1. First Class (2,51 stars, 254 notes)
2. Novice (1,56 stars, 150 notes)
3. Second Class (3,54 stars, 448 notes)

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
forestbg.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[Hard]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1820 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:820.

Spinner Length
02:26:820 (1) - This spinner is 7954 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play.

[Normal]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1820 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:820.

Spinner Length
02:26:820 (1) - This spinner is 7954 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play.

WazZzaA123 wrote:

[Hard]
00:40:910 (3) - add finish
00:43:638 (1) - ^
00:49:092 (1) - Finish at head
00:55:456 (3) - finish
00:59:547 (4) - finish here or head of 01:00:001 (1) -
01:02:729 (3) - Finish at tail
01:14:547 (1) - Finish head
01:17:274 (3) - Finish tail
01:39:092 (3) - Finish

[Normal]
00:33:638 (1) - Finish head
00:40:910 (4) - Finish

Look for other finishes theres alot

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
forestbg.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. Actually 1366x768 is the recommended BG size for 16:9, so there's no problem with it :p

[Hard]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1820 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fixed

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:820. Why? it's totally fine, there's no need to add a break imo

Spinner Length
02:26:820 (1) - This spinner is 7954 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play. I reduced it a bit, now it's 7273 ms

[Normal]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1820 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:820.

Spinner Length
02:26:820 (1) - This spinner is 7954 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play.

Kagetsu wrote:

[Hard]

1. cs 3 no es muy bajo para una hard? yo lo dejaria en 3,5 por ultimo xd Al final lo dejé como normal xd así que lo dejaré así de momento
2. el patron de NC es muy facil para una hard xd, si te fijas bien los numeros casi ni llegan al 4, recomendaria mas ponerlos cada 8 ticks blancos
3. 00:04:547 (2) - quizas ponerlo hacia arriba
   sugerencia

   
   lo moví un poco, pero no tanto como en la sugerencia xd
4. 00:03:638 (1) - sinceramente no me gustan mucho estos ritmos 3/2 , si escuchas bien el sonido en 00:04:092 - es mucho mas fuerte que en 00:04:320 - entonces deberias centrarte en mapear eso
5. 00:06:138 (2,3,1) - seria mejor si eso estuviese alineado
   sugerencia

   ]
   ahí creo que lo arreglé
6. 00:08:183 (2,1) - quizas podrias hacer que estuvieran en 90° me parece bien
7. 00:38:524 - seguro que no quieres mapear eso? D: se supone que es la diff mas dificil, entonces no hay por que ignorar esos sonidos Te entiendo, pero la diff va más centrada a ser normal, en general el mapset es fácil, así que no quiero mapear eso D:
8. 01:05:910 - ese beat es super fuerte como para no mapearlo fixed
9. 01:07:729 - lo mismo, quizas deberias escuchar un poquito mas la musica porque te estas perdiendo muchos ritmos D: Lo sé xd pero quiero que esa parte sea más calmada
10. 02:06:592 - muy undermapped ahi xd
11. 02:07:501 - lo mismo

hmm son casi los mismos "errores" en casi todo el mapa, entonces no vale la pena seguir diciendo "lo mismo" todo el rato, te aconsejaria que escucharas un poquito mas los beats, que es lo que deberias seguir

buena suerte <3

P A N wrote:

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- Frontier - wrote:

From this shit queue

[Easy]
00:05:456 (1) - NC I think that adding a NC every two white ticks is enough so it doesn't become too monotonous.
00:12:729 (1) - ^
00:20:001 (1) - overlap and also NC fixed overlap overall
01:00:001 (1) - asymmetry slider why asymmetry here? the red node there is on purpose
02:18:183 (3) - just copy 02:16:365 (1) it well I just think it's look better copying it so.. changed

[Normal]
00:01:820 (1) - 256|252 for blanket blanketed
00:18:183 (1) - NC for consistency i'll leave it with a NC there
00:21:820 (4) - ^
00:37:729 - note here added
00:52:274 - ^ ^

