Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Koike Joanna - BEAUTIFUL WORLD [CatchTheBeat]

posted
Total Posts
92
show more
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion
@Dyl-Byl: Ctrl+G on 00:12:846 (5) - creates an awkward stoppage in flow and the antiflow here is intentional to emphasize the guitar sounds here - no change from me but thanks for taking a look.
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
Ok, all updated waiting for my Platter :ccc I'll finish today!!!

Ok, finally, all diffs are ready imo, also I added shini into tags 'cause many people search my maps with such word. (credits to Koliron :3)

-Waiting for arviejhay
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay

Sey wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

[General]
  1. 00:33:847 - Give this green line a drum sampleset in every difficulty, goes pretty will with the music.
  2. AiBAT lists a few issues on the storyboard, not exactly sure about everything, might be just derping, but just go through this again please:
    SPOILER
Codeless SB Elements --> i used the purpleBG like this to hide the background instead of using a black background that will cost 1.50x SB Load.
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0

Missing SB Elements --> they are not missing.

SB Elements Not .png --> WUT????? These files doesn't need to convert into .pngs.

Unused Image Files --> They are being Used!

It seems AIBat has some incorrect readings on the storyboard. In short, AIBat Sucks at checking the storyboard

Thank you! :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/x7j3e7x2a06w5 ... 9.rar?dl=0
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
rew0825
Hi from my Modding Queue. (So late sorry about that) //My english is not good TT

[Platter]

  1. 00:06:513 (2) - move end slider to right? I think it's look better flow.
  2. 00:07:847 (1) - move end slider to right? I think it's look better flow.
[Sh1senkyo's World]

  1. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think on these notes is so hard to catch. should it's to other pattern. it's can same on Platter but it's should have Hdash :3
  2. 00:05:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,) - it's will look better if you can change these notes to stream curve note. Exam.
  3. 00:10:181 (1,2) - change these notes to 1/2 but it's still have Hdash
  4. 00:15:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes stream should be add width curve.
  5. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think on this is look hard. move (2) to right between (1,3) and move (5) to left between (4,5)
  6. 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as first

Good luck :3
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue. (So late sorry about that) //My english is not good TT

[Platter]

  1. 00:06:513 (2) - move end slider to right? I think it's look better flow. Yeah, it looks much better, fixed~~
  2. 00:07:847 (1) - move end slider to right? I think it's look better flow. No, I'm making something mirrored with 00:08:180 (2) -
[Sh1senkyo's World]

  1. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think on these notes is so hard to catch. should it's to other pattern. it's can same on Platter but it's should have Hdash :3 That's was my intention, I asked for another Rain to avoid problems on spread, so it's good imo.
  2. 00:05:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,) - it's will look better if you can change these notes to stream curve note. Exam. How do you know that I love this pattern? xD but at this part I feel that before the jumping section a little rest could be good for players.
  3. 00:10:181 (1,2) - change these notes to 1/2 but it's still have Hdash Why?? :ccc will be too boring because I did the same pattern at 00:12:847 (1,2) - and prviously I did the same
  4. 00:15:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes stream should be add width curve. Rest again because I abuse of the curve stream all over the map xD
  5. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think on this is look hard. move (2) to right between (1,3) and move (5) to left between (4,5) I don't know if jusenkyo wants to change such pattern, I'll ask him.
  6. 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as first consistency <3

Good luck :3
Thanks rew <3
koliron
791 posts
Joined July 2014
koliron


General
  1. @shini POR FAVOR añadí -shini- en las etiquetas, ya hablamos de esto varias veces ))): por cierto tenes varias atgs innecesarias, como "op" porque es parte de la palabra "opening", o "world" "beautiful" porque estan en el titulo, tengo un toc con esto, perdoname x: ah y.. supongo que añadiste esas tags (world-is-still-beautiful) como traduccion del source, entonces deberias poner "the" porque la traduccion correcta es el mundo es hermoso todavía lo que haría que las 4 tags fuesen completamente inservibles huehue
  2. @jbhyperion the widescreen support is not enabled in your cup

Cup
  1. 00:14:513 (2) - I think make this slider more horizontal would be better, personally i think movements like 00:13:847 (1,2,3) - could kill a lot of beginners, another option is put 00:15:013 (3) - to the right of (2), the thing is not to stop for so little time, this is hard for beginners imo
  2. 00:45:847 (1) - I feel like suddenly the rhythm is not enough intese for the kiai ): except this, everything is 1/1 (or +some 1/2 notes), you could add notes in 00:46:180 - 00:46:680 - following the vocal, or just make this as a 1/1 slider and add a note in 00:46:847 - ! x3
  3. 00:56:513 (1) - Mh cup players could miss here easyly, why not make the curve in 00:56:847 - ? (maybe the same for 00:08:513 (1) - but this is 1/1 so is not so hard)

    niceeee cuuuup

Salad
  1. Personally i think this salad has a lot of dash, i will try to suggest about this
  2. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4) - i'd suggest to make a dash only to the first slider, to notice the new stanza, this is still the beginning of the song, is like wow suddenly 4 dash in a row, its a lot for a salad imo
  3. 00:05:013 (1) - Mh i think this nc is not necessary, the combo is just 3 notes, same in 00:07:513 -
  4. 00:05:180 (2,1) - actually this is the best place to add a dash, maybe with a curve in (1) could work niceee
  5. 00:08:513 (1,2) - I dont think a dash here is recommendable, is not so strong, do not forget that salads are for players who didnt use the dash/just a little, so is better to add just some of them per minute, even following the guitar is exactly the same as the rest around here
  6. To follow correctly the stanza, the nc would be in 00:10:180 - , not in 00:10:513 - following the guitar or those weird sounds ljkcfdslik
  7. 00:12:847 (3,1,2) - confusing distances! x.x seems like a dash but is catchable without, i would reduce this a bit}
  8. 00:13:847 (3,1) - Same about ncs here, fits better in 3, same for 00:27:180 (7,1) - 00:40:513 (4,1) - 00:47:180 (1,2) - 00:47:180 (1,2) - 00:53:180 (5,1) - 00:55:180 (4,1) -
  9. 00:14:013 (4,1) - Same here, maybe you could add a dash to 00:15:013 - for that strong sound
  10. 00:20:347 (5,1) - maybe a dash here could work, but the current movement is so awkward, i think this would be fixed with a curve in (5), like this
  11. 00:24:180 (1,2,3) - I dont feel like dash here is necessary, this section is not intense and individually they are not strong enough imo, also 2 dash in a row could be so hard for salad players D:
  12. 00:26:180 (6,7,1) - the dash to (1) is really unexpected, please put (1,2) closer, you could ctrl+h if for example
  13. 00:30:013 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - same here, probably would be better to use dash only when the vocal is strong, and the reduce the rest because are like an "almost-dash" lkfjdlkdfsk
  14. 00:39:847 (2,3,4) - I think the dash would be better to 00:40:513 - to notice when the kiai starts aaaa, and reduce 00:39:847 (2,3) - to not make a lot of dash here
  15. 00:41:513 (2,3,4) - 2 dash is a row again x.x please reduceeee >..<
  16. 00:46:847 (5,1,2) - 00:48:513 (4,1,2) - 00:57:680 (2,3,4) - 01:03:847 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ ayyy (the last one are 3 dash and 3 dash/hardlywalkable(?) )
  17. 00:52:513 - Personally i think the rhythm could be improved, for example removing 00:53:680 - 00:55:013 (4) - , without them sounds much better! :)
  18. 01:09:513 (1,2) - After a spinner, this could kill many players x.x i'd suggest to reduce the distance a bit
  19. 01:11:347 (1) - Mh i think this nc is just unnecessary, is not a new stanza and the previous combo is just 4

Platter
  1. 00:07:513 (4,1,2) - huh este moviemiento es un poco raro, porque debes saltar hasta 00:07:847 (1) - y despues ir a la izq, prefería ver algo como esto
  2. 00:21:847 - mh siento que la densidad de notas desde acá hasta 00:25:180 - reduce demasiado, solo usaste 1/1, podrias añadir algunas notas más como en 00:23:013 - 00:23:680 - 00:25:013 -
  3. 00:30:347 (4,1,2) - entiendo lo que hiciste acá pero tal vez es un poco fuerte la distancia, te recomiendo poner 4 y 1 un poco más al medio, o tal vez una curva en 1
  4. 00:39:013 (6,1,2,3,4) - esta curva podria estar mejor, despues de 6 los jugadores suelen ir al medio cuando no ven notas para asegurarse llegar a la siguiente, enotnces vendrian a saltar y tener que ir para el lado contrario siguiendo la curva ayy acá hay una forma facil de resolverlo
  5. 00:53:847 (1,2,3) - mmh tiene la misma cantidad de notas que la cup e incluso mucho menos que la salad, te recomiendo añadir un poco más por acá, al menos in 00:55:180 - siguiendo la voz, no te olvides que en el kiai time es mejor que haya más notas que en el normal
  6. 00:57:347 (3,4) - entiendo que seguiste el instrumentio, pero la voz es mil veces más notoria, al jugarlo en ritmo se siente bastante raro, además de por lo mismo de la sugerencia de acá arriba ^^^

    Probably the best platter ever

Rain
  1. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mmh, i think would be better to follow only the strongest sounds here (guitar) as the platter or overdose, technically there are piano notes in the tail of these sliders, but they are not possible to listen in game imo, at least in comparision with the guitar (btw is not consistent with 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )
  2. 00:07:013 (1,2) - why so close? o.o i expected a dash here, that sound is pretty strong, is even possible to catch without move the ryuuta, same suggestion for 00:09:680 (1,2) - and 00:22:513 (3,4) -
  3. 00:17:013 (2,3,4,5) - the rhythm sounds weird to me, because 2 is only following the vocal, maybe would be better to replace these notes with 2 sliders, then players could notice easily that is following the vocal
  4. 00:20:347 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - uh i think is not necessary a lot of nc here, you could remove at least one of them, like 00:21:097 (1) - , this one dont feels really necessary, the drum is there since 00:20:847 - so i cant find a reason to use it
  5. 00:23:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really think that is neceesary make a lot of movement here? specially with left right left right, would be better with a circle and a 1/1 slider following the vocal, for example :3
  6. 00:29:513 (1,2,3,4) - mmh this pattern is not hard but could feels better, 1/4 hyper and then 1/2 dash is weird imo, at least in rain :/ why not a slider with revese 00:29:847 - ? another option could be remove 00:29:763 (2) - and make a double hyper
  7. 00:37:847 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - i think the nc would be better in 00:37:847 - because the drum starts here, so its a good way to notice it
  8. 00:45:180 (3,4,5,6) - mmh all of them to the left? ): that could be boring, why not 00:45:680 (6) - like in x304? then would be a movement to the right to follow the vocal since 00:45:513 -
  9. 00:55:680 (4,5,1) - 00:56:180 (2,3,4,5) - wow these movements could be really hard, probably reduce the distance between these circles would be better

World
  1. 00:00:514 - preferiría que no haya dash en el comienzo del mapa, sobretodo cuando es taaan tranquilo, al punto de que son incluso 3 hypers )':
  2. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ya con solo chequear la diferencia entre estas distancias podes saber que 00:03:680 (3,4) - puede llegar a ser muy dificil, y probablemente 00:04:347 (2,3) - , te recomiendo reducir un poco estas distancias (por cierto, incluso podrias añadir hyper a todos no? yo creo que encajan perfecto
  3. 00:06:680 (4,5,1) - Whoo! yo esperaba mucho más un hyper a (1) que a (5), no te olvides que los hypers siempre son prioridad cuando es un nuevo combo/estrofa, podrias simplemente ctrl+g en 00:07:013 (1) -
  4. 00:07:347 (2) - ya al jugarlo senti un ritmo raro por aca... porqué no terminarlo en 1/1? ese sonido es importante!
  5. 00:10:180 (1,2) - me gustarí ver mejores curvas por acá, tipo que desde 00:10:347 - 00:10:680 - no haya que hacer tanto movimiento, es raro ver sldiers rectos en que terminen en 3/4
  6. 00:15:013 - es un sonido muy fuerte!! esperaba un hyper ))):
  7. 00:21:513 - siento que es mejor seguir el tambor acá, haciendo un stream de 4 notas
  8. 00:26:513 - esto es 1/3, es decir notas en 00:26:513 - 00:26:625 - 00:26:736 - (las siguentes estan bien)
  9. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mh los hypers son raros aca, no encuentro ninguna razon para usarlos, el unico que podrias añadir seria a 00:34:513 (5) - debido a la nota del piano
  10. 00:39:847 (1,2,3,4) - entos sldiers casi verticales al jugarlos podria ser un poco incomodo, es como quen o es seguro si son verticales u horizontales, recomendaría simplemente hacerlos horizontales, se juegan mucho mejor :b por lo general algun slider 1/4 vertical esta bien para variar pero aca son solo 4
  11. 00:49:513 (3,1) - realmente esperaba un hyper acá, incluso usaste finish D: lo mismo en 00:58:680 (4,1) -
  12. 00:56:180 (1,2,3,4) - si vas a hacer una curva, mejor que sea algo más jugable, esto es como que solo hay que quedarse quieto, a lo que me refiero es a más curva
  13. 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - al igual que al principio (00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -)
  14. 01:07:180 (1,2,3,4) - no veo razón para el hyper a 3, seria mejor seguir el tambor, añadiendo a (2) y (4)

fdljfdsk good luck! :)
Last edited by koliron , edited 3 times in total.
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

koliron wrote:



