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Kaori Sadohara - Day to Story (TV Size)

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lolia
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 12월 24일 일요일 at 오전 6:15:13

Artist: Kaori Sadohara
Title: Day to Story (TV Size)
Source: デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags: ending date a live 2 Mugiwarasekai Irohas Neoskylove
BPM: 140
Filesize: 19757kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Date Story (5.85 stars, 375 notes)
  2. Easy (1.52 stars, 99 notes)
  3. Hard (3.23 stars, 248 notes)
  4. Insane (4.7 stars, 326 notes)
  5. Irohas' Extra (5.26 stars, 364 notes)
  6. NeoSL's Insane (4.31 stars, 287 notes)
  7. Normal (2.07 stars, 166 notes)
Download: Kaori Sadohara - Day to Story (TV Size)
Download: Kaori Sadohara - Day to Story (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - me
Insane - Neoskylove, me
Extra - Irohas
Date Story - me




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Last edited by lolia , edited 68 times in total.
Cellina
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Cellina

Date Story

  1. 00:22:047 (4) - 조금 덜 구부리시는건?
  2. 00:27:380 (2) - 컨쥐 추천드려요
  3. 00:48:880 (5) - 슬라머리에 클랩 추천드려요
  4. 00:58:047 (3,4) - 블랭킷 패턴 어떠신가요
  5. 01:00:214 (1,2) - 디스턴스 좀 덜 주시는걸 추천드려요
  6. 01:02:880 (1) - 여기도 조금 덜 구부리시는건?... ㅂㄷ;
  7. 01:21:547 (1,2) - 여기서부터 음이 바뀌는 분위긴데 좀 더 각도를 주시는것도 괜찮다고 생각해요

잘 만드신거같네요. 굳럭!
lolia
1,356 posts
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Topic Starter
lolia

Reana wrote:

Date Story

  1. 00:22:047 (4) - 조금 덜 구부리시는건? 지금 모양이 제일 나은거같아요
  2. 00:58:047 (3,4) - 블랭킷 패턴 어떠신가요 여기는 이대로가 낫지않을까하네요
  3. 01:00:214 (1,2) - 디스턴스 좀 덜 주시는걸 추천드려요 (1)이 슬라라서 체감 DS는 더 낮을꺼라 생각해요
  4. 01:02:880 (1) - 여기도 조금 덜 구부리시는건?... ㅂㄷ; 여기도 이게 나은거같아서..

잘 만드신거같네요. 굳럭!
다른것들은 다 고쳤습니다.
모딩 감사합니다!
Misure
952 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
Hi :)
Nice mapset, nothing really important to say :o Don't take them so serious :D
[General]
  1. I'd like to see objects at the beginning to be farther, since it's a 6* diff, at least farther than things in Ex diff
  2. 00:25:047 (1,2) - swap NC or double NC?
  3. 00:30:047 (2) - I'm not sure if it's regarded as out of screen, since x=-4 when ctrl+G
  4. 00:35:880 - NC?
  5. 00:45:547 (1) - ctrl+G to emphasise the beat of NC here?
  6. 00:47:880 (1) - not so much, but a little weird when I played, maybe 96|276 better
  7. 01:06:047 (2,4) - maybe farther better, like 01:06:547 (4) - on 280|272
  8. 01:08:547 (2) - 252|316 to be blanketed by 01:07:880 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  9. 01:17:714 (2,3) - ctrl+G? mainly to make 01:17:880 (3,4,1,2) - flow better
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:547 (1) - ctrl+G?
  2. 00:52:214 (1) - and 00:52:547 (2) - ctrl+G to have a better feeling on flow?
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:130 (5) - not neccessary in this diff to make it so hard at the beginning
  2. 00:29:547 (1,2) - not so good imo... why not just like this ??
  3. 01:13:214 (5) - out of screen? well, in fact idk how to identify this :o
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:547 (4) - clap on tail needed?
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:214 (1) - still not sure :?
Just some nazi :D
Good luck!
lolia
1,356 posts
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Topic Starter
lolia

Misure wrote:

