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Daisuke - Moshimo (TV Size)

posted 2016-05-24T19:21:46+00:00

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B r o k e n

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-18T03:54:17+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
Hard
00:06:297 (4) - Clap hitsound a single clap doesn't seem too good
00:11:172 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider k
00:12:672 (1) - Finish Hitsound on the beginning of the slider k
00:41:922 (3,4) - Delete thoses, make a single note there 00:41:922 , make a slider here 00:42:109 and make two stream notes there 00:42:390 - 00:42:484. You followed the voices before, so I think it's better like this.naw this is fine
00:48:859 (2) - Delete the slider, make a single note there ^
01:01:797 (5) - Clap hitsound on the beginning of the slidernaw, a single clap doesn't seem too good, I know it's for empathizing the clap sound, but to me it doesn't sound too good

Sorry for modding Hard instead, I started to mod Hard because I thought it was the Light Insane diff.

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50078
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14640
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
BeatmapID:991372
BeatmapSetID:460046

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-1018,"moshimo.avi"
0,0,"BGN.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2016-07-19T20:38:30+00:00

From my queue ~\o

[General]

Might want to fix that description of yours.

AR9.2 on If seems a bit overkill for a 160 bpm map, no? Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9.

Also, the correct offset might be 664, see if thats better. About the hitsounding, I recommend you look into it again, because some hitsounding don't have a consistent pattern, which makes it very weird. Other than that, everything else looks good. Onto the mod.

[If]

- 00:09:672 (1,2) - Its a bit too close, distance it a bit.

- 00:19:422 (4,5) - Control+G this pattern? It works because the slider's head isn't landing on the white tick and vocally works too.

- 01:19:047 (1,1) - Use .4 DS to space these from 01:18:672 (1) - .

[Frost's Insane]

- 00:09:672 (1,2,1,2) - Overlapping is nice sometimes, but in this case, overlapping here might not be a good idea.

- 00:33:109 (4) - Would be better if you made it into two circle notes, with 00:33:297 - stacking on top of 00:33:484 (5) - .

- 00:43:234 (2,3) - In this case, it would be better if it was just a triplet.

- 01:25:797 (2,1) - Unfortunately, this is unrankable from what I've been taught.

[ M I N A K O 's Light Insane]

- 00:01:984 (6) - Avoid this overlap, make it a triangle with 00:01:047 (4,5,6) - , then adapt the star pattern after.

- 00:21:297 (6,1) - Align it a bit better.

- 00:27:297 (5) - Would be better if you made it a 3/4 slider and added a circle note 00:27:672 - .

- 00:33:484 (4) - This reverse slider kind of just stuck out, and you missed so much in between.

- 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little bit overkill for a Light Insane. Condense the stream more.

- 01:03:672 (1,5) - Fix the blanket here please, it triggered me a little bit.

- 01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't consistently DS'd. Fix that.

- 01:10:234 (1) - Make it two circle notes, a slider just alone feels awkward.

- 01:18:672 - This section still calls for normal-hitsounds, not soft.

[Conclusion]

A very nice song, indeed. Good mapset and nice spread. It could still use some work on hitsounds and overlappings, but good Job, and good luck.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-19T22:47:29+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
From my queue ~\o

[General]

Might want to fix that description of yours. - yee M I N A K O plz ;w;

AR9.2 on If seems a bit overkill for a 160 bpm map, no? Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9. - i love the ar 9.2 ;v; but you are right, changed

Also, the correct offset might be 664, see if thats better - i feel that offset way early :/ still gonna ask someone to check this . About the hitsounding, I recommend you look into it again, because some hitsounding don't have a consistent pattern, which makes it very weird. Other than that, everything else looks good. Onto the mod.

[If]

- 00:09:672 (1,2) - Its a bit too close, distance it a bit. - right, moved

- 00:19:422 (4,5) - Control+G this pattern? It works because the slider's head isn't landing on the white tick and vocally works too. - it seems weird, but fixed in other way

- 01:19:047 (1,1) - Use .4 DS to space these from 01:18:672 (1) - . - ohh thanks, changed ds

[Conclusion]

A very nice song, indeed. Good mapset and nice spread. It could still use some work on hitsounds and overlappings, but good Job, and good luck.

Thanks for the mod!!!! :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-07-21T02:57:01+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
[Frost's Insane]

- 00:09:672 (1,2,1,2) - Overlapping is nice sometimes, but in this case, overlapping here might not be a good idea. I see what you're saying, but if I don't overlap them, the jump feels overly harsh imo.

- 00:33:109 (4) - Would be better if you made it into two circle notes, with 00:33:297 - stacking on top of 00:33:484 (5) - . This will probably be changed at some point, but I'd like to look at all the solutions people offer first before deciding (plus, I hate doubles (1/2 or 1/4) and avoid them when possible).

- 00:43:234 (2,3) - In this case, it would be better if it was just a triplet. Agreed, also added a kickslider to the end of the previous triplet. When I mapped this I kinda just sprinkled them in, apparently, but I do like them when they fit.

- 01:25:797 (2,1) - Unfortunately, this is unrankable from what I've been taught. I don't really see why it would be unrankable, as every person who played it that I saw was able to see the circle behind it, but I'll change it anyway, because I would hate to be the one mapper who makes people choke after the hard part lol.

why did i make this map like a monstrata map omg i'm rethinking my entire life, regrets

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Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2016-07-23T19:01:58+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
Light Insane
00:33:484 (4) - Delete that slider, breaks the rhythm. Make a 1/2 slider there 00:33:484 and a 1/2 reverse slider there 00:33:859. Changed
00:35:734 (1) - Why the 0.5x ? and the finish hitsound ? Removed the hitsound
01:01:797 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should remove thoses, and make a 1/2 slider Changed
01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - I find it really ugly to hear, and it doesn't fit to what you've mapped before I knowww ;-; I'll try to change it

missa1912 wrote:
M I N A K O plz ;w; >_>

Ongaku wrote:
[ M I N A K O 's Light Insane]

- 00:01:984 (6) - Avoid this overlap, make it a triangle with 00:01:047 (4,5,6) - , then adapt the star pattern after. Changed

- 00:21:297 (6,1) - Align it a bit better. Changed

- 00:27:297 (5) - Would be better if you made it a 3/4 slider and added a circle note 00:27:672 - . Changed

- 00:33:484 (4) - This reverse slider kind of just stuck out, and you missed so much in between. Changed

- 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little bit overkill for a Light Insane. Condense the stream more. Changed

- 01:03:672 (1,5) - Fix the blanket here please, it triggered me a little bit. Changed

- 01:06:672 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't consistently DS'd. Fix that. Changed

- 01:10:234 (1) - Make it two circle notes, a slider just alone feels awkward. Changed

- 01:18:672 - This section still calls for normal-hitsounds, not soft. Yeah, that's better
Updateeee (don't hate me senpai ;-;)
osu file format v14

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Title:Moshimo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:[ M I N A K O ]'s Light Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B r o k e n O-Moei [ M I N A K O ]
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Narwhal Prime

111 posts

Joined November 2012

Narwhal Prime 2016-07-26T22:40:17+00:00

Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[Easy]

00:11:168 (1) - remove NC. Optional: 00:09:668 (3) - add NC
01:19:793 (1) - Try removing the clap. Since it's quieter than 01:20:168 (2) - , removing loud hitsound can help emphasize 01:20:168 (2) - better.

[O-M's Normal]

I got nothing to change. Good job (also I feel like I've seen a few of your other guest diffs in my queue lol)

[B r o k e n's Hard]

00:09:293 (4) - This is a nitpick: I feel these two 1.6x jumps are too close in the music for this diff: 00:08:168 (1,2) - and 00:09:293 (4,1) - . Also, the music doesn't really feel loud enough to justify 1.6x compared to the others. Moving the head of 00:09:293 (4) - to (344,92) would maintain the flow while changing its spacing with 00:08:730 (2) - to 1.2x (consistent with the other 1.2x-1.6x spacings in this section).

[M I N A K O's Light Insane]

00:06:293 (2) - suggestion: try moving this higher than 00:06:105 (1) - so that 00:05:918 (3,1,2) - has a V-shaped pattern and feels more exciting.
The normal clap hitsounds are too loud, especially in the kiai. By comparison, Frost's Insane also has relatively higher volume sections (80-90%), but uses the softer drum sample clap. To me, that feels better (I think a couple other diffs used this too). So, I recommend using the drum clap.

[Frost's Insane]

AIMod detects a lot of unsnapped objects. It seems like a simple Timing > Resnap All Notes does the trick (except for 00:00:667 (2) - but that's a simple adjustment). Still might want to check that all the notes are okay after that.
00:33:293 - Something should be here... make 00:33:104 (4) - a slider (head at 276,172 and end at 212,178)

[If]

AIMod detects an unsnapped slider end - please adjust that.
00:07:043 (2) - Distance from 00:06:668 (1) - is a bit small so the jump feels "cramped". If you move it to (80,200) the jump feel nicer AND the spacing among 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - is nice and even.
00:13:418 (4) - nitpick: the direction this slider goes in and the position of 00:13:793 (5) - are not quite aligned. Either straighten them or turn this slider into a curved one.
00:31:418 (4) - nitpick: I can't really explain why, but putting this slider feels nicer. Try moving the head to (64,256). (I guess it would be a little farther from 00:31:793 (5) - and have a more circular flow from 00:30:668 (1,2,3) - ).
00:51:105 (6,7) - and 01:13:043 (2,3) - not quite fond of the circle being so close to the slider when the other jumps in this kiai are larger (it's the hardest diff so there should be larger jumps). For example try this quick example I made for 00:50:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5699850. See if it feels any smoother; it feels similar to your 00:52:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which I like.

Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-26T23:04:21+00:00

Black reply = Commenting

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

Your queue is cool I must admit XD/ Your mods always helpful by using a clear english language and provides appopriate suggestions

[O-M's Normal]
I got nothing to change. Good job (also I feel like I've seen a few of your other guest diffs in my queue lol)

Lol yeah haha!. I have a lot of gd request lately. Dont know why XD/
Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away
Good luck with ranking!

Sure ! Sorry for burdening anyway. Everyone can be so busy taking these requests or irl works. ~~I'm happy~~ we are happy with your mod though xd. Good luck !
By any chance, can we be mutual?

Regards,
NP

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-26T23:49:11+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[Easy]
00:11:168 (1) - remove NC. Optional: 00:09:668 (3) - add NC - i think is ok, since 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - have the same beat but 00:11:168 (1) - has a very "unique" one, same at 00:48:668 (1) - for example
01:19:793 (1) - Try removing the clap. Since it's quieter than 01:20:168 (2) - , removing loud hitsound can help emphasize 01:20:168 (2) - better. - right, fix
[If]
AIMod detects an unsnapped slider end - please adjust that. - fix
00:07:043 (2) - Distance from 00:06:668 (1) - is a bit small so the jump feels "cramped". If you move it to (80,200) the jump feel nicer AND the spacing among 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - is nice and even. - (2) was there to emphasize (3), but you are right, moved 2 and ajusted the pattern
00:13:418 (4) - nitpick: the direction this slider goes in and the position of 00:13:793 (5) - are not quite aligned. Either straighten them or turn this slider into a curved one. - yeah, fix mirror the first half of that combo
00:31:418 (4) - nitpick: I can't really explain why, but putting this slider feels nicer. Try moving the head to (64,256). (I guess it would be a little farther from 00:31:793 (5) - and have a more circular flow from 00:30:668 (1,2,3) - ). - nice
00:51:105 (6,7) - and 01:13:043 (2,3) - not quite fond of the circle being so close to the slider when the other jumps in this kiai are larger (it's the hardest diff so there should be larger jumps). For example try this quick example I made for 00:50:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5699850. See if it feels any smoother; it feels similar to your 00:52:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which I like. - fixed 00:51:105 (6,7) - the other one is fine like that
Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away - is about a tragic luv story SASUKEEEEEE <4
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

Thanks for modding!!! :3

Last edited by missa1912 2016-07-29T05:31:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-07-27T05:02:12+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi missa1912 and friends, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[B r o k e n's Hard]
00:09:293 (4) - This is a nitpick: I feel these two 1.6x jumps are too close in the music for this diff: 00:08:168 (1,2) - and 00:09:293 (4,1) - . Also, the music doesn't really feel loud enough to justify 1.6x compared to the others. Moving the head of 00:09:293 (4) - to (344,92) would maintain the flow while changing its spacing with 00:08:730 (2) - to 1.2x (consistent with the other 1.2x-1.6x spacings in this section).
the 1.6 distance are pretty much similar music parts such as 00:07:230 (3) - 00:08:730 (2) - 00:09:293 (4,1) - 00:10:230 (3) - , these areas of the music here stands out so, a bigger distance suits better in my option, no change

Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully this mod has been helpful! Lots of solid patterns so far, and this is a nice short song; I didn't mind repeating it over and over.
(what is Naruto about lol I have no idea) *runs away its about Naruto looking for Sasuke.....not really
Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-07-28T02:26:15+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
[Frost's Insane]
AIMod detects a lot of unsnapped objects. It seems like a simple Timing > Resnap All Notes does the trick (except for 00:00:667 (2) - but that's a simple adjustment). Still might want to check that all the notes are okay after that. Yea, offset change rekt my diff lul. Thanks for pointing it out
00:33:293 - Something should be here... make 00:33:104 (4) - a slider (head at 276,172 and end at 212,178)
Yea, idk what happened here, did not intend that. Switched it back to the original.

Ongaku wrote:
Also, concerning Frost's Insane, if its gonna be AR8.9, might as well make it 9. I disagree, I would rather keep it low. If 8.9 is just such a horrible number that people are triggered about it, I would rather go to 8.8 than 9.

why tho

osu file format v14

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2016-07-30T15:42:32+00:00

Hi! Just a random mod to give some thoughts

[General]

Why "If" as name for the hardest diff? I know moshimo is translated to 'if' but it says nothing to me xd maybe change it for 'dream' ? it appears a lot in the lyrics too.
Why OD 8,8 for the 5,38*? It scales from 7,6 to 8,8 which is too much... consider lowering it to 8,5 at least.
You should add B_R_O_K_E_N and [_M_I_N_A_K_O_] to the tags instead since they've spaced names.

[If]
00:02:918 (5,2) - Por qué no stackearlos? quedaría bien
00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) - Para esta parte te sugeriría hacer que la distancia sea más consistente ya que se nota un poquito al jugarla. También te aconsejaría seguir con el estilo que venías haciendo antes que era hacer 'back and fourth' y hacer así hacer movimientos estilo zig zag. http://puu.sh/qjL7J/1ea652b1d3.jpg
00:07:793 (1) - Honestamente encuentro que este NC no es necesario
00:10:793 (1) - ^
00:08:730 (3,4,5) - Esta sección en general está bien estructurada, pero la distancia que hay entre estas notas es demasiado baja comparada con todo lo que haces en el mapa, por lo que te sugiero altamente hacer un pattern distinto con distancias parecidas a 00:10:043 (2,3,4,5) - o 00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/qjLm0/5868327a94.jpg Esto fue lo que se me ocurrió a mí, ahí ve tú.
00:10:418 (4,5,1) - Esta transición podrías hacerla más 'recta' para que fluyera mejor horizontalmente. También encuentro que 00:09:668 (1,2) - se ve un poquito mal estéticamente, así que bueno podrías hacer algo así pero es desición tuya :p http://puu.sh/qjLwI/03709088d4.jpg
00:16:230 (2) - El primer tick rojo muevelo un poco para atrás para formar simetría.
00:17:918 (4,1) - Stack acá estaría genial ya que ambos se apegan a un beat fuerte. 00:18:105 (1) - También acá deberías quitar el NC
00:23:543 (5,6) - Haz de este distanciado igual a 00:23:168 (3,4) - para ser más consistente y mueve 00:23:918 (7) - un poquito para abajo.
00:25:980 (6,1) - Personalmente este tipo de transiciones lineales cuando vienes haciendo movimientos más tipo back and fourth se sienten mal al jugar, por lo mismo te recomendaría que movieras 00:26:168 (1) - un poco abajo a la derecha para hacerle un blanket a 00:25:230 (3) - y así cambias el ángulo el cual quedaría mejor imo.
00:27:105 (5) - Podrías mover este un poco a la derecha para formar un ángulo que sea menos recto, además de tener un gran espacio con 00:27:293 (6) - cosa que lo veo un poco raro.
00:30:105 (1) - remove NC
00:33:480 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Bueno para empezar como ves toda esta sección se ve un poco mal estructurada comparado con otras cosas que has hecho. Además que hayas agregado tantos circulos sin ningún slider encuentro que queda super mal, ya que no es una parte donde deberías enfatizar con tanto mini jump. Te recomendaría hacer de 00:33:668 (1,5,8) - 1/2 sliders, quedarían mejor en la canción imo
00:40:043 (2,3) - Huh, no soy muy fanático de este tipo de transiciones, encuentro que se ven y juegan mal, considera hacer algo distinto aquí.
00:41:918 (6,7) - Agregar un poco más de distancia ya que es lo que vienes haciendo.
00:46:980 (4,1) - un triplet aquí no quedaría nada mal
00:50:168 - En el inicio del kiai utilizas demasiados círculos, cosa que se vuelve muy monótono ya que se sintiese como si fuesen jumps en un lugar donde no hay un verdadero énfasis en la canción. 00:50:168 (1,1) - considera hacer de estos 1/2 sliders.
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Este tipo de transición no está nada mal, el único problema que le hallo es que el aumento es demasiado grande y notorio por lo que se dificulta jugar, 01:17:543 (1,2,1,2) - encuentro que deberías reducir el distanciado de estos un pelo.
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - Back and fourth quedaría mejor http://puu.sh/qjMrD/69b85d0e55.jpg

[Frost's]
00:03:480 (5,1) - blanket properly?
00:05:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - why all these circles in a jumpy pattern? I mean the there's no such emphasis to add those jumps there, consider adding some 1/2 sliders instead.
00:07:230 (1) - delete NC
00:08:730 (1) - & 00:09:293 (1) - & 00:10:230 (1) - ^
00:17:730 (3,4) - You can ctrl+g the rhythm here, would fit better imo.
00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This all rhythm feels a bit awkward for me. I guess you should be following vocals instead, would fit better. http://puu.sh/qjMXx/6fa5507469.jpg Something like this maybe?
00:30:105 (4,6,1) - You can avoid this overlap and also structure the pattern a bit.
00:32:355 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. The actual rhythm 00:32:168 (1,2) - here is kinda weird i guess and also because the sliders are starting on a red tick which is not a downbeat so it feels a bit off, so yeah better to follow the other rhythm imo
00:47:730 (3,6,7,1) - Stack the triplet where 00:47:730 (3) - is? So it has more distance from 00:48:293 (5) - which would be nice since you're doing some jump pattern.
01:17:543 (1,1,1) - Don't why the NC spam? Also 01:18:293 (1,1) - would be better if you do a stream instead, like the other ones you were doing in all the diff.

