1. For your spread to be rankable, you need to have a difficulty under 2 SR.. atm your Normal is 2.17 so just know about that. You could probably easily get it under 2 SR by just nerfing OD or something.
2. Maybe change the OD and HP of your Hard to 5? It makes for a more gradual progression as you increase in difficulty.
3. HP7 on 2 diffs both under 5 stars hoyl.
4. Your SB elements aren't in a SB folder which.. I haven't seen before. I dunno if it's a problem though.

1. 00:12:977 (4,5) - switch these two so that the clap is on a clickable object?
2. 00:16:179 (1,2) - space these out more?
3. 00:16:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the angles in this part are kinda sharp and don't look very nice. I would move these objects ar
4. 00:18:202 (4,1) - overlap here is meh
5. 00:20:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the equal spacing in this section makes it unmemorable, I suggest playing around with the spacing and adding emphasis to certain jumps where you see fit
6. 00:22:584 (1,3) - blanket this and 00:23:426 (5,8)
7. 00:24:101 (8) - ctrl g? and maybe space these out more
8. 00:24:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - are these the same? can't be sure but if they're not you can just use polygon creator to make them that way
9. 00:25:617 (3,5) - blanket?
10. 00:26:629 (8,9) - maybe do something like this here? Makes it more interesting imo
11. 00:29:325 (7,8) - imo all of these are like emphasized because they're kicksliders, so I would do something more interesting with them spacing wise
12. 00:40:112 (5,6) - space these more?
13. 00:42:134 (2,3) - ^
14. 00:45:505 (6,7) - ok imo these are the emphasized parts in these section but the spacing on all of these are very low so I would change them a bit. It'd make the map more fun to play to have some important jumps with these
15. 00:48:539 (1,3) - blanket?
16. 01:10:786 (3,4,5) - angle is meh because it's a straight line
17. 01:11:460 (1,2) - spacing kinda big?
18. 01:22:752 (4) - move this to x397 y302
19. 01:58:988 (2,5) - overlap meh

1. 00:14:831 (1,2,1) - blankets
2. 00:26:207 - don't think there should be a note here?
3. 00:26:629 (6) - I don't like how the start of the new section isn't clickable. This is okay in like.. lowdiffs but I wouldn't do it here.
4. 00:29:325 (3) - ^
5. 01:13:820 (6,2) - fix overlap?
6. 01:19:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't like this angle, feel like jumps with freer spacing would play better, or maybe continue with the back and forth pattern
7. 01:24:438 (1,2,3) - bring this to the right a bit?
8. 01:27:977 (3,6) - ew :<
9. 01:33:033 (1,2,3,4) - again, in my opinion continous wide angles like this don't play well, and I would change it as the rest of the map flows very well in comparison
10. 02:19:213 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

Logic Agent wrote:

Hi friend, m4m stuff, sorry I'm late hehe np :^)

[General]

1. For your spread to be rankable, you need to have a difficulty under 2 SR.. atm your Normal is 2.17 so just know about that. You could probably easily get it under 2 SR by just nerfing OD or something. o I think you had the old version of the map since I added Ren's Easy recently haha
2. Maybe change the OD and HP of your Hard to 5? It makes for a more gradual progression as you increase in difficulty. Fixed
3. HP7 on 2 diffs both under 5 stars hoyl. idk there are a lot of ranked maps with the same SR that have the HP7 (I know it's not really a good way to defend myself for this but it's not that bad imo I'll probably change it if more complains tho)
4. Your SB elements aren't in a SB folder which.. I haven't seen before. I dunno if it's a problem though. I've seen it before and I don't think it's a problem but maybe I'll fix it if other modders complain

[Another]