Hi :)
Nice mapset, nothing really important to say :o Don't take them so serious :D
[General]
  1. I'd like to see objects at the beginning to be farther, since it's a 6* diff, at least farther than things in Ex diff Reduced SD ww
  2. 00:25:047 (1,2) - swap NC or double NC? Hmm,, current NC is best imo
  3. 00:30:047 (2) - I'm not sure if it's regarded as out of screen, since x=-4 when ctrl+G Not offscrean in-game w
  4. 00:35:880 - NC? Keep for now. I'm not sure about this orz
  5. 00:45:547 (1) - ctrl+G to emphasise the beat of NC here? Current position is better to emphasize imo
  6. 01:06:047 (2,4) - maybe farther better, like 01:06:547 (4) - on 280|272
  7. 01:08:547 (2) - 252|316 to be blanketed by 01:07:880 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  8. 01:17:714 (2,3) - ctrl+G? mainly to make 01:17:880 (3,4,1,2) - flow better
    // KIAI part is remapped, so can't check them. orz
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:547 (1) - ctrl+G? lol, surely that flow is more smooth, but I want current flow for emphasizing the finish beat!
  2. 00:52:214 (1) - and 00:52:547 (2) - ctrl+G to have a better feeling on flow? Same reason as above
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:130 (5) - not neccessary in this diff to make it so hard at the beginning But I want consistent triplet in this part w
  2. 00:29:547 (1,2) - not so good imo... why not just like this ?? Keep for DS and my aesthetic sense
  3. 01:13:214 (5) - out of screen? well, in fact idk how to identify this :o Not offscrean :p
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:214 (1) - still not sure :? No problem surely =w=
Just some nazi :D
Good luck!
Fixed the rest of moddings, thanks!
__Ag
611 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag
hi,from my queue

date story
01:08:130 (4,1) - I suggest you dont do this,Because it doesn't look like the whole map

00:15:131 - 5%volume timing at here?

00:31:547 (3) - ctrl+G？

00:45:547 (1,2) - Let them be parallel

00:50:214 (3) - I suggest this slider end at here00:50:380 - ，then add a note at here00:50:547 -

00:54:297 - miss note？

00:56:380 (2) - Move it to the left.then align 3,like this,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4842234

00:58:797 - I think nothing in here

01:04:130 - also

Extra
01:02:880 (1,3) - stack

01:10:047 (3) - move it to x350 y272

00:25:880 (1) - ctrl+G?

nice map,good luck
Cellina
Beatmap Nominator
1,004 posts
Joined March 2013
Cellina
어쩌다 6.1성이 5.6성으로 ㄷㄷ
Ujimatsu Chiya
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Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
노래 개꿀 하앍
Inversal
508 posts
Joined November 2014
Inversal
+3 stars As a late penalty. really sorry for late. I will mod it soon.

Re: I'm preparing for exam
Last edited by Inversal , edited 1 time in total.
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,108 posts
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SnowNiNo_
From my queue

  • [Date Story]
  1. 00:01:547 - 50% is a to loud imo, decrease to 20%
  2. 00:15:131 - mute
  3. 00:17:797 - ^
  4. 00:20:464 - ^
  5. 01:05:797 - ^
  6. 01:07:547 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - lol this seems pretty hard to play since the spacing 4>1
  7. 01:20:464 - mute
  • [Extra]
  1. same volume as Date Story
  2. 00:56:297 - mute
  • [Insane]
  1. no problem found
well i try to make my mod useful but this map is just soo perfect XD
have a star ★
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia

Reana wrote:

어쩌다 6.1성이 5.6성으로 ㄷㄷ
ㅁㄴㅇㄹㅁㄴㅇㄹ

eINess wrote:

노래 개꿀 하앍
하악하악

__Ag wrote:

hi,from my queue

[date story]00:15:131 - 5%volume timing at here? Not need because music is loud

00:31:547 (3) - ctrl+G？I prefer current pattern

00:45:547 (1,2) - Let them be parallel Keep for now.

00:50:214 (3) - I suggest this slider end at here00:50:380 - ，then add a note at here00:50:547 - Want to current rhythm because I followed hitsounds mainly in this part.

00:54:297 - miss note？Followed drum triplet xP

00:58:797 - I think nothing in here

01:04:130 - also

// Surely there are 1/4 beats

[Extra]01:02:880 (1,3) - stack I want overlap

01:10:047 (3) - move it to x350 y272 Same as above

00:25:880 (1) - ctrl+G? A bit close with prev note and next slider

nice map,good luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

  • [Date Story]
  1. 00:01:547 - 50% is a to loud imo, decrease to 20% Decreased to 30%
  2. 00:15:131 - mute
  3. 00:17:797 - ^
  4. 00:20:464 - ^
  5. 01:05:797 - ^
  6. 01:20:464 - mute
    // Keep above mute suggestions for now. Not need in loud part imo
  • [Extra]
  1. 00:56:297 - mute Same as above
  • [Insane]
  1. no problem found
well i try to make my mod useful but this map is just soo perfect XD
have a star ★
Fixed the rest of moddings, thanks!
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
혼자서 6난이도 대단하시네여 근데.... ㅋㅋ

