akrolsmir wrote:

Normal:
00:07:259 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can't seem to find a pattern here. Is it supposed to have the first (1,2,3) as equilateral triangle, next (3,1,2) as another, and 4 just randomly? If so, it's not spaced right. pretty intuitive pattern for me, didnt changed
02:03:483 (3) - 1 grid up? yup
02:18:797 (5) - Why not just start this at 02:19:007 to maintain the flow? no, its made on purpose..

Hard:
00:10:406- Add a note? yesss
00:49:007 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Shape into a better pentagon. 9 should stack with 4. fixed
02:06:839 (4,5) - Not symmetric- move center node of both 1 or 2 grids right. fixed
02:36:629 (1) - Make symmetric and centered on y-axis pretty symmetric for me, got bored to make it more symmetric lol

Mel's Easy fixed some stuff aswell

Pretty good. Normal and hard seemed to lack patterns at times. i tryed to not overmap the song orz

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. If you add a "Section-pass" then you must add a "Section-fail" too. (add the template one if you don't feel like making a custom one) done

[SB]

1. The playground size is 640x480, so all these files should be resized to 640x480 to save some space. the max size of sb elements allowed by peppy is 800x600, also 640x480 jpg has much lower quality, 640x480 png much bigger size of file, thats why i ll stay with 800x600 jpg.
2. After resizing all you have to do is delete the following lines from the "OSB" file: http://puu.sh/29Lu
   (Since the files will be the exact size of the playground there's no need to scale them)

[Mel's Easy]

1. HP Drain seems a bit high, I suggest to reduce it 1 tick. no, iam fine with current settings
2. 00:15:546 - I don't see why you decreased the volume here, the music didn't change. You should keep using 80% (or 70%) for the whole map. With "Soft Override" on, the standard hits can not be hear, remember than you must hear what you're hitting. This goes for all the sections where your used 40~45~50~60% ( 02:41:664 - Reducing volume for this part seems perfectly fine, but the other parts are not justified) no, current volume spread is pretty good for me
3. 00:40:406 (1) - This spinner starts too early, the rhythm starts here: 00:40:825 - move it please. okay
4. 00:59:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly suggest to move this pattern closer to the center, spinners are hard for rookies so try to keep patterns near to the center after a spinner. fixed
5. 01:24:042 (1) - Same for this spinner, the place where it starts it's kinda odd. It should start here: 01:24:462 - okay
6. 02:26:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Apply the same suggestion about moving the patterns near the center after a spinner. fixed
7. 02:53:413 - I expected some inherited sections here to increase the volume gradually, consider adding them. huh, there 100% already, but well, fixed a bit
8. 03:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is way too long, try to keep combos "short" for [Easy]. Use New Combo on (6) okay, good idea

[Normal]

1. OD could be raised 1 tick while HP Drain could be decreased 1 tick, consider it~ no, iam fine with current settings
2. 00:12:713 (1) - This spinner's beginning seems a bit random, I suggest to start it here: 00:13:972 - no, its good for me
3. 01:24:252 (1) - I think that this should start 1/2 later. no, current pattern follows the vocal
4. 01:28:657 (1) - You should save these repeating sliders (1/4) for [Hard] or [Insane] IMO, I suggest to use this instead. nothing wrong here, u just press and hold, also 1/2 sounds ugly
5. 02:22:364 (1) - You should keep the consistency with the first verse, start this spinner here: 02:23:203 - and end it here:02:25:720 - ^ no, orz
6. 02:41:559 ~ 02:54:776 - I highly suggest to use "0.75x" instead of "0.50x", 0.50x is a bit execessive IMO with 0.75x you'll have the same effect but It won't cause any combo-break or stuff like that. no, i prefer 0.5x over here

[Hard]