[Minako's]
00:00:668 - Why 0,5x SV? It feels waaay too slow, consider increasing it a bit, 0,8x maybe? Even 1,0 would fit good.
00:00:668 (3,4) - Would be better if you follow vocals here instead, so consider doing a 1/1 slider + circle
00:08:730 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - All this section feels a bit weird, mainly because 00:08:168 (1) - here you were following guitar but then you started following drums 00:08:730 (2,3) -. Also 00:09:480 (5) - this shouldn't be ending on a downbeat because it's where the music should be emphasized more, so I guess you should be starting a slider 00:09:668 - instead. Maybe follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/qjNwt/bd8235340c.jpg ? Would fit better imo.
00:35:730 (1) - Why the SV change? I mean it's as intense as 00:34:980 (3) - so there should be no change in the SV. Moreover if you're doing a SV change like that, you should be adding a NC every time you change it. However I think you should delete it and be more consistent i guess.
00:36:668 - You go from 0,6x to 1,3x? Like.. why? xD And then the kiai is 1,0x ... :s I think you should be more careful with that since the kiai should have more emphasis like the other sections. Consider doing something like 0,8x ~ 1,0x ~ 1,3x for 00:36:668 - 00:42:668 - 00:50:168 - (0,6x feels tooo slow for me)
01:10:418 (2) - make a 1/2 slider instead? It feels to empty with 01:10:605 - not being mapped.
01:12:480 - missing note?
01:26:168 (6) - NC?

[broken's]
00:05:730 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? would follow vocals better
00:40:230 - 00:40:980 - feels too empty. Consider adding circles instead.
00:56:168 (1) - Extend this slider? 00:56:730 - I guess this should be the end of it.
01:10:230 (3,4) - These sliders should be starting on a white ticks since these are downbeats and would fit better the music imo. Consder doing something like http://puu.sh/qjO9d/c4fbc42019.jpg
01:19:418 (3) - this should be go 01:19:605 - here. Also you can add a NC there.
01:21:105 (4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. Again slider starting on a red tick which doesn't feel good. (e.g 01:22:605 (3,4) - here you do it well)
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - For a 3,2* this triplet would mess the acc of the players. I think it'd be better if you do a 1/4 slider reverse for this.

Ok that's all because I'm not that good modding Normal and Easy

Anyway I think this set need a bit more polishing before going ranked, but surely you can do it!

Hope I helped a bit c: Good luck with the set!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-07-31T06:57:13+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! Just a random mod to give some thoughts

[General]
Why "If" as name for the hardest diff? I know moshimo is translated to 'if' but it says nothing to me xd maybe change it for 'dream' ? it appears a lot in the lyrics too. - yeah, actually "dream" looks better xD
Why OD 8,8 for the 5,38*? It scales from 7,6 to 8,8 which is too much... consider lowering it to 8,5 at least. - lowered to 8,6 xD
You should add B_R_O_K_E_N and [_M_I_N_A_K_O_] to the tags instead since they've spaced names. - fix

[If]
00:02:918 (5,2) - Por qué no stackearlos? quedaría bien - yeah
00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) - Para esta parte te sugeriría hacer que la distancia sea más consistente ya que se nota un poquito al jugarla. También te aconsejaría seguir con el estilo que venías haciendo antes que era hacer 'back and fourth' y hacer así hacer movimientos estilo zig zag. http://puu.sh/qjL7J/1ea652b1d3.jpg - arreglado de otra manera, ya que la unica nota que deseo enfatizar ahi es (2) :p
00:07:793 (1) - Honestamente encuentro que este NC no es necesario - removido
00:10:793 (1) - ^ - ^
00:08:730 (3,4,5) - Esta sección en general está bien estructurada, pero la distancia que hay entre estas notas es demasiado baja comparada con todo lo que haces en el mapa, por lo que te sugiero altamente hacer un pattern distinto con distancias parecidas a 00:10:043 (2,3,4,5) - o 00:07:043 (2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/qjLm0/5868327a94.jpg Esto fue lo que se me ocurrió a mí, ahí ve tú. - quiziera mantener el triangulo ahi, aumente el spacing entre notas haciendo esa parte lucir mas limpia
00:10:418 (4,5,1) - Esta transición podrías hacerla más 'recta' para que fluyera mejor horizontalmente. También encuentro que 00:09:668 (1,2) - se ve un poquito mal estéticamente, así que bueno podrías hacer algo así pero es desición tuya :p http://puu.sh/qjLwI/03709088d4.jpg - ohhh, arreglado :3
00:16:230 (2) - El primer tick rojo muevelo un poco para atrás para formar simetría. - ok
00:17:918 (4,1) - Stack acá estaría genial ya que ambos se apegan a un beat fuerte. 00:18:105 (1) - También acá deberías quitar el NC - cambie esa parte entera, para enfatizar mejor algunas partes
00:23:543 (5,6) - Haz de este distanciado igual a 00:23:168 (3,4) - para ser más consistente y mueve 00:23:918 (7) - un poquito para abajo. . - arregado de otra forma
00:25:980 (6,1) - Personalmente este tipo de transiciones lineales cuando vienes haciendo movimientos más tipo back and fourth se sienten mal al jugar, por lo mismo te recomendaría que movieras 00:26:168 (1) - un poco abajo a la derecha para hacerle un blanket a 00:25:230 (3) - y así cambias el ángulo el cual quedaría mejor imo.
00:27:105 (5) - Podrías mover este un poco a la derecha para formar un ángulo que sea menos recto, además de tener un gran espacio con 00:27:293 (6) - cosa que lo veo un poco raro.
00:30:105 (1) - remove NC
00:33:480 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Bueno para empezar como ves toda esta sección se ve un poco mal estructurada comparado con otras cosas que has hecho. Además que hayas agregado tantos circulos sin ningún slider encuentro que queda super mal, ya que no es una parte donde deberías enfatizar con tanto mini jump. Te recomendaría hacer de 00:33:668 (1,5,8) - 1/2 sliders, quedarían mejor en la canción imo
00:40:043 (2,3) - Huh, no soy muy fanático de este tipo de transiciones, encuentro que se ven y juegan mal, considera hacer algo distinto aquí.
00:41:918 (6,7) - Agregar un poco más de distancia ya que es lo que vienes haciendo.
00:46:980 (4,1) - un triplet aquí no quedaría nada mal - no quiero mover mucho esos jumps por ahora xc
00:50:168 - En el inicio del kiai utilizas demasiados círculos, cosa que se vuelve muy monótono ya que se sintiese como si fuesen jumps en un lugar donde no hay un verdadero énfasis en la canción. 00:50:168 (1,1) - considera hacer de estos 1/2 sliders. - eso solo lo hize en los primeros 2 combos del kiai, a partir de ahi cada combo inicia con slider :p
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Este tipo de transición no está nada mal, el único problema que le hallo es que el aumento es demasiado grande y notorio por lo que se dificulta jugar, 01:17:543 (1,2,1,2) - encuentro que deberías reducir el distanciado de estos un pelo.
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - Back and fourth quedaría mejor http://puu.sh/qjMrD/69b85d0e55.jpg - nah esta bien asi
- Algunas partes donde no comente es porque mientras aplicaba tu mod comenze a remapear ciertas partes que no me gustaban (practicamente un 60% del mapa xc) y aplicando un spacing mas consistente, o eso creo xD
Ok that's all because I'm not that good modding Normal and Easy

Anyway I think this set need a bit more polishing before going ranked, but surely you can do it!

Hope I helped a bit c: Good luck with the set!

Gracias por el mod!!!! <4

CodeS

1,142 posts

Joined September 2011

CodeS 2016-08-04T01:09:54+00:00

From my Q, sorry it took so long, I was busy with work T_T

Anyway, fast mod so let's get to it:

00:24:668 (1) - What is this slider doing here? half the head is outside the grid, please move it, this is almost an Unrankeable issue in an easy
00:29:918 (4,5,1) - This flow is WAY too sharp, try to be more subtle about it by making a triangle with the slider tail and the notes and rotate a bit 00:30:668 (1) - , like:

SPOILER

Also:

00:43:793 (2,3,4,1) - try doing a similar pattern here, why?, because the direction the reverse slider is throwing the player AND where the notes (00:44:918 (3,4) - ) are makes a really bad flow, try this:

SPOILER

01:05:168 (1) - curve this slider, right now the movement the player has to make coming from a curve like flow like 01:03:668 (3,4) - is really bad if this slider is a line, also, a curve helps guide better the player to the next note, ALWAYS think about where the player is moving and what movement they are following, this is super important in an easy:

SPOILER

01:18:668 (1) - There's no reason for this to be a NC

That's it with this diff, overall a solid diff who could use a bit of tuning on where you're making the player move but overall, is a solid map
Change that Slider going almost offscreen tho, that's a serious problem in an Easy.