1. 00:12:977 (4,5) - switch these two so that the clap is on a clickable object? Fixed
2. 00:16:179 (1,2) - space these out more? Fixed
3. 00:16:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the angles in this part are kinda sharp and don't look very nice. I would move these objects ar Hmm idk about this, I already moved something because of the last point but I'll see if more modders complain
4. 00:18:202 (4,1) - overlap here is meh Yes it's a bit awkward but with hexagrids I can't fix it without moving this slider or whatever and it's not really noticable in game since they are not that close in the timeline but I'll see too
5. 00:20:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the equal spacing in this section makes it unmemorable, I suggest playing around with the spacing and adding emphasis to certain jumps where you see fit idk the vocals here sound a bit the same so I don't think some sounds in this part need more emphasize but I'll see once again lol
6. 00:22:584 (1,3) - blanket this and 00:23:426 (5,8) I know they might not be a "perfect" blanket but I can't curve them more or they would be not long enough for the hexagrids thingy aaa idk if I'm explaining this correctly and it's not really really noticable in game imo
7. 00:24:101 (8) - ctrl g? and maybe space these out more I tried but if I do that the spacing would be huge for that part and since the triangles just after are spaced a lot too I don't think it's really necessary especially in a "calm" part like this
8. 00:24:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - are these the same? can't be sure but if they're not you can just use polygon creator to make them that way uh they look the same to me o I don't really understand ;_;
9. 00:25:617 (3,5) - blanket? Fixed I think
10. 00:26:629 (8,9) - maybe do something like this here? Makes it more interesting imo Fixed
11. 00:29:325 (7,8) - imo all of these are like emphasized because they're kicksliders, so I would do something more interesting with them spacing wise Honestly they look fine to me, I don't want to make them too "hard" to play since sometimes they can be awkward to play and they all have pretty much the same spacing through the map which makes them a bit less awkward and more consistent but idk maybe if I get more complains haha
12. 00:40:112 (5,6) - space these more? ^
13. 00:42:134 (2,3) - ^ ^
14. 00:45:505 (6,7) - ok imo these are the emphasized parts in these section but the spacing on all of these are very low so I would change them a bit. It'd make the map more fun to play to have some important jumps with these ^ sry but I really like how they are now :^(
15. 00:48:539 (1,3) - blanket? Fixed
16. 01:10:786 (3,4,5) - angle is meh because it's a straight line Straight lines are fun :^) idk it doesn't feel really awkward to play imo and I like this pattern aaa
17. 01:11:460 (1,2) - spacing kinda big? I know but if I move it to 01:10:449 (2) - 's head for example the spacing between 01:11:629 (2,3) - would be big too and I feel like 1,2 needs more emphasize compared to 2,3
18. 01:22:752 (4) - move this to x397 y302 Why? It doesn't match with the whole structure of the map which is hexagrids
19. 01:58:988 (2,5) - overlap meh Same as the previous overlap :^)

fun song! with some aesthetic changes this set could be great~

Nherantelon wrote:

Salut
-> From ta modding queue :

Déjà et avant toute chose : je suis pas un excellent modder et ce mapset me semble excellent, donc ça va pas être la folie^^ T'en fais pas tous les mods sont bons à prendre

Another

00:40:028 : J'aurais placé un cercle là pour plus de smooth, mais ça c'est juste mon avis Y a aucun vrai "beat" ici, ce serait considéré comme de l'overmap ce qui est unrankable désolé
02:12:471 (1, 2, 1) : Le pattern suit assez mal la musique je trouve, essaye de Ctrl+G, il me semble que ça sonne bien mieux Oula c'est bizarre quand je clique sur ta sélection ça m'affiche un pattern qui est très éloigné dans la timeline mdr, t'es sûr de pas avoir NC ou delete quelque chose avant de copier/coller ça ? Là je comprends pas trop ce que tu veux dire du coup rip

Voilà pour ce que j'en pense, d'ailleurs j'adore la musique btw^^
Au fait, Shyotamaze, tu as dit que tu avais la flemme de modder plus d'une diff chez moi, mais rassure toi (enfin si ça te gênais :p), tu m'a appris beaucoup plus qu'en simplement pointant les erreurs Haha oui je pense que c'est mieux de bien expliquer chaque point dans un mod lorsqu'on mod la map d'un débutant vu que ça te fait mieux comprendre ce qu'il faut améliorer hésite pas à me demander en mp ou quoi si t'as d'autres questions !

