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Camellia - K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole)

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DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 23, 2019 at 4:13:34 PM

Artist: Camellia
Title: K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole)
Tags: Drill cametek Binzokomegane Girls Union kyafa snownino C89 shmiklak ren
BPM: 220
Filesize: 6749kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. D.I.E. (6.41 stars, 1123 notes)
  2. Hyper (4.39 stars, 717 notes)
  3. NiNo's Insane (5.26 stars, 903 notes)
  4. Novice (2.33 stars, 281 notes)
  5. Shmik's Easy (1.98 stars, 177 notes)
  6. Standard (3.18 stars, 433 notes)
Download: Camellia - K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MP3 and BG taken from Squigly's map
Last edited by DeRandom Otaku , edited 20 times in total.
Dianthus
162 posts
Joined November 2013
Dianthus
Please add "kyafa" (without dots) to tags so isn't cancerous to search for.
Kynan
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Kynan
Best map of this song I've played ! Needs OD9 though :D
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Hedgeturtle wrote:

Please add "kyafa" (without dots) to tags so isn't cancerous to search for.
Thanks for reminding me that xd . added

Kynan wrote:

Best map of this song I've played ! Needs OD9 though :D
Thanks Kynan but well , i have remapped stuff . U might wanna re-download and this time its OD 9 xd
Kynan
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Kynan
When I posted this, the map was up to date and not OD9 though (7 days ago) >.>
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
oh yea you are right the older difficulty wasnt OD 9 .. i added the new difficulty today .. so re-download as i said before
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
hi bitch! little mod for last diff and spread at all
[General]
  1. I'm really afraid of diffs spread. There's no 3* diff between 2* and 4* and also no 5* diff between 4* and 6*

[extra]
  1. 00:17:363 (1) - I'm not sure that using of 1/8 here is right. I guess here music is snaped to 1/6
  2. 01:20:909 (2) - 1/4 beats on this slider very strong, suggest to emphazis them
  3. I would reduce SV for this slider 01:22:818 (1) - and than NC this 01:23:090 (2) - Changing of music's rythm will be distinguished
  4. 01:24:181 (2) - it ends on really strong beat, and it's weird for me
    same 03:05:636 (2) - etc
good set~
gl
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
oh about the spread , the map is wip right now lo
There wont be a need for a diff b/w standard and hyper because the rhythm wise , the spread is totally fine, the hyper difficulty uses a little higher DS and because of the 220 bpm , the sr is higher than its supposed to be
and a difficulty between Hyper and Extra is wip by nino zz

i will reply to mod later ~

Shmiklak wrote:

hi bitch! hi dad little mod for last diff and spread at all
[General]
  1. I'm really afraid of diffs spread. There's no 3* diff between 2* and 4* and also no 5* diff between 4* and 6*

[extra]
  1. 00:17:363 (1) - I'm not sure that using of 1/8 here is right. I guess here music is snaped to 1/6 i cant exactly tell if its really 1/6 or 1/8 lol even if i listen to it at 25% maybe i will just wait for 1 or 2 more opinions about it
  2. 01:20:909 (2) - 1/4 beats on this slider very strong, suggest to emphazis them oh you might be talking about that kick but the instrument itself is not playing any role there so ye
  3. I would reduce SV for this slider 01:22:818 (1) - and than NC this 01:23:090 (2) - Changing of music's rythm will be distinguished ye makes sense but instead of doing that i used a slider shape with more variation in it so it distinguishes that growl sound nicely already
  4. 01:24:181 (2) - it ends on really strong beat, and it's weird for me Again , The intrument itself is not that emphasized so gonna keep
    same 03:05:636 (2) - etc
good set~
gl
Thanks for the star and mod!! \o/
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Nothing changed - elite mapper starter pack
C00L
1,078 posts
Joined September 2014
C00L
Right :roll:
Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Please ignore my note/slider placement on the timeline, i do that to show make my point more clearer
Red - Indicates that an DQ worthy/Unrankable issue has been found