Very Good Map !! Good luck !!
Shoot stars ~

-Smine- wrote:

First Job Class

00:30:910 (1) - 1 beat slider and circle is better here, no? 2 beats is very ''easy'' and this section has a higher intense than the before section
00:36:365 (1) - ^ Could be, but here I'm following this 'piano/violin' sound which last till 00:31:820 -

Second Job Class

01:00:910 (5) - make this equal to this 01:01:251 (6) - (same angle) What do you mean by that? they have same angle owo

Only this, good map thank you

Riven wrote:

[Novice]

1. 00:08:638 (3,3) - these are kinda weird since they're not snapped correctly to the instrument you're following. so i suggest having two 1/1 sliders for these 00:07:274 (2,3) - . that way you avoid the awkward rhythm by having it on a sliderend. or you can do 2/1 sliders - read below
2. btw why are these 00:21:820 (2,2) - sliders but here 00:07:274 (2,3,2,3) - you do slider circle for the same sound? yes all fixed here

[First Class Job]

1. 01:20:001 (1,2) - this is inconsistent with this 01:05:456 (1,2,3) - just pick the rhythm you like more and make it consistent. cuz right now you have a sliderend on the same sound you made clickable before which doesn't rly make sense. nice catch

[Second Job Class]

1. 00:15:910 (6) - i believe this is the first time you map to the echo effect and not the main instrument, but i don't think it should be clickable since it's not dynamic, try having it on a sliderend? alright did a reverse slider
2. 00:31:592 (4,5,6,7,8) - you're trying to follow a little bit of everything here and it ends up not working out imo. if you had this 00:31:365 - as a 1/2 slider it would give a cooler effect with the high pitch sound it ends on. sure
3. 00:37:274 - slider? I honestly want to make 00:37:047 (4,5,6,7,8) - all these clickable due to the notorious snares
4. 01:22:729 (5,6,7) - if you turn stacking on you can see how this triple has different spacing than 01:23:638 (1,2,3) - this because of stacking. you should probably take a look at the whole kiai and make them equally spaced throughout. my bad lmao, fixed

also i didn't like the background size being 1600x1200 so i tried making it 16:9. this took longer than i'd like to admit https://i.imgur.com/3j0HaXK.jpg thank you very much!!

good luck!

-Light- wrote:

[Second Job Class]

00:17:274 (3,4) - here you increasing spacing to 1.6 00:20:910 (3,4) - and then you back to 1 00:22:729 (2,3) - and then you increasing spacing to 1.4,but that sounds the same yes fixed
00:41:820 (1) - maybe more spacing to emphasize strong sound? okay
01:13:524 - maybe add note here,it sounds better i think there's no distinct sound there, both 01:13:410 - 01:13:638 - prevail more imo
01:21:820 (1) - maybe stack with 01:20:910 (3) - because there's no overlaps in this section before I did that before so yeah, fixed
01:33:638 (3,4) - i think something like this would be better https://i.imgur.com/qpjPC9g.png I tried but I think my current pattern is more interesting

[Novice]

00:40:001 (3) - nc maybe?
00:54:547 (3) - ^ I prefer to keep having consistent NC there

nice map,gl

-    Unicode Title: Purity of Your Smile
-   Unicode Artist: SoundTeMP
-           Source: Ragnarok Online
-               or: ラグナロクオンライン

- References:
+ https://noff.s-ul.eu/Hd4cCwGR
+ https://noff.s-ul.eu/lttK56nU
+ http://www.playragnarok.com/
+ https://ragnarokonline.gungho.jp/fun/goods/cd-dvd/12648.html