General

Ren's Easy

Normal

Collab Hard

6th's Hyper

galv's Insane

Another

Venix wrote:

For queue!

Legend

Light Suggestion
Normal Suggestion
Strong Suggestion
Unrankable

General

1. Combo colors is inconsistent Yea I'll probably fix it later for my diffs but I don't think it's unrankable if GDers don't have the same combo colours

Normal

1. 00:20:224 (1) - move to x=285 y=160 for cleaner look! It's here because I wanted the spacing here http://prntscr.com/cfdor2 to be the same but maybe if I get more complains yes, it's not a bad idea

Collab Hard

1. 00:34:719 (5,6,1,2,3) - blank it better It doesn't look like a correct blanket because there is a stack but it's a correct blanket

Another

1. 00:31:685 (1,2,3,4) - at this moment spacing need be bigger Why? It doesn't seem necessary to me sry
2. 00:51:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 01:13:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
4. 02:39:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

~GL!

Shyotamaze wrote:

Oula c'est bizarre quand je clique sur ta sélection ça m'affiche un pattern qui est très éloigné dans la timeline mdr, t'es sûr de pas avoir NC ou delete quelque chose avant de copier/coller ça ? Là je comprends pas trop ce que tu veux dire du coup rip

Nherantelon wrote:

Shyotamaze wrote:

Oula c'est bizarre quand je clique sur ta sélection ça m'affiche un pattern qui est très éloigné dans la timeline mdr, t'es sûr de pas avoir NC ou delete quelque chose avant de copier/coller ça ? Là je comprends pas trop ce que tu veux dire du coup rip

Je parle des 3 objets qui se suivent à 02:12:471 (2 sliders et un cercle) Ah d'accord je sais pas j'aime bien le pattern actuel, je l'ai mis pour "varier" un peu vu que cette partie est pas mal répétitive mais si j'ai + de plaintes je le changerai sûrement oui

pinataman wrote:

[Normal]

00:16:179 (1) – Changing the rhythm so that 00:16:516 – isn't emphasized but 00:16:685 – is a radical shift in the map's rhythm that makes no sense to me. What's the intention? Fixed

00:19:719 (2) – I read this as being on 00:19:550 – and it's weird for you to not have a note here. Fixed

00:32:359 (1,2,1,2,3,4) – Rhythm in a normal is both tricky and subjective, but I'll do my best with this. I was going to rant here, but let me give you my rhythm suggestion for you to test yourself and you can find me in game if you want my explanation: http://puu.sh/r45X0/c76c1da4cf.jpg. On the next measure at 00:35:056 (1) - , you can make the first one a reverse slider like: http://puu.sh/r460T/d799cbab5f.jpg
Use these types of rhythm as the basis for the rhythm in this section and the mirrored section at 02:20:224 - I only fixed that http://prntscr.com/cfq9ws because I think the other patterns are fine, I don't want to make the rhythm of the Normal diff too difficult/weird for beginners

00:57:977 (1,2) – This 3/2 rhythm might not be appropriate. Relaxing your perspective and just making it 1/1 seems more agreeable to me: http://puu.sh/r46kk/fcd4c3dd04.jpg Hmm not a bad idea but I'm mapping the sax here but I'll probably fix it if I get more complains :d

01:00:674 (1,1) – This overlap looks poor, try rotating 01:02:022 (1) - idk the long slider is supposed to be a blanket too so if I rotate it it's going to be weird and I don't think the overlap is really that noticable in game since the objetcs are quite far away from each other in the timeline but I'll see if I get more complains wait nvm I fixed it because of the next point lol

