[General]
-Remove annoying countdown in the settings.
-For all difficulties under Insane, USE distance snap.
-Have to even PLAYED these difficulty yourself?
-All difficulties but easy: Why in the world are the sizes all the same? Increase by 2 for normal and by 1 for hard. Having them all the same would be problematic for ranking.
-Did you even bother with the slider velocities?
-Make sure that all the maps practically have the same length, unless one ends with a elongated slider and another ends with a spinner. In this case, the map that ends with the elongated slider will have less time length then the map with the spinner, which in this case, you can't really do much about it and it's acceptable.
-Don't be a Scrooge and put all of your kudosu on your map. It's up to the decision of the osu community whether your map is ready for rank, not YOU.
00:17:470 - It would be better if the spinner of all but easy difficulties started here, since easy already has the spinner starting here.
[Insane]
General Notes:
- There's a rather uncomfortable lack of a consistent spacing. People usually don't have spacing on "insane" difficulties for reasons that may include that they expect for players to be more experienced, but because there's a lack of constant spacing between object, it feels like the objects are just put there because you just clicked once and decided "ah, that should be fine."
00:19:570 (2,3) - Fix the direction of these two so that they don't get in the way of object 5.
00:20:320 (5,6) - Spacing. You do realize that the space only looks fine because this object is the same amount of distance away from the END of slider 6 as do the distances between 00:20:470 (6,7,8), which is much more acceptable.
00:23:320 (3,4) - Same problem as above
00:25:570 (4,5,6) - Inconstant spacing
00:28:570 (6) - If the object is going to be here, then move it farther away from object 7 for means of readability. Objects 7-11 are fine since they have relatively the same spacing, but this spacing to timing ratio from 6 to 7 needs to be increased to prevent confusion.
00:31:270 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing; it looks jumbled.
00:35:320 (6,7) - Spacing between objects
00:36:520 (10,11) - Distance between these two is not the same as the previous objects
00:40:570 (1,2,3) - Make a decision on what distance to use for all three.
00:57:520 (6,7,8) - Make distance between the end of slider 6, object 7 and slider 8 consistent like a triangle.
01:00:970 (8,9,10,11,1) - Either make the distance between 8-10 farther away, or the distance between 10-1 closer.
01:19:870 (9,10,11) - Move 10 so that the spacing is equal
01:22:270 (5) - LOL Y SO CURVY
01:27:970 (2,3,4) - Spacing is still a problem here
01:28:870 (5,6,7) - ^
01:30:520 (10,11) - If you're going to have these two in the map, I'd recommend to move it above slider 9.
01:38:470 (4,5,6) - Spacing. Move 6 farther away to prevent confusion.
01:57:970 (7,8,9) - Inconsistent spacing
02:00:370 (6,7,8) - Check the spacing again; look at the approach circles in editor to get a hint.
02:06:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - Who are you expecting to play this, Cookiezi?
02:15:970 (4,5,6) - At this difficulty (considering that this "insane" difficulty is still considered "hard" under the start rating system), this is VERY impossible. Move them closer together.
02:18:670 (4) - Reverse the slider because the spacing between 3 and 4 is getting out of hand...
02:19:270 (5,6,7) - This is only if you did what is above, but if you did so, move these objects to the left more.
02:20:770 (1,2,3) - This is similar spacing like 02:20:170 (8,9), but move 02:20:770 (1,2,3) more closer to each other to prevent confusion.
02:21:970 (1) - Move this object a bit down so that the spacing between 02:21:670 (4,5,1) is all the same.
02:35:170 (3,4) - If you're going to stack then, then make the stack equal distanced between the end of 02:34:570 (2) and 02:35:470 (1).
02:37:570 (3,4,5) - The distance between 4 and 5 is unacceptable under this difficulty.
02:39:970 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Choose a constant spacing for this "stream."
02:40:870 (10,1) - Too close for comfort. Move then farther apart.
02:45:070 (1,2,3) - You can do this is slider 3 is reversed
[Hard]
00:34:870 (6) - Fix this slider and turn it into a plain straight slider; it's unsightly.
00:42:370 (7,8) - Distance is a bit too much considering that the distance for 00:42:820 (8,9) is more acceptable for "hard."
00:59:320 (2,3) - This would be fine for an insane difficulty, but this is NOT an insane difficulty. So move these at closer to slider 1, all at equal distance.
01:01:270 (7,8,9) - NO. Move 8 and 9 towards the end of slider 7.
01:20:770 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent distance.
01:21:670 (4,5) - Move 4 away from 3 and 5 away from 4 in all equal distance.
01:27:670 (2) - WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS
01:30:370 (7,8,9) - Move these so that they're NOT under slider 6. This heavily breaks rules of mapping.
01:32:770 (1,2,3) - Choose a consistent spacing
02:06:370 (3,4,5) - Spacing here goes to small to LARGE for hard difficulties.
02:09:070 (1,2) - Just move 2 so that it make a triangle with 1 and 3
02:19:270 (6,7,8,9,1) - Too close to 02:18:670 (5) and make cause confusion. Move the cluster away from 02:18:670 (5).
02:25:720 (1) - Remove New combo
[Normal]
00:20:470 (2,4) - For normal difficulty, I would NOT do this.
00:24:670 (1) - Honestly, a bit too close to slider 2.
00:27:070 (5) - Move this farther away to prevent confusion about the spacing between this slider and the previous object (4)
00:28:270 (6,7) - ^
00:30:670 (9,10) - ^
00:33:070 (1,2) - ^
00:37:870 (2) - ^
00:38:920 (4) - Don't think this is acceptable for a normal difficulty. But since you did this throughout the map, I'll just say to check with an official.
00:48:520 (7,1) - This I KNOW is not acceptable in normal.
00:53:470 (1,2) - Distance compared to other objects upcoming is a bit too much.
01:18:970 (2,3) - I already mentioned that objects under sliders is NOT acceptable.
01:24:670 (4,5,6,1,2) - Questionable spacing between sliders.
02:09:070 (1,2,3) - The distance between 2 and 3 is MUCH larger compared to the distance between 1 and 2.
02:14:320 (1,2) - Distance between these two needs to be fixed.
02:14:770 (2,3) - And here
02:16:570 (2,3) - ^
02:20:470 (3,4) - ^
02:21:070 (4,1) - ^
02:23:470 (3,4,5) - They're all the same distance in terms of timing, but fix the distances so that they're all the same.
[Easy]
-Please use distance snap because you need to have constant distance between objects. Remember, people who play "easy" difficulties are people who are just starting off the game. I bring this up because of the lack of consistent spacing for (practically) all difficulties, like in 00:34:270 (6,7,8) for this difficulty.
-Many of the objects here are mapped like a map made in 2007...
[Final Thoughts]
If you permit me to, I would like to:
-Help with hitsounds
-Make a guest difficulty for this map.
If there are ANY concerns about the map, or there's something here that I modded that you don't understand, people send me a private message.
Good luck,
you'll probably need it considering that you seem new to mapping.
P.S. I JUST realized that you're from Chile. Sorry.