922 (4) - - moved
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unnecessary spacing, no part of the song calls for such an increase - that spacing increase fit really well imo

good luck c:

Thanks for modding!!!

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-07-13T22:30:40+00:00

From my Queue!
14 days ago... sorry...

Easy

00:02:172 (3,2) - Overlap ARE NOT permited on Easy diffs.
00:17:172 (3,4,5) - Really weird change of flow.
00:20:922 (4,1,2,3) - ^
00:55:047 (4,1) - Fix blanket
01:00:109 (2,3) - ^
01:17:547 (4,5,6,7) - More than 3 single taps are really hard for beginner players.

O-M's Normal

00:17:172 (3,4) - Weird change of flow
00:28:797 (3,4) - ^
00:29:734 (6,1) - ^
00:32:922 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - More than 4 continous objects are really hard for beginners
00:50:922 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
00:56:922 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:02:922 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:10:797 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^

B r o k e n's Hard

00:00:672 (2,4) - Is really necessary this overlap?.
00:01:984 (5,1,2,3,4) - Too much single ticks for a Hard diff.
00:04:047 (2,4) - Is really necessary this overlap?.
00:11:734 (2) - Add a 1/2 slider?.
00:56:922 (2) - Ctrl+G?.
01:02:734 (2,3) - Really weird change of flow.
01:11:078 (6) - Extra note.
01:27:484 (1,2,3) - Is really this so necessary?.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-13T23:11:28+00:00

Zyl wrote:
From my Queue!
14 days ago... sorry... np xD

Easy

00:02:172 (3,2) - Overlap ARE NOT permited on Easy diffs. - moved some things there, fixed i think
00:17:172 (3,4,5) - Really weird change of flow. - you are right, change it
00:20:922 (4,1,2,3) - ^ - i think this one fits really well with music
00:55:047 (4,1) - Fix blanket - ok
01:00:109 (2,3) - ^ - ^
01:17:547 (4,5,6,7) - More than 3 single taps are really hard for beginner players. - since this has been mentioned in other mods too, change it into 2 sliders

Thanks for the mod!!!

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-14T02:52:55+00:00

Thanks for modding

Green reply = Mostly appreciated
Blue reply = Fixed !, but not following the suggestion entirely
Black reply= Commenting
Red reply = Disagree

Zyl wrote:
From my Queue!
14 days ago... sorry... So missa also requesting from your Q i bet xd

O-M's Normal

00:17:172 (3,4) - Weird change of flow
Well, the blanketing have a purpose so the "experienced beginners" can read that (it's Normal, not Easy XP)
00:28:797 (3,4) - ^
Angling flow after the circle before
00:29:734 (6,1) - ^
Same as number one
00:32:922 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - More than 4 continous objects are really hard for beginners
The BN have checked this, it's fine tbh he said it's Normal diff with low bpm, not Easy diff
00:50:922 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
^
00:56:922 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
^
01:02:922 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
^
01:10:797 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
^

Thank you so much !

Ayy, nothing changed at my diff X'D/

No Update \:3/

LOL ! No update !! so why you open it?? XP

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-15T04:39:01+00:00

Whew nothing changed up there, but when I see it myself, I saw some problems so...

O-M's Normal Self Mod

Problem fixed :
1. Velocity
2. DS spacing and re-snapping

Update 9th \:3/

Huuahmm !

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-15T06:24:40+00:00

Zyl wrote:
From my Queue!
14 days ago... sorry...

B r o k e n's Hard

00:00:672 (2,4) - Is really necessary this overlap?. it is a blanket over the tail of note one, it's fine
00:01:984 (5,1,2,3,4) - Too much single ticks for a Hard diff. I did note 3 as a 1/2 slider, but I didn't like it because it didn't fit as well as the single ntoes for the vocal and piano, so this is fine as it is
00:04:047 (2,4) - Is really necessary this overlap?. this is fine, I wouldn't go as far as saying it's an overlap, talk is stack along with tail
00:11:734 (2) - Add a 1/2 slider?. I used a single note for better empathizing the sound, a slider isn't really necessary,
00:56:922 (2) - Ctrl+G?. sure
01:02:734 (2,3) - Really weird change of flow. blanket differently, I think its fine
01:11:078 (6) - Extra note. no, theirs a sound here that calls for a triple although it is fairy a weak sound
01:27:484 (1,2,3) - Is really this so necessary?thought about doing spin all the way, but I believe it's best to map the triple, I don't wanna ignore a good map able sound.

Update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
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Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2016-07-15T15:07:14+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Light insane]
00:06:672 (2) - make it clickable (downbeat epmphatize) k
00:33:672 - why u ignore this downbeat? i think it would be great if u make it clickable here I prefer to focus on vocals there
00:36:672 - the slider velocity too slow ~ maybe set to 0,90 or 0,85 I like it
00:48:109 (1) - remove NC k
01:01:797 (1) - ^ (its looks weird if u add NC on stream) Changed it to 01:01:422 (1) -
01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - hmm im not sure about this pattern (looks easy imo) try another pattern to make it harder I think This pattern is good because it's only a light insane, which means it's like an Hard +
01:14:922 (3,4) - imperfect blanket Changed
Thanks for your mod!

Xilver wrote:
[Light Insane]

00:00:484 - base SV is too low in my eyes, consider increasing to 0.7x maybe? Hmh.. I think it's better with this SV
00:06:297 (2) - probably want to make the downbeat here clickable Isn't it?
00:18:672 (1) - reduce curve a bit? Sure
00:27:297 (5) - would change this into slider circle to make the downbeat clickable here Overlap
00:31:422 (3) - ctrl g? ctrl g!
00:41:172 (5) - i would change this to 3 sliders, having a slow slider like that is kind of off putting Changed
00:51:672 (1) - ctrl g? ctrl g!
00:58:422 (4) - probably want to increase that to red tick for consistency It sounds bad qwq
01:04:422 (5) - move down? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591253 Yess
01:12:672 (4) - ctrlg? ctrl g!
01:15:672 (4) - probably want to blanket this with 01:14:922 (3) - Hmh
01:17:172 (3) - NC? Nc
01:26:172 (6) - ^ Nc
Thanks for your mod!

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CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-07-17T20:33:04+00:00

Very timely mod from my queueueu

If

00:02:359 (2,5) - If this blanket could be improved, it would look nicer :3

00:03:484 (6,1) - I think it’d be better if it was just stacked

00:06:109 (3) - This is mostly my personal preference, but how about partially overlapping 3 instead of fully stacking? ( http://puu.sh/q4ZpJ/f20064872f.jpg )

00:07:234 (3) - I think this is the sound that needs to be emphasized the most among 00:06:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . However, it has very small DS :/

00:08:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps seems much more intuitive for me in terms of emphasis compared to the last one

00:10:234 (3) - Same here, I think 3 is the one to have largest DS among 00:09:672 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -

00:17:547 (2) - Perhaps you are following some logic in placing jump DS, and I’m just not seeing it. Again, I am not sure why this strong guitar sound has such a small distance. Whether you agree or not, I think I’ve made myself clear, so I won’t write any more DS/emphasis related mod

00:19:234 (3,5,3) - I think this overlap isn’t great and easy to remove :3

00:24:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Blanket could be better. It’s slightly off now ( http://puu.sh/q4ZSl/1cb3bbc46d.jpg )

00:26:172 (1,4) - This overlap isn’t great and easy to remove :3

00:25:984 (6,1) - Minor thing, but I think sharper angle typically fits the downbeat better.

00:32:922 (5,3) - I heard some people dislikes this kind of overlap, where two circles are overlapping my few pixels ( http://puu.sh/q504r/4aa26dd55d.jpg ). Shouldn’t be difficult to remove the overlap~

00:32:734 (4,2,5,1) - 00:55:234 (3,4,7) - 01:22:797 (6,3) - 01:23:172 (1,6) - ^

00:56:734 (3,4,5,6,7) -00:58:234 (3,4,5,6,7) - Again, really minor stuff, but is there a reason for these two being very similar, yet different?

Although I didn't agree with some of the mapping decisions, it was fun map.