Fastmod this diff:

00:18:480 - This needs a note jump, really, the flow you've been following here as been great but there's this stop suddenly that makes the player go out of comfort and makes the next slider feels weird as fuck.
00:21:480 - Same here, why are you ignoring these beats / voice intensity ? these stops makes your map play weird, as the overall constant pace of the song makes me feel like I should be hitting something here.

00:31:980 (4,5) - don't stack this, believe me, specially when the next slider is in a red tick, it feels awkward to play when you've been making the player go around jumping and having fun and then suddenly a stack here to break the flow and on top of that next is a red tick slider where the strong beat is in the tail

00:49:793 - You like to play with slider speed don't you? I could erase these 00:49:793 (4,5) - and use the "woosh" sound to make a kinda fast slider (not skystar fast but somehow more "interesting" to play)

01:15:855 - Same as before, missing a note here
01:18:293 - I would make a triple here

Not much from my side for this, the diff feels alright to play.

Sorry it wasn't long, take everything with a grain of salt of course because I don't want to impose my style, so good luck!
Also sorry if a time copy doesn't fit, I'm rusty =(

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-08-04T01:18:15+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
[Frost's]
[*]00:03:480 (5,1) - blanket properly? This isn't meant to be a blanket, I prefer it the way it is now.
[*]00:05:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - why all these circles in a jumpy pattern? I mean the there's no such emphasis to add those jumps there, consider adding some 1/2 sliders instead. I do sort of agree with you, but I used sliders in this section to represent long piano notes for the most part, so using sliders to represent 1/2 piano notes seems weird to me.
[*]00:07:230 (1) - delete NC fine :V
[*]00:08:730 (1) - & 00:09:293 (1) - & 00:10:230 (1) - ^ ^
[*]00:17:730 (3,4) - You can ctrl+g the rhythm here, would fit better imo. agreed, good catch
[*]00:27:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This all rhythm feels a bit awkward for me. I guess you should be following vocals instead, would fit better. http://puu.sh/qjMXx/6fa5507469.jpg Something like this maybe? Messed around with it a bit differently.
[*]00:30:105 (4,6,1) - You can avoid this overlap and also structure the pattern a bit. Fixed up there ^.
[*]00:32:355 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. The actual rhythm 00:32:168 (1,2) - here is kinda weird i guess and also because the sliders are starting on a red tick which is not a downbeat so it feels a bit off, so yeah better to follow the other rhythm imo I did something similar to that^, all the comments about it are annoying >:
[*]00:47:730 (3,6,7,1) - Stack the triplet where 00:47:730 (3) - is? So it has more distance from 00:48:293 (5) - which would be nice since you're doing some jump pattern. Hinders readability and makes this part overly intense imo.
[*]01:17:543 (1,1,1) - Don't why the NC spam? Also 01:18:293 (1,1) - would be better if you do a stream instead, like the other ones you were doing in all the diff. I think NC spam is fine here, given that the same noise in the background is being repeated over and over, but I'm fed up with people pointing out this, so I'm giving in... I would like to put a stream here, but there's really no good way to go from 01:18:293 (4) to 01:18:668 (1) with a stream. I like this pattern as it is.

@missa, changed the ar to 8.8 because it's more consistent with the mapset and I think it fits well.

yhay

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missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-04T05:22:53+00:00

Katyusha wrote:

From my Q, sorry it took so long, I was busy with work T_T

Anyway, fast mod so let's get to it:

00:24:668 (1) - What is this slider doing here? half the head is outside the grid, please move it, this is almost an Unrankeable issue in an easy - yeah i was worried about it, fixed ,also there was another like this one on the kiai, changed too
00:29:918 (4,5,1) - This flow is WAY too sharp, try to be more subtle about it by making a triangle with the slider tail and the notes and rotate a bit 00:30:668 (1) - , like:

SPOILER
- nice, fixed

Also:

00:43:793 (2,3,4,1) - try doing a similar pattern here, why?, because the direction the reverse slider is throwing the player AND where the notes (00:44:918 (3,4) - ) are makes a really bad flow, try this:

SPOILER
- yeah, fixed

01:05:168 (1) - curve this slider, right now the movement the player has to make coming from a curve like flow like 01:03:668 (3,4) - is really bad if this slider is a line, also, a curve helps guide better the player to the next note, ALWAYS think about where the player is moving and what movement they are following, this is super important in an easy:

SPOILER
- fix

01:18:668 (1) - There's no reason for this to be a NC - removed

That's it with this diff, overall a solid diff who could use a bit of tuning on where you're making the player move but overall, is a solid map
Change that Slider going almost offscreen tho, that's a serious problem in an Easy.

Sorry it wasn't long, take everything with a grain of salt of course because I don't want to impose my style, so good luck!
Also sorry if a time copy doesn't fit, I'm rusty =(

Thanks for the mod!! :3

ps: nice banners tho >w<

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2016-08-04T14:54:37+00:00

From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General

Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out

Easy

00:11:168 (1) - Remove NC pls, there's no need. You can just use the same slider like u did previously at 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - .
00:17:918 (4) - Clap should be on 00:18:293 (5) - instead~
00:32:918 (4) - Clap on slider end instead to keep hit-claps consistent on every 2nd and 4th white tick.
00:36:668 (1) - Hit-finish at 00:36:668 - only, and remove clap pls, sounds less noisy.
00:38:543 (2) - Clap on slider head instead of end.
00:39:668 (1) - Hit-finish instead of clap
00:41:168 (3) - Clap on slider end
00:42:668 (1) - Remove clap on slider head pls, usually the claps are for emphasizing the snare drums heard in the music. So pls follow it.
00:43:793 (2) - Remove clap on reverse arrow
00:45:668 (1) - Finish instead of clap
00:44:918 (3,1) - You can blanket these better.
00:47:168 (3) - NC here instead of 00:48:668 (1) - , would look more sensible.
The drum additions' hitsounds dun rly fit the song imo, consider changing them to auto.
01:24:668 (1) - Remove NC.

O-M's Normal

AR 5 is considerably high for a Normal diff, I recommend 3.5~4
00:15:668 (1,2) - Blanket~
00:18:668 (1) - Missing hit-clap on slider end
00:21:668 (1) - ^
00:22:793 - Snare drum sound here I woudn't wanna miss it, Add note?
00:23:543 (5) - Missing clap.
Umm, same goes here for the hitsounds, hit-claps usually follow the snare drum of the music. In this song, the snares are at every 2nd and 4th white tick. Consider putting claps consistently with this pattern.
01:03:668 (4) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpAWv/eace3d160c.jpg imo.
01:06:668 (3) - This is overlapping with 01:05:168 (1) - a bit, move 01:06:668 (3) - to the right a bit to avoid overlapping pls.
You need to make this at least 2.2* for the diff spread to be even and rankable.

Broken's Hard

00:07:043 (2,3) - Why is this suddenly spaced so far?
Umm, I am seeing a lot of inconsistent spacing in a Hard diff, which is not good. Pls use Distance Snap and keep all notes and sliders into consistent spacing.
00:16:230 (4) - u can make it flow better like http://puu.sh/qpBbW/d3049beee5.jpg imo.
00:40:230 - Snare drum sound here, add note? Feels empty with just 2 1/1 sliders in 1 combo pattern.
00:50:918 (3) - You dun need a hit-finish here as it is emphasized enough at 00:50:168 (1) - for the music.
00:56:730 - Again I think u can add a note here, although there is nothing to follow here, it's just for making the pattern flow better imo.
00:58:980 - ^
01:02:918 (3) - Dun need that hit-finish lol
01:04:418 (5,6) - I'm sure u can blanket this to make the map look better.
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - Dem this is evil for a hard diff lmao.
I see some SV changes on this diff. For a hard diff I dun rly think its necessary, just try to keep everything consistent. After all, you wanna rank the map

M I N A K O's Light Insane

lol I find ur SV logic a bit questionable, cuz u used 1.3x in the beginning whereas it's 1x in Kiai
00:05:918 (3,1,2) - They dun flow well imo, I think the reverse slider should be at 00:06:105 (1) - instead of a note. Wher e the note should be at 00:06:668 - instead.
00:07:418 (4) - You could move this down to space the pattern more evenly.
00:14:168 (1) - Use a curved slider for better flow?
00:21:293 (6,1) - This pause is rather awkward when momentum was being built at 00:18:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
00:43:793 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This flows bad cuz there is no shape to the pattern and spacing is inconsistent. I tried something with the pattern http://puu.sh/qpC9S/9cea78694e.jpg 00:44:918 (5,6) - are stack on 00:44:355 (2) - and 00:44:543 (3) - respectively.
00:48:105 (6,1) - Avoid overlapping ~
00:47:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing for these jumps, try to make some shapes. Like what I showed u previously, which is a star.
Notes at Kiai with 90% volume sounds rly loud. Lower the volume?
00:57:668 (3,4) - You forgot to blanket the slider end of 00:57:668 (3) - lol
00:58:418 (4) - Why is this 1/1 all of a sudden? Would be better to follow 00:56:168 (1,2,3) - .
01:08:918 (3) - Would look and flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCqr/a1cf2779fc.jpg imo. Doesnt matter if u cant stack on 01:07:793 (2) - .
01:10:605 - Drum kick can be heard here. Add note? Notes following only vocals here sounds weird imo.
01:12:668 (4) - This shape can be improved, or you can just use a simple slider shape here lol.
01:14:918 (3,4) - Blanket ~
01:15:668 (4) - NC
01:14:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is spread out here while 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so dense. Try to keep rhythms more consistent pls.
01:19:793 (3) - I would stack on 01:20:168 (1) - 's head for a jump pause effect.