노래가 너무좋은데 ㅠㅠ 시간이없는데 ㅠㅠ
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Easy]
  1. 01:24:214 (1,2,3) - 같은 콤보로 묶인만큼 간격을 0.6으로 지키는게 어떨까요? 시간 텀이 많아서 읽히긴 합니다만 패턴으로서의 완결성이 조금 아쉬웠어요.
[Normal]
  1. 00:37:047 - 나름 강한 박자였는데 묻혀서 느낌이 덜 살았네요. 차라리 00:37:380 (3)보다 여기를 박자 처리하는게 음악에 더 잘맞을듯요. 가사 위주 박자인듯하긴 합니다만, 강한 소리가 아예 묻히는 것 보다 나은 방법이 있을거라고 생각해요.
  2. 00:39:714 - 00:42:380 - 00:45:047 - 00:50:047 - 여기도.
  3. 01:24:214 (1,2,3) - 이지에서도 비슷한 생각이었지만, 아싸리 콤보를 (2)부터 시작하는것도 패턴 구별을 위해 아주 나쁘진 않을거 같기도 하네요.
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:714 (3) - 음이 상당히 강한데, 힛사는 00:34:880만도 못해서 이질적이었어요.
[Extra]
  1. 01:00:214 (1) - 곡률을 늘려서 01:00:714 (3) - 01:02:047 (4) - 01:02:880 (1) 등과 통일감을 줍시다.
[Date Story]
  1. 01:10:047 (4) - 슬라이더를 01:09:214 (4)에 블랭킷시켜보는건 어떨가요? 스킨 잔상과 잘 어우러질 것이라고 생각합니다.
  2. 01:27:047 (2,3,4,1) - 인게임 스택이 약간 아쉬운데 확인해주세요.
lolia
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Topic Starter
lolia

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:45:047 - 여기는 1/1 보컬이 더 두드러지는 부분이라 괜찮을꺼같습니다
나머진 다 고쳤습니다.
모딩 감사합니다!
_handholding
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_handholding
shouldn't the top diff be "datte story"? :v
lolia
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lolia

Kisses wrote:

shouldn't the top diff be "datte story"? :v
xd
Lulu-
409 posts
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Lulu-
if top diff gets ranked in this state i will quit this game
lolia
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lolia

Lulu- wrote:

if top diff gets ranked in this state i will quit this game
lmao, you can enjoy this game constantly then
Kalibe
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Kalibe
<3
lolia
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Topic Starter
lolia
Added Irohas' and NeoSL's diff


Kalibe wrote:

<3
<33
ikaNyai
75 posts
Joined September 2015
ikaNyai
just quick one xddddd
sorry for using english insted of korean , my keyboard plugin died ;;
i'm not really understand at modding so i go by how I feel is wired when playing ;w; sorry!!
date story
00:50:047 (2) - maybe is better like this ? click here
01:00:714 (3) - change a slider
01:01:047 (4) - ctrl+g ctrl+j move it back 01:00:714 (3) - ctrl +g (thinking about chaging type of slider)
01:08:214 (1) - come together with stream
01:08:547 (2) - somthing likethis
01:20:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think you should put them in to single tap dtd (or maybe just some)
01:24:214 (1) - come together with stream

that's kinda what i find wired when i playing >///< and good luck /
sorry for really bad mod here (die)
lolia
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lolia

ikaNyai wrote:

just quick one xddddd
sorry for using english insted of korean , my keyboard plugin died ;;
i'm not really understand at modding so i go by how I feel is wired when playing ;w; sorry!!
date story
00:50:047 (2) - maybe is better like this ? click here 개인적으로 선호하지 않는 패턴이라 일단 피하고 싶습니다.
01:00:714 (3) - change a slider 이건 이미 슬라이더인데 어떤걸 말씀하시는건지 모르겠네요..
01:01:047 (4) - ctrl+g ctrl+j move it back 01:00:714 (3) - ctrl +g (thinking about chaging type of slider) 지금 흐름이 더 마음에 드네요
01:08:214 (1) - come together with stream 바로앞 4연타를 끊어서 찍었기 때문에 여기도 일단 스페이싱을 주고싶습니다.
01:08:547 (2) - somthing likethis 너무 멀지 않나 싶습니다.
01:20:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think you should put them in to single tap dtd (or maybe just some) 노래의 가장 하이라이트라고 생각하는 부분이라 모든 악기를 똑같은 노트로 표현하기가 싫어서 플레이에 부담이 안갈 정도의 흐름으로 1/4 슬라이더를 넣었습니다.
01:24:214 (1) - come together with stream 붙이기보단 연타 자체의 스페이싱을 좀 줄였습니다.

