Itsuki Hako wrote:

Ayo~ From my queue

Easy

01:24:657 (1) - Move to (244,232) for a better flow Doing this overlaps (3)

Hard

I see you ignore some big white tick at the beginning of the song. You did this on purpose?
Yes, doesn't follow the lead guitar but follows accompanying guitar, plays fine imo

00:23:749 (1) - Change this slider into something like this for a better flow ok, i sharpened the curvature of the slider
00:13:749 (3,4,1) - Okay, I don't get this pattern. Something like this may improve the flow? Ctrl + G'd (3) instead
Change the AR to 7 maybe better? oops, accidently kept the difficulty settings from insane XD, changed

Insane

00:20:113 (1) - Move to (184,84) for a better flow I don't think it makes much of a difference tbh :p, also doing this ruins the blanket onto 00:18:749 (2) - (if it even counts as one xd)

I really enjoy the song, really. But it's TV Size right? I still recommend you to put a video. Still, I'll make you an SB. I do the modding first then the SB later.
My modding is not so good. I'm noob
I'm still very new to this modding thing. Mostly flow, beat and timing check. But your beat is great. Nice map

That's it for me. Good luck!

freebird42 wrote:

Hello

Easy

00:25:567 (1) - maybe finish on slider head, cause of guitar sound at the background and you did same thing with 00:21:931 (1) - , so
00:32:840 (1) - same thing I'm a bit confused as to what you mean here by finish on slider head? The sliders are the same length, just made to look differently? idk lol
and maybe you should silence the end of last spinner to 5% cause there is no sound the guitar sound is still fading at this point, although i do think it might be a bit quiet, maybe change depending on further feedback, ty for pointing it out though

cant find any troubles in this diff

Normal

00:50:567 (5,1) - blanket can be improved a bit agreed, nice find
00:51:022 (1,2) - here too i think but it doesnt really metter fixed due to fixing blanket before
01:12:385 (2,3,4,5) - i think you are using too many whistles here, so consider setting it on 2 ( head and end), than 4 (head) and on 5 and remove whistle from 3 and end of 4 the whistles follow the triples in the snare in the music, they sound fine to me personally
and silence spinner if you did it in easy, if not - ignore this

nice diff, again i cant find nothing wrong

Hard

00:02:840 (5,6,1) - from your reply to MikasaSerket's mod i understood that you're trying to map accompanying guitar at the beginning, but this three notes are totally not connected with it, so maybe just delete them without making a break between 00:01:703 (4,1) - , maybe its just me, but trying map one sound and then immediately the other one feels strange I understand where you're coming from, but the notes in the music are far too important to simply ignore or just use as a break, i'll change this section depending on more feedback again though since it seems people are unsure about it
00:06:476 (5,6,1) - same ^
00:41:703 (4,1) - any reasons for this jump? also how about just making 00:41:022 (3) - reversal? did something a bit different, but you're right there was no need for a jump
00:54:658 (7) - nc cause of special hitsound? yup, good catch
01:09:885 - maybe note here? if you add you can set drum custom hitsound on all 3 notes 01:09:657 (4,1) - following the main vocal line here and since the bass drum is pretty quiet and the vocal is pretty loud i decided to have a small break here
01:12:385 (2) - maybe move it to the head of folowing slider? no thanks, feels a bit weird to play imo

most of this suggestions is imo, its fine if you disagree

Insane

00:02:840 (3,4,1) - maybe this all should be one new combo, cause it emphasizing a special sound in this song, dunno how to say, hope you understand i agree with you, although i wanted to emphasise the high note a lot more than the others so i only nc'd the final note
00:14:203 (5) - maybe end slider on blue tick? slider ends on an open hihat in the music, keeping the same :p
00:21:022 (3) - maybe move it to the left and ctrl+g for flow? http://puu.sh/o8qqt/c8f378356d.jpg no thanks, i like the linear flow that this has and also moving it to the left would make the flow to 4 -> 5 a bit wonky
00:22:840 (4) - ctrl+g? would screw up distance spacing structure if i did this, also the current flow makes a triangle which i think flows fine
00:53:976 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream is pretty hard to aim, maybe lower the spacing or make it just bunch of kicksliders? maybe, i might change depending on further feedback but since this is basically the only stream in the whole mapset i wanted it to be at least a bit difficult

this diff is really good, well done


so this is it from me, sorry if it wasnt really helpful

thank you again for your mod

gl

Kisses wrote:

hi m4m

[Easy]
00:21:931 (1) - I think a curvier shape would be better here, how about something like this? http://puu.sh/o8NeX/904bac7724.jpg good idea, did something different though
00:32:840 (1) - same. I think just curving up the straight lines would make it more fitting to the song ^

[Normal]
00:23:749 (3) - Would flow better if you curved it the other way imo http://puu.sh/o8NBD/b2a9c0995f.jpg done
00:28:294 (5,6) - curve these like your other 1/2 sliders? ok
00:43:067 (7) - Normally beats 1/4 apart arent allowed in normals, you might get away with it with this bpm though, not sure I'm pretty sure that this will be ok, if not i'll change it though, will wait for more opinions
00:59:203 (1,2,3) - rhythms like these are kinda weird imo. You start off mapping the vocals but map the drums at the end. stick to one? I think that these are fine, since these patterns actually do follow the vocal throughout (only the 3 isn't, and the drum beat is too important to miss)
01:01:021 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:06:476 (1) - This would defenitely flow better if it was curved the opposite direction agreed
01:22:839 (1,2) - I think this would look better as a reverse slider like the other 2 imo i'm 50/50 about this, i mapped it the way i did because it kind of acts as a build up to the ending since the player does more clicking but i see what you mean by it looking better, i'll wait for more opinions first

[Hard]
00:21:703 (5) - drum hitsounds are a bit weird to use for me open hithat plays in the music so i used the drum hitsound to accent it
00:28:976 (3) - ^ same. Maybe its k tho. Im not god ^
00:35:113 (2) - Open up the curve a tiny bit pls; it would make the pattern much prettier changed

[Insane]
00:53:976 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - i dont think the music calls for spacing this big imho ok, changed since thats twice it's been suggested
01:00:112 (3,4,5,6) - It would play better if you repeated the rhythm of 00:59:203 (1,2) . It wouldnt get boring and in fact would fflow pretty well hmmm, im 50/50 on this change since i kind of like the variety it adds, maybe change on further feedback
01:15:112 (6,7) - jump is a bit too big for my liking nerfed a little bit, equaled distance spacing too

i hope this mod was useful, GL!

Log Off Now wrote:

Updated mapset, thanks for the SB

Itsuki Hako wrote:

Log Off Now wrote:

Updated mapset, thanks for the SB

How is it?

Mercusheigan wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

Mapset

SPOILER

60% hitsound volume on the timing point is too loud for this song, IMO agreed, dropped to 50

Using grey combo colour while the SB is as the same colour is kinda toxic to the gameplay -- (and I think it's ruled as unrankable) I didn't really think about this XD, I think I can get away with it since the grey and whites are still distinguishable to me, but i'll have to check with a BN about it, thanks for pointing it out to me

We Still Don't Know the Name of the Flower We Saw That Day - is this really a tag? yes, it's the english translation to the full title of the anime Also add the name of the dude that made the SB for you done

F4 > Design > Display Epilepsy Warning -- Check for all done

01:24:657 - Kiai time should end here, in all diffs agreed, changed

Insane

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HP down to 6 Honestly I think 7 works fine, I might change it depending on further feedback but HP7 seems fine to me

00:02:840 (3) - stack with 00:01:022 (3) - end Personally I don't think it matters much that this is unstacked, it would also make a jump thats a bit too big for my liking considering the intensity of the music at this point

00:03:294 (1) - this slider shape is currently really weird and unbalanced, maybe a simple curved slider blanketing with 00:02:613 (2) - will look better wanted to keep the wave shape that I had before, although I agree it did look a bit weird so I've improved it

example

00:06:931 (1) - same as above ^ (if you do keep those, please take a moment to improve their shape. base example of S shaped sliders: http://puu.sh/o8SGU/525f1b2248.jpg - use this, make a whole beat slider, rotate it as you like. Then, reduce it to 3/4ths of a beat and place a circle on the previous end) (if my explanation wasn't good enough, hit me in-game and I'll devote more time to explain) ^

00:08:749 (6) - blanket head with 00:10:567 (5) - cool idea, changed

00:12:158 (3) - somewhere like 138, 134 looks better (simply put for all this kind of end on blue tick: try to make it have DS = 1, like in 00:03:294 (1,1) - and
00:18:294 (1,2) - and so on) The distance spacing for these is actually almost the same as the ones in the first section, it's the slider velocity changes that make it look a bit weird, although I did notice that this one was slightly off so i've fixed that one

00:32:385 (5,6,1) - dont change this one as ^suggested

00:33:294 (2) - blanket could be slightly better with 00:33:976 (4) - fixed

00:43:749 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - select all and move to 278, 229 - 00:44:658 (3) - end will now be stacked with 00:41:931 (1) - this was suggested to me in an irc mod earlier yesterday, might change

00:53:976 (6) - NC

00:59:203 (1,2) - I see what you tried to do here, but this kinda of shapping doesn't flow as good as 00:59:657 (2) - being shaped like this:

If you consider this ^, 01:00:112 (3) - will also have to be moved. I suggest you to select 01:00:112 (3,4,5) - , rotate by 90º anti-clock wise and place where you like Done, nice idea

01:27:612 (1,1) - overmap I disagree, I think this is a really cool ending to me with the fading guitar and slider velocity changes following that

Hard

SPOILER

NCs feel kinda weird for me in this diff, not saying they're wrong, but sometimes I get confused if it should really be a NC or not

00:03:294 (1,1) - IMO they would play nicer if they were closer, but moving them will need some workaround I honestly think they're fine

00:06:930 (1,1) - ^ ^

00:04:431 (2) - blanket this might do, it would overlap the slider end on (4) though so i'm 50/50, will wait for more feedback


00:21:703 (5) - On hards, better be a triple than a kickslider, IMO I checked with a couple of people and they said that they should be fine since its a low bpm song with low spacing to the next note

00:28:976 (3) - ^ ^

00:53:976 (4) - same as above, NC (tho TBH this didn't play bad, still doesn't think its fitting for a hard)

01:06:021 (3,4) - select both and move slightly up, so they are evenly spaced with 01:05:339 (2) - changed

01:13:067 (4,5,6) - you know what I'm going to say at this point, dont you ok i changed the last one lol

01:20:794 (5) - ^ same as other kickslider comments

01:24:771 (1) - should end on 01:27:157 with a way lower hitsound volume (current has 40% at this point 01:27:157, maybe set it to 20 or 25, hell, even lower would be good too)

the echo ends at where the spinner currently ends, although I agree the hitsound should be lowered (and it's been suggested before too) so i've changed it

Normal

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AR, OD and HP up by 0,5

00:41:931 (5) - NC good catch

00:51:022 (1) - blanket could be very slightly improved fixed for the third time q.q

01:24:771 (1) - same as in hard same comment as hard

Easy

SPOILER

01:24:657 (1) - remove this note and start spin here. also, same speech about the spinner as in normal and hard I think this is fine in an easy and the note is too loud to not be hitsounded/properly clickable

Hope it helps!

Beautiful song choice, too

-Crescendo- wrote:

Herro! This is the requested M4M Mod:

General

SPOILER

Wow, this Map is awesome, especially the SB! I wasn´t able to Mod that much, because there isn´t much to mod anymore imo.

Easy

SPOILER

Nothing to Mod here. Seems perfectly fine to me.

Normal

SPOILER

My only Issue here is the Circle Size. Maybe increase it by 0.5? It looks a bit too small for a Normal and would fit in more into an Advanced/Hard Diff in my Opinion. I think it's fine

Hard

SPOILER

00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) - I feel really uncomfortable with this Kind of Sliders. I would prefer a Circle Stream or such. I think a circle stream in the hard diff is a bit much since it's still really low SR
01:12:612 (3,4,5,6) - I don´t know what to think about this. It doesn´t seem wrong, but it´s just weird to play in my Opinion. (Or I am just a bad Player, which seems more reasonable.) Changed the final slider into two notes
01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - Same as above. Same reason as above

Insane

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00:01:703 (4,2,3,4) - This Sudden jump screwed me up all the Time at the beginning. I don´t know if it is necessary to get changed, but yeah. 00:06:249 (2,3,4) - Same here. No change here since I wanted to make them emphasize the percussion, I might NC them though to make them a bit more obvious if needed
00:11:703 (2,3) - Hmm, either, I have a bad Melody-Taste, or these two don´t fit into the Beat. These two follow the vocal, each of the notes before also follow the vocal someway or another
01:00:453 (4,5) - Does it have a Specific Reason, why you put two Sliders here, instead of a small Slider, like 01:01:476 (2) - here?[ For a bit of variety in the map, although again I might change this later on if more people pick up on it

Sorry, I am really bad in Modding. Hope it was still.........uh.........something like Helpful.