GL =w=/

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2016-07-17T21:03:28+00:00

Hard

00:06:297 (4) - Clap hitsound
00:11:172 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:12:672 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:41:922 (3,4) - Delete thoses, make a single note there 00:41:922 , make a slider here 00:42:109 and make two stream notes there 00:42:390 - 00:42:484. You followed the voices before, so I think it's better like this.
00:48:859 (2) - Delete the slider, make a single note there
01:01:797 (5) - Clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider

Light Insane

00:33:484 (4) - Delete that slider, breaks the rhythm. Make a 1/2 slider there 00:33:484 and a 1/2 reverse slider there 00:33:859.
00:35:734 (1) - Why the 0.5x ? and the finish hitsound ?
01:01:797 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should remove thoses, and make a 1/2 slider
01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - I find it really ugly to hear, and it doesn't fit to what you've mapped before

Sorry for modding Hard instead, I started to mod Hard because I thought it was the Light Insane diff.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-18T00:33:48+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
Very timely mod from my queueueu

If
00:02:359 (2,5) - If this blanket could be improved, it would look nicer :3 - didnt change the blanked, but i think i did something there

00:03:484 (6,1) - I think it’d be better if it was just stacked - yeah, fix

00:06:109 (3) - This is mostly my personal preference, but how about partially overlapping 3 instead of fully stacking? ( http://puu.sh/q4ZpJ/f20064872f.jpg ) - looks great, fix

00:07:234 (3) - I think this is the sound that needs to be emphasized the most among 00:06:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . However, it has very small DS :/ - fix

00:08:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps seems much more intuitive for me in terms of emphasis compared to the last one

00:10:234 (3) - Same here, I think 3 is the one to have largest DS among 00:09:672 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - - right, ctrl+g on (3,5) i think that fix this jumps

00:17:547 (2) - Perhaps you are following some logic in placing jump DS, and I’m just not seeing it. Again, I am not sure why this strong guitar sound has such a small distance. Whether you agree or not, I think I’ve made myself clear, so I won’t write any more DS/emphasis related mod - hmmm looking at this, seems than you are right

00:19:234 (3,5,3) - I think this overlap isn’t great and easy to remove :3 - moved (3) a bit to the right :3

00:24:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Blanket could be better. It’s slightly off now ( http://puu.sh/q4ZSl/1cb3bbc46d.jpg ) - fix

00:26:172 (1,4) - This overlap isn’t great and easy to remove :3 - fix

00:25:984 (6,1) - Minor thing, but I think sharper angle typically fits the downbeat better. - moved a bit

00:32:922 (5,3) - I heard some people dislikes this kind of overlap, where two circles are overlapping my few pixels ( http://puu.sh/q504r/4aa26dd55d.jpg ). Shouldn’t be difficult to remove the overlap~ - ok

00:32:734 (4,2,5,1) - 00:55:234 (3,4,7) - 01:22:797 (6,3) - 01:23:172 (1,6) - ^ - fix the first 3 the last one i think it really fits through the jumps

00:56:734 (3,4,5,6,7) -00:58:234 (3,4,5,6,7) - Again, really minor stuff, but is there a reason for these two being very similar, yet different? - didnt see that ;A; made the 2nd one a mirror of the first one
Although I didn't agree with some of the mapping decisions, it was fun map.

GL =w=/

Thanks for modding!!!!

yaleufeu wrote:
Sorry for modding Hard instead, I started to mod Hard because I thought it was the Light Insane diff.

np xD
thanks for the mod :3

B r o k e n

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Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-18T03:54:17+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
Hard
00:06:297 (4) - Clap hitsound a single clap doesn't seem too good
00:11:172 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider k
00:12:672 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider k
00:41:922 (3,4) - Delete thoses, make a single note there 00:41:922 , make a slider here 00:42:109 and make two stream notes there 00:42:390 - 00:42:484. You followed the voices before, so I think it's better like this.naw this is fine
00:48:859 (2) - Delete the slider, make a single note there ^
01:01:797 (5) - Clap hitsound on the beginning of the slidernaw, a single clap doesn't seem too good, I know it's for empathizing the clap sound, but to me it doesn't sound too good

Sorry for modding Hard instead, I started to mod Hard because I thought it was the Light Insane diff.

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14640
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
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TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
BeatmapID:991372
BeatmapSetID:460046

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2016-07-19T20:38:30+00:00

From my queue ~\o

[General]

Might want to fix that description of yours.

AR9.2 on If seems a bit overkill for a 160 bpm map, no? Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9.

Also, the correct offset might be 664, see if thats better. About the hitsounding, I recommend you look into it again, because some hitsounding don't have a consistent pattern, which makes it very weird. Other than that, everything else looks good. Onto the mod.

[If]

- 00:09:672 (1,2) - Its a bit too close, distance it a bit.

- 00:19:422 (4,5) - Control+G this pattern? It works because the slider's head isn't landing on the white tick and vocally works too.

- 01:19:047 (1,1) - Use .4 DS to space these from 01:18:672 (1) - .

[Frost's Insane]

- 00:09:672 (1,2,1,2) - Overlapping is nice sometimes, but in this case, overlapping here might not be a good idea.

- 00:33:109 (4) - Would be better if you made it into two circle notes, with 00:33:297 - stacking on top of 00:33:484 (5) - .

- 00:43:234 (2,3) - In this case, it would be better if it was just a triplet.

- 01:25:797 (2,1) - Unfortunately, this is unrankable from what I've been taught.

[ M I N A K O 's Light Insane]

- 00:01:984 (6) - Avoid this overlap, make it a triangle with 00:01:047 (4,5,6) - , then adapt the star pattern after.

- 00:21:297 (6,1) - Align it a bit better.

- 00:27:297 (5) - Would be better if you made it a 3/4 slider and added a circle note 00:27:672 - .

- 00:33:484 (4) - This reverse slider kind of just stuck out, and you missed so much in between.

- 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little bit overkill for a Light Insane. Condense the stream more.

- 01:03:672 (1,5) - Fix the blanket here please, it triggered me a little bit.

- 01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't consistently DS'd. Fix that.

- 01:10:234 (1) - Make it two circle notes, a slider just alone feels awkward.

- 01:18:672 - This section still calls for normal-hitsounds, not soft.

[Conclusion]

A very nice song, indeed. Good mapset and nice spread. It could still use some work on hitsounds and overlappings, but good Job, and good luck.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-19T22:47:29+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
From my queue ~\o

[General]

Might want to fix that description of yours. - yee M I N A K O plz ;w;

AR9.2 on If seems a bit overkill for a 160 bpm map, no? Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9. - i love the ar 9.2 ;v; but you are right, changed

Also, the correct offset might be 664, see if thats better - i feel that offset way early :/ still gonna ask someone to check this . About the hitsounding, I recommend you look into it again, because some hitsounding don't have a consistent pattern, which makes it very weird. Other than that, everything else looks good. Onto the mod.

[If]

- 00:09:672 (1,2) - Its a bit too close, distance it a bit. - right, moved

- 00:19:422 (4,5) - Control+G this pattern? It works because the slider's head isn't landing on the white tick and vocally works too. - it seems weird, but fixed in other way

- 01:19:047 (1,1) - Use .4 DS to space these from 01:18:672 (1) - . - ohh thanks, changed ds

[Conclusion]

A very nice song, indeed. Good mapset and nice spread. It could still use some work on hitsounds and overlappings, but good Job, and good luck.

Thanks for the mod!!!! :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-07-21T02:57:01+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
[Frost's Insane]

- 00:09:672 (1,2,1,2) - Overlapping is nice sometimes, but in this case, overlapping here might not be a good idea. I see what you're saying, but if I don't overlap them, the jump feels overly harsh imo.

- 00:33:109 (4) - Would be better if you made it into two circle notes, with 00:33:297 - stacking on top of 00:33:484 (5) - . This will probably be changed at some point, but I'd like to look at all the solutions people offer first before deciding (plus, I hate doubles (1/2 or 1/4) and avoid them when possible).

- 00:43:234 (2,3) - In this case, it would be better if it was just a triplet. Agreed, also added a kickslider to the end of the previous triplet. When I mapped this I kinda just sprinkled them in, apparently, but I do like them when they fit.

- 01:25:797 (2,1) - Unfortunately, this is unrankable from what I've been taught. I don't really see why it would be unrankable, as every person who played it that I saw was able to see the circle behind it, but I'll change it anyway, because I would hate to be the one mapper who makes people choke after the hard part lol.

why did i make this map like a monstrata map omg i'm rethinking my entire life, regrets

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Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2016-07-23T19:01:58+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
Light Insane
00:33:484 (4) - Delete that slider, breaks the rhythm. Make a 1/2 slider there 00:33:484 and a 1/2 reverse slider there 00:33:859. Changed
00:35:734 (1) - Why the 0.5x ? and the finish hitsound ? Removed the hitsound
01:01:797 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should remove thoses, and make a 1/2 slider Changed
01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - I find it really ugly to hear, and it doesn't fit to what you've mapped before I knowww ;-; I'll try to change it

missa1912 wrote:
M I N A K O plz ;w; >_>

Ongaku wrote:
[ M I N A K O 's Light Insane]

- 00:01:984 (6) - Avoid this overlap, make it a triangle with 00:01:047 (4,5,6) - , then adapt the star pattern after. Changed

- 00:21:297 (6,1) - Align it a bit better. Changed

- 00:27:297 (5) - Would be better if you made it a 3/4 slider and added a circle note 00:27:672 - . Changed

- 00:33:484 (4) - This reverse slider kind of just stuck out, and you missed so much in between. Changed

- 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little bit overkill for a Light Insane. Condense the stream more. Changed

- 01:03:672 (1,5) - Fix the blanket here please, it triggered me a little bit. Changed

- 01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't consistently DS'd. Fix that. Changed

- 01:10:234 (1) - Make it two circle notes, a slider just alone feels awkward. Changed

- 01:18:672 - This section still calls for normal-hitsounds, not soft. Yeah, that's better
Updateeee (don't hate me senpai ;-;)
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14640
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:[ M I N A K O ]'s Light Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
BeatmapID:991773
BeatmapSetID:460046

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.9
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.43
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Narwhal Prime

111 posts

Joined November 2012

Narwhal Prime 2016-07-26T22:40:17+00:00

Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[Easy]

00:11:168 (1) - remove NC. Optional: 00:09:668 (3) - add NC
01:19:793 (1) - Try removing the clap. Since it's quieter than 01:20:168 (2) - , removing loud hitsound can help emphasize 01:20:168 (2) - better.