that's kinda what i find wired when i playing >///< and good luck /
sorry for really bad mod here (die)
모딩 감사합니다!
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
oh can i gd
Djulus
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Djulus
omg karia is back
Affirmation
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Affirmation
카랴님 화이팅!
Enon
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Enon
welcome back
lolia
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lolia
xd

VINXIS wrote:

oh can i gd
i'm late
_handholding
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_handholding

Enon wrote:

welcome back
I can check your map once you finish the set. Just let me know I'll be happy to ~
lolia
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lolia

Kisses wrote:

Enon wrote:

welcome back
I can check your map once you finish the set. Just let me know I'll be happy to ~
yeap <3
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas

Enon wrote:

welcome back
→ nerfed a bit to fit with the set!!
how to map extra diff
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_Day to Story.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 57380
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10118,20214,76214
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Day to Story (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Day to Story (TV Size)
Artist:Sadohara Kaori
ArtistUnicode:佐土原かおり
Creator:Karia
Version:Irohas' Extra
Source:デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags:ending date a live 2 Mugiwarasekai Irohas Neoskylove
BeatmapID:1307552
BeatmapSetID:434845

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"VIDEO.avi"
0,0,"DateBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
@Irohas : Temporarily added 1.1x line at 00:54:214 - here cuz of unsnapped kick-sliders. Check it plz :3
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
aaaa fixed!!
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Day to Story (TV Size)
Artist:Sadohara Kaori
ArtistUnicode:佐土原かおり
Creator:Karia
Version:Irohas' Extra
Source:デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags:ending date a live 2 Mugiwarasekai Irohas Neoskylove
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lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
updated~
Crissa
850 posts
Joined December 2014
Crissa
Hey Hey, mod from Q

Date Story
00:09:261 (2) - i feel this a bit empty, maybe you could add some circles to emphasize vocals


00:25:047 (1,2) - maybe it looks better stacked

00:46:880 (1) - it could be more comfortable to hit with a ctrl+g, following the direction of the previous pattern

01:05:547 (1) - you could use red colour to identify this, all other patterns like this has that colour

Insane
00:18:880 (3,1,2) - this looks a bit cluttered, you could consider to separate 1 and 2 from 3 a bit

00:57:547 (1,2) - maybe line them better, would help with aesthetics a bit

Iroha's Extra
00:19:380 (1,2,2) - consider lining them, looks a bit messy for me

00:21:547 (1,2) - it's a little odd to play, you don't follow the same pattern as before in this part (00:16:214 (1,2) - ), you could consider to change it

00:44:130 - i hear a triple here, maybe you could replace 4 with a circle move a bit down 1 and put a triple there

00:50:214 (3,4,5) - i don't see a reason to make them different distance, you could make them the same, it would help with aesthetics

01:15:214 (3,1) - maybe consider making them the same combo

NeoSL's Insane
00:54:214 (3) - you could consider NC'ing here to remark the 1/4

01:01:380 (5,1) - this feels too overused, you could try to follow vocals here so it doesn't feel that monotone

01:03:964 (5) - i don't think it's a good idea to start it on blue, breaks consistency, try to replace with a circle, there's no triple here so it should be ok

01:12:047 (5) - circle here, to make it consistent with the previous kiai, if you applied it

Hard
00:08:404 (1,2) - you could try something prettier here, it doesn't hurt, maybe a blanket or something like this:

so it has a cleaner visual flow

00:17:380 (1,2,3) - you could consider to line these triples a bit better

00:53:380 (3) - you could consider to stack it on 2 to help reading, you never use a stack like this before so the player might miss it

01:12:047 (4,5,1) - line

Sorry for short mod, map looks kinda polished so i couldn't find much

Good luck~
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
-Crissaegrim-
[Date Story]
00:09:261 (2) - i feel this a bit empty, maybe you could add some circles to emphasize vocals


00:25:047 (1,2) - maybe it looks better stacked I prefer current stack

00:46:880 (1) - it could be more comfortable to hit with a ctrl+g, following the direction of the previous pattern I want to keep for now. This flow follows prev jump flow.