BOUYAAA wrote:

Hiii

Easy

00:02:840 (4,5) - no issues but you don't use a repeat here but you do here 00:06:476 (4) - i'm guessing this is intentional since the second one has drum sounds on it. I'm just pointing it out here because the bell sound or w/e it is is the thing that stands out the most here yup intentional

00:18:294 (1,2) - maybe you could improve the circular shape by moving the second slider up a bit. Right now it seems kinda broken idk oops, didn't notice XD fixed

00:38:294 (3,4,1) - you probably should make it so 2 points to 3 so that flow stays intuitive in the lower diffs don't you mean so that 3 points to 4? XD, fixed if you did




Normal

Diff settign feel kinda low for this diff, i'm sayign that because apart from AR it's usually what i put for my easy diffs xd
I'd suggest you raise OD to 5, AR to 4.5-5 and HP to 4 or something. did something a bit different, but i buffed the settings since multiple people have said this

00:15:567 (2,3,4) - just for aesthetics it's usually better to keep the same angle on you straight lines that are close to the time line. I'd suggest you make 00:15:567 (2,3) - a bit more hirozontal so you can achieve some symmetry between the 2 lines. changed

00:43:067 (3) - i would avopid using any kind of 1/4 in normals will change later, not sure on how i can change the pattern without ruining the flow atm

00:51:022 (1,2) - 1's slider end point towards 2's sliderend which might be a bit misleading to new players I don't think so tbh, since similar ideas are used a lot in this map, e.g 00:56:476 (2,3) -

00:56:476 (2,4) - not very pretty xd the spacing is very low between the 2 objects and since 4 appears so quick after 2 disapears it just seems like a failed blanked idk oops, didn't notice XD although i need to find a way to get the ds to play nice

01:13:067 (4) - this slider is offbeat, having a stronger beat on it's end than on it's head. I would avoid that whenever you can cuz that's how music is xd changed, basically flipped the notes around



Hard

i didn't point it out in normal but now that i see it, the rythm you used in your hard's intro fits so much better than the repeat sliders xd someone who gets it

00:01:703 (4) - it woudl probably be better if you did something like this instead http://puu.sh/oaQfr/3652ce66a7.jpg since you map the inbetween notes in the beginning of the measure idk I think it's fine tbh :/

00:13:749 (3,4,1) - nice triagle shape between the 3 nbotes plspslpslps. but how ok i understand now lmao

00:18:294 (1) - extended sliders doesn't really fit to me here, you don't do it elsewhare until now and rythm doesn't really change sooooo ehhh idk lol im 50/50

00:25:340 (4) - i get the one with the cymbal but that one feels overmapped. the guitar pick is too fast to be emulated by those 1/4 slider. i think doing a simple triple or like you did here 00:32:385 (3,4,1) - works better mmmm im 50/50 again on this

00:28:522 (2) - you comitted the cardinal sin of going offbeat. I really suggest you don't do that here since your strong stuff lands on the tail of the slider and gets no emphasis. in this specific case if you want to emphasize vocals it's probably better to do it with 2 circles. changed

00:49:203 (1,2,1) - triangle for maximum beauty ok

Insane

00:14:203 (5) - juging by the sound on this slider's end i'd say it would be better if this was 2 circles with some jump or something. Even hard has something to make it stand out xd idk, i kinda like how this plays, although i might change depending on more feedback

00:15:567 (3,4,5) - when doing jump stuff like that you should consider what gets emphasis. Right now, 3-4 's spacing is lower than 4-5's spacing. It should be the other way around since the strong beat and the strong sound is on 4 right now. 00:21:476 (4,5) - there are other occurences but i'll let yopu juge hmm, i kinda see what you mean but i'm not sure of another way of doing this with a matching flow, if i figure it out i'll fix though

00:43:749 (1,3) - these objects feel kinda close, i'd sugest you space them a liiiitle more done



i think thgat's gonna be it for me. Not much to say, pretty solid mapset thank you ^^

glglglgl!

-M4x wrote:

Easy (blanket shitmod)

1. 00:08:294 (2) - A bit up for blanket?
   not a blanket XD
2. 01:17:385 (1) - Move the grey sliderpoint a bit to the right to improve the blanket fixed
3. 01:22:839 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved here (just slightly tho) fixed

Normal (complete shitmod)

1. 01:16:476 (4,5) - Straight line stuff
2. 01:22:839 (1,2) - Again no thanks XD

Hard (not complete shitmod)

1. 00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - What about moving this whole mess a bit to the left so the symmetrical pattern you have ( 00:06:476 (1,2,3) - ) is perfectly centred? ALSO what I found while selecting all these notes is that you could stack these two notes 00:03:749 (1,1) - ! weird suggestion but ok done XD
2. 00:04:431 (2,4) - I suggest to make the blanket look nice :3 like dat http://puu.sh/ob17x/f02b0e9bc9.jpg so beautiful. done
3. 00:57:385 (1) - (And almost every following downbeat) Since this is a hard difficulty why didn't you increase the spacing towards the downbeats a bit? o: It would make the map way more interesting and fun to play! ehhh i don't really think it would change much tbh, and sometimes it's not called for so it would be a bit weird sometimes imo
   Besides that it's a great diff already! And there's not much I can suggest here! That's a good sign isn't it?

Insane (decent shitmod)

1. 00:03:294 (1,1) - I think these "kinda wave sliders" could look nicer! ok again q.q
2. 00:11:703 (2) - I would suggest to silence most of the blue tick sliderends. It sounds nice imo! not sure if i can because playability etc
3. 00:12:613 (4,1) - Higher spacing to provide higher emphasis on the downbeat? You could do it like that http://puu.sh/oaYc1/bb58c53631.jpg no thanks, that looks kinda overmapped for what the actual music is
4. 00:32:385 (5,6,1) - You wanted them to flow a bit curvy into the 00:32:840 (1) - ? uh im not sure what you meant, but i curved 00:32:385 (5) - since i kinda think i got what you meant and it also makes sense
5. 00:37:840 (3,4) - Isn't this jump a bit too big compared to the others? I would reduce that Try this: http://puu.sh/oaYUY/5046ddeb57.jpg By doing that you'd also get a sharper angle on the downbeat to increase the emphasis! thats the point of this jump, gives a nice offbeat swing sort of to emphasise the snares instead of the downbeat
6. 00:40:113 (1,4) - You have a pretty high emphasis on these two due to movement breaks and relatively high spacing, so why don't do it here 00:41:931 (1) - ?
7. 00:43:749 (1,3) - I never saw such a perfect blanket lol
8. 00:44:658 (3) - This for example is a slider with a blue tick sliderend that I would NOT silence
9. 00:49:203 (1,3) - This is kinda style breaking since this is the only time you use this "stacking method" in the map! Just stack them on eachother. You could also place 00:49:203 (1) - on 00:49:658 (3) - 's sliderend... Your choice! i use this later on in the map too although I did fix it so it doesn't look like it's meant to be a stack
10. 01:00:112 (3,4,5) - I think these aren't in a straight line o.o or am I not able to look correctly? o: not meant to be in a straight line XD
11. 00:57:157 (6,1) - I recommend to space them slightely more. done (a tiny bit :p)
12. 01:01:021 (1,2) - Same YO wat, these are fine XD
13. 01:04:203 (5,6,1) - I think the spacing is a bit messed up here 01:04:203 (5,6) - I suggest to ctrl + g them for correct spacing and emphasis. changed spacing a little but not ctrl + g
14. 01:08:067 (7) - Move this to http://puu.sh/oaZS7/8f5c7c5003.jpg to get a nice triangle shape and better emphasis on the downbeat done
15. 01:09:430 (5,6) - This definatly needs a higher spacing! Like.. Listen to the song, I'm sure he does cry for more than a 2x ds there lmao changed again

XD

Thanks for modding

MkGuh wrote:

Hello! I just saw your request on #modrequest and since I love this song. Well :3

[General]
Wouldn't be better if source were in japanese? You could add romanized ver in the tags. It'd be like that あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。 changed, was unsure on which to use since theres ranked versions with romanised and japanese used, changed after double checking though

[Easy]
00:01:022 (2,3,4) - What do you think of adding soft whistles in the head of those slider and note? It fits better that guitar sound at the start. NOTE: same here 00:04:658 (2,3,4) - And that applies to other diffs too! I didn't really think it matched the guitar that well, but it did give me an idea that I'll add soon to do with hitsounds, seriously thanks for suggesting this!
00:19:203 (2) - That's more like a personal suggestion, but what about curving this slider to a opposite direction than (1). It gives a good visual impression and improve flow a bit. http://puu.sh/ob9hL/e0c6f6b933.jpg changed
00:21:931 (1) - The vocals that you are trying to emphasize here for sure ends on 2/1 and not 3/1. It would be better change this slider to 2/1 and then add a note here 00:23:294 (2). Actually for these sliders I was going for the guitar emphasis instead of the vocals, maybe change depending on feedback
00:34:658 (2) - Although it feels nice cause reverse has a sound and same with slider end, I think it'd look even nicer if it were a 2/1 slider with a note added here 00:36:022 (2). Let me know what you think! ehh i'm not as much of a fan of this one, sorry :p

A pretty nice difficulty with not much to say!

[Normal]
00:03:294 (1) - Give a HP boost like that to players seems weird and non sense. Just remove NC here. NOTE: same here 00:06:931 (1).
00:42:840 (2,3) - 1/4 it's not good for Normal at all. It seems too fast especially with the pattern you applied that, just nerf this 1/4 slider and change for something better. kk i'll think of something, trying to make ds play nice atm with it XD
00:44:885 (2) - I don't like the way that the slider head it's landing on an almost no song beat while its end it's on a strong beat. Maybe you could delete this slider and make other 1/2 slider here 00:45:113 (2). Like that if you didn't understand: http://puu.sh/obaaf/64571a37fe.jpg I see what you mean here, originally I was trying to make the first snare on the blue tick playable even though it can't be on normals, but this plays way better (also changed the one before this one too)
00:57:385 (3,4) - Rhythm here seems weird cause on (3) reverse we have no sound! I'd suggest something like that, that would make rhythm much better: http://puu.sh/ob9HD/9fdf49462e.jpg NOTE: same here 01:01:021 (4). damn nice suggestion, sounds way better thanks! (not sure on how i can hitsound it though, seems a bit weird to me atm :p)
01:22:839 (1) - This NC shouldn't be here, it does not fit your 2 stanza comboing patterning. NOTE: same applies here 00:34:658 (1). oops XD, good catch

Instead of some unrankable issues listed there, diff is cute :3

[Hard]
Just to fit the way you changed AR through the diffs, and that the Hard is a bit slow. AR 6 would be a better choice imo. changed
00:11:022 (1) - It feels weird follow the instrumental here while you was following vocals all the time. To make a better rhythm, I'd recommend something like that, it's 100% more appropriate for what you made: http://puu.sh/obaM7/29dd16c955.jpg changed
01:06:021 (3,4) - Personally this jumps feels so big for a Hard, maybe you could make spacing lower here, beat isn't even that strong. maybe change, depends on more feedback

From my point of view seems fine :3

[Insane]
00:14:658 (1) - Seems weird the fact that it's stacked under (5). I miss some movements here, maybe you could unstack it and apply with normal DS. I kinda like this stack since it sort of adds a bit of emphasis on the open hihat
00:26:022 (3) - Move it to 402|360, the fact that (3) is a strong beat, it needs to have a higher spacing. changed
00:27:840 (2) - Having this slider extended to 3/4 seems a bit weird, especialyl cuz player would easily read as 1/2 with the spacing you use on (3). Just short it to 1/2.
makes sense since the vocal also switches slightly on the red tick, changed
Seems a very nice diff and mapset! GL with it ~

Battle wrote:

i went to a japanese restaurant and ate menma savage, then i saw this map lol gg

[General]
yep, source should be あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。lol
i'm pretty sure you don't need epilepsy warning, no one is gonna die from THREE non-consecutive pulses that are nowhere near each other fair play tbh lmao

[Easy]
00:21:931 (1) - the 4/1 sliders really don't feel good imo, since previously you were mapping beat pretty consistently (well as consistent as you can with 1/1 lol), having it as one long slider doesn't really fell too good. If you were to keep these though, keep in mind you should still try to emphasize beats being slid on, for example, 00:22:840 - you might want to make a sharp directional change on the slider here, applies to all sliders I think I do wanna keep them since it adds a bit of variety and also follows the pretty heavy guitar strum, i will add sharp angles on the beats though

00:34:658 (2) - I think the best choice for rhythm here would be a 1/1 repeat slider, followed by a single note. While this does defeat you trying to follow the vocals, the thing is, the vocals can't really be followed well on easy. It's better for focus the stronger beats here than the vocal ok so since you both suggested it i'll roll with it XD

01:06:476 (1) - It would be better if you have the direction change on 01:07:157 - instead to make vocal emphasized nice idea, changed

01:08:294 (3) - Similar, but at 01:08:976 - ^

01:24:657 (1) - Why not end at 01:28:294 - ? wanted to end it on the final 'echo' of the three loud*ish* echos in the guitar at this point, maybe change depending on feedback though

[Normal]
00:02:840 (4,1,1) - Consider adjusting this pattern so it flows better? It flows well on the next time you do this changed slightly

00:35:567 (2,3) - It's kinda weird how you choose to pick the vocals for the slider beforehand, then immediately change what rhythm you're mapping to the drums. Not good ://///
I see your point, not sure on how I can make it work though tbh without having to change a lot of the next section, will change when i figure it out XD

00:57:385 (3) - This is like, not 3/4 lol i'm torn between what i had before and this q.q.q idk!