[O-M's Normal]

I got nothing to change. Good job (also I feel like I've seen a few of your other guest diffs in my queue lol)

[B r o k e n's Hard]

00:09:293 (4) - This is a nitpick: I feel these two 1.6x jumps are too close in the music for this diff: 00:08:168 (1,2) - and 00:09:293 (4,1) - . Also, the music doesn't really feel loud enough to justify 1.6x compared to the others. Moving the head of 00:09:293 (4) - to (344,92) would maintain the flow while changing its spacing with 00:08:730 (2) - to 1.2x (consistent with the other 1.2x-1.6x spacings in this section).

[M I N A K O's Light Insane]

00:06:293 (2) - suggestion: try moving this higher than 00:06:105 (1) - so that 00:05:918 (3,1,2) - has a V-shaped pattern and feels more exciting.
The normal clap hitsounds are too loud, especially in the kiai. By comparison, Frost's Insane also has relatively higher volume sections (80-90%), but uses the softer drum sample clap. To me, that feels better (I think a couple other diffs used this too). So, I recommend using the drum clap.

[Frost's Insane]

AIMod detects a lot of unsnapped objects. It seems like a simple Timing > Resnap All Notes does the trick (except for 00:00:667 (2) - but that's a simple adjustment). Still might want to check that all the notes are okay after that.
00:33:293 - Something should be here... make 00:33:104 (4) - a slider (head at 276,172 and end at 212,178)

[If]

AIMod detects an unsnapped slider end - please adjust that.
00:07:043 (2) - Distance from 00:06:668 (1) - is a bit small so the jump feels "cramped". If you move it to (80,200) the jump feel nicer AND the spacing among 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - is nice and even.
00:13:418 (4) - nitpick: the direction this slider goes in and the position of 00:13:793 (5) - are not quite aligned. Either straighten them or turn this slider into a curved one.
00:31:418 (4) - nitpick: I can't really explain why, but putting this slider feels nicer. Try moving the head to (64,256). (I guess it would be a little farther from 00:31:793 (5) - and have a more circular flow from 00:30:668 (1,2,3) - ).
00:51:105 (6,7) - and 01:13:043 (2,3) - not quite fond of the circle being so close to the slider when the other jumps in this kiai are larger (it's the hardest diff so there should be larger jumps). For example try this quick example I made for 00:50:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5699850. See if it feels any smoother; it feels similar to your 00:52:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which I like.

Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-26T23:04:21+00:00

Black reply = Commenting

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

Your queue is cool I must admit XD/ Your mods always helpful by using a clear english language and provides appopriate suggestions

[O-M's Normal]
I got nothing to change. Good job (also I feel like I've seen a few of your other guest diffs in my queue lol)

Lol yeah haha!. I have a lot of gd request lately. Dont know why XD/
Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away
Good luck with ranking!

Sure ! Sorry for burdening anyway. Everyone can be so busy taking these requests or irl works. ~~I'm happy~~ we are happy with your mod though xd. Good luck !
By any chance, can we be mutual?

Regards,
NP

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-26T23:49:11+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[Easy]
00:11:168 (1) - remove NC. Optional: 00:09:668 (3) - add NC - i think is ok, since 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - have the same beat but 00:11:168 (1) - has a very "unique" one, same at 00:48:668 (1) - for example
01:19:793 (1) - Try removing the clap. Since it's quieter than 01:20:168 (2) - , removing loud hitsound can help emphasize 01:20:168 (2) - better. - right, fix
[If]
AIMod detects an unsnapped slider end - please adjust that. - fix
00:07:043 (2) - Distance from 00:06:668 (1) - is a bit small so the jump feels "cramped". If you move it to (80,200) the jump feel nicer AND the spacing among 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - is nice and even. - (2) was there to emphasize (3), but you are right, moved 2 and ajusted the pattern
00:13:418 (4) - nitpick: the direction this slider goes in and the position of 00:13:793 (5) - are not quite aligned. Either straighten them or turn this slider into a curved one. - yeah, fix mirror the first half of that combo
00:31:418 (4) - nitpick: I can't really explain why, but putting this slider feels nicer. Try moving the head to (64,256). (I guess it would be a little farther from 00:31:793 (5) - and have a more circular flow from 00:30:668 (1,2,3) - ). - nice
00:51:105 (6,7) - and 01:13:043 (2,3) - not quite fond of the circle being so close to the slider when the other jumps in this kiai are larger (it's the hardest diff so there should be larger jumps). For example try this quick example I made for 00:50:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5699850. See if it feels any smoother; it feels similar to your 00:52:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which I like. - fixed 00:51:105 (6,7) - the other one is fine like that
Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away - is about a tragic luv story SASUKEEEEEE <4
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

Thanks for modding!!! :3

Last edited by missa1912 2016-07-29T05:31:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-27T05:02:12+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[B r o k e n's Hard]
00:09:293 (4) - This is a nitpick: I feel these two 1.6x jumps are too close in the music for this diff: 00:08:168 (1,2) - and 00:09:293 (4,1) - . Also, the music doesn't really feel loud enough to justify 1.6x compared to the others. Moving the head of 00:09:293 (4) - to (344,92) would maintain the flow while changing its spacing with 00:08:730 (2) - to 1.2x (consistent with the other 1.2x-1.6x spacings in this section).
the 1.6 distance are pretty much similar music parts such as 00:07:230 (3) - 00:08:730 (2) - 00:09:293 (4,1) - 00:10:230 (3) - , these areas of the music here stands out so, a bigger distance suits better in my option, no change

Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away its about Naruto looking for Sasuke.....not really
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-07-28T02:26:15+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
[Frost's Insane]
AIMod detects a lot of unsnapped objects. It seems like a simple Timing > Resnap All Notes does the trick (except for 00:00:667 (2) - but that's a simple adjustment). Still might want to check that all the notes are okay after that. Yea, offset change rekt my diff lul. Thanks for pointing it out
00:33:293 - Something should be here... make 00:33:104 (4) - a slider (head at 276,172 and end at 212,178)
Yea, idk what happened here, did not intend that. Switched it back to the original.

Ongaku wrote:
Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9. I disagree, I would rather keep it low. If 8.9 is just such a horrible number that people are triggered about it, I would rather go to 8.8 than 9.

why tho

osu file format v14

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2016-07-30T15:42:32+00:00

Hi! Just a random mod to give some thoughts

[General]

Why "If" as name for the hardest diff? I know moshimo is translated to 'if' but it says nothing to me xd maybe change it for 'dream' ? it appears a lot in the lyrics too.
Why OD 8,8 for the 5,38*? It scales from 7,6 to 8,8 which is too much... consider lowering it to 8,5 at least.
You should add B_R_O_K_E_N and [_M_I_N_A_K_O_] to the tags instead since they've spaced names.