General
  1. @shini POR FAVOR añadí -shini- en las etiquetas, ya hablamos de esto varias veces ))): pero si ahi esta O.o? por cierto tenes varias atgs innecesarias, como "op" porque es parte de la palabra "opening" lol esa es la razon, no seria el primer mapa con ese tag, incluso a mis mapas endings les sigo agregando el ed ya que es una forma abreviada, o "world" "beautiful" porque estan en el titulo sep en esto si creo que tienes razon, copie esto del mapa de appleeatearx, tengo un toc con esto, perdoname x: ah y.. supongo que añadiste esas tags (world-is-still-beautiful) como traduccion del source, entonces deberias poner "the" porque la traduccion correcta es el mundo es hermoso todavía lo que haría que las 4 tags fuesen completamente inservibles huehue en esto si prefiero dejarlo como lo hizo aplee
  2. @jbhyperion the widescreen support is not enabled in your cup I'll fix it JBH, is my mistake xD

Platter
  1. Espero que... llegue tarde. u.u
  2. 00:07:513 (4,1,2) - huh este moviemiento es un poco raro, porque debes saltar hasta 00:07:847 (1) - y despues ir a la izq, prefería ver algo como esto para mi no era raro, pero creo que el patrón queda mas bonito, fixed
  3. 00:21:847 - mh siento que la densidad de notas desde acá hasta 00:25:180 - reduce demasiado, solo usaste 1/1, podrias añadir algunas notas más como en 00:23:013 - 00:23:680 - 00:25:013 - la densidad de notas creo que seria una buena sugerencia si todas fueran mis diffs, pero ya que la mayoria son GDs podemos tratar de evitar esto, sobre todo en las diffs que aun no has modeado, ya que quiero que todos se sientan libre de seguir lo que ellos oyen y no tener que reducir patrones por mi culpa, de todos modos es una buena sugerencia ya que si siento medio vacia esta parte como para ser Platter, asi que decidi agregar las frutas recomendadas y otras mas, fixed
  4. 00:30:347 (4,1,2) - entiendo lo que hiciste acá pero tal vez es un poco fuerte la distancia, te recomiendo poner 4 y 1 un poco más al medio, o tal vez una curva en 1 Nope, esto si fue con mucha intencion, ya que estoy cansado de ver platters totalmente faciles, esto le da un toque especial imo
  5. 00:39:013 (6,1,2,3,4) - esta curva podria estar mejor, despues de 6 los jugadores suelen ir al medio cuando no ven notas para asegurarse llegar a la siguiente, enotnces vendrian a saltar y tener que ir para el lado contrario siguiendo la curva ayy acá hay una forma facil de resolverlo. esto es muy hipotetico, porque yo no me voy al centro cuando hay breaks, y si lo hago es cuando el break es demasiado largo, pero lo aceptare y lo tendre en cuenta la proxima vez, fixed
  6. 00:53:847 (1,2,3) - mmh tiene la misma cantidad de notas que la cup e incluso mucho menos que la salad, te recomiendo añadir un poco más por acá, al menos in 00:55:180 - siguiendo la voz, no te olvides que en el kiai time es mejor que haya más notas que en el normal creo que debi haber cortado el kiai lol, esta vez no me fijare en la densidad ya que si no hay notas es porque agrege mas jumps y eso hace que la diff sea un poco mas divertida.
  7. 00:57:347 (3,4) - entiendo que seguiste el instrumentio, pero la voz es mil veces más notoria, al jugarlo en ritmo se siente bastante raro, además de por lo mismo de la sugerencia de acá arriba ^^^ lol yo pensaba lo mismo pero luego de escuchar la sugerencia de Sey y testearlo vi que este patron era mas divertido, creeme siguiendo la voz suena y se ve terrible xD

    Probably the best platter ever Thank you~~

World
  1. 00:00:514 - preferiría que no haya dash en el comienzo del mapa, sobretodo cuando es taaan tranquilo, al punto de que son incluso 3 hypers )': pero donde quedaria la diferencia con mi platter uwu, ademas quedamos en que tratariamos de hacer esta diff un poco mas dificil para que quede como Overdose.
  2. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ya con solo chequear la diferencia entre estas distancias podes saber que 00:03:680 (3,4) - puede llegar a ser muy dificil, y probablemente 00:04:347 (2,3) - , te recomiendo reducir un poco estas distancias (por cierto, incluso podrias añadir hyper a todos no? yo creo que encajan perfecto en cuestion a reducir me parece una mala idea, no entiendo porque no te gustan esos patrones :c todos mis testers lo adoraron porque trate de usar un patron antiguo, mi intencion fue ir haciendole copy/paste a 00:03:180 (1,2) - pero agregandole una distancia aproximada a los 0.40x progresivamente, ahora siguiendo tu sugerencia de agregarle hyper a todos, me gusto desde el primer momento que empeze a mapearlo, pero el espacio no me alcanzaba uwu, y no me refiero a esta parte, porque recuerda que tengo un patron muy identico en 00:59:180 - asi que si aca alcanza ahi tambien deberia alcanzar y eso no ocurre, espero que entiendas mi situacion xD
  3. 00:06:680 (4,5,1) - Whoo! yo esperaba mucho más un hyper a (1) que a (5), no te olvides que los hypers siempre son prioridad cuando es un nuevo combo/estrofa, podrias simplemente ctrl+g en 00:07:013 (1) - orz, tienes mucha razon, me comi ese hyper, no le puse Ctrl+G porque el patron quedaba muy feo, preferi mantener consistencia con 00:08:847 (3,4,5,6) -, de todos modos fixed
  4. 00:07:347 (2) - ya al jugarlo senti un ritmo raro por aca... porqué no terminarlo en 1/1? ese sonido es importante!
  5. 00:10:180 (1,2) - me gustaría ver mejores curvas por acá, tipo que desde 00:10:347 - 00:10:680 - no haya que hacer tanto movimiento, es raro ver sldiers rectos en que terminen en 3/4 haber paso por paso, las curvas pudieron ir como tambien no, lo hice mas por copion, ahorita te daras cuenta porque, supongo que con 00:10:347 - 00:10:680 - te refieres a que sobreenfatize los sliders al punto de hacerlos 3/4, y que los sliders rectos en 3/4 son raros, respecto a la sobreenfatizada, lo hice mas por variedad ya que con 00:07:847 (3,4) - y 00:12:847 (1,2,3) - me parecen mas que suficientes para ponerles 1/2, aproveche un sonido de campanilla para darle ese toque de Overdose y que haga la diferencia con la diff de kurokami, ver estos tipos de sliders no son raros y si lo son, pues deberian haber mas ya que son muy divertidos, recuerdas que dije que era un copion pues este patron lo saque de una diff de la persona que es mi inspiracion como mapper, Spectator, lo saque de Spec's Deluge
  6. 00:15:013 - es un sonido muy fuerte!! esperaba un hyper ))): overenphaziser~~ tienes mucha razon, pero se ve terriblemente feo, defendere mi patron apoyandome en el piano que tmb empieza ahi, se podria decir que hay doble proposito? :3
  7. 00:21:513 - siento que es mejor seguir el tambor acá, haciendo un stream de 4 notas fixed
  8. 00:26:513 - esto es 1/3, es decir notas en 00:26:513 - 00:26:625 - 00:26:736 - (las siguentes estan bien) no es necesario. ademas hay dos mapsets ranked de esta cancion y ninguna sigue el 1/3.
  9. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mh los hypers son raros aca, no encuentro ninguna razon para usarlos, el unico que podrias añadir seria a 00:34:513 (5) - debido a la nota del piano es un patron de Jusen pero para serte sincero me encanta. estoy seguro que no es la primera vez que se usa, si tengo tiempo tratare de buscar algun mapa con un patron muy similar, recuerdo haberle visto algo asi a CLSW.
  10. 00:39:847 (1,2,3,4) - entos sldiers casi verticales al jugarlos podria ser un poco incomodo, es como quen o es seguro si son verticales u horizontales, recomendaría simplemente hacerlos horizontales, se juegan mucho mejor :b por lo general algun slider 1/4 vertical esta bien para variar pero aca son solo 4 pero tienen un efecto especial ya que las distancias van incrementandose gradualmente, no le veo lo malo lool
  11. 00:49:513 (3,1) - realmente esperaba un hyper acá, incluso usaste finish D: lo mismo en 00:58:680 (4,1) - ohhh nice catch, el segundo si no me gusta debido a que no hay finish dada la carencia del sonido de plato, ademas no voy a poder poner 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -, no te imaginas cuanto me demore para hacer que alzanzara xD
  12. 00:56:180 (1,2,3,4) - si vas a hacer una curva, mejor que sea algo más jugable, esto es como que solo hay que quedarse quieto, a lo que me refiero es a más curva Added
  13. 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - al igual que al principio (00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -) es un muy buen patron, espero que lo reconsideres.
  14. 01:07:180 (1,2,3,4) - no veo razón para el hyper a 3, seria mejor seguir el tambor, añadiendo a (2) y (4) Si, exagere con los hypers.

Gracias Koli <3
Thank you <3
Last edited by -Sh1n1- , edited 4 times in total.
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

koliron wrote:

Rain
  1. 00:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mmh, i think would be better to follow only the strongest sounds here (guitar) as the platter or overdose, technically there are piano notes in the tail of these sliders, but they are not possible to listen in game imo, at least in comparision with the guitar (btw is not consistent with 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ) Hm, while its true with adding circles instead of sliders the Hypers will be removed due to the high distance in time. I would like to keep the Hypers on the first drums here.
  2. 00:23:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really think that is neceesary make a lot of movement here? specially with left right left right, would be better with a circle and a 1/1 slider following the vocal, for example :3 Ugh, what?
  3. 00:45:180 (3,4,5,6) - mmh all of them to the left? ): that could be boring, why not 00:45:680 (6) - like in x304? then would be a movement to the right to follow the vocal since 00:45:513 - Yes it might be boring but to be honest, none of them is strong enough to create some movement there. They all have the same sound which is nice for a movement like this.
  4. 00:55:680 (4,5,1) - 00:56:180 (2,3,4,5) - wow these movements could be really hard, probably reduce the distance between these circles would be better Hm, I don't think its really that hard so I keep it for now.
Thank you.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:895574
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\kuro.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
17013,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,40,0,0
17513,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
208,304,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,224,680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,847,2,0,L|112:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,1513,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,1847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,224,2013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,2180,2,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,2513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,2847,2,0,L|384:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,3347,2,0,L|125:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,144,3847,2,0,L|386:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,4347,2,0,L|64:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,4847,2,0,L|448:192,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,5180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,208,5347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,5430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,304,5847,6,0,L|48:256,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,6180,2,0,L|288:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,7013,6,0,L|384:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,7513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,7847,2,0,P|80:96|144:192,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,6,0,L|288:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,8847,2,0,L|496:288,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,256,9680,6,0,L|256:208,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,10180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,10513,2,0,P|16:272|96:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11180,6,0,L|240:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,11513,2,0,L|480:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,11847,2,0,L|208:272,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,12347,6,0,L|192:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,12847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,96,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,96,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,13847,6,0,L|96:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,14180,2,0,L|304:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,240,14847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,14930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,142,15013,6,0,L|112:96,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,15513,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,80,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,16180,2,0,L|224:256,1,45,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,16347,2,0,L|96:336,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,16513,6,0,P|256:352|304:256,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,17013,2,0,L|48:160,1,135.000005149842
208,112,17347,2,0,L|336:64,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17680,6,0,L|16:112,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18180,2,0,L|176:128,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,18513,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,64,19013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,19180,6,0,P|368:112|336:224,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,240,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,20347,6,0,L|336:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,20847,2,0,L|192:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,21097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,0,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,16,21513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,21680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,21763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,161,21847,6,0,L|272:208,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,22180,2,0,L|32:272,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,22513,2,0,L|288:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,224,23013,6,0,L|32:272,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,23513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,23847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,16,24013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,0,24180,2,0,L|320:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,24513,6,0,L|32:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,24847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,253,25347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,288,25680,6,0,L|384:240,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,26180,2,0,L|32:144,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,32,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,32,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,16,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
32,48,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
32,144,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,27180,6,0,P|224:192|192:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,288,28013,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,28347,6,0,L|176:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,28680,2,0,L|352:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,16,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,16,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,29513,6,0,L|464:32,1,90
224,112,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,160,30013,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,224,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,208,31013,6,0,P|368:176|288:80,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,80,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
160,80,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,16,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,16,32513,6,0,P|512:48|448:144,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,33013,2,0,P|208:208|192:256,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,0,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,48,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,35180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,272,35680,6,0,L|224:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36013,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,36347,2,0,P|96:128|112:240,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,36847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,160,37180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37847,6,0,L|160:240,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,38180,2,0,L|352:304,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,38513,2,0,L|144:80,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,32,38847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,48,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,32,39347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,39513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,39680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39847,6,0,L|176:80,2,90,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,40263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,40347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,240,40430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,286,40513,6,0,P|304:240|272:144,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,41013,2,0,L|48:80,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,41513,2,0,L|224:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,41847,6,0,L|112:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,96,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,128,42513,2,0,L|128:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,42847,2,0,L|384:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43180,6,0,P|64:240|80:144,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,43680,2,0,L|320:160,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,44180,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,44513,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,44847,2,0,L|192:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,45347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,304,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,352,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,336,45847,6,0,L|208:224,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46347,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46847,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,47180,6,0,L|96:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,208,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,240,47847,2,0,L|160:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,48180,2,0,L|352:336,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,48513,6,0,L|240:160,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,49013,2,0,L|48:64,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,49513,2,0,L|192:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,96,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,112,50180,2,0,L|432:176,1,90,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,50430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,50680,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,288,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,51180,6,0,L|448:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,51513,2,0,L|208:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,51847,2,0,L|368:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,52180,2,0,L|224:144,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,224,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,272,53013,2,0,L|16:224,2,90,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,53513,2,0,L|432:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,53847,6,0,L|160:64,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,54180,2,0,L|368:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,54513,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,54847,2,0,L|352:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,208,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,112,55680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,55763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,176,55847,6,0,L|464:272,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,208,56347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,56513,6,0,L|464:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,57180,2,0,L|32:80,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,57847,6,0,L|304:80,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,58847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,80,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,64,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,32,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,16,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,112,61180,6,0,L|288:64,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,208,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,61847,6,0,L|128:352,2,90,4|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,62347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,224,62513,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,80,63180,6,0,L|304:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,63513,2,0,L|112:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,63847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,272,64014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,336,64347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,336,64513,6,0,L|416:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65013,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,65513,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,65847,6,0,P|48:128|128:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,66513,2,0,P|464:128|384:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,67180,6,0,L|144:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,67513,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,67847,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,68180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,68347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,68513,6,0,L|96:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,68847,2,0,L|416:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,69180,2,0,L|64:320,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,69763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,69847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,128,70013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,64,70347,2,0,L|416:112,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,111,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,176,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,176,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion

koliron wrote:



General
  1. @jbhyperion the widescreen support is not enabled in your cup fixed

Cup
  1. 00:14:513 (2) - I think make this slider more horizontal would be better, personally i think movements like 00:13:847 (1,2,3) - could kill a lot of beginners, another option is put 00:15:013 (3) - to the right of (2), the thing is not to stop for so little time, this is hard for beginners imo I feel this is fine, the slider is deliberately made vertical to avoid misses here so players can treat it as a single object (they do not have to move during it)
  2. 00:45:847 (1) - I feel like suddenly the rhythm is not enough intese for the kiai ): except this, everything is 1/1 (or +some 1/2 notes), you could add notes in 00:46:180 - 00:46:680 - following the vocal, or just make this as a 1/1 slider and add a note in 00:46:847 - ! x3 Made this into two 1/1 sliders and a circle, 1/2 spaced similar to 00:49:847 (3,4,5) -
  3. 00:56:513 (1) - Mh cup players could miss here easyly, why not make the curve in 00:56:847 - ? (maybe the same for 00:08:513 (1) - but this is 1/1 so is not so hard) Sure, done

    niceeee cuuuup /o/
fdljfdsk good luck! :)
Thanks for the mod!

Cup
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Hyperion's Cup
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still world is Beautiful opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:901632
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\JBhe.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
264,192,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,192,1847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
108,192,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,192,3180,6,0,P|396:112|288:92,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,4180,2,0,P|120:280|232:292,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,5847,5,6,0:0:0:0:
272,192,6180,2,0,L|164:176,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,7180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,116,7513,2,0,L|448:156,2,110,8|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,8513,6,0,L|68:208,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,9180,2,0,B|324:192|324:192|268:232,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,10013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,10180,2,0,L|328:260,2,110,8|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,11180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11513,2,0,L|300:176,1,110,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,124,12180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,80,12513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,80,12846,2,0,L|276:160,2,110,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,13847,6,0,L|452:80,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,14513,2,0,L|300:232,1,55,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,232,15013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
348,192,16180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
216,192,16513,2,0,L|128:264,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,260,17180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,262,17513,2,0,L|24:222,2,110,8|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,18513,2,0,L|380:264,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,19180,6,0,L|192:88,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,92,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,92,20513,2,0,L|120:184,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,21180,2,0,L|128:176,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,256,21847,6,0,L|400:280,2,110,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,256,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,256,23013,2,0,P|40:220|100:188,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,188,24180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,188,24513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,188,24847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,188,25013,2,0,P|424:148|360:56,1,220,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,26013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,56,26180,2,0,L|424:100,2,110,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
176,56,27180,6,0,P|80:92|44:212,1,220,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,28347,2,0,L|316:220,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,216,29013,2,0,L|364:216,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,29847,6,0,L|108:260,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,192,30347,2,0,L|340:160,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,31013,2,0,L|360:72,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,72,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
344,164,32013,2,0,L|360:220,1,55,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
228,248,32513,6,0,B|164:248|136:228|136:176|196:148|248:148|292:120|292:72|248:44|196:44,1,330,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,33847,2,0,L|168:260,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,34513,6,0,L|336:204,3,55,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,212,35180,2,0,L|508:156,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,164,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
276,168,36013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36347,12,8,39013,0:0:0:0:
200,192,40513,6,0,L|320:160,1,110,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,41180,2,0,L|64:76,1,110,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,108,41847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,108,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,108,42513,2,0,L|340:108,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,43180,6,0,L|272:224,2,110,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,44180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
164,192,44513,2,0,L|272:240,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,236,45180,2,0,L|276:284,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,45847,6,0,L|20:252,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,180,46347,2,0,L|204:152,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,46847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,280,47180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,280,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,280,47847,2,0,L|308:244,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,48513,6,0,L|32:164,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,96,49013,2,0,L|280:137,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,49847,2,0,L|444:248,2,55,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,50347,2,0,P|320:236|348:280,1,110,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,320,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,324,51180,6,0,L|252:212,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,192,51847,2,0,L|376:80,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,52513,2,0,L|212:192,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,53180,2,0,L|88:304,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,192,53847,6,0,L|356:212,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,54513,2,0,L|99:96,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,116,55180,2,0,L|159:45,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,232,55847,2,0,L|100:161,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,56513,6,0,B|356:196|356:196|400:244|360:296,1,220,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,224,57513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,224,57847,2,0,P|28:184|124:132,1,220,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,128,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,188,59180,6,0,L|100:256,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,59680,2,0,L|252:312,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,304,60180,2,0,L|104:372,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,60680,2,0,L|248:192,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,61180,2,0,L|500:236,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,61847,6,0,L|220:192,1,110,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,62513,2,0,L|200:80,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,63180,2,0,L|428:160,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,192,63847,2,0,L|220:304,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,64513,6,0,L|484:232,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,172,65013,2,0,L|316:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,65680,2,0,L|276:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,224,66180,2,0,L|460:176,2,110,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
240,192,69847,6,0,L|248:112,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,70347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,140,70680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
100,140,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71347,2,0,L|268:256,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
QHideaki13
Global Moderator
455 posts
Joined March 2011
QHideaki13
All fixed!

Thanks for the mod, koliron~

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Q-H's Salad
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:897929
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/Names/QHide.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
32513,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
50347,-100,4,3,0,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56180,-100,4,3,0,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
224,192,514,6,0,L|144:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,1847,6,0,L|49:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,2680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,2847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,192,3180,6,0,L|240:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,3680,2,0,L|248:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,4180,2,0,L|208:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,4680,2,0,L|256:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,192,5013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,5180,2,8,L|496:192,1,130
256,192,5847,6,0,L|96:192,1,130,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6680,2,0,L|500:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7847,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8847,2,0,L|416:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,9347,2,0,L|144:192,2,130,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,10180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,10513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,10680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,192,10847,2,0,L|338:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,11847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12013,2,0,L|112:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,12847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
305,192,14013,2,0,L|385:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
31,192,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
95,192,14847,2,0,L|175:192,1,65,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,15847,6,0,L|464:192,8,32.5,8|8|8|8|10|8|10|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,17180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,17513,2,0,L|112:192,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18013,2,0,L|432:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,18513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
99,191,19180,2,0,L|243:191,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,20347,2,0,P|96:96|32:144,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,20847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
304,192,21097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,192,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,192,21513,2,0,L|216:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,22847,2,0,L|320:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,23513,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,24180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,192,24847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
210,192,25013,2,0,L|354:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,26013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,192,26180,2,0,L|50:192,2,130,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,27180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,192,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,191,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,29680,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,31013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,192,31347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,192,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,192,32513,2,0,L|96:192,1,292.50001115799,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33847,6,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,112,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,35180,2,0,L|304:112,2,65,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,36013,6,0,L|256:192,1,130,10|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,36847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37180,2,0,L|412:192,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,38347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38847,2,0,L|272:192,1,65,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,39513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,39847,2,0,L|338:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40180,2,0,L|352:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
62,192,40847,2,0,L|222:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,192,41513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,41847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,42180,2,0,L|272:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,42847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,43180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43513,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,44180,2,0,L|352:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46180,2,0,L|480:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,192,46847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,47180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
190,192,47513,2,0,L|346:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,48180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48513,2,0,L|400:192,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,49513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49847,2,0,L|386:192,2,65,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,192,50347,2,0,L|334:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,50847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,51180,6,0,L|64:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,52180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,53513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,54013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
480,192,54680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,55680,6,0,L|336:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,56180,2,0,L|16:192,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,192,57013,6,0,L|319:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,192,59180,6,0,L|117:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,59680,2,0,L|432:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60180,2,0,L|116:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,60680,2,0,L|432:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,192,61180,6,0,L|97:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,61847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
255,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,192,63180,2,0,L|399:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,63847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,192,64513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,192,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,65513,6,0,L|176:192,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,66180,2,0,L|320:192,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
336,192,69513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69680,2,0,L|176:192,1,65,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,70013,6,0,L|256:192,3,130,10|10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
Cowboy
472 posts
Joined November 2011
Cowboy
Reply

koliron wrote:

World
  1. 00:21:513 - siento que es mejor seguir el tambor acá, haciendo un stream de 4 notasHecho
  2. 00:26:513 - esto es 1/3, es decir notas en 00:26:513 - 00:26:625 - 00:26:736 - (las siguentes estan bien)^
  3. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mh los hypers son raros aca, no encuentro ninguna razon para usarlos, el unico que podrias añadir seria a 00:34:513 (5) - debido a la nota del piano Lo tomaré en cuenta, ya que esta dificultad es un poco más difícil a comparación de la otra Rain.


fdljfdsk good luck! :) Gracias por el mod.

Sorry for the lateSh1n1, i didn't noticed.

Update with Koliron's mod
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16513,39847
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.199999

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Sh1senkyo's World
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:885110
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\jusen x sh1.png",320,240
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 M,0,5847,8828,258,359,258,357
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,-152,,97,429
 S,0,-152,,0.5458066
 P,0,-152,,A
 F,0,-152,180,0,1
 F,0,180,15180,1
 F,0,15180,15513,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-jusen.png",320,240
 M,0,16513,,109,426
 S,0,16513,,0.5458066
 P,0,16513,,A
 F,0,16513,16847,0,1
 F,0,16847,39180,1,0.9850299
 F,0,39180,39513,0.9850299,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,40513,,102,427
 S,0,40513,,0.5705808
 P,0,40513,,A
 F,0,40513,40847,0,1
 F,0,40847,71994,1,0.9610779
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
248,344,514,6,0,P|200:352|152:348,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,1013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,200,1346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,118,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,68,1679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,1847,6,0,P|380:80|430:88,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,2347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,216,2679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,298,2846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,348,3012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,252,3347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,188,3847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,200,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,124,4347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,120,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,36,4847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,64,5013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,105,5096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,152,5179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,194,5262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,237,5346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,280,5429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,300,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
328,332,5847,6,0,L|336:216,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,6180,2,0,L|54:264,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,76,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,76,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,272,7013,6,0,L|24:224,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,7347,2,0,L|492:184,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,124,7847,2,0,P|172:116|128:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,8180,2,0,P|434:51|481:43,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,156,8680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,8847,2,0,P|260:236|344:204,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,208,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,332,9681,2,0,P|432:292|508:336,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,10180,6,0,P|176:212|108:224,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,10514,2,0,P|416:164|480:184,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,10848,2,0,P|200:120|152:124,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,260,11180,6,0,P|408:308|412:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,11513,2,0,P|72:88|116:160,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,12013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,156,12180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,204,12347,2,0,P|440:240|448:344,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,12847,6,0,L|116:204,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,13180,2,0,L|504:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,284,13513,2,0,L|160:284,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,216,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,180,13930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,133,14013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,97,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,100,14180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,32,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
452,32,14847,2,0,L|492:76,2,47.5,8|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,348,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
343,305,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,258,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,214,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,173,16180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,127,16263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,81,16347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
353,41,16430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,280,16513,6,0,P|108:224|92:108,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,17013,2,0,L|488:276,2,190,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,17847,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,18013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,64,18180,2,0,L|92:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,18513,2,0,L|280:200,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,52,18847,2,0,L|24:148,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,19180,6,0,P|364:228|316:112,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,19680,2,0,L|280:76,2,95,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,188,20347,6,0,P|414:200|474:273,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,20847,2,0,L|200:220,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,133,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
366,87,21346,1,8,0:3:0:0:
136,152,21513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,21597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,21680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,52,21736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,21847,6,0,P|420:248|468:144,2,190,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,22680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,316,22847,2,0,L|476:252,2,95,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,23347,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,168,23513,2,0,L|492:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,23847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,20,24013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,36,24180,2,0,L|212:136,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,24513,6,0,P|448:266|389:338,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,25013,2,0,P|52:232|118:325,1,190,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,32,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,88,25680,6,0,L|100:88,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,26180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,100,26347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,180,26513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,128,26680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
448,200,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,160,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
428,124,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,196,27180,6,0,P|120:228|48:176,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,27680,2,0,L|388:304|492:304,2,190,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,28513,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,220,28847,2,0,L|76:136,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,100,29347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,140,29513,6,0,L|128:60,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,20,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
468,128,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
204,80,30347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,88,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,152,31013,2,0,P|88:180|132:296,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,220,32013,6,0,L|80:196,2,95,8|8|2,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,32513,2,0,P|456:200|424:88,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,33013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,33347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,33680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,152,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,112,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,208,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,320,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,320,34847,6,0,L|456:320,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,184,35180,2,0,L|152:184,2,95,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
197,204,36013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36347,12,2,37513,0:0:0:0:
128,200,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,168,37930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,120,38013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,84,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,204,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,172,38263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,124,38346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,88,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,160,38513,6,0,L|116:108,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,38680,2,0,L|304:72,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,68,38847,2,0,L|96:28,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
100,80,39347,6,0,L|4:80,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,39847,6,0,L|272:200,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,40013,2,0,L|116:228,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,40180,2,0,L|300:268,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,40346,2,0,L|92:296,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,40513,6,0,P|376:232|312:176,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,41013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,56,41180,2,0,L|472:160,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,41513,2,0,L|204:280,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,316,41847,6,0,P|424:340|328:316,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,208,42513,2,0,L|132:208,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,116,42847,2,0,L|484:116,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,43180,6,0,P|184:76|80:52,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,43680,2,0,L|376:136,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,44180,2,0,L|32:292,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,44513,6,0,L|360:180,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,44847,2,0,L|172:296,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
494,200,45346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,118,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,93,45679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,45847,6,0,L|48:24,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,46347,2,0,P|300:64|416:28,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,46847,2,0,L|232:244,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,47180,6,0,P|456:204|400:124,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,92,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,47847,2,0,L|132:232,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,48180,2,0,L|456:259,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,48513,6,0,P|112:248|172:168,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,180,49013,2,0,P|460:104|400:24,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,49513,2,0,L|288:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,106,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
49,198,50180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
105,272,50346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,268,50513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
390,233,50596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,186,50679,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,153,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,156,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
149,121,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,74,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,41,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,51180,6,0,L|456:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,51513,2,0,L|56:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,51847,2,0,L|416:212,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,228,52180,2,0,L|62:155,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,324,52513,6,0,L|396:324,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,53180,2,0,L|396:232,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,160,53513,2,0,L|417:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,53847,6,0,L|28:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,54180,2,0,L|428:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,54514,2,0,L|60:200,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,208,54847,2,0,L|422:135,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,55180,6,0,L|52:108,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,55680,2,0,L|336:116,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,55847,2,0,L|288:80,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,56180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
131,208,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,255,56346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,297,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,339,56513,6,0,P|402:282|398:190,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
493,147,57180,2,0,P|412:103|329:142,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,57680,6,0,L|84:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,58013,2,0,L|260:307,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,58347,2,0,L|4:116,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,168,58847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,58930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,255,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,293,59097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
24,236,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
292,248,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,172,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,184,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
140,108,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
440,112,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,28,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
437,326,61180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,287,61263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,241,61346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,203,61430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,187,61513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,148,61596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,102,61679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,15,61847,6,0,L|488:120,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,62180,2,0,L|320:240,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,62513,2,0,L|56:300,2,95,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63180,6,0,L|72:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,168,63513,2,0,L|276:76,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63847,2,0,L|72:104,1,95,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,64180,2,0,L|188:28,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,64513,6,0,L|484:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,64847,2,0,L|344:64,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,36,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,98,65346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,188,65513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,279,65680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,320,65847,6,0,P|28:196|172:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,66513,2,0,P|484:196|340:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,67180,6,0,L|140:28,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,176,67513,2,0,L|316:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,316,67847,2,0,L|92:208,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,68180,2,0,L|272:232,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,152,68513,6,0,L|16:344,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,69013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,324,69180,2,0,L|496:240,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,69513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,180,69680,2,0,L|144:132,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,69847,6,0,L|360:68,1,95,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,68,70347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
460,68,70680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,232,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,152,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
104,152,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion
Looks like this needs a bit of a kick-start, gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine

General Comments:

  1. Song Folder: Storyboard image files exceed allowed dimensions: SB\sky.jpg is 1920x1200 and SB\flare.jpy is 854x854. Please reduce these images to below thr maximum threshold of 1366x768 for startic images
  2. Song Setup: No issues
  3. Metadata: My diff has inconsistent tags for some reason - please remove "Beautiful world" as it's the song title lol
  4. Timing: No issues
  5. Hitsounds: No issues
  6. AImod: Tags conflict explained under Metadata

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Q-H's Salad
  1. 00:10:847 (4,5) - Ending the slider on the downbeat prevents you from emphasising this strong sound. Would be better to reverse the order of these to circle + slider
  2. 00:13:180 (1) - NC seems unnecessary here for just two circles, there is no special emphasis and the previous combo is not especially long
  3. 00:21:513 (6,1) - Same as 00:10:847 (4,5) - this would play better as circle then slider
  4. 00:32:513 (5,1) - Swap NC to emphasize the rhythm change, 00:33:847 (1) is a relatively weak note relative to the previous slider
  5. 00:37:847 (1,2) - Spacing here is on the border of requiring dash. Suggest increasing or decreasing this slightly to make the movement more obvious
  6. 00:41:513 (1) - Unnecessary NC, this is part of the previous vocal phrase you're following and there is no need to divide this section into two combos for length
  7. 00:47:180 (1,2,1,2,1) - NC is very inconsistent and oddly placed here. Since you're following vocals, your best options to NC would be 00:47:513 (2) - and 00:49:847 (2) - for the change in vocal pitch
  8. 00:53:180 (1,4,1,1) - More confusing NC usage, for following vocals 00:53:847 (4) - 00:55:180 (1) - only would be better
  9. 00:56:180 (3) - Split into two circles with a jump between them, so much emphasis is lost here byt making this downbeat with finish a slidertail. NC here instead of 00:57:013 (1) would then follow the vocal pattern better
  10. 01:03:847 (1,3) - Swapping NC and removing from 01:05:513 (1) would follow the vocal rhythm better
  11. 01:05:513 (1,2,3) - Circle followed by the two sliders allows you to emphasise the strong vocal and cymbal sounds much better
  12. 01:09:680 (2,1) - Rhythm choice here is very questionable, since strong beats are place on slidertails with little emphasis and beats from different rhythms and sounds are mapped into the same object. 01:09:847 - 01:11:013 - especially need more emphasis, so I would try a rhythm like this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5433566

Platter
  1. 00:39:847 (7) - Suggest an NC here, there's a significant timeline separation from the previous pattern and fruit stack becomes quite high here by the end of the combo, possibly obstructing readability of following patterns
  2. 00:42:847 (3) - Split into 1/2 slider + circle to emphasise that strong vocal sound with a jump
  3. 00:45:847 (5) - NC for the crash cymbal emphasis?
  4. 00:57:347 (3,4,1) - Rhythm choice is unclear here, (3) follows vocals and ignores instrument, but (4) does the opposite without indication. I'd move (4) back 1/2 to fit that vocal sound and then add a circle at 00:58:347
  5. 00:58:680 (1,2) - Swap NC for emphasis on the snare drum and consistency with 01:00:180 (1,2)

Kurokami's Rain
  1. 00:30:013 (3,4) - Strong vocal sound could really use more emphasis here, I find myself overshooting this. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5433681 with 00:31:013 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl+Hed and move to the left to create a hyper to 00:31:013 (1) -?
  2. 00:49:847 (1,2,3) - (3) feels like it should have a dash, but the spacing is a bit ambiguous. It looks easily walkable, but the hyper + antiflow on 00:49:513 (3,1,2) - make it harder to catch than it should be. I moved 00:49:013 (2,3,1,2) left slightly to make a dash more clearly indicated
  3. 00:56:430 (5,1) - Strong hyper here makes it easy to overshoot and combo break on the big droplet. I'd move (1) left slightly and/or make it horizontal for better flow

Sh1senkyo's World
  1. 00:05:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:15:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personal preference, but a bit more curve would make these more interesting, as currently in can be stacked (caught standing still) which kinda defeats the purpose of having a curve in the first place :p
  2. 00:07:347 (2) - Split into circle + 1/2 slider to follow the guitar better, that strong white tick sound is unmapped atm and it feels very odd to play
  3. 00:08:680 (2,3) - Watch out for strong hyper into antiflow as it can result in overshooting and lots of unnecessary droplet misses. Suggest making this a curved slider or reducing hyper strength for better flow
  4. 00:36:347 (1) - Confused as to why you put a spinner here when all other diffs except Cup mapped this as notes
  5. 01:00:347 (2,3) - This spacing after the hyper is a little tight, I'd prefer if you reduced it a tiny bit, similar to 00:04:347 (2,3) -
Hope this helped, good luck! (:
QHideaki13
Global Moderator
455 posts
Joined March 2011
QHideaki13
Fixed the rest except for these two:
  1. 00:10:847 (4,5) - Ending the slider on the downbeat prevents you from emphasising this strong sound. Would be better to reverse the order of these to circle + slider
  2. 00:21:513 (6,1) - Same as 00:10:847 (4,5) - this would play better as circle then slider

    ( Hmm... I understand your intention but I have to disagree. Apparently there is no sound between the gap, so I would avoid swapping the circle and slider. )

Thanks for the mod~

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Q-H's Salad
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:897929
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/Names/QHide.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
32513,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
50347,-100,4,3,0,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56180,-100,4,3,0,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
224,192,514,6,0,L|144:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,1847,6,0,L|49:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,2680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,2847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,192,3180,6,0,L|240:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,3680,2,0,L|248:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,4180,2,0,L|208:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,4680,2,0,L|256:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,192,5013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,5180,2,8,L|496:192,1,130
256,192,5847,6,0,L|96:192,1,130,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6680,2,0,L|500:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7847,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8847,2,0,L|416:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,9347,2,0,L|144:192,2,130,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,10180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,10513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,10680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,192,10847,2,0,L|338:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,11847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12013,2,0,L|112:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,12847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
305,192,14013,2,0,L|385:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
31,192,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
95,192,14847,2,0,L|175:192,1,65,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,15847,6,0,L|464:192,8,32.5,8|8|8|8|10|8|10|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,17180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,17513,2,0,L|112:192,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18013,2,0,L|432:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,18513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
99,191,19180,2,0,L|243:191,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,20347,2,0,P|96:96|32:144,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,20847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
304,192,21097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,192,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,192,21513,2,0,L|216:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,22847,2,0,L|320:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,23513,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,24180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,192,24847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
210,192,25013,2,0,L|354:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,26013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,192,26180,2,0,L|50:192,2,130,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,27180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,192,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,191,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,29680,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,31013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,192,31347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,192,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,192,32513,6,0,L|96:192,1,292.50001115799,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,112,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,35180,2,0,L|304:112,2,65,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,36013,6,0,L|256:192,1,130,10|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,36847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37180,2,0,L|412:192,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,38347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,38513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,38680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,192,38847,2,0,L|240:192,1,65,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,39513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,39847,2,0,L|338:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40180,2,0,L|352:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
62,192,40847,2,0,L|222:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,192,41513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,41847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,42180,2,0,L|272:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,42847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,43180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43513,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,44180,2,0,L|352:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46180,2,0,L|480:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,192,46847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,47180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,192,47513,6,0,L|346:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,48180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48513,2,0,L|400:192,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,49513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49847,6,0,L|386:192,2,65,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,192,50347,2,0,L|334:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,50847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,51180,6,0,L|64:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,52180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,53513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,54013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
480,192,54680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,55680,6,0,L|336:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,56180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,56513,1,4,0:0:0:0:
129,192,57013,2,0,L|193:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,192,59180,6,0,L|395:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,59680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60180,2,0,L|396:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,60680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,192,61180,6,0,L|415:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,192,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,61847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
257,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,63180,2,0,L|113:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,63847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,192,64513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,65513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,65847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,66180,2,0,L|64:192,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
336,192,69513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,69847,6,0,L|96:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,192,70347,2,0,L|146:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,192,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,192,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
Cowboy
472 posts
Joined November 2011
Cowboy

JBHyperion wrote:

Looks like this needs a bit of a kick-start, gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine


Sh1senkyo's World
  1. 00:36:347 (1) - Confused as to why you put a spinner here when all other diffs except Cup mapped this as notes Maybe i can map this part.

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16513,39847
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Sh1senkyo's World
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:885110
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\jusen x sh1.png",320,240
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 M,0,5847,8828,258,359,258,357
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,-152,,97,429
 S,0,-152,,0.5458066
 P,0,-152,,A
 F,0,-152,180,0,1
 F,0,180,15180,1
 F,0,15180,15513,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-jusen.png",320,240
 M,0,16513,,109,426
 S,0,16513,,0.5458066
 P,0,16513,,A
 F,0,16513,16847,0,1
 F,0,16847,39180,1,0.9850299
 F,0,39180,39513,0.9850299,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,40513,,102,427
 S,0,40513,,0.5705808
 P,0,40513,,A
 F,0,40513,40847,0,1
 F,0,40847,71994,1,0.9610779
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
248,344,514,6,0,P|200:352|152:348,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,1013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,200,1346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,118,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,68,1679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,1847,6,0,P|380:80|430:88,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,2347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,216,2679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,298,2846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,348,3012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,252,3347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,188,3847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,200,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,124,4347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,120,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,36,4847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,64,5013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,105,5096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,152,5179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,192,5262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,237,5346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,280,5429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,300,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
328,332,5847,6,0,L|428:332,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,184,6180,2,0,P|92:128|168:92,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,92,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,268,7013,6,0,L|24:224,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,7347,2,0,L|492:184,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,124,7847,2,0,P|172:116|128:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,8180,2,0,P|434:51|481:43,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,156,8680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,8847,2,0,P|260:236|344:204,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,208,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,332,9681,2,0,P|432:292|508:336,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,10180,6,0,P|176:212|108:224,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,10514,2,0,P|416:164|480:184,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,10848,2,0,P|200:120|152:124,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,260,11180,6,0,P|408:308|412:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,11513,2,0,P|72:88|116:160,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,12013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,156,12180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,204,12347,2,0,P|440:240|448:344,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,12847,6,0,L|116:204,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,13180,2,0,L|504:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,284,13513,2,0,L|160:284,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,216,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,180,13930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,133,14013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,97,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,100,14180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,32,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
452,32,14847,2,0,L|492:76,2,47.5,8|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,348,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
343,305,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,258,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,214,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,173,16180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,127,16263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,81,16347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
353,41,16430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,280,16513,6,0,P|108:224|92:108,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,17013,2,0,L|488:276,2,190,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,17847,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,18013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,64,18180,2,0,L|92:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,18513,2,0,L|280:200,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,52,18847,2,0,L|24:148,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,19180,6,0,P|364:228|316:112,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,19680,2,0,L|280:76,2,95,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,188,20347,6,0,P|414:200|474:273,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,20847,2,0,L|200:220,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,133,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
366,87,21346,1,8,0:3:0:0:
120,120,21513,2,0,L|80:28,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,21847,6,0,P|420:248|468:144,2,190,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,22680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,316,22847,2,0,L|476:252,2,95,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,23347,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,168,23513,2,0,L|492:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,23847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,20,24013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,36,24180,2,0,L|212:136,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,24513,6,0,P|448:266|389:338,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,25013,2,0,P|52:232|118:325,1,190,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,32,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,88,25680,6,0,L|100:88,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,26180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,100,26347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,216,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
274,256,26597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,298,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,232,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
448,200,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,160,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
428,124,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,196,27180,6,0,P|120:228|48:176,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,27680,2,0,L|388:304|492:304,2,190,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,28513,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,220,28847,2,0,L|76:136,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,100,29347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,140,29513,6,0,L|128:60,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,20,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
468,128,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
204,80,30347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,88,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,152,31013,2,0,P|88:180|132:296,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,220,32013,6,0,L|80:196,2,95,8|8|2,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,32513,2,0,P|456:200|424:88,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,33013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,33347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,33680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,152,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,112,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,208,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,320,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,320,34847,6,0,L|456:320,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,184,35180,2,0,L|152:184,2,95,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
197,204,36013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,207,36347,6,10,L|481:39,1,190
285,47,36847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
102,134,37180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
314,134,37513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,200,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,168,37930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,120,38013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,84,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,204,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,172,38263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,124,38346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,88,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,160,38513,6,0,L|116:108,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,38680,2,0,L|304:72,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,68,38847,2,0,L|96:28,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
100,80,39347,6,0,L|4:80,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,39847,6,0,L|272:200,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,40013,2,0,L|116:228,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,40180,2,0,L|300:268,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,40346,2,0,L|92:296,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,40513,6,0,P|376:232|312:176,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,41013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,56,41180,2,0,L|472:160,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,41513,2,0,L|204:280,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,316,41847,6,0,P|424:340|328:316,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,208,42513,2,0,L|132:208,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,116,42847,2,0,L|484:116,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,43180,6,0,P|184:76|80:52,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,43680,2,0,L|376:136,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,44180,2,0,L|32:292,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,44513,6,0,L|360:180,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,44847,2,0,L|172:296,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
494,200,45346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,118,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,93,45679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,45847,6,0,L|48:24,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,46347,2,0,P|300:64|416:28,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,46847,2,0,L|232:244,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,47180,6,0,P|456:204|400:124,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,92,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,47847,2,0,L|132:232,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,48180,2,0,L|456:259,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,48513,6,0,P|112:248|172:168,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,180,49013,2,0,P|460:104|400:24,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,49513,2,0,L|288:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,106,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
49,198,50180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
105,272,50346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,268,50513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
390,233,50596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,186,50679,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,153,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,156,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
149,121,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,74,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,41,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,51180,6,0,L|456:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,51513,2,0,L|56:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,51847,2,0,L|416:212,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,228,52180,2,0,L|62:155,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,324,52513,6,0,L|396:324,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,53180,2,0,L|396:232,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,160,53513,2,0,L|417:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,53847,6,0,L|28:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,54180,2,0,L|428:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,54514,2,0,L|60:200,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,208,54847,2,0,L|422:135,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,55180,6,0,L|52:108,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,55680,2,0,L|336:116,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,55847,2,0,L|288:80,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,56180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
131,208,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,255,56346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,297,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,339,56513,6,0,P|402:282|398:190,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
493,147,57180,2,0,P|412:103|329:142,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,57680,6,0,L|84:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,58013,2,0,L|260:307,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,58347,2,0,L|4:116,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,168,58847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,58930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,255,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,293,59097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
24,236,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
292,248,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,172,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,184,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
140,108,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
440,112,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,28,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
437,326,61180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,287,61263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,241,61346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,203,61430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,187,61513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,148,61596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,102,61679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,15,61847,6,0,L|488:120,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,62180,2,0,L|320:240,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,62513,2,0,L|56:300,2,95,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63180,6,0,L|72:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,168,63513,2,0,L|276:76,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63847,2,0,L|72:104,1,95,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,64180,2,0,L|188:28,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,64513,6,0,L|484:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,64847,2,0,L|344:64,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,36,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,98,65346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,188,65513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,279,65680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,320,65847,6,0,P|28:196|172:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,66513,2,0,P|484:196|340:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,67180,6,0,L|140:28,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,176,67513,2,0,L|316:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,316,67847,2,0,L|92:208,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,68180,2,0,L|272:232,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,152,68513,6,0,L|16:344,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,69013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,324,69180,2,0,L|496:240,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,69513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,180,69680,2,0,L|144:132,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,69847,6,0,L|360:68,1,95,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,68,70347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
460,68,70680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,232,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,152,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
104,152,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

JBHyperion wrote:

Looks like this needs a bit of a kick-start, gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Kurokami's Rain
  1. 00:30:013 (3,4) - Strong vocal sound could really use more emphasis here, I find myself overshooting this. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5433681 with 00:31:013 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl+Hed and move to the left to create a hyper to 00:31:013 (1) -? I followed the drums at this section completely ignoring the vocal to be honest and I don't really like 2/1 Hypers as well as they rarely plays well. Not speaking about the uncomfortable antiflow Hyper at 00:32:013 (1,2,3,1) - after this change. :c The first part might be accepted but due this I just can't. Did something else instead.
  2. 00:49:847 (1,2,3) - (3) feels like it should have a dash, but the spacing is a bit ambiguous. It looks easily walkable, but the hyper + antiflow on 00:49:513 (3,1,2) - make it harder to catch than it should be. I moved 00:49:013 (2,3,1,2) left slightly to make a dash more clearly indicated
  3. 00:56:430 (5,1) - Strong hyper here makes it easy to overshoot and combo break on the big droplet. I'd move (1) left slightly and/or make it horizontal for better flow


Hope this helped, good luck! (:
All applied although the first one a bit differently. Thank you.
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:895574
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\kuro.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
17013,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,40,0,0
17513,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
208,304,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,224,680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,847,2,0,L|112:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,1513,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,1847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,224,2013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,2180,2,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,2513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,2847,2,0,L|384:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,3347,2,0,L|125:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,144,3847,2,0,L|386:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,4347,2,0,L|64:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,4847,2,0,L|448:192,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,5180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,208,5347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,5430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,304,5847,6,0,L|48:256,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,6180,2,0,L|288:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,7013,6,0,L|384:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,7513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,7847,2,0,P|80:96|144:192,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,6,0,L|288:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,8847,2,0,L|496:288,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,256,9680,6,0,L|256:208,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,10180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,10513,2,0,P|16:272|96:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11180,6,0,L|240:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,11513,2,0,L|480:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,11847,2,0,L|208:272,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,12347,6,0,L|192:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,12847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,96,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,96,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,13847,6,0,L|96:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,14180,2,0,L|304:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,240,14847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,14930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,142,15013,6,0,L|112:96,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,15513,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,80,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,16180,2,0,L|224:256,1,45,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,16347,2,0,L|96:336,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,16513,6,0,P|256:352|304:256,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,17013,2,0,L|48:160,1,135.000005149842
208,112,17347,2,0,L|336:64,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17680,6,0,L|16:112,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18180,2,0,L|176:128,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,18513,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,64,19013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,19180,6,0,P|368:112|336:224,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,240,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,20347,6,0,L|336:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,20847,2,0,L|192:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,21097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,0,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,16,21513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,21680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,21763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,161,21847,6,0,L|272:208,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,22180,2,0,L|32:272,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,22513,2,0,L|288:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,224,23013,6,0,L|32:272,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,23513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,23847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,16,24013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,0,24180,2,0,L|320:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,24513,6,0,L|32:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,24847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,253,25347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,288,25680,6,0,L|384:240,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,26180,2,0,L|32:144,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,32,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,32,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,16,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
32,48,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
32,144,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,27180,6,0,P|224:192|192:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,288,28013,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,28347,6,0,L|176:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,28680,2,0,L|352:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,16,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,16,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,29513,6,0,L|464:32,1,90
224,112,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,160,30013,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,256,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,256,31013,6,0,L|256:256,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,80,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
160,80,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,16,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,16,32513,6,0,P|512:48|448:144,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,33013,2,0,P|208:208|192:256,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,0,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,48,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,35180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,272,35680,6,0,L|224:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36013,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,36347,2,0,P|96:128|112:240,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,36847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,160,37180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37847,6,0,L|160:240,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,38180,2,0,L|352:304,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,38513,2,0,L|144:80,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,32,38847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,48,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,32,39347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,39513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,39680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39847,6,0,L|176:80,2,90,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,40263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,40347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,240,40430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,286,40513,6,0,P|304:240|272:144,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,41013,2,0,L|48:80,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,41513,2,0,L|224:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,41847,6,0,L|112:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,96,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,128,42513,2,0,L|128:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,42847,2,0,L|384:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43180,6,0,P|64:240|80:144,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,43680,2,0,L|320:160,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,44180,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,44513,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,44847,2,0,L|192:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,45347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,304,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,352,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,336,45847,6,0,L|208:224,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46347,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46847,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,47180,6,0,L|96:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,208,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,240,47847,2,0,L|160:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,48180,2,0,L|352:336,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,48513,6,0,L|240:160,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,49013,2,0,L|32:64,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,49513,2,0,L|176:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,112,50180,2,0,L|432:176,1,90,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,50430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,50680,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,288,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,51180,6,0,L|448:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,51513,2,0,L|208:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,51847,2,0,L|368:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,52180,2,0,L|224:144,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,224,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,272,53013,2,0,L|16:224,2,90,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,53513,2,0,L|432:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,53847,6,0,L|160:64,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,54180,2,0,L|368:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,54513,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,54847,2,0,L|352:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,208,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,112,55680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,55763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,176,55847,6,0,L|464:272,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,208,56347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,128,56513,6,0,L|448:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,57180,2,0,L|32:80,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,57847,6,0,L|304:80,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,58847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,80,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,64,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,32,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,16,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,112,61180,6,0,L|288:64,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,208,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,61847,6,0,L|128:352,2,90,4|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,62347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,224,62513,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,80,63180,6,0,L|304:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,63513,2,0,L|112:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,63847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,272,64014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,336,64347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,336,64513,6,0,L|416:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65013,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,65513,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,65847,6,0,P|48:128|128:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,66513,2,0,P|464:128|384:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,67180,6,0,L|144:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,67513,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,67847,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,68180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,68347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,68513,6,0,L|96:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,68847,2,0,L|416:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,69180,2,0,L|64:320,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,69763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,69847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,128,70013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,64,70347,2,0,L|416:112,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,111,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,176,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,176,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

JBHyperion wrote:

Looks like this needs a bit of a kick-start, gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine Thanks JBH <3

General Comments:

  1. Song Folder: Storyboard image files exceed allowed dimensions: SB\sky.jpg is 1920x1200 and SB\flare.jpy is 854x854. Please reduce these images to below thr maximum threshold of 1366x768 for startic images. Sure, I'll talk to arvie
  2. Song Setup: No issues
  3. Metadata: My diff has inconsistent tags for some reason - please remove "Beautiful world" as it's the song title lol you forgot to update? or me baka? ok, me baka, fixed
  4. Timing: No issues
  5. Hitsounds: No issues
  6. AImod: Tags conflict explained under Metadata fixed

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Platter
  1. 00:39:847 (7) - Suggest an NC here, there's a significant timeline separation from the previous pattern and fruit stack becomes quite high here by the end of the combo, possibly obstructing readability of following patterns
  2. 00:42:847 (3) - Split into 1/2 slider + circle to emphasise that strong vocal sound with a jump
  3. 00:45:847 (5) - NC for the crash cymbal emphasis?
  4. 00:57:347 (3,4,1) - Rhythm choice is unclear here, (3) follows vocals and ignores instrument, but (4) does the opposite without indication. I'd move (4) back 1/2 to fit that vocal sound and then add a circle at 00:58:347
  5. 00:58:680 (1,2) - Swap NC for emphasis on the snare drum and consistency with 01:00:180 (1,2)

Sh1senkyo's World
  1. 00:05:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:15:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personal preference, but a bit more curve would make these more interesting, as currently in can be stacked (caught standing still) which kinda defeats the purpose of having a curve in the first place :p Added a bit of more curve to the second one, the first one is on purpose, I want to make this as a rest after a jumpy part.
  2. 00:07:347 (2) - Split into circle + 1/2 slider to follow the guitar better, that strong white tick sound is unmapped atm and it feels very odd to play. it's keeping consistency with 00:09:681 (6) - 00:12:347 (5) -, also is a bit funnier because there are lots of 1/2 in a row and some variety will be nice to the diff
  3. 00:08:680 (2,3) - Watch out for strong hyper into antiflow as it can result in overshooting and lots of unnecessary droplet misses. Suggest making this a curved slider or reducing hyper strength for better flow reduced -30x
  4. 00:36:347 (1) - Confused as to why you put a spinner here when all other diffs except Cup mapped this as notes Special thanks to Jusenkyo who mapped this part faster :33
  5. 01:00:347 (2,3) - This spacing after the hyper is a little tight, I'd prefer if you reduced it a tiny bit, similar to 00:04:347 (2,3) -
Hope this helped, good luck! (:
No replay = fixed, Thank you very much Sir~~
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
hi SB update

JBHyperion wrote:

[notice][list][*]Song Folder: Storyboard image files exceed allowed dimensions: SB\sky.jpg is 1920x1200 and SB\flare.jpy is 854x854. Please reduce these images to below thr maximum threshold of 1366x768 for startic images
https://www.dropbox.com/s/b0x2w2m2yu8bz ... 9.rar?dl=0


please replace old images and .osb with the new one

thank you JBHyperion! :)
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
Thanks arvie, GDers re-download please!
koliron
791 posts
Joined July 2014
koliron


recheck!

