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Shohei Ohtani
since when was my diff named what if we got rid of all the jews
i was not informed of this
Also Jarby, I'm surprised you commented on the 1/4 sliders rather than the square jumps. :p Imo the 1/4 sliders are okay because you just click on the beat and hold and the distance spacing is relatively low. If other people complain, I'll change it though.
i was not informed of this
Also Jarby, I'm surprised you commented on the 1/4 sliders rather than the square jumps. :p Imo the 1/4 sliders are okay because you just click on the beat and hold and the distance spacing is relatively low. If other people complain, I'll change it though.
Shohei Ohtani
It requires a certain level of focus and coordination to do both, but as a beginner, I was awful at those 1/4 sliders. I can see someone failing right at the end there, but maybe that was just my personal brand of failure as a new player.SuperMICrophone wrote:
since when was my diff named what if we got rid of all the jews
i was not informed of this
Also Jarby, I'm surprised you commented on the 1/4 sliders rather than the square jumps. :p Imo the 1/4 sliders are okay because you just click on the beat and hold and the distance spacing is relatively low. If other people complain, I'll change it though.
Since you sorta asked for someone to mod this, Here I am!~
I tired my best to mod, sorry if it's bad or not helpful
~Mod~
☆Easy☆
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00:24:401 (2) - Curve the slider like this? http://puu.sh/35r0b.jpg
00:32:630 (3) - Curve the slider~ http://puu.sh/35rKF.jpg
00:35:030 (1) - Spaced it away from the previous combo
00:43:601 (1) - 00:44:630 (2) - Add a spinner?
02:01:430 (5) - Add a note with clap here
☆-kevincela-'s Normal☆
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Clear~
☆impossiblexu's Hard☆
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AR 7 or 8
00:26:115 (4) - Flip it?http://puu.sh/35sOh.jpg
00:41:715 (5) - Blanket the next note? http://puu.sh/35sSf.jpg
00:48:915 (5,1) - Make it straight? http://puu.sh/35sXX.jpg
01:26:115 (1,2) - Make it curved? http://puu.sh/35thL.jpg
01:30:230 (1) - Make it blanket the next note
02:12:401 (4) - ^
03:13:772 (3) - ^
☆Insane☆
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00:21:830 (1) - Centre and curve it~ http://puu.sh/35tOg.jpg
00:38:973 (7) - ^ around the note
00:50:972 (6,7) - Copy the previous and horizontal flip and make the single note have even spacing http://puu.sh/35tXN.jpg
02:02:287 (6,7) - ^
01:06:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...Make it less bland?
☆Collab☆
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Just saying .. sb could be sexy like your other collab maps >.>
I couldn't really find no problems on this diff, but that's just me
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00:24:401 (2) - Curve the slider like this? http://puu.sh/35r0b.jpg
00:32:630 (3) - Curve the slider~ http://puu.sh/35rKF.jpg
00:35:030 (1) - Spaced it away from the previous combo
00:43:601 (1) - 00:44:630 (2) - Add a spinner?
02:01:430 (5) - Add a note with clap here
☆-kevincela-'s Normal☆
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Clear~
☆impossiblexu's Hard☆
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AR 7 or 8
00:26:115 (4) - Flip it?http://puu.sh/35sOh.jpg
00:41:715 (5) - Blanket the next note? http://puu.sh/35sSf.jpg
00:48:915 (5,1) - Make it straight? http://puu.sh/35sXX.jpg
01:26:115 (1,2) - Make it curved? http://puu.sh/35thL.jpg
01:30:230 (1) - Make it blanket the next note
02:12:401 (4) - ^
03:13:772 (3) - ^
☆Insane☆
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00:21:830 (1) - Centre and curve it~ http://puu.sh/35tOg.jpg
00:38:973 (7) - ^ around the note
00:50:972 (6,7) - Copy the previous and horizontal flip and make the single note have even spacing http://puu.sh/35tXN.jpg
02:02:287 (6,7) - ^
01:06:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...Make it less bland?