[If]
00:02:918 (5,2) - Por qué no stackearlos? quedaría bien
00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) - Para esta parte te sugeriría hacer que la distancia sea más consistente ya que se nota un poquito al jugarla. También te aconsejaría seguir con el estilo que venías haciendo antes que era hacer 'back and fourth' y hacer así hacer movimientos estilo zig zag. http://puu.sh/qjL7J/1ea652b1d3.jpg
00:07:793 (1) - Honestamente encuentro que este NC no es necesario
00:10:793 (1) - ^
00:08:730 (3,4,5) - Esta sección en general está bien estructurada, pero la distancia que hay entre estas notas es demasiado baja comparada con todo lo que haces en el mapa, por lo que te sugiero altamente hacer un pattern distinto con distancias parecidas a 00:10:043 (2,3,4,5) - o 00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/qjLm0/5868327a94.jpg Esto fue lo que se me ocurrió a mí, ahí ve tú.
00:10:418 (4,5,1) - Esta transición podrías hacerla más 'recta' para que fluyera mejor horizontalmente. También encuentro que 00:09:668 (1,2) - se ve un poquito mal estéticamente, así que bueno podrías hacer algo así pero es desición tuya :p http://puu.sh/qjLwI/03709088d4.jpg
00:16:230 (2) - El primer tick rojo muevelo un poco para atrás para formar simetría.
00:17:918 (4,1) - Stack acá estaría genial ya que ambos se apegan a un beat fuerte. 00:18:105 (1) - También acá deberías quitar el NC
00:23:543 (5,6) - Haz de este distanciado igual a 00:23:168 (3,4) - para ser más consistente y mueve 00:23:918 (7) - un poquito para abajo.
00:25:980 (6,1) - Personalmente este tipo de transiciones lineales cuando vienes haciendo movimientos más tipo back and fourth se sienten mal al jugar, por lo mismo te recomendaría que movieras 00:26:168 (1) - un poco abajo a la derecha para hacerle un blanket a 00:25:230 (3) - y así cambias el ángulo el cual quedaría mejor imo.
00:27:105 (5) - Podrías mover este un poco a la derecha para formar un ángulo que sea menos recto, además de tener un gran espacio con 00:27:293 (6) - cosa que lo veo un poco raro.
00:30:105 (1) - remove NC
00:33:480 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Bueno para empezar como ves toda esta sección se ve un poco mal estructurada comparado con otras cosas que has hecho. Además que hayas agregado tantos circulos sin ningún slider encuentro que queda super mal, ya que no es una parte donde deberías enfatizar con tanto mini jump. Te recomendaría hacer de 00:33:668 (1,5,8) - 1/2 sliders, quedarían mejor en la canción imo
00:40:043 (2,3) - Huh, no soy muy fanático de este tipo de transiciones, encuentro que se ven y juegan mal, considera hacer algo distinto aquí.
00:41:918 (6,7) - Agregar un poco más de distancia ya que es lo que vienes haciendo.
00:46:980 (4,1) - un triplet aquí no quedaría nada mal
00:50:168 - En el inicio del kiai utilizas demasiados círculos, cosa que se vuelve muy monótono ya que se sintiese como si fuesen jumps en un lugar donde no hay un verdadero énfasis en la canción. 00:50:168 (1,1) - considera hacer de estos 1/2 sliders.
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Este tipo de transición no está nada mal, el único problema que le hallo es que el aumento es demasiado grande y notorio por lo que se dificulta jugar, 01:17:543 (1,2,1,2) - encuentro que deberías reducir el distanciado de estos un pelo.
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - Back and fourth quedaría mejor http://puu.sh/qjMrD/69b85d0e55.jpg

[Frost's]
00:03:480 (5,1) - blanket properly?
00:05:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - why all these circles in a jumpy pattern? I mean the there's no such emphasis to add those jumps there, consider adding some 1/2 sliders instead.
00:07:230 (1) - delete NC
00:08:730 (1) - & 00:09:293 (1) - & 00:10:230 (1) - ^
00:17:730 (3,4) - You can ctrl+g the rhythm here, would fit better imo.
00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This all rhythm feels a bit awkward for me. I guess you should be following vocals instead, would fit better. http://puu.sh/qjMXx/6fa5507469.jpg Something like this maybe?
00:30:105 (4,6,1) - You can avoid this overlap and also structure the pattern a bit.
00:32:355 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. The actual rhythm 00:32:168 (1,2) - here is kinda weird i guess and also because the sliders are starting on a red tick which is not a downbeat so it feels a bit off, so yeah better to follow the other rhythm imo
00:47:730 (3,6,7,1) - Stack the triplet where 00:47:730 (3) - is? So it has more distance from 00:48:293 (5) - which would be nice since you're doing some jump pattern.
01:17:543 (1,1,1) - Don't why the NC spam? Also 01:18:293 (1,1) - would be better if you do a stream instead, like the other ones you were doing in all the diff.

[Minako's]
00:00:668 - Why 0,5x SV? It feels waaay too slow, consider increasing it a bit, 0,8x maybe? Even 1,0 would fit good.
00:00:668 (3,4) - Would be better if you follow vocals here instead, so consider doing a 1/1 slider + circle
00:08:730 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - All this section feels a bit weird, mainly because 00:08:168 (1) - here you were following guitar but then you started following drums 00:08:730 (2,3) -. Also 00:09:480 (5) - this shouldn't be ending on a downbeat because it's where the music should be emphasized more, so I guess you should be starting a slider 00:09:668 - instead. Maybe follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/qjNwt/bd8235340c.jpg ? Would fit better imo.
00:35:730 (1) - Why the SV change? I mean it's as intense as 00:34:980 (3) - so there should be no change in the SV. Moreover if you're doing a SV change like that, you should be adding a NC every time you change it. However I think you should delete it and be more consistent i guess.
00:36:668 - You go from 0,6x to 1,3x? Like.. why? xD And then the kiai is 1,0x ... :s I think you should be more careful with that since the kiai should have more emphasis like the other sections. Consider doing something like 0,8x ~ 1,0x ~ 1,3x for 00:36:668 - 00:42:668 - 00:50:168 - (0,6x feels tooo slow for me)
01:10:418 (2) - make a 1/2 slider instead? It feels to empty with 01:10:605 - not being mapped.
01:12:480 - missing note?
01:26:168 (6) - NC?

[broken's]
00:05:730 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? would follow vocals better
00:40:230 - 00:40:980 - feels too empty. Consider adding circles instead.
00:56:168 (1) - Extend this slider? 00:56:730 - I guess this should be the end of it.
01:10:230 (3,4) - These sliders should be starting on a white ticks since these are downbeats and would fit better the music imo. Consder doing something like http://puu.sh/qjO9d/c4fbc42019.jpg
01:19:418 (3) - this should be go 01:19:605 - here. Also you can add a NC there.
01:21:105 (4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. Again slider starting on a red tick which doesn't feel good. (e.g 01:22:605 (3,4) - here you do it well)
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - For a 3,2* this triplet would mess the acc of the players. I think it'd be better if you do a 1/4 slider reverse for this.

Ok that's all because I'm not that good modding Normal and Easy

Anyway I think this set need a bit more polishing before going ranked, but surely you can do it!

Hope I helped a bit c: Good luck with the set!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-31T06:57:13+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! Just a random mod to give some thoughts

[General]
Why "If" as name for the hardest diff? I know moshimo is translated to 'if' but it says nothing to me xd maybe change it for 'dream' ? it appears a lot in the lyrics too. - yeah, actually "dream" looks better xD
Why OD 8,8 for the 5,38*? It scales from 7,6 to 8,8 which is too much... consider lowering it to 8,5 at least. - lowered to 8,6 xD
You should add B_R_O_K_E_N and [_M_I_N_A_K_O_] to the tags instead since they've spaced names. - fix

[If]
00:02:918 (5,2) - Por qué no stackearlos? quedaría bien - yeah
00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) - Para esta parte te sugeriría hacer que la distancia sea más consistente ya que se nota un poquito al jugarla. También te aconsejaría seguir con el estilo que venías haciendo antes que era hacer 'back and fourth' y hacer así hacer movimientos estilo zig zag. http://puu.sh/qjL7J/1ea652b1d3.jpg - arreglado de otra manera, ya que la unica nota que deseo enfatizar ahi es (2) :p
00:07:793 (1) - Honestamente encuentro que este NC no es necesario - removido
00:10:793 (1) - ^ - ^
00:08:730 (3,4,5) - Esta sección en general está bien estructurada, pero la distancia que hay entre estas notas es demasiado baja comparada con todo lo que haces en el mapa, por lo que te sugiero altamente hacer un pattern distinto con distancias parecidas a 00:10:043 (2,3,4,5) - o 00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/qjLm0/5868327a94.jpg Esto fue lo que se me ocurrió a mí, ahí ve tú. - quiziera mantener el triangulo ahi, aumente el spacing entre notas haciendo esa parte lucir mas limpia
00:10:418 (4,5,1) - Esta transición podrías hacerla más 'recta' para que fluyera mejor horizontalmente. También encuentro que 00:09:668 (1,2) - se ve un poquito mal estéticamente, así que bueno podrías hacer algo así pero es desición tuya :p http://puu.sh/qjLwI/03709088d4.jpg - ohhh, arreglado :3
00:16:230 (2) - El primer tick rojo muevelo un poco para atrás para formar simetría. - ok
00:17:918 (4,1) - Stack acá estaría genial ya que ambos se apegan a un beat fuerte. 00:18:105 (1) - También acá deberías quitar el NC - cambie esa parte entera, para enfatizar mejor algunas partes
00:23:543 (5,6) - Haz de este distanciado igual a 00:23:168 (3,4) - para ser más consistente y mueve 00:23:918 (7) - un poquito para abajo. . - arregado de otra forma
00:25:980 (6,1) - Personalmente este tipo de transiciones lineales cuando vienes haciendo movimientos más tipo back and fourth se sienten mal al jugar, por lo mismo te recomendaría que movieras 00:26:168 (1) - un poco abajo a la derecha para hacerle un blanket a 00:25:230 (3) - y así cambias el ángulo el cual quedaría mejor imo.
00:27:105 (5) - Podrías mover este un poco a la derecha para formar un ángulo que sea menos recto, además de tener un gran espacio con 00:27:293 (6) - cosa que lo veo un poco raro.
00:30:105 (1) - remove NC
00:33:480 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Bueno para empezar como ves toda esta sección se ve un poco mal estructurada comparado con otras cosas que has hecho. Además que hayas agregado tantos circulos sin ningún slider encuentro que queda super mal, ya que no es una parte donde deberías enfatizar con tanto mini jump. Te recomendaría hacer de 00:33:668 (1,5,8) - 1/2 sliders, quedarían mejor en la canción imo
00:40:043 (2,3) - Huh, no soy muy fanático de este tipo de transiciones, encuentro que se ven y juegan mal, considera hacer algo distinto aquí.
00:41:918 (6,7) - Agregar un poco más de distancia ya que es lo que vienes haciendo.
00:46:980 (4,1) - un triplet aquí no quedaría nada mal - no quiero mover mucho esos jumps por ahora xc
00:50:168 - En el inicio del kiai utilizas demasiados círculos, cosa que se vuelve muy monótono ya que se sintiese como si fuesen jumps en un lugar donde no hay un verdadero énfasis en la canción. 00:50:168 (1,1) - considera hacer de estos 1/2 sliders. - eso solo lo hize en los primeros 2 combos del kiai, a partir de ahi cada combo inicia con slider :p
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Este tipo de transición no está nada mal, el único problema que le hallo es que el aumento es demasiado grande y notorio por lo que se dificulta jugar, 01:17:543 (1,2,1,2) - encuentro que deberías reducir el distanciado de estos un pelo.
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - Back and fourth quedaría mejor http://puu.sh/qjMrD/69b85d0e55.jpg - nah esta bien asi
- Algunas partes donde no comente es porque mientras aplicaba tu mod comenze a remapear ciertas partes que no me gustaban (practicamente un 60% del mapa xc) y aplicando un spacing mas consistente, o eso creo xD
Ok that's all because I'm not that good modding Normal and Easy

