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Shimizu Kaori - Mo, Mousou Machine

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Krisom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 14 de febrero de 2011 at 16:07:47

Artist: Shimizu Kaori
Title: Mo, Mousou Machine
Source: Lucky Star
Tags: Tamura Hiyori osuplayer111 arien666 arken1015
BPM: 170
Filesize: 4432kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea's Hard (4,89 stars, 374 notes)
  2. aru's Taiko (4,79 stars, 524 notes)
  3. Easy (1,82 stars, 133 notes)
  4. Insane (4,92 stars, 296 notes)
  5. Normal (3,29 stars, 196 notes)
Download: Shimizu Kaori - Mo, Mousou Machine
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tamura san is my favorite Lucky star character, so, here we come !

Andre's hard by andr (aka: osuplayer111)
aru's Taiko by arken-san
Played by you >w<
arien666
First, Here is the Taiko diff :3

This is pun so ignore wrote:

[+]MAT bonus = +1 kudosu
[+]Muture bonus = +2 kudosu
[-]Muzukashii style = -1 difficulty
Sorry for pun orz

Download: Shimizu Kaori - Mo, Mousou Machine (Krisom) [aru's Taiko].osu
Andrea
Posting here for reminding me to map the guest difficulty for this song tomorrow!

Sorry for being a lazy ass :o


EDIT: And here it goes! Don't forget to add arien666 and me into the tags on every difficulty~ ;)
Noobita
CapnDavid
:)
James2250
(Will just rename my queue to reserved queue for Krisom :P)

-1600kb and 1200kb are really pushing it for background sizes (not good when your backgrounds = your mp3 size) Go convert them~
-Is the K.O thing for the hp bar not meant to reach the end of it (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52402) Looks kinda odd
-HP bar is so big..

Easy:
I find it strange to start kiai when there is nothing directly to hit (in the middle of a slider)
00:56:629 (1,2,1) - doesn't look great to me but its looks pretty deliberate so ok (same for others)

Normal:
00:17:276 (5) - goes through hp bar, but its rankable so fine

aru's Taiko:
No major errors, looks good

Andrea's Hard:
Use Lucky Star for skin preference?

Insane:
I find it strange to start kiai when there is nothing directly to hit (in the middle of a slider)
(More than 3 slider speeds, it burnssss...some nice slider shapes though)
01:57:511 (4,6) - stack these

Good job as always
Deserves a star~
Topic Starter
Krisom

James2250 wrote:

(Will just rename my queue to reserved queue for Krisom :P)

-1600kb and 1200kb are really pushing it for background sizes (not good when your backgrounds = your mp3 size) Go convert them~ Sheesh fine >w<
-Is the K.O thing for the hp bar not meant to reach the end of it (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52402) Looks kinda odd
-HP bar is so big..
I think I'll just remove the lucky star skin :x...

Easy:
I find it strange to start kiai when there is nothing directly to hit (in the middle of a slider) I want to follow the vocals, but if you listen to the instruments, the chorus starts where the kiai time does. I'm also unsure about this so I'll think about it and see if someone else thinks its weird
00:56:629 (1,2,1) - doesn't look great to me but its looks pretty deliberate so ok (same for others) I'm likin' it :<

Normal:
00:17:276 (5) - goes through hp bar, but its rankable so fine Will remove lucky star skin

Insane:
I find it strange to start kiai when there is nothing directly to hit (in the middle of a slider) same as easy
(More than 3 slider speeds, it burnssss...some nice slider shapes though) There are currently 4, 2 of them are for speedups, one is the x1.0 and the other one lasts just 1 slider, it's x0.97 (not a big change from x1.0) and it's just to make 01:58:040 (5) - look like a blanket to (4), using sliderspeed x1.0 makes this look horrible.
01:57:511 (4,6) - stack these I can? I thought it'd count as a burai slider. Oh well~

