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Fizzy Note - Jontron Re Bang Bang

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Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 27, 2016 at 12:00:02 PM

Artist: Fizzy Note
Title: Jontron Re Bang Bang
Tags: jontron ninja re bang bang ytpmv ech melancholy haze
BPM: 130
Filesize: 13622kb
Play Time: 00:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. ECH (3.84 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Melancholy Haze's Hard (2.54 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Normal (1.77 stars, 60 notes)
Download: Fizzy Note - Jontron Re Bang Bang
Download: Fizzy Note - Jontron Re Bang Bang (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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did you know melancholy haze was a multi account Lol

2016 description:
WHAT I MOSTLY NEED ATM IS HITSOUNDING HELP. IF YOU HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS, PLEASE PM ME IN GAME OR ADD IT INTO YOUR MOD.

18+ lyrics at the beginning younglings






Last edited by Dashyy- , edited 41 times in total.
Melancholy Haze
Melancholy Haze
Hello. M4M.

General:
- First time doing this (Timing). Anyways, try these settings. It sounds way more better than offset 0.


Note: I'm modding during the old timing. So change the timing after you fix some of my suggestions.

ECH:
- 00:00:461 (2,1) - End 00:00:461 (2) - on 00:00:576 - and place a new note on 00:00:692 - .
- 00:03:115 - Missing note.
- 00:11:076 (1) - Place it lower from 00:10:384 (4,5,6,7) - .
- 00:12:000 (3) - This looks awful compared to all those nice curvy sliders.
- 00:16:153 (5,6,7) - Replace with slider.
- 00:30:692 (1) - End slider at 00:31:384 - .

Novice:
- Use constant distance snap. (I pressume this should've been Easy or Normal).
- 00:02:307 (3) - New combo.
- 00:03:692 (7) - ^
- 00:08:769 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 00:08:769 (1,3) - This isn't look good. They are overlapping each other.
- 00:09:692 (2) - I highly recommend to move this note on the left side from 00:08:769 (1) - to keep the flow.
- 00:11:076 (5,6,7) - I call this a backstabbing pattern which isn't kind of suitable for a difficulty like this one.
- 00:14:769 (3,4) - It would be good to place them below slider 00:13:846 (2) - (like no stack, but with a constant DS down).
- 00:16:615 - Missing an important beat here.
- 00:21:230 (3) - Ctrl+J & Ctrl+H for better flow. (also remap 00:22:153 (4,5,6,7) - ).
- 00:28:153 (4,5,6) - Make a symmetrical triangle pattern.

Beginner:
- There's lot of spacing issues + unmapped parts. I recommend you to check some other Beginner difficulties to get an idea.
- 00:22:153 (4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing pattern for beginners.
- 00:30:692 (1) - End slider at 00:31:384 - .

You got an idea in a Insane difficulty but not on easier ones. Don't be lazy and be more creative. I know you can make it. Good luck.
(P.S. I'll think about that GD request, maybe I'll map it, maybe I don't. I'll let you know if so.)
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

Melancholy Haze wrote:

Hello. M4M.

General:
- First time doing this (Timing). Anyways, try these settings. It sounds way more better than offset 0.
same

Note: I'm modding during the old timing. So change the timing after you fix some of my suggestions.

ECH:
- 00:00:461 (2,1) - End 00:00:461 (2) - on 00:00:576 - and place a new note on 00:00:692 - .
- 00:03:115 - Missing note.
- 00:11:076 (1) - Place it lower from 00:10:384 (4,5,6,7) - .
- 00:12:000 (3) - This looks awful compared to all those nice curvy sliders.
- 00:16:153 (5,6,7) - Replace with slider.
- 00:30:692 (1) - End slider at 00:31:384 - . everything changed

Novice:
- Use constant distance snap. (I pressume this should've been Easy or Normal). woah distance snap is amazing
- 00:02:307 (3) - New combo.
- 00:03:692 (7) - ^
- 00:08:769 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 00:08:769 (1,3) - This isn't look good. They are overlapping each other.
- 00:09:692 (2) - I highly recommend to move this note on the left side from 00:08:769 (1) - to keep the flow.
- 00:11:076 (5,6,7) - I call this a backstabbing pattern which isn't kind of suitable for a difficulty like this one.
- 00:14:769 (3,4) - It would be good to place them below slider 00:13:846 (2) - (like no stack, but with a constant DS down).
- 00:16:615 - Missing an important beat here.
- 00:21:230 (3) - Ctrl+J & Ctrl+H for better flow. (also remap 00:22:153 (4,5,6,7) - ).
- 00:28:153 (4,5,6) - Make a symmetrical triangle pattern. .everything changed