[General]
  1. Manualy edited Slider Velocity - In the D.I.E diff you have slider velocity which was manually edited below 0.5x sv, which would be fine but since you do not put up a warning somewhere in the description this is a unrankable issue
[Timing]
  1. Check!
[Hitsounds]
  1. It would appear none of your diffs have any hitsounds, which is unrankable

[Beginner]
  1. 00:18:454 (1) - considering this is a not as strong sound as the rest of the section, and that you used these sliders in the future to represent this sound 00:20:636 (1) - , and also that this is the only slider with this shape you could change the shape to a curvy one to keep consistency with your patterns, like this one 00:22:818 (1) - or 00:25:000 (1) -
  2. 00:22:000 (3) - you could make this slider more sharpish to go with the music better, since atm there are pretty strong sounds on both pre-reverse point and after reverse point, which makes it a perfect shape to sharpen up, since making it the same shape as 00:20:636 (1) - with completelly different sounds is wrong imo
  3. 00:24:181 (3) - again could be sharpened up to make use of the stronger sounds as well, rather than making it the same as 00:22:818 (1) - with yet again completely different sounds
  4. 00:26:363 (3) - ^ and so on for the rest of the section, gonna avoid pointing out all of similar stuff like this to avoid repetition
  5. 00:29:363 (1) - this is the only slider with a shape like this whilst all the others are curvy, this would work really well if this slider shape was used here 00:31:545 (1) - since then it's the last slider of the section which would make the slider stand out to tell the player something new happened which is essentially whats happening
  6. 01:10:818 (1) - the spinner recovery is too low here, it should be at least a full measure of recovery time i'd suggest you change it, 00:49:000 (1) - like here for example you had a full measure of recovery and so on, just because it's closer to a normal * rating doesn't meant that you should change up the recovery time all the time, keeping it a consistent 2/1 recovery or a 4/1 recovery works much better
  7. 01:19:000 (4) - you could make this sliders shape stand out more to the vocals and the change in drums better by just sharpening it up
  8. 01:44:363 (2) - could make this the same shape as 01:42:181 (2) - for consistency :o
  9. 02:35:363 (4) - rotating this by 45* would make the flow nicer and make the snap from 02:35:363 (4,1) - much less harder to hit, although the snap i'm guessing was there for the emphasis on (1) but imo it's too hard as it is now
  10. 02:37:000 (3,4) - making these really similar to 02:38:090 (1) - the next section here, is a really bad idea in doing so you're making the section at (1) really not stand out and not emphasize it enough imo, what you could do is this, doing this would make the last 2 vocals on (4) and (5) really stand out leading the player into the next section and the sharp slider makes it consistent with 02:35:363 (4) -
  11. 03:23:091 (3) - ctrl + j and rotate by -20* and place on x:212 y:364 , making the circular motion from 03:21:727 (1,2,3) - this whole pattern more smooth
  12. 03:25:273 (3) - make this sharp lo, same points from start apply here too
[Standard]
  1. 00:24:454 (5,6) - this pattern doesn't always work imo, sometimes like here it's much better to do something like this, a ctrl +h and a -30* rotate to achieve better flow and less unwanted snappy flow imo, also if you did decide to change this, this would make every similar sound pattern unique in playability which would make it less repetetive which is a nice thing imo
  2. 01:26:090 (7) - ctrl + h would work much nicer than the current state
  3. 01:54:454 (1) - damn a 1/1 recovery, imo this is way too small for a 2.8 * diff, also about the same slider rotating it by -45* would be pretty dank imo, it would make a nicer motion towards the next notes more recognizable
  4. 01:58:954 (2) - these slider shapes could be represented much much better come on ren, making them a simple curve isn't making them stand out aaa
  5. 03:13:000 (1) - ctrl + h for nicer flow
  6. 03:27:727 (5,6) - same as the first point would work nicely here too
[Hyper]
  1. 02:28:272 (1,2) - making these sharper shapes would emphasize the music much better than using shapes that you use here 02:29:363 (1) - for totally different rhythm
    lo, mostly all about sliders i would say rhythm wise and playability is really nice
[D.I.E]