Good job as always
Deserves a star~
Thanks james >w<
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Perfecto.
  2. Oh espera creo que vi que a veces agregaban "Taiko" a los tags, no sé si es necesario, solo lo menciono.
Easy
  1. Uhm el kiai time empieza en el medio de un slider se ve mal en el editor y tambien cuando juegas, no veo porque no empezarlo cuando empiezan las vocales (Cuando empieza el slider) al menos en esta dificultad.
  2. 00:56:629 (1,2) - Uhh, definitivamente no me gusta que un slider este encima del otro, para arreglarlo tendrías que cambiar el pattern, así que lo dejo a tu criterio. (En serio se ve mal, aún más con el AR bajo, cambialo + patterns similares.)
  3. 01:07:923 (3) - Siento que falta un hitsound al final de este slider Whistle/Finish. (Sliders similares)
Normal
  1. 01:07:923 (1) - Denuevo creo que aquí falta un hitsounds :3 (+ 02:22:746 (1) - )
  2. 02:29:805 (3) - Ignora el spacing y mueve esto un poco más abajo, por el overlap.
Aru's Taiko
  1. Really nice :3, Just some spinners (02:11:452 (1) - 02:14:276 (1) - 02:17:100 (1)) that were a bit short, I think those would play better as sliders.
Andrea's Hard
  1. 00:26:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Due to AR, this pattern it's really confusing imo, Use New Combo on (7) so it's easier to read it. And remove new combo on the next note after (8).
  2. 01:04:040 (X) - You should add a circle here to fit the vocals.
  3. 01:04:570 (X) - ^
  4. 01:10:923 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent between (2), (3) and (4). I suggest this, In the pic spacing is intuitive so it's easier to play. (Same suggestion for Copypaste)
  5. 01:41:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same situation as above, Use New Combo on (7) to fix it, don't forget to remove new combo on the next note.
  6. 02:18:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You really feel that something is missing while playing so I suggest to add those missing notes as I pointed out before (01:04:040 - 01:04:570).
  7. Nice patterns.
Insane
  1. 01:08:099 (1) - Lol sí usaste el "Finish" en esta diff
  2. 02:22:923 (1) - Aquí no ? ^ , agregalo.
  3. Horribles Patterns, Sliders nada Creativos, Mal uso de Colorhax y Que malos hitsounds, Deberías darte autonuke.
<3

Topic Starter
Krisom

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Oh espera creo que vi que a veces agregaban "Taiko" a los tags, no sé si es necesario, solo lo menciono. Ni idea, preguntaré a lepi luego
Easy
  1. Uhm el kiai time empieza en el medio de un slider se ve mal en el editor y tambien cuando juegas, no veo porque no empezarlo cuando empiezan las vocales (Cuando empieza el slider) al menos en esta dificultad. Lee mi respuesta a James :3
  2. 00:56:629 (1,2) - Uhh, definitivamente no me gusta que un slider este encima del otro, para arreglarlo tendrías que cambiar el pattern, así que lo dejo a tu criterio. (En serio se ve mal, aún más con el AR bajo, cambialo + patterns similares.) Mueran Overlap haters >:(!!!!!!
  3. 01:07:923 (3) - Siento que falta un hitsound al final de este slider Whistle/Finish. (Sliders similares)Nope, el final (en la música) es bastante suave, así que lo dejaré así.
Normal
  1. 01:07:923 (1) - Denuevo creo que aquí falta un hitsounds :3 (+ 02:22:746 (1) - )NUevamente no
  2. 02:29:805 (3) - Ignora el spacing y mueve esto un poco más abajo, por el overlap. Die in a fire :D
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Insane
  1. 01:08:099 (1) - Lol sí usaste el "Finish" en esta diff Este fue un error, removiendo
  2. 02:22:923 (1) - Aquí no ? ^ , agregalo. >w< no
  3. Horribles Patterns, Sliders nada Creativos, Mal uso de Colorhax y Que malos hitsounds, Deberías darte autonuke. Debiera darle nuke a tu cara >:(!!!!
<3 <3

Tenshi-nyan
meh

too pefect for me to mod

star

lol
Louis Cyphre
(01:13:393 - 01:16:570) - Not break. Just nothing. Put spinner, feel this place with notes or just make it break time too.

I find only this.

Star
wmfchris
[taiko]
nice, only some suggestions
00:27:864 (1) - k
01:09:511 (1) - remove finishes, then maybe add 2 notes (+finish) on 01:10:040 and 01:10:393
01:12:687 (2) - K?
02:10:570 (1) - ^
so many short spinners and finishes, anyway ok for me ;w;

[Andrea's Hard]
00:45:511 (2,3,5,6,7) [Nazi] left 1 grid?

all solo diff would be fine for me. star!
arien666
All 2 Taiko modding are accepted <3

Gonzvlo wrote:

Aru's Taiko
  1. Really nice :3, Just some spinners (02:11:452 (1) - 02:14:276 (1) - 02:17:100 (1)) that were a bit short, I think those would play better as sliders.