☆Collab☆
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Just saying .. sb could be sexy like your other collab maps >.>
I couldn't really find no problems on this diff, but that's just me
I tired my best to mod, sorry if it's bad or not helpful
Shohei Ohtani
Yay, thank you <3~Nyanderson-kun wrote:
☆Collab☆
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Just saying .. sb could be sexy like your other collab maps >.>
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SB isn't like my other storyboards since they were both made by Beuchi-chan. This one was made by myself, lol :3.
I'll kudosu and apply in a bit owo
Shohei Ohtani
Hi o/
[General]
Everything looks in their place.
[Easy]
Use AR3, AR1 is too slow ;u;
00:57:658 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:01:430 - How about making this? I think it fits more as vocals emphasizes in 01:02:630.
01:47:373 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:49:773 (3) - ^
01:50:801 (1,4) - Please avoid this overlap :<
02:08:972 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
02:12:744 (2,3) - Something similar as I said in 01:01:430.
02:51:487 (2) - Remove this, it breaks a bit the consistency of your 2/1 pattern.
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:34:001 (1) - I think a clap is missing in the ticks.
00:35:030 (2) - ^
[SMIC's Hard]
If you can change that whitish color for combos, it'd be awesome, it just becomes brighter during kiai and flashes too hard :<
[Ozzy's TaiK-On!!]
01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
02:21:487 - You have two green lines in this spot.
Higher diffs felt fine, I enjoyed them all >w<
Cool SB in Collab, it's simple but I liked the effect you used and the font :3
Short mod for a long song, but I really like this map how it is, good luck C:
[General]
Everything looks in their place.
[Easy]
Use AR3, AR1 is too slow ;u;
00:57:658 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:01:430 - How about making this? I think it fits more as vocals emphasizes in 01:02:630.
01:47:373 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:49:773 (3) - ^
01:50:801 (1,4) - Please avoid this overlap :<
02:08:972 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
02:12:744 (2,3) - Something similar as I said in 01:01:430.
02:51:487 (2) - Remove this, it breaks a bit the consistency of your 2/1 pattern.
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:34:001 (1) - I think a clap is missing in the ticks.
00:35:030 (2) - ^
[SMIC's Hard]
If you can change that whitish color for combos, it'd be awesome, it just becomes brighter during kiai and flashes too hard :<
[Ozzy's TaiK-On!!]
01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
02:21:487 - You have two green lines in this spot.
Higher diffs felt fine, I enjoyed them all >w<
Cool SB in Collab, it's simple but I liked the effect you used and the font :3
Short mod for a long song, but I really like this map how it is, good luck C:
Shohei Ohtani
02:21:487 - You have two green lines in this spot.
^ no worries
01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
^ That's Ozzy's job
^ no worries
01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
^ That's Ozzy's job
[General]
You have 2 osu folders of the same song (one inside the other), one of them doesn't have the hard difficulty, please fix it.
[Easy]
00:17:544 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do these sliders a bit better, they seems really weird now.
01:04:858 (2,3) - Make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
01:12:401 (5) - A finish sounds good here.
01:23:373 (1) - ^ Same as above.
01:27:487 (3) - I'm not a big fan of stacked notes on the easier difficulty, strongly suggest to change it.
02:16:173 (2,3) - As I said, make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
02:29:201 - What about adding a spin like the harder difficulties? the break is too long ...
03:17:200 (2,3) - I guess you know what to do here.
03:27:486 (4) - Maybe you can delete this note and extend the spin, because it is too short for an easy.
[Normal]
Good job, the only thing that I can say is that this difficulty could be a bit hard to read, but that's how the whole difficulty is mapped.
02:29:201 - Add a spin here, because the break is too long.
[Hard]
Perfect.
[Insane]
Seems like a very old difficulty from you, I could point out a lot of minor suggestions, because technically there is nothing wrong with the difficulty, but I think you can work on improving it by yourself, with your new mapping style, I know you can do it a lot better now, because I saw your last map and it's pretty well done.
Edit, fix your folder please!
You have 2 osu folders of the same song (one inside the other), one of them doesn't have the hard difficulty, please fix it.
[Easy]
00:17:544 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do these sliders a bit better, they seems really weird now.
01:04:858 (2,3) - Make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
01:12:401 (5) - A finish sounds good here.
01:23:373 (1) - ^ Same as above.
01:27:487 (3) - I'm not a big fan of stacked notes on the easier difficulty, strongly suggest to change it.