01:01:021 (4) - same lo ^

01:28:294 - like, always an option lol, guitar still fading same as easy

[Hard]
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I find it REALLY weird that you choose the other guitar for what you mapped instead of the main guitar, mostly considering how in normal, you mapped it and now you choose this rhythm for a harder diff ://// I chose this rhythm since it's a lot more involved clicking wise compared to the less intensive normal diff (clicking wise) and also I kinda like it since it adds variety into the mapset in general (if that means anything lmao)

00:10:113 (3,4) - Strange choice in emphasis, doing this raises questions of "Why didn't you do this for 00:08:067 (2,3,4) - where the vocal is prominent on 3". It's mostly considering how 00:10:113 (3) - is a pretty passive beat, it's not a strong drum at all, not compared to 4 you're right, changed

00:11:022 (1) - Why not make this a 1/2 repeat followed by a 1/1 slider, since you've been following vocals up to this point yup, changed


01:24:771 (1) - spinner same as easy

gonna stop there for now lol, bye

Battle wrote:

i saw it on website tho lo

1. 00:11:022 (1) - Reverse the angle on this guy for smoother flow coming from 00:10:567 (5) http://puu.sh/obpNL/dd595e5fd0.png
2. 00:25:567 (1) - Make it so that the red grip is directly on the slider tick.
3. 00:32:840 (1) - ^
4. 01:06:476 (1) - ^
5. 01:08:294 (3) - ^
6. 01:17:385 (1,3) - ^ eh doesn't really matter here I guess.
7. 01:04:657 (3,4,1) - Flow is a bit bumpy between these (me being picky).

1. 00:36:476 (1) - Ctrl J, but keep in same starting position.
2. 00:59:203 (1) - ^
3. 00:56:476 (2,4) - Blanket nazi strikes again.
4. 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5) - Even up the spacing here.

1. Plays like a ranked map
2. 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Hardest part in the whole map, just pointing it out.

1. Lower HP to 6 please!
2. 00:03:294 (1) - Make the lip less noticeable/smoother.
3. 00:06:931 (1) - ^
4. 00:48:294 (4,5) - I don't think you should stack these since the buildup doesn't start until 00:51:022 (1) . 00:50:113 (4,5) - These are okay because nothing much going on here. Also, it would be consistent with the circles before kiai time.

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Bluekrait wrote:

Log Off Now's M4M request

[Easy]

1. 00:11:022 (1) - Reverse the angle on this guy for smoother flow coming from 00:10:567 (5) http://puu.sh/obpNL/dd595e5fd0.png changed but slightly differently, didn't reverse the angle because that would be misleading flow in an easy diff
2. 00:25:567 (1) - Make it so that the red grip is directly on the slider tick.
3. 00:32:840 (1) - ^
4. 01:06:476 (1) - ^
5. 01:08:294 (3) - ^ red = they're close enough so that it's an inaudible difference
6. 01:17:385 (1,3) - ^ eh doesn't really matter here I guess.
7. 01:04:657 (3,4,1) - Flow is a bit bumpy between these (me being picky). I think its fine :p

[Normal]

1. 00:36:476 (1) - Ctrl J, but keep in same starting position. no thanks, i like the offset look of these :p
2. 00:59:203 (1) - ^
3. 00:56:476 (2,4) - Blanket nazi strikes again. fixed
4. 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5) - Even up the spacing here.oops, nice catch

[Hard]

1. Plays like a ranked map thank you
2. 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Hardest part in the whole map, just pointing it out.

[Insane]

1. Lower HP to 6 please! I think HP7/OD7 is fine since it's still an insane, even if it is a low * one
2. 00:03:294 (1) - Make the lip less noticeable/smoother. fixed for the fourth time........
3. 00:06:931 (1) - ^
4. 00:48:294 (4,5) - I don't think you should stack these since the buildup doesn't start until 00:51:022 (1) . 00:50:113 (4,5) - These are okay because nothing much going on here. Also, it would be consistent with the circles before kiai time. I'm a bit confused as to what you mean since it is consistent with the sections that come before it, and the build up right before the kiai is different musically so I changed the structure there, I think they're fine imo

Wow man, should have no trouble finding a BN. i hope XD

Lexis wrote:

Mod

Open AiMod without DS enabled. uh i'm confused?

[Easy]

00:53:294 (2,3) - A blanket can be good ..? I would but that would mess up flow so i've kept it like this

01:16:930 (4,1) - Fix blanket
oops, fix
[Normal]

00:56:476 (2) - Ctrl+G, This jump is a bit surprising... And it will unsettle the player. holy shit you saved my life, i forgot to ctrl + g this back when blanketing XD thanks

[Hard]

00:14:544 - You can add something here. no thanks, I think there is enough emphasis on the open hihat and thats enough emphasis for a diff like this

01:24:203 (6,7) - Whistles at the beginning & at the end of the sliders. The snare stops at the first one, then it goes into tomtoms which i've hitsounded differently

01:28:067 - Problem with kiai, he finish here ^^ why? Theres only a guitar echo here

[Insane]

00:39:658 (5,6) - Make a bit more space enter the circles maybe change on more feedback

00:59:203 (1,2) - Make something like this ↓ That will delete the overlap.

Plz Open Me D: I don't want to be closed.

this was intentional q.q

01:08:748 (2,6) - You can move (2) 'cause we don't dee the blanket with (6) xD wha, fixed blanket anyway lol, I don't see whats wrong with 2 being there

01:20:453 - Add circle theres nothing there though XD

Sorry, that's really short, I tried my best but :c

I hope it will help you to rank your map ^^

1. This is so clean and nice flow, I have nothing to say but the spinner at the very last, I recommend to start that at least on 01:24:885 - based on my fails before lel

1. 01:00:112 (2) - idk maybe looks nice if this slider heading straight to 01:00:567 (3) - since the same combo section 01:01:703 (5,6) - is heading to the straight as well
   
   SPOILER

   
   this is good af as well

1. 00:00:794 (2,4,2,4) - these 1/1 sliders and reverse uhm. I don't know what they are emphasizing actually lel. like 00:01:022 - 00:01:931 - and other white ticks can be mapped than to slide tbh, since your Normal diffs had notes on that ;~;
2. 00:21:703 (5,1) - idk just triples are better here imo xd
3. 00:25:340 (4) - ^
4. 00:28:976 (4) - ^ welp it's your choice tho
5. 00:53:976 - okay, yes it's average-low bpm but maaaaybe it's still too hard imo (1/4 sliders can be singletapped but yeee it's still confusing), how about add some reverse support on it?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:976 (5,6) - convert to circles?

1. AR=8?
2. 00:53:976 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - uhm, maybe you can do something more interesting stream pattern here imo, like rounded streams that blankets the 00:53:522 (4) - like this. It also gives better flow after the jump section of 00:52:840 (1,2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:59:203 (1) - this is pretty weird compared to all of your starting combos on this part lel, maybe move red anchor to the center instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:24:316 (7,8,9,1) - yea this one can be rounded or sth interesting pattern as well lel.
   
   SPOILER

   

kolgar wrote:

Hi, m4m.

General:
I would recommend you adding epilepsy warning to the map (mostly for new players that will play easiest difficulties)

[Easy]
01:24:657 (1,1) - I don't think it is good to have 1/4 time spacing between notes on this difficulty, even though it is a circle and a spinner, which is long enough.

[Normal]
00:10:113 (5,6,1) - I think you should change combo colours so this pattern would be all in one colour.
Seems, you like doing these ^^ colourful patterns throughout the whole diff, I don't like them, because for newbies they will be hard to read.
00:34:658 (4,5,6) - Hard to play for new players.
00:42:840 (2,3) - I don't like use of 1/4 notes in normal/easy diffs, I know it fits rhythm-wise, but it is still hard to play.
01:12:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - Too hard to read and play.
01:24:657 (1,1) - 1/4 :/ I don't like this.

[Hard]
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4) - This is out of rhythm, something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4904640 should fix it.
00:03:749 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, recommend same fix.
00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) - This might be too hard for a 2,62* map, don't you think?
01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - Same as ^^.

[Insane]
00:16:022 (4,5) - I think this pattern is better reversed (ctrl + G)
00:32:385 (5,6,1) - Fix spacing.

This mapset has no major mistakes inside.

kolgar wrote:

Hi, m4m.

General:
I would recommend you adding epilepsy warning to the map (mostly for new players that will play easiest difficulties) Should be fine (as a previous mod pointed out) but will check with others still

[Easy]
01:24:657 (1,1) - I don't think it is good to have 1/4 time spacing between notes on this difficulty, even though it is a circle and a spinner, which is long enough. Ok so since everyone complained about this I moved it to the red tick

[Normal]
00:10:113 (5,6,1) - I think you should change combo colours so this pattern would be all in one colour.
Seems, you like doing these ^^ colourful patterns throughout the whole diff, I don't like them, because for newbies they will be hard to read. Doing this would break the combo consistency and what do you mean by colourful patterns? Different colours does not = hard to read
00:34:658 (4,5,6) - Hard to play for new players. Will fix when I figure out a way on how to change it
00:42:840 (2,3) - I don't like use of 1/4 notes in normal/easy diffs, I know it fits rhythm-wise, but it is still hard to play. also fixing
01:12:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - Too hard to read and play. I think it's fine
01:24:657 (1,1) - 1/4 :/ I don't like this. It's a spinner and is fine (it's fine in easy aswell if it's a spinner (afaik) but everyone complained q.q)

[Hard]
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4) - This is out of rhythm, something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4904640 should fix it. Listen to the guitar
00:03:749 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, recommend same fix. ^
00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) - This might be too hard for a 2,62* map, don't you think? It's still a hard difficulty and doing a stream here would be too difficult, maybe if theres a better suggestion i'll change it but at the moment I like it and I think it plays nice
01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - Same as ^^. ^
[Insane]
00:16:022 (4,5) - I think this pattern is better reversed (ctrl + G) I disagree
00:32:385 (5,6,1) - Fix spacing. I don't see whats wrong with it? o.o

This mapset has no minor mistakes inside.

Akitoshi wrote:

#modreqs boiz
Warning : I'm suk at modding

[Easy]

1. This is so clean and nice flow, I have nothing to say but the spinner at the very last, I recommend to start that at least on 01:24:885 - based on my fails before lel since everyone suggested changed it

[Normal]

1. 01:00:112 (2) - idk maybe looks nice if this slider heading straight to 01:00:567 (3) - since the same combo section 01:01:703 (5,6) - is heading to the straight as well
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   sure that looks better than what i had before
   
   this is good af as well

[Hard]

1. 00:00:794 (2,4,2,4) - these 1/1 sliders and reverse uhm. I don't know what they are emphasizing actually lel. like 00:01:022 - 00:01:931 - and other white ticks can be mapped than to slide tbh, since your Normal diffs had notes on that ;~; accompanying guitar, more interesting to play and a bit more 'click tricky' than normal diff, thats why I chose to follow this in the hard diff
   
2. 00:21:703 (5,1) - idk just triples are better here imo xd
3. 00:25:340 (4) - ^
4. 00:28:976 (4) - ^ welp it's your choice tho maybe change if more people suggest it
5. 00:53:976 - okay, yes it's average-low bpm but maaaaybe it's still too hard imo (1/4 sliders can be singletapped but yeee it's still confusing), how about add some reverse support on it?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   idk since personally i find double repeating sliders hard to read, i kinda like this but maybe change if more people hate it
6. 01:23:976 (5,6) - convert to circles? maybe, idk lol

[Insane]

1. AR=8? again since it's been suggested loads XD
2. 00:53:976 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - uhm, maybe you can do something more interesting stream pattern here imo, like rounded streams that blankets the 00:53:522 (4) - like this. It also gives better flow after the jump section of 00:52:840 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe change, i decided to use straight and very angular streams because it just adds a bit more emphasis on them, and since theres only two of them i wanted a much sharper flow compared to the more free flow compared to the rest of the map
3. 00:59:203 (1) - this is pretty weird compared to all of your starting combos on this part lel, maybe move red anchor to the center instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   sure, although this will change in a later update since it makes the slider 1/2 atm without changing spacing so i'm gonna work on that a bit more
4. 01:24:316 (7,8,9,1) - yea this one can be rounded or sth interesting pattern as well lel.
   