01:05:547 (1) - you could use red colour to identify this, all other patterns like this has that colour Red color follows strong background vocals. So this shouldn't have red color

[Insane]
00:18:880 (3,1,2) - this looks a bit cluttered, you could consider to separate 1 and 2 from 3 a bit hmm, this overlap is my taste :p

00:57:547 (1,2) - maybe line them better, would help with aesthetics a bit

[Hard]
00:08:404 (1,2) - you could try something prettier here, it doesn't hurt, maybe a blanket or something like this:

so it has a cleaner visual flow Current shape is better for me. Also flow is almost same imo

00:17:380 (1,2,3) - you could consider to line these triples a bit better

00:53:380 (3) - you could consider to stack it on 2 to help reading, you never use a stack like this before so the player might miss it

01:12:047 (4,5,1) - line

Sorry for short mod, map looks kinda polished so i couldn't find much

Good luck~

no reply = fixed
thanks!
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
did some, thx!!
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osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Title:Day to Story (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Day to Story (TV Size)
Artist:Sadohara Kaori
ArtistUnicode:佐土原かおり
Creator:Karia
Version:Irohas' Extra
Source:デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags:ending date a live 2 Mugiwarasekai Irohas Neoskylove
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lolia
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lolia
updated Irohas'
MrMan
501 posts
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MrMan
NM from my queue.
You didn't tell me which diff you wanted me to mod so I'm modding Date Story.

Date Story
00:01:439 - Maybe place a note here? Unless you're mainly focused on the vocals.

01:07:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For one sound this feels very overmapped and unexpected.

01:28:124 (1) - This spinner should end on the white tick as so does the sound. Should also start on the downbeat as well. up to you but.

that's all I could spot. Good luck.
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
-CerealBox-
NM from my queue.
You didn't tell me which diff you wanted me to mod so I'm modding Date Story.

[Date Story]00:01:439 - Maybe place a note here? Unless you're mainly focused on the vocals. I wanted to start from strong sound for players
01:07:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For one sound this feels very overmapped and unexpected. Guitar sounds are also here, so I gave more spacing
01:28:124 (1) - This spinner should end on the white tick as so does the sound. Should also start on the downbeat as well. up to you but. Extended to white tick, but I want to start from current timing

that's all I could spot. Good luck.

Thanks!
Lafayla
Nomination Assessment Team
350 posts
Joined December 2014
Lafayla
Hello :3~~
NM from my queue~
Easy> no issues
Normal> no issues
Hard> no issues
NeoSL> no issues

Insane>
00:19:714 (2) - style was super pretty, until this happened, looks a bit ugly, perhaps vertically flipping it or making it a different slider or just different direction would be better
01:19:214 (2) -01:20:547 (2) - these should be nc'ed to match the nc at 01:22:547 (1) - or you can just match the latter to the others, I agree more with the nc choice of 01:22:547 (1) -
01:27:708 (4) - I would nc this and remove nc from 01:27:874 (1) - and then nc 01:28:041 (2) -

Iroha>
00:19:214 (1) - I wouldn't nc this , I would leave it with previous to match 00:19:714 (2) -
00:22:547 (1,2,3) - I would remove the nc from these to match what you did at 00:21:214 (5,6,7) - or vice versa
00:23:880 (1,2,3,4) - < same thing with the nc for these
nice gd btw :3~~

Date Story>
01:07:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I wish I could play this, I personally really dislike spaced streams that quickly convert into tight streams but if you are happy with it then oh well

Best of wishes with the mapset Karia :3~~
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
Lafayla
Hello :3~~
NM from my queue~
Easy> no issues
Normal> no issues
Hard> no issues
NeoSL> no issues

Insane>
00:19:714 (2) - style was super pretty, until this happened, looks a bit ugly, perhaps vertically flipping it or making it a different slider or just different direction would be better
01:19:214 (2) -01:20:547 (2) - these should be nc'ed to match the nc at 01:22:547 (1) - or you can just match the latter to the others, I agree more with the nc choice of 01:22:547 (1) - Removed 01:22:547 (2) - this NC for following Top diff
01:27:708 (4) - I would nc this and remove nc from 01:27:874 (1) - and then nc 01:28:041 (2) - I differentiated week beats(01:27:374 (1,2,3,4) - ) and strong beats(01:27:874 (1,2) - ). So it's fine imo

