Moming Qimiao - Qi Miao Niang · forum

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-07T23:47:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月29日 at 7:41:13

Artist: Moming Qimiao
Title: Qi Miao Niang
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5414kb
Play Time: 02:39
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.98 stars, 475 notes)
Normal (2.05 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Moming Qimiao - Qi Miao Niang
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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yeah

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LKs

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LKs 2011-01-08T03:20:21+00:00

zhen qi miao

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-19T12:19:07+00:00

LKs wrote:
zhen qi miao

Happy fantasy

Kamina

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Kamina 2011-01-21T11:05:19+00:00

hyper g-energy

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hyper g-energy 2011-01-21T11:54:03+00:00

=v=

Haruhi-boy

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Haruhi-boy 2011-01-21T13:00:40+00:00

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-01-21T14:31:06+00:00

[Hard]
01:02:634 (3) - finish?
01:24:571 (6,7) - interchange position of (6,7) looks better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50515
02:13:321 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3,4) right 1 grid, (5) down 1 grid

[Normal]
fine~

圖很好基本上都沒錯了~
starrrrr

Saten ruiko

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Saten ruiko 2011-01-21T14:41:28+00:00

star~~
感覺音效有點小聲>_>
[normal]
nice
[hard]
AR+1
各種2連大丈夫?
00:01:509 (1,2,3) - 感覺不舒服>_>個人問題!?
00:03:571 (8) - 下來一格?LV3
01:10:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺這樣很維和一排很密的3連一排很緊!?
01:45:009 (6) - new combo?
02:38:281 (x) -add note
02:39:009 (6) - 刪掉!?然後把轉圈往前移1/4拍?
nice map~

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-21T16:26:36+00:00

thanks a lot~

theowest

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theowest 2011-01-21T22:19:30+00:00

[General]

Very good H-boy!

Use 1/4 as the beat snap divisor. It's always better in all kinds of ways. ;D
Replace the beats when you have it.
And you can also make the approach rate one snap faster and maybe make the overall difficulty easier by 1-2 snaps to the left?

I see you stack up beats before sliders but you use 1/1 beats before the sliders very often. It doesn't really feel that good when playing so I would recommend having the 1/1 beats away from the sliders and just 1/2 beats should be stacked on the sliders before them. But it is okay to use them, it worked a lot of times in both difficulties.

[Normal]

It's pretty much perfect.
There's nothing I would suggest to change really except the stuff above.

[Hard]

00:04:509 (1) Move it so it isn't behind the slider.
00:20:821 (1) It is much better if the slider faces the beat so the way the cursor comes out from the slider is to the beat not away from the beat and then you have to go backwards to the beat again. Y'know what I'm saying? It makes stuff less complicated and easier for mods and such.
00:31:505 (1) Kinda hidden slider, move it so you can see it better.
00:44:634 (3) Move the slider up 3 grids so you can see it much clearly, even though it is breaking the distance snap. (If you want to)
00:46:321 (4) Looks the same as before but you don't have to change it. ;D
01:00:571 (3) Move the slider up 4 grids.
01:05:071 (2) Move it so it isn't behind the slider before.
01:05:446 (3) ^
01:20:915 (2) Moving it down just slightly with 0,6x as distance spacing to the right and the (3) slider does the same afterwards, would look a bit better actually.
01:23:446 (7) It's okay, it looks good. Keep goin'.

01:28:509 (1) The beat stacked on the slider looks and is okay. But just don't do it too much. ;D
01:34:321 (13) Move the slider down 5 grids.
01:38:634 (2) Looks good, nothing wrong with that. Keep goin'!

01:46:509 (1) Finish maybe? I haven't really payed attention to the sounds. Up to you.
01:47:821 (4) Change the slider like on this picture:

SPOILER

I just think it looks cooler. Up to you bro. ;D
02:34:134 (1) Move it up 5 grids up and 4 grids to the left. This is just like the next slider (2) will be distance spaced 0,3x from it.

AND NOW I'M DONE!

Awesome job dude!

Star~!