1. 00:22:154 (4,5) - Sorry, this spacing doesn't make sense at all. All the objects are in 1/2 but you suddenly increased spacing for that circle, that's so unintuitive, fix the spacing please. no, its made on purpose jump
2. 00:33:692 (4,5,6) - This spacing is so inconsistent and cofusing. This would play, look and flow better if you use something like this instead. no, its made on purpose jump
3. 00:35:580 (1) - This circle was so unexpected, it's not following any noticeable rhythm or the vocals, remove it please. no, but fixed combo a bit
4. 00:42:504 (X) - I feel that something is missing here, consider adding a circle here. yesss
5. 00:47:119 (3,4,1) - Uneven spacing, please fix this. Try to keep spacing consistent and easy to read, place jump only where it's needed. i found this jump easy to read and its also follows the vocal
6. 01:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is almost like the first pattern I pointed out, this spacing doesn't make sense at all. It's really important to keep spacing consistent, it's even more important if all the objects are in the same combo and placed in the timeline with the same spacing between them (1/1, 1/2, 1/4, etc). Fix spacing between (3) and (4) please. no, its made on purpose jump
7. 01:17:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see the same issue here, try this. no, its made on purpose jump
8. 01:24:357 (1) - Hmm this starts too early, it should start here: 01:24:462 - IMO. ok
9. 01:28:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I highly suggest to move this stream like this. The first time, I missed this stream because it got "kinda" covered by the previous spinner's hitburst so better be sure that it won't cause any problems. changed a bit
10. 01:49:636 (1,2,3) - Same issue about spacing here, try this. no, its made on purpose jump
11. 01:51:315 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
12. 01:56:769 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between (3)&(4) is not the same used between (1)&(2) or (2)&(3) while all the objects are placed in 1/1, fix the spacing between (3)&(4) please. its the same 1.40x
13. 02:29:916 (5,6,7,8) - Well this jumps are intuitive enough, I won't complain about this one. thx
14. 02:41:559 - Same suggestion about using 0.75x instead of 0.50x (Explained in [Normal]) i prefer 0.5x over here
15. 02:53:413 (4) - Use a New Combo here to re-mark the music and spacing change. no, new combo here cases miss
16. 02:59:497 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same issue about spacing, fix spacing between (5) and (6) please. no, its made on purpose jump
17. 03:11:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ between (2)&(3) no, its made on purpose jump
18. 03:18:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern has uneven spacing, it's easy to hit because those are in 1/1 so you have to time to "guess" the spacing tho. Just try to make spacing even and everyone will be happy . Just try to make spacing even and enjoy the boring map? this spacing changes pretty intuitive and fun to play
19. Well, I see many spacing issues here that have to be fixed. (If you refuse to change any of those "no sense" spacing, at least add a New Combo when the spacing changes drastically) orz

James2250 wrote:

Mel's Easy:
Looks good

Normal:
00:12:713 (1) - I would expect this to end at 00:15:650 as it seems to fit more there yup
00:50:895 (5,1) - switch new combo? okay
01:09:357 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - why stop your clap pattern here? because i feel i dont want to hear clap at this part of song ><
01:12:713 (5,1) - switch new combo (same for the rest like this) okay
01:17:748 (1) - remove new combo to follow your previous patterns okay
02:14:811 (3) - did you forget a clap on the repeat here? same.. i dont feel clap here ><
02:51:734 (4,1) - switch new combo to follow the ones before this okay
03:13:552 (1) - remove new combo okay

Hard:
00:21:944 (3,4,5) - I know you mentioned patterns like these were jumps but they don't really fit with the song and seem odd while playing, I recommend you keep the spacing equal on the several parts like this
01:13:552 (2,3) - ^
01:17:748 (3,4) - ^ etc
01:39:566 (1,2,3,4) - spacing like this would look better staying consistent
02:53:413 (4) - new combo okay
02:53:832 (1) - remove new combo okay

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
00:21:944 (3,4,5) - I know you mentioned patterns like these were jumps but they don't really fit with the song and seem odd while playing, I recommend you keep the spacing equal on the several parts like this remapped
01:13:552 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:17:748 (3,4) - ^ etc fixed
01:39:566 (1,2,3,4) - spacing like this would look better staying consistent fixed