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[General]
[General]
- 00:00:330 - Here is the slow part,so 0,75 SV multiplier will be better keep increasing SV multiplier gradually 'till kiai.
- 00:45:106 (34) - That's Kantan,so you may ignore some strong sounds.Like this: 01:25:404 (86,87) -
- 01:39:732 (107,108) - Did you really hear any strong sound?
Review strong sounds and finishers,some finishers are unnecessary.Looks good.
- 00:42:867 (48,49,50) - Oops..1/2 triplet and finisher at the end.That's Muzukashii density.So 00:43:091 (49) - delete c:
- 00:57:195 (74,75,76) - Same above
- 01:04:359 (88,89,90) - ^
- 01:11:747 (103) - Beginner players will die xD If you delete it,that will be better emphasis imo
- 01:25:852 (129,130,131) - You got it
- 01:54:509 (180,181,182) - ditto
- 02:08:837 (206,207,208) - Let me explain them..These suggestions about finishers are just suggestion.I think it makes harder :/ But you may keep them.Otherwise,Futsuu looks good.
- 01:11:300 (88,89) - This two sounds are same,why don kat? :/
- 01:43:762 (187) - That's just suggestion.Delete it and listen,then decide
- 01:50:927 (204) - ^
- 02:07:494 - Move this inherited point to 02:07:270 -.Because if you keep that,02:07:494 - That won't be 25% volume.
- 02:24:397 - Add a note for better vocal emphasis :3
- 02:31:561 - ^
- 02:37:941 (101) - Move inherited point to 02:37:718 -,I told the reason
- 03:19:135 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Using 1/4 triplets seems awkward and overmapped because I couldn't hear any 1/4 sound.
- 00:11:076 (11,12) - I think these sounds are same but first note is don,second is kat,is that for variety or following vocal? c:
- 00:43:315 - Don't emphasis all strong sounds with finisher(except 00:43:315 - 00:46:897 (96) - 00:50:479 (108) - 00:54:061 (1) - ),seems overmapped.
- 01:01:113 (18) - I don't want to interfere your style because its so good :3 but you should move it to 01:00:665 - for consistency and better emphasis.
02:12:755 (20) - ^ - 01:04:807 (30) - I couldn't hear any strong sound (except regular 1/1 sound)...oh wait.Actually here is measure start and second part of chorus.So keep that
my bad - 01:10:852 - It's not good flow I guess,when I am testing
with DT,I was confused.Isn't it better:
- 01:39:732 (55) - Oh,what the...There isn't any strong sound.Why is there a finisher? o:
- 02:25:404 - This section looks like muzukashii density,also there is kiai.So you should make here harder and emphasize vocal.What do you think about this:
- 02:28:986 - Same above,follow same flow but make here different for variety(like "k kkd kkd k d").
- 02:30:777 - 02:37:494 - Copy previous "gypsy part" and paste here for consistency
- 03:22:718 - You shouldn't make all choruses different,unless they're not same.
- 03:56:635 (151,152) - This is 1/3,not 1/4.So 1/3 dk pattern is better.