Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 25. Februar 2017 at 21:02:03

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: Endless Story (TV Size)
Source: C3 Shikyubu
Tags: cube x cursed curious opening 1 op c3 fear
BPM: 79
Filesize: 15053kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,31 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Endless Story (5,32 stars, 347 notes)
  3. Endless2 80% done (5,28 stars, 345 notes)
  4. Hard (3,07 stars, 195 notes)
  5. Insane (4,8 stars, 335 notes)


Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size)
Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitsound W.I.P.

Easy ~ done
Normal ~ remap W.I.P.
Hard ~ rempap W.I.P.
Insane ~ W.I.P.
Endless Story ~ W.I.P.




P A N
custom name is for the hardest diff in the set only I think.
so maybe change your Endless Story to "Expert"
Topic Starter
[REOL]

P A N wrote:

custom name is for the hardest diff in the set only I think.
so maybe change your Endless Story to "Expert"
changed thx
P A N
I didn't expect kudosu so I think i will give you some suggestion.
NO KUDOSU FOR THIS POST

First is about NC (new combo) you rather add on big which tick.
please add another red line at 00:14:091 to make the line go correctly (also affect the nightcore mods)
e.g. 00:16:658 (6,1) - please switch the NC
00:19:225 (3) - NC
00:49:546 (1,1,1) - I understand what did you do but this is unnecessary. you can keep it first and see what will modder say.
Second is some of your spacing is TOO short.
e.g. 00:20:508 (6) - please increase spacing.
00:31:257 (1,2) - ^
Third is rhythm, some of your rhythm is undermapped.
e.g. 00:47:139 (3) - some rhythm like this is more fit with the song.
01:06:391 (4) - should be circle instead and add something at 01:06:551 (red tick) and add finish hitsound.

the mod above is just an example and you can use these cases to apply the whole diff. good luck!

p.s. better make your hardest diff to be X (extra)(5.25 stars) icon.
Topic Starter
[REOL]

P A N wrote:

I didn't expect kudosu so I think i will give you some suggestion.
NO KUDOSU FOR THIS POST

First is about NC (new combo) you rather add on big which tick.
please add another red line at 00:14:091 to make the line go correctly (also affect the nightcore mods)
e.g. 00:16:658 (6,1) - please switch the NC
00:19:225 (3) - NC
00:49:546 (1,1,1) - I understand what did you do but this is unnecessary. you can keep it first and see what will modder say.
Second is some of your spacing is TOO short.
e.g. 00:20:508 (6) - please increase spacing.
00:31:257 (1,2) - ^
Third is rhythm, some of your rhythm is undermapped.
e.g. 00:47:139 (3) - some rhythm like this is more fit with the song.
01:06:391 (4) - should be circle instead and add something at 01:06:551 (red tick) and add finish hitsound.

the mod above is just an example and you can use these cases to apply the whole diff. good luck!

p.s. better make your hardest diff to be X (extra)(5.25 stars) icon.
thx for your mod i still try to improve myself in mapping so i'm thankful for your suggestion and i think this helps me alot
everything you mention i have changed a bit
hilmann23
Insane diff.
01:01:578 (1) - Blanket this slider properly?
01:24:037 (3) - Somehow the slider here dosent look nice if you overlap it like this :/
Endless Story diff.
00:14:893 (1) - this circle is placed weirdly. I get that your trying to flow with the slider at 00:15:054 (2) - but you should just reverse the selection of the slider and it will still flow well :)
00:19:867 (1) - feels like a weird random overlap :/
Extra diff.
00:35:107 (2) - try using a DS of 1.4x for this part as it seems to cramped for 00:35:427 (4) - and the circle 00:35:749 (5) - dosent flow well

Im still a beginner tho but overall, Nothing much else to say other then some minor mistakes that I observed. Very well done map! I like the flow and dem blankets :) good luck and all the best :D
Topic Starter
[REOL]

hilmann23 wrote:

Insane diff.
01:01:578 (1) - Blanket this slider properly? fixed
01:24:037 (3) - Somehow the slider here dosent look nice if you overlap it like this :/ changed postion
Endless Story diff.
00:14:893 (1) - this circle is placed weirdly. I get that your trying to flow with the slider at 00:15:054 (2) - but you should just reverse the selection of the slider and it will still flow well :)changed
00:19:867 (1) - feels like a weird random overlap :/ i know i always forgot to change this ~ changed
Extra diff.
00:35:107 (2) - try using a DS of 1.4x for this part as it seems to cramped for 00:35:427 (4) - and the circle 00:35:749 (5) - dosent flow well changed ~ i hope this is better now?

Im still a beginner tho but overall, Nothing much else to say other then some minor mistakes that I observed. Very well done map! I like the flow and dem blankets :) good luck and all the best :D
thx for your mod :D
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