General
  1. @shini otra vez más, "op" no es una tag necesaria porque podes encontrar el mapa aun sin ella escribiendo "op", debido a que es parte de la palabra "opening", esto seria como si pusieses "beautifu" y "worl" en las tags, incluso si son palabras diferentes no son necesarias porque son parte de otras que ya estan en el metadata x_x aaaaa
  2. about the spread, the ar is 6 7 8 8.5 9 ? mmh why not 6 7 8 8.7 9.2 or 6 7 8 9 9.2~3 ? i feel like the overdose deserves more AR for the bpm, but i dont want to see a big gap between rain-overdose x3

red Cup
  1. niceee

Salad
  1. 00:04:680 (4,5,6) - i'd like to see (5) closer to (4) to make a better jump to (6) (obviously 6 some grids to the right to keep the dash)
  2. 00:30:347 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - uhh i think this movement would be better without dash, do not remember that dash in a salad should be only to noticeable and strong sounds
  3. 00:37:180 (4,1,2) - aaaa 2 dash in a row D: thats so hard for a salad! i'd remove 00:37:847 (1,2) - this one, so the dash would be only to the new stanza (also maybe a little more distance in the dash to 00:37:847 (1) - ? this is possible to catch with the edge of the ryuuta, so new players could be confused imo)
  4. 00:47:513 (1,1) - two 2? aaay i think 00:48:188 - this is not necessary following the vocal or the instrument, by the way why not a dash to 00:48:513 (2) - ? the vocal here is pretty strong! then 00:48:513 (2,3,1) - this movement would be easier, currently is almost 2 dash in a row
  5. 00:56:180 (1,2) - mh i think the nc in 2 would be better following the vocal or instrument
  6. 01:02:180 (1,2) - ayy suddenly this distances is a lot! isn't it? T.T i'd reduce this some grids to be easier to catch, same in 01:02:513 (2,3,4) - , make them like 01:03:847 (1,2,3,4) - would be much better -w-

Platter
  1. 00:23:513 (4,5) - oooo esperaba un dash acá cuando lo jugué ): no sería una buena idea para enfatizar un poco más la voz? x3 tambien en 00:23:680 (5,6) - un poquito más no vendría mal
  2. 00:31:013 (1,2) - kejesto -___ - plz te recomiendo muchisimo cambiar ese segundo slider, el movimiento es muy incomodo, si en serio queres mantener un curva así acá hay un ejemplo que esta mucho mejor:
    kek
  3. 00:33:013 (3) - soy yo :^)
  4. 01:10:347 (1,2) - ay que sus jugar esto ;__; ya que el siguiente patron es bastante simetrico, por qué no 1 en x464? se veria mejor y el salto no seria tan potente
    i still think this is the best platter ever x3

Rain
  1. 00:13:513 (4,1) - mh in comparision with the previous jumps, this one has much more distance o.o i'd put (4) some grids to the left
  2. 00:23:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in my previous mod you said "ugh what?" can you at least explain why you dont agree? :/ if you didnt understand my suggestion its fine but at least dont be rude :c so i will try again, until now you only added dash when the instrument or the vocal is strong enough to have it, but here every note has dash and they are increasing? i cant hear anything that deserves it, specially 00:23:680 (3,5) - these sounds are pretty low, here is an example of a pattern which i think fits better with the song:

    with dash only to 1/1 and without increase the distance in each note or slider
  3. 00:28:680 (2,3) - mmh after a lot of hypers i think at least a dash or walk would be better here to not make a big difference about movement, i can catch 3 without move the ryuuta aaaaa try to replace 00:28:680 (2,3) - with a slider with repeat and more horizontal, that would be a better movement imo
  4. 00:32:013 (1,2,3) - i understand that (3) deserves less distance because the vocal and instrument is lower here, but the movement could be improved, you need to jump to (2) but walk to (3) :/ here are some examples which could help:

    to keep the same movement adding a dash to (3)


    to keep the distances but change the movement
  5. 00:55:180 (1,2,3) - ^ something similar here would be nice too

World
  1. 00:07:513 - este sonido es bastante fuerte, considerando que es la dificultad que debe tener mayor cantidad de notas te recomiendo hacer un ctrl shift f o de cualquier manera posicionar en 3 notas
  2. 00:08:180 (4,1) - es un sonido bastante fuerte e incluso es nc, te recomiendo añadir un hyper por aca aaaaa
  3. 00:28:513 (1,2,3) - suena bastante raro con como va la canción :s por qué no reemplazar 00:28:680 (2,3) - en un slider 1/1? :3
  4. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jusen, dijiste "lo tomare en cuenta" pero no veo ningun cambio, en seiro te recomiendo cambiar esto, el hyper a (4) no le veo mucho sentido :c si queres añadir un hyper en este patron sería mejor a 00:34:513 (5) - porque es un sonido basatante fuerte, y con un dash normal a 00:34:347 (4) - seria suficiente
  5. 01:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - me gustan los sliders verticales, pero no son demasiados seguidos? eso es aburrido :C te recomiendo hacer 01:04:180 (4) - este tipo horizontal, aprovechamos que es el unico que rompe el patron de 01:03:180 (1,2,3) -

by the way im still so noob at sb but, why all the lyrics appears around 1/4~1/2 later? as i understand it should be possible to read when the vocal starts, for example 00:50:263 - lyric 12392 is
code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics/12392.png",320,240
 C,0,49847,,255,255,255
 P,0,49847,,A
 F,0,49847,50247,0,0.8
 S,0,49847,50247,1,0.4
 R,2,49847,50247,1.8,0
 MX,0,49847,50247,0,20
 MY,0,49847,50247,0,360
 S,0,49847,55180,0.4
 MX,0,50247,55180,20,40
 MY,0,50247,55180,360
 F,0,54780,55180,0.8,0

shouldn't MX,0,50247,55180,20,40 and MY start around 49847?
by the way i don't think players would notice the F of collab-shini- in the beginning, i'd make that effect in 00:00:514 - until 00:00:847 -

wow this set improved a lot! ^^ call me after this
Cowboy
472 posts
Joined November 2011
Cowboy

koliron wrote:




World
  1. 00:28:513 (1,2,3) - suena bastante raro con como va la canción :s por qué no reemplazar 00:28:680 (2,3) - en un slider 1/1? :3 Hecho x3.
  2. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jusen, dijiste "lo tomare en cuenta" pero no veo ningun cambio, en seiro te recomiendo cambiar esto, el hyper a (4) no le veo mucho sentido :c si queres añadir un hyper en este patron sería mejor a 00:34:513 (5) - porque es un sonido basatante fuerte, y con un dash normal a 00:34:347 (4) - seria suficiente Tienes razón, cambiado acorde a tu sugerencia.

Por favor, haz el update Sh1n1.


adas
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16513,39847
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Sh1senkyo's World
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:885110
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\jusen x sh1.png",320,240
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 M,0,5847,8828,258,359,258,357
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,-152,,97,429
 S,0,-152,,0.5458066
 P,0,-152,,A
 F,0,-152,180,0,1
 F,0,180,15180,1
 F,0,15180,15513,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-jusen.png",320,240
 M,0,16513,,109,426
 S,0,16513,,0.5458066
 P,0,16513,,A
 F,0,16513,16847,0,1
 F,0,16847,39180,1,0.9850299
 F,0,39180,39513,0.9850299,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\collab-sh1n1-.png",320,240
 M,0,40513,,102,427
 S,0,40513,,0.5705808
 P,0,40513,,A
 F,0,40513,40847,0,1
 F,0,40847,71994,1,0.9610779
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
248,344,514,6,0,P|200:352|152:348,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,1013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,200,1346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,118,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,68,1679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,1847,6,0,P|380:80|430:88,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,2347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,216,2679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,298,2846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,348,3012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,252,3347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,188,3847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,200,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,124,4347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,120,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,36,4847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,64,5013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,105,5096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,152,5179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,192,5262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,237,5346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,280,5429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,300,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
328,332,5847,6,0,L|428:332,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,184,6180,2,0,P|92:128|168:92,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,92,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,268,7013,6,0,L|24:224,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,7347,2,0,L|492:184,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,124,7847,2,0,P|172:116|128:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,8180,2,0,P|434:51|481:43,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,156,8680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,206,8847,2,0,P|267:256|341:205,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,208,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,332,9681,2,0,P|432:292|508:336,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,10180,6,0,P|176:212|108:224,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,10514,2,0,P|416:164|480:184,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,10848,2,0,P|200:120|152:124,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,260,11180,6,0,P|408:308|412:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,11513,2,0,P|72:88|116:160,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,12013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,156,12180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,204,12347,2,0,P|440:240|448:344,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,12847,6,0,L|116:204,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,13180,2,0,L|504:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,284,13513,2,0,L|160:284,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,216,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,180,13930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,133,14013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,97,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,100,14180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,32,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,36,14847,2,0,L|500:56,2,47.5,8|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,348,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,309,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,263,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,218,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
371,179,16180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
395,139,16263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
395,92,16347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,50,16430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,280,16513,6,0,P|108:224|92:108,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,17013,2,0,L|488:276,2,190,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,17847,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,18013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,64,18180,2,0,L|92:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,18513,2,0,L|280:200,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,52,18847,2,0,L|24:148,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,19180,6,0,P|364:228|316:112,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,19680,2,0,L|280:76,2,95,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,188,20347,6,0,P|414:200|474:273,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,20847,2,0,L|200:220,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,133,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
366,87,21346,1,8,0:3:0:0:
120,168,21513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,131,21596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,84,21679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,48,21762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,284,21847,6,0,P|420:248|468:144,2,190,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,22680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,316,22847,2,0,L|476:252,2,95,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,23347,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,168,23513,2,0,L|492:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,23847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,20,24013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,36,24180,2,0,L|212:136,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,24513,6,0,P|448:266|389:338,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,25013,2,0,P|52:232|118:325,1,190,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,32,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,88,25680,6,0,L|100:88,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,26180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,100,26347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,216,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
274,256,26597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,298,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,232,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
448,200,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,160,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
428,124,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,196,27180,6,0,P|120:228|48:176,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,27680,2,0,L|388:304|492:304,2,190,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,28513,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,260,28680,2,0,L|180:120,1,190,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,100,29347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,140,29513,6,0,L|128:60,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,20,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
468,128,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
204,80,30347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,88,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,152,31013,2,0,P|88:180|132:296,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,220,32013,6,0,L|80:196,2,95,8|8|2,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,32513,2,0,P|456:200|424:88,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,33013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,33347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,33680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,192,34013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,34180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,34347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,34513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,34680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,34847,6,0,L|492:320,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,184,35180,2,0,L|152:184,2,95,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
197,204,36013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,207,36347,6,10,L|481:39,1,190
285,47,36847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
102,134,37180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
314,134,37513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,200,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,168,37930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,120,38013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,84,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,204,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,172,38263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,124,38346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,88,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,160,38513,6,0,L|116:108,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,38680,2,0,L|304:72,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,68,38847,2,0,L|96:28,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
100,80,39347,6,0,L|4:80,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,39847,6,0,L|272:200,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,40013,2,0,L|116:228,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,40180,2,0,L|300:268,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,40346,2,0,L|92:296,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,40513,6,0,P|376:232|312:176,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,41013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,56,41180,2,0,L|472:160,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,41513,2,0,L|204:280,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,316,41847,6,0,P|424:340|328:316,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,208,42513,2,0,L|132:208,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,116,42847,2,0,L|484:116,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,43180,6,0,P|184:76|80:52,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,43680,2,0,L|376:136,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,44180,2,0,L|32:292,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,44513,6,0,L|360:180,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,44847,2,0,L|172:296,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
494,200,45346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,118,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,93,45679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,45847,6,0,L|48:24,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,46347,2,0,P|300:64|416:28,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,46847,2,0,L|232:244,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,47180,6,0,P|456:204|400:124,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,92,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,47847,2,0,L|132:232,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,48180,2,0,L|456:259,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,48513,6,0,P|112:248|172:168,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,180,49013,2,0,P|492:116|472:16,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,49513,2,0,L|348:120,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,106,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
13,198,50180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
69,272,50346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,268,50513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
390,233,50596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,186,50679,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,153,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,156,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
149,121,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,74,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,41,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,51180,6,0,L|456:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,51513,2,0,L|56:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,51847,2,0,L|416:212,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,228,52180,2,0,L|62:155,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,324,52513,6,0,L|396:324,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,53180,2,0,L|396:232,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,160,53513,2,0,L|417:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,53847,6,0,L|28:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,54180,2,0,L|428:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,54514,2,0,L|60:200,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,208,54847,2,0,L|422:135,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,55180,6,0,L|52:108,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,55680,2,0,L|336:116,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,55847,2,0,L|288:80,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,56180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
108,204,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,257,56346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,292,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,339,56513,6,0,P|402:282|398:190,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
493,147,57180,2,0,P|412:103|329:142,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,57680,6,0,L|84:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,58013,2,0,L|260:307,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,58347,2,0,L|4:116,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,168,58847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,58930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,255,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,293,59097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
24,236,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
292,248,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,172,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,184,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
140,108,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
429,112,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,28,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
437,326,61180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,287,61263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,241,61346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,203,61430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,187,61513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,148,61596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,102,61679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,15,61847,6,0,L|488:120,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,62180,2,0,L|320:240,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,62513,2,0,L|56:300,2,95,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63180,6,0,L|72:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,168,63513,2,0,L|276:76,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63847,2,0,L|72:104,1,95,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,64180,2,0,L|188:28,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,64513,6,0,L|484:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,64847,2,0,L|344:64,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,36,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,98,65346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,188,65513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,279,65680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,320,65847,6,0,P|28:196|172:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,66513,2,0,P|484:196|340:116,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,67180,6,0,L|140:28,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,176,67513,2,0,L|316:68,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,316,67847,2,0,L|92:208,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,68180,2,0,L|272:232,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,152,68513,6,0,L|16:344,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,69013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,324,69180,2,0,L|496:240,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,69513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,180,69680,2,0,L|144:132,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,69847,6,0,L|360:68,1,95,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,68,70347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
460,68,70680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,232,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,152,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
104,152,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:

Gracias por el mod koliron! :D
QHideaki13
Global Moderator
455 posts
Joined March 2011
QHideaki13
koliron
  1. 00:04:680 (4,5,6) - i'd like to see (5) closer to (4) to make a better jump to (6) (obviously 6 some grids to the right to keep the dash)
    ( Fixed )
  2. 00:30:347 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - uhh i think this movement would be better without dash, do not remember that dash in a salad should be only to noticeable and strong sounds ( Simplified the pattern. )
  3. 00:37:180 (4,1,2) - aaaa 2 dash in a row D: thats so hard for a salad! i'd remove 00:37:847 (1,2) - this one, so the dash would be only to the new stanza (also maybe a little more distance in the dash to 00:37:847 (1) - ? this is possible to catch with the edge of the ryuuta, so new players could be confused imo) ( That is true, fixed. )
  4. 00:47:513 (1,1) - two 2? aaay i think 00:48:188 - this is not necessary following the vocal or the instrument, by the way why not a dash to 00:48:513 (2) - ? the vocal here is pretty strong! then 00:48:513 (2,3,1) - this movement would be easier, currently is almost 2 dash in a row ( Fixed this as well. )
  5. 00:56:180 (1,2) - mh i think the nc in 2 would be better following the vocal or instrument ( Done. )
  6. 01:02:180 (1,2) - ayy suddenly this distances is a lot! isn't it? T.T i'd reduce this some grids to be easier to catch, same in 01:02:513 (2,3,4) - , make them like 01:03:847 (1,2,3,4) - would be much better -w- ( Reduced 01:02:180 (1,3) - instead )

Thanks for the recheck!

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Q-H's Salad
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:897929
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/Names/QHide.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
32513,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
50347,-100,4,3,0,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56180,-100,4,3,0,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
224,192,514,6,0,L|144:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,1847,6,0,L|49:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,2680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,2847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,192,3180,6,0,L|240:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,3680,2,0,L|248:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,4180,2,0,L|208:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,4680,2,0,L|256:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,192,5013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,5180,2,8,L|512:192,1,130
256,192,5847,6,0,L|96:192,1,130,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6680,2,0,L|500:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7847,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8847,2,0,L|416:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,9347,2,0,L|144:192,2,130,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,10180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,10513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,10680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,192,10847,2,0,L|338:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,11847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12013,2,0,L|112:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,12847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
305,192,14013,2,0,L|385:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
31,192,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
95,192,14847,2,0,L|175:192,1,65,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,15847,6,0,L|384:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16180,2,0,L|320:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,16513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,16847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,17180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,17513,2,0,L|64:192,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,18013,2,0,L|384:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,18513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
99,191,19180,2,0,L|243:191,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,20347,2,0,P|96:96|32:144,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,20847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
304,192,21097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,192,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,192,21513,2,0,L|216:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,22847,2,0,L|320:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,23513,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,24180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,192,24847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
210,192,25013,2,0,L|354:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,26013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,192,26180,2,0,L|50:192,2,130,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,27180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,192,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,191,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,29680,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,30347,2,0,P|64:144|96:112,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,31347,6,0,P|448:144|416:112,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,192,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,192,32513,6,0,L|96:192,1,292.50001115799,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,112,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,35180,2,0,L|304:112,2,65,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,36013,6,0,L|256:192,1,130,10|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,36847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37180,2,0,L|412:192,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,192,38347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,38513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,38680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,38847,2,0,L|160:192,1,65,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,39513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,39847,2,0,L|338:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40180,2,0,L|352:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
62,192,40847,2,0,L|222:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,192,41513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,41847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,42180,2,0,L|272:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,42847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,43180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43513,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,44180,2,0,L|352:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46180,2,0,L|480:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,192,46847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,47180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,47513,6,0,L|428:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,48180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48513,2,0,L|400:192,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,49513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49847,6,0,L|386:192,2,65,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,192,50347,2,0,L|334:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,50847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,51180,6,0,L|64:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,52180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,53513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,54013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
480,192,54680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,55680,6,0,L|336:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,56513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
129,192,57013,2,0,L|193:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,192,59180,6,0,L|395:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,59680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60180,2,0,L|396:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,60680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61180,6,0,L|176:192,2,65,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,61680,2,0,L|272:192,1,65,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,62180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
257,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,63180,2,0,L|113:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,63847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,192,64513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,65513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,65847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,66180,2,0,L|64:192,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
336,192,69513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,69847,6,0,L|96:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,192,70347,2,0,L|146:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,192,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,192,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

koliron wrote:



recheck!


Rain
  1. 00:23:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in my previous mod you said "ugh what?" can you at least explain why you dont agree? :/ if you didnt understand my suggestion its fine but at least dont be rude :c so i will try again, until now you only added dash when the instrument or the vocal is strong enough to have it, but here every note has dash and they are increasing? i cant hear anything that deserves it, specially 00:23:680 (3,5) - these sounds are pretty low, here is an example of a pattern which i think fits better with the song: You said a circle and an 1/1 slider, for me that kind of a slider goes from a white line until another white line or from a red one until another red. What you are showing to me now is 1/2 sliders. The two suggestion might be the same to you but its entirely different from this side of view. And I don't think I was rude at that time but it is true that I didn't wrote a long sentence to ask back. Sorry if you feel that way as that was not my intention. Anyway, I still think 3 deserves to be a circle due to the vocal which starts there but I changed 4-5 to a slider and made the whole pattern similar to 00:24:847 (2,3,4,5). Hope its better now.
  2. 00:28:680 (2,3) - mmh after a lot of hypers i think at least a dash or walk would be better here to not make a big difference about movement, i can catch 3 without move the ryuuta aaaaa try to replace 00:28:680 (2,3) - with a slider with repeat and more horizontal, that would be a better movement imo 3-4 follows different instruments from the song while 1-2 is another pair of rhythm. I made 2 horizontal and moved 3 a bit to right, hope it is better.
  3. 00:32:013 (1,2,3) - i understand that (3) deserves less distance because the vocal and instrument is lower here, but the movement could be improved, you need to jump to (2) but walk to (3) :/ here are some examples which could help: You gave me two examples, on the first the three note has the same distance which should not happen due 3 being really weak while on the second the Hyper between 3-1 will be huge. While I do like the second I tried something else.

    to keep the same movement adding a dash to (3)


    to keep the distances but change the movement

Just a sidenote but I do remember changing the AR to 8.6 here, I wonder where that change went. O.o Anyway, thank you.
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:895574
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\kuro.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
17013,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,40,0,0
17513,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
208,304,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,224,680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,847,2,0,L|112:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,1513,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,1847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,224,2013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,2180,2,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,2513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,2847,2,0,L|384:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,3347,2,0,L|125:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,144,3847,2,0,L|386:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,4347,2,0,L|64:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,4847,2,0,L|448:192,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,5180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,208,5347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,5430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,304,5847,6,0,L|48:256,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,6180,2,0,L|288:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,7013,6,0,L|384:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,7513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,7847,2,0,P|80:96|144:192,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,6,0,L|288:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,8847,2,0,L|496:288,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,256,9680,6,0,L|256:208,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,10180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,10513,2,0,P|16:272|96:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11180,6,0,L|240:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,11513,2,0,L|480:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,11847,2,0,L|208:272,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,12347,6,0,L|192:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,12847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,96,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,96,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,13847,6,0,L|96:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,14180,2,0,L|304:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,240,14847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,14930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,142,15013,6,0,L|112:96,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,15513,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,80,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,16180,2,0,L|224:256,1,45,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,16347,2,0,L|96:336,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,16513,6,0,P|256:352|304:256,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,17013,2,0,L|48:160,1,135.000005149842
208,112,17347,2,0,L|336:64,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17680,6,0,L|16:112,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18180,2,0,L|176:128,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,18513,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,64,19013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,19180,6,0,P|368:112|336:224,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,240,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,20347,6,0,L|336:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,20847,2,0,L|192:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,21097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,0,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,16,21513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,21680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,21763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,161,21847,6,0,L|272:208,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,22180,2,0,L|32:272,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,22513,2,0,L|288:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,224,23013,6,0,L|32:272,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,23513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,23847,2,0,L|160:16,1,90
272,0,24180,2,0,L|320:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,24513,6,0,L|32:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,24847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,253,25347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,288,25680,6,0,L|384:240,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,26180,2,0,L|32:144,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,32,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,32,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,16,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
32,48,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
32,144,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,27180,6,0,P|224:192|192:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,288,28013,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,28347,6,0,L|176:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,28680,2,0,L|304:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,32,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,16,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,29513,6,0,L|464:32,1,90
224,112,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,160,30013,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,256,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,256,31013,6,0,L|256:256,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,112,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
144,64,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,16,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,16,32513,6,0,P|512:48|448:144,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,33013,2,0,P|208:208|192:256,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,0,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,48,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,35180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,272,35680,6,0,L|224:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36013,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,36347,2,0,P|96:128|112:240,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,36847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,160,37180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37847,6,0,L|160:240,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,38180,2,0,L|352:304,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,38513,2,0,L|144:80,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,32,38847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,48,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,32,39347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,39513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,39680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39847,6,0,L|176:80,2,90,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,40263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,40347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,240,40430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,286,40513,6,0,P|304:240|272:144,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,41013,2,0,L|48:80,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,41513,2,0,L|224:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,41847,6,0,L|112:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,96,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,128,42513,2,0,L|128:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,42847,2,0,L|384:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43180,6,0,P|64:240|80:144,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,43680,2,0,L|320:160,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,44180,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,44513,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,44847,2,0,L|192:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,45347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,304,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,352,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,336,45847,6,0,L|208:224,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46347,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46847,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,47180,6,0,L|96:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,208,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,240,47847,2,0,L|160:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,48180,2,0,L|352:336,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,48513,6,0,L|240:160,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,49013,2,0,L|32:64,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,49513,2,0,L|176:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,112,50180,2,0,L|432:176,1,90,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,50430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,50680,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,288,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,51180,6,0,L|448:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,51513,2,0,L|208:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,51847,2,0,L|368:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,52180,2,0,L|224:144,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,224,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,272,53013,2,0,L|16:224,2,90,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,53513,2,0,L|432:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,53847,6,0,L|160:64,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,54180,2,0,L|368:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,54513,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,54847,2,0,L|352:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,208,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,112,55680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,55763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,176,55847,6,0,L|464:272,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,208,56347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,128,56513,6,0,L|448:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,57180,2,0,L|32:80,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,57847,6,0,L|304:80,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,58847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,80,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,64,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,32,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,16,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,112,61180,6,0,L|288:64,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,208,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,61847,6,0,L|128:352,2,90,4|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,62347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,224,62513,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,80,63180,6,0,L|304:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,63513,2,0,L|112:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,63847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,272,64014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,336,64347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,336,64513,6,0,L|416:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65013,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,65513,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,65847,6,0,P|48:128|128:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,66513,2,0,P|464:128|384:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,67180,6,0,L|144:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,67513,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,67847,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,68180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,68347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,68513,6,0,L|96:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,68847,2,0,L|416:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,69180,2,0,L|64:320,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,69763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,69847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,128,70013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,64,70347,2,0,L|416:112,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,111,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,176,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,176,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion

Kurokami wrote:

I do remember changing the AR to 9.6 here, I wonder where that changed went
AR 9.6 Rain? New meta?? (:
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Oh crap, that typo. :c
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

koliron wrote:



recheck!

General
  1. @shini otra vez más, "op" no es una tag necesaria porque podes encontrar el mapa aun sin ella escribiendo "op", debido a que es parte de la palabra "opening", esto seria como si pusieses "beautifu" y "worl" en las tags, incluso si son palabras diferentes no son necesarias porque son parte de otras que ya estan en el metadata x_x aaaaa aaaaaaaa ok aaaaaaaaa fixed aaaaaa
  2. about the spread, the ar is 6 7 8 8.5 9 ? mmh why not 6 7 8 8.7 9.2 or 6 7 8 9 9.2~3 ? i feel like the overdose deserves more AR for the bpm, but i dont want to see a big gap between rain-overdose x3 Is World an Overdose? AR is Ok.