1. 00:22:729 (3) - Looks like this ended up using the drum sampleset by mistake, fix it back to auto o: .
2. 00:23:638 (1,2) - Compared to the previous two combos, this stood out as a bit odd to me because the two sliders here don't really "match" eachother, and I think it'd be really nice if you could figure a way in which they would. maybe?
3. 00:50:910 (4) - This slider is unusally curved compared to most curved sliders in the map, I suggest adjusting it simply like this
4. 01:11:820 (2,3) - Mayybe rotate (3) by 13 degrees and position it like this ? http://puu.sh/zLvLL/70f4e47a11.jpg right now it looks a bit out of place involving its harsh red angles so soon following two parallel sliders, with it itself being nearly but not quite parallel.
5. 01:43:638 (1,2) - super nice (along with other slidershapes in this mapset) <3

1. 00:45:456 to 01:17:729 - This section is really biased towards the right side of the screen... Like, it barely goes into the left beyond a certain point at all. It was enough to be noticable and make the gameplay feel a bit unbalanced, to me at least. Consider looking into adjustments for that :s all objects selected
2. 00:10:001 - 00:13:638 - (just for this difficulty) possibly add whistles to these slider heads since the sliders 00:09:092 (1,2) - 00:12:729 (1,2) - are meant to be matching and are hit to similar notes? I think it sounds nice
3. 00:18:183 (1) - consider adjusting the slider like this for a smoother more even curve in the middle? c:
4. 00:37:729 (2,3,1,2) - vs 00:39:774 (4,1,2,3) - how about make 00:37:956 (3,1) - form a straight line as well? This would be more consistent with the majority of similar patterns throughout the difficulty.
5. 00:49:092 (1,1) - These look like they're supposed to be in the same spot, but they're not. Should get that fixed :0c
6. 01:35:456 (2) - While I get what it's held to, it ending on 01:36:138 - where other patterns often started feels wrong. Maybe shorten it and add a circle at 01:36:138 - , and contrast the 01:34:547 (1,2) - sounds here with slidershapes instead like how you did in Second Job Class?
7. 02:26:820 - I don't really see why this note was skipped. It's a very important note and begins the slowdown that the 02:27:320 (1) - spinner is mapped over, atm it feels really empty without any type of circle or slider at this time.

1. 02:26:820 - Same as mentioned in First Job Class, but for this difficulty also consider mapping 02:27:070 - as well if you do so. It may be part of a bpm slowdown, but the change in the song is obvious enough that someone able to handle the rest of the difficulty shouldn't see much problem with this. (or maybe as a 1/2 slider?)
2. 00:30:910 (1,2,3) - the combination of low spacing between 1->2 and the stack of 2->3 ends up in this bit looking rather awkward, and the stack a bit less easy to notice. I suggest increasing the 1->2 spacing to .65, similar to.. uh.. most following similar patterns in the map.
3. 01:07:274 (1,2,3) - & 01:08:183 (5,6,7) - these are supposed to be similar but the spacing is lower in the (5,6,7) group, (1,2,3) is close but not touching and (5,6,7) is.. touching. Increase the spacing between 5 and 6 a tad.
4. 01:38:183 (1,2,3,4) - The transition here feels mega awkward, because the curve of the 234 triple is doesn't connect at all to the notes before and after it. maybe

1. Estás seguro del spread? para mi la Novice es como una Easy y la que sigue como una Advanced o.o O sea, pasaste de no usar 1/2 ni una sola vez a darle alto uso. La gran diferencia se siente :c yo creo que una diff entre esas dos le caería bien al set~

1. 00:35:456 (2,3) - Sugiero empezar aquí con slider. Para los principiantes, después de un break seria mas fácil comenzar con un slider cuando van a estar mapeado ritmo 1/1 consecutivo. O sea, a este bpm si me parece bien que tengas dos círculos 1/1 seguidos, pero si están para comenzar después de un break o el gap que se encuentra aquí, es mas difícil agarrar el ritmo. No es un problema, solo una simple sugerencia, sientete libre de rechazarla sin explicación. Esto que mencione cambien aplica para 00:50:001 (2,3) -
2. 00:57:274 (2,3) - Se verían mejor alineados

1. 00:56:365 (1,2) - 01:29:092 (1,2) - mejorar blankets?