Beginner:
- There's lot of spacing issues + unmapped parts. I recommend you to check some other Beginner difficulties to get an idea.
- 00:22:153 (4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing pattern for beginners.
- 00:30:692 (1) - End slider at 00:31:384 - . deleted beginner, probably will start over or ask for a gd

You got an idea in a Insane difficulty but not on easier ones. Don't be lazy and be more creative. I know you can make it. Good luck.
(P.S. I'll think about that GD request, maybe I'll map it, maybe I don't. I'll let you know if so.)
thanks for the mod man appreciate it :)
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_


General

  1. Your BG is 1365x768, resize to 1366x768 or it's unrankable
  2. I suggest adding the video, since it's quite epic
  3. You need at least one in-between diff since the spread is 1.68>3.76, a 2.5/2.7* hard would be perfect
  4. The correct timing is: Only one red section, with offset 46 and BPM 130, make sure to use the same red lines in every diff! I will mod the map with the new timing, so change it first, and then check the mod!
Novice

  1. 00:03:738 (7,2) - These objects are almost stacked, which is not good for this diff, since it's the easiest of the set and newbie players can get confused
  2. 00:06:507 (5,6,7) - Try this, looks better in my opinion
  3. 00:02:353 (3) - NC. Generally, NCs go on big, white ticks so you should re-arrange them properly. If you need help just catch me in-game, I can do that for you :)
  4. 00:16:661 - Add a note here please, this really needs a note
  5. 00:17:122 (1,3) - Stack these
  6. 00:21:276 (3,4) - Spacing error! :!:
  7. 00:28:199 (4,5,6) - Move 4 to 255|224 (stacked under 1), then move 5 to 353|174 and finally move 6 to 268|104
  8. 00:31:430 - 5% volume pls
ECH

  1. 00:00:046 (1,2,3) - Quite confusing, and they also don't follow the "rhythm" here, I suggest that you just use 2 notes, here 00:00:046 - and here 00:00:507 -
  2. 00:03:392 (5,7) - Delete these notes, they are not following anything...
  3. 00:05:007 (5,7) - Same here, there's no need to add unnecessary 1/4 rhythms
  4. 00:10:430 (4,5,6,7) - Replace 4 with 3 notes, than delete 5 and 7
  5. 00:12:507 (4) - Same as above, unnecessary 1/4... And this goes on for every similar pattern, I won't point them out anymore, just go through the diff and fix them. This is the only big problem I could find in this diff
Needs some work, but overall I think you can menage to rank this, good luck :D call me in-game if you need help
Yoratama
424 posts
Joined February 2016
Yoratama
Hi M$M here, sorry if it's bad :D

SPOILER
General
Change the BG to something better, it's like a Troll map :D
Change Novice name to Normal maybe? because custom name is only fo highest diff
Offset is too earlier, maybe try Haze timing?
Where is kiai?
Change combo color.
Novice
Open AiMod, there is issue like timing point and audio preview.
Distance snap issue, open AiMod then "check distance snap" there's 4 issues. since distance snap issue are not allowed in normal/easy
00:00:000 (1) - Make a slider - beat. move 00:00:000 (1) - 2 beat earlier and put circle 00:00:692 -
00:02:307 (4) - NC
00:05:307 - Add circel
00:06:923 (7) - NC
00:08:769 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:692 (2) - NC
00:10:153 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:692 - Add circle
00:12:923 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:230 - Add circle
00:20:076 - ^
00:25:615 - ^
ECH
00:04:199 (2) - clap hitsound at slider end
00:06:046 (2) - ^
00:05:353 (7) - clap maybe?
00:09:738 (2) - Remove clap at slider head
00:11:584 (2) - ^
00:20:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Remove some clap sound, follow hitsound like 00:00:046 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) -
or if you keep that clap, make kiai there