   SPOILER

   

Broccoly wrote:

m4m

[General]
Add epilepsy warning? ok fine since everyone else seems to think it's needed
normal-hitwhistle2 has a bit of a delay imo. maybe just trim that part out? if it's needed i will, took this hitsound from a ranked set so it should be fine though?

[I]
00:08:749 (6) - move this closer to 00:08:294 (4,5) - these? To keep the distance even between 00:08:749 (6,1) - and 00:08:522 (5,6) -
00:11:703 (2,3) - I would just stack like this but that's just my style. I think the current aesthetics meta is where many people think half-overlaps are messy. I personally disagree with this, i like the look of these half ish overlaps since it gives a good indication of timing (imo anyway for a low bpm song like this) and also makes it readable for some new players (even though they probably won't be playing insane anyway) and they don't even look that bad to me q.q Also i think the jump from 5/6 is fine imo, but will change depending on further feedback
00:18:294 (1,2) - or just slightly overlap like this nah i don't like the look of that
00:23:749 (1,2,3,4) - do something like this man your structure/slider design are too plain which may make already slow-paced song more boring to play i'll add this wave, but the other way around so i still get a blanket on )
00:27:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing goes for 1,2 and also reposition circles like this. Ctrl + G 5 and 6, and stack 6 on the sliderend of 1 (sliderstart of 2), for better jump done, nice suggestion
00:30:113 (3,4) - 00:34:658 (1,2) - same thing. Not gonna mention other ones. But it's up to you so don't feel forced. idk i kinda like the plain one since the music isn't doing anything special atm
00:53:976 (6) - NC done
00:59:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improve your patterning. Do something like this. 4 and 5 are stacked and slightly overlapping with slider 3's end, 6 is moved to the center as you can see from the screenshot sort of changed, if i change the look of (1,2) it will look out of place with the rest of the difficulty, so i changed 2 to an angular slider but didn't change the rest
01:02:612 (6) - 01:13:521 (9) - these look bad when used like that. Do something like this or this or just stack 2 circles on sliderstart i like these tho q.q
01:14:203 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - find a better jump pattern. right now it's a random mix of flows... linear flow on 01:15:112 (6,7,1) - this especially plays awkward for your target audience maybe change, depends on feedback
01:23:976 (5,6,7,8,9) - your 1/4 slider doesn't have to be connected to your stream, nor even point towards it. You gotta learn to appreciate the leniency of kicksliders. Do something like this which looks better and more fun to play Done, I didn't want to overdo the difficulty thats why I connected it, but i guess this isn't that much harder and i agree is more fun so changed

[H]
00:51:931 (3) - NC? Sure i guess it makes sense

can't find anything in lower diffs
good luck dud thx for mod

HB24 wrote:

wat am i doing here

[Insane]
-00:00:794 (2,2) - id like them stacked tho :v ruins blanket on the wave then, also does it matter q.q
-00:06:931 (1,3) - try to blanket asfqsfq http://puu.sh/oeRc2/3d4106f790.jpg done
-00:26:931 (7) - x271 y193 ik i want everything perfect wa?????
-00:37:385 (2) - better not extend for that guitar on red tick :v nah, the note doesn't change on the red tick and i'm mainly following drums here
-00:52:840 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - had to use 1/12 so u can see the whole pattern 00:52:840 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wtf
-01:12:612 (3,4,5) - why is it down copared to 01:12:385 (2) - ffs kill it with fire! wtf??

[Hard]
-00:01:703 (4) - i still aint gonna approve this one, why not same rythme as 00:00:794 (2,3) - the main guitar doesn't have a note where the (2) would be, otherwise i would change this
-00:10:567 (4) - covert to circles nah
-00:53:976 (4,5,6) - dude pls this confusing even for me lol, low bpm keksliders and also low ds ffs kill it with fcking fire how is this confusing?
-01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - hah DansGame

[Normal]
-00:24:885 - u could add note here tho since this section is lacking 1/2 suddenly maybe change, 2 circles is a bit much imo so i would use a slider, but this forces me offbeat so idk
-00:29:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - also here wtf, this is why u cant map 2* normals im extremely offended ((((((((((((( kappa
-00:55:567 (1) - if u wanted to do this why isnt it same here 00:56:476 (2) - , so either fix 1 or remap the whole diff /me runs vocals
-01:08:067 - for the love of this white haired dead grill put a note there ;w; OK
-01:21:021 (1,2,3,4) - isnt this rythme getting old? at least some 1/1 slider its the end of the map dude

easy is approved, not shooting 5483648 stars cuz im a scumbag, 10 is enough aw cheers mush

RyoKazuka wrote:

youre p active on this m4m things xd

General:

Untick Letterbox during breaks since the map itself doesnt have any breaks dud wat i cant xdddd

EZ

nothing much to say but I 'd recommend making this slider 01:02:839 (1) - into a 1/1 slider followed by a note
making it reverse doesnt emphasis much on this section unlike some parts like 01:13:748 (1) - this and 00:20:113 (3) - because you use reverse mostly on parts that has vocals throughout and the reverse slider that I pointed out (the one that I recommend you to change) only has vocals on the first tick and not the rest (I hope you understand the explanation xd) might change this, if i do this suggestion i don't have a way of keeping the flow into the next section and lose a bit of consistency slider wise, but i understand what you mean by theres no vocal and only drum here

and if you really like hs and care about them
maybe put the snare onto ticks like this 01:06:476 (1) - since it is missing some important elements in the song (followed by the rest of the sliders that are similar to this) again maybe, i kinda like the default hs on this one tbh lmao

NM

00:23:749 (3) - preferably make the slider's mid anchor placed at 168 | 324 for a better angle placement because the previous note doesnt flow with with the slider's angle (best make it straight so that it flows from its previous stuff AND its next stuff) done

00:31:931 (6,1) - how about try this structure? http://sta.sh/02cjioxge8me
the prev placements has this one sharp angle that often breaks flow, I highly recommend fixing this this flow is intentional, it acts as a sort of build up into the next section, this is why the combo after this also has a sharper flow compared to the rest of the beginning

00:36:476 (1) - this is optional but it does looks better if its straight i didn't fully straighten it out but i made the curve less aggressive (also change curve direction for better flow into (2)

01:12:385 (2,3,4) - this is a bit sudden for some players (eventho it is obvious that this is the intense section but lower difficulties must avoid this), depends on play-ability but this is so unpredictable since this is the only part that has 2 notes incoming
I highly recommend making it a 1/2 slider maybe change depending on feedback, i don't think it's that sudden since the previous combo also acts as a build up

HD

00:53:749 (3) - Im questioning myself about this kind of spacing since it is emphasized well but maybe reduce it to 2.35x instead? (however, it looks a bit inconsistent) done

00:35:567 (3,4,5) - same here because I feel like it is all of a sudden from 1.2x spacings and then a 1.8 jump in a Hard difficulty (It can be reduced but not drastically) because its a major problem that it can be seen how far this note can be and how near this note can be nerfed spacing a little

talked about nsane irc

nice set tho

Good Luck ay

Shmiklak wrote:

M4M from my queue

General

1. U have unused HS:
   normal-hitwhistle2.wav
   soft-hitwhistle3.wavoops, forgot to delete when testing hitsounds XD thanks

SB

1. For now your SB is unrankable. Idk how to explain u your problems, but don't worry, I fixed it for u! Thanks! Will ask around to why it was unrankable anyway though :p
   
   SB code (new)

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   //Storyboard Sound Samples

Easy

1. 00:02:840 (4,5) - Change it to slider because here 00:03:067 - sound a bit strong and I should can confuse newbies. So slider will be easier and more but then i lose emphasis on 00:03:294 (5) - which is way more important
2. 00:06:476 (4) - try to not use 1/2 in easy diffs. i think this is fine, will change depending on more feedback tho
3. 00:21:931 (1) - Imo a bit boring slider. And I think it not needs. Sound doesn't changing. changing when i figure out a better slider XD
4. 00:32:840 (1) - same for this. ^
5. 00:25:567 (1) - here I can agree with u because vocal line, but still try to map background sounds lol. And if u keep it, move red point to make rotate exactly at 00:26:476 - (for example move it to 468;328 the difference is inaudible
6. 00:54:658 (1,1) - small DS problem but not critic. U have not to fix it if want. fixed

Normal

1. 00:19:203 (2) - rotate it a bit up. a tiny bit
2. 00:56:476 (2) - Fix DS oops, fixed

Hard

1. Imo ignoring so many strong beats in Hard diff like these 00:01:022 - 00:01:931 - 00:02:385 - 00:04:658 - 00:05:567 - 00:06:022 - Is not good idea. I suggest to remap this part. but they follow the guitarrr qqq im so close to changing this because nobody gets it q.q

Insane

1. 00:02:840 (3) - Should be farther because it stronger then 00:02:613 (2) - moved a tiny bit
2. 00:03:067 (4) - Should be closer because it's same with 00:02:840 - but stack q.q, maybe change lol i think this one is fine
3. 00:06:249 (2,3,4) - same for this part. change in similar way to above
4. 00:07:613 (2) - why so far? Sound is weak and doesn't need so big jump. (imo 248;116 will be nicer :3) done, nice catch
5. 00:12:840 (1) - bend it more. For example middle point to 260;264. Looks really better. done (move midpoint a bit diff tho)
6. 00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Straight stream a bit borring for me maybe change based on more feedback, i personally like it

Best of luck! Imo nice to be your first ranked mapset :3 if i can find bn's :p

B r o k e n wrote:

My Modding Queue
For Easy and Normal end the Kiai time like u did for hard and insane oops XD fixed

Easy
Looks Good
Some single beat notes can be changed into 1/2 sliders(or stack them instead)

Normal
Looks Good

Hard

00:00:794 (2) - these guitar slider followers doesn't fit too well, transaction is pretty bad, I suggest not to do this they're fine
00:26:022 (2,3,4) - change one of these slider into 2 single notes? I suggest 00:26:476 (3) - maybe, doing this would lose consistency with previous section but i see what you mean, idk
00:31:703 (2) - break this into 1/2 slider with a single note at the end for better fit, full beat slider fits pretty well, but it's just not in my liking, do it to your liking no thanks, your suggestion doesn't follow the vocal which is what i'm doing with my current pattern
00:39:885- the empty space here feels weird, change 00:38:749 (2,3,4) - to follow vocals better? following drums here though
00:49:658 (3) - you don't really need the spin for hard and can follow the music, but I'm guessing you wanna avoid doing same thing as the Insane i'm confused? theres no spinner? uhhh?? idk

Insane

00:49:658 (3) - stack under the 1? might as well, theirs really no need to distance it a bit further unless you wanna do a jump, distances it more doing this would make it much harder to read, also the vocals are getting more 'intense' here so it also adds a bit more emphasis on that

Not much, but hope this helped

MkGuh wrote:

Hello again =)

I've checked metadata, and I noticed that title is not (TV Size), it is (TV Ver.)
You can have the proofs here on his official website Check Track 4 on Disc 1.
And on amazon down the page till you see tracklist, then you'll see that it is the same c:

http://puu.sh/oh05L/96782f1156.png
http://puu.sh/oh06m/c36b5d17ac.png

Hope I've helped GL!

pinataman wrote:

Hi. Returning the kindness of your NM queue, though this one is shorter than yours. Good choice in song selection. Hope this helps!