Frost's Insane

00:04:230 (2) - Better to stack on 00:03:293 (4) - .
00:10:230 (3) - I would try to avoid overlap here, but seems u have done this intentionally idk.
00:12:105 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary imo.
00:14:918 (4) - Can flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCXg/5cfe6980d0.jpg imo.
00:25:605 (4) - Spacing inconsistent with 00:25:418 (3,5) - .
00:31:230 (2) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpD1p/be6a8fce9d.jpg imo.
00:35:918 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - .
00:49:605 (1) - Remove NC like before.
00:52:230 (4,5,6) - Wouldnt it be better just to make linear flow here lol?
01:27:480 (1,2) - Hard diff has triplets, so maybe Insane should also use triplets?
Second hald of the map seems brighter than the first lol, still I hear hitsound issues, refer to "General" .

Dream

OD 8.6 seems way too high, 7 should be fine imo.
00:07:605 (5) - I think the jump would play better if stacked on 00:08:074 (9) - .
00:10:043 (2) - U could space this further back imo cuz the jump to 00:10:230 (3) - is quite large as well.
00:11:730 (1) - NC not needed pls remove.
00:19:043 (2) - Could move this further down to create triangle pattern with 00:19:043 (2,3,4) - . http://puu.sh/qpDr0/d2a770db62.jpg .
00:33:480 (6) - Stack on 00:34:793 (5) - would make it look more neat and flows better imo.
00:45:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - PP mapping NotLikeThis, I rly would suggest you to decrease the distance lol.
00:54:668 (1) - Move this up a bit to completely avoid overlap with 00:54:105 (6) - .
01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream seems overmapped. Sounds more like http://puu.sh/qpDEc/1c7349890a.jpg at 25% speed.
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pls no. Not 1,2 jumps on this ;-; At least decrease the distance plsssssssss I beg u ;-;;;;;
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - I think flow can be better like http://puu.sh/qpDLx/aa31018358.jpg . 01:19:605 (2) - is stack on 01:20:168 (3) - 's slider end.
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cri every tim I see pp mapping This spacing is just so unnecessary imo.
SeemsGood, besides the pp mapping parts

GL!~

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2016-08-05T18:22:46+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
[M I N A K O's Light Insane]
00:06:293 (2) - suggestion: try moving this higher than 00:06:105 (1) - so that 00:05:918 (3,1,2) - has a V-shaped pattern and feels more exciting. Fixed
The normal clap hitsounds are too loud, especially in the kiai. By comparison, Frost's Insane also has relatively higher volume sections (80-90%), but uses the softer drum sample clap. To me, that feels better (I think a couple other diffs used this too). So, I recommend using the drum clap. I prefer normal hitclaps, yet I'll put the sounds less louder

iYiyo wrote:
[Minako's]
[*]00:00:668 - Why 0,5x SV? It feels waaay too slow, consider increasing it a bit, 0,8x maybe? Even 1,0 would fit good. Changed
[*]00:00:668 (3,4) - Would be better if you follow vocals here instead, so consider doing a 1/1 slider + circle I prefer to follow music here
[*]00:08:730 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - All this section feels a bit weird, mainly because 00:08:168 (1) - here you were following guitar but then you started following drums 00:08:730 (2,3) -. Also 00:09:480 (5) - this shouldn't be ending on a downbeat because it's where the music should be emphasized more, so I guess you should be starting a slider 00:09:668 - instead. Maybe follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/qjNwt/bd8235340c.jpg ? Would fit better imo. I fixed it
[*]00:35:730 (1) - Why the SV change? I mean it's as intense as 00:34:980 (3) - so there should be no change in the SV. Moreover if you're doing a SV change like that, you should be adding a NC every time you change it. However I think you should delete it and be more consistent i guess.Fixed
[*]00:36:668 - You go from 0,6x to 1,3x? Like.. why? xD And then the kiai is 1,0x ... :s I think you should be more careful with that since the kiai should have more emphasis like the other sections. Consider doing something like 0,8x ~ 1,0x ~ 1,3x for 00:36:668 - 00:42:668 - 00:50:168 - (0,6x feels tooo slow for me) I did it 1,0x
[*]01:10:418 (2) - make a 1/2 slider instead? It feels to empty with 01:10:605 - not being mapped. Fixed
[*]01:12:480 - missing note? Fixed
[*]01:26:168 (6) - NC? NC!

- G I D Z - wrote:
M I N A K O's Light Insane
lol I find ur SV logic a bit questionable, cuz u used 1.3x in the beginning whereas it's 1x in Kiai Fixed
00:05:918 (3,1,2) - They dun flow well imo, I think the reverse slider should be at 00:06:105 (1) - instead of a note. Wher e the note should be at 00:06:668 - instead. I prefer mine
00:07:418 (4) - You could move this down to space the pattern more evenly. Yup
00:14:168 (1) - Use a curved slider for better flow? Imma keep it 'cause of 00:13:793 (6) -
00:21:293 (6,1) - This pause is rather awkward when momentum was being built at 00:18:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . Fixed
00:43:793 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This flows bad cuz there is no shape to the pattern and spacing is inconsistent. I tried something with the pattern http://puu.sh/qpC9S/9cea78694e.jpg 00:44:918 (5,6) - are stack on 00:44:355 (2) - and 00:44:543 (3) - respectively. Fixed
00:48:105 (6,1) - Avoid overlapping ~ Fixed
00:47:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing for these jumps, try to make some shapes. Like what I showed u previously, which is a star. Fixed
Notes at Kiai with 90% volume sounds rly loud. Lower the volume? Ikr, changed it to 80
00:57:668 (3,4) - You forgot to blanket the slider end of 00:57:668 (3) - lol Fixed
00:58:418 (4) - Why is this 1/1 all of a sudden? Would be better to follow 00:56:168 (1,2,3) - . 'cause it sounds weird ;-;
01:08:918 (3) - Would look and flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCqr/a1cf2779fc.jpg imo. Doesnt matter if u cant stack on 01:07:793 (2) - . neh
01:10:605 - Drum kick can be heard here. Add note? Notes following only vocals here sounds weird imo. Imma keep it
01:12:668 (4) - This shape can be improved, or you can just use a simple slider shape here lol. Fixed
01:14:918 (3,4) - Blanket ~ Fixed
01:15:668 (4) - NC Neh
01:14:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is spread out here while 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so dense. Try to keep rhythms more consistent pls. It sounds good
01:19:793 (3) - I would stack on 01:20:168 (1) - 's head for a jump pause effect. I understand, but I prefer the way it is.

Thanks for mods ! ♥

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Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-08-05T23:00:11+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
00:04:230 (2) - Better to stack on 00:03:293 (4) - . I disagree, it flows more naturally the way I have it now, imo.
00:10:230 (3) - I would try to avoid overlap here, but seems u have done this intentionally idk. It is intentional. I think that it's far enough away from the previous slider that it's fine to read.
00:12:105 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary imo. I used NC here to indicate a 1/1 jump, it makes people react slower because of the lack of trails between notes, which improves flow (at least for me?).
00:14:918 (4) - Can flow better like http://puu.sh/qpCXg/5cfe6980d0.jpg imo. Sure, why not.
00:25:605 (4) - Spacing inconsistent with 00:25:418 (3,5) - . Fixed.
00:31:230 (2) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpD1p/be6a8fce9d.jpg imo. I like the way it is currently because it makes it feel like more of a jump for the vocals (plus it flows well into the slider after it).
00:35:918 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with 00:38:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - . Ok.
00:49:605 (1) - Remove NC like before. Same answer as before.
00:52:230 (4,5,6) - Wouldnt it be better just to make linear flow here lol? Yea, idk why I did that lol.
01:27:480 (1,2) - Hard diff has triplets, so maybe Insane should also use triplets? I like this for more emphasis on the 3rd note, but I moved the 2 notes slightly closer because the spacing seemed overkill.
Second hald of the map seems brighter than the first lol, still I hear hitsound issues, refer to "General" . Waiting for missa to add hitsounds so I can use his in the places where I've put my non-custom hitsounds.