Anyway I think this set need a bit more polishing before going ranked, but surely you can do it!

Hope I helped a bit c: Good luck with the set!

Gracias por el mod!!!! <4

CodeS

1,142 posts

Joined September 2011

CodeS 2016-08-04T01:09:54+00:00

From my Q, sorry it took so long, I was busy with work T_T

Anyway, fast mod so let's get to it:

00:24:668 (1) - What is this slider doing here? half the head is outside the grid, please move it, this is almost an Unrankeable issue in an easy
00:29:918 (4,5,1) - This flow is WAY too sharp, try to be more subtle about it by making a triangle with the slider tail and the notes and rotate a bit 00:30:668 (1) - , like:

SPOILER

Also:

00:43:793 (2,3,4,1) - try doing a similar pattern here, why?, because the direction the reverse slider is throwing the player AND where the notes (00:44:918 (3,4) - ) are makes a really bad flow, try this:

SPOILER

01:05:168 (1) - curve this slider, right now the movement the player has to make coming from a curve like flow like 01:03:668 (3,4) - is really bad if this slider is a line, also, a curve helps guide better the player to the next note, ALWAYS think about where the player is moving and what movement they are following, this is super important in an easy:

SPOILER

01:18:668 (1) - There's no reason for this to be a NC

That's it with this diff, overall a solid diff who could use a bit of tuning on where you're making the player move but overall, is a solid map
Change that Slider going almost offscreen tho, that's a serious problem in an Easy.

Fastmod this diff:

00:18:480 - This needs a note jump, really, the flow you've been following here as been great but there's this stop suddenly that makes the player go out of comfort and makes the next slider feels weird as fuck.
00:21:480 - Same here, why are you ignoring these beats / voice intensity ? these stops makes your map play weird, as the overall constant pace of the song makes me feel like I should be hitting something here.

00:31:980 (4,5) - don't stack this, believe me, specially when the next slider is in a red tick, it feels awkward to play when you've been making the player go around jumping and having fun and then suddenly a stack here to break the flow and on top of that next is a red tick slider where the strong beat is in the tail

00:49:793 - You like to play with slider speed don't you? I could erase these 00:49:793 (4,5) - and use the "woosh" sound to make a kinda fast slider (not skystar fast but somehow more "interesting" to play)

01:15:855 - Same as before, missing a note here
01:18:293 - I would make a triple here

Not much from my side for this, the diff feels alright to play.

Sorry it wasn't long, take everything with a grain of salt of course because I don't want to impose my style, so good luck!
Also sorry if a time copy doesn't fit, I'm rusty =(

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-08-04T01:18:15+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
[Frost's]
[*]00:03:480 (5,1) - blanket properly? This isn't meant to be a blanket, I prefer it the way it is now.
[*]00:05:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - why all these circles in a jumpy pattern? I mean the there's no such emphasis to add those jumps there, consider adding some 1/2 sliders instead. I do sort of agree with you, but I used sliders in this section to represent long piano notes for the most part, so using sliders to represent 1/2 piano notes seems weird to me.
[*]00:07:230 (1) - delete NC fine :V
[*]00:08:730 (1) - & 00:09:293 (1) - & 00:10:230 (1) - ^ ^
[*]00:17:730 (3,4) - You can ctrl+g the rhythm here, would fit better imo. agreed, good catch
[*]00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This all rhythm feels a bit awkward for me. I guess you should be following vocals instead, would fit better. http://puu.sh/qjMXx/6fa5507469.jpg Something like this maybe? Messed around with it a bit differently.
[*]00:30:105 (4,6,1) - You can avoid this overlap and also structure the pattern a bit. Fixed up there ^.
[*]00:32:355 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. The actual rhythm 00:32:168 (1,2) - here is kinda weird i guess and also because the sliders are starting on a red tick which is not a downbeat so it feels a bit off, so yeah better to follow the other rhythm imo I did something similar to that^, all the comments about it are annoying >:
[*]00:47:730 (3,6,7,1) - Stack the triplet where 00:47:730 (3) - is? So it has more distance from 00:48:293 (5) - which would be nice since you're doing some jump pattern. Hinders readability and makes this part overly intense imo.
[*]01:17:543 (1,1,1) - Don't why the NC spam? Also 01:18:293 (1,1) - would be better if you do a stream instead, like the other ones you were doing in all the diff. I think NC spam is fine here, given that the same noise in the background is being repeated over and over, but I'm fed up with people pointing out this, so I'm giving in... I would like to put a stream here, but there's really no good way to go from 01:18:293 (4) to 01:18:668 (1) with a stream. I like this pattern as it is.

@missa, changed the ar to 8.8 because it's more consistent with the mapset and I think it fits well.

yhay

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missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-04T05:22:53+00:00

Katyusha wrote:

From my Q, sorry it took so long, I was busy with work T_T

Anyway, fast mod so let's get to it:

00:24:668 (1) - What is this slider doing here? half the head is outside the grid, please move it, this is almost an Unrankeable issue in an easy - yeah i was worried about it, fixed ,also there was another like this one on the kiai, changed too
00:29:918 (4,5,1) - This flow is WAY too sharp, try to be more subtle about it by making a triangle with the slider tail and the notes and rotate a bit 00:30:668 (1) - , like:

SPOILER
- nice, fixed

Also:

00:43:793 (2,3,4,1) - try doing a similar pattern here, why?, because the direction the reverse slider is throwing the player AND where the notes (00:44:918 (3,4) - ) are makes a really bad flow, try this:

SPOILER
- yeah, fixed

01:05:168 (1) - curve this slider, right now the movement the player has to make coming from a curve like flow like 01:03:668 (3,4) - is really bad if this slider is a line, also, a curve helps guide better the player to the next note, ALWAYS think about where the player is moving and what movement they are following, this is super important in an easy:

SPOILER
- fix

01:18:668 (1) - There's no reason for this to be a NC - removed

That's it with this diff, overall a solid diff who could use a bit of tuning on where you're making the player move but overall, is a solid map
Change that Slider going almost offscreen tho, that's a serious problem in an Easy.

Sorry it wasn't long, take everything with a grain of salt of course because I don't want to impose my style, so good luck!
Also sorry if a time copy doesn't fit, I'm rusty =(

Thanks for the mod!! :3

ps: nice banners tho >w<

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2016-08-04T14:54:37+00:00

From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General

Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out

Easy

00:11:168 (1) - Remove NC pls, there's no need. You can just use the same slider like u did previously at 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - .
00:17:918 (4) - Clap should be on 00:18:293 (5) - instead~
00:32:918 (4) - Clap on slider end instead to keep hit-claps consistent on every 2nd and 4th white tick.
00:36:668 (1) - Hit-finish at 00:36:668 - only, and remove clap pls, sounds less noisy.
00:38:543 (2) - Clap on slider head instead of end.
00:39:668 (1) - Hit-finish instead of clap
00:41:168 (3) - Clap on slider end
00:42:668 (1) - Remove clap on slider head pls, usually the claps are for emphasizing the snare drums heard in the music. So pls follow it.
00:43:793 (2) - Remove clap on reverse arrow
00:45:668 (1) - Finish instead of clap
00:44:918 (3,1) - You can blanket these better.
00:47:168 (3) - NC here instead of 00:48:668 (1) - , would look more sensible.
The drum additions' hitsounds dun rly fit the song imo, consider changing them to auto.
01:24:668 (1) - Remove NC.

