[Undertale]
General:
I hope it helped.General:
- HP should be decreased by 1, imo.
- 00:06:088 (3) - Needs emphasis.
- 00:08:123 (5) - Flow between 00:07:802 (4,5) - wouldn't be really affected imo, but I think putting 00:08:123 (5) - slightly below the slider end is better. The flow between 00:07:802 (4,5,6) - is too linear for me lel.
- 00:14:230 (2,3) - Seems weird. idk. Maybe do it the way you did this 00:17:659 (2,3) - ?
- 00:22:159 (5) - Emphsize for consistency.
- 00:41:659 (3) - Just put the NC here instead of 00:41:873 (1) - .
- If you did the one above, perhaps apply it on the following parts, as well. :::::00:44:659 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
- 00:53:338 (3) - There are no significant sounds here imo, so I guess you should remove this...?
- 00:53:659 (2) - NC
- 00:58:373 (1,2) - Blanket.
- 01:05:230 (1,2) - Same here.
- 01:29:872 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make this part more rounded.
- 01:31:587 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Same here.
- 03:46:373 - Same thing for the stream part here.
- 01:51:730 (1) - Remove NC.
- 02:20:231 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The way how these overlap each other isn't good imo. Keeping 02:20:659 (1,2,3,4) - a bit away from 02:20:231 (1,2,3) - may fix this.
- 04:21:945 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
- 04:27:516 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
- 04:28:802 (2,3) - Blanket.
- 04:30:945 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
- 04:37:802 (1) - I suggest making this circle the turning point of the stream. The main beat lands on this part so yea.
Good luck =w=)/