00:00:507 (2) - stack with 00:00:969 (1) -
00:03:276 (4) - move to X:232 Y:320
00:10:892 (7) - stack
00:27:507 (7) - ^
00:12:969 (6) - NC?
Hope it help, im bad at this :D
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-
TANKS EVERYONE FOR MOD :) :) :) :)
kricher
98 posts
Joined April 2015
kricher
beginner
00:09:276 (3) - make it a bit less curvy. will look better imo
00:16:199 (1) - doesnt look nice while overlapped under 00:14:353 (1) -
00:19:892 (2) - ^^
00:08:353 (1) - blanket
novice
00:06:969 (1) - less curvy. will look better imo
00:10:199 (2,3,4) - space those 3 a little bit so they dont overlap
00:19:430 (1,2,3) - ^^
00:11:122 (1) - stack it under 00:10:892 (7) - will look nice imo
00:19:661 (4,5,6) - make them have the same spacing

m4m. my map: t/433219
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
Hey

SPOILER
[ECH]
00:00:046 (1,2) - Confusing. What about finishing (1) on blue tick ?
00:01:892 (5) - This beat is heavier than others, I think you need to use higher spacing
00:08:353 - slider here instead ?
00:12:392 (4) - Convert it to 2 circles, it was nice
00:12:738 (5) - place it further from previous object
00:14:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange flow, would be better if you set 2 triangles instead
00:22:199 (3,4) - It needs emphasize
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line

[Novice]
00:01:892 - Bad idea. You're compelling the player to lift up his finger at a strong beat
00:06:969 (1) - CTRL+J
00:09:738 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to follow, make it smoother
00:11:122 (4,5) - blanket
00:12:507 (6,7,1) - Hard to read
00:15:738 (5,1) - stack them correctly
00:20:122 (2,3) - stack as you did for 00:18:276 (4,5) -
00:22:430 - Something is missing, try using a slider
00:27:738 - slider ?
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line

[Beginner]
Increase SV
00:14:353 (1) - Avoid this. It is really unpredictable for beginners and hard to know where it stops
00:16:661 - too bad a slider's finishing here
00:19:892 (2) - bad overlap
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line

Good luck !
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

6th wrote:

Hey

SPOILER
[ECH]
00:00:046 (1,2) - Confusing. What about finishing (1) on blue tick ? fine
00:01:892 (5) - This beat is heavier than others, I think you need to use higher spacing oke
00:08:353 - slider here instead ? nah
00:12:392 (4) - Convert it to 2 circles, it was nice agree
00:12:738 (5) - place it further from previous object oki
00:14:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange flow, would be better if you set 2 triangles instead it think its fine
00:22:199 (3,4) - It needs emphasize l8ter
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line oke

[Novice]
00:01:892 - Bad idea. You're compelling the player to lift up his finger at a strong beat oki
00:06:969 (1) - CTRL+J oki
00:09:738 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to follow, make it smoother oki
00:11:122 (4,5) - blanket oki
00:12:507 (6,7,1) - Hard to read oki
00:15:738 (5,1) - stack them correctly oki
00:20:122 (2,3) - stack as you did for 00:18:276 (4,5) - oki
00:22:430 - Something is missing, try using a slider oki
00:27:738 - slider ? meh i like this pattern
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line oki

[Beginner]
Increase SV
00:14:353 (1) - Avoid this. It is really unpredictable for beginners and hard to know where it stops i'll keep it for now until someone else tells me its a problem
00:16:661 - too bad a slider's finishing here oki
00:19:892 (2) - bad overlap oki
00:31:430 - Please snap your green line
oki


Good luck ! ya!!!!
Melancholy Haze
Melancholy Haze
Here's my Hard as requested. 

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 738
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Jontron Re Bang Bang
TitleUnicode:Jontron Re Bang Bang
Artist:Fizzy Note
ArtistUnicode:Fizzy Note
Creator:[Dashyy]
Version:Melancholy Haze's Hard
Source:Jontron
Tags:jontron ninja re bang bang ytpmv ech
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Jontron_Re_Bang_Bang_[YTPMV].avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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738,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
30969,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0


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Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

Melancholy Haze wrote:

Here's my Hard as requested. 