01:03:202 – The saxophone gets syncopated to this beat, and since you're about to strongly go with the sax, you might want to consider changing your rhythm to start here. Test out a rhythm like this starting at 01:02:022 (1) - , though I could see pros and cons to both rhythms: http://puu.sh/r46yj/a99c17ad7e.jpg Fixed

01:04:719 (1) – I liked this section's rhythm a lot, you nail what the sax is doing. o thanks

01:26:292 (1) – From until the end of the kiai, your flow is all clockwise. Consider changing the direction of the flow somewhere like 01:31:685 (1) - by doing something like http://puu.sh/r45qc/bafea2e08c.jpg Fixed

[Collab Hard]

00:10:786 (1,2,3,4) – Just because it's the beginning of the map and I'm trying to understand what the map is expecting from me, be a little smoother with your flow from (1,2) and put any kind of emphasis with your flow on (4) instead. This will transition the player into your map a little calmer instead of jerking them around with the aggressive flow at (1,2). Try something like this: http://puu.sh/r46Io/7d7315f18e.jpg Haha yea fixed, I don't know wtf I did there tbh :^)

00:32:359 (1,2) – If this wasn't strong enough to get a jump, I don't think you should jump at 00:33:707 (1,2) -
00:34:887 (6,1) – If the downbeat at 00:33:539 (4,1) – is strong enough to get a jump, I think you should put a jump on this downbeat as well.
If you agree with either of the above two, apply consistently to the other jumps in this section With jumps like 00:33:707 (1,2) - this I try to emphasize the vocals here that feels stronger than 00:32:359 (1,2) - imo and I don't really want to put jumps everywhere since it's only a hard diff lol but maybe if I get more complains o

00:35:898 (4,1) – This is a little closer than 00:35:898 (4,5) - . Might be good to construct the pattern with symmetry first and then rotate like: http://puu.sh/r47cf/ac2bb9cb3b.jpg Fixed I think

01:00:168 (4,1) – Due to auto-stacking, these are a bit close and don't form that nice triangle. Try moving 01:00:674 (1,2) – to account for auto-stacking Fixed

01:05:224 (2,3) – Try deleting (3) and making (2) a ½ slider, then consider using the same rhythm at 01:06:573 (2) - Fixed

01:15:505 (1,2,3) – Two things about this jump. One is that there isn't a strong angle into (3). Linear flow has it's place, but I really think having a sharper angle will help accentuate the (3) note in a nicer way like http://puu.sh/r47Bz/9a808f6a26.jpg . Second, Try making the DS between (2,3) be 1.60x and leave the strong spacing of 1.80x for the stronger downbeats. I think 3 is already accentuated or idk how to say it correctly and as you can see here 01:15:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same kind of pattern repeats to emphasize the vocals ( 01:15:505 (1,2,3) - linear flow until 3 with a flow break or idk how to call it maybe anti-jump lol to emphasize vocals 01:16:011 (3,4,5) - same until 5) and I don't agree with the spacing change since the thing that I emphasize the most here are the vocals :d

[Another]

00:11:123 (2,3) – This reads like 1/1 rhythm because 00:10:786 (1,2) – is stacked. Change your spacing. Fixed
I just realized I'm lazy. pls if you're lazy and you can mod every diff with cool advices then I'm the most lazy guy on the planet earth

1. 00:10:955 - , 00:12:303 - there isn't any special reason that letting this spaces empty imo. what about filling it by adding a note on each space?
2. 00:30:168 (4,7) - what about adding a NC for indicating that triangle pattern? just like you did it on 00:22:078 (1) - this
3. 00:39:606 (3,4) - most of your rhythms are following the vocal well while this one doesn't. try reversing the rhythm and check how it works
   
   try this one

   
4. 02:12:471 (2,3) - you can make the rhythm fit well with the music by using this one. consider changing it on other same parts too(02:17:865 (2,3) - and so on)
5. 02:30:926 - it would be better if you add a note here to follow the music well

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[Another]