Thanks for modding!

yepyepyep

osu file format v14

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B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-08-05T23:58:36+00:00

iYiyo's mod

00:05:730 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? would follow vocals better this fits pretty well for vocal and music
00:40:230 - 00:40:980 - feels too empty. Consider adding circles instead. I'll consider it, I think its fine
00:56:168 (1) - Extend this slider? 00:56:730 - I guess this should be the end of it. naw this is fine, I'm really picky about extended sliders
01:10:230 (3,4) - These sliders should be starting on a white ticks since these are downbeats and would fit better the music imo. Consder doing something like http://puu.sh/qjO9d/c4fbc42019.jpg did something a bit different, I want the triple to be there so no doing what you did, removed a single note and went with 2 1/2 sliders + single note then the triple
01:19:418 (3) - this should be go 01:19:605 - here. Also you can add a NC there. these singles notes are all for vocal, thats why I ignored the sound on the red tick, I don't think it's necessary to put a single note there because of the way I map this area
01:21:105 (4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm. Again slider starting on a red tick which doesn't feel good. (e.g 01:22:605 (3,4) - here you do it well) it's map like this according to the music, the guitar? I believe starts on the red tick so I mapped this like this for the music and the other one that I did well maps well with the music
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - For a 3,2* this triplet would mess the acc of the players. I think it'd be better if you do a 1/4 slider reverse for this.icrased spin and did return slider

- G I D Z -'s Mod

00:07:043 (2,3) - Why is this suddenly spaced so far? I distanced areas where I believe the music stand out more like 00:07:230 (3) - 00:08:730 (2) - 00:09:293 (4,1) - 00:10:230 (3) -
Umm, I am seeing a lot of inconsistent spacing in a Hard diff, which is not good. Pls use Distance Snap and keep all notes and sliders into consistent spacing.I don't believe a hard should be all same DS
00:16:230 (4) - u can make it flow better like http://puu.sh/qpBbW/d3049beee5.jpg imo. adjusted
00:40:230 - Snare drum sound here, add note? Feels empty with just 2 1/1 sliders in 1 combo pattern. I'll consider it
00:50:918 (3) - You dun need a hit-finish here as it is emphasized enough at 00:50:168 (1) - for the music. ok, removed
00:56:730 - Again I think u can add a note here, although there is nothing to follow here, it's just for making the pattern flow better imo. I'll consider it
00:58:980 - ^ a single note here didn't fit to well in my view
01:02:918 (3) - Dun need that hit-finish lol removed
01:04:418 (5,6) - I'm sure u can blanket this to make the map look better. improved
01:27:480 (1,2,3) - Dem this is evil for a hard diff lmao. changed in a different mod
I see some SV changes on this diff. For a hard diff I dun rly think its necessary, just try to keep everything consistent. After all, you wanna rank the map the SV change before the kiai mode was to speed it up more before kiai mode starts, I don't think it's an issue

UPDATE UPDATE edited post 8/6/16

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Last edited by B r o k e n 2016-08-06T22:51:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

CodeS

1,142 posts

Joined September 2011

CodeS 2016-08-06T14:28:36+00:00

Some clarifications from me

I forgot to say it, but my "Insane" mod in page 6 was for [ M I N A K O ]'s Light Insane
Frost contacted me by PM, forgot to say which Insane I was modding

Good Luck

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-06T18:44:00+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General
Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out - im still trying some custom hs, im gonna add some soon, i hope x.x

Easy
00:11:168 (1) - Remove NC pls, there's no need. You can just use the same slider like u did previously at 00:06:668 (1,2,3) - . - remove NC, but keep same slider
00:17:918 (4) - Clap should be on 00:18:293 (5) - instead~ - fix
00:32:918 (4) - Clap on slider end instead to keep hit-claps consistent on every 2nd and 4th white tick. - ok
00:36:668 (1) - Hit-finish at 00:36:668 - only, and remove clap pls, sounds less noisy. - removed
00:38:543 (2) - Clap on slider head instead of end. - fix
00:39:668 (1) - Hit-finish instead of clap - ^
00:41:168 (3) - Clap on slider end - ^
00:42:668 (1) - Remove clap on slider head pls, usually the claps are for emphasizing the snare drums heard in the music. So pls follow it. - fix
00:43:793 (2) - Remove clap on reverse arrow - removed
00:45:668 (1) - Finish instead of clap - k
00:44:918 (3,1) - You can blanket these better. - fix(? i coulnd see any problem with that blanket
00:47:168 (3) - NC here instead of 00:48:668 (1) - , would look more sensible. - k
The drum additions' hitsounds dun rly fit the song imo, consider changing them to auto.
01:24:668 (1) - Remove NC. - fix

Dream
OD 8.6 seems way too high, 7 should be fine imo. - 7 is way to low for a +5* map imo
00:07:605 (5) - I think the jump would play better if stacked on 00:08:074 (9) - . - plays really weird into (6) like that
00:10:043 (2) - U could space this further back imo cuz the jump to 00:10:230 (3) - is quite large as well. - i like how (2) plays, but you are right, so moved (3) up instead
00:11:730 (1) - NC not needed pls remove. - removed
00:19:043 (2) - Could move this further down to create triangle pattern with 00:19:043 (2,3,4) - . http://puu.sh/qpDr0/d2a770db62.jpg . - nice
00:33:480 (6) - Stack on 00:34:793 (5) - would make it look more neat and flows better imo. - yeah, fix
00:45:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - PP mapping NotLikeThis, I rly would suggest you to decrease the distance lol. - xD, reduced spacing
00:54:668 (1) - Move this up a bit to completely avoid overlap with 00:54:105 (6) - . - theres no overlap there imo
01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream seems overmapped. Sounds more like http://puu.sh/qpDEc/1c7349890a.jpg at 25% speed. - i wanna keep that stream for now
01:17:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pls no. Not 1,2 jumps on this ;-; At least decrease the distance plsssssssss I beg u ;-;;;;; - reduced
01:19:418 (1,2,3) - I think flow can be better like http://puu.sh/qpDLx/aa31018358.jpg . 01:19:605 (2) - is stack on 01:20:168 (3) - 's slider end. - yeah, but the jump (3,1) feel really forced imo
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cri every tim I see pp mapping This spacing is just so unnecessary imo. - im gonna keep this one
SeemsGood, besides the pp mapping parts

GL!~

Thanks for modding!!!!! :3

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-08-14T03:58:27+00:00

Can't believe I completely forgot about this.

Dream

00:04:605 - This place is rather empty. I think you can fill it in instead of just putting two 1/1 gaps in a row, especially since you already use 1/2 rhythms earlier.
00:15:480 (1) - I think you can break this into a circle, and then a 1/1 slider beginning on the downbeat. It's too undermapped imo for the difficulty.
00:36:199 (7,1,2) - This is really hard to read honestly, and I think the spacing change is too drastic. Can you do something simpler here?
00:43:793 (5,6,1) - Try and get 6>1 to be a larger jump for better emphasis.
00:59:824 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think its more fitting to have spacing increase rather than decrease. Considering that the pitch is going up.

Frost

00:42:480 (8) - This looks too much like a circle due the the positioning of the slider-end. I think you should just keep it as a circle tbh.
01:27:480 (1,2) - The pattern is good, but maybe reposition it so 1 is closer to the center? the spinner is really short so keeping it closer to the center helps the player catch the note easier.

MINAKO

00:02:918 (5,1) - This is such a large jump, and then 00:03:668 (2,3) - are 1/1 spaced? The spacing really needs work here. As well as 00:05:168 (1) - .
00:06:293 (2) - Remove a repeat and map that downbeat to something clickable please.
00:09:480 (5) - Here too, dont ignore the dowmnbeat.
00:21:293 (6,1) - I think the pause is rather unintuitive. Maybe stack instead of overlapping like this.
00:35:730 (1) - Why is the SV so low here... It doesn't fit when you have streams right after it. Makes it look like a kickslider.
00:36:668 - This whole section si way too slow honestly. Why is this 0.6 and then the next 1.3z? its too drastic

.
00:41:168 (5) - 00:42:668 (1) - its so confusing how one is a 1/1 slider and the other is 1/2 but they are the same length..

This difficulty still needs some work.

B r o k e n

00:37:043 (2) - Two circles instead? Emphasize 00:37:230 - since thats what makes this beat different from the other sliders.
00:56:168 (1,2) - You can space this out more, 1.20x is nice
00:58:418 (3,1) - Here too imo. Emphasize those downbeats.
01:00:480 (5,1) - This sounds better as a slider since the downbeat here isnt actually strong (theres barely a note there).

O-M

00:03:105 (4) - I think this rhythm is unnecessary on a Normal especially when its the intro. I would remove and just put a circle on 00:03:293 - . Nice and simple.
00:37:418 (1) - Can you make this slider more even? Or use a different shape? it looks really imbalanced atm.
00:40:418 (1) - head looks off here too xP Can you make it nicer.
00:53:918 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here is really weird. Why are they all on red ticks instead of whites?

use this rhythm

00:58:605 (5) - This isn't good either. You're clicking on a weak beat like 00:58:605 - but ignoring 00:58:793 - which is much stronger. Replace this with just a circle on 00:58:793 - .
01:00:293 (3) - Why are you ignoring 01:00:480 - :C
01:02:918 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This just looks really jumbled up. Simplify the rhythm and placement a bit here, its too clustered honestly.
01:06:105 (2,4) - This is really bad. Don't do overlaps like this please. It's a Normal, xP

This could use some work too.

Easy

01:14:168 (1,3) - I think this is really confusing to read actually, because of the double blanket.

Something like this would be a lot more straightforward

Other than that, solid diff. Doesn't need more mods.