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 738
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Jontron Re Bang Bang
TitleUnicode:Jontron Re Bang Bang
Artist:Fizzy Note
ArtistUnicode:Fizzy Note
Creator:[Dashyy]
Version:Melancholy Haze's Hard
Source:Jontron
Tags:jontron ninja re bang bang ytpmv ech
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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164,100,46,5,2,0:0:0:0:
344,272,507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,272,738,6,0,L|364:228,1,40,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
337,198,969,2,0,P|324:152|332:110,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
419,150,1430,2,0,P|432:196|424:238,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
266,296,1892,6,0,P|179:310|91:285,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,223,2584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,223,2699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,223,2815,2,0,P|61:165|58:139,1,80
131,82,3276,2,0,P|189:98|215:95,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,115,3738,6,0,L|365:284,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,334,4430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,334,4546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,334,4661,2,0,P|234:347|189:340,1,80
233,251,5122,2,0,P|232:211|244:173,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,55,5584,6,0,P|389:98|392:174,1,120,0|0,1:0|2:1,0:0:0:0:
352,239,6046,2,0,P|321:188|318:128,1,120,8|0,1:0|2:1,0:0:0:0:
265,80,6507,2,0,L|176:68,1,80
101,115,6969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,201,7199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,233,7430,6,0,P|249:273|252:318,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,155,8122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,91,8353,2,0,P|341:51|338:6,1,80
249,55,8815,2,0,L|162:67,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,205,9276,6,0,P|211:274|138:338,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,265,9969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,242,10084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,219,10199,2,0,P|55:164|64:131,1,80
140,87,10661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,111,10892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,75,11122,6,0,L|488:92,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,210,11815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,231,11930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,252,12046,2,0,P|368:302|382:334,1,80
283,344,12507,2,0,P|233:334|201:348,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,234,12969,6,0,L|130:106,1,120,0|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
186,72,13430,2,0,P|232:84|313:72,1,120,8|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
375,84,13892,2,0,P|372:133|392:173,1,80
308,220,14353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,276,14584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,14815,6,0,L|216:331,1,80
163,256,15276,2,0,L|75:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,174,15738,2,0,L|209:171,1,80
278,111,16199,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,111,16661,6,0,P|345:126|429:87,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,176,17353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,176,17469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,176,17584,2,0,L|448:254,1,80
355,281,18046,2,0,L|374:203,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,157,18507,6,0,P|199:182|72:180,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,265,19199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,265,19315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,265,19430,2,0,P|75:282|116:281,1,80
163,203,19892,2,0,P|120:186|79:187,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,73,20353,6,0,P|238:91|289:71,1,120,0|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
351,106,20815,2,0,P|333:167|353:218,1,120,8|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
321,282,21276,2,0,L|223:287,1,80
156,239,21738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,162,21969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,69,22199,5,0,0:0:0:0:
209,106,22430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,121,22661,2,0,P|348:114|400:127,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,182,23122,2,0,P|441:221|481:338,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,362,23815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,296,24046,6,0,P|200:307|127:224,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,153,24738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,131,24853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,109,24969,2,0,L|218:31,1,80
275,110,25430,2,0,L|247:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,300,25892,6,0,P|378:279|490:290,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,194,26584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
507,170,26699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
507,145,26815,2,0,L|507:45,1,80
426,116,27276,2,0,L|426:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,263,27738,5,0,0:0:0:0:
77,329,28199,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,109,28661,2,0,P|309:116|356:104,1,80
425,157,29122,2,0,P|418:202|430:249,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,309,29584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
271,276,29815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,303,30046,2,0,L|76:295,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,212,30507,2,0,L|247:220,1,80
315,186,30969,6,0,P|331:144|332:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Don't forget to add me in tags ><
THANKS MAN :D

i'll add it as soon as i get home :)
burstlimit2
75 posts
Joined May 2015
burstlimit2
00:00:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/nVVBn/c3865da73a.jpg Try this maybe? Looks better when its a perfect star
00:09:046 (6) - Place that at x:160 y:288.t suits perfectly there imo
00:10:892 (7) - Stack that note with the next slider maybe?
00:11:584 (2) - Just and idea: http://puu.sh/nVVWa/f193fff442.jpg
00:15:276 (5,6) - Again just an idea : http://puu.sh/nVW8K/dd6fe638b1.jpg
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-
need a few more mods and i'll move to pending :)
synf
23 posts
Joined August 2013
synf
Beginner diff:
00:22:199 (6,7) - Too long spacing (the circles before are a bit less spaced.
00:30:046 (1) - I think the spinner is too short for this diff,
Novice diff:
00:12:507 (6,7,1) - Wierd spacing, too hard for this diff imo.
00:19:430 (1,2) - Too long spacing, hard to read.
Melancholy Haze's Hard diff:
00:27:738 (1,2,3) - Too long spacing compared to rest of the song, a bit unexpected.
ECH diff:
00:29:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern, I think 00:30:276 (4,5) - are too much spaced, and should be reversed.
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

kolgar wrote:

Beginner diff:
00:22:199 (6,7) - Too long spacing (the circles before are a bit less spaced. fixed
00:30:046 (1) - I think the spinner is too short for this diff, the od is low enough for the spinner to be passable
Novice diff:
00:12:507 (6,7,1) - Wierd spacing, too hard for this diff imo. fixed a bit
00:19:430 (1,2) - Too long spacing, hard to read. fixerooni
Melancholy Haze's Hard diff:
00:27:738 (1,2,3) - Too long spacing compared to rest of the song, a bit unexpected. the song reaches its peak there, so i can understand it. i'll talk to him about it
ECH diff:
00:29:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern, I think 00:30:276 (4,5) - are too much spaced, and should be reversed.
fixed a bit


ty :D
Melancholy Haze
Melancholy Haze

kolgar wrote:

Melancholy Haze's Hard diff:
00:27:738 (1,2,3) - Too long spacing compared to rest of the song, a bit unexpected. - I've used the same distance snap as I did in the parts before like 00:12:969 (1,2,3) - . I'll keep this for now. Thanks for mod anyways.
youtune3
192 posts
Joined May 2015
youtune3
Novice
00:05:122 (2) - I Think This Would Sound Better As A Repeater
00:15:969 (5,6) - A Note In Between These Would Be Good
Nothing Else I Could Find Gl
K1ayton
54 posts
Joined May 2015
K1ayton
M4m !

[Beginner]
In general i think that u should put combos (and this will be more correct since the song starts from a weaker beat) with your frequency (once in 2 big white ticks) but starting from this 00:01:892 (3) - tick.
00:06:969 (4) - This beat is not strong. A slider should not start here it plays weird. Replacing it with this beat can help http://puu.sh/nX2TF/6017b040d1.PNG
00:07:430 (5,1) - Maybe blanket? (fix this ugly overlap)
00:14:353 (1) - These reversing sliders are very confusing especially for beginners.
00:18:507 (1,2) - overlapping here and a bad flow. I think (2) should flow down instead of this direction
00:18:507 (1,2) - And the whole rhythm is really weird. Such strong beats as this 00:19:430 - and this 00:20:353 - should be emphasized with clickable objects. You can try this http://puu.sh/nX3re/58d6eef60b.PNG
00:30:046 (1) - This spinner is too short imo

[Novice]
00:06:969 (1,2) - Bad flow. I think you should not force players to change cursor movement direction
00:05:584 (4,1) - Nazi: how about stack them?
00:08:815 (3) - Weird rhythm again. Look above in beginner diff
00:15:738 (5,1) - Stack properly
00:29:584 (1) - Maybe make spinners be consistent in all diffs

[Hard]
Generally -- okay
00:03:161 How about a note here and in similar moments instead triples in moments such as this 00:11:815 (2,3,4) - ?

[Ech]
00:15:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do u really think u need this stream? Imo you overmap here
00:30:738 (1) - This spinner is too short.


Good luck (:
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-
deleted beginner because of the amount of problems it contained

i guess if anyone wants to make a easy diff hmu :P
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

YDoku wrote:

Novice
00:05:122 (2) - I Think This Would Sound Better As A Repeater same
00:15:969 (5,6) - A Note In Between These Would Be Good would make the flow awkward imo
Nothing Else I Could Find Gl ty :D
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

K1ayton wrote:

M4m !

[Beginner]
In general i think that u should put combos (and this will be more correct since the song starts from a weaker beat) with your frequency (once in 2 big white ticks) but starting from this 00:01:892 (3) - tick.
00:06:969 (4) - This beat is not strong. A slider should not start here it plays weird. Replacing it with this beat can help http://puu.sh/nX2TF/6017b040d1.PNG
00:07:430 (5,1) - Maybe blanket? (fix this ugly overlap)
00:14:353 (1) - These reversing sliders are very confusing especially for beginners.
00:18:507 (1,2) - overlapping here and a bad flow. I think (2) should flow down instead of this direction
00:18:507 (1,2) - And the whole rhythm is really weird. Such strong beats as this 00:19:430 - and this 00:20:353 - should be emphasized with clickable objects. You can try this http://puu.sh/nX3re/58d6eef60b.PNG
00:30:046 (1) - This spinner is too short imo removed beginner

[Novice]
00:06:969 (1,2) - Bad flow. I think you should not force players to change cursor movement direction ok fixed
00:05:584 (4,1) - Nazi: how about stack them? doesn't play well tbh
00:08:815 (3) - Weird rhythm again. Look above in beginner diff fixed
00:15:738 (5,1) - Stack properly fixed
00:29:584 (1) - Maybe make spinners be consistent in all diffs fixed a bit

[Hard]
Generally -- okay
00:03:161 How about a note here and in similar moments instead triples in moments such as this 00:11:815 (2,3,4) - ?