02:16:173 (2,3) - As I said, make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
02:29:201 - What about adding a spin like the harder difficulties? the break is too long ...
03:17:200 (2,3) - I guess you know what to do here.
03:27:486 (4) - Maybe you can delete this note and extend the spin, because it is too short for an easy.
[Normal]
Good job, the only thing that I can say is that this difficulty could be a bit hard to read, but that's how the whole difficulty is mapped.
02:29:201 - Add a spin here, because the break is too long.
[Hard]
Perfect.
[Insane]
Seems like a very old difficulty from you, I could point out a lot of minor suggestions, because technically there is nothing wrong with the difficulty, but I think you can work on improving it by yourself, with your new mapping style, I know you can do it a lot better now, because I saw your last map and it's pretty well done.
Edit, fix your folder please!
EDIT: nvm
Shohei Ohtani
lol I think this is an exception, you already mapped an insane difficulty;pCDFA wrote:
inb4 everyone gets mad because my only full diff is the easy diff
here i am doing m4m
i wanted to mod the other maps but one has like 2 fresh mods, one got graved and one is starred so...k-on it is
Black is suggestions
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
Inconsistencies in combo colours for the guest diffs, please fix them
i had a feeling ur osz is screwed up cause i needed to update after downloading, so i took a peek and...
you have another song folder inside the song folder lolol should check your local setup for this song's folder and then do a full submit
[Easy]
00:12:058 (1) - finish on start
00:16:687 (3) - add whistle like the other sliders of its kind
00:53:201 (3) - NC
01:40:515 (3) - this slider can look better with only one midpoint or using the new algorithm
01:53:544 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of 01:55:258 (1) to avoid confusion due to the partial overlap with 01:50:801 (1)
02:44:973 (3,4,1,2,3) - this part plays a bit confusing, it would be alot better if you can unstack 02:46:001 (2,3) so the flow is easier for newbies to follow
02:54:230 (1) - end at 02:56:630
02:57:315 (1) - add finish on start
03:13:772 (2) - lower the middle grid so the blanket on 03:15:657 (1) can look better
03:31:600 (2) - add finish on slider head
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR+1, makes the stacks easier to read imo
00:34:001 (1) - if you raise the red point by 2 grids it will make this perfectly centered
01:30:230 (5) - blanket can look better here
01:55:772 - felt like there should be a note here
02:53:887 (5) - NC
Nice symmetry ^_^
[SMIC's hard]
01:02:629 (3,4,5) - the stack here doesnt really flow well, it would be better if you stacked 01:03:144 (4) on top of 01:03:315 (5), or just dont stack it at all
01:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1) - this can curve a bit smoother for better flow
02:55:258 (1) - end this at 02:56:544
03:13:086 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - the difficulty on this might be too hard compared to the rest of the map, its a triplet 1/4 followed by 3 1/2 single taps which is quite demanding for a Hard...maybe make 03:13:429 (1,2) into a slider instead
03:17:715 (5) - woot got too intense here too, stack on where 03:16:343 (7) was makes it alot easier to play
03:28:172 (5) - NC for easier readability
i can imagine the fail/retry graph on this map peak on the last 20 seconds...
[Collab]
00:56:972 - add a note here
01:30:572 - a note here too stacked with 01:30:572 (2), makes it easier to play since its now a 1/2 stack under 01:30:229 (1)
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - use 1.00x spacing here?
02:13:944 (7,8,9,10,11) - feels better here with this rhythm: 02:16:858 (1) - end at 02:18:229
02:53:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the diamond formations are not the same shape >< make the one on the right skinnier
03:29:200 (2,3,4) - add whistles?
a good reminiscent of 2010/2011
Thats all, good luck on ranking (though why wasnt this ranked back then ><)
i wanted to mod the other maps but one has like 2 fresh mods, one got graved and one is starred so...k-on it is
Black is suggestions
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
Inconsistencies in combo colours for the guest diffs, please fix them
i had a feeling ur osz is screwed up cause i needed to update after downloading, so i took a peek and...