[]

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-08-14T06:30:27+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this. - the mod is here, that is what matter /:D/

Dream

00:04:605 - This place is rather empty. I think you can fill it in instead of just putting two 1/1 gaps in a row, especially since you already use 1/2 rhythms earlier. - added some 1/2 in that part
00:15:480 (1) - I think you can break this into a circle, and then a 1/1 slider beginning on the downbeat. It's too undermapped imo for the difficulty. - separated into a circle and a slider, it was sopose to be vocal, but since this has been mentioned before i changed now
00:36:199 (7,1,2) - This is really hard to read honestly, and I think the spacing change is too drastic. Can you do something simpler here? - keep the spacing change, but change the direction and reduced the spacing a bit
00:43:793 (5,6,1) - Try and get 6>1 to be a larger jump for better emphasis. - moved the head of (1) a bit farther
00:59:824 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think its more fitting to have spacing increase rather than decrease. Considering that the pitch is going up. - yeah

Easy

01:14:168 (1,3) - I think this is really confusing to read actually, because of the double blanket. - fixed
Something like this would be a lot more straightforward

Other than that, solid diff. Doesn't need more mods. - thx

[]

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

thanks for the mod!!! >w<

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-08-14T21:40:32+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this.

B r o k e n

00:37:043 (2) - Two circles instead? Emphasize 00:37:230 - since thats what makes this beat different from the other sliders. changed
00:56:168 (1,2) - You can space this out more, 1.20x is nice changed
00:58:418 (3,1) - Here too imo. Emphasize those downbeats. changed
01:00:480 (5,1) - This sounds better as a slider since the downbeat here isnt actually strong (theres barely a note there). changed

Update

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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-08-17T03:18:01+00:00

Duh !, totally forgot about this GD xD

Thanks for modding !
💞 = Lovely Appreciated !
🌟 = Cool !
✅ = Fixed as you suggested
🌠 = Fixed other way
🍒 = Keep for now...
💌 = Commenting
💫 = Confused
❌ = Disagreed !
💢 = !!!

- G I D Z - wrote:
From my queue sry it's late. So here's a full mod~

General
Custom hitsounds?? Makes ur map sound much better imo~ Ask me about hitsounding if u dun understand how to, or if u dunno wat custom hitsounds to put in. I would be more than happy to help out

O-M's Normal
AR 5 is considerably high for a Normal diff, I recommend 3.5~4
✅AR4 should be fine
00:15:668 (1,2) - Blanket~
✅I'm clumsy ! xD
00:18:668 (1) - Missing hit-clap on slider end
✅Oke
00:21:668 (1) - ^
✅^
00:22:793 - Snare drum sound here I woudn't wanna miss it, Add note?
✅kay
00:23:543 (5) - Missing clap.
✅ye
Umm, same goes here for the hitsounds, hit-claps usually follow the snare drum of the music. In this song, the snares are at every 2nd and 4th white tick. Consider putting claps consistently with this pattern.
✅I'm a terrible hitsounder xD . I'd ask missa for help I guess
01:03:668 (4) - Would flow better like http://puu.sh/qpAWv/eace3d160c.jpg imo.
✅kay
01:06:668 (3) - This is overlapping with 01:05:168 (1) - a bit, move 01:06:668 (3) - to the right a bit to avoid overlapping pls.
🌠ah, remade
You need to make this at least 2.2* for the diff spread to be even and rankable.
✅increasing DS ?

GL!~

💌Thank you !

Monstrata wrote:
Can't believe I completely forgot about this.
O-M

00:03:105 (4) - I think this rhythm is unnecessary on a Normal especially when its the intro. I would remove and just put a circle on 00:03:293 - . Nice and simple.
✅Circle :3

00:37:418 (1) - Can you make this slider more even? Or use a different shape? it looks really imbalanced atm.
🌠Don't know how ;w;

00:40:418 (1) - head looks off here too xP Can you make it nicer.
✅RIP my eyes xD

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00:53:918 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here is really weird. Why are they all on red ticks instead of whites?
use this rhythm
00:58:605 (5) - This isn't good either. You're clicking on a weak beat like 00:58:605 - but ignoring 00:58:793 - which is much stronger. Replace this with just a circle on 00:58:793 - .
01:00:293 (3) - Why are you ignoring 01:00:480 - :C
01:02:918 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This just looks really jumbled up. Simplify the rhythm and placement a bit here, its too clustered honestly.
01:06:105 (2,4) - This is really bad. Don't do overlaps like this please. It's a Normal, xP

💌Daymn ! Too many fix. Remaking kiai part by following your suggestion !. Sorry for such problems xD
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This could use some work too.
💌reworking it now ! :3

Starring this because it has potential, but get some more mods for those two diffs I mentioned. I think they still need some more improvement. You can call me back for recheck when you feel 100% ready for bubble!

💌Thank you !

Yeay !. My diff looks better now

Btw, some rework makes the HS off, don't know how to ;w;
@missa : copy it again please :3
tags,source,artist and kinds are broken ;w;

Update 10th \:3/

Diffname changed to Moei's Normal

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-08-18T21:38:11+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Frost

00:42:480 (8) - This looks too much like a circle due the the positioning of the slider-end. I think you should just keep it as a circle tbh. k
01:27:480 (1,2) - The pattern is good, but maybe reposition it so 1 is closer to the center? the spinner is really short so keeping it closer to the center helps the player catch the note easier.i agree

ohooho a mod from the rankstrata himself, i'm honored Kappa

stuffs

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:Frost's Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B_R_O_K_E_N O-Moei [_M_I_N_A_K_O_]
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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-08-19T01:21:29+00:00

Little update 11th

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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-08-26T04:43:48+00:00

Another update 12th

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428,324,69480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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177,282,70230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Kaitjuh

856 posts

Joined December 2012

Kaitjuh 2016-09-02T20:11:36+00:00

from queue o/

Boi

Moei's Normal

00:15:668 (1) - Clap Sliderend
00:18:668 (1) - Remove Clap Sliderhead
00:32:168 (3,4) - ^
00:22:793 (3) - Clap
Ok I'm gonna stop with the claps lol. As a rule of thumb, every 2nd and 4th white tick could use a clap here.
Remove any claps on any non 2nd and 4th beats where you're following the vocals, a whistle is better suited for that.
00:36:668 (7) - Finish
01:14:918 (2) - This object is touching the hp bar, which does not look good.
01:22:793 (6) - why isn't this the same as 01:21:293 (3) - ? They sound like the same beats to me

Light Insane

00:01:980 (1) - this could make a nice emphasized jump, since the vocals can support it.
00:06:668 - This is a part where the music get louder and more abundant. Yet I feel like you could have done more to properly highlight this part. Utilizing different slider velocities during parts where the music gets louder could help you here imo. You could also increase spacing here to represent the music better. These factors can help in improving your overall map structure.
00:50:168 - ^the same applies to kiai time of course since the above point applies to this as well.
Another thing to note is that your spacing seems kinda random tbh, for example these 00:25:043 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - they seem to be the same objects rhythm wise, but the spacing is completely inconsistent. This contributes to a poor map structure sadly. Try and be aware of these things as you map them and mind which objects emphasize certain parts of the music and space them accordingly.
For now these are my biggest problems with this diff, hope I didn't sound too harsh or anything. If you need help don't hesitate and ask.

Good Luck~

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-03T01:15:07+00:00

Kaitjuh wrote:
from queue o/

Boi
Light Insane
00:01:980 (1) - this could make a nice emphasized jump, since the vocals can support it. - yeah, i ctrl+g that slider for better emphazise
00:06:668 - This is a part where the music get louder and more abundant. Yet I feel like you could have done more to properly highlight this part. Utilizing different slider velocities during parts where the music gets louder could help you here imo. You could also increase spacing here to represent the music better. These factors can help in improving your overall map structure. - is the beginning of the map, so i didnt want to make it too hard, also i think the jumps and streams in that part represent really well the rhythm imo
00:50:168 - ^the same applies to kiai time of course since the above point applies to this as well. - i agree in here, use more spacing in some parts
Another thing to note is that your spacing seems kinda random tbh, for example these 00:25:043 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - they seem to be the same objects rhythm wise, but the spacing is completely inconsistent. This contributes to a poor map structure sadly. Try and be aware of these things as you map them and mind which objects emphasize certain parts of the music and space them accordingly. - i didnt notice that, checked aroun the diff, i fix a lot of those, should be better now
For now these are my biggest problems with this diff, hope I didn't sound too harsh or anything. If you need help don't hesitate and ask. - haha no harsh at all :p

Good Luck~

Thanks for modding!! :3

TenkaiPalm

165 posts

Joined February 2014

TenkaiPalm 2016-09-03T17:25:03+00:00

Hi there :> weeee naruto~

Dream
00:22:230 (2) - I'm not sure if it's just me, but this seems odd. (Not structurally)
00:47:168 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Those are some big jumps when nothing huge seems to be happening in the song ;-;
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sammeee^

Frost's Insane
00:35:168 (1,3) - Overlapping stuffs, idk your choice to do whatever~
01:17:168 - I'm not sure if the extra slider velocity is needed here

General
Sorry for the short-ness of the mod, but yea here~ Maybe I'll add on to this later idk we'll see
I think parts of the map and some of the flow can be polished to be a bit better, keep looking for mods

Good luck ranking~

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-03T21:08:35+00:00

TenkaiPalm wrote:
Hi there :> weeee naruto~

Dream
00:22:230 (2) - I'm not sure if it's just me, but this seems odd. (Not structurally) - fixed some shapes, should be better now
00:47:168 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Those are some big jumps when nothing huge seems to be happening in the song ;-; - it is, i think xD
01:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sammeee^ - ^

General
Sorry for the short-ness of the mod, but yea here~ Maybe I'll add on to this later idk we'll see
I think parts of the map and some of the flow can be polished to be a bit better, keep looking for mods

Good luck ranking~

Thanks for the mod!! :3

Luel Roseline

1,034 posts

Joined February 2014

Luel Roseline 2016-09-05T10:36:49+00:00

Hi there! From my queue!
Light mod start

[Insane]
00:15:668 (1) - Move to 271, 143 (Only slider's end)

01:09:668 (1,2) - Ugly blanket...