O-M's Normal

AR 5 is considerably high for a Normal diff, I recommend 3.5~4
00:15:668 (1,2) - Blanket~
00:18:668 (1) - Missing hit-clap on slider end
00:21:668 (1) - ^
00:22:793 - Snare drum sound here I woudn't wanna miss it, Add note?
00:23:543 (5) - Missing clap.
Umm, same goes here for the hitsounds, hit-claps usually follow the snare drum of the music. In this song, the snares are at every 2nd and 4th white tick. Consider putting claps consistently with this pattern.
01:03:668 (4) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpAWv/eace3d160c.jpg imo.
01:06:668 (3) - This is overlapping with 01:05:168 (1) - a bit, move 01:06:668 (3) - to the right a bit to avoid overlapping pls.
You need to make this at least 2.2* for the diff spread to be even and rankable.

Broken's Hard

00:07:043 (2,3) - Why is this suddenly spaced so far?
Umm, I am seeing a lot of inconsistent spacing in a Hard diff, which is not good. Pls use Distance Snap and keep all notes and sliders into consistent spacing.
00:16:230 (4) - u can make it flow better like http://puu.sh/qpBbW/d3049beee5.jpg imo.
00:40:230 - Snare drum sound here, add note? Feels empty with just 2 1/1 sliders in 1 combo pattern.
00:50:918 (3) - You dun need a hit-finish here as it is emphasized enough at 00:50:168 (1) - for the music.
00:56:730 - Again I think u can add a note here, although there is nothing to follow here, it's just for making the pattern flow better imo.
00:58:980 - ^
01:02:918 (3) - Dun need that hit-finish lol
01:04:418 (5,6) - I'm sure u can blanket this to make the map look better.
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - Dem this is evil for a hard diff lmao.
I see some SV changes on this diff. For a hard diff I dun rly think its necessary, just try to keep everything consistent. After all, you wanna rank the map

M I N A K O's Light Insane

lol I find ur SV logic a bit questionable, cuz u used 1.3x in the beginning whereas it's 1x in Kiai
00:05:918 (3,1,2) - They dun flow well imo, I think the reverse slider should be at 00:06:105 (1) - instead of a note. Wher e the note should be at 00:06:668 - instead.
00:07:418 (4) - You could move this down to space the pattern more evenly.
00:14:168 (1) - Use a curved slider for better flow?
00:21:293 (6,1) - This pause is rather awkward when momentum was being built at 00:18:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
00:43:793 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This flows bad cuz there is no shape to the pattern and spacing is inconsistent. I tried something with the pattern http://puu.sh/qpC9S/9cea78694e.jpg 00:44:918 (5,6) - are stack on 00:44:355 (2) - and 00:44:543 (3) - respectively.
00:48:105 (6,1) - Avoid overlapping ~
00:47:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing for these jumps, try to make some shapes. Like what I showed u previously, which is a star.
Notes at Kiai with 90% volume sounds rly loud. Lower the volume?
00:57:668 (3,4) - You forgot to blanket the slider end of 00:57:668 (3) - lol
00:58:418 (4) - Why is this 1/1 all of a sudden? Would be better to follow 00:56:168 (1,2,3) - .
01:08:918 (3) - Would look and flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCqr/a1cf2779fc.jpg imo. Doesnt matter if u cant stack on 01:07:793 (2) - .
01:10:605 - Drum kick can be heard here. Add note? Notes following only vocals here sounds weird imo.
01:12:668 (4) - This shape can be improved, or you can just use a simple slider shape here lol.
01:14:918 (3,4) - Blanket ~
01:15:668 (4) - NC
01:14:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is spread out here while 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so dense. Try to keep rhythms more consistent pls.
01:19:793 (3) - I would stack on 01:20:168 (1) - 's head for a jump pause effect.

Frost's Insane

00:04:230 (2) - Better to stack on 00:03:293 (4) - .
00:10:230 (3) - I would try to avoid overlap here, but seems u have done this intentionally idk.
00:12:105 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary imo.
00:14:918 (4) - Can flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCXg/5cfe6980d0.jpg imo.
00:25:605 (4) - Spacing inconsistent with 00:25:418 (3,5) - .
00:31:230 (2) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpD1p/be6a8fce9d.jpg imo.
00:35:918 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - .
00:49:605 (1) - Remove NC like before.
00:52:230 (4,5,6) - Wouldnt it be better just to make linear flow here lol?
01:27:480 (1,2) - Hard diff has triplets, so maybe Insane should also use triplets?
Second hald of the map seems brighter than the first lol, still I hear hitsound issues, refer to "General" .

Dream

OD 8.6 seems way too high, 7 should be fine imo.
00:07:605 (5) - I think the jump would play better if stacked on 00:08:074 (9) - .
00:10:043 (2) - U could space this further back imo cuz the jump to 00:10:230 (3) - is quite large as well.
00:11:730 (1) - NC not needed pls remove.
00:19:043 (2) - Could move this further down to create triangle pattern with 00:19:043 (2,3,4) - . http://puu.sh/qpDr0/d2a770db62.jpg .
00:33:480 (6) - Stack on 00:34:793 (5) - would make it look more neat and flows better imo.
00:45:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - PP mapping NotLikeThis, I rly would suggest you to decrease the distance lol.
00:54:668 (1) - Move this up a bit to completely avoid overlap with 00:54:105 (6) - .
01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream seems overmapped. Sounds more like http://puu.sh/qpDEc/1c7349890a.jpg at 25% speed.
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pls no. Not 1,2 jumps on this ;-; At least decrease the distance plsssssssss I beg u ;-;;;;;
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - I think flow can be better like http://puu.sh/qpDLx/aa31018358.jpg . 01:19:605 (2) - is stack on 01:20:168 (3) - 's slider end.
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cri every tim I see pp mapping This spacing is just so unnecessary imo.
SeemsGood, besides the pp mapping parts

GL!~

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2016-08-05T18:22:46+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
[M I N A K O's Light Insane]
00:06:293 (2) - suggestion: try moving this higher than 00:06:105 (1) - so that 00:05:918 (3,1,2) - has a V-shaped pattern and feels more exciting. Fixed
The normal clap hitsounds are too loud, especially in the kiai. By comparison, Frost's Insane also has relatively higher volume sections (80-90%), but uses the softer drum sample clap. To me, that feels better (I think a couple other diffs used this too). So, I recommend using the drum clap. I prefer normal hitclaps, yet I'll put the sounds less louder

iYiyo wrote:
[Minako's]
[*]00:00:668 - Why 0,5x SV? It feels waaay too slow, consider increasing it a bit, 0,8x maybe? Even 1,0 would fit good. Changed
[*]00:00:668 (3,4) - Would be better if you follow vocals here instead, so consider doing a 1/1 slider + circle I prefer to follow music here
[*]00:08:730 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - All this section feels a bit weird, mainly because 00:08:168 (1) - here you were following guitar but then you started following drums 00:08:730 (2,3) -. Also 00:09:480 (5) - this shouldn't be ending on a downbeat because it's where the music should be emphasized more, so I guess you should be starting a slider 00:09:668 - instead. Maybe follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/qjNwt/bd8235340c.jpg ? Would fit better imo. I fixed it
[*]00:35:730 (1) - Why the SV change? I mean it's as intense as 00:34:980 (3) - so there should be no change in the SV. Moreover if you're doing a SV change like that, you should be adding a NC every time you change it. However I think you should delete it and be more consistent i guess.Fixed
[*]00:36:668 - You go from 0,6x to 1,3x? Like.. why? xD And then the kiai is 1,0x ... :s I think you should be more careful with that since the kiai should have more emphasis like the other sections. Consider doing something like 0,8x ~ 1,0x ~ 1,3x for 00:36:668 - 00:42:668 - 00:50:168 - (0,6x feels tooo slow for me) I did it 1,0x
[*]01:10:418 (2) - make a 1/2 slider instead? It feels to empty with 01:10:605 - not being mapped. Fixed
[*]01:12:480 - missing note? Fixed
[*]01:26:168 (6) - NC? NC!