[General]

• Duplicated (unused) storyboard file(s)
galileo galilei - aoi shiori (tv size) (log off now).osb which one do i delete fixed

• Unused hitsounds:
{normal-hitwhistle2.wav} {soft-hitwhistle3.wav} idk why these didn't delete the first time XD fixed

[Hard Insane]

i'm pretty sure you modded the insane diff since these comments don't make any sense on hard XD

00:02:840 (3) – I like having a jump here, I just think it's a bit too big. Try lowering to around 1.7-1.8x DS
00:06:476 (3) – Similar maybe change, I personally think they're fine but if more people suggest change then I will do

00:16:249 (5) – The spacing into this is rather big here. Is there a reason besides maintaining a certain design? Is there an equally good design that has a more appropriate spacing? The vocal rises up here which is my justification for this jump and I personally think it's fine

00:27:385 (1) – This note is kind of strong, so I'd like to see a jump into this (~2.0x?) I don't think it's that strong imo, 00:26:476 (5,6,7) - are much stronger due to the vocals compared to 00:27:158 (8,1) - where the vocals are much more relaxed

00:43:749 (1,3) – (3) looks close to (1)'s head than to (1)'s end, so it looks odd. Try setting it up so that the tangent line at (3)'s end is perpendicular to the tangent line at (1)'s midpoint: http://puu.sh/oii5F/fd55039bad.jpg maybe change, I designed this like it is because it's a more triangular flow which makes it consistent with 00:36:476 (1,2,3) - although if more people suggest I change this in a similar manner then I'll take a look at it

Big Paragraphs

00:55:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) – I think this is the most intense part of the song, since all of 00:51:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) – is building tension and then releasing it here. So it feels a little underwhelming that places like 00:56:476 (3) – and 00:57:385 (1) – have relatively low spacing compared to earlier sections like 00:19:203 (4) - and 00:23:749 (1) – (for this last one, you should definitely have a strong jump there, just not one that sets my expectations too high that I get underwhelmed if you don't make 00:57:385 (1) – strong too). This is one reason I've been pestering you about lowering some of the spacings in the earlier parts, which is one way to approach this issue, but also just increasing the spacing for the chorus works, though a little of both is probably best. Another thing I like to do, at least of Insane difficulties, is to make the SV bigger in the stronger sections, so I could see an SV of 1.10x for the kiai being nice, though it's fine without it. This fits into the discussion of pacing, and this is a good video to watch if you're interested: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E

Ok I understand what you're getting at here and have applied some of your suggestions, although I think you need to look at what I'm following at each section of the music, and the style of the map in those specific sections. I try to keep a consistency throughout the map for each section, and whilst I have emphasized some of that in the chorus I could also emphasize it a little better (which I have done so) but I have not changed any of the spacing in the lower section purely because of the intensity of the vocal/drum section that I am following.

I did watch that video you linked and it did give me some tips (and also helped me a little for my course at uni) but most of it was inapplicable due to the difference between horror games and rhythm games, some people find more relaxing maps more fun than crazy jump maps and due to the nature of this song I decided to go with a more relaxing style with appropriate climax points instead of bigger jumps at occasional places to emphasize one part better and another part worse. I hope this made sense XD

01:19:203 (1,4) – This overlap doesn't look great, see what you can do about that changed a bit

Good luck!

1. Dude I don't understand the purpose of this:
   

   1. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB/blank-1366x768.png",320,240
       S,0,-1705,89364,1
       C,0,-1705,89364,0,0,0

   2. If I haven't mistaken, this thing isn't effect anything in the storyboard, so might as well deleting it to decrease the load.

1. 00:53:294 (2,3) - Optional but you can Ctrl+g this so both finishes will be clickable.
2. 01:16:930 (4,1) - Blanket.
3. 01:24:657 (1) - A soft finish with a lower volume sounds better imo.

1. 00:21:931 (1) - Not like it really matters but I would prefer a rhythm denser than this cuz I don't think this long repeat slider really emphasizes anything unlike 00:23:749 (3) which sounds better with a high-pitch vocal. Also another reason for preferring a denser rhythm is you put 2 1/1 repeat sliders and it's kinda bland imo.
2. 00:34:658 (4) - Like, you just suddenly decided to follow vocal here while the rest of the song you mapped other objects on instruments. So it's outright confusing when you have to switch between vocals and drums on 00:34:658 (4,5) . My suggestion here is if you didn't map vocal in the first place then don't map it randomly, just ignore those vocals on blue ticks and map instruments normally. Same applies to 00:55:567 (1) - 00:59:203 (1) .

1. 00:00:794 (2,4,2,4) - Would be much better in this section if you didn't ignore those white ticks there, imo white ticks sounds more audible compared to some of the red ones you mapped.
2. 00:34:658 (1,2) - Same thing as Normal I guess, I tripped up 00:35:567 (3,4,5) completely because I thought I was following vocal.
3. 00:53:749 (3,4) - I find this uncomfortable due to a high spacing here unlike 01:23:748 (4,5) .

1. 00:08:522 (5,6) - Not sure if it's just me but the spacing here is soo biggg.
2. 00:41:703 (6,1) - This really deserves more spacing imo.

Electoz wrote:

Dude I'm ashamed of myself I haven't finish my gd yet. dude XD

[Storyboard]

1. Dude I don't understand the purpose of this:
   

   1. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB/blank-1366x768.png",320,240
       S,0,-1705,89364,1
       C,0,-1705,89364,0,0,0

   2. If I haven't mistaken, this thing isn't effect anything in the storyboard, so might as well deleting it to decrease the load.

Well actually I don't do SB stuff from queue anymore but I forgot to put it out from the thread, so I didn't really take a look at it that much, sry.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:294 (2,3) - Optional but you can Ctrl+g this so both finishes will be clickable. maybe
2. 01:16:930 (4,1) - Blanket. fixed
3. 01:24:657 (1) - A soft finish with a lower volume sounds better imo. dropped volume but the end is on an open hihat and not cymbal, hence why i chose not to use the soft finish hs here

[Normal]

1. 00:21:931 (1) - Not like it really matters but I would prefer a rhythm denser than this cuz I don't think this long repeat slider really emphasizes anything unlike 00:23:749 (3) which sounds better with a high-pitch vocal. Also another reason for preferring a denser rhythm is you put 2 1/1 repeat sliders and it's kinda bland imo. imo i think it's fine, don't want to over do this difficulty with 1/2 and the 1/1 sliders fit imo
2. 00:34:658 (4) - Like, you just suddenly decided to follow vocal here while the rest of the song you mapped other objects on instruments. So it's outright confusing when you have to switch between vocals and drums on 00:34:658 (4,5) . My suggestion here is if you didn't map vocal in the first place then don't map it randomly, just ignore those vocals on blue ticks and map instruments normally. changed Same applies to 00:55:567 (1) - 00:59:203 (1) The previous parts of this section also followed the vocals .

[Hard]

1. 00:00:794 (2,4,2,4) - Would be much better in this section if you didn't ignore those white ticks there, imo white ticks sounds more audible compared to some of the red ones you mapped. fs q.q ok so since everyone hates this i'll change it
2. 00:34:658 (1,2) - Same thing as Normal I guess, I tripped up 00:35:567 (3,4,5) completely because I thought I was following vocal. this does follow the vocal (all be a bit loosely) along with the drums
3. 00:53:749 (3,4) - I find this uncomfortable due to a high spacing here unlike 01:23:748 (4,5) . reduced spacing a little bit

[Insane]

1. 00:08:522 (5,6) - Not sure if it's just me but the spacing here is soo biggg. reduced
2. 00:41:703 (6,1) - This really deserves more spacing imo. increased a tiny bit

Nothing much to say with this mapset, good luck~

Naxess wrote:

From Queue

[Easy]

SPOILER

1. 00:21:931 (1) - Try placing red points on beats in sliders like these. You could solve it like this, for example:
   
   00:32:840 (1) - ^ you'll find that the red points are slightly off the beats in this one. They should be exactly on the white ticks for best effect. done, sort of?
2. 00:51:022 (1) - This looks a bit plain, in my opinion, how about this? maybe change, i like the blanket it has on 4 but i see your point and your suggestion would also accent the snare, so maybe change
   
3. 01:06:476 (1) - I'd suggest making the red point more defined, for example like this:
   
   Because right now it feels too subtle in my opinion. I think it's fine, and your suggestion would hinder the simple flow i have going on at this section
   01:08:294 (3) - Remember to place them exactly on the beat (go to the beat on the timeline and line the slider up to the turn is exactly on the ball). Anyway, enough of that.
4. 01:10:112 (1) - I'd make this note a slider with tail on 01:11:021 , because you're sort of missing the vocal here. following drums on this combo since it's a build up to an important drum fill, although most of the map is following the drums anyway since vocals are hard to follow for newer players
5. 01:24:885 (1) - Try not to include spinners at the end of the song if the ending is soft. Remember that the player will, if they are trying to get a high score, be spinning very intensely and it probably won't fit to the music at all. Perhaps you should just remove the spinner and end the difficulty instead, that'd be fine in my opinion. I don't really see this as a valid point, If I mapped this like I have done in the insane difficulty it just becomes way too overmapped for an easy difficulty, a spinner here is perfectly fine imo
6. The rest looks fine, you've got a good consistent rhythm going here.

[Normal]

SPOILER

1. 00:59:203 (1) - This repeat is longer than the others, feels strange holding the following slider for a shorter amount of time than the others. Consider perhaps making 01:00:112 (2,3) a slider, like the one at 00:56:476 (2) , which also has a longer repeat before it. but then I lose the vocals which i'm following, also I honestly think it's fine anyway?
2. 01:24:657 (1) - This note is extremely close to the spinner, plus it's not even in the middle, which makes the mouse movement really clunky if you're looking to get highest score out of the spinner. You may even want to remove the spinner entirely, because of the same reason I mentioned in easy.
   If you're thinking of keeping the spinner, consider ending it at 01:27:157 at least, since the music drops off from here. uhhh, i think you have the wrong difficulty? XD it's as far away as possible. And the audio actually drops off where the spinner ends, i end it on the guitar echo's on purpose
3. Avoid placing two 1/1 sliders of the same combo after each other in normal difficulties, it gets sort of dull. 00:46:476 - You could make this a 1/2 slider and a circle, for example.
   00:38:294 (3,4) - ^ I personally think this is fine? I'm following the drums here and the drums have a simple 1/1 pattern, if I change this then I lose consistency in this section whilst overmapping the vocals
4. I didn't notice anything else in this difficulty.

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I can't really see what beat you're following here. Consider making it similar to the insane difficulty, but with less jumps and perhaps one less note here and there. looks like nobody else can either :/ changing
2. 00:25:567 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion, but you could make every other slider reversed so it makes it slightly more difficult to play.
   
   This fits pretty well, look at 00:21:931 for example, it uses the same technique.
   If you want to keep this pattern consistent throughout the whole song you could do something similar at
   01:06:476 and 01:08:294 perhaps, just a suggestion, though. did something slightly different, nice suggestion
3. 01:11:930 - This whole combo was quite difficult to follow, in my opinion, probably because of this part 01:12:612 (3,4,5,6,7) , where it goes from repeat to slider and circle to circle and circle very quickly. Perhaps you could make 01:13:067 (4,5) a repeat like the other one and 01:13:521 (6,7) a slider instead? maaaaybe change, if more people find it too difficult then i'll follow your suggestion
4. 01:24:771 (1) - Refer to what I said in the previous difficulties about the spinner. Plus 01:24:657 (1) is very far from the middle.

T-Mac wrote:

hello there :^)

[Insane]

change a cool diffname plz, as cool as sb what do i change it too tho?

00:03:294 (1) - 00:06:931 (1) - this shape...i think not very beatiful fixed for the seventh time

00:12:044 - 00:18:635 - silence this slider's end? maybe, depends on further feedback

00:54:658 (1) - silence sliderslide? again maybe

01:27:157 (1,1) - ditto, become more and more quiet0 it does
[Hard]

ar 7 od 6 too high and lose consistency with other difficulties

00:21:931 (1) - what about this? i think after fix it looks become more comfortable http://puu.sh/ojhjU/a4cee8b959.jpg maybe

00:38:294 (1) - try this thyrhm? http://puu.sh/ojhqV/4ae5e6770e.jpg No thanks, following the drums here and don't want to overcomplicate it and make people think i'm following something else

00:53:976 (4,5,6) - 01:23:976 (5,6,7) - in my opinion maybe use a reverse slider is better http://puu.sh/ojhx4/4e2c0aec38.jpg Bit boring and anticlimatic for me imo

01:12:612 (3) - 01:13:067 (4) - why not use the same pattern? ok since a few people suggested it changed

[Normal]

ar 5 Too fast imo for this bpm + would lose consistency across difficulties

01:21:930 (2) - 01:22:839 (3,4) - use the same pattern? maybe, I did this intentionally to act as a sort of build up to the end of the song, although if more people suggest it i'll change it

nothing more found

[Easy]

00:21:931 (1) - the second grey piont in this slider can move up to about (186, 275), http://puu.sh/ojhTj/e0f6483ed4.jpg after move i think it become a little more beautiful :^) reworked slider differently

00:53:294 (2,3) - blanket? No thanks, doing that would change the curved flow too much for my liking

that's all, sorry for noob mod zzz

Boobs wrote:

Insane (3.57 stars, 284 notes)

1. 00:02:613 (2) - I have a problem with this note placement. 00:00:794 (2) should be overlapped with this note. 00:03:067 (4) is stacked but this note is not? changed, was originally meant to be a blanket and might change back if people pick up on it, but it was a bit weird considering other stacks so changed
2. 00:02:613 (2,3,4,1) - Small, narrow jumps are almost always bad. really? I kinda like how these play imo
3. 00:20:113 (1,2,3) - This doesn't make sense to me because this is not small or narrow ????
4. 00:22:385 (2,3,4) - This spacing is inconsistent with the song. 00:22:840 (4,5,6) - This part makes sense to be spread out more than any other part of the song thus far.
   
   nice idea, changed the end part slightly due to the vocals increasing in pitch and volume so I spaced that a bit more, but thanks for the suggestion
5. 00:25:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - AaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaHHHHh. This is actually some-what good but the only problem, and the main problem of this is the clumpy mess. This jump only works if you spread this. This will only work in hard difficulties. 00:28:294 (3,4,5,6,1) You showed me here that you are capable of doing nicely spaced jumps. and mind you, these are the same tempo/pitch/beat. I don't know how I can change this without changing the flow of it because I think it plays really nice and the spacing reflects the rising and lowering vocals nicely
6. 00:54:658 (1) - Slider velocity change to .6x fits better. changed

i have no knowledge or experience with storyboards. Short mod, decently structured map. really like the song, good luck on ranking!

Your NM request from t/443738 is done

Lanturn wrote:

Storyboard mod I guess... Your diffs looked fine to me.

The lyrics at the beginning of the beatmap should really be moved over to the left. Don't forget that if someone plays in 4:3, http://puu.sh/ojS0U.jpg is all they'll see. If you don't care about 4:3, then at least the lyrics shouldn't be going off the screen in 16:9

Same could be said about the lyrics in the top left for 4;3, but it's more optional. I didn't really notice any going off the screen anyways in 16:9.

"Thanks for Playing" should definitely stay on longer. it fades waay too quickly. Especially on the diffs with the spinner at the end. I just barely noticed it! Maybe fade out with the BG?

The stars on the screen at the very end of the map should probably fade out earlier (with the background maybe?) It's a little awkward having the end of the map all black, and then seeing those three stars still going at it.

You don't need "BG.jpg" as you already have the exact same image in "anohana.jpg" I suggest chaging all the SB/bg.jpg to just anohana.jpg. Having anohana.jpg in the background layer of the SB removes it from being seen in the background, but it doesn't mean you can't use it again!

Epiclol wrote:

A TV Ver. beatmap and no video?!?!

I mean you don't have to put a video but in my opinion I think it would go great with this beatmap.
If you want to put a video here's a DL link : Anohana Opening Creditless

and offest should be around -1451

Just saying it again you don't have to c: and I hope this beatmap gets ranked soon!

Lanturn wrote:

Storyboard mod I guess... Your diffs looked fine to me.

The lyrics at the beginning of the beatmap should really be moved over to the left. Don't forget that if someone plays in 4:3, http://puu.sh/ojS0U.jpg is all they'll see. If you don't care about 4:3, then at least the lyrics shouldn't be going off the screen in 16:9

Same could be said about the lyrics in the top left for 4;3, but it's more optional. I didn't really notice any going off the screen anyways in 16:9.

"Thanks for Playing" should definitely stay on longer. it fades waay too quickly. Especially on the diffs with the spinner at the end. I just barely noticed it! Maybe fade out with the BG?

The stars on the screen at the very end of the map should probably fade out earlier (with the background maybe?) It's a little awkward having the end of the map all black, and then seeing those three stars still going at it.

You don't need "BG.jpg" as you already have the exact same image in "anohana.jpg" I suggest chaging all the SB/bg.jpg to just anohana.jpg. Having anohana.jpg in the background layer of the SB removes it from being seen in the background, but it doesn't mean you can't use it again!

Trent83 wrote:

For Itsuki Hako

Storyboard things (for a better stetic)
Lyrics: try to mix the colors grey/white/black in the first part of the song for match it with the BG colors - I think it's not bad. But thanks

00:06:931 (5) - this effect doesn't look good with songs with slow tempo (the begin of the song is slow so try to "un-fade" the black screen) - Fixed.

00:21:931 (1) - Unnecesary pulse, try to do a pulse slowly in this part of the song because this pulse looks pretty bad... sorry - Fixed as well

Particles: try to put the particles out of the screen and move it to the end of it, because they appear at the middle of the screen, and try to give them more movement (try to use move) - Yeah, remake those.

01:13:748 (1) - This pulse doesn't match with the song - Removed

Good storyboard!! - Thanks
i hope you get better at this :3

Trent83 wrote:

From my queue



(sorry for the late reply xDD)

ok let's start

[Song Setup]

Song Setup

*Combo Colours: Remove the white color and the grey color of the combos because in the kiai time hurt the eyes (search in FAQ)
*Tags: !Anohana Intro Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae wo Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai Itsuki Hako" , this is unusless for your map be more creative!
*Title: "青い栞 (TV Ver.)" why not "TV size"? wat????? also if you check metadata provided by MkGuh it's actually (TV Ver.) not TV Size

[Easy]

Easy Diff

00:19:203 (2) - Ctrl+J for a better flow breaks distance spacing and aesthetic q.q
00:31:022 (3,1) - Overlap, this doesn't look good on a easy it's only in the editor
Why not end this spinner 01:24:885 (1) - here 01:27:157 (1) - wanted to also have something playing over the echos to keep the ending consistent in all difficulties

Looking good!

[Normal]

Normal Diff

00:02:613 (4) - Missing note?
00:06:249 (4) - same
00:11:703 (2) - same there are already notes there? XD
00:31:931 (6) - make this curve because here 00:31:931 (6,1) - you kill the flow of an awful way maybe, i personally think its fine but if more people suggest to change it slightly then i will
00:42:840 (6) - Doesn't match with the music if you could suggest something then that might be helpful, otherwise it's going to stay as it is because there are no other patterns allowed in normal difficulties to fit this since it's on a 1/4 beat, i think my current slider fits fine
01:01:021 (4) - same but with the vocals same as above
01:21:021 (1,2) - same but with the vocals following drums here

Not bad...

[Hard]

Hard Diff

00:00:794 (2) - Doesn't match with the music (guitar)
00:04:431 (2) - same still working on a new pattern

and thats all on this diff is really good!

Tatsumaki wrote:

im bad at modding

fuck you for making me remember

Easy:

00:54:203 (3) - move to x:52, y:128, 00:54:658 (1) - move to x:32, y:224 done, nice suggestion
01:24:885 (1) - spinner should 100% end here: http://puu.sh/oAog0/5e905f71f1.jpg
I want to keep the echo's of the guitar in the spinner aswell, doing this also keeps the ending time consistent with the insane diff
Normal

Nothing except same spinner change ^

Hard:

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4) - Mapping to the less prominent guitar in the background sounds a little weird, especially considering the main guitar is mapped to for the other 3 difficulties. remapping the first 6 seconds, still not sure how i can do it though
01:24:771 (1) - Same spinner changes...

Insane:

01:27:157 (1,1,1) - Same with the spinner changes, I really think that the map should end on the final note and the follow "echos" of the guitar should not be mapped. I think it gives a nice fading feeling when playing the map (which fits the song pretty well imo)

General

1. 00:59:203 - I'm confident enough in my japanese to say that the lyrics here are completely off. You should contact Hokichi and get it fixed.
2. Other than that there seems to be nothing. Nice.

Easy

1. 00:21:931 (1) - These long sliders makes the hit sounding seem out of place, when there suddenly isn't any. Consider getting samples for the sliderticks.
2. 00:25:567 (1) - Very small but it might be nice to have the slider change direction right on the tick especially if you decide to go with the above mentioned.
3. 01:08:294 (3) - Same here.

Normal

1. 00:22:840 - I miss a bit of 1/2 rhythm here...
2. Nothing else, really.

Hard

1. 01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - I feel like these need to have a slightly different rhythm compared to the ones at 00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) because it goes from snare drum to bass drum here instead of only snare drum. Consider doing only one kick slider into a 5 circle-long burst or a triple into two kick sliders.
2. There's really not much to say...

Insane

1. 00:03:294 (1) - This slider shape tends to not look great at this size. I suggest either rotating it and having it look like this or completely change the shape into either a straight line or a normal curve.
2. 00:06:931 (1) - I would say the same for this, but somehow it just looks slightly better here though I still think you should change it if you decide to change the previous.

Fuccho wrote:

Heyy! Sorry about the late mod... no worries

General

1. 00:59:203 - I'm confident enough in my japanese to say that the lyrics here are completely off. You should contact Hokichi and get it fixed. sent him a message
2. Other than that there seems to be nothing. Nice.

Easy

1. 00:21:931 (1) - These long sliders makes the hit sounding seem out of place, when there suddenly isn't any. Consider getting samples for the sliderticks. Maybe, not sure on this one since if I have the ticks at full volume that might sound out of place and jarring, and if I have them too quiet it might have the same effect, not sure tbh, thanks for the suggestion though
2. 00:25:567 (1) - Very small but it might be nice to have the slider change direction right on the tick especially if you decide to go with the above mentioned. changed
3. 01:08:294 (3) - Same here.

Normal

1. 00:22:840 - I miss a bit of 1/2 rhythm here... I wanted to give the player some form of 'break' from the more click intensive rhythms and I think that the current pattern still does a decent job of hitting on the main pitch changes, but I do understand what you mean and it maybe somewhat breaks consistency, will think about it
2. Nothing else, really.

Hard

1. 01:23:976 (5,6,7,1) - I feel like these need to have a slightly different rhythm compared to the ones at 00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) because it goes from snare drum to bass drum here instead of only snare drum. Consider doing only one kick slider into a 5 circle-long burst or a triple into two kick sliders. nice idea, changed
2. There's really not much to say...

Insane

1. 00:03:294 (1) - This slider shape tends to not look great at this size. I suggest either rotating it and having it look like this or completely change the shape into either a straight line or a normal curve. i tried
2. 00:06:931 (1) - I would say the same for this, but somehow it just looks slightly better here though I still think you should change it if you decide to change the previous. same

And that's pretty much it. Nothing unrankable except maybe the thing about the SB. You should try finding a BN after fixing that because this map definitely feels ready.
(Sorry again about the late mod)

1. Consider silencing the sliderslide for non-Kiai parts, they're a little calmer and the default sliderslide doesn't match well with that, imo.
2. Combo colour #1 and #4 partially blend with the SB/background - 1 not as much as 4, but I still think you could find better matching ones. 1 could be more on the blue side (fits the blue lyrics nicely) and 4 maybe brown-ish/yellow because of the girls' clothes?
   example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 254,232,184
   Combo2 : 197,226,225
   Combo3 : 218,158,217
   Combo4 : 108,108,255

3. SB - All of the lyrics are cut off in 4:3! Please move the ones on the right side further to the left and the ones on the left further right so they're visible in all resolutions. (screens: http://puu.sh/oMJCO.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMJDi.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK2p.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK2K.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK31.jpg )
   And bg.jpg isn't used, so this file should be removed.
   And the image apparing at 00:07:044 - feels like it's taking a little too long to cover the background, it's incredibly distracting. Consider making this more transparent or blend it in faster?

1. 00:02:840 (4,5) - and 00:06:476 (4) - should be consistent, I think. It's exactaly the same

1. 00:03:294 (1) - and 00:06:931 (1) - the NCs are unnecessary, please remove them
2. 00:35:567 (6) - imo 1/1 slider or two circles would match better here, because the sound on the reverse is rather weak in comparison to the sounds on the white ticks, but the reverse takes away all the ephasis they have. > 00:35:567 - and 00:36:022 - should be better emphasized
3. 00:43:749 (1) - the reverse doesn't work too well here, I think because of the break in the vocals. Consider removing the reverese and adding a circle instead
4. 00:57:385 (3) - and 01:01:021 (4) - similar here. 1/1 slider would work better, I think, especially because of the vocals, they don't end on the 1/2 and new syllabels start on the 1/1 so completely covering them by a 1/1 slider is the best option
5. 01:11:930 (1) - this NC breaks the nc pattern, should be removed. The combo gets rather long, but you might also want to rework the rhythm here a little because it doesn't really fit with the rest of the diff, especially 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5) - . You're adding your own rhythm to the melody and don't follow the actual song with (3,4).. (4) is a rather weak sound, so shouldn't be clickable.. maybe try http://puu.sh/oMLtC.jpg
6. 01:24:771 (1) - 1/4 in Normal is still pretty Hard, please move the spinner to 1/2. (It doesn't make any difference in Std mode, but probably in converts)

1. 00:02:840 (1) - as in Normal, doesn't make any sense.
2. 00:13:749 (3,4) - consider using twi 1/2 sliders instead, there's a stronger sound on the white tick than on (4), so would match better if that was clickable instead (since there are no vocals there to follow)
3. 00:18:294 (1) - pretty random 3/4 slider, there's no other one this part and there's a well audible sound on the 1/2 so would make more sense to snap it to that.
4. 00:34:658 (1,2) - similar here, but there's also a sound on the 1/4, so mapping both seems more reasonable to me. http://puu.sh/oMM2s.jpg
5. 00:55:567 (1) - and 00:57:385 (1) - here, too, but for the Kiai it might be a nice feature. You should consider using Slidertickrate 2 in this diff then, so the 1/2s have a sound on them, too.
6. 01:02:839 (1) - consider rotating this slightly, in 4:3 the reverse could be covered partly by the combo counter.
7. 01:06:021 (3,4) - this jump isn't really comfortable to play and also pretty surprising, since nothing in the music indicates a jump. Consider rearranging this.. (Previous jump patterns were fine because they were sliders, so yay for slider leniency.. xD)
8. 01:11:476 (4,1,2) - anti-jumps don't really fit with the rest of the diff. They're not used anywhere else anywhere, so it's additionally confusing. Just stack them correctly?

1. same about Slidertickrate as in Hard
2. 00:03:294 (1) - Shouldn't this be snapped to 1/8? I'm not sure if it's 1/8 or 1/6, but I think it's on 00:03:692 - and not on the 1/4
   Also, this is a nice exmaple for why the sliderslide should be silenced ><
3. 00:06:931 (1) - end > 1/8
4. 00:11:703 (2) - a random 3/4 again, but the sound on the white tick is muuuch stronger.. should be two circles instead, imo.
   same for 00:18:294 (1) - and several others
5. 00:33:976 (4) - white tick should be clickable, as it's much louder than the other ones
6. 00:41:931 (1) - pretty close to the HP bar, consider rotating it a little?

Squirrel wrote:

Heyo~ :3 Sorry for late!
I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. Consider silencing the sliderslide for non-Kiai parts, they're a little calmer and the default sliderslide doesn't match well with that, imo. sure ok idk why this isnt working help pls
2. Combo colour #1 and #4 partially blend with the SB/background - 1 not as much as 4, but I still think you could find better matching ones. 1 could be more on the blue side (fits the blue lyrics nicely) and 4 maybe brown-ish/yellow because of the girls' clothes? sure those colours are pretty nice
   example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 254,232,184
   Combo2 : 197,226,225
   Combo3 : 218,158,217
   Combo4 : 108,108,255

3. SB - All of the lyrics are cut off in 4:3! Please move the ones on the right side further to the left and the ones on the left further right so they're visible in all resolutions. (screens: http://puu.sh/oMJCO.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMJDi.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK2p.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK2K.jpg ; http://puu.sh/oMK31.jpg )
   And bg.jpg isn't used, so this file should be removed.
   And the image apparing at 00:07:044 - feels like it's taking a little too long to cover the background, it's incredibly distracting. Consider making this more transparent or blend it in faster? PM'd SB'er

Easy

1. 00:02:840 (4,5) - and 00:06:476 (4) - should be consistent, I think. It's exactaly the same I disagree, there are hihats played on the red tick and last tick being an open hihat, wanted to map this part of the music aswell as the main melody

Normal

1. 00:03:294 (1) - and 00:06:931 (1) - the NCs are unnecessary, please remove them ok
2. 00:35:567 (6) - imo 1/1 slider or two circles would match better here, because the sound on the reverse is rather weak in comparison to the sounds on the white ticks, but the reverse takes away all the ephasis they have. > 00:35:567 - and 00:36:022 - should be better emphasized not sure on how i can add this whilst keeping the current shape without having to remap much of the following section
3. 00:43:749 (1) - the reverse doesn't work too well here, I think because of the break in the vocals. Consider removing the reverese and adding a circle instead I personally think this is fine since i'm mainly following the drums and ride cymbal here, this also adds consistency to the previous two combo's before it
4. 00:57:385 (3) - and 01:01:021 (4) - similar here. 1/1 slider would work better, I think, especially because of the vocals, they don't end on the 1/2 and new syllabels start on the 1/1 so completely covering them by a 1/1 slider is the best option I'm not sure on how I can change this first suggestion without remapping a lot of the following combos, I have applied the second suggestion though
5. 01:11:930 (1) - this NC breaks the nc pattern, should be removed. The combo gets rather long, but you might also want to rework the rhythm here a little because it doesn't really fit with the rest of the diff, especially 01:12:385 (2,3,4,5) - . You're adding your own rhythm to the melody and don't follow the actual song with (3,4).. (4) is a rather weak sound, so shouldn't be clickable.. maybe try http://puu.sh/oMLtC.jpg I kept the first part of this pattern the same since there is a build up on the (2,3) however I did use your suggestion for the second half of the combo (since my original had emphasis on all the wrong parts)
6. 01:24:771 (1) - 1/4 in Normal is still pretty Hard, please move the spinner to 1/2. (It doesn't make any difference in Std mode, but probably in converts) changed

Hard

1. 00:02:840 (1) - as in Normal, doesn't make any sense. changed
2. 00:13:749 (3,4) - consider using twi 1/2 sliders instead, there's a stronger sound on the white tick than on (4), so would match better if that was clickable instead (since there are no vocals there to follow) changed, nice idea
3. 00:18:294 (1) - pretty random 3/4 slider, there's no other one this part and there's a well audible sound on the 1/2 so would make more sense to snap it to that. fixed
4. 00:34:658 (1,2) - similar here, but there's also a sound on the 1/4, so mapping both seems more reasonable to me. http://puu.sh/oMM2s.jpg nice suggestion again, changed
5. 00:55:567 (1) - and 00:57:385 (1) - here, too, but for the Kiai it might be a nice feature. You should consider using Slidertickrate 2 in this diff then, so the 1/2s have a sound on them, too. maybe, unsure about this suggestion but will keep it in mind
6. 01:02:839 (1) - consider rotating this slightly, in 4:3 the reverse could be covered partly by the combo counter. done, slightly xd
7. 01:06:021 (3,4) - this jump isn't really comfortable to play and also pretty surprising, since nothing in the music indicates a jump. Consider rearranging this.. (Previous jump patterns were fine because they were sliders, so yay for slider leniency.. xD) changed, although i think my new pattern is a bit shit too lmao
8. 01:11:476 (4,1,2) - anti-jumps don't really fit with the rest of the diff. They're not used anywhere else anywhere, so it's additionally confusing. Just stack them correctly? fixed

Insane

1. same about Slidertickrate as in Hard
2. 00:03:294 (1) - Shouldn't this be snapped to 1/8? I'm not sure if it's 1/8 or 1/6, but I think it's on 00:03:692 - and not on the 1/4
   Also, this is a nice exmaple for why the sliderslide should be silenced >< yeah you're right its 1/8, didnt notice this XD thanks!
3. 00:06:931 (1) - end > 1/8 ^
4. 00:11:703 (2) - a random 3/4 again, but the sound on the white tick is muuuch stronger.. should be two circles instead, imo.
   same for 00:18:294 (1) - and several others fixed i think
5. 00:33:976 (4) - white tick should be clickable, as it's much louder than the other ones changed
6. 00:41:931 (1) - pretty close to the HP bar, consider rotating it a little? rotated a little

Overall, the set looks okay, but imo the Hard and Insane are incredibly inconsistent with the extended slider usage. If you decide to skip very strong beats by extending sliders to 3/4 you have to do this consistenly, otherwise it feels completely random.

Good luck! //squee

JBHyperion wrote:

Storyboard: Why does the "Thanks For Playing" text not fade in like the rest of the lyrics and such? Considering the song is fading and calm at this point, I feel it would be more fitting if the SB did the same, unless you want to add some kind of pulse/lighting effect to emphasize the sudden appearance - Yes, I'll fix

JBHyperion wrote:

Huge apologies for being so late ):

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: Offset sounds noticably early for me, 133ms (+20) sounds much better really? i think it's fine, i also took the mp3 and timing from another ranked mapset, so i don't think that this is an issue? will double check though
5. Hitsounds: Didn't check waveforms as I don't have access to Audacity atm, otherwise fine
6. AImod: No issues
7. Storyboard: Why does the "Thanks For Playing" text not fade in like the rest of the lyrics and such? Considering the song is fading and calm at this point, I feel it would be more fitting if the SB did the same, unless you want to add some kind of pulse/lighting effect to emphasize the sudden appearance

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

1. 00:12:840 (3) - Would rotate this tail anticlockwise slightly so it's pointing more between both of 00:11:931 (2,4) - flow into this from (2) is slightly odd-looking with the difference in angle here. Same thing at 00:20:113 (3) - but this one should go anticlockwise a little fixed, i think
2. 00:27:385 (2,3,1,2) - Slider heads/tails could be arranged into a more uniform square/diamond shape for a cleaner aesthetic - although they don't overlap visibly during play, currently 00:27:385 (2,2) are very close together ok i see your point, but im not sure on how i can do this without changing the flow of the majority of the combo, any ideas?
3. 00:32:840 (1,3) - This is very close to a visible overlap, and even if it doesn't affect readability, it still comes off feeling a bit cramped. I'd prefer if 00:34:658 (2,3) were moved down slightly, try making an equal triangular pattern with these done
4. 00:37:385 (2,4) - ^ Borderline overlap also fixed
5. 00:43:749 (1,2) - Blanket is very slightly lopsided here, you can see this if you quickly Ctrl+G (1) and use the approach circle at 00:43:408 as a guide. Rotating each of these a degree or two away from each other should fix this fixed i think
6. 01:16:930 (4,1) - Move the second grey slider anchor to [212,328] for a slight blanket improvement here done
7. 01:24:657 (1,1) - Would prefer to have a bit more spacing between note+spinner here at this BPM, since the spinner appears well before the last note is to be clicked which can be distracting for newer players Starting the spinner at 01:25:112 would provide more reaction time for new players and also coincides nicely with the first high pitch guitar sound. changed

Incidentally, why is there a whistle sound on the spinner end when the music has completely faded out at this point? I'd remove the whistle and end the spinner at 01:27:839 - (shift your green volume-reducing lines back 1/2 too) instead since I can't hear anything beyond this point and doing this evenly finishes up your 1/1 guitar rhythm. If you apply any or all of these suggestions, do the same for all diffs to maintain consistency

I removed the whistle since it was too loud and out of place for the music, but the guitar keeps fading until the red tick so I've left it there.

Normal
Kinda curious as to why you used lower DS here than in the Easy but oh well xD

1. 00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Personal preference, but find this very repetitive and not the most interesting start to the diff. The 1/2 sounds are generally quite weak so swapping out a couple of these for 1/1 sliders would add some nice variety in patterning here ehh idk it sounds a bit off imo having a mixture of the two, so will wait for a few more suggestions on this one
2. 00:50:567 (5,1) - Blanket nazi in me wants (1) to be rotated a degree clockwise, using (5)'s approach circle at 00:49:999 as a guide. If this bothers you, don't forget (1) is also blanketed by 00:51:931 (2) - which also has an off-blanket hue fixed
3. 01:00:567 (3,4) - You've been blanketing all previous patterns like this pmuch perfectly but all of a sudden you have this awkward flat slider blanket which I assume is unintentional. I'd either blanket this as you have been doing or rearrange it in such a way that it's obviously not meant to be a blanket this actually was intentional, because i couldn't get 6 to fit in well with the ds, although now that i blanketed both this way its worked out well
4. 01:11:930 (5) - May be worth NCing this even though your previous combos are all 8/1 - this is the densest part of the diff and your combo does get considerably longer than at any other point here, so NC would offset the difficulty slightly done, also fits nicely on the crash cymbal
5. 01:16:476 (4,5) - Since the red tick and (5) are identical sounds, they should belong to the same object pairing. Swap the order of these to circle + slider
6. 01:23:748 (5,6) - Your hitsounding here suggests more emphasis on the first sound than the following 3, so circle + 1/2 repeat slider would be more fitting here not sure on how i can do this without making an ugly overlap on the last note, so left as is unless you can think of a way to do it? :p

Hard

1. 00:00:113 (1,2,3,4) - 00:03:749 (1,2,3,4) - What are you following here? The strong sounds are on white ticks but you skipped most of them by mapping them as slider bodies... Seems like a very artificial rhythm to me, and whilst I appreciate the effort to be creative, it's not fitting the song for me at all im still not sure how to remap this, i dont want a copy of the insane, will figure something out lol ok i remapped it
2. 00:15:567 (3,4,1) - How about making an equal triangle between these? Current patterns is close enough to look like it's intended to be that way, but executed sloppily. Same applies to other places such as 00:20:113 (1,2,3) - 00:21:931 (1,2,3) - etc. An example of one you did really well is 00:29:203 (1,2,3) if you need a reference done, i think :p
3. 00:21:931 (1,2,3,4,1) - I find it quite unexpected that you suddenly included jumps here by inverting sliders when these are fairly average intensity sounds, but there is only minor increase in spacing to the very strong vocal at (1). Since you're introducing jumps for the first time in this diff, it would be better to use them singularly to begin with (or at least following a more clear concept) than the pattern you have now, which is very likely to confuse players. not sure what you meant here, also i don't understand what you mean by the very strong vocal at (1), the spacing gradually increases building up the next combo and having a large jump at the start doesnt make sense
4. 00:26:476 (3,4) - For example here you didn't invert sliders to create a jump whilst you did for 00:25:567 (1,2) so again the player is cast into doubt about what the jump placement is following and how the rhythm indicates where following jumps are likely to be the spacing is based on the vocals, there is no majorr vocal or change in vocals on the 3/4 so there is no jump
5. 00:32:385 (3,4,1) - Suggest spacing these out a tiny bit more (like you have for 00:34:658 (1,2,3) -) so the combo number is readable on (4). This will make the pattern more readable as slider - circle - slider done
6. 00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) - Really interesting pattern, I had my doubts initially but it's clear and executed nicely. I would suggest reducing the distance to this from 00:53:749 (3) slightly though to give the player a bit more chance to react, since this isn't really an "expected" pattern based on what you've been mapping previously (lots of repeat sliders and slider - circle - slider stuff) thanks ^^ done
7. 01:13:521 (5,6,1) - 01:16:703 (4,5,6) - Recommend making these consistent (either way is fine) to make the 1/4 tapped patterns more clearly readable. Reading something is always easier once you've seen it before! ok will change this in a later update, i need to decide which XD
8. 01:24:203 (6,7,8,9,1) - This is a huge difficulty spike right at the end of the song and hugely unexpected for this level of difficulty. Re-using 00:53:976 (4,5,6,1) or a combination of slider - repeat slider - (circle?) would be much more appropriate here i thought so too when i changed it and i was unsure. originally i reused the pattern i used to bring in the kiai, so i've done that

Insane

1. 00:03:294 (1,1) - 00:06:931 (1,1) - Though the extension to a 7/8 slider does kinda fit with the music, a 1/8 slider transition is highly likely to result in annoying sliderbreaks and dropped combo here. For the sake of such a weak sound, it's not worth it - 3/4 slider would be more appropriate changed
2. 00:12:158 (4) - Ending the slider on a strong drum sound detracts from the emphasis you've been adding previously by making these clickable. Since the vocal on (5) is much weaker and less deserving of being clickable, I'd suggest swapping the order of 00:12:158 (4,5) changed
3. 00:21:931 (1,2,3,4) - Sharp flow is kinda awkward to play and not really fitting with the calm, smooth vocals here. Not saying you have to go for a totally circular flow here, but I feel that smoother transitions would be more fitting and play better at this point i kinda disagree here, the vocals are rising in pitch is a relatively big contrast to the rest of this section, so i thought a sharper flow would make more sense here to contrast with the section
4. 00:25:113 (4,1,2,3) - Flow is very odd here since you have a jump to (1), antijump to (2) followed by a larger jump to (3), all in the same direction, so the player is forced to stop uncomfortably between (1,2). You might want to do some reshuffling here, but for a simple test, try Crtl+G (1,2) and 00:26:249 (4,6) and then stack (2) back on top of (6) to create a more comfortable direction change on (1,2) that avoids the flowbreak honestly your retest plays pretty nice and still keeps main spacing that i was after creating to follow the vocals, nice
5. 00:41:931 (1,1) - Overlap here could be avoided - based on your surrounding patterns, moiving 00:40:794 (3,1) - so the circle and slider head respectively stack with the tail of 00:44:658 (3) would work if you don't mind respacing a few objects, but it should minimize the amount of slider remaking you need to do
6. 00:49:203 (1,3) - Intentional off-stack? Looks kind of awkward to me, would prefer these to be stacked it was but it does look better stacked :p
7. 01:11:021 (3,4) - Very difficult to read this return jump with (4) placed under 01:10:567 (2) -'s tail. I'd prefer these to be separated for easier readability. Same goes for similar patterns such as 01:13:748 (1,3) - 01:15:567 (1,3) ok so i moved 4 a little further away from under 2's tail, but i don't think it's that difficult at all, i guess i could ask for a few more test plays and see, but i don't think it's too hard (same goes for others mentioned)
8. 01:11:930 (1,3,4,5) - ^ Less confusing since the triplet is stacked, but if you do the above you may want to change this one too to be consistent
9. 01:28:067 (1) - Would have preferred you to keep the spinner for some score differentiation but oh well. If you shortened the spinner to the white tick in the other diffs, remove this last circle for consistency. You may also want to swap 01:27:157 (1,1) to a circle + 1/2 repeat slider pattern, since these notes follow a fading progression going to keep these since the gradual pitch change is on every 2 notes

Again, sorry for being so late, but hopefully you find this useful. Don't hesitate to get back to me if you have any questions or would like me to explain something in more detail.

Good luck! (:

jeanzy wrote:

Hey ^^

Easy:

01:01:021 (3) - Not sure if this slightly goes off edge of screen, Maybe Re position slightly fixed


Normal:

01:16:476 (4,5) - I would switch the slider and the circle around. since the two notes hit by the 5 are the same hitsound i made them a slider, changing these around would change the hitsound emphasis which i don't want to do



Hard:

00:25:340 (4,1) - Dont think this is needed. Would replace kick slider with a single circle
00:28:976 (4,1) - Same here
00:32:385 (3,4,1) - and here - See you have placed them for guitar sounds, but for hard diff, i think these arent needed.

maybe change these, I kinda like them, it also makes the open hihat playable when it occurs which I really wanted to make sure I got in the map



Insane:

00:03:294 (1,1) - Reduce sound of the slider end on to the 2nd slider
00:06:931 (1,1) - Same here sure (still figuring out how to silence them lmao)
00:43:067 (2,3,4) - Maybe a bit too spaced? I think they're fine
00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would change this part to:

pictures

Big image o__o

Not a fan of the first idea, but I can understand why you did what you did on the second idea. I don't want to do this since this part is a major contrast to the rest of the song, for instance this only happens twice in the entire map, and even then the second time is slightly different. I wanted to differentiate this part from the rest of the map in terms of aesthetics and flow, which I think I've done here with the straight angled stream. I might change if a few more people suggest it, but I prefer it this way.

Alveryn wrote:

soft-sliderslide.wav is never used. I think you should change all the soft sampleset timings to Custom:1


Tags: Add "opening" "op" "Blue Bookmark"

source

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Galileo_Galilei_(band)
http://www.generasia.com/wiki/Galileo_Galilei
http://anohana.wikia.com/wiki/%E9%9D%92 ... _Bookmark&#41;

-Nya- wrote:

Hey~ M4M here.

Insane:

1. 00:02:840 (3,4) –These two jumps feels a bit too big to me considering the music is calm here. I suggest lowering the spacing a bit. fix
2. 00:06:476 (3,4) -^ fix
3. 00:06:476 (3,2) –Check this stack please. You can improve it. fix
4. 00:07:613 (2,6) –You can stack here as well. It’ll make the diff look neater. I would but I'm not sure about the spacing change needed to fix it, maybe fix
5. 00:12:385 (5) –Place this slider upwards so it’s in the zigzag pattern with 00:11:703 (2,3,4) – Make it in-line with 00:11:931 (3) – and blanketing 00:12:158 (4) – Like this: nice
   
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6. 00:12:840 (1) –Increase the spacing here a bit because there’s a loud beat on the head of the slider. fix
7. 00:18:294 (1) -^ fix
8. 00:18:749 (2) –There’s a loud beat on this circle so making a jump here will be nice. no thanks, i don't think it needs that much emphasis tbh since it's not on the 1 and its pretty consistent with the rest of the diff so far imo
9. 00:22:840 (4) –Ctrl+G this slider so the flow doesn’t go the same direction as 00:21:931 (1) – good idea
10. 00:26:022 (304) –Make the spacing here similar to 00:25:567 (1,2) – It’ll look tidier imo. changed a bit
11. 00:27:840 (2) –Increase the spacing here to support the loud beat on the head of the slider. Right now it looks very underspaced, compared to the previous spacings. increase a little, can't find a good way to keep the flow coming into 3 whilst increasing the spacing a lot
12. 00:30:567 (4,3,4) –Stack here for neatness reasons. not a fan of this, a lot of the map is like this visually and want to keep it conistent, maybe if more people say they dont like it ill change it
13. 00:34:203 (5) –Move this circle to about X: 392 Y: 220, so that 00:33:749 (3,4,5) – is a neat triangle. ok
14. 01:12:612 (3,4,5) –Move these to X:308 Y:56 for neatness reasons. ok

Hard:

1. 00:02:840 (1,2) –Perhaps change these two circles into a slider to show that the music here is different than 00:02:613 (6) – no thanks, if i do that then i would lose a lot of emphasis on the different section
2. 00:06:476 (1,2) -^ ^
3. 00:09:885 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) –Why are the spacings here different? It’s more spaced which looks inconsistent. Try keeping the spacings consistent. idk XD changed
4. 00:21:931 (1,2) –This flow is a bit uncomfortable imo and the jump is also big. Perhaps try something like this instead: maybe, i actually really like this section zzz and i don't think its too hard at all, will ask for some testplays
   
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5. 00:22:840 (3,4) –This spacing also looks a bit big. Just move (4) a bit upwards. fixed
6. 00:26:022 (2) –Maybe something like this instead to compliment 00:25:567 (1) – again maybe, i wanted to alternate between curved and straight
   
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7. 00:26:931 (4,2) –Stack here. ok
8. 00:31:022 (1,2) –Make these two sliders’ shapes similar for tidiness. i dont think its untidy
9. 00:39:885 –Add a note here because there’s a vocal. i want the emphasis to be on the snare, and i think if i add a note it loses that emphasis, sometimes silence is also a powerful as sound
10. 00:48:976 -^
11. 00:50:794 -^
12. 00:53:749 (3) –This circle-jump is way too big for a Hard imo. Nerf it a bit. ok
13. 01:04:657 (1,1) –Try to avoid this overlap. this doesn't show up in game, only in editor, i think its fine altho if more people want me to fix i will
14. 01:11:476 (4,1,2) –Stack these three normally because you didn’t stack like this anywhere else. stacked them this way because no other parts of the map are played like this, although if other people think it should be a proper stack then ill change

Normal:

1. Check AiMod. Spacing errors. where?
2. 00:21:476 (5) –Change this slider into a curved one like 00:21:022 (4) – ok
3. 00:48:294 (2) –Move the tail of this slider upwards a bit, so it’s not completely horizontal. Will make flow better imo. ok, just a little
4. 00:51:022 (1,2) –This spacing is definitely too big. oops, forgot to ctrl g back gg
5. 01:11:021 (3) –Move this slider to about X:356 Y:76 for better flow. i prefer the offset look, and the difference is extremely small
6. 01:13:294 (4) –Move this one to X:204 Y:364. ^
7. 01:21:021 (1,2,3) –This pattern will look neater if you make these three sliders parallel to each other. agreed

Easy:

1. 01:06:021 (4) –Lift this circle upwards a bit for better flow from 01:04:657 (3) – ok

Very nice mapset overall~
Looks ready for rank to me.
Catch me in-game if you have any questions.

Good Luck~!

DaTopBull wrote:

Thought you could sneak this past me in my queue? I don't think so you sly dog you.

Insane

00:03:294 (1)
I think this slider would better off serve as either a single note ending where it starts, or bypassing the slider at 00:03:749 (1) and ending where THAT one starts. (I recommend number ONE, but TWO is still an option c: ) I disagree here, I tried your first option but prefer my current one because it follows the fade of the note which I somewhat make a theme of in this difficulty. Option two isn't as good as I would then be ignoring the downbeat and the start of the next bar which is much more important

00:06:931 (1,1)
^ same reason as above

00:23:522 (6)
Stack this with this 00:22:840 (4) sliders start fixed up the aesthetic a bit but still kept it as an offstack for better readability

00:29:885 (2)
Blanket this with this 00:29:203 (1) (Like this for examplehttp://puu.sh/rbF9D/e44cb071b8.jpg) maybe, i like the flow i have currently but i understand the reasoning behind this, if its gets pointed out more i'll change

00:43:067 (2,3,4)
Imo, these are better off stacked all in one spot I disagree here, these snares are pretty intense and in contrast to the rest of this section so I decided to showcase that further by having them placed as they are

01:11:248 (4)
Stack this under this slider head maybe? 01:10:567 (2) again tided up aesthetic but kept offstack for readability

01:14:430 (3)
^ with this slider 01:13:748 (1) same as above

Went and looked through all the other diffs but couldn't find anything wrong.

I really want this to be ranked! Good luck on getting it there!!! <3