1. 00:10:955 - , 00:12:303 - there isn't any special reason that letting this spaces empty imo. what about filling it by adding a note on each space? There is no "real" sound here 00:10:955 to add a note, 00:12:303 here there is one I can agree but I didn't map it for consistency and because the sound 00:10:786 (1,1) - is "fading out" or idk how to explain but imo it's better to not add a note here :d "but wait you added a note here 00:13:483 (1,2) - why can't you do the same?" well it's because I mapped vocals there (I know you didn't say this but it's for a better explanation lol)
2. 00:30:168 (4,7) - what about adding a NC for indicating that triangle pattern? just like you did it on 00:22:078 (1) - this Fixed
3. 00:39:606 (3,4) - most of your rhythms are following the vocal well while this one doesn't. try reversing the rhythm and check how it works Fixed
   
   try this one

   
4. 02:12:471 (2,3) - you can make the rhythm fit well with the music by using this one. consider changing it on other same parts too(02:17:865 (2,3) - and so on) idk I prefer my rhythm but maybe if I get more complains sure :d
5. 02:30:926 - it would be better if you add a note here to follow the music well Fixed

i'll finish rest of them later

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:36:910 (3) - this note still has the vocal structure so you can try making this a 1/4 slider that is aesthetically the same as 00:36:404 (1) - this.
2. 01:01:685 (5,1) - xd nice pattern, I recognise this from a Sieg's map.
3. 01:04:044 (3,4) - 1/2s are quite clear here, i'd map circles.
4. 01:16:011 (3,4,5) - this pattern is really hard to hit because it's a straight line, with such a huge spacing. I'd reduce the spacing here because I think the pattern right now needs this much emphasis.
   fun stuff
   [galv's Insane]
   omg galvenize big fan.
5. 00:18:202 (3,4) - the stress is on the red tick so maybe circle -> slider (on red tick) -> circle works a bit better here.
6. 01:22:415 (2) - this should be a slider instead to follow the vocal a bit better (I assume you're following the vocals because the triangle patterns are used to stress them) . If you think it's good then you should change the ones after this having the same structure too.
7. 02:13:314 (5) - I'm not entirely sure which sound this offbeat slider follows. If it's the piano then it's the downbeat that's stressed, if it's the synth it's probably not worth it to skip the downbeat because the synth does have a sound a the downbeat. Drums also stress the downbeat I think.
   [6th's Hyper]
8. 02:05:056 (5,1) - spacing could be a bit more straightforward here I think. You can like stack 1 to 5 like you've done earlier with 1/1 gaps.
9. 02:07:752 (11,12) - especially here because the drums and the piano play identical beats until now and you choose to follow the drums, but the player may be confused with the piano and think that might be a 1/2 jump (because there's a piano sound on the red tick).
10. 02:06:741 (7) - you might want to NC here because downbeat NC pattern. 02:08:089 (12) - same.
    awesome patterns , I'm impressed.
    [Collab Haard]
11. 00:58:314 (3,4,5,6) - I guess you're using sliderheads to emphasise snares, shuoldn't it be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6088518 ? Same for structure 01:01:349 (4,5) - .
12. 01:23:932 (2) - why do you break the structure here? also nice bunch of white anchors xd.
13. 01:35:730 (1,2) - could be confused because in the previous part vocals and drums are identical , now you strictly follow the drums which could lead to a misread because of this spacing, maybe stack those 1/1?

LMT1996 wrote:

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:36:910 (3) - this note still has the vocal structure so you can try making this a 1/4 slider that is aesthetically the same as 00:36:404 (1) - this. Fixed
2. 01:01:685 (5,1) - xd nice pattern, I recognise this from a Sieg's map. oo really? lol I'd love to know in which map tbh, I made it without knowing that Sieg did it before :^)
3. 01:04:044 (3,4) - 1/2s are quite clear here, i'd map circles. I prefer it that way because it emphasizes the clap sounds
4. 01:16:011 (3,4,5) - this pattern is really hard to hit because it's a straight line, with such a huge spacing. I'd reduce the spacing here because I think the pattern right now needs this much emphasis. tbh for this I tried to copy galv's spacing style lol but it's fine imo, testplayers didn't have a real issue with this pattern and it's the start of the kiai so it needs to be quite difficult imo but maybe if I get more complains
   fun stuff
   [Collab Haard]
5. 00:58:314 (3,4,5,6) - I guess you're using sliderheads to emphasise snares, shuoldn't it be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6088518 ? Same for structure 01:01:349 (4,5) - . Fixed for the first pattern but for the second one I'm mapping the sax with the slider
6. 01:23:932 (2) - why do you break the structure here? also nice bunch of white anchors xd. Because it's the last slider of that pattern and it has the most emphasize/is longer than the others so I try to differentiate it from the others haha yea it might not be common but it actually exists :d http://prntscr.com/chuykc (taken from t/208596 )

pretty good , though the music kinda wears me out so I can't really mod lower diffs . Good luck!

Shyotamaze wrote:

LMT1996 wrote:

01:01:685 (5,1) - xd nice pattern, I recognise this from a Sieg's map. oo really? lol I'd love to know in which map tbh, I made it without knowing that Sieg did it before :^) 00:59:117 (3,4) - from this map, Insane (highest) diff

sahuang wrote:

Actually my rule said "Drain time should be no more than ~15 mins."
This song has longer drain time but okay...

[Easy]

1. 00:13:483 (1,2) - while they are identical, the overlap makes pattern very weird. You should ctrl+J (2). the overlap looks good to me
2. 00:18:876 (1,2) - make symmetry. ok
3. 00:35:056 (1) - it should be 1/1 or 2/1.I would suggest make it consistent with 00:37:752 (1,2) - .yeah , good catch
4. 00:49:887 (3) - same for this. this is supposed to be 3/2

Guess that's all from me, good luck

sahuang wrote:

Actually my rule said "Drain time should be no more than ~15 mins." Whoops sorry
This song has longer drain time but okay...

[Normal]

1. 00:16:853 - miss note Fixed
2. 01:12:808 - should be mapped,even storyboard suggests so Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:35:730 (3,4) - stack these two is better cuz their vocal is similar. Fixed
2. 01:16:348 (4,1) - why not stack? and the flow is pretty hard to play imo.. Fixed
3. 01:21:235 (2,5) - overlap looks bad Fixed

galv's Insane: 00:00:000 - although nothing is here i strongly recommend u use same sample set for red and green lines. It's unrankable. Fixed it for him

Guess that's all from me, good luck

1. looked and found nothing
2. no spinners ftw

1. Timing>Resnap All Notes
2. 01:07:078 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is a little focused on the left side, which wouldn't really be a problem but it causes ugly overlap 01:10:112
3. (1,2,1) - here that can be avoided easily by moving 01:11:460 (1) - this farther away from the left. Something like this but you can probably make it more pretty than I did:
   
   ~

   
4. 02:25:617 (1,2,1) - Tidy up the symmetry.

1. Timing>Resnap All Notes
2. If this is a Collab then knowing which part is which mapper would be a nice thing to have in the map's description.
3. 01:47:949 (1) - imo it makes more sense to follow the sax, and then start the spinner more like 01:53:258 - here. You can keep it if you want the player to get sore wrists. (Ranking criteria guideline, so you can safely ignore.) (Yes, this is coming directly from Modding Assistant. XD)
4. Other than that good collab.

