nante wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:596 (x) - add a note? done

[Hard]
00:01:485 (1) - make it looks nicer
00:03:262 (2) - ^
00:05:040 (3) - ^
00:11:262 (1,2,3,4) - spacing? If these are intentional jumps, I don't think they're nice
01:23:596 (3) - change this slider into a spinner

[Normal]
00:28:373 (2) - I don't see a reason why to play with volume here I kinda think it sounds better, meh
01:01:040 (7,8,9) - delete? nah
if yes start new combo here 01:01:707 (10) and remove from next note
if not, new combo here 01:01:040 (7) NCed at 6

[Easy]
Unsnapped notes: 20 oops, how the hell did that happen :< fixed
01:09:040 (1,2,3,4) - awww so iritating finishes, delete at least 2 of them made them quieter


general:
I think you should add more hitsounds heh, I kinded wanted it that way to emphasize the music itself
00:01:485 (1) - whistle etc.
You have sounded really few notes...


Have my star thanks!

Kitsunemimi wrote:

>ω<

The hitsounds are nice~ I have no idea what you've got going on there with the .osb and all, but the background image isn't showing up in the editor. I downloaded it without video, so if for some reason you made it disappear in gameplay it shouldn't (so you fix it). The background is automatically not drawn if there's a video, but it doesn't look like you made it disappear on purpose. Deleting the .osb, should work, if not, remove and add in the background image and video again. heh, this was already pointed out and I have already killed the .osb file, funny it's doing that again. I will probably remove the BG and the video and re-add them.

[Easy]:
01:05:645 (timing) - What the heck is the purpose of these two uninherited sections? D: no idea where they came from myself DX deleted
01:01:929 (1,2) - Possible to make it without the reverse...? (as in, just make them long sliders) It makes it easier for the noobs in my opinion. I think I'll leave that for now~
01:16:151 (1,2) - ^ ^
Nothing else, this map looks good

[Normal]:
00:48:596 (2,5) - Usually don't find 1/4s in Normals <.< although these don't look too hard. Still, maybe change it? I thougth about that for a long time, now I decided to change it.
00:57:040 (1,2,3) - These notes are pretty close to the spinner (and I hate those), although they definitely must go there. Perhaps you could change it into a slider or something; the slider is more forgiving after recovering from the spinner. tried replacing the spinner with the slider, but looks ugly. I will keep this for now and see what others say.
01:00:151 (6) - Probably should make a new combo. done.
01:14:373 (6) - ^ ^

[Heather's Hard]:
00:01:485 (1,2,3) - Oh yes, oldstyle sliders xD
00:06:818 (6) - Do something more creative. Normally, I would offer a suggestion, but for these kinds of things, you just gotta change it up.
00:11:262 (1,2,3,4) - These are difficult to read. Try making (9) of last combo the start of this one.
00:27:929 (9,10) - Bad spacing
00:29:929 (2,3) - This would work better if they were stacked.
00:42:373 (6,7,1) - EXTREMELY unreadable. Either turn (7) into two notes stacked on top of (8) (not under 6 though), or just combine (7) into (6).
01:23:040 (3) - You should divide this up into more sliders, like (2)
This map is pretty difficult for a [Hard]. I think maybe you should increase the circle size? Especially with those jumps.

I don't play Taiko at all, but I usually try pointing out anything that may seem wrong. However, I'm sort of busy at the moment with a lot of stuff to do this week, so I'll skip this one this time... :< Sorry that's fine~ XD

[Insane]:
00:35:262 (6,7) - These are tricky to time right, so you might as well combine (7) with (6) eh.....I think I'll leave them for now.
00:38:817 (9,10) - For these, I usually just stack em on top of each other. done.
01:03:707 (1,1) - Yeah, these are sort of sticking out. Even if you want to make extremely far jumps, I don't think going beyond the mapping grid is allowed. You'd probably just space em a bit closer, although you could straighten them out too. XD fixed, the jump used to play well in CTB but oh well ;_;
01:23:484 (4,5) - In my own opinion, these are sometimes more effective if they're two notes stacked on top of each other (for each slider in this case). It's only my own opinion though, you could try to see if you like it better. fixed after some tryouts~

The map is looking really solid! Good luck on getting it ranked soon~ thanks!

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Heather's Hard]
consider rising HP, OD by 2 and AC by 1 I think i'll still go with AR 6 since this is a Hard lol. 7 would be a little too high, changed HP and OD
00:11:262 (1,2,3,4) - an increased spacing? please make the spacing gradually increase. Don't make it a sudden big spacing like 00:11:929 (4) fixed
00:30:262 (3) - what is this 1/4 notes following :/ following nothing i guess, since i'm Al-Azif's fan, i've been trying to make my own rhythm sometimes
00:52:040 (10) - placing this this in 1/4 is sounds weird, delete 00:51:929 (9) and move (10) back 1/4 beat. fixed
00:58:484 (1) - doesn't sound very good, remove this ahh, i think this is following the vocal, no problem here
I can't follow the rhythm here becuse of the double 1/4 stack notes, they doesn't really fit the song

Kitsunemimi wrote:

>ω<
[Heather's Hard]:
00:01:485 (1,2,3) - Oh yes, oldstyle sliders xD
00:06:818 (6) - Do something more creative. Normally, I would offer a suggestion, but for these kinds of things, you just gotta change it up.I tried a few ways, but can't come up with some good ideas, so let me be lazy this time
00:11:262 (1,2,3,4) - These are difficult to read. Try making (9) of last combo the start of this one. fixed
00:27:929 (9,10) - Bad spacing fixed
00:29:929 (2,3) - This would work better if they were stacked.fixed
00:42:373 (6,7,1) - EXTREMELY unreadable. Either turn (7) into two notes stacked on top of (8) (not under 6 though), or just combine (7) into (6).fixed
01:23:040 (3) - You should divide this up into more sliders, like (2)fixed
This map is pretty difficult for a [Hard]. I think maybe you should increase the circle size? Especially with those jumps. but i really like this circle size.. so i tried to make smaller jumps, hope that's better

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

Hard:
5:040 (3) Maybe make it more clear.fixed
29:707 (1) Put it nearer the center a bit more.fixed
30:262 (3) Stack it properly.fixed
51:929 (9) Make it prettier.fixed
58:596 (2) Add note.ah.. that sounds not that good to me
1:09:040 (1) New combo. fixed
1:25:040 (5) Add note here.tried to play with one more note here, but still like the way it is right now
Then add spiner similar as all other diffs.added spinner istead of note lol

ignorethis wrote:

<Heather's Hard>
AR+1. And this dif looks more sloppy than others orzok AR7 now, but i still think 6 looks alright D:
00:01:485 (1,2,3) - These sliders are ugly :< and a few others as well.changed, hope they look better now
00:51:929 (9) - This should end on red tickfixed
01:08:151 (4) - Why silenced D:ah, might be easier to read now
01:08:151 (4) - Distance^