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TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-21T23:51:30+00:00

almost all suggestions are accepted

expect 00:44:634 (3)----on purpose

Thanks a lot

Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-01-22T14:50:30+00:00

ni hao~

I don't really like Chinese songs D: But anyway,

Hard
00:12:009 (1,2,3) - This would be perfect for some Jumps. 1,5x spacing?
00:31:134 (6) - add whistle
00:35:634 (8) - ^
00:36:009 (1) - whistle to the end
00:36:759 (2) - ^
00:38:821 (1) - this would sound better in Normal.
00:40:134 (5) - whistle to the start
00:41:634 (4) - ^
01:09:665 (7) - move to 01:09:571 - (I might be mistaken)
01:20:446 (1,2,3) - sounds better in Normal.
02:08:352 (5) - move to 02:08:259 - (I might be mistaken)
02:22:509 (2) - finish to start

Normal
This is more an Easy than a Normal. Maybe rename it to Easy.

The difficulty difference between Normal and Hard is too big, consider making another ~4 Star difficulty.

Niva

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Niva 2011-01-22T15:28:23+00:00

Mod request via Forum PM

[General]
-> The map's theme is "happy" and "colorful", maybe you want to add custom slider-border color? Open the .osu file in notepad, then search:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,192
Combo4 : 190,119,238
SliderBorder : ...

You can add that SliderBorder code below Combo4 and choose the color you like.
-> The mp3's name is "Marvelous Girl.mp3", is it the song's title in English? If so, you can add it to the tags.

[Normal]
00:13:884 (2) - Add whistle at start and end?
00:29:634 (2) - Add whistle?
00:41:634 (3) - Add whistle?
00:58:509 (1) - 1 grid left using grid snap?
01:27:946 (2) - Add whistle?
01:45:009 (5) - Try to curve this better using more waypoints
02:31:509 (1,2,3) - Create something like this perhaps?

SPOILER

02:37:509 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:24:009 (6) - Put this in the right of (5)? (not under (5))
01:13:227 (9) - (9) to (10) is too far
01:57:759 (1) - Add whistle?
02:15:571 (1) - Two grids up and two grids right? (adjust (11)'s curve before doing this)
02:21:946 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked
02:37:884 (3) - Two grids up and one grid right maybe, I'm not sure xD

Mostly suggestions, this map is ready to be ranked I think.
Star!

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-22T16:44:11+00:00

Thanks a lot

lwz_999

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lwz_999 2011-01-22T16:51:04+00:00

star

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2011-01-22T23:26:26+00:00

General

Sorry for my ignorance, I'm a bit curious, Is this Chinese?
The slider-border (yellow) doesn't look good, I tried to find some yellow parts on the BG but I couldn't find any. I suggest to make a "Hitcircleoverlay" of the same colour to make it look nice. (Let me know if you need help with that)
The offset feel just a bit early. (probably -2~4 ms)
You need to add "spinner-approachcircle.png" to avid skin mixing.
It's kinda illogical to have those breaks on Hard but not on Normal, I suggest to keep consistency: it's up to you if you map those breaks or apply those on the other diff too.

Normal

00:22:509 (1) - This spinner is kinda short, it's ok but I suggest to end it here: 00:24:759.
00:26:071 (1,2) - There's is some kind of trumpets/sax here, Simple hits sound empty try with some whistles.
00:58:509 (1) - This new combo is not necessary, just remove it.
01:03:009 (1) - I suggest to start a kiai time with finish on the main beat. (The same for the next kiai)
01:27:196 (X) - Maybe a circle here to complete the rhythm ? (+whistle)
02:00:009 (1) - Again the New Combo for this part is not necessary.

Hard

00:12:009 (1,2,3) - I suggest finish on all the notes + Increasing volume
00:25:321 - Why don't you map this part, It should be like this:
00:36:759 (2,3) - Fix spacing on (3), People may think thats a 1/4 note.
01:03:009 (1) - I suggest to start a kiai time with finish on the main beat. (The same for the next kiai)
01:26:821 - Again, why don't you map this part? It should be the same as above.
02:34:134 (1,2) - You should really fix this spacing , It's confusing and hard to read, while playing I thought it was a 1/4 stream.

Overall this a nice map, but there are some things that really need to be fixed (listed above), Have a well deserved star.

