forum

07 Expansion - Alive

posted
Total Posts
73
show more
Tonoko

xierbaliti wrote:

这个太神了。不解释啊。 :oops:

删掉3吧>< 记得连那些音效文件full一次.

Download: 07th Expansion - ALIVE (ven4369) [Tonoko's hard].osu
naptime
:oops:
Ballance
star
NanaDesu
:)
y u c a
ganbare >A</
qinche
alrite time to do this

1st add source, source would be Umineko no Naku Koro ni

and tags, tags should have Tonoko and me in it, u can also add EP6, dai(...im talking about the composer), shanon, kanon, and other tags that u think are necessary

remember to delete osb file since its not needed

then full upload to get rid of meow and blah blah blah

no kudos plz


oh and star~



PS:...Q_Qno i dun wanna map the whole thing (unless everyone tells me to) cuz my diff is kinda easy, it would be too long and lost the fun to play

Download: 07th Expansion - ALIVE (ven4369) [qinche's Hard].osu
kiddly
. :?
Lunetori
:!: 不太懂的说~
elai_old
8-)
HentaiTei
:O
Kochiya Sanae
star >:(
Saten ruiko
文姐也再做神MAP了麼;-; star
SH_yuri
:P
royathrun
>.<~star~
Heatherfield
>~<美腿文
Deye
迅速铲过加星~
lkjl23
Best map ever!
Al-Azif
About the offset , I prefer 328 for all difficulty

Normal
some hitsounds mod

00:23:125 (5) - soft clap
00:28:826 (2) - soft clap
01:12:335 (7) - bug, check green lines
01:18:336 (3) - soft clap
01:23:137 (3) - normal, no clap

edit:
star.
I have fun with insane, good try to map without DS
LunaticSHIKI
nice work
Crazy Jay
[Insane]
00:33:634 (8) - 换一个排列,往右上移一点比较好看
00:36:035 (3) - 同右上,会好看
00:49:837 (1) - jump有点大
01:07:541 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个clap太突兀
01:17:743 (2) - 绿线音量降低
01:40:848 (1) - dis
03:07:565 (5) - 往上移动一格tiny grid

音效可以nazi很多>_>大都是音量,有的地方太响了,自己努力听一下吧

[tonoko's hard]
00:30:634 (6) - 重新下note,叠在slide下

[qinche]
呆呆的好可怕lol

star
_lolipop
> <
eveless
建议丢个sliderslide进去

[Insane]
绿线都没对齐到线上:o
00:27:333 (3) - 可以拉更好看一点0.0?
00:29:733 (4) - ^
00:31:534 (6) - new combo 而且这个和7都属于比较硬的slider...觉得不太适合这里这么柔软的音乐?
01:09:641 (8) - new combo
01:21:644 (1,2) - 没叠好0.0
01:43:398 (5) - 去掉?
02:27:957 (8) - new combo? 跟前面形成对比0.0
02:28:257 (1) - 取消new combo
02:29:157 (6) - new combo 突出重音?
02:32:458 (6,7,8) - 这三个可以利用复制粘贴旋转角度摆更好看一点0.0
02:38:159 (2) - 没叠好0.0?
02:42:060 (6) - new combo
03:07:565 (5) - ^
03:14:166 (1) - 取消new combo
03:14:766 (4) - new combo
03:17:167 (11) - new combo
03:18:367 (1) - 取消new combo
03:37:071 (6) - 建议new combo因为降速
03:40:479 (1) - 觉得结尾需要压下音0.0

虽然可能我挑的都是一些combo问题可能你会觉得我比较无聊0.0 可是combo也算图的整体性的一部分吧>.> 觉得还是比较规律一点最好:D
节奏和音效都不错...排版方面感觉还没形成体系...没有一个整体感0.0

[殿子's Hard]
00:02:728 (6) - 感觉这里应该new combo?
00:05:879 (5) - spacing
00:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 喜欢这边0.0
01:06:941 (7) - 感觉还可以更圆滑一点
02:30:508 (3,4) - 可以离12再远一点点?

