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Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! [Osu|Taiko]

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eldnl
[General]

You have 2 osu folders of the same song (one inside the other), one of them doesn't have the hard difficulty, please fix it.

[Easy]

00:17:544 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do these sliders a bit better, they seems really weird now.
01:04:858 (2,3) - Make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
01:12:401 (5) - A finish sounds good here.
01:23:373 (1) - ^ Same as above.
01:27:487 (3) - I'm not a big fan of stacked notes on the easier difficulty, strongly suggest to change it.
02:16:173 (2,3) - As I said, make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
02:29:201 - What about adding a spin like the harder difficulties? the break is too long ...
03:17:200 (2,3) - I guess you know what to do here.
03:27:486 (4) - Maybe you can delete this note and extend the spin, because it is too short for an easy.

[Normal]

Good job, the only thing that I can say is that this difficulty could be a bit hard to read, but that's how the whole difficulty is mapped.
02:29:201 - Add a spin here, because the break is too long.

[Hard]

Perfect.

[Insane]

Seems like a very old difficulty from you, I could point out a lot of minor suggestions, because technically there is nothing wrong with the difficulty, but I think you can work on improving it by yourself, with your new mapping style, I know you can do it a lot better now, because I saw your last map and it's pretty well done.


Edit, fix your folder please!
Cristian
EDIT: nvm
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'LL MAKE THE UPDATES

REMOVED MY INSANE DIFF SINCE LIKE WHY HAVE TWO INSANE DIFFS LOL

inb4 everyone gets mad because my only full diff is the easy diff
eldnl

CDFA wrote:

inb4 everyone gets mad because my only full diff is the easy diff
lol I think this is an exception, you already mapped an insane difficulty;p
jonathanlfj
here i am doing m4m
i wanted to mod the other maps but one has like 2 fresh mods, one got graved and one is starred so...k-on it is :D

Black is suggestions
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Inconsistencies in combo colours for the guest diffs, please fix them
i had a feeling ur osz is screwed up cause i needed to update after downloading, so i took a peek and...
you have another song folder inside the song folder lolol should check your local setup for this song's folder and then do a full submit

[Easy]
00:12:058 (1) - finish on start
00:16:687 (3) - add whistle like the other sliders of its kind
00:53:201 (3) - NC
01:40:515 (3) - this slider can look better with only one midpoint or using the new algorithm
01:53:544 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of 01:55:258 (1) to avoid confusion due to the partial overlap with 01:50:801 (1)
02:44:973 (3,4,1,2,3) - this part plays a bit confusing, it would be alot better if you can unstack 02:46:001 (2,3) so the flow is easier for newbies to follow
02:54:230 (1) - end at 02:56:630
02:57:315 (1) - add finish on start
03:13:772 (2) - lower the middle grid so the blanket on 03:15:657 (1) can look better
03:31:600 (2) - add finish on slider head

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR+1, makes the stacks easier to read imo
00:34:001 (1) - if you raise the red point by 2 grids it will make this perfectly centered
01:30:230 (5) - blanket can look better here
01:55:772 - felt like there should be a note here
02:53:887 (5) - NC
Nice symmetry ^_^

[SMIC's hard]
01:02:629 (3,4,5) - the stack here doesnt really flow well, it would be better if you stacked 01:03:144 (4) on top of 01:03:315 (5), or just dont stack it at all
01:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1) - this can curve a bit smoother for better flow
02:55:258 (1) - end this at 02:56:544
03:13:086 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - the difficulty on this might be too hard compared to the rest of the map, its a triplet 1/4 followed by 3 1/2 single taps which is quite demanding for a Hard...maybe make 03:13:429 (1,2) into a slider instead
03:17:715 (5) - woot got too intense here too, stack on where 03:16:343 (7) was makes it alot easier to play
03:28:172 (5) - NC for easier readability
i can imagine the fail/retry graph on this map peak on the last 20 seconds...

[Collab]
00:56:972 - add a note here
01:30:572 - a note here too stacked with 01:30:572 (2), makes it easier to play since its now a 1/2 stack under 01:30:229 (1)
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - use 1.00x spacing here?
02:13:944 (7,8,9,10,11) - feels better here with this rhythm: 02:16:858 (1) - end at 02:18:229
02:53:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the diamond formations are not the same shape >< make the one on the right skinnier
03:29:200 (2,3,4) - add whistles?
a good reminiscent of 2010/2011

Thats all, good luck on ranking :) (though why wasnt this ranked back then ><)
Diasios
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Suggestion.
You should fix this.
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Easy

  • Approach Rate 4 fits a lot better imo. (also consider to increase HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty to 3)
    00:35:030 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary, remove it.
    00:40:515 (1) - ^
    00:43:944 (x) - Start a slider here, end it 1/1 later and add a repeat.
    01:31:944 (4) - End this slider at 01:32:973 and add a circle at 01:33:487.
    01:55:258 (1) - Remove this new combo.
    03:37:086 (4,1) - Delete the circle and start the spinner 1/1 earlier.

-kevincela-'s Normal

  • I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
    I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
    00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
    02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.

