1. Disoy's Normal (3.36 stars, 269 notes)
2. Lover (4.89 stars, 518 notes)
3. Okamiroy's Hard (4.43 stars, 424 notes)
4. Strangers (0.89 stars, 141 notes)

[Shalon] wrote:

Artist's name is azusa, not Azusa.

and, The exact song's name is 'Kimi no Mamade.".(I mapped the same song and get ranked it, but I got some blame cuz

my map's name was 'Kimi no mamade'.

good luck.

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi sumisola


[General]
- The title should be 'Kimi no Mama de (Full Ver.)'. It have been discussed already in this map.
- You have three .osb files. Delete them all. Anyway you have to full submit due to changing the title and uploading custom hitsound.
- Capitalize 'Disoy's Normal'

[Lover]
I modded just 'Lover' diff. I won't mod guest diffs since you asked me just hitsound mod on your map.
Here you are. Try this on.

[attachment=0:44adc]Hitsound mod by ykcarrot.rar[/attachment:44adc]

In fact, instrument of full ver. is different than TV size. It was a bit simple. ._.
Good luck.

orioncomet wrote:

- Deletes 01.jpg and kol.jpg since they're not used? checked
- add guest names to tag? Disoy Okamiroy checked
- remove a (Full ver.)? if you agree, make sure about this viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 There are many people creating beatmaps with this song of tv size. To distinguish between tv size and full song, I added 'full ver.' to the title.


[Lover]
- look good thanks~

[Okamiroy's Hard]
- use custom hitsound C1 for silence sliderslide checked
- start 2nd kiai time at 02:30:492 look better checked
- start 3rd kiai time at 03:33:158 look better checked

[Strangers]
- use custom hitsound C1 for silence sliderslide checked
- black combo color is hard to see on some part of BG, could you change it to something lighter then this. checked

[Disoy's Normal]
- use custom hitsound C1 for silence sliderslide checked
01:31:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - fix those combo to not spaming new combo x-x? checked
02:00:269 (1,1,1,1) - ^ checked
02:44:713 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ checked
03:47:381 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ checked
rest of diffs look fine

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
The audio-lead in is different in different diffs, unique them.
disable countdown

[Lover]
01:26:047 (2) - up 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical
01:40:492 (9,10) - spacing
01:44:492 - delete break
01:54:714 (5) - right 1 grid lv4
02:38:936 (2) - down 1 grid lv4
02:53:381 (8,9) - spacing

[Hard]
[please stack all slider-note pattern properly]
[lower the hitsound generally?]
00:48:269 (3) - this should not be lower than (2) ._.

As ploy modded I think the spacing is good enough >_<

star~

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Lover

00:44:492 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这样的随机小跳适合BPM高一些的图，低BPM最好还是要做节奏进去。或者减少一些数量，多了蛋疼

其他好像没问题，需要注意的就是在下节奏的时候一定要想好重拍的位置，不要出现应该加clap的时候发现没note这种情况。


Okamiroy's Hard

02:30:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - 刚进入高潮部分需要note的时候你两个slider拉过去了。这里note的密度重新分配一下，后面那一组同理。
03:43:825 (8) - 我觉得与其用这么长的slider拖vocal，不如后边自己做点节奏进去。


Disoy's Normal

挺顺眼


Strangers

01:17:603 (1,2,1) - 高潮还用这么慢的slider来回打._. Easy的音本来就少，不合理分配密度的话新手也会蛋疼

后面也是。

还有感觉newcombo加太多了，花花绿绿得特别乱 02:44:713 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1)



排列方面除了Normal和Easy感觉像长草似的._.

这次估计改不了了，就这样吧。

zeroclover wrote:

☆☆☆☆☆
nice beatmap
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gb2J0HoIyKA
love this song so much
add lyrics it will be more nice

Sumisola wrote:

zeroclover wrote:

☆☆☆☆☆
nice beatmap
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gb2J0HoIyKA
love this song so much
add lyrics it will be more nice

I can not go youtube.....sorry

[Ghost] wrote:

[Lover]
00:09:943 - 加个circle似乎更好些 purpose
03:21:610 (4) - 这个finish好突兀,小声点或者不加? purpose

sherrie__fay wrote:

lol我是滚来给你星星的【去你的