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-05T12:12:19+00:00

Thanks for modding !
💞 = Lovely Appreciated !
🌟 = Cool !
✅ = Fixed as you suggested
🌠 = Fixed other way
🍒 = Keep for now...
💌 = Commenting
💫 = Confused
❌ = Disagreed !
💢 = !!!

Kaitjuh wrote:
from queue o/

Moei's Normal
00:15:668 (1) - Clap Sliderend
00:18:668 (1) - Remove Clap Sliderhead
00:32:168 (3,4) - ^
00:22:793 (3) - Clap
Ok I'm gonna stop with the claps lol. As a rule of thumb, every 2nd and 4th white tick could use a clap here.
Remove any claps on any non 2nd and 4th beats where you're following the vocals, a whistle is better suited for that.
✅Oh lel !, I've ask missa HSing, but think I'll do HS-ing myself xD .
00:36:668 (7) - Finish
✅Yes
01:14:918 (2) - This object is touching the hp bar, which does not look good.
✅RIP me !!!!! XD
01:22:793 (6) - why isn't this the same as 01:21:293 (3) - ? They sound like the same beats to me
💫Eh ? why you notice this one while I made something like this too before (00:09:293 (6) - ) but you didn't complaint xD. And anyway it's fine imo
Good Luck~

Thank you so much
Sorry for waiting, micchan ! xD

btw, where's minako ?

And at Creator's Words still applied O-M's Normal xd

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-05T16:16:47+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Sorry for waiting, micchan ! xD - micchie :3

btw, where's minako ? - was almost a month since last response ;w;

And at Creator's Words still applied O-M's Normal xd - lol

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-09-06T06:39:49+00:00

naruto

spread:
fine to me
difficulty things:
I recommend to change Normal diffs OD to ~4. current is a little bit low I guess.
metadata:
Idk

[Easy]

00:18:668 (1) - lazy xd you can make more perfect slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6028775 roughly this much?
00:24:668 (1) - I think stack on slider tail in EASY DIFF is soooooo difficult and dangerous. plesae consider new players and other way.

[Normal]

00:24:293 - 00:24:480 - Do not ignore these sounds plz. its quite strong. current rhythm is really really weird. maybe remove reverse and add two note?
01:24:855 (5) - tail clap

[Hard]

00:01:418 (4) - oh my god. are you serious? It's REALLY QUITE MESSY and It has a consistent distance. ok It's correct. HOWEVER! that makes overlap between 00:00:668 (2) - and 00:01:418 (4) - . I think you should replace it.
00:14:168 (1) - too curved I guess

[Light Insane]

00:15:668 (1) - tail clap?
00:38:918 (3,4,5) - I really don't recommend it. umm.... 00:38:918 (3,4,5) - 1/4 three note after 00:38:730 (2) - 1/4 slider? ~~omg my english is really terrible~~ Its inconvenient to play. I recommend 00:39:011 (4) - delete and 00:38:918 - change to 1/4 slider

shippuden

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-06T10:05:56+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
naruto
💌Naruto

spread:
fine to me
difficulty things:
I recommend to change Normal diffs OD to ~4. current is a little bit low I guess.
✅Oh lel !!!! x'D

metadata:
Idk

[Normal]
00:24:293 - 00:24:480 - Do not ignore these sounds plz. its quite strong. current rhythm is really really weird. maybe remove reverse and add two note?
✅a slider is better :3
01:24:855 (5) - tail clap
✅Missed >,<

shippuden
💌Grown up :3

Thank you so much

Update 14th

Me guess me gonna hiatus start from 7 september. Feel free to edit mine if me cant really loggin in x'D

Edit: me returned 😝

Last edited by O-Moei 2016-09-08T22:14:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

missa1912 2016-09-06T17:51:02+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
naruto

spread:
fine to me
difficulty things:
I recommend to change Normal diffs OD to ~4. current is a little bit low I guess.
metadata:
Idk

[Easy]
00:18:668 (1) - lazy xd you can make more perfect slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6028775 roughly this much? - i was a bit lazy xD, fixed
00:24:668 (1) - I think stack on slider tail in EASY DIFF is soooooo difficult and dangerous. plesae consider new players and other way. - i dont think it is a problem, at 00:24:668 - (when the slider is played) the stack is not visible anymore, and also the slider isn't too short so there's enough time to react i think, will keep it for now, but gonna see if i can change something there to evoid any problem :p
[Light Insane]
00:15:668 (1) - tail clap? - added clap
00:38:918 (3,4,5) - I really don't recommend it. umm.... 00:38:918 (3,4,5) - 1/4 three note after 00:38:730 (2) - 1/4 slider? ~~omg my english is really terrible~~ Its inconvenient to play. I recommend 00:39:011 (4) - delete and 00:38:918 - change to 1/4 slider - nice, changed
shippuden~

Thanks for the mod!!! :3

Frost

182 posts

Joined March 2014

Frost 2016-09-09T04:08:24+00:00

TenkaiPalm wrote:
Frost's Insane
00:35:168 (1,3) - Overlapping stuffs, idk your choice to do whatever~ It's intentional, I like this flow better as it goes downwards.
01:17:168 - I'm not sure if the extra slider velocity is needed here It's not really NEEDED, no, but I like the extra emphasis it provides.

S A V E R Y wrote:
[Insane]
00:15:668 (1) - Move to 271, 143 (Only slider's end)
.
i was aiming for this:
tHiS

01:09:668 (1,2) - Ugly blanket... Adjusted slightly, but since they're both wave sliders, it's near impossible to actually blanket both well.

updated slightly

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Moshimo (TV Size)
Artist:Daisuke
ArtistUnicode:ダイスケ
Creator:missa1912
Version:Frost's Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:Shippūden shippuden opening op 12 Frost B_R_O_K_E_N O-Moei
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Janpai

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Janpai 2016-09-12T01:48:36+00:00

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y

DISCLAIMER:

The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.

General

Turn off widescreen support on Light Insane
Why no custom hitsounds? xD

Easy

00:02:168 (3) - Just a personal preference http://puu.sh/r89Gi/18f9e7f283.jpg so 00:02:168 (3,1) - wouldn't be nearly overlapped
00:25:793 (2,3,4) - Personally, I don't like skipping downbeats by this way so I think you were following the vocal so maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/r89Vc/a5a4423eb6.jpg
00:50:918 (2) - The downbeat introduces new set of vocals then why it's just in a slider tail
01:19:793 (1,2) - Swap their NCs

Moei's Normal

Use OD & HP 4 with AR 5 for the proper diff spread
Imo your DS is too large :v 1.6 is too hard imo, you should use between 1-1.2. It seems unbalance that easy is using 1.1 then a big jump tp 1.6 :v How can you expect beginners to pass this kind of normal x-x it's like a rabbit jumps for them fyi
00:07:793 (3) - You can make this just a circle for simplicity of the rhythm
00:12:105 (6,7) - I would prefer that this is just a 1/2 reverse slider cuz (6)'s head and (7) have the same sound
00:21:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems kinda unbalance with 00:15:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that objects has no 1/2 rhythms but why suddenly spam it on that drum part, the density of the song doesn't differ that much so I would suggest that add some 1/2s at 00:15:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and remove some at 00:21:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's like a sudden diff spike imo
00:38:918 (3) - Why did you ignore the downbeat?
01:08:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo this is too dense, i think you're being abusive with the 1/2 rhythms here cuz you heard vocals right? it's not like that you can remove some of it to reduce density

B r o k e n's Hard

AR 7 is already fine for this BPM, no need to go on 7.5
00:00:668 (2,4) - The overlap looks bad imo, you could adjust (4) and form a proper blanket
00:43:980 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - You're rhythms are getting random here, some parts that are strong are just in the slider tails and some vocals are not properly emphasize by sliders
Sorry if I can't point out something that really needs a fix but this needs more work on rhythm choices, most of the song highlights the vocal the most but you have much 1/2 rhythms than can be converted to 1/1 but for my eyes it is inconsistent.

Light Insane

00:01:980 (1) - Why downbeat is ignored
00:13:980 (5) - Place at 360|345 ? for better transition
00:37:230 - there's a triggering drum here if you would listen carefully
01:05:168 (1,1,1) - This is kinda weird that having gaps here, even though it's a light insane i think this should be mapped at it's full with proper spacing not by just having it like this.

Sorry for the short mod but I feel that this needs more work on aesthetics. I just feel demotivated to mod atm xD goodluck :3

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