  • Side Note: Imo you should put a dot after the die diff name so like - D.I.E. - Since the E would match the "A." in the name
  1. 00:41:909 (3) - this slider has a vocal at the end of it and placing a slider end on it kinda makes it sound under-emphasized really, so what you could do is just make that slider 1/2 and place a note on the blue tick, that way you're making it more intense to hit and therefore making the vocal emphasized
  2. 00:52:272 (1) - these are overmapped like hell, and tbh with you making them snapped to a1/16 grey tick isn't the way to go imo xd, making these sldiers 1/8 (where the sounds appear) would not only make it better to play, but delete the overmap (since the sounds happen at a 1/8 snapping), although both play fine i'd say the 1/8 slider idea is better, but i do see where you're coming from with the 1/16 sliders for the vocals, but w/e choice is yours
  3. 00:52:954 (3) - except of making this a circle like (4) making this a 1/4 slider would emphasize the vocal much much better here, since both circles have 2 different vocals one is stronger one weaker and (3) is at it's weakest point so making them the same is a waste, but if you make (3) a slider it would emphasize the (4) much better
  4. 01:12:181 (2) - i'm kinda dissapointed that you're ignoring these 1/4 sounds in all these patterns, a simple triple would do so much better than a slider which misses all of them practically, i do understand you're following the background sounds but missing such a opportunity sound is meh
  5. 01:25:000 (1) - this has really high spacing considering it basically goes to nothing, and comparing it with 01:25:136 (2) - which has the same spacing of 1,15x it kinda doesn't fit here, stacking (1) on the sldier end of 01:24:727 (2) - and moving 01:25:136 (2) - somewhere else to make sense would make it much more fun to play and much more emphasized, even moving the (2) to x:424 y:216 would be nice
  6. 01:29:909 (3) - same suggestion as before
  7. 01:35:909 (1) - ^ xd
  8. 01:54:454 (1) - for this pattern i'd say do something similar to the suggestion in the box bellow, since the spacing atm is really too similar to the rest of the sections and since the song is giving a impression of slowly catching up to intensity this would work much better imo

    ===Suggestions===
  9. 01:55:000 (3) - so move this slider to x:228 y:160 this will make the spacing lower, which would give the same emphasis as the music is giving
  10. 01:55:272 (1) - to emphasize this sliders sound make the shape of it something like this
  11. 01:55:477 (2,3) - and finally move this triple to the edge of the slider so that it's not stacked but just over the edge a little, this will do again match the intensity of the music and make the player go back into harder patterns more smoothly
    =============

  12. 02:48:727 (1) - burai slider - this slider looks really really close to a slider that overlaps on it's own accord, making the last curve face away rather than inside would make this not close to a issue imo, since then it's more distuinguishable between the sldier shape

[Final Words]

Good set imo, just some subjective stuff das all

Good Luck!
Last edited by Flanster , edited 8 times in total.
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hey! M4M as agreed :)

[General]

  1. BG is somewhat on the small size, could find a bigger res version of it
  2. Audio is good
  3. Combo colors are good
[Beginner]

I think this might be too high SR to call Beginner, maybe rename it to Easy.

  1. 00:29:363 (1) - feels out of place, should be somewhat similar to the others in the section imo, something like 00:27:181 (1) -
  2. 01:19:000 (4) - maybe acknoledge the vocals by making this a slightly different shape
  3. 02:35:363 (4,1) - doesn't flow too well, maybe ctrl-j 4
Quite polished, not much to say about it, besides a few slider design things ^^

[Standard]

  1. 00:57:727 (1) - more squiggly shape maybe, should be more like 00:55:545 (1) -
  2. 01:22:818 (4) - make the first tick a red tick, fits the sound better
Same as previous diff, not much to say, it's nicely made ^^

[Hyper]

  1. 00:31:000 (6) - looks weird, same for 03:34:273 (6) -
  2. 02:28:272 (1,2) - You've used fast repeat sliders before, could do it here too
The spacing feels too regular for something that's almost an insane, but otherwise this diff is cool too.