1. Hey 6th~
2. Timing>Resnap All Notes
3. Same spinner problem as Hard, except you did it twice.
4. 00:35:899 (3) - stack it better
5. 00:44:831 (2) - stack it better

Jonawaga wrote:

Hello there~
[Normal]

1. Timing>Resnap All Notes Fixed I think even though AIMod doesn't say anything so it's probably not a big deal :^)
2. 01:07:078 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is a little focused on the left side, which wouldn't really be a problem but it causes ugly overlap 01:10:112 Fixed
3. (1,2,1) - here that can be avoided easily by moving 01:11:460 (1) - this farther away from the left. Something like this but you can probably make it more pretty than I did: Fixed
   
   ~

   
4. 02:25:617 (1,2,1) - Tidy up the symmetry. Fixed

[Hard]

1. Timing>Resnap All Notes Fixed again
2. If this is a Collab then knowing which part is which mapper would be a nice thing to have in the map's description. Oh yeah I forgot about that lol, I'll see what I can do :d
3. Other than that good collab. Thanks!

Good Luck! I hope this ranks soon~!!
call a bn

riktoi wrote:

[another]

00:36:910 (3,4,5,6) - 00:47:696 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - considering these two are similar to each other in rhythm you should rather have the first one be the same. (for the sake of consistency and not skipping the beats in 00:37:415 - 00:37:584 - considering how important they are here. the rest of the reverses should be fine) Fixed wow nice catch lol

00:42:471 (4,5,6) - this part calls for rougher angles i m o. if it's possible for you to place the slider somewhere around 4 withount breaking the spacing too much it would be gucchi (or if you just try something like a straighter angle with 00:42:303 (3,4,5) - and then the slider 00:42:808 (6) - to below 00:41:797 (1) - when 00:42:640 (5) - is behind it (or near the middle right of the grid)) lol that was quite hard to understand without screenshots but fixed I guess

02:35:730 (6,7,8) - similar to the first point Fixed

consider upping the ar by like 0.1, the overlaps in jumps are kinda difficult to read (also the repeating patterns become easier to read) Hmm I'll see if I get more complains, I think it's fine right now


[6th and You]

ok ok

i'm bad
take some stars hoyl shit so many stars lol thanks a lot!

galvenize wrote:

Et t'en fait pas je fais attention à ce que ça ne dépasse pas.

• [Ren's Easy]

1. 02:40:512 (3,4,5,1) - I have a suggestion for the end because the rest it's nice, you can do this if you can:
   
   !

   

• [Normal]

1. 01:12:808 (5) - essaye de faire ça je trouve que c'est un bon rythme de plus ça va bien avec ce que tu as fais avant à 01:11:797
   
   !

   

• [Collab Hard]

1. 01:20:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - à partir d'ici il y a trop d'espace en les notes, corrige moi ça
2. De 01:58:651 à 02:07:921 - J'adore ce moment super!

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hey!
NM de ma Queue ~
(désolée pour le temps)

• [Normal]

1. 01:12:808 (5) - essaye de faire ça je trouve que c'est un bon rythme de plus ça va bien avec ce que tu as fais avant à 01:11:797 J'ai changé à ma façon
   
   !

   

• [Collab Hard]

1. 01:20:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - à partir d'ici il y a trop d'espace en les notes, corrige moi ça C'est fait exprès c'est des jumps pour emphasize les vocals

Il n'y a pas grand chose à corriger c'est super!
Bonne chose pour ta map!

Snaggletooth wrote:

From my NoMoeQ!

[Ren's Easy]

1. Placement Issues:
   1. 01:29:999 (2,4) - I highly suggest that you unstack these. New players may think that it is
      acctually a slider, instead of a circle, since you hit it after the slider appears.
      It would be a small but important change. you're right about it but it shouldnt be that hard to read i guess , maybe i will wait for some more opinions about it

"What is flow?" a thing

Snaggletooth wrote:

From my NoMoeQ!

