1. Hard - 4Key (2.77 stars, 1743 notes)
2. Insane - 4Key (3.35 stars, 2210 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (1.94 stars, 1216 notes)
4. Replica - 4Key (3.93 stars, 2661 notes)

Normal by Me
(OD : 7.5 | HP 7.5 )
Hard by Me
(OD : 8 | HP 8 )
Insane by Me
(OD : 8.2 | HP 8.2 )
Replica by Me
(OD : 8.5 | HP 8.5 )

Pizza wrote:

Yo PnX!

M4M as requested!

col 0123

General

- Please change the diff name to Easy, Normal, Hard, and Insane, delete the "4K" because this is only 4K key mapset (there is no other keymode, so the "4K" is useless xD) Completed!
-

Insane

- 00:07:977 - Try this, more balanced >> http://puu.sh/nheVU/afbbd281d1.png OR, Please repattern this jack 00:08:236 (8236|2,8409|2,8581|2,8753|2,8926|2,9098|2,9271|2,9443|2) - this is not a good pattern xD
- 00:09:615 (9615|1,9788|1,9960|1,10133|1) - aaaa no, please don't use jack like this if it's not fit to pitch relevancy, please change xD
- 00:14:443 (14443|3,14615|3,14788|3,14960|3) - ^ - Thank, I don't know much about the pattern.
- 00:22:460 (22460|3) - move to 1
- 00:31:943 >> http://puu.sh/nhf9i/a0828f323d.png
- 00:34:702 >> http://puu.sh/nhfcD/9c492abb9c.png
- 00:36:081 (36081|1,36081|3,36081|2) - how about delete one? Because it's only kick sound, and the kick sound layering is just 2 - Okay!
- 00:37:460 (37460|2,37633|2,37805|2,37977|2) - aaa
- 00:50:046 (50046|3) - move to 2 pls
- 00:55:046 (55046|0,55219|0,55391|0,55564|0,55736|0,55909|0,56081|0,56253|0,56426|0) - lol xD Bad pattern.. Try to repattern and don't use this xD
- 03:05:736 (185736|2) - move to 3 for no reason (wait what)
- 03:07:115 (187115|0) - move to 2 for no reason too!
- 03:17:288 (197288|0) - add on 0
- 03:17:374 (197374|1) - add on 1
- 03:17:977 (197977|3) - add on 3
(tips : listen on 25% and 50% on tricky part )

and also learn from previous mods for fixing same problem on the other section, you can do a self-mod ;D

aaa i'll continue my mods for other diff later i'm too lazy lol

nice map!

Pizza wrote:

yo!
i'm here to continue my mods yesterday, no kudosu

col0123

Hard

- 00:21:771 (21771|2,21943|2,21943|0) - ni mini jack pls, try move this to the right
- 00:39:357 (39357|2) - a bit awkward for hand.... try move this to 0, and then move this 00:39:702 (39702|0) - to 1
- 00:47:977 - add on 1, drum sound sound must be layered with 2 notes
- 00:50:736 - ^ add on 2
- 00:56:081 - a bit boring here, use other pattern pls, suggestion >> http://puu.sh/nim3M/abc8dc2067.png
- 01:06:771 (66771|3) - move to 2
- 01:06:943 (66943|2) - move to 0
- 01:10:736 - uhm i think it must be like this >> http://puu.sh/nimbT/8937d20a04.png (don't worry, it's not too hard)
- 01:29:874 - how about this? http://puu.sh/nimfC/cea5553205.png
- 01:54:702 - phew http://puu.sh/nimj1/c75f78ea6b.jpg
- 01:56:771 (116771|2) - delete
- 01:56:943 - add one more here
- from here 03:20:909 to here 03:24:874 , please don't use same pattern, a bit boring aaaaa
- 03:25:909 - remove the LN, try this >> http://puu.sh/nimvi/18604a2c6e.png
- 03:51:943 - >> http://puu.sh/nimyY/4d6b9f9dd5.jpg
- 03:52:460 (232460|0,233322|3) - i think there's no different sound between this LN, consider to merge this
- 03:57:633 - add
- 03:59:012 - add
- 03:59:184 - add
- 04:16:081 >> http://puu.sh/nimIg/d369c86dd1.jpg

just that! hope my mods helpful, you can catch me in game if you need more help again!