- G I D Z - wrote:
M I N A K O's Light Insane
lol I find ur SV logic a bit questionable, cuz u used 1.3x in the beginning whereas it's 1x in Kiai Fixed
00:05:918 (3,1,2) - They dun flow well imo, I think the reverse slider should be at 00:06:105 (1) - instead of a note. Wher e the note should be at 00:06:668 - instead. I prefer mine
00:07:418 (4) - You could move this down to space the pattern more evenly. Yup
00:14:168 (1) - Use a curved slider for better flow? Imma keep it 'cause of 00:13:793 (6) -
00:21:293 (6,1) - This pause is rather awkward when momentum was being built at 00:18:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . Fixed
00:43:793 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This flows bad cuz there is no shape to the pattern and spacing is inconsistent. I tried something with the pattern http://puu.sh/qpC9S/9cea78694e.jpg 00:44:918 (5,6) - are stack on 00:44:355 (2) - and 00:44:543 (3) - respectively. Fixed
00:48:105 (6,1) - Avoid overlapping ~ Fixed
00:47:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing for these jumps, try to make some shapes. Like what I showed u previously, which is a star. Fixed
Notes at Kiai with 90% volume sounds rly loud. Lower the volume? Ikr, changed it to 80
00:57:668 (3,4) - You forgot to blanket the slider end of 00:57:668 (3) - lol Fixed
00:58:418 (4) - Why is this 1/1 all of a sudden? Would be better to follow 00:56:168 (1,2,3) - . 'cause it sounds weird ;-;
01:08:918 (3) - Would look and flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCqr/a1cf2779fc.jpg imo. Doesnt matter if u cant stack on 01:07:793 (2) - . neh
01:10:605 - Drum kick can be heard here. Add note? Notes following only vocals here sounds weird imo. Imma keep it
01:12:668 (4) - This shape can be improved, or you can just use a simple slider shape here lol. Fixed
01:14:918 (3,4) - Blanket ~ Fixed
01:15:668 (4) - NC Neh
01:14:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is spread out here while 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so dense. Try to keep rhythms more consistent pls. It sounds good
01:19:793 (3) - I would stack on 01:20:168 (1) - 's head for a jump pause effect. I understand, but I prefer the way it is.

Thanks for mods ! ♥

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Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-08-05T23:00:11+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
00:04:230 (2) - Better to stack on 00:03:293 (4) - . I disagree, it flows more naturally the way I have it now, imo.
00:10:230 (3) - I would try to avoid overlap here, but seems u have done this intentionally idk. It is intentional. I think that it's far enough away from the previous slider that it's fine to read.
00:12:105 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary imo. I used NC here to indicate a 1/1 jump, it makes people react slower because of the lack of trails between notes, which improves flow (at least for me?).
00:14:918 (4) - Can flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCXg/5cfe6980d0.jpg imo. Sure, why not.
00:25:605 (4) - Spacing inconsistent with 00:25:418 (3,5) - . Fixed.
00:31:230 (2) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpD1p/be6a8fce9d.jpg imo. I like the way it is currently because it makes it feel like more of a jump for the vocals (plus it flows well into the slider after it).
00:35:918 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - . Ok.
00:49:605 (1) - Remove NC like before. Same answer as before.
00:52:230 (4,5,6) - Wouldnt it be better just to make linear flow here lol? Yea, idk why I did that lol.
01:27:480 (1,2) - Hard diff has triplets, so maybe Insane should also use triplets? I like this for more emphasis on the 3rd note, but I moved the 2 notes slightly closer because the spacing seemed overkill.
Second hald of the map seems brighter than the first lol, still I hear hitsound issues, refer to "General" . Waiting for missa to add hitsounds so I can use his in the places where I've put my non-custom hitsounds.

Thanks for modding!

yepyepyep

osu file format v14

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B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-08-05T23:58:36+00:00

iYiyo's mod

00:05:730 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? would follow vocals better this fits pretty well for vocal and music
00:40:230 - 00:40:980 - feels too empty. Consider adding circles instead. I'll consider it, I think its fine
00:56:168 (1) - Extend this slider? 00:56:730 - I guess this should be the end of it. naw this is fine, I'm really picky about extended sliders
01:10:230 (3,4) - These sliders should be starting on a white ticks since these are downbeats and would fit better the music imo. Consder doing something like http://puu.sh/qjO9d/c4fbc42019.jpg did something a bit different, I want the triple to be there so no doing what you did, removed a single note and went with 2 1/2 sliders + single note then the triple
01:19:418 (3) - this should be go 01:19:605 - here. Also you can add a NC there. these singles notes are all for vocal, thats why I ignored the sound on the red tick, I don't think it's necessary to put a single note there because of the way I map this area
01:21:105 (4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. Again slider starting on a red tick which doesn't feel good. (e.g 01:22:605 (3,4) - here you do it well) it's map like this according to the music, the guitar? I believe starts on the red tick so I mapped this like this for the music and the other one that I did well maps well with the music
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - For a 3,2* this triplet would mess the acc of the players. I think it'd be better if you do a 1/4 slider reverse for this.icrased spin and did return slider

- G I D Z -'s Mod

00:07:043 (2,3) - Why is this suddenly spaced so far? I distanced areas where I believe the music stand out more like 00:07:230 (3) - 00:08:730 (2) - 00:09:293 (4,1) - 00:10:230 (3) -
Umm, I am seeing a lot of inconsistent spacing in a Hard diff, which is not good. Pls use Distance Snap and keep all notes and sliders into consistent spacing.I don't believe a hard should be all same DS
00:16:230 (4) - u can make it flow better like http://puu.sh/qpBbW/d3049beee5.jpg imo. adjusted
00:40:230 - Snare drum sound here, add note? Feels empty with just 2 1/1 sliders in 1 combo pattern. I'll consider it
00:50:918 (3) - You dun need a hit-finish here as it is emphasized enough at 00:50:168 (1) - for the music. ok, removed
00:56:730 - Again I think u can add a note here, although there is nothing to follow here, it's just for making the pattern flow better imo. I'll consider it
00:58:980 - ^ a single note here didn't fit to well in my view
01:02:918 (3) - Dun need that hit-finish lol removed
01:04:418 (5,6) - I'm sure u can blanket this to make the map look better. improved
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - Dem this is evil for a hard diff lmao. changed in a different mod
I see some SV changes on this diff. For a hard diff I dun rly think its necessary, just try to keep everything consistent. After all, you wanna rank the map the SV change before the kiai mode was to speed it up more before kiai mode starts, I don't think it's an issue

UPDATE UPDATE edited post 8/6/16

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Last edited by B r o k e n 2016-08-06T22:51:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

CodeS

1,142 posts

Joined September 2011

CodeS 2016-08-06T14:28:36+00:00

Some clarifications from me

I forgot to say it, but my "Insane" mod in page 6 was for [ M I N A K O ]'s Light Insane
Frost contacted me by PM, forgot to say which Insane I was modding

Good Luck

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-06T18:44:00+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General
Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out - im still trying some custom hs, im gonna add some soon, i hope x.x

Easy
00:11:168 (1) - Remove NC pls, there's no need. You can just use the same slider like u did previously at 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - . - remove NC, but keep same slider
00:17:918 (4) - Clap should be on 00:18:293 (5) - instead~ - fix
00:32:918 (4) - Clap on slider end instead to keep hit-claps consistent on every 2nd and 4th white tick. - ok
00:36:668 (1) - Hit-finish at 00:36:668 - only, and remove clap pls, sounds less noisy. - removed
00:38:543 (2) - Clap on slider head instead of end. - fix
00:39:668 (1) - Hit-finish instead of clap - ^
00:41:168 (3) - Clap on slider end - ^
00:42:668 (1) - Remove clap on slider head pls, usually the claps are for emphasizing the snare drums heard in the music. So pls follow it. - fix
00:43:793 (2) - Remove clap on reverse arrow - removed
00:45:668 (1) - Finish instead of clap - k
00:44:918 (3,1) - You can blanket these better. - fix(? i coulnd see any problem with that blanket
00:47:168 (3) - NC here instead of 00:48:668 (1) - , would look more sensible. - k
The drum additions' hitsounds dun rly fit the song imo, consider changing them to auto.
01:24:668 (1) - Remove NC. - fix

Dream
OD 8.6 seems way too high, 7 should be fine imo. - 7 is way to low for a +5* map imo
00:07:605 (5) - I think the jump would play better if stacked on 00:08:074 (9) - . - plays really weird into (6) like that
00:10:043 (2) - U could space this further back imo cuz the jump to 00:10:230 (3) - is quite large as well. - i like how (2) plays, but you are right, so moved (3) up instead
00:11:730 (1) - NC not needed pls remove. - removed
00:19:043 (2) - Could move this further down to create triangle pattern with 00:19:043 (2,3,4) - . http://puu.sh/qpDr0/d2a770db62.jpg . - nice
00:33:480 (6) - Stack on 00:34:793 (5) - would make it look more neat and flows better imo. - yeah, fix
00:45:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - PP mapping NotLikeThis, I rly would suggest you to decrease the distance lol. - xD, reduced spacing
00:54:668 (1) - Move this up a bit to completely avoid overlap with 00:54:105 (6) - . - theres no overlap there imo
01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream seems overmapped. Sounds more like http://puu.sh/qpDEc/1c7349890a.jpg at 25% speed. - i wanna keep that stream for now
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pls no. Not 1,2 jumps on this ;-; At least decrease the distance plsssssssss I beg u ;-;;;;; - reduced
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - I think flow can be better like http://puu.sh/qpDLx/aa31018358.jpg . 01:19:605 (2) - is stack on 01:20:168 (3) - 's slider end. - yeah, but the jump (3,1) feel really forced imo
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cri every tim I see pp mapping This spacing is just so unnecessary imo. - im gonna keep this one
SeemsGood, besides the pp mapping parts

GL!~

Thanks for modding!!!!! :3

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-08-14T03:58:27+00:00

Can't believe I completely forgot about this.