Date Story>
01:07:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I wish I could play this, I personally really dislike spaced streams that quickly convert into tight streams but if you are happy with it then oh well This stream follows guitar sounds as well, so it fits with music imo

Best of wishes with the mapset Karia :3~~

no reply = fixed
Thanks!
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk
Hello from my que

[Easy]
  • 00:17:547 (1,2) - hmm blanket it?
    00:37:547 (2,3) - Imo, I do not really like this rhythm, I think it's better this slider 00: 37: 547 (2) - finish here 00: 38: 047 - because there is a strong sound! And this slider 00: 38: 547 (3) - start here 00: 38: 380 - To have a pause in 1/1, so it's all supplemented by the vocals that you follow in this diff Try something like this
    00:58:880 (2,3) - ctrl+g? In my opinion, the rhythm is better, 00: 58: 880 - there is a long vocal here, 00: 59: 880 - compared to this moment, so the note expresses this moment better, my opinion
[Normal]
  • Normal looks fine
[Hard]
  • 00:16:214 (3) - I do not really understand why you decided to make this slider with an angle, it's better to make it straight as here 00: 17: 547 (3) - so it's easier to play, my opinion
    00:34:880 (1,2) - I do not really understand this flow, because you seem to see the cursor back there, but then you need to make a strong jump, in the usual place, and this is confusing, I think it's better to use such a flow 00: 35: 380 (2) - Just do ctrl + g
    00:39:714 (3,1) - ingame stack so bad do yoursellf better
    00:46:880 - To better express this point, add a note here?
    01:07:214 (2) - Can instead make a 2-note instead slider? there are two strong sounds, why not express them
[NeoSL's Insane]
  • 00:10:118 (1,2) - Of course, I understand everything that you did this part for vocal, but it does not fit here at all and it's not at all convenient to play it
    00:10:118 (1) - Can I just reverse the slider?
    The rest looks fine to me
Okay it's all, good luck with map
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas

Lafayla wrote:

Hello :3~~
NM from my queue~

Iroha>
00:19:214 (1) - I wouldn't nc this , I would leave it with previous to match 00:19:714 (2) - i rly prefer to keep my nc pattern cause sv between 00:19:214 (1,1) - is too big being not emphasized, so that's why i put a nc above
00:22:547 (1,2,3) - I would remove the nc from these to match what you did at 00:21:214 (5,6,7) - or vice versa love 121212 pattern xd
00:23:880 (1,2,3,4) - < same thing with the nc for these ^
nice gd btw :3~~ thanks!!

Best of wishes with the mapset Karia :3~~
w
osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:佐土原かおり
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-Aerith-
843 posts
Joined March 2015
-Aerith-
Dont Have anyting to say
it Looks Good to me , so im just going to Give you a Kudosu Here Take it (/=*0*)/ *
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
makisokk
Hello from my que

[Easy]
  • 00:17:547 (1,2) - hmm blanket it?
    00:37:547 (2,3) - Imo, I do not really like this rhythm, I think it's better this slider 00:37:547 (2) - finish here 00:38:047 - because there is a strong sound! And this slider 00:38:547 (3) - start here 00: 38: 380 - To have a pause in 1/1, so it's all supplemented by the vocals that you follow in this diff Try something like this I prefer current rhythm cuz I don't want follow only vocal if it is reallllly strong :p
    00:58:880 (2,3) - ctrl+g? In my opinion, the rhythm is better, 00:58:880 - there is a long vocal here, 00:59:880 - compared to this moment, so the note expresses this moment better, my opinion
[Normal]
  • Normal looks fine
[Hard]
  • 00:16:214 (3) - I do not really understand why you decided to make this slider with an angle, it's better to make it straight as here 00:17:547 (3) - so it's easier to play, my opinion this slider shape follows instrument sounds, so fine imo
    00:34:880 (1,2) - I do not really understand this flow, because you seem to see the cursor back there, but then you need to make a strong jump, in the usual place, and this is confusing, I think it's better to use such a flow 00: 35: 380 (2) - Just do ctrl + g
    00:39:714 (3,1) - ingame stack so bad do yoursellf better
    00:46:880 - To better express this point, add a note here?
    01:07:214 (2) - Can instead make a 2-note instead slider? there are two strong sounds, why not express them
Okay it's all, good luck with map

-Aerith-
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it Looks Good to me , so im just going to Give you a Kudosu Here Take it (/=*0*)/ *

Thank you w

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updated Irohas'
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[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:

NeoSL's Insane
00:54:214 (3) - you could consider NC'ing here to remark the 1/4No, wanna add NC with only downbeat.