SMIC's Hard

  • 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later)
    00:06:229 (8) - ^
    00:08:972 (8) - ^
    02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later.
    02:51:487 (2,3,4) - Add some new combo like you did at 02:46:001 (1,1,1).
    03:30:229 (1,2,3,1) - Try a different spacing, I don't really like the current one:

Collab

  • 01:26:801 (3,4) - Try this pattern:
    02:11:201 (4,6) - Try to stack perfectly the end of these sliders.
    02:14:458 (8,9) - Move the slider 1/2 later and the circle at 02:14:458.

Ozzy's Taik-On!!

  • Looks good.

Call me again when you're ready and I'll recheck.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

xxheroxx wrote:

-kevincela-'s Normal

  • I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
    I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
    00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
    02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.
I'll ask kevin to read the italian later lol :3

SMIC's Hard

  • 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later) It's following the drums ouo.
    00:06:229 (8) - ^
    00:08:972 (8) - ^
    02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later. I didn't do the exact change, but I moved the spinner 1/2 earlier to make more musical sense rather than just ending.
I usually won't respond to mod posts since I'm silly and all, but I'll respond to this one for recheck reasons.

Most things not explicitly stated should be done

I'll PM when kevin's stuff and other things are done uguu.
Diasios
(ノ ゚Д゚)ノ彡
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
IT'S HAPPENING

ilu xxheroxx-nyan <3~
Zeraph
INB4 2OLDMAPEVERY1MAD
Raging Bull
Omg. No Thank you v3

Damn

OnosakiHito
Nice Taiko, Ozzy.
Frostmourne
CDFA \:D///

General
- You can add " 日笠 陽子" into ArtistUnicode for every diff as it is Hikasa Yoko in Japanese.

Easy
00:46:344 (2) - is this spacing intentional?
02:01:772 (1) - finish head according to 00:50:458 (1) -
03:20:286 (3) - it's fine but I concern if it is a bit off screen, just wondering if you can move it left a bit apart from the border

-kevincela-'s Normal
01:02:801 (3,4,5) - I find this weird as you were following vocal mainly, example : 00:58:687 (1,2,3,4) - so when it comes to these points, it made me hit early that it shouldn't have been. So I suggest you use this rhythm from the screenshot, hope you consider using it
02:14:115 (3,4,5) - same as above ^ , apply same pattern
03:15:143 (3,4) - ^

SMIC's Hard
03:30:229 (1,2,3) - maybe move them a bit far apart from each other a bit ? just moving 03:30:743 (2) - 3-4 grids up , it might be able to read easier as I believe some players would think it's constant stream so they would get these sliders wrongly. Just only my opinion though :P , depends on you :)

Collab
nice Collab !

tell me after you are done applying these. :lol:

Edit : ranked :)
Raose
YOU DID IT CONGRATSSS ^____^
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Andrea
2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!
BeatofIke

Andrea wrote:

2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!
Indeed! Congrats CDFA! :D
HeatKai
OMG CDFA YOU'RE SO GOOD I LOVE YOU <3 hahaha congrats ;D
Konei
Oh, gratz ~
Aqo
wtf
Loooctav
2 Years omg
jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:

why wasnt this ranked back then
well now it is, congratulations!
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
ALSO LOL INB4 PEOPLE ARE LIKE "What's that gold star is that a super star omg"
CXu
Socool.
Stefan
cool
UnderminE
oh man cool as fug
Tanzklaue
this map is just pure fun, good job :3
Garven
Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Garven wrote:

Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:
ALL 75 OF MY GRAVED MAPS WOO
Raging Bull
History was made today.
wendao

Andrea wrote:

2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!
Saturnalize
Now let's see if I can reach pending longer than this.

Andrea wrote:

2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!
No, Andrea, this map deserves what it should get. It's not a miracle, don't make this sounds like a bad map getting ranked.

CDFA ilysm
Yasora
congrats \:D/
Cristian

Garven wrote:

Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:
My pending maps.
a32
Glad to see this ranked ww
UnderminE
More than that

it's been more than 2 years since this song came out

man i am getting old
OnosakiHito

CDFA wrote:

ALSO LOL INB4 PEOPLE ARE LIKE "What's that gold star is that a super star omg"
Hahaha
Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

UnderminE wrote:

More than that

it's been more than 2 years since this song came out

man i am getting old
1993 was 20 years ago
Nessuka
Yo momma so old she has 'mariobros777' in her tags.

No. but gratz you.
Seph
welp i wont hear jokes about your maps not getting ranked :(

grats though
-kevincela-
IT'S RANKED
SOMETHING MUST BE WRONG HERE

jk, congratulations \:D/
Hanyuu
Congrats :D
pimp
gratz :)
Verlaren

Hanyuu wrote:

Congrats :D
^
Piotrekol
is it only me or this map is offsynced >.>?(played collab diff)
NVM but how... o.o
<3
Maiz94
not-so-late congratz \:D/
eldnl
The approval of this song marked a before and after on this world.
Congratz!
DakeDekaane
With this being ranked, we're one step closer to the apocalypse.

Late grats. \:3/
jyu

DakeDekaane wrote:

With this being ranked, we're one step closer to the apocalypse.

Late grats. \:3/
laugh, also, late gratz too CDFA :>
Zack99hhh
Shut up Navi >:c! xD
Tetsuya001_old
Listen >w<
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