ArcherLove wrote:

I think this is ready for rank, pattern is nice I like it

mod

col=1~4

EZ

00:14:012 (14012|0,14702|0) - 00:15:391 (15391|0) - move to 2? / You maybe right.
00:23:667 (23667|1,23840|1) - move to 3
00:45:736 (45736|3) - move to 3
01:04:012 (64012|1) - move to 3
01:15:391 (75391|1) - move t o3
02:59:184 (179184|3) - move to 2
03:38:495 (218495|0) - move to 4

/ all fixed!

NM

00:29:357 (29357|0) - move to 3
02:48:667 (168667|2) - move to 4
03:02:633 (182633|0) - move to 2
03:15:391 (195391|0) - move to 2 / 4 might me better, i thinks.

/ all fixed!

HD

00:41:253 (41253|0) - move to 2
00:48:495 (48495|3) - move to 2
00:49:184 (49184|0) - move to 4

good, reduce some jack maybe? idk it's good zz / yes, i agree with that. I gonna reduce it.

/ all fixed!

MX

03:26:081 - add note? / I think It's well with one note.
04:07:546 - add? / I didn't hear any sound. So, I don't add it.

good luck!~

Lenfried- wrote:

wao long map

col 1-4

MX

00:00:909 (909|2,2288|3) - swap col. Kinda makes more sense w/ pitch + it sets a variety vs the next notes yes.
00:13:495 - add note in col 3 or 4 Nope. I want first stream is more easy than others.
00:39:357 - something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4603045 I wait for this mod for a long time.
00:51:771 - if you're following violin, add note to 2 and move 00:51:598 (51598|1) - to 3 Nope. I think it is good for this pattern.
00:54:960 - dat column 2 though ???
00:55:909 (55909|1) - move to 4 then 00:56:426 (56426|1,56512|0,56598|1) - convert to 1, 2 and 3 respectively then 00:57:719 (57719|2,57805|3,57891|2) - swap col + 00:57:977 (57977|3) - move to 2 It could be better than before, Applied.
04:06:943 (246943|2,247029|3,247115|2,247202|3) - swap col Applied
just a quickie focused on removing certain four consecutive jack patterns

Good luck!

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

1|2|3|4
[Easy]
err no suggestions
[Normal]
00:40:219 - should be 1/3 Oh! I missed it.
03:24:357 (204357|1) - if you're charting the synth, this might be a ghost note Applied!
[Hard]
01:22:288 - strong beat here, might want to add a note Applied!
01:35:046 - should be double for snare Applied!
[Insane]
01:00:909 - the kick is real quiet, consider using a single (it would be consistent with the single at 02:15:391 - anyway) Applied!

Great map! The interesting drum rhythms give the map variety and the streams on Insane are really fun. The patterns look well thought-out: neat, playable, well-structured, etc. Can't think of any other suggestions, so have a star instead.

Level 51 wrote:

From queue!
Actually an amazing map. I thought 4* would be boring but it was actually pretty enjoyable. I especially like that you didn't try to overdo the patterns (:
A lot of these suggestions are very minor, the map is already excellent as it is. Just a few things you may want to consider.