[D.I.E]

  1. Put a . after the E in the diff name, it's bothering me x)
  2. 00:52:272 (1) - rather make these 1/8, this is awful playability wise
  3. 01:11:363 (1,2) - I don't like the way you represent this rhythm all along the song. 2's tail is on a stronger note than 2's head, and 1's head and tail have the same intensity. It should really be more like this:

    I suggest you change that all along the song
That's the only thing I have to say ^^ This set's pretty cool imo, would love to see it ranked :) GL!
Kynan
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Kynan
Why the cheesy sliders ? IMO they're unecessary but the rest of the map is awesome as I already said <3
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
i tried ;w;
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Camellia-K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53363
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 166818
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.300004

[Metadata]
Title:K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole)
TitleUnicode:K.Y.A.F.A. (Kill You All Fucking Asshole)
Artist:Camellia
ArtistUnicode:Camellia
Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:NiNo's Insane
Source:
Tags:Drill cametek Binzokomegane Girls Union kyafa
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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359,187,190000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,187,190136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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478,183,192318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,64,194363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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135,51,194636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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390,160,195590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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30,274,196409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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87,158,197363,6,0,L|250:142,1,161.999995056153
288,104,197636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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254,61,198045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,266,198727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,314,198863,2,0,P|201:266|297:234,1,161.999995056153
350,250,199136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,234,199545,6,0,L|285:61,1,161.999995056153
245,35,199818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,163,199954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,234,200363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,106,200499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,256,200636,6,0,L|123:244,7,53.9999983520508
251,311,201181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,311,201250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,311,201318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,311,201386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,311,201454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,311,201727,6,0,L|262:116,1,180
266,27,202136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,349,203090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,349,203159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,349,203227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,223,203363,2,0,L|224:232,1,45
449,268,203500,2,0,L|240:293,1,180
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21,68,204318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,100,204454,2,0,P|193:90|233:61,1,90
340,203,204727,2,0,P|291:196|254:8,1,270
328,90,205272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,90,205340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,90,205409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,169,205545,2,0,L|194:165,1,45
85,210,205681,2,0,P|139:239|160:275,1,90
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313,307,206090,6,0,L|326:111,1,180
425,69,206500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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167,112,206909,2,0,B|224:193|224:193|183:364,1,270
17,367,207454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,367,207522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,367,207590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,234,207727,2,0,L|84:227,1,45
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317,103,208272,6,0,L|298:303,1,180
379,360,208681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,251,208818,2,0,L|427:161,1,90
485,27,209090,2,0,B|426:62|360:28|360:28|351:113|266:129,1,270
253,27,209636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,27,209704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,27,209772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,97,209909,2,0,L|167:153,1,45
170,279,210045,2,0,P|222:268|268:278,1,90
304,224,210250,2,0,P|356:235|402:225,1,90
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142,334,211272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,334,211818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,334,211886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,334,211954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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49,124,212227,2,0,P|116:102|138:3,1,180
232,131,212636,6,0,B|221:245|221:245|160:200,1,180
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428,193,213454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,193,214000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,193,214068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,193,214137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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159,301,216250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,301,216318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,29,217409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,129,217818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,129,218363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,129,218431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,129,218499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,234454,12,0,236636,0:0:0:0:
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Kynan wrote:

Why the cheesy sliders ? IMO they're unecessary but the rest of the map is awesome as I already said <3
Anti-pp stuff pls if u kno what i mean

@SnowNino_ Pretty cool diff tbh , added

Mod replies tomorrow i hope
Kynan
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Kynan

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Kynan wrote:

Why the cheesy sliders ? IMO they're unecessary but the rest of the map is awesome as I already said <3
Anti-pp stuff pls if u kno what i mean
More like anti-sightread FC :/
7ambda
2,560 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
Maybe set the preview point at 00:35:636 (3)? The build-up sounds more interesting to hear from the get-go rather than the wub section, especially when introducing the song at the drop seems generic now-a-days.
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

F1r3tar wrote:

Maybe set the preview point at 00:35:636 (3)? The build-up sounds more interesting to hear from the get-go rather than the wub section, especially when introducing the song at the drop seems generic now-a-days.
tbh i like where the preview is but ur point makes sense so i will think about i

Kynan wrote:

More like anti-sightread FC :/
Exactly what i meant to say :^)

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey! M4M as agreed :)

[General]

  1. BG is somewhat on the small size, could find a bigger res version of it i lazy
  2. Audio is good
  3. Combo colors are good
[Beginner]

I think this might be too high SR to call Beginner, maybe rename it to Easy. zz no its k , check out my ranked enishi map i have the same thing there

  1. 00:29:363 (1) - feels out of place, should be somewhat similar to the others in the section imo, something like 00:27:181 (1) - little variation from time to time is better than boring consistency
  2. 01:19:000 (4) - maybe acknoledge the vocals by making this a slightly different shape
  3. 02:35:363 (4,1) - doesn't flow too well, maybe ctrl-j 4
Quite polished, not much to say about it, besides a few slider design things ^^

[Standard]

  1. 00:57:727 (1) - more squiggly shape maybe, should be more like 00:55:545 (1) - its fine like it is tbh
  2. 01:22:818 (4) - make the first tick a red tick, fits the sound better i like mine better orz
Same as previous diff, not much to say, it's nicely made ^^

[Hyper]

  1. 00:31:000 (6) - looks weird, same for 03:34:273 (6) - doesnt look weird to me
  2. 02:28:272 (1,2) - You've used fast repeat sliders before, could do it here too in this difficulty i didnt use fast repeat sliders for those sounds anywhere
The spacing feels too regular for something that's almost an insane, but otherwise this diff is cool too. i actually wanted it to be hard-like diff but fast bpm killed it i suc

[D.I.E]

  1. Put a . after the E in the diff name, it's bothering me x)
  2. 00:52:272 (1) - rather make these 1/8, this is awful playability wise
  3. 01:11:363 (1,2) - I don't like the way you represent this rhythm all along the song. 2's tail is on a stronger note than 2's head, and 1's head and tail have the same intensity. It should really be more like this: its ok to not emphasize stuff sometime to make cute patterns

    I suggest you change that all along the song
That's the only thing I have to say ^^ This set's pretty cool imo, would love to see it ranked :) GL!

C00L wrote:

Right :roll:
Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Please ignore my note/slider placement on the timeline, i do that to show make my point more clearer
Red - Indicates that an DQ worthy/Unrankable issue has been found

[General]
  1. Manualy edited Slider Velocity - In the D.I.E diff you have slider velocity which was manually edited below 0.5x sv, which would be fine but since you do not put up a warning somewhere in the description this is a unrankable issue
[Timing]
  1. Check!
[Hitsounds]
  1. It would appear none of your diffs have any hitsounds, which is unrankable

[Beginner]
  1. 00:18:454 (1) - considering this is a not as strong sound as the rest of the section, and that you used these sliders in the future to represent this sound 00:20:636 (1) - , and also that this is the only slider with this shape you could change the shape to a curvy one to keep consistency with your patterns, like this one 00:22:818 (1) - or 00:25:000 (1) - ok wtf i never do emphasis with slider sharpness
  2. 00:22:000 (3) - you could make this slider more sharpish to go with the music better, since atm there are pretty strong sounds on both pre-reverse point and after reverse point, which makes it a perfect shape to sharpen up, since making it the same shape as 00:20:636 (1) - with completelly different sounds is wrong imo ^
  3. 00:24:181 (3) - again could be sharpened up to make use of the stronger sounds as well, rather than making it the same as 00:22:818 (1) - with yet again completely different sounds
  4. 00:26:363 (3) - ^ and so on for the rest of the section, gonna avoid pointing out all of similar stuff like this to avoid repetition
  5. 00:29:363 (1) - this is the only slider with a shape like this whilst all the others are curvy, this would work really well if this slider shape was used here 00:31:545 (1) - since then it's the last slider of the section which would make the slider stand out to tell the player something new happened which is essentially whats happening
  6. 01:10:818 (1) - the spinner recovery is too low here, it should be at least a full measure of recovery time i'd suggest you change it, 00:49:000 (1) - like here for example you had a full measure of recovery and so on, just because it's closer to a normal * rating doesn't meant that you should change up the recovery time all the time, keeping it a consistent 2/1 recovery or a 4/1 recovery works much better recovery needed for easy is 4/1 and this is a normal diff , about 2 star , so 2/1 recovery is enough
  7. 01:19:000 (4) - you could make this sliders shape stand out more to the vocals and the change in drums better by did from previous modjust sharpening it up
  8. 01:44:363 (2) - could make this the same shape as 01:42:181 (2) - for consistency :o yes dad
  9. 02:35:363 (4) - rotating this by 45* would make the flow nicer and make the snap from 02:35:363 (4,1) - much less harder to hit, although the snap i'm guessing was there for the emphasis on (1) but imo it's too hard as it is now changed from prev mod
  10. 02:37:000 (3,4) - making these really similar to 02:38:090 (1) - the next section here, is a really bad idea in doing so you're making the section at (1) really not stand out and not emphasize it enough imo, what you could do is this, doing this would make the last 2 vocals on (4) and (5) really stand out leading the player into the next section and the sharp slider makes it consistent with 02:35:363 (4) - come on lo its just the first diff of the set ps 2 220 bpm 1/1 circles for first diff are harsh imo
  11. 03:23:091 (3) - ctrl + j and rotate by -20* and place on x:212 y:364 , making the circular motion from 03:21:727 (1,2,3) - this whole pattern more smooth did something else
  12. 03:25:273 (3) - make this sharp lo, same points from start apply here too
[Standard]
  1. 00:24:454 (5,6) - this pattern doesn't always work imo, sometimes like here it's much better to do something like this, a ctrl +h and a -30* rotate to achieve better flow and less unwanted snappy flow imo, also if you did decide to change this, this would make every similar sound pattern unique in playability which would make it less repetetive which is a nice thing imo imo not a big deal,is fine as it is
  2. 01:26:090 (7) - ctrl + h would work much nicer than the current state idk why but i like current visuals more xd
  3. 01:54:454 (1) - damn a 1/1 recovery, imo this is way too small for a 2.8 * diff, also about the same slider rotating it by -45* would be pretty dank imo, it would make a nicer motion towards the next notes more recognizable oh com on tis 3 star diff , 1/1 rec is fin
  4. 01:58:954 (2) - these slider shapes could be represented much much better come on ren, making them a simple curve isn't making them stand out aaa
  5. 03:13:000 (1) - ctrl + h for nicer flow c00l
  6. 03:27:727 (5,6) - same as the first point would work nicely here too
[Hyper]
  1. 02:28:272 (1,2) - making these sharper shapes would emphasize the music much better than using shapes that you use here 02:29:363 (1) - for totally different rhythm ;-;
    lo, mostly all about sliders i would say rhythm wise and playability is really nice
[D.I.E]

  • Side Note: Imo you should put a dot after the die diff name so like - D.I.E. - Since the E would match the "A." in the name
  1. 00:41:909 (3) - this slider has a vocal at the end of it and placing a slider end on it kinda makes it sound under-emphasized really, so what you could do is just make that slider 1/2 and place a note on the blue tick, that way you're making it more intense to hit and therefore making the vocal emphasized this part is calmer , much calmer compared to whats ahead so this rhythm is good
  2. 00:52:272 (1) - these are overmapped like hell, and tbh with you making them snapped to a1/16 grey tick isn't the way to go imo xd, making these sldiers 1/8 (where the sounds appear) would not only make it better to play, but delete the overmap (since the sounds happen at a 1/8 snapping), although both play fine i'd say the 1/8 slider idea is better, but i do see where you're coming from with the 1/16 sliders for the vocals, but w/e choice is yours Changed
  3. 00:52:954 (3) - except of making this a circle like (4) making this a 1/4 slider would emphasize the vocal much much better here, since both circles have 2 different vocals one is stronger one weaker and (3) is at it's weakest point so making them the same is a waste, but if you make (3) a slider it would emphasize the (4) much better i prefer circles , i dont use kicksliders much for non wub sounds
  4. 01:12:181 (2) - i'm kinda dissapointed that you're ignoring these 1/4 sounds in all these patterns, a simple triple would do so much better than a slider which misses all of them practically, i do understand you're following the background sounds but missing such a opportunity sound is meh its ok to sometime undermap for nice visuals lo
  5. 01:25:000 (1) - this has really high spacing considering it basically goes to nothing, and comparing it with 01:25:136 (2) - which has the same spacing of 1,15x it kinda doesn't fit here, stacking (1) on the sldier end of 01:24:727 (2) - and moving 01:25:136 (2) - somewhere else to make sense would make it much more fun to play and much more emphasized, even moving the (2) to x:424 y:216 would be nice wait how is 1.16x "alot" higher than 1.15x? lol
  6. 01:29:909 (3) - same suggestion as before
  7. 01:35:909 (1) - ^ xd
  8. 01:54:454 (1) - for this pattern i'd say do something similar to the suggestion in the box bellow, since the spacing atm is really too similar to the rest of the sections and since the song is giving a impression of slowly catching up to intensity this would work much better imo box missing lo and yes its smaller on purpose because theres no bassline here at this moment so need to put as much spacing as i do in drop section

    ===Suggestions===
  9. 01:55:000 (3) - so move this slider to x:228 y:160 this will make the spacing lower, which would give the same emphasis as the music is giving 1.2 is already low af -_
  10. 01:55:272 (1) - to emphasize this sliders sound make the shape of it something like this fu i wantedf to keep slider for symmetry but changed
  11. 01:55:477 (2,3) - and finally move this triple to the edge of the slider so that it's not stacked but just over the edge a little, this will do again match the intensity of the music and make the player go back into harder patterns more smoothly stacking triples at the end of sliders is what i mostly did here in dis map , intentional stuff zz
    =============

  12. 02:48:727 (1) - burai slider - this slider looks really really close to a slider that overlaps on it's own accord, making the last curve face away rather than inside would make this not close to a issue imo, since then it's more distuinguishable between the sldier shape not burai at all but will do smthng if more complains come

[Final Words]

Good set imo, just some subjective stuff das all

Good Luck!
Thank you very very very much lo
Pachiru
osu! Alumni
2,957 posts
Joined June 2013
Pachiru
helo

[NiNo's Insane]
  1. 00:21:181 (3) - Why not trying to stack this note on the slider end of this slider? In my opinion, it get better to read.
  2. 00:22:818 (1,2,3) - The angle here feels too sharp in my opinion. Why not trying something like that? https://a.uguu.se/o0OBEWHmVygF_osu%21_2 ... -58-50.png
  3. 00:51:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Why not replacing it by using reverse sliders? It feels very hard to me for an Insane diff, or why not trying to do a stream part, because to be honest... Small sliders can lead to a misunderstanding! (I'm a noob player tho)
    If you apply this mod, then don't forget to change it here: 01:08:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - and here: 02:44:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
  4. 01:13:409 (2) - Since it's an small slider, we can't see the sliderbody, because it's stacked on this slider 01:13:000 (1) - , so why not moving it elsewhere? Like moving the sliderhead to the sliderhead of this one, like this: https://a.uguu.se/MCe7eemUGjfD_osu%21_2 ... -04-59.png
  5. 02:31:000 (3,4,5) - That part feels very weird to me, there is few bad stacks that could be improved to be good! Like why not changing the shape of this slider 02:31:000 (3) - , so it could delete all those few bad stacks?
  6. 03:15:181 (1) - Why not moving this slider to make it stacks with the red anchor on triplets like this: https://a.uguu.se/fdcS4xYWm3Ur_osu%21_2 ... -11-47.png
[Beginner]
  1. First, why not changing the name "Beginner", since it's not a beginner diff, better call it Normal or Easy, because that feels kinda hard for a beginner diff. It's just a minor suggestion.
  2. 00:27:181 (1,2,3) - I would suggest you to move the 3 to the slidertail of the 1, because it can be overlaping easily, and it can have a bit much of objects so it could lead player to an misunderstanding.
  3. 00:48:727 (4) - Why not moving this note elsewhere, so it could avoid stacking it? o/
  4. 01:04:272 (1) - Try to improve that circular curb here.
  5. 01:19:000 (4) - Why this slider is curved but not this one: 01:18:454 (3) -
  6. 02:42:181 (4) - Same here too, why not moving it so you could avoid stack?
  7. 02:54:181 (2,3,4,1) - That part can be misunderstood by the new player, because there is two objects stacked on each other.
go 4 r rnk
vrnl
743 posts
Joined August 2014
vrnl
m4m from your q