01:01:380 (5,1) - this feels too overused, you could try to follow vocals here so it doesn't feel that monotoneIsn't it? I think that part has a beat,

01:03:964 (5) - i don't think it's a good idea to start it on blue, breaks consistency, try to replace with a circle, there's no triple here so it should be oksame as above.

01:12:047 (5) - circle here, to make it consistent with the previous kiai, if you applied it^

Good luck~

makisokk wrote:

[NeoSL's Insane]
  • 00:10:118 (1,2) - Of course, I understand everything that you did this part for vocal, but it does not fit here at all and it's not at all convenient to play it
    00:10:118 (1) - Can I just reverse the slider?No. wanna make this part with vocal. playing doesn't matter...
    The rest looks fine to me
Okay it's all, good luck with map
Thanks for mod all! :D
TheKingHenry
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Joined October 2014
TheKingHenry
Hello mod from my queue~
Easy
  1. 00:25:047 (3,3) - would be better if the sliderends wouldn't be on the white ticks like that, considering the ticks are the leading points of the measure. More later on too (for example 00:35:714 (4) - 00:38:547 (3) - 00:46:547 (5) - and so on, pretty many
  2. 01:02:880 (1,2,3) - fix triangle
  3. 01:07:547 (4,1) - nazi blanket, same with 01:13:547 (1,2) -
  4. 01:15:714 (3,1) - why done like this here when earlier at 00:41:047 (3,1) - similar thing done differently (though if you wanted more to emphasise vocals here that's fine. They are stronger here after all
Normal
  1. 00:25:047 (6) - same thing as in Easy, I'd try to avoid these. Similarly there's multiple others too. Also fix blanket 00:25:047 (6,1) -
  2. Actually aside that this looks pretty clean (or then I just missed everything)
Hard
  1. 00:03:261 (2,1) - well, kinda same thing (was here as well in the last diff atleast) but during slow part like this it doesn't really bother me while playing ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 00:25:047 (1) - however seems the same as usual
  2. Actually, aside from that this one looks p good as well
NeoSL's Insane
  1. 00:19:880 (4,5) - not the best option, since the actual rhythm is only a triple under the latter kickslider, so doing it like this as if emphasising some 1/2 with kicksliders doesn't work that well. Map the latter as it is in the music and leave the former kickslider as is would work better. Compare to 00:23:880 (5,6) - where the whole beat is 1/4 so the kicksliders work too
  2. 00:23:714 (4,2,1) - stack seems off
  3. 00:39:214 (2,4) - stack these instead of 00:39:214 (2,5) - ; looks better (can manually tune it even if the stack thingy is automatic)
Insane
  1. 01:18:464 (2) - I can't hear any 1/4 here, it seems more like for one beat instead of one and half beats.
  2. 01:27:041 (2,1) - stack these instead of 01:27:041 (2,3) - ; looks better. Just tune it manually
Irohas' Extra
  1. 00:28:047 (3,4,1) - broken stack. Slightly same at 00:32:047 (6,7,1) - (see how x goes 507->510->512 and y 188->191->195; basically the gaps aren't even). Since I feel like there are quite the many more, keep your eyes open for them (see 00:46:714 (4,5,1) - for example. As for stuff 00:50:214 (3,4,5) - dunno if it's intentionally the way it is, but it doesn't look good anyways)
  2. 01:15:214 (3,1) - fix stack
Date Story
  1. 00:25:547 (2,1) - NC 00:25:547 (2) - instead? up to ya
  2. 00:46:797 (4,1) - could flow better. It would feel more natural to keep moving about to the direction of the jump from the jumpstream, which this doesn't really do. Compare to about the same shape at 00:36:130 (7,1) - where it's fine since 00:36:214 (1) - stops movement instead of straightaway forcing it to another direction
  3. 01:07:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - blanket fix needed. See the approach circle of 01:08:214 (1) - the circles in the stream ain't really the same distance from it. Also this is example of jumpstream where it'd flow better considering the following slider continues along the path the circular flow of the stream+jump
Not much to say on each diff.
Good luck!
_handholding
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Joined April 2014
_handholding

Easy
  1. 00:26:880 (2) - This rhythm would fit better imo https://i.imgur.com/7ixRqYK.png
  2. 00:29:547 (3) - ^
  3. 00:37:547 (2) - ^
  4. 01:01:547 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm would feel more natural
  5. delete 01:26:541 (3) and extend 01:25:541 (2) to 01:26:541 ? Same for normal
  6. 01:25:541 (1) - delete NC
  7. 01:28:124 (1) - start spinner on white tick

Normal
  1. 00:18:880 (4) - hitsound on head?
  2. 00:55:714 (3) - A circle would fit the rhythm of the song better
  3. 01:28:124 (1) - same as easy

Hard
  1. 00:34:547 (4) - Add claps to every tick
  2. 00:46:880 (6,1) - This rhythm felt a bit awkward :/
[]That's all for now

w ~
Nitrous
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Joined October 2015
Nitrous
Sorry for not being able to mod this. I find this set very fun to play! It's pretty much ready for rank if you'd ask me. Also, Date a Live ED. Thanks :D
Have some kudosu instead.
lolia
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Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
lolia
TheKingHenry
Hello mod from my queue~
Easy
  1. 00:25:047 (3,3) - would be better if the sliderends wouldn't be on the white ticks like that, considering the ticks are the leading points of the measure. More later on too (for example 00:35:714 (4) - 00:38:547 (3) - 00:46:547 (5) - and so on, pretty many Fixed 00:46:880 - this part, but rest of rhythms are fine imo, cuz most of NCs follow strong vocal.
  2. 01:02:880 (1,2,3) - fix triangle
  3. 01:07:547 (4,1) - nazi blanket, same with 01:13:547 (1,2) - They are fine to me
  4. 01:15:714 (3,1) - why done like this here when earlier at 00:41:047 (3,1) - similar thing done differently (though if you wanted more to emphasise vocals here that's fine. They are stronger here after all cuz 01:16:214 - here isn't any strong beat unlike 00:41:547 - here

Normal
  1. 00:25:047 (6) - same thing as in Easy, I'd try to avoid these. Similarly there's multiple others too. Same reason
    Also fix blanket 00:25:047 (6,1) -
  2. Actually aside that this looks pretty clean (or then I just missed everything)

Hard
  1. 00:03:261 (2,1) - well, kinda same thing (was here as well in the last diff atleast) I wanted to hold 00:04:118 - this vocal
    but during slow part like this it doesn't really bother me while playing ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    00:25:047 (1) - however seems the same as usual Guitar sound
  2. Actually, aside from that this one looks p good as well

Insane
  1. 01:18:464 (2) - I can't hear any 1/4 here, it seems more like for one beat instead of one and half beats. I can hear :3
  2. 01:27:041 (2,1) - stack these instead of 01:27:041 (2,3) - ; looks better. Just tune it manually

Date Story
  1. 00:25:547 (2,1) - NC 00:25:547 (2) - instead? up to ya For vocal :p
  2. 00:46:797 (4,1) - could flow better. It would feel more natural to keep moving about to the direction of the jump from the jumpstream, which this doesn't really do. Compare to about the same shape at 00:36:130 (7,1) - where it's fine since 00:36:214 (1) - stops movement instead of straightaway forcing it to another direction
  3. 01:07:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - blanket fix needed. See the approach circle of 01:08:214 (1) - the circles in the stream ain't really the same distance from it. Also this is example of jumpstream where it'd flow better considering the following slider continues along the path the circular flow of the stream+jump
Not much to say on each diff.
Good luck!

Kisses

Easy
  1. 00:26:880 (2) - This rhythm would fit better imo https://i.imgur.com/7ixRqYK.png Current rhythm is better to me cuz (3) follows strong sound
  2. 00:29:547 (3) - ^
  3. 00:37:547 (2) - ^ Reduced to 00:38:047 - instead
  4. 01:01:547 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm would feel more natural
  5. delete 01:26:541 (3) and extend 01:25:541 (2) to 01:26:541 ? Same for normal
  6. 01:25:541 (1) - delete NC
  7. 01:28:124 (1) - start spinner on white tick

Normal
  1. 00:18:880 (4) - hitsound on head?
  2. 00:55:714 (3) - A circle would fit the rhythm of the song better
  3. 01:28:124 (1) - same as easy

Hard
  1. 00:34:547 (4) - Add claps to every tick
  2. 00:46:880 (6,1) - This rhythm felt a bit awkward :/ idk, it's fine to me x.x
[]That's all for now

w ~


Nitrous
Sorry for not being able to mod this. I find this set very fun to play! It's pretty much ready for rank if you'd ask me. Also, Date a Live ED. Thanks :D =w=
Have some kudosu instead. Thanks xD

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