you have another song folder inside the song folder lolol should check your local setup for this song's folder and then do a full submit
[Easy]
00:12:058 (1) - finish on start
00:16:687 (3) - add whistle like the other sliders of its kind
00:53:201 (3) - NC
01:40:515 (3) - this slider can look better with only one midpoint or using the new algorithm
01:53:544 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of 01:55:258 (1) to avoid confusion due to the partial overlap with 01:50:801 (1)
02:44:973 (3,4,1,2,3) - this part plays a bit confusing, it would be alot better if you can unstack 02:46:001 (2,3) so the flow is easier for newbies to follow
02:54:230 (1) - end at 02:56:630
02:57:315 (1) - add finish on start
03:13:772 (2) - lower the middle grid so the blanket on 03:15:657 (1) can look better
03:31:600 (2) - add finish on slider head
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR+1, makes the stacks easier to read imo
00:34:001 (1) - if you raise the red point by 2 grids it will make this perfectly centered
01:30:230 (5) - blanket can look better here
01:55:772 - felt like there should be a note here
02:53:887 (5) - NC
Nice symmetry ^_^
[SMIC's hard]
01:02:629 (3,4,5) - the stack here doesnt really flow well, it would be better if you stacked 01:03:144 (4) on top of 01:03:315 (5), or just dont stack it at all
01:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1) - this can curve a bit smoother for better flow
02:55:258 (1) - end this at 02:56:544
03:13:086 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - the difficulty on this might be too hard compared to the rest of the map, its a triplet 1/4 followed by 3 1/2 single taps which is quite demanding for a Hard...maybe make 03:13:429 (1,2) into a slider instead
03:17:715 (5) - woot got too intense here too, stack on where 03:16:343 (7) was makes it alot easier to play
03:28:172 (5) - NC for easier readability
i can imagine the fail/retry graph on this map peak on the last 20 seconds...
[Collab]
00:56:972 - add a note here
01:30:572 - a note here too stacked with 01:30:572 (2), makes it easier to play since its now a 1/2 stack under 01:30:229 (1)
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - use 1.00x spacing here?
02:13:944 (7,8,9,10,11) - feels better here with this rhythm: 02:16:858 (1) - end at 02:18:229
02:53:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the diamond formations are not the same shape >< make the one on the right skinnier
03:29:200 (2,3,4) - add whistles?
a good reminiscent of 2010/2011
Thats all, good luck on ranking
(though why wasnt this ranked back then ><)Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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Easy
-kevincela-'s Normal
SMIC's Hard
Collab
Ozzy's Taik-On!!
Call me again when you're ready and I'll recheck.
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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Easy
- • Approach Rate 4 fits a lot better imo. (also consider to increase HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty to 3)
• 00:35:030 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary, remove it.
• 00:40:515 (1) - ^
• 00:43:944 (x) - Start a slider here, end it 1/1 later and add a repeat.
• 01:31:944 (4) - End this slider at 01:32:973 and add a circle at 01:33:487.
• 01:55:258 (1) - Remove this new combo.
• 03:37:086 (4,1) - Delete the circle and start the spinner 1/1 earlier.
-kevincela-'s Normal
- I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
• I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
• 00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
• 02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.
SMIC's Hard
- • 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later)
• 00:06:229 (8) - ^
• 00:08:972 (8) - ^
• 02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later.
• 02:51:487 (2,3,4) - Add some new combo like you did at 02:46:001 (1,1,1).
• 03:30:229 (1,2,3,1) - Try a different spacing, I don't really like the current one:
Collab
- • 01:26:801 (3,4) - Try this pattern:
• 02:11:201 (4,6) - Try to stack perfectly the end of these sliders.
• 02:14:458 (8,9) - Move the slider 1/2 later and the circle at 02:14:458.
Ozzy's Taik-On!!
- Looks good.
Call me again when you're ready and I'll recheck.
Shohei Ohtani
I usually won't respond to mod posts since I'm silly and all, but I'll respond to this one for recheck reasons.xxheroxx wrote:
-kevincela-'s NormalI'll ask kevin to read the italian later lol :3
- I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
• I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
• 00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
• 02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.
SMIC's Hard
- • 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later) It's following the drums ouo.
• 00:06:229 (8) - ^
• 00:08:972 (8) - ^
• 02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later. I didn't do the exact change, but I moved the spinner 1/2 earlier to make more musical sense rather than just ending.