Dream

00:04:605 - This place is rather empty. I think you can fill it in instead of just putting two 1/1 gaps in a row, especially since you already use 1/2 rhythms earlier.
00:15:480 (1) - I think you can break this into a circle, and then a 1/1 slider beginning on the downbeat. It's too undermapped imo for the difficulty.
00:36:199 (7,1,2) - This is really hard to read honestly, and I think the spacing change is too drastic. Can you do something simpler here?
00:43:793 (5,6,1) - Try and get 6>1 to be a larger jump for better emphasis.
00:59:824 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think its more fitting to have spacing increase rather than decrease. Considering that the pitch is going up.

Frost

00:42:480 (8) - This looks too much like a circle due the the positioning of the slider-end. I think you should just keep it as a circle tbh.
01:27:480 (1,2) - The pattern is good, but maybe reposition it so 1 is closer to the center? the spinner is really short so keeping it closer to the center helps the player catch the note easier.

MINAKO

00:02:918 (5,1) - This is such a large jump, and then 00:03:668 (2,3) - are 1/1 spaced? The spacing really needs work here. As well as 00:05:168 (1) - .
00:06:293 (2) - Remove a repeat and map that downbeat to something clickable please.
00:09:480 (5) - Here too, dont ignore the dowmnbeat.
00:21:293 (6,1) - I think the pause is rather unintuitive. Maybe stack instead of overlapping like this.
00:35:730 (1) - Why is the SV so low here... It doesn't fit when you have streams right after it. Makes it look like a kickslider.
00:36:668 - This whole section si way too slow honestly. Why is this 0.6 and then the next 1.3z? its too drastic

.
00:41:168 (5) - 00:42:668 (1) - its so confusing how one is a 1/1 slider and the other is 1/2 but they are the same length..

This difficulty still needs some work.

B r o k e n

00:37:043 (2) - Two circles instead? Emphasize 00:37:230 - since thats what makes this beat different from the other sliders.
00:56:168 (1,2) - You can space this out more, 1.20x is nice
00:58:418 (3,1) - Here too imo. Emphasize those downbeats.
01:00:480 (5,1) - This sounds better as a slider since the downbeat here isnt actually strong (theres barely a note there).

O-M

00:03:105 (4) - I think this rhythm is unnecessary on a Normal especially when its the intro. I would remove and just put a circle on 00:03:293 - . Nice and simple.
00:37:418 (1) - Can you make this slider more even? Or use a different shape? it looks really imbalanced atm.
00:40:418 (1) - head looks off here too xP Can you make it nicer.
00:53:918 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here is really weird. Why are they all on red ticks instead of whites?

use this rhythm

00:58:605 (5) - This isn't good either. You're clicking on a weak beat like 00:58:605 - but ignoring 00:58:793 - which is much stronger. Replace this with just a circle on 00:58:793 - .
01:00:293 (3) - Why are you ignoring 01:00:480 - :C
01:02:918 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This just looks really jumbled up. Simplify the rhythm and placement a bit here, its too clustered honestly.
01:06:105 (2,4) - This is really bad. Don't do overlaps like this please. It's a Normal, xP

This could use some work too.

Easy

01:14:168 (1,3) - I think this is really confusing to read actually, because of the double blanket.

Something like this would be a lot more straightforward

Other than that, solid diff. Doesn't need more mods.

[]

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-14T06:30:27+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this. - the mod is here, that is what matter /:D/

Dream

00:04:605 - This place is rather empty. I think you can fill it in instead of just putting two 1/1 gaps in a row, especially since you already use 1/2 rhythms earlier. - added some 1/2 in that part
00:15:480 (1) - I think you can break this into a circle, and then a 1/1 slider beginning on the downbeat. It's too undermapped imo for the difficulty. - separated into a circle and a slider, it was sopose to be vocal, but since this has been mentioned before i changed now
00:36:199 (7,1,2) - This is really hard to read honestly, and I think the spacing change is too drastic. Can you do something simpler here? - keep the spacing change, but change the direction and reduced the spacing a bit
00:43:793 (5,6,1) - Try and get 6>1 to be a larger jump for better emphasis. - moved the head of (1) a bit farther
00:59:824 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think its more fitting to have spacing increase rather than decrease. Considering that the pitch is going up. - yeah

Easy

01:14:168 (1,3) - I think this is really confusing to read actually, because of the double blanket. - fixed
Something like this would be a lot more straightforward

Other than that, solid diff. Doesn't need more mods. - thx

[]

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

thanks for the mod!!! >w<

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-08-14T21:40:32+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this.

B r o k e n

00:37:043 (2) - Two circles instead? Emphasize 00:37:230 - since thats what makes this beat different from the other sliders. changed
00:56:168 (1,2) - You can space this out more, 1.20x is nice changed
00:58:418 (3,1) - Here too imo. Emphasize those downbeats. changed
01:00:480 (5,1) - This sounds better as a slider since the downbeat here isnt actually strong (theres barely a note there). changed

Update

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260,176,64043,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,276,64230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-08-17T03:18:01+00:00

Duh !, totally forgot about this GD xD

Thanks for modding !
💞 = Lovely Appreciated !
🌟 = Cool !
✅ = Fixed as you suggested
🌠 = Fixed other way
🍒 = Keep for now...
💌 = Commenting
💫 = Confused
❌ = Disagreed !
💢 = !!!

- G I D Z - wrote:
From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General
Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out

O-M's Normal
AR 5 is considerably high for a Normal diff, I recommend 3.5~4
✅AR4 should be fine
00:15:668 (1,2) - Blanket~
✅I'm clumsy ! xD
00:18:668 (1) - Missing hit-clap on slider end
✅Oke
00:21:668 (1) - ^
✅^
00:22:793 - Snare drum sound here I woudn't wanna miss it, Add note?
✅kay
00:23:543 (5) - Missing clap.
✅ye
Umm, same goes here for the hitsounds, hit-claps usually follow the snare drum of the music. In this song, the snares are at every 2nd and 4th white tick. Consider putting claps consistently with this pattern.
✅I'm a terrible hitsounder xD . I'd ask missa for help I guess
01:03:668 (4) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpAWv/eace3d160c.jpg imo.
✅kay
01:06:668 (3) - This is overlapping with 01:05:168 (1) - a bit, move 01:06:668 (3) - to the right a bit to avoid overlapping pls.
🌠ah, remade
You need to make this at least 2.2* for the diff spread to be even and rankable.
✅increasing DS ?

GL!~

💌Thank you !

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this.
O-M

00:03:105 (4) - I think this rhythm is unnecessary on a Normal especially when its the intro. I would remove and just put a circle on 00:03:293 - . Nice and simple.
✅Circle :3

00:37:418 (1) - Can you make this slider more even? Or use a different shape? it looks really imbalanced atm.
🌠Don't know how ;w;

00:40:418 (1) - head looks off here too xP Can you make it nicer.
✅RIP my eyes xD

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00:53:918 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here is really weird. Why are they all on red ticks instead of whites?
use this rhythm
00:58:605 (5) - This isn't good either. You're clicking on a weak beat like 00:58:605 - but ignoring 00:58:793 - which is much stronger. Replace this with just a circle on 00:58:793 - .
01:00:293 (3) - Why are you ignoring 01:00:480 - :C
01:02:918 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This just looks really jumbled up. Simplify the rhythm and placement a bit here, its too clustered honestly.
01:06:105 (2,4) - This is really bad. Don't do overlaps like this please. It's a Normal, xP

💌Daymn ! Too many fix. Remaking kiai part by following your suggestion !. Sorry for such problems xD
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This could use some work too.
💌reworking it now ! :3

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

💌Thank you !

Yeay !. My diff looks better now

Btw, some rework makes the HS off, don't know how to ;w;
@missa : copy it again please :3
tags,source,artist and kinds are broken ;w;

Update 10th \:3/

Diffname changed to Moei's Normal

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