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-23T00:27:28+00:00

[*]00:25:321 - Why don't you map this part, It should be like this:

you did quite well,but i want empty this section...

fixed

thx a lot

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-24T01:26:10+00:00

[General]:

320Kbps OTL, 192Kbps最高了
换一下combo color? 目前BG颜色太接近了虽然删了BG后好很多但是这不是初衷 :D (看开始我以为是AR问题 :O)
tags: chinese 不必要因为rank之后自然会有chinese的genre
Aritist: Moming Qimiao 精选集专辑如是标注..
少个approachcircle.png

[Hard]:

01:08:634 (1,2) - clap
01:02:915 (T) - unused section
01:12:196 (5) - clap at the end
01:13:134 (8) - clap
01:20:727 (T) - 这根线应该是Normal的吧..
01:21:009 (3) - finish at first circle?
01:19:884 (2) - finish
02:04:415 (T) - 无用绿线现在已经不需要这么做了
02:09:759 (4) - clap at the end
02:10:321 (5) - clap
02:22:415 (T) - add circle
02:13:134 (1) - clap
02:13:696 (5) - clap at the end
02:14:634 (8) - ^
02:21:384 (2) - clap, whistle 有点弱
02:21:946 (1,2,3) - 三连部分用normal 02:22:509 (3) 头上扔个finish
02:28:415 (T) - 无用绿线
02:39:009 (6) - 用x1.5左右的Spacing放试试看?
02:39:009 (6) - finish

[Normal]:

01:02:915 (T) - remove
02:04:415 (T) - ^

star~ 现在泡太多了 >~<

Shiranui Okami

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Shiranui Okami 2011-01-24T02:18:24+00:00

star ~~~

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-24T02:51:56+00:00

歌曲改成192kbps了，容量减小了不少啊
Aritist修改了
颜色方面。。kiai时。。容易看不清，修改了下（怀疑是skin的原因。。不过颜色改了后，skin又给删了..）

其余...almost all lists are accepted

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vivicat

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vivicat 2011-01-24T02:53:10+00:00

☆ミ

Disoy

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Disoy 2011-01-24T05:38:43+00:00

star~

Sallad4ever

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Sallad4ever 2011-01-25T01:21:10+00:00

This is a fun song :D

[General]
- you still missing the spinner-clear and spinner-spin.png, please include it to your folder
- I though the combo burst is a SB :o

[Normal]
00:36:759 (4) - this note doesn't really sync with the song, the repeat in this slider doesn't follow anything in the song so I suggest to follow the rhythm in the vocal. there are similar place with this like:
00:48:759 (4,5) -
01:38:259 (4) -
01:50:259 (4,5) -
maybe make them into a single long slider?

[Hard]
00:24:102 (1) - hmm maybe silent then end of this spinner?
00:56:259 (1) - remove this?
01:03:384 (2,3) - this stack is kinda unexpected cause it's the first note that have 1/4 beat after the last note. it's better to unstack this
01:57:759 (1) - remove this?
02:11:634 (3) - funny shape :D
02:39:102 (1) - finish please

Nice map and the song is very catchy too, Good Luck~
Star

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-25T02:19:17+00:00

done~
thx a lot

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-28T03:58:25+00:00

[Hard]:

01:03:665 (3) - 这个放在slider正下方吧..
01:09:477 (6) - ^

offset方面检查下? 测试里老是不太准

don't kudosu this

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-28T13:10:15+00:00

offset我找人看看吧。。

Pokie

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Pokie 2011-01-28T13:39:13+00:00

竟然還沒給星

nimi

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nimi 2011-01-28T17:45:34+00:00

Chinese songs <3

General
heh, no ofense but I wouldn't use that skin since its colours don't have anything to do with the bg D: But well, up to you ^_^

Normal
01:09:759 (2) - flip it horizontally (Ctrl + H)? Looks better imo
01:27:009 (x) - add a note here?

Nothing to mention on Hard. Wellwell, have a star, and hope it gets ranked soon :3

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-29T00:46:36+00:00

Bubbled

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-29T01:00:02+00:00

wow....

Sandpig

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Sandpig 2011-01-29T01:18:01+00:00

准备MOD发现泡了

只好给你个star了

Zekira

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Zekira 2011-01-29T12:00:43+00:00

OK this is kinda annoying

The offset and BPM are fine, however, the vocals aren't spot on the offset. This is probably why some people said it was early, when in fact it's fine.

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-29T13:17:26+00:00

anyway,thx a lot

artpiggo

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artpiggo 2011-01-30T05:34:47+00:00

It's bubble now, star for you then!

ztrot

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ztrot 2011-01-31T22:45:40+00:00

I'm popping this for a lack of tags seeing as there are none, now I'm not saying I won't rank this I just want to make sure there are some tags placed before doing so. So after you add some tags pm me and I will rank this
EDIT found some info and ranked

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2011-01-31T23:10:51+00:00

Thanks for your Chinese song
现在做华语的歌越来越少了