Most things not explicitly stated should be done
I'll PM when kevin's stuff and other things are done uguu.
(ノ ﾟДﾟ)ノ彡
Omg. No Thank you v3
Damn
Damn
Nice Taiko, Ozzy.
CDFA \:D///
General
- You can add " 日笠 陽子" into ArtistUnicode for every diff as it is Hikasa Yoko in Japanese.
Easy
00:46:344 (2) - is this spacing intentional?
02:01:772 (1) - finish head according to 00:50:458 (1) -
03:20:286 (3) - it's fine but I concern if it is a bit off screen, just wondering if you can move it left a bit apart from the border
-kevincela-'s Normal
01:02:801 (3,4,5) - I find this weird as you were following vocal mainly, example : 00:58:687 (1,2,3,4) - so when it comes to these points, it made me hit early that it shouldn't have been. So I suggest you use this rhythm from the screenshot, hope you consider using it
02:14:115 (3,4,5) - same as above ^ , apply same pattern
03:15:143 (3,4) - ^
SMIC's Hard
03:30:229 (1,2,3) - maybe move them a bit far apart from each other a bit ? just moving 03:30:743 (2) - 3-4 grids up , it might be able to read easier as I believe some players would think it's constant stream so they would get these sliders wrongly. Just only my opinion though
, depends on you
Collab
nice Collab !
tell me after you are done applying these.
Edit : ranked
General
- You can add " 日笠 陽子" into ArtistUnicode for every diff as it is Hikasa Yoko in Japanese.
Easy
00:46:344 (2) - is this spacing intentional?
02:01:772 (1) - finish head according to 00:50:458 (1) -
03:20:286 (3) - it's fine but I concern if it is a bit off screen, just wondering if you can move it left a bit apart from the border
-kevincela-'s Normal
01:02:801 (3,4,5) - I find this weird as you were following vocal mainly, example : 00:58:687 (1,2,3,4) - so when it comes to these points, it made me hit early that it shouldn't have been. So I suggest you use this rhythm from the screenshot, hope you consider using it
02:14:115 (3,4,5) - same as above ^ , apply same pattern
03:15:143 (3,4) - ^
SMIC's Hard
03:30:229 (1,2,3) - maybe move them a bit far apart from each other a bit ? just moving 03:30:743 (2) - 3-4 grids up , it might be able to read easier as I believe some players would think it's constant stream so they would get these sliders wrongly. Just only my opinion though
, depends on you Collab
nice Collab !
tell me after you are done applying these.
Edit : ranked
2 years later a miracle happens.
Congrats!
Congrats!
Indeed! Congrats CDFA!Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.
Congrats!
Oh, gratz ~
wtf
2 Years omg
well now it is, congratulations!jonathanlfj wrote:
why wasnt this ranked back then
Shohei Ohtani
Socool.
cool
oh man cool as fug
this map is just pure fun, good job :3
Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:
Shohei Ohtani
History was made today.
Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.
Congrats!
Now let's see if I can reach pending longer than this.
CDFA ilysm
No, Andrea, this map deserves what it should get. It's not a miracle, don't make this sounds like a bad map getting ranked.Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.
Congrats!
CDFA ilysm
congrats \:D/
My pending maps.Garven wrote:
Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:
More than that
it's been more than 2 years since this song came out
man i am getting old
it's been more than 2 years since this song came out
man i am getting old
HahahaCDFA wrote:
ALSO LOL INB4 PEOPLE ARE LIKE "What's that gold star is that a super star omg"
Congratulations!
Shohei Ohtani
Yo momma so old she has 'mariobros777' in her tags.
No. but gratz you.
No. but gratz you.
IT'S RANKED
SOMETHING MUST BE WRONG HERE
jk, congratulations \:D/
SOMETHING MUST BE WRONG HERE
jk, congratulations \:D/
Congrats
gratz
not-so-late congratz \:D/
The approval of this song marked a before and after on this world.
Congratz!
Congratz!
With this being ranked, we're one step closer to the apocalypse.
Late grats. \:3/
Late grats. \:3/
laugh, also, late gratz too CDFA :>DakeDekaane wrote:
With this being ranked, we're one step closer to the apocalypse.
Late grats. \:3/
Listen >w<