[Ech]
00:15:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do u really think u need this stream? Imo you overmap here it goes to the beat of the song, so yeah i think its alright. but u were right about the overmapped part. just reversed the stream.
00:30:738 (1) - This spinner is too short. its possible to clear


Good luck (: ty :D
Naxess
Nomination Assessment Team
390 posts
Joined March 2016
Naxess
From Queue

Normal
SPOILER
00:05:122 (2) - This slider ends on a downbeat (large white tick). Generally downbeats should be clickable. I doesn't make sense to lift your finger. Consider making this a circle, since this will also allow you to assign a new combo to it.
00:06:969 (1) - ^
For after replacing them with circles, add new combos on downbeats, since they represent the start of a new measure. Melancholy Haze has done this on their GD, for example. (remember to remove the old NCs that aren't on downbeats):
00:03:738 (6) - NC
00:05:122 (2) - ^
00:06:969 (1) - ^
00:09:276 (4) - ^
00:11:122 (4) - ^
00:18:507 (5) - ^
00:14:815 (3) - ^
00:20:353 (3) - ^
00:22:199 (5) - ^
00:25:892 (5) - ^
00:27:738 (3) - ^
00:29:584 (7) - ^
If you want to reduce the amount of NCs you could always have every other downbeat be a NC instead of all of them. (although I'd recommend using all of them)

Melancholy Haze's Hard
SPOILER
00:02:699 (3) - Forcing the player to click three times on a part of the song that only has two beats doesn't make sense. You could always replace it with a short slider, like you've done at 00:00:738 (1) .
00:04:546 (3) - ^
00:10:084 (3) - ^
00:11:930 (3) - ^
00:17:469 (3) - ^
00:19:315 (3) - ^
00:24:853 (3) - ^
00:26:699 (3) - ^

00:09:276 (1,2) - Blanket
00:11:122 (1,2) - ^ make this straight slider curved
00:24:046 (1,2) - ^
00:25:892 (1,2) - ^

00:01:892 (1) - If you're not going to use these sliders as blankets, you could use them as so called "tight elbows" to mix things up (which is what I recommend. It's also consistent along the measures where I suggested them, so don't worry about inconsistency).

00:03:738 (1) - ^
00:16:661 (1) - ^ because it doesn't look very consistent to sometimes have them straight and sometimes curve them unless there's a purpose (such as using them as a blanket) and/or it's in intervals (consistent along a number of measures, which the blankets I suggested are).
00:18:507 (1) - ^
JackyTheFox01
61 posts
Joined June 2015
JackyTheFox01
General
I think stack 10 isn't ok. Also you should get better mp3 file. And disable Countdown on every diff
ECH
00:18:507 (1,2) - I think you should lift end of these sliders a little bit up, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4833716
TheLeviathan
271 posts
Joined December 2014
TheLeviathan
From my modding queue


ECH

Making 00:00:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - this a star would look so sexy.
SPOILER
00:06:969 (4,5) - spacing here is wrong, you have constantly growing spacing before this, and suddenly it goes lower, so remake this make spacing even higher, or remake previous ones and low a spacing
00:22:430 (4,5) - increase spacing and make it equal to 2,3
00:23:584 (9) - this should be way more down and angled differently to fit the pattern. like
SPOILER


NORMAL

00:06:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - those are so random, make them beautyfull square
00:05:122 (1) - change angle
SPOILER
00:16:661 (1,2) - spaced too much, make a bit lower
00:29:584 (1) - move to X:252 Y:224


hope this helps, good luck further
Melancholy Haze
Melancholy Haze
Damn. I'm too late for the responding to suggestions. My apologies. I'll do it ASAP.
EDIT: No fixes from my side.
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
Hellow

Normal

  1. 00:01:430 - Add a note here
  2. 00:01:892 (4) - NC
  3. 00:05:122 (1,2) - 00:06:969 (1,2) - Swap NC
  4. 00:26:815 (1) - NC unnecessary

Hard

  1. 00:02:584 (2,3) - Why so many unnecessary 1/4 in the music?

Insane

  1. 00:15:853 (2,3,4,5) - Stream unnecessary

GL~ ^^
rostld
219 posts
Joined May 2014
rostld
nice remix
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
Dashyy-

Jimmy Rustler wrote:

nice remix
thanks jimmyman

https://puu.sh/tXaTx/333c8750bb.mp3
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