|1|2|3|4|
[Insane]
00:13:581 - add a note here? Nice suggestion, but I think it was better.
00:22:115 (22115|2,22460|0,22805|3) - these notes are real quiet, you might want to consider removing them. but hey there's no harm keeping them in. Nope.
00:35:046 - add a note here to be consistent with 00:32:288 (32288|3,32288|0,32288|2) - ? Nice suggestion, Fixed!
00:37:805 - ^ Fixed!
00:57:805 - may want to consider removing a note here, doesn't sound that loud to me Maybe right!
01:45:046 (105046|3) - remove this note to be consistent with 01:42:288 (102288|2,102460|2) - ? or is that a different sound Applied!
02:36:311 (156311|3,156311|2) - remove one? Applied!
02:42:977 - add a note here? Oh! I missed it. Thanks!
02:44:357 - ^ Fixed!
03:14:874 (194874|3,194874|0) - remove one? can't hear any reason for a double here. Yep!
03:17:460 (197460|0,197460|3) - ^ Fixed!
03:24:184 - add a note at 4? music sounds like it's getting more intense around here. Applied!
04:03:840 (243840|3) - move to 2? Applied!
04:06:512 - add a note at 4? the beat here sounds quite loud too Yep!
04:18:840 - make this a grace note? Nice Suggestion!

[Hard]
Really fun on DT! especially the long single streams really, I didn't play on DT before. I will try it >.<
00:39:357 (39357|0,39443|3) - The actual LN sound only starts at 00:39:529 - . Maybe like this http://puu.sh/noj2U/3b20ed4b80.jpg? Oh! I forgot it, I fixed it in Insane already. Thanks!
02:00:679 - add a note here? if so, 02:00:909 (120909|0) - move to 2 It a soft sound, I want to focus on drum. But thanks for suggestion
02:14:357 - add a note at 2? puts more emphasis here Umm.. Yes!
02:51:943 - I think the Insane pattern is easier than this lol. but it's up to you-- Nope.
03:20:909 - really nice :'> Thanks!
04:07:115 - add a note? Applied!

Song was a bit long so I only modded Insane and Hard - sorry! but here, take a star! o wo)/*

Thanks for mods and star . Many modders like the stream in my map! So, I very appreciate it.
I will apply your mod soon.

deadbill wrote:

hello o/
this is M4M
i will try to be brief and clear in modding your map.
and i will try to give the best shot.

Metadata

according to http://vgmdb.net/album/51516

Original Artist: やなぎなぎ
Romaji Artist: yanaginagi (although, in English it should be Nagi Yanagi ; where surname placed last)
Original Title: 春擬き
Romaji Title: Harumodoki

according to http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/GNCA-380 (the catalogue number is GNCA-380 at vgmdb)

the original source is: "My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU Zoku (Anime)" Intro Theme: Haru Modoki [w/ DVD, Limited Edition]
maybe i am wrong lol

alternatively, maybe if you take the song from the regular edition ( http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/GNCA-381 ),
the source should be:
"My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU Zoku (Anime)" Intro Theme: Haru Modoki [Regular Edition]

the tags is fine btw, if you want you can add the genre of the music which is J-Pop

I will mod the Insane diff.
First thing first,

Hitsound.

Cymbals, kick, tom tom, and snare are the basic drum sounds, although some parts in the song are using low and high variety of the sounds
which osu's hitsound doesn't provide. If it is hard to obtain a custom sample (of course, good samples are almost impossible to be found freely).
you can use the variety of built-in hitsound from osu, for each spesific parts (despite the hi-lo variety, open, crash, etc.).

so, lets begin the drum hitsound mod!

00:00:909 - 00:06:426 dont use kick
00:06:426 - 00:06:771 add rim hitsound (you can use clap in the soft set, alternatively)
00:06:771 - remove this note, since there is none of rim hit here Nice catch! Thanks.
00:07:288 - 00:07:546 - tom-tom roll, you can use clap and finish in the drum set, add it like this
00:07:288 (7288|3) - clap
00:07:374 (7374|2) - finish
00:07:460 (7460|1) - clap
00:07:546 (7546|0) - finish
that way, it will sound like drum tom-tom roll )

00:07:633 - add crash cymbal, you can use normal and whistle in the drum set, simultaneously
00:08:150 - 00:10:219 - more tom-tom roll, you can use you can use clap and finish in the drum set (it started with kick and snare, first)
00:07:977 (7977|2) - kick
00:08:150 - snare
00:10:391 - add crash cymbal, you can use normal and whistle in the drum set, simultaneously
00:10:564 - 00:12:977 - tom-tom roll, started with kick and snare
00:10:564 (10564|1) - kick
00:10:736 (10736|2) - snare
00:13:150 - add crash cymbal, you can use normal and whistle in the drum set, simultaneously
00:13:322 - 00:15:909 - tom-tom roll, started with kick and snare
00:13:322 - kick
00:13:495 - snare
00:15:909 - add crash cymbal, you can use normal and whistle in the drum set, simultaneously
00:15:909 - 00:17:460 - dont use kicks
00:17:460 - 00:17:460 - rim roll, you can use clap in the soft set, alternatively (dont use kicks)
00:18:667 - use open hi-hat cymbal (normal, in drum set; alternatively)

00:19:012 - 00:26:943 -
use this intro pattern,
kick, snare, kick-snare (grace noted), snare-kick (grace noted), snare, kick, kick, snare
filled with hi-hat cymbals

basically,
00:19:012 - kick
00:19:184 - snare
00:19:529 - hihat
00:19:702 - hihat
00:19:960 - kick
00:20:046 - snare
00:20:305 - snare
00:20:391 - kick+closed hihat
00:20:564 - snare+hihat
00:20:909 - kick+hihat
00:21:081 - kick+closed hihat
00:21:426 - snare

then repeat

then the next pattern (intro #2) will be repeated >similarly<
00:29:012 - 00:40:219 - without graced notes, and the pattern is filled with ride cymbals (each 1/1 beat)
the pattern is
kick (1 beat), two kicks (half beats), snare (1 beat), two kicks (half beats),

then
snare (half beats), two kicks (half beats), snare (half), kick (half), closed with splash 00:35:219 (1 beat)

00:35:219 - add splash cymbal, you can use normal and whistle in the drum set, simultaneously
00:35:564 - repeat the previous pattern
00:40:219 - tom-tom roll, you can use clap and finish in the drum set
00:40:219 (40219|3) - clap
00:40:334 (40334|1) - finish
00:40:449 (40449|2) - clap
00:40:564 (40564|3) - finish
00:40:679 (40679|2) - clap
00:40:794 (40794|1) - finish
close it at 00:40:909 - with crash cymbal and clap

the next drum pattern will refer as first verse pattern
at 00:40:909 - 00:45:736 - filled with ride cymbals (each 1/1 beat)
kick (1/2), snare (1/1), kick (1/2), kick (1/1), snare (1/2), kick (1/2), kick (1/2), snare (1 1/2),
kick (1/2), kick (1/1), kick (1/2), snare (1/2), kick (1/2), kick (1 1/2), kick (1/1)

maybe its a little bit confusing ^^;

basically it is like this
00:41:426 - kick
00:41:598 - snare
00:41:943 - kick
00:42:115 - kick
00:42:460 - snare
00:42:633 - kick
00:42:805 - kick
00:42:977 - snare
00:43:495 - kick
00:43:667 - kick
00:44:184 - kick
00:44:357 - snare
00:44:702 - kick
00:44:874 - kick
00:45:391 - kick

00:45:736 - 00:46:426 - "slow roll" at tom-tom, closed with crash cymbal
then repeat the previous pattern until 00:51:598 -

00:51:943 - bridge pattern similar to first verse pattern, only continued with snare then tom-tom roll
00:51:943 - kick
00:52:288 - snare
00:52:633 - kick
00:52:805 - kick
00:52:977 - snare
00:53:150 - kick
00:53:495 - kick
00:53:667 - snare
00:54:012 - kick
00:54:184 - kick
00:54:357 - snare
00:54:702 - snare

00:54:960 - tom-tom roll, you can use clap and finish in the drum set

01:00:219 - reff pattern (from now on, the drum will using the same patterns over and over again)
01:00:219 - kick
01:00:564 - snare
01:01:081 - kick
01:01:253 - snare
01:01:598 - kick
01:01:943 - snare
01:02:288 - kick
01:02:460 - kick
01:02:633 - snare
01:02:977 - kick
01:03:322 - snare
01:03:667 - kick
01:03:840 - kick
01:04:012 - snare

second
01:04:357 - kick
01:04:702 - snare
01:05:046 - kick
01:05:219 - kick
01:05:391 - snare
01:05:736 - kick + crash
01:06:081 - snare
01:06:426 - kick
01:06:598 - kick
01:06:771 - snare
01:06:943 - kick + crash
01:07:288 - kick
01:07:460 - snare
01:07:805 - kick
01:07:977 - kick
01:08:150 - snare + hi tom
01:08:495 - kick
01:08:840 - snare
01:09:184 - kick
01:09:357 - kick
01:09:529 - snare (rim)
01:09:702 - kick
01:10:046 - kick
01:10:219 - snare
01:10:391 - kick

01:10:736 - 01:11:253 - tom-tom roll, (please fill the notes :O)
01:11:253 - repeat the reff pattern
01:20:219 - tom-tom roll

bridge pattern #2
01:21:081 - kick
01:21:253 - snare + crash

01:21:598 - tom tom roll again
01:22:288 -
closed with crash

01:22:633 - started from here, the pattern is filled with 1/4 kicks
01:22:633 - snare
01:22:977 - snare
01:23:150 - kick
01:23:236 - kick
01:23:322 - snare
01:23:495 - kick
01:23:667 - snare
01:23:840 - kick
01:24:012 - snare
01:24:357 - snare
01:24:529 - kick
01:24:615 - kick
01:24:702 - snare

01:24:874 - crash

(#2)
01:25:219 - kick
01:25:305 - kick
01:25:391 - snare
01:25:736 - snare
01:25:909 - kick
01:26:081 - snare
01:26:253 - kick
01:26:426 - snare

01:26:598 - kick
01:26:771 - tom-tom roll

01:27:633 - crash

(repeat #2)
01:27:977 - kick
01:28:064 - kick
01:28:150 - snare
01:28:495 - snare
01:28:667 - kick
01:28:840 - snare
01:29:012 - kick
01:29:184 - snare

01:29:529 - snare
01:29:702 - tom-tom roll

01:32:633 - slow tom-tom roll
01:33:150 - closed with hi-hat or splash

01:33:150 - repeat from the intro pattern

02:51:943 - this part is tom-tom roll, bridge to solo

02:52:977 - since the solo is refering to guitar, i will not say much about this solo part ^^;

followed with 03:14:702 - cymbals roll
and 03:20:909 - snare tom-tom roll

then repeat again the reff pattern at 03:26:426 - through the end of the song.

Thanks for a nice suggestion. I will try it. For some reason, I could rejected it. Sorry for that.

Pattern

Overall is great and comfortable, lol but still in my opinion, you should add the pattern according to the hitsounds, as refer to each drum sound.
However, the risk is that the pattern might be very differ than common ranked map. Still, if you want to do that, i will make a further pattern mod for this diff.
Just PM me

Yes, some of my pattern didn't appears in ranked map. But, I will bet on this pattern. Maybe it have some risk but I think I can rank it. But If you have some suggestion about pattern, you can suggest me.


Thats all~ goodluck

Hamids- wrote:

Hallo PnX request from from

Song Setup

Design

Widescreen Support : uncheck

Col 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

• Easy

  1. 00:40:564 - add 1 note like a stairs
  2. 01:04:357 (64357|1,64529|0) - to hard for easy diff, delete the long note and change be 1 long note end here 01:04:702 -
  3. 01:09:529 (69529|0,69702|2,70046|1,70391|3) - same but change like it http://puu.sh/nqD5D/1bfd7ec6a4.png
  4. 01:15:391 (75391|2,75564|0,75736|3,75909|2,76081|0,76253|1,76426|3) - idk but long note so hard too
  5. 01:54:529 (114529|0) - ghost note
  6. 01:54:702 (114702|2) - move col 1
  7. 01:55:046 (115046|1) - ^ 2
  8. 02:29:874 (149874|1,150046|0,150219|3,150391|2,150736|1,150909|3) - make easiest
  9. 02:32:115 (152115|1,152288|2) - delete (?)
  10. 03:49:012 (229012|0,229357|3,229702|0,230046|1,230391|2,230736|3,231081|1) - make just beat only, cause with long note is very difficult
      too many long note with beat very difficult ><, re-arrange make easy pattern^^
  All Appiled!
  
  
  Normal
  
• 00:07:029 (7029|3) - ghost note Nope
• 00:06:426 (6426|1,6598|2,6684|0,6771|1,7029|3,7115|2,7202|1,7288|0,7374|3,7460|2,7546|1,7633|0,7633|3) - waaaa, normal diff like hard diff ><
• 01:54:702 (114702|1,114788|2,114874|1,114960|3,115046|0,115133|3,115219|1,115305|2) - suggest http://puu.sh/nqEJ3/f65c37e668.jpg
• 02:05:909 (125909|3) - delete
• 03:41:081 (221081|1) - move to col 3
• 03:41:598 (221598|1) - ^
• 03:42:288 (222288|0,222460|1) - CTRL + G
• 03:51:943 (231943|2,232029|1,232115|2,232202|0,232288|3,232374|1) - suggest http://puu.sh/nqEZi/2bafadeb07.png
• 03:55:391 (235391|2,235477|3,235564|0,235650|1,235736|2,235736|3) - if follow the suggest change 03:55:391 (235391|2,235477|3) - CTRL + G 03:55:564 (235564|0,235650|1) - CTRL + G
• 03:56:081 (236081|2) - move to col 2
• 03:56:253 (236253|1) - ^ 4

All Appiled!

Hard
00:59:529 (59529|0) - ghost note 00:57:977 (57977|2,58150|3) - delete & make only 1 long note from 00:57:977 to 00:58:322 02:12:460 (132460|3,132633|2) - ^ from 02:12:460 to 02:12:805 02:39:184 - add 1 long note here to 02:39:529 02:41:081 - make double note 02:43:840 - ^ 03:16:771 (196771|0) - move to col 4 03:25:046 (205046|0) - ^ 4 03:25:391 (205391|2,205564|1) - CTRL + H

All Appiled!

Insane
00:19:012 (19012|1) - move to col 3 00:24:529 (24529|0) - ^ 2 00:50:736 (50736|3) - make double note 01:10:736 - 01:11:253 - why not make note same with hard difficult? or delete the note on hard diff same with insane Nope 01:21:598 (81598|3) - move to col 2 01:22:115 (82115|0) - ^ 3 01:22:288 (82288|2) - ^ 2 01:49:529 (109529|0) - ^ 3 01:49:702 (109702|3,109702|0,109702|2) - CTRL + H

All Appiled!

sorry for bad mod & english :'3 Nope. I think it was a good mod. Thanks for modding very much! goodluck for your map and nice to meet you PnX ^^Nice to meet you too >,<

Muu-chan wrote:

hii

everything here just a suggestion, feel free to reject
1|2|3|4

General

* I prefer 01:00:046 - as the preview time. Just like the ranked one. Also more enjoyable imo

Easy

* How about adding note on here :
> 00:07:977 -
> 00:10:736 -
> 00:13:495 -

Normal

* 00:06:598 - i think a lot of 1/4 at same time is not good for Normal diff. I suggest http://puu.sh/nqN3N/53ef47e10e.jpg
* 00:09:874 (9874|3,10391|0,10736|3) - move by order at 1, 3, 1 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4637254
* 00:12:633 (12633|0,12977|2,13150|0) - ^ 3, 1, 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4637247 < if applied, move 00:13:667 (13667|3) - to 3
* from 00:16:426 until 00:17:805 - 00:16:426 (16426|0,17115|1,17805|2) - those have same pitch. I suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4637267
* 00:18:667 - i suggest to make it a single LN same w/ 00:21:426 - i hear no different instrument between them.
* 00:22:288 (22288|2,22460|2) - move column 2
* 00:25:909 (25909|2,26081|0) - ctrl + h
* 00:29:702 (29702|3,30219|3) - this kind of pattern is too hard for NM, i suggest move 00:30:219 (30219|3) - to 1 or 3
* 00:39:443 (39443|2) - i hear no instrument for this note. Probably it just a ghost note, i suggest to delete.
* well i think i'll stop here :3

sorry if too short ;;
good luck ^^

[Time] wrote:

Hi
My Mods

Normal

01:00:909 (60909|2) - Switch to 3 pls xD Applied
01:01:081 (61081|3) - Switch to 2 Appiled
02:25:219 (145219|1) - umm can u delete the LN? I think I want to leave LN there instead of deleting a normal note there. Thanks for suggestion.
02:25:219 (145219|3) - why not create stairs? to 02:25:391 (145391|2) - ? and add 1 note ex :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4641372

Hard

It's Okay xD

I hope u like my little mods

Feerum wrote:

Yes.
All of my Yes.
Oh my god Rank it.

Hello :3
Just passing by to give you some feedback!

[General]
1st of all.
It's not allowed to have silenced hitsounds!
Your soft-hitwhistle is silenced what is Unrankable.
Also your soft-hitclap had some silence at the beginning, i cut it for you.
As solution for the Silenced hitsound i give you the default soft-hitnormal, if you like it you can use it, if not you still have to replace soft-hitwhistle to something audible.
Get the two Hitsounds here

Your Offset is wrong! Who ever give you this Offset.. its totally wrong. The Mainbeats are not on a white line o.o
How you couldn't notice that o:
Anyways, the right offset is: 7637
Notice: Please first apply the Mod and then change the Offset because i Mod it with the old Timing.
Also don't forget to resnapp all notes/greenlines etc.
(Maybe wait better a little bit with the offset change, i will ask a friend for help because it seems its kinda weird here xd)

[Replica]
00:18:021 (18021|3) - I'm pretty sure this Note should be 1/3 (1/6) Snapped, not 1/8.
01:03:840 (63840|1) - -> 01:05:219 (65219|0,65219|3) - are same but you did map it with different notes, especially because it's still the same part you should really keep consistency with your notes! Don't vary the amount of notes you use for the same sound. It just confuse the player.
01:30:305 - Missing note for the drumroll. I still can hear the drum here.
01:30:391 (90391|0) - This LN should end 01:30:736 - . Follow the full guitar! Also you could add here a note for the really loud crash.
01:35:305 - Why you leave this 1/4 drum here empty but you mapped it 01:34:443 (94443|3) - ? x:

Also overall for this Part you are kinda inconsistent with your Pattern. Sometimes you mapped the drum with a chord, sometimes with a single note. I don't really understand what you want to reach with this :/
As example: 01:43:667 (103667|0,103667|3,103840|2) - . Chord and Singlenote. For the same sound!
it would be much better to keep this 01:44:012 (104012|3,104012|1) - as single note because its not that loud.

02:06:081 (126081|3,126081|1) - Why the Chord here? The Whole stream is a drumroll. There is absolute no need for a sudden chord :c
02:30:391 (150391|2) - This LN should end 02:30:564 -

02:33:150 - Add here a little stair! You are really consistent with your LN's buut here you have two 1/4 sounds which you normally follow with your LN's, of course to add 1/4 LN's would be just bad to play, thats why add here a stair like this:

Screen

02:48:150 - I'm pretty sure this snare should have two notes.

02:51:943 - This Stairs are not bad, but pretty boring to play. You have here a really loud and long drumroll, you could use here other Pattern, not just a simple stair.
A good example would be a "Burst", it would look like this:

Example 1. Burst

Also what is really good to play in a drumroll is to mix burst and stair Pattern a little bit. Like this:

Example 2. Burst/Stair mix

One last suggestion is to make the Pattern just wild placed! Yes! Really! I do it often and it plays so beautiful. Player loves to hit fast different keys thats why wild placed 1/4 pattern are often really nice to play, especially when the music allows it!

Example 3. Wild Pattern

But be careful with the last one. Never. Never! place 1/4 jacks into such a burst!
Maybe you like one of these c: Try them!

02:56:081 (176081|0,176167|1,176253|3,176311|2,176368|1,176426|0,176426|3,176426|2,176512|1,176598|0,176656|3,176713|2,176771|3,176771|0,176771|1,176857|2,176943|1,177000|0,177058|3,177115|0,177115|1,177115|2,177202|3,177288|1,177345|0,177403|2,177460|0,177460|1,177460|3,177546|2,177633|0,177690|3,177748|1,177805|0,177805|2,177805|3,177891|1,177977|2,178035|0,178092|3,178150|1,178150|2,178150|0,178207|3,178265|2,178322|0,178322|1,178380|2) - No. No No No No No No Nooooo xD
Every QAT would kill you for this. No. Don't do this!!! NEVER!
I'm pretty sure you tried to catch the guitar. The Guitar is here 1/4!
It should be snapped like this:
02:56:081 - to 02:56:426 - It's 1/3.
02:56:426 - to 02:58:150 - It is 1/4
02:58:150 - to 02:58:495 - It is again 1/3.
It could look like this. (sorry for the small pattern screen, its hard to get this whole part on a screen xd)

Screen

It's still really nice to play, even with the 3-Noted Chords. It's good to have a diffspike somewhere, this is the best place.

Okay. Thats all i want to say. You map is really good overall, but you can do it better!

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~ Here from my queue
General

Suggest OD for Normal at 7. Oh! Why can i missed this. Thanks!

Easy

01:09:705 (69705|0,70050|2) - These both last for half a beat, but it's up to you if you want to shorten them since this is an easy diff. Fixed!

Normal

00:33:843 (33843|3) - Remove? There's nothing too important playing here to warrant a note. I want piano sound. But, thanks for helping me find other errors.
01:41:257 (101257|2) - If you're only following the drums here, I'd suggest removing this. I follow that sound too.
02:44:705 (164705|1) - Remove, there's not a big enough sound playing here imo. Kind of cymbal
02:44:878 - ^^Instead, add something here? Added!
03:26:085 - Suggest a double here. I want to explicit the vocal there
04:09:533 to 04:10:395 - Suggest an LN here. Nope.

Hard

03:20:912 - Suggest a double.
03:21:430 - Same as above.
03:22:464 - Same as above.
This stream is quite good. So, I reject this.

Replica

02:05:999 (125999|0) - Remove because I think the drum pick up starts on the 1/2 beat right after this one. Nope.
02:05:999 (125999|0,153154|1,153240|2) - Remove? I can't hear anything here.Same, It have some little sound there.

I hope this was helpful. I really couldn't find much because the map is already so good GL with rank.

Muu-chan wrote:

hi i notice something

should the tittle Haru Modoki ? with a space t/316376

no need kds

Feerum wrote:

I'm back!
No Kds

Alright, i did contacted my good old friend Bonsai who is a million times better in Timing stuff than me.
He told me the offset should be 00:00:912 - (912) so it was right.

I Apologize to give you wrong Offset. I was so confused that the half song wasn't on a Mainbeat, be he tried to explain me this.
Honestly said i still don't understand it haha but i trust him so better use Offset 912.

Again sorry and good luck with this. Can't wait to see it ranked <3
Call me every time when you need me here =)