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko]
nice, only some suggestions
00:27:864 (1) - k
01:09:511 (1) - remove finishes, then maybe add 2 notes (+finish) on 01:10:040 and 01:10:393
01:12:687 (2) - K?
02:10:570 (1) - ^
so many short spinners and finishes, anyway ok for me ;w;


And star <3

Download: Shimizu Kaori - Mo, Mousou Machine (Krisom) [aru's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom
Updated

Louis Cyphre wrote:

(01:13:393 - 01:16:570) - Not break. Just nothing. Put spinner, feel this place with notes or just make it break time too.
Will ask andré about it, thanks for the mod :>
jericho2442
Easy
Perfect

Normal
very nice only thing what as odd was some of the combo's, so here is a small combo mod ;p

00:31:393 (1) - looks, plays, and feels better if you remove this new combo
00:39:864 (1) - same again
01:43:923 (6) - new combo here so it flows with your pattern, you kinda breaking it ;p
01:46:217 (1) - again by removing this new combo it make more sense to your current pattern
01:54:688 (1) - same

Andrea's Hard
very nice map ;p
maybe lower the HP drain 1 for this?

01:04:570 - feels extremely odd not having a note here when the map screams for it, please add a note here xD
02:19:393 - same again

Insane
pretty much perfect ;p

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gah you never give me much to find, great job xD
Topic Starter
Krisom

jericho2442 wrote:

Normal
01:43:923 (6) - new combo here so it flows with your pattern, you kinda breaking it ;p Have to disagree on this one, check 00:27:158 (1) - 's, 00:24:334 (1) - 's, 01:30:687 (1) - 's , etc combos for reference (they all go (1/1)(1/1)(1/1)(1/1)(1/1)-(1/2)-(1/1))
Did the others and fixed the colorhar to make them fit :P
Andrea
Here are the fixes to all the moddings, thanks guys :P
arien666
[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[aru's Taiko]
I hope that lots of people would make Taiko diffs as Muzukashii style ;_;

[Andrea's Hard]
01:05:629 (2,3) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:20:453 (2,3) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?

[Insane]
01:02:276 (1) - [Nazi] Uhh? Check this slider one more time :3 1 dot is not symmetric from its partner



Great <3
Anyway, Good luck XD

ps. No need kudosu :3
Topic Starter
Krisom

arien666 wrote:

[Andrea's Hard]
01:05:629 (2,3) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:20:453 (2,3) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
I checked both and they seem to be right on distance snap o.o

[Insane]
01:02:276 (1) - [Nazi] Uhh? Check this slider one more time :3 1 dot is not symmetric from its partner

Thanks, done


ps. No need kudosu :3 Gave you anyways~
Shohei Ohtani
Andrea:
I don't like comboing by patterns, but I won't say anything :~;

Stop being a good mapper Krisom, so I can mod ;~;.
Andrea
Arien is right, fixed both of them.

@CDFA: I know heh, I have my personal style of using new combo :P
Roddie
Hi

Easy:
  1. 00:55:393 (2)-Would it be better if you put a clap on the end? :3
  2. 02:10:217 (2)-^
Normal:

Nothing I can point out.

Andrea's Hard:
  1. 00:17:452 (6)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
  2. 01:32:276 (6)-^
Insane:
  1. 00:54:511 (2)-I think its better if you remove that clap from the beginning and putting a clap on the end. It would sound better, in my opinion.
  2. 00:55:923 (4)-^
  3. 01:05:805 (2)-^
  4. 01:07:217 (4)-^
Kris... Teach me how to make awesome sliders like yours. D:

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Topic Starter
Krisom

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Easy:
  1. 00:55:393 (2)-Would it be better if you put a clap on the end? :3
  2. 02:10:217 (2)-^
None done :I

Insane:
  1. 00:54:511 (2)-I think its better if you remove that clap from the beginning and putting a clap on the end. It would sound better, in my opinion.
  2. 00:55:923 (4)-^
  3. 01:05:805 (2)-^
  4. 01:07:217 (4)-^
All done

Kris... Teach me how to make awesome sliders like yours. D:
step 1.- make it symmetric
step 2.- go crazy!
Thanks a lot roddie!
James2250
All looks good :D

Bubbled~
Larto
pro
OzzyOzrock
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

gratzulonipasta
arien666
Time to eat pizza <3
OzzyOzrock
just realized that this doesn't force lucky star skin

YYYEEEAAAHHH
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