Noffy wrote:

I'm here /w\ o/

First off:
Consider using a slightly different sound for "soft-hitwhistle2.wav". Currently it blends so well it doesn't really... add much noticable to the hitsounding >: Umm but isn't it the idea to match hitsounds with similar sounds in the music? O.o I really feel it's fine xp

Second, do you have any references for the current title? I tried looking around, but only found "Purity of Your Smile" (Your and Smile being capitalized at the starts) Wow thank you dude! Yes, with those sources I just can say you're right. Added the japanese translation to tags though~

If I missed some source for that just let me know
otherwise, fix it~ (osu is buggy when changing capitalization in the romanised fields directly, so you may need to change it to something like Purity of Your Smiley first and THEN make it the actual proper title. Otherwise osu tends to delete difficulties. yeah.)

-    Unicode Title: Purity of Your Smile
-   Unicode Artist: SoundTeMP
-           Source: Ragnarok Online
-               or: ラグナロクオンライン

- References:
+ https://noff.s-ul.eu/Hd4cCwGR
+ https://noff.s-ul.eu/lttK56nU
+ http://www.playragnarok.com/
+ https://ragnarokonline.gungho.jp/fun/goods/cd-dvd/12648.html

In all diffs:
01:39:092 - 01:53:638 - , I think these two spots are deserving of finishes due to being very similar to the directly preceding 01:30:001 - and 01:39:092 - etc, as the melody/rhythm repeats but the hitsounding is differing, and sounds a bit off, imo. added

02:13:638 - 02:20:910 - In novice, these spots had clap+finish but in the other difficulties, only finishes. Not sure why that's different o: . . . yeah, my bad

[Novice]

1. 00:22:729 (3) - Looks like this ended up using the drum sampleset by mistake, fix it back to auto o: . fixed
2. 00:23:638 (1,2) - Compared to the previous two combos, this stood out as a bit odd to me because the two sliders here don't really "match" eachother, and I think it'd be really nice if you could figure a way in which they would. maybe? that would be too monotonous to follow imo, i think my current pattern isn't that odd to stand out from other patterns
3. 00:50:910 (4) - This slider is unusally curved compared to most curved sliders in the map, I suggest adjusting it simply like this yup
4. 01:11:820 (2,3) - Mayybe rotate (3) by 13 degrees and position it like this ? http://puu.sh/zLvLL/70f4e47a11.jpg right now it looks a bit out of place involving its harsh red angles so soon following two parallel sliders, with it itself being nearly but not quite parallel. yes, looks good
5. 01:43:638 (1,2) - super nice (along with other slidershapes in this mapset) <3 owo thank you >.<

[First Job Class]

1. 00:45:456 to 01:17:729 - This section is really biased towards the right side of the screen... Like, it barely goes into the left beyond a certain point at all. It was enough to be noticable and make the gameplay feel a bit unbalanced, to me at least. Consider looking into adjustments for that :s all objects selected yes, did something with it.
2. 00:10:001 - 00:13:638 - (just for this difficulty) possibly add whistles to these slider heads since the sliders 00:09:092 (1,2) - 00:12:729 (1,2) - are meant to be matching and are hit to similar notes? I think it sounds nice hmm yeah but, 00:09:092 - 00:10:001 - have different tones in the music, so i wanted to differentiate them. Also for such a calm part in the music, I felt like adding 2 consecutive whistles like that is too annoying D:
3. 00:18:183 (1) - consider adjusting the slider like this for a smoother more even curve in the middle? c: yup, sounds good
4. 00:37:729 (2,3,1,2) - vs 00:39:774 (4,1,2,3) - how about make 00:37:956 (3,1) - form a straight line as well? This would be more consistent with the majority of similar patterns throughout the difficulty. fixed
5. 00:49:092 (1,1) - These look like they're supposed to be in the same spot, but they're not. Should get that fixed :0c i already moved them so objects aren't that much on the left side of the screen
6. 01:35:456 (2) - While I get what it's held to, it ending on 01:36:138 - where other patterns often started feels wrong. Maybe shorten it and add a circle at 01:36:138 - , and contrast the 01:34:547 (1,2) - sounds here with slidershapes instead like how you did in Second Job Class? Tried to add a circle 01:36:138 - here but tbh I didn't really like it. I want to differentiate 01:34:547 (1,2) - both slider, and since SV is generally low, I prefer to have 01:35:456 (2) - this slider extended. HOWEVER, I did change the shape of 01:34:547 (1) - to generate some contrast
7. 02:26:820 - I don't really see why this note was skipped. It's a very important note and begins the slowdown that the 02:27:320 (1) - spinner is mapped over, atm it feels really empty without any type of circle or slider at this time. okay, added a circle to other diffs aswell

[Second Job Class]

1. 02:26:820 - Same as mentioned in First Job Class, but for this difficulty also consider mapping 02:27:070 - as well if you do so. It may be part of a bpm slowdown, but the change in the song is obvious enough that someone able to handle the rest of the difficulty shouldn't see much problem with this. (or maybe as a 1/2 slider?) added a 1/2 slider instead
2. 00:30:910 (1,2,3) - the combination of low spacing between 1->2 and the stack of 2->3 ends up in this bit looking rather awkward, and the stack a bit less easy to notice. I suggest increasing the 1->2 spacing to .65, similar to.. uh.. most following similar patterns in the map. oh yeah you're right,
   spacing there was too low compared to others, my bad.
3. 01:07:274 (1,2,3) - & 01:08:183 (5,6,7) - these are supposed to be similar but the spacing is lower in the (5,6,7) group, (1,2,3) is close but not touching and (5,6,7) is.. touching. Increase the spacing between 5 and 6 a tad.
4. 01:38:183 (1,2,3,4) - The transition here feels mega awkward, because the curve of the 234 triple is doesn't connect at all to the notes before and after it. maybe mega fixed

Very pleasant and nice set !!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GIgLqN_rAXU&t=27s

ezek wrote:

hi from my q~

[General]

1. Estás seguro del spread? para mi la Novice es como una Easy y la que sigue como una Advanced o.o O sea, pasaste de no usar 1/2 ni una sola vez a darle alto uso. La gran diferencia se siente :c yo creo que una diff entre esas dos le caería bien al set~ Yo creo que el spread no está tan mal para la intención que lleva. Básicamente la novice tiene ritmos 1/1, la first job tiene 1/2 y la second job tiene 1/4. Además el CS va incrementando por cada diff, por lo que el spread en realidad es igual entre las primeras 2 diffs como en las últimas 2.

[Novice]

1. 00:35:456 (2,3) - Sugiero empezar aquí con slider. Para los principiantes, después de un break seria mas fácil comenzar con un slider cuando van a estar mapeado ritmo 1/1 consecutivo. O sea, a este bpm si me parece bien que tengas dos círculos 1/1 seguidos, pero si están para comenzar después de un break o el gap que se encuentra aquí, es mas difícil agarrar el ritmo. No es un problema, solo una simple sugerencia, sientete libre de rechazarla sin explicación. Esto que mencione cambien aplica para 00:50:001 (2,3) - la verdad no puedo ver esta parte sin 2 círculos que enfatizen cada beat así que prefiero dejarlo como estaba :c
2. 00:57:274 (2,3) - Se verían mejor alineados yes

[Second Job Class]

1. 00:56:365 (1,2) - 01:29:092 (1,2) - mejorar blankets? mejora2

Mi único problema es la incomodidad con el spread, con una diff normal que sea mas fácil que la segunda ya me sentiría cómodo para nominar uwu
Me puedes llamar de regreso una vez que la tengas o si me puedes explicar por que crees que el spread funciona bien como lo está ahorita~

ezek wrote:

El ataque de la pechugona~