[呆呆's Hard]

/me slaps daidai with ice cream

同绿线没对齐
02:00:952 (3) - 感觉可以放开一点?

[Normal]
这个normal太多故意的降spacing了...对于新玩家来说太难认了 建议那些部分重新排或者改用slider
最后的那些绿线可以删掉

00:27:333 (3) - 尾部的finish去掉
00:32:734 (7) - 结束在前面那根白线上?
00:36:335 (4) - 尾部的finish0.0
00:47:137 (2) - 建议改成1/2的折返
00:53:138 (4) - ^
01:12:342 (7) - new combo
01:21:644 (x) - 加一个note

我是渣mapper所以我的意见肯定有很多是不对的0.0
如果有说错的地方请不要笑我<(_ _)>
Crazy Jay
占位
晚上只顾着看动画了>_>明天继续
Topic Starter
Nitsuki_Yukikawa

eveless wrote:

建议丢个sliderslide进去

[Insane]
绿线都没对齐到线上:o
00:27:333 (3) - 可以拉更好看一点0.0?
00:29:733 (4) - ^
00:31:534 (6) - new combo 而且这个和7都属于比较硬的slider...觉得不太适合这里这么柔软的音乐?
01:09:641 (8) - new combo
01:21:644 (1,2) - 没叠好0.0
01:43:398 (5) - 去掉?
02:27:957 (8) - new combo? 跟前面形成对比0.0
02:28:257 (1) - 取消new combo
02:29:157 (6) - new combo 突出重音?
02:32:458 (6,7,8) - 这三个可以利用复制粘贴旋转角度摆更好看一点0.0
02:38:159 (2) - 没叠好0.0?
02:42:060 (6) - new combo
03:07:565 (5) - ^
03:14:166 (1) - 取消new combo
03:14:766 (4) - new combo
03:17:167 (11) - new combo
03:18:367 (1) - 取消new combo
03:37:071 (6) - 建议new combo因为降速
03:40:479 (1) - 觉得结尾需要压下音0.0

虽然可能我挑的都是一些combo问题可能你会觉得我比较无聊0.0 可是combo也算图的整体性的一部分吧>.> 觉得还是比较规律一点最好:D
节奏和音效都不错...排版方面感觉还没形成体系...没有一个整体感0.0

[殿子's Hard]
00:02:728 (6) - 感觉这里应该new combo?
00:05:879 (5) - spacing
00:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 喜欢这边0.0
01:06:941 (7) - 感觉还可以更圆滑一点
02:30:508 (3,4) - 可以离12再远一点点?

[呆呆's Hard]

/me slaps daidai with ice cream

同绿线没对齐
02:00:952 (3) - 感觉可以放开一点?

[Normal]
这个normal太多故意的降spacing了...对于新玩家来说太难认了 建议那些部分重新排或者改用slider
最后的那些绿线可以删掉

00:27:333 (3) - 尾部的finish去掉
00:32:734 (7) - 结束在前面那根白线上?
00:36:335 (4) - 尾部的finish0.0
00:47:137 (2) - 建议改成1/2的折返
00:53:138 (4) - ^
01:12:342 (7) - new combo
01:21:644 (x) - 加一个note

我是渣mapper所以我的意见肯定有很多是不对的0.0
如果有说错的地方请不要笑我<(_ _)>




i choosed to change most of things u mentioned but not all.

我选择性的改了大部分你提到的
Tonoko
mod 一下吧

海猫神曲 yeah

细小的地方应该没啥地方要说了 那个绿线的问题 还是调一下吧 不要压note放在note前一小格就行。

normal用音效声音重的话 或许吧滚球的时候的声音消掉会好些。

呆呆没把MP3做完挺可惜的。。。毕竟看起来不需要担心3I这个问题。

最重要的问题来了:

bg图竟然是1074 x 768 /摔瓶
qinche
[呆呆's Hard]

/me slaps daidai with ice cream

同绿线没对齐
02:00:952 (3) - 感觉可以放开一点?
你竟然拿ice cream打我!no kudosu for u!!