short mod because nicely mapped. honestly u dont have to mod back if this doesnt help, its ok

d.i.e.:

on all of these beats in the beginning after the sliders 00:19:545 - id put a circle because there is a clap sound there. if u were to do it, maybe stack it with the sliderend idk
same at the end starting here 03:22:818 - but ending here 03:38:090 -
00:32:636 - 00:33:454 - also nothing here? theres clearly a lot of stuff going on
03:08:635 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - oh my (change some of these into sliders/slider jumps maybe)
03:14:635 (1,2) - thats some pretty big spacing, the pitch is going down so id assume the sliders would get less spaced tbh

i was gonna do the insane but i saw someone modded before me so didnt want to double mod or whatever, hope it makes sense
i can wait til he respond to mod it if thats ok
DeRandom Otaku
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DeRandom Otaku

Pachiru wrote:

helo

[Beginner]
  1. First, why not changing the name "Beginner", since it's not a beginner diff, better call it Normal or Easy, because that feels kinda hard for a beginner diff. It's just a minor suggestion. did smthng
  2. 00:27:181 (1,2,3) - I would suggest you to move the 3 to the slidertail of the 1, because it can be overlaping easily, and it can have a bit much of objects so it could lead player to an misunderstanding. its arlready like that
  3. 00:48:727 (4) - Why not moving this note elsewhere, so it could avoid stacking it? o/ because i wanna stack
  4. 01:04:272 (1) - Try to improve that circular curb here. d
  5. 01:19:000 (4) - Why this slider is curved but not this one: 01:18:454 (3) - cos of vocal
  6. 02:42:181 (4) - Same here too, why not moving it so you could avoid stack? smae
  7. 02:54:181 (2,3,4,1) - That part can be misunderstood by the new player, because there is two objects stacked on each other. intensest part of song therefor i make something challenging
go 4 r rnk

cute boy wrote:

m4m from your q

short mod because nicely mapped. honestly u dont have to mod back if this doesnt help, its ok

d.i.e.:

on all of these beats in the beginning after the sliders 00:19:545 - id put a circle because there is a clap sound there. if u were to do it, maybe stack it with the sliderend idk i would have done it in first place if i wanted to execute it like dat
same at the end starting here 03:22:818 - but ending here 03:38:090 -
00:32:636 - 00:33:454 - also nothing here? theres clearly a lot of stuff going on bassline and melody both play no role here
03:08:635 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - oh my (change some of these into sliders/slider jumps maybe) no , did it lik this to emphasize this part cos it has stronger kicks and snares
03:14:635 (1,2) - thats some pretty big spacing, the pitch is going down so id assume the sliders would get less spaced tbh dont really think so both are sliders and can be played easi ly . i will wait for mroe opinions for this

i was gonna do the insane but i saw someone modded before me so didnt want to double mod or whatever, hope it makes sense
i can wait til he respond to mod it if thats ok
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miyukiko
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Joined January 2016
miyukiko
hello, this is I

[Novice]
  1. 00:15:454 (1) - you can do spinner's start at 00:14:090
  2. 00:57:181 (4,1) - connecting point seems a little strange
[Standart]
  1. 00:15:454 (1) - you can do spinner's start at 00:14:090
  2. 00:39:181 (3,4) - slider will be better
  3. 01:41:363 (1,2) - wow I missed here lol (and same places)
[NiNo's Insane]
  1. 00:01:409 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2) - they have to take 2x less time (by the sound I hear it)
  2. 02:12:318 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2) - the same...
  3. 03:39:590 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2) - too
Hyper and D.I.E. are just godlike, so I can't mod them ;)
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