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[Oni]
[Oni]
- 00:09:509 - Did you skip the vocal here, since it isn't particularly prominent? I'm curious about this.
- 00:34:807 - Instead of leaving this awkwardly empty, like you filled up the vocal sections, you could be following the fading in background sounds here. Possibly something like this might work for you.
- 00:37:270 - Same thing as 00:09:509 - .
- 00:37:941 - Harder piano sound here, consider having less dons here by making this a kat.
- 00:46:897 - Would be nice to differentiate this from the over finisher, by emphasizing the harder piano note here.
- 00:51:374 - Personal suggestion, might be nice to have a kat here to emphasize the build up here, since you would be going between the two colors moreso.
- 01:10:628 - Change to k. Would be more consistent with the pattern right after it, at 01:11:300 - , and the fact that the last note does sound higher than the dons right before it.
- 01:16:337 - Change to k. The vocal rises here.
- 01:22:046 - Intentionally skipping the guitar here?
- 01:24:509 - / 01:24:956 - / 01:36:374 - Same as the above.
- 01:40:180 - Change to k. The sound here, is higher than the finisher you had at 01:39:732 - . Would be nice to differentiate between these two sounds.
- 01:55:852 - Change to k. The vocal rises towards the end of this phrase.
- 01:58:538 - Change to k. Pretty much the same as the above point, just the guitar this time.
- 02:24:397 - The current rhythm sounds like it's skipping some of the vocals here. Try something more like this.
- 02:40:180 - Would be nice to at least have a note at the start of the vocals here, since you've been following them pretty consistently throughout the entire song so far.
- 02:45:031 - What sound is this mapped to? It might just be me, but I don't think there's even a sound here. lol
- 03:09:956 - to 03:10:180 - ddk would fit nicely with the guitar strum here.
- 03:11:635 - Change to k. Vocal is noticeably higher than the don before it.
- 03:12:307 - Move to 03:12:195 - . Currently sounds like it's falling a beat too late.
- 03:17:568 - / 03:18:016 - / 03:18:464 - / 03:18:912 - Would suggest adding some notes in these spots, since it sounds kinda weird going from just 1/1 to a 1/4 stream at 03:19:135 - , when there is an audible buildup during the 1/1 part before it.
- 03:27:195 - Change to k. Vocal rises at the end here.
- 03:28:091 - and 03:28:538 - Intentionally skipping the guitar?
- 03:34:359 - Same as 03:27:195 -.
- 03:35:255 - and 03:35:703 - Same as 03:28:091 -.
- 03:46:225 - Add a k and change 03:46:337 - to d. You're currently skipping the vocal note at 03:46:225 - , which is just like the one you mapped to at 03:46:001 - .
- 03:58:986 - Change to k. Same reason as 03:27:195 -.