checking bubbles
[General]
add ur storyboarder to tags?
[Snow]
00:25:566 (3) - could be emphasised a bit better imo, since the piano here is a lot stronger than 00:21:763 (3) - 00:23:030 (3) - but you have less spacing
00:27:678 (1,2,1) - 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - you could do a better job at making these stand out more, the spacing before these patterns is quite high making it hard for the player to tell between spacings. stuff like 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - works well cos you start with less spacing 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2)
00:59:791 - i dont think this section deserves to be this intense. this part isn't much different from 00:16:692 - so u should try introduce some more sliders to make the sections consistent
01:08:664 (7) - 01:11:199 (7) - would be worthwhile to nc these, since you dont really have anything else that sets these beats apart from everything else
[Sharlo's Insane]
00:30:214 (5,6) - spacing seems really weak here. its really similar to 00:29:580 (2,3) - whereas in other patterns you emphasised these beats much more 00:27:678 (3,4)
00:40:143 (4) - skips over too many sounds tbh, and doesnt represent any specific sound. i'd break this into a circle + 1/2 slider
00:53:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - y so much spacing. patterns like 00:50:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:54:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vary in spacing but this is just pure high spaced jumps :/
01:05:284 (3,4,5) - spacing change also seems really random here, should probably move 01:05:706 (5) - closer
[Hard]
why dont you give this diff the appropriate name, including the user that made it
00:01:059 (3,4) - 00:03:594 (5,6) - ctrl g rhythm? i dont think passively mapping the strongest sound is nice at all :c
00:12:890 (1) - skipping over 00:13:312 - is pretty disappointing tbh, could try something similar to what u did in snow
00:31:904 (1,2) - 00:34:439 (1,2) - the jumps seem unnecessary, since with similar sounds 00:26:833 (1,2) - 00:29:368 (1,2) - you had no spacing changes
00:36:552 (1,2) - swap ncs for downbeat
00:39:509 (6,1) - ^ etc. downbeats seem misaligned here. see if u can keep them consistently on every 2nd measure
00:55:988 (1) - same thing about rhythm
01:20:073 (4) - should be attached to this pattern 01:20:495 (1,2,3)
[yanlu's Normal]
00:05:073 (3) - dont use 1/4 in normal pls
01:17:537 (4,5) - pattern is probably too complicated, since you're switching between white ticks and red ticks while mapping the 1/2s and can get really confusing. probably better to stick to white ticks
spread between easy > normal seems a bit worrying, since easy plays really slow in comparison and has much simpler rhythms. will get some more opinions tho