[Normal]

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 00:11:460 (2,2,2,2,2,2) - I suggest the removal of these circles. The reason being that when
      using 1/2 beats in a normal, the 1/2 beat should be noticeable and reasonable so less
      expierienced players can acctually hear and understand why they are hitting faster than usual.
      Right now, your circles are placed on very low hi-hats, creating an artificial-feeling beat. This can be
      very amazing for higher difficulties, however considering that this is only a normal, I highly
      suggest you remove these. The slider-rhythms fit nicely with the piano and the snares. Fixed
      
   2. 00:55:955 (2) - as an addition to the point above, this one is fine, because the music
      is much more noise-heavy, making the actual 'artificially-made' beat less noticeable, and more
      natural to play. yea I understand your point now
   I do not agree with the rhythmical changes in this difficulty. It gets esspecially confusing
   at 02:10:786 where you suddenly stopped mapping drums at all, and moved to the synth all
   of the sudden. I mean, I see why you would map it, and I would as well, however, since this is
   a normal difficulty, I would have chosen a rhythm that incorporates both the synth and
   the heaviest drum-hits, so you still have a steady and easy-to-follow tapping-rhythm. Hmm I think it's fine tbh, I'll see if I get more complains tho

[Collab Hard]

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 00:55:280 (1,2) - Consider using a 1/2 slider here. The rhythm isn't placed wrong, but
      the 4 previous sliders created a tapping-flow, that is based on the fading echo. Fixed
      00:55:617 (3) - is still playing on an echo + snare, which makes the two circles break
      this flow very heavily. It would be a much more beautiful solution to just use a 1/2 slider,
      since it also catches the drums. ^

"What is flow?" idk teach me pls

Pentori wrote:

hey

[Ren's Easy]
01:29:999 (2,4) - this is pretty ambiguous to beginners i'd try avoid this ok
01:31:685 (1,3) - so is this. both circles are equal distance from the previous slider making it quite confusing oko
01:58:651 (1) - u could probably be more creative in the section in terms of rhythm. feel free to use 3/2 gaps ee nah, i m okay with what i have right now
good luck!

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Pentori wrote:

hey

[Normal]
00:57:977 (1,2,3) - why skip the kick on 00:58:651 - ? u could use two 1/2 sliders instead to avoid the awkward rhythm Fixed
01:03:202 (1) - i'd map the kick/piano downbeat on 01:03:370 - with a higher priority than the sax here just for the sake of keeping a good musical structure. For this whole part I'm mapping the sax so it would be really weird but maybe if I get more complains
01:15:842 (2) - i kinda disagree with how u mapped this because you throw out all the instruments and map to those glitchy vocals. if you really can be bothered i'd re-structure this around instruments instead as you'll find out it plays nicer idk it seems fine to me but I'll see if I get more complains (yes it's kinda lame for an answer but it really seems fine to me lol)
01:59:494 (3) - again all these 1/2 sliders are so weird to play. heres a rhythm that does the same job and is more beginner friendly http://puu.sh/rrCr8/888d637d29.jpg. u can structure ur rhythm around variations of that if u want Fixed

[Collab Hard]
01:15:505 (1,2,3) - u should try space this consistently because inconsistent linear flow is really awkward

Shyotamaze wrote:

[Collab Hard]01:15:505 (1,2,3) – Two things about this jump. One is that there isn't a strong angle into (3). Linear flow has it's place, but I really think having a sharper angle will help accentuate the (3) note in a nicer way like http://puu.sh/r47Bz/9a808f6a26.jpg . Second, Try making the DS between (2,3) be 1.60x and leave the strong spacing of 1.80x for the stronger downbeats. I think 3 is already accentuated or idk how to say it correctly and as you can see here 01:15:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same kind of pattern repeats to emphasize the vocals ( 01:15:505 (1,2,3) - linear flow until 3 with a flow break or idk how to call it maybe anti-jump lol to emphasize vocals 01:16:011 (3,4,5) - same until 5) and I don't agree with the spacing change since the thing that I emphasize the most here are the vocals :d

and the flow is alright imo but I'll see if I get more complains yea
overall i just feel spread is ruined when you don't have a easily playable hard diff. just think of it in this way: if a new player gets a good score on the normal and they want to try the next difficulty only to be greeted with overlapping patterns i don't think they'll continue to play the song
also at least use AR 8 because of all the overlaps Fixed

ok gonna stop here cos the other diffs don't really have an outstanding issues
good luck!