绿线不是应该比note稍微往前一点所以打得时候如果打早了不会听到奇怪的声音吗……
Crazy Jay

定闹钟早起做map
先发这点吧:p
抱歉

Download: 07th Expansion - ALIVE (ven4369) [Crazy Jay].osu
Topic Starter
Nitsuki_Yukikawa
你这有点…………太野了吧……我感觉我的难度要没人打了 q.q……如果太野了 我能退货么(><很对不起)
qinche

Crazy Jay wrote:


定闹钟早起做map
先发这点吧:p
抱歉

再说我的可怕我就拍死你。
xierbaliti
-Normal-
TAG: qinche Tonoko 去掉 "," .
00:23:132 (5) - 我想这没啥意义 右移2格
00:28:533 (1) - 陷阱 我想最低难度本分一点
00:32:734 (7) - 间距不好
00:35:134 (2,3,4) - 关掉grid调整一下
01:03:940 (5) - jump没有意义

-qinche’s Hard-
Stack Leniency: 0.2 will be better

-Tonoko's hard-
rename to Tonoko's Hard plz.
TAG:qinche Tonoko 去掉1个空格

-Insane-
01:04:540 (3) - 往上2格
01:11:742 (1) - 去掉 new combo
01:12:342 (3) - new combo 这样感觉比较好
01:43:548 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - random spacing? :O
01:58:251 (3) - 右移1格

后略 再检查下spacing吧
Crazy Jay
>_>还需要吗,虽然花了好几个小时了,不要的话就停了
Topic Starter
Nitsuki_Yukikawa
还是停吧 >_>


对不起 ><
xierbaliti
-Insane-
nazi time~
01:23:744 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:344 (2) - add new combo
01:26:145 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:445 (5,6) - spacing
01:26:745 (6) - add new combo here
03:33:670 (9) - so strange clap here ._.


另外还是感觉note放得太随机了._.
gdeath
favourite one from umineko!
Alace
sorry i will use chinese here

<Daidai>
外加的clap其實可以打在更多的note上,跟著音樂的重音可以打東 東東 東 東東 這樣的類型

<墊子>
外加的whistle真的是過度使用了,以那種長音whistle來說,使用的方法跟finish是差不多的
00:11:730 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 像這邊太可怕了 XD
改成普通的soft whistle效果反而更好點

<Normal+insane>
音效上面的話,一下子normal一下子soft的反而有種不協調感,要這樣用的話通常節奏必須非常的穩定
我認為排列的方面可以再多下功夫的,另外可以幫你的難度適當的配note色


雖然用綠線來處理音效是一個方法,不過如果可以的話其實能夠用越簡單的手法表現音效越好,
gdeath
Erm...i would add hitsounds with finish for epitasiss parts and whistle on soft parts.(Simple style)

The message to Crazy Jay.
I've also tried your version.Really nice mappset.but one point i dont like is the normal-whistle you added.
Sound bad :/
Whatever...forget to my comment since not uploaded by host.
qinche
Tonoko
Axey
nice song ww
Shiki
好喜欢
LaunchedthousandShip
Star~
Natteke
I just need more posts so nevermind me
Kunagisa Tomo
Star~
loveFantasy
a lot effort was putting in imo so coming for a star

cheers up!
Void
Great first map.
Ikillforpies
starr
go3001
Why isn't this ranked yet?! D: star~
littlecar3370
加油加油加加油(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆
Red_old
海貓神曲 ヽ( ゚∀ ゚)ノ
Nishiji
Star ~~ :)
UnderminE
Erika ;_; Star.
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply