forum

S.H.E. - chung kuo hua-Chinese

posted
Total Posts
20
Topic Starter
shindrgon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2008年10月26日 at 下午 12:31:42

Artist: S.H.E.
Title: Chung Kuo Hua-Chinese
BPM: 100
Filesize: 6919kb
Play Time: 02:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.39 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Hard (4.54 stars, 300 notes)
  3. SOUSEI ! (4.63 stars, 437 notes)
Download: S.H.E. - Chung Kuo Hua-Chinese
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
This is my first map .
The song is in S.H.E ( Selina , Hebe , Ella ) 10th album "Play".
It is a really interesting song , hope you will like it !

2008/8/26 Added easy/SOUSEI ! difficulty.
2008/8/31 Changed chung kuo hua to Chung Kuo Hua which MaxwellDemon suggested
2008/9/12 Changed timing to 100.00 instead of 100.02
deepsea
I like this map, though it is too difficult for me.

Maybe making an easier difficulty is a good idea.


I am not expert, just two suggestions:

1.the offset "MIGHT" be 290?I am not pertty sure.

2.The top of picture was cut, I just saw half of head, maybe adjust the size of picture is a good idea.


Also bump it up so that experts may see it.

Download: Horie Yui - Baby, I love you! (orioncomet) [3].osu
deepsea
revived from graveyard, and also starred

deepsea
the bpm and offset is ok for me, since my offset is on red line, it seems nothing different.And James confirmed.

easy:
00:27:59s and 00:34:79s:since you didnt lower the drain rate, more than 10 combos seems too hard to biginners.

the map is rankable for me except 2 issues:

1.some of sliders and or begin on 1/4, I think its too hard for biginners?

2.also, I think spacing in hard is ok to close distance snap sometimes like that since it is [Hard], but in easy and normal,they may be confusing for biginners.I suggest use distance snap for basic in easy and normal.

I am only a noob, there may be something that I neglected so I wont bubble or rank maps these days, after fixing this I will ask another BATs to check it.
deepsea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MaxwellDemon
I suggest renaming the map to S.H.E - Chung Kuo Hua... remember to FULL SUBMIT it!

Now onto the actual map...

Easy

00:14:99 (1) - I suggest reducing the length of the slider, so the kick is on the red tick (1/4 beat behind)... ask dipsy if you aren't clear what I am saying. :3
00:48:89 (1,1,1) - I think all of these sliders song better if they were extended by 1/2 beat...
00:53:68 (1) - Same thing as above
02:07:47 (1) - Whoa! Confusing slider! Make it straight or something, a player needs to know how a slider goes!
02:09:27 (1) - Extend the slider by 1/4th again then...
02:12:87 (1) - Have the spinner start at 02:13:17... and end at 02:16:47

Hard

00:14:99 (1) - Reduce slider by 1/4th... end at 00:15:89 instead
00:16:19 (1) - Same thing
00:26:84 (2,3) - Sounds better if you move both beat 1/4th forward...
00:28:04 (2,3) - Same thing here
00:58:48 (1,1,1,1,1) - All reduce by 1/4th
01:34:03 (2,3) - Same thing as 00:26:84
01:35:23 (2,3) - Here too
01:43:47 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Spread it out, don't stack it into one huge stack... beats that are not separated by the same time should not be stacked together like that!
01:54:87 (1,1,1) - Overlapping sliders...try to have the end of the sliders pointing at different directions to indicate that a player should hold for the next three hits
01:56:07 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same thing as 00:58:48
01:59:67 (1,1,1) - I think these three sliders should just be normal beat circles with finish off... but that's your choice there
02:00:87 (1,1) - Reduce by 1/4th again XD
02:09:57 (1) - Kinda hard to see this is a slider :/

I am gonna leave the list like that for now... I am afraid I am gonna demote the bubble to a star though.

On a side note, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me (or ask dipsy to ask me if your English isn't very good). Don't be discourage, I think this is a really good map! It just needs a lot of minor reworks.
Sinistro
Bpm is 100.00 instead of 100.02. Change it, then recalculate slider lengths and resnap all notes. Some of your sliders will have become longer, so go over your beatmap carefully and fix them manually. Remember to do this on all three difficulties :)

For some reason the countdown does not fit with the song's tempo. I'd suggest you remove it from all three difficulties.

I can't say I'm crazy about all the overlapping going on between sliders and hitcircles here, but since no slider paths are completely obscured by another slider, I guess it's fair game and I should not grumble too much.
MaxwellDemon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
deepsea
Hmm you did fix most of issues that sin and maxwell said, though some notes in SOUSEI! are hard to see for me, but I think that may cause by my poor skill, I will ask other BATs to confirm this. What you need todo next is to resnap all notes, make them on ticks

關於SOUSEI!!的滾輪我會問其他的BATS,你接下來需要做的事是讓所有的notes對齊時間軸上面的線。
MaxwellDemon
He still hasn't changed his BPM to what Sinistro suggested. So, no more further modding or starring until he does~
MaxwellDemon
Er... took another look... where did the offset go? XD
deepsea

MaxwellDemon wrote:

Er... took another look... where did the offset go? XD
0 offset is fine for me, or did you get another offset?(I suck at timing><)
MaxwellDemon
James
insane:
nothing wrong because its super hard

hard:
i hate the last part starting at those sliders. i was 300-ing everything until that part ( 01:54:900~end )
im not saying that you change it, i just dont like it :P

easy:
nothing wrong too, i saw something but i cant find it anymore so i guess its all rigth now.

EDIT:
i did not rank it yet because i need to ask him something.
James
hard/insane: tick rate 4. i think i mentioned about changing the tick rate to 2, but i was wrong. it sounds better using tick rate 4 with those long sliders.

hard:
im not sure about this section. (02:09:30~END) you might want to think about changing this one.

insane:
mainly what am i going to mention here are just "move this note by 1-2 grids. especially those no comments beside it.
just to make it *kinda* spaced properly
00:17:40 (1) -
00:19:80 (1) -
00:26:40 (1) -
00:26:85 (3) -
00:27:60 (1) -
00:28:05 (3) -
00:41:10 (1) -
01:31:80 (5) - slider change
01:37:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move this combo farther
01:38:70 (1,1) - slider change
01:38:70 (1,1) - slider change
01:43:50 (1,2,3) - farther by a bit
James
i approve of this now.

other mods that will take a look at this should check the following:
1. the back-and-forth placement of circles which is a little bit confusing.
2. Hard: 02:12:30 (1,1,1,1) - its kinda confusing for me, i thought the last two notes are sliders too. might have been just me.
James
bump
ThePassingShadow
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Tritsch-Tratsch-Polka - Always Smiling - DDR Mario Mix (Kurizu529) [Lightgazer's Hard].osu
m980
TPS linked me to this.. So..

I think it's fine. Sousei may confuse the hell out of people though.

Good Luck with the Streams.

Ranked.
Sousei
y u keep namin thins after me
Please sign in to reply.

New reply