Platter
  1. 00:23:513 (4,5) - oooo esperaba un dash acá cuando lo jugué ): no sería una buena idea para enfatizar un poco más la voz? x3 tambien en 00:23:680 (5,6) - un poquito más no vendría mal sep, tienes razon, fixed.
  2. 00:31:013 (1,2) - kejesto -___ - plz te recomiendo muchisimo cambiar ese segundo slider, el movimiento es muy incomodo, si en serio queres mantener un curva así acá hay un ejemplo que esta mucho mejor: la curva sale perfecto en auto, ademas espero que los DT farmers miseen.
    kek
  3. 00:33:013 (3) - soy yo :^) si lo se, bonito slider.
  4. 01:10:347 (1,2) - ay que sus jugar esto ;__; ya que el siguiente patron es bastante simetrico, por qué no 1 en x464? se veria mejor y el salto no seria tan potente fixed
    i still think this is the best platter ever x3 eso que no has visto mi yume no tsuzuki :3

World
  1. 00:07:513 - este sonido es bastante fuerte, considerando que es la dificultad que debe tener mayor cantidad de notas te recomiendo hacer un ctrl shift f o de cualquier manera posicionar en 3 notas noc de que sonido fuerte me hablan tu y JBH, pero creo que no dejaran en paz a mi slider si no lo hago, fixed aunque no me parezca.
  2. 00:08:180 (4,1) - es un sonido bastante fuerte e incluso es nc, te recomiendo añadir un hyper por aca aaaaa el movimiento en si es dificil ya que no tiene hyper, este si lo mantendre uwu
  3. 00:28:513 (1,2,3) - suena bastante raro con como va la canción :s por qué no reemplazar 00:28:680 (2,3) - en un slider 1/1? :3 fixed by Jusen
  4. 00:33:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jusen, dijiste "lo tomare en cuenta" pero no veo ningun cambio, en seiro te recomiendo cambiar esto, el hyper a (4) no le veo mucho sentido :c si queres añadir un hyper en este patron sería mejor a 00:34:513 (5) - porque es un sonido basatante fuerte, y con un dash normal a 00:34:347 (4) - seria suficiente fixed by Jusen
  5. 01:03:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - me gustan los sliders verticales, pero no son demasiados seguidos? eso es aburrido :C te recomiendo hacer 01:04:180 (4) - este tipo horizontal, aprovechamos que es el unico que rompe el patron de 01:03:180 (1,2,3) - lo movi un poquito poero no me parece que sea tan notorio, de todos modos fixed.

by the way im still so noob at sb but, why all the lyrics appears around 1/4~1/2 later? as i understand it should be possible to read when the vocal starts, for example 00:50:263 - lyric 12392 is
code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics/12392.png",320,240
 C,0,49847,,255,255,255
 P,0,49847,,A
 F,0,49847,50247,0,0.8
 S,0,49847,50247,1,0.4
 R,2,49847,50247,1.8,0
 MX,0,49847,50247,0,20
 MY,0,49847,50247,0,360
 S,0,49847,55180,0.4
 MX,0,50247,55180,20,40
 MY,0,50247,55180,360
 F,0,54780,55180,0.8,0

shouldn't MX,0,50247,55180,20,40 and MY start around 49847? that's true, lyrics feel a bit off, I'll try to do it myself, if I can't, I'll call arvie :3
by the way i don't think players would notice the F of collab-shini- in the beginning, i'd make that effect in 00:00:514 - until 00:00:847 - yeah, nice catch, I didn't notice loool, but... I prefer to remove my name at the beginning

wow this set improved a lot! ^^ When was terrible? :'( It hurts koli call me after this Oki, let me fix the SB first :3
DeletedUser_6709840
DeletedUser_6709840
I was referred here from a discord chat, I'll try to be helpful but modders might have sniped my suggestions.

General

Looks good metadata wise.

Hyperion's Cup

01:11:013 (4) – My only suggestion for this diff is that this beat is a little less prominent from from the previous of (3). I'd just put (4) where you exactly put (2).

Q-H's Salad

00:17:180 (2,3) – Reduce to 1.60x spacing since this beat isn't as strong as (4) because the vocals emphasize (4)'s beat. That's my only suggestion.

Platter

00:31:680 (2) – The beat here isn't strong enough here to be anti-flow, flip this slider.
00:46:847 (3,1) – A 1.80x spacing jump would feel more natural here because (1) is not that prominent of a beat. Put (1) on X=476.
00:51:180 (1,2) – The beat on (2) is not very prominent and should be reduced to 1.60x spacing by putting (2) on X=80.
01:10:347 (1,2) – This jump is really awkward to catch because of the spacing. Fix by putting (2) on X=88 then putting (3) on X=280 to fix the flow.

Kurokami's Rain

00:13:513 (4,1) – This jump felt just a bit awkward ever so slightly because it felt like it was over spaced. I would put (1) on X=160 to make it play a little better.
00:23:513 (2,3,4,5) – I would have just used a long slider here because this pattern contradicts the vocals too much here and the beat isn't that strong.

I tried to mod Rain but gave up once h-dashes starting happening everywhere and I couldn't even testplay it.

Good luck with you map, hopefully I'm somewhat helpful.
QHideaki13
Global Moderator
455 posts
Joined March 2011
QHideaki13
Fixed!

Thanks for the mod~

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Q-H's Salad
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:897929
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/Names/QHide.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
32513,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
50347,-100,4,3,0,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56180,-100,4,3,0,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
224,192,514,6,0,L|144:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,1847,6,0,L|49:192,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,2680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,2847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,192,3180,6,0,L|240:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,3680,2,0,L|248:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,4180,2,0,L|208:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,4680,2,0,L|256:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,192,5013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,5180,2,8,L|512:192,1,130
256,192,5847,6,0,L|96:192,1,130,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6680,2,0,L|500:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7847,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8847,2,0,L|416:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,9347,2,0,L|144:192,2,130,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,10180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,10513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,10680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,192,10847,2,0,L|338:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,11847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12013,2,0,L|112:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,12847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
305,192,14013,2,0,L|385:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,14513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
31,192,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
95,192,14847,2,0,L|175:192,1,65,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,15847,6,0,L|384:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16180,2,0,L|320:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,16513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,16847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,17180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,17513,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,18013,2,0,L|384:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,18513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,18847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
99,191,19180,2,0,L|243:191,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,20347,2,0,P|96:96|32:144,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,20847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
304,192,21097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,192,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,192,21513,2,0,L|216:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,22847,2,0,L|320:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,23513,2,0,L|224:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,24180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,192,24847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
210,192,25013,2,0,L|354:192,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,26013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,192,26180,2,0,L|50:192,2,130,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,27180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,192,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,191,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28347,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,29680,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,192,30013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,192,30347,2,0,P|64:144|96:112,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,31347,6,0,P|448:144|416:112,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,192,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,192,32513,6,0,L|96:192,1,292.50001115799,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,112,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,35180,2,0,L|304:112,2,65,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,35680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,36013,6,0,L|256:192,1,130,10|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,36847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37180,2,0,L|412:192,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,38180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,192,38347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,38513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,38680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,38847,2,0,L|160:192,1,65,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,39513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,39847,2,0,L|338:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40180,2,0,L|352:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
62,192,40847,2,0,L|222:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,192,41513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,41847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,42180,2,0,L|272:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,42847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,43180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43513,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,44180,2,0,L|352:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44847,2,0,L|400:192,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46180,2,0,L|480:192,1,130,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,192,46847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,47180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,47513,6,0,L|428:192,1,130,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,48180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48513,2,0,L|400:192,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,49513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49847,6,0,L|386:192,2,65,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,192,50347,2,0,L|334:192,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,50847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,51180,6,0,L|64:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,52180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,53513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,54013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
480,192,54680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,54847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,192,55680,6,0,L|336:192,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,56513,5,4,0:0:0:0:
129,192,57013,2,0,L|193:192,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,192,59180,6,0,L|395:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,59680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60180,2,0,L|396:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,60680,2,0,L|80:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61180,6,0,L|176:192,2,65,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,61680,2,0,L|272:192,1,65,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,192,62180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
257,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,192,63180,2,0,L|113:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,63847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,192,64513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,192,65180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,65513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,65847,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,66180,2,0,L|64:192,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
336,192,69513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,69847,6,0,L|96:192,1,65,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,192,70347,2,0,L|146:192,1,130,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,192,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,192,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

RoseusJaeger wrote:

I was referred here from a discord chat, I'll try to be helpful but modders might have sniped my suggestions.


Kurokami's Rain


00:23:513 (2,3,4,5) – I would have just used a long slider here because this pattern contradicts the vocals too much here and the beat isn't that strong. Somehow the timestamp just didn't match with the suggestion. :c But following the highlighted notes I don't really want to change that part because the white tick and the second red has an important beat which needs to be followed. And I used triplet at this part here I don't want to break the consistent timeline.

I tried to mod Rain but gave up once h-dashes starting happening everywhere and I couldn't even testplay it. Please, just the kiai has more Hyper. :c

Good luck with you map, hopefully I'm somewhat helpful.
Thank you.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still world is Beautiful opening op tv size
BeatmapID:885110
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
597,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
1847,-100,4,2,2,15,0,0
1930,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
5763,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
5847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15013,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
34513,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
35180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
35680,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
38847,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,1
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
65847,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
66430,-100,4,2,1,5,0,1
66513,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
67097,-100,4,2,1,5,0,1
67180,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
68513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
248,344,514,6,0,P|200:352|152:348,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,1013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,200,1346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,118,1513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,68,1679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,1847,6,0,P|380:80|430:88,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,2347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,2513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,216,2679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,298,2846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,348,3012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,252,3347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,188,3847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,200,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,124,4347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,144,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,60,4847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,64,5013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,105,5096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,152,5179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,194,5262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,237,5346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,280,5429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,300,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
328,332,5847,6,0,L|336:216,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,6180,2,0,L|54:264,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,76,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,76,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,272,7013,6,0,L|24:224,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,7347,2,0,L|492:184,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,124,7847,2,0,P|180:68|232:28,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,8180,2,0,P|434:51|481:43,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,8513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,156,8680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,8847,2,0,P|260:236|344:204,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,208,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,332,9681,2,0,P|432:292|508:336,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,10181,6,0,P|176:216|100:224,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,10514,2,0,P|432:168|508:176,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,10848,2,0,P|200:120|152:124,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,260,11180,6,0,P|408:308|412:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,11513,2,0,P|84:96|136:164,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,12013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,156,12180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,204,12347,6,0,P|384:240|392:344,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,12847,2,0,L|60:204,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,348,13180,2,0,L|508:348,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,13513,2,0,L|164:280,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,212,13847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
360,176,13930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,129,14013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,93,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,96,14180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,56,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,28,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
456,28,14847,2,0,L|508:64,2,47.5,8|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,348,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
343,305,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,258,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,214,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,173,16180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,127,16263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,81,16347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
353,41,16430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,327,16513,6,0,P|124:296|68:232,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,16847,2,0,L|516:176,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,100,17346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,32,17513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,264,17680,2,0,P|216:268|169:262,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,152,18180,2,0,L|12:52,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,216,18513,6,0,L|436:312,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,18847,2,0,L|124:48,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,310,19180,2,0,L|198:310,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,174,19846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,82,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,28,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,65,20347,2,0,P|12:41|16:29,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,20847,6,0,L|352:152,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,21180,2,0,L|56:240,2,47.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,324,21513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,324,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,320,21679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,320,21762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,320,21847,6,0,L|96:212,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,224,22180,2,0,L|444:128,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,22513,2,0,L|192:80,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,140,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,19,23013,2,0,L|60:96,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,196,23347,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,336,23513,2,0,P|420:344|372:336,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,23847,2,0,L|184:176,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,24180,2,0,L|484:32,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,56,24513,6,0,L|160:248,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,324,25013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,344,25180,2,0,L|308:344,2,95,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,252,25680,2,0,P|416:156|324:136,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,164,26180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,156,26347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,200,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,240,26513,2,0,L|208:340,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,112,26847,2,0,L|8:208,1,95,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
420,104,27180,6,0,L|456:300,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,240,27847,2,0,L|242:240,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,152,28347,2,0,L|196:152,1,190,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,28847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,48,29180,2,0,P|472:128|440:224,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,29680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,29763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,328,29847,6,0,P|20:280|4:236,1,95,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,30347,2,0,P|412:192|360:120,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,180,31013,2,0,P|32:80|100:28,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
280,208,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
222,205,32096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,207,32179,1,8,0:3:0:0:
331,81,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,84,32513,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32597,12,0,33513,0:0:0:0:
184,140,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,140,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,140,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,140,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,141,34513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,140,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,140,34847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,140,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,140,35180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
55,215,35346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,288,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,348,35680,2,0,P|436:312|504:244,1,190,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,268,36347,6,0,B|-8:188|88:172|40:76,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,36847,2,0,L|368:268,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,88,37180,2,0,L|124:192,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,216,37513,2,0,L|452:316,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,320,37847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
238,292,37930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,246,38013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,209,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,224,38180,6,0,L|500:224,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,38347,2,0,L|260:156,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,200,38513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
500,165,38596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,119,38679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
502,73,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,37,38846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,14,38929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,132,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
100,80,39347,6,0,L|4:80,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,39847,2,0,L|272:200,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,40013,2,0,L|116:228,1,47.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,40180,2,0,L|300:268,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,40346,2,0,L|92:296,1,47.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,40513,6,0,P|376:232|312:176,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,41013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,56,41180,2,0,L|472:160,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,41513,2,0,L|204:280,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,316,41847,6,0,P|424:340|328:316,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,208,42513,2,0,L|132:208,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,116,42847,2,0,L|484:116,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,24,43180,6,0,P|136:60|40:44,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,43680,2,0,L|308:120,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,44180,2,0,L|56:292,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,284,44513,6,0,L|360:180,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,44847,2,0,L|172:296,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
494,200,45346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,118,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,93,45679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,45847,6,0,L|48:24,1,190,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,46347,2,0,P|300:64|416:28,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,46847,2,0,L|232:244,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,47180,6,0,P|456:204|400:124,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,92,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,47847,2,0,L|132:232,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,48180,2,0,L|456:259,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,48513,6,0,P|112:248|172:168,1,190,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,180,49013,2,0,P|460:104|400:24,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,49513,2,0,L|288:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,106,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
49,198,50180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
105,272,50346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,268,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,233,50596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,186,50679,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,153,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,156,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
149,121,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,74,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,41,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,51180,2,0,L|456:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,51513,2,0,L|56:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,51847,2,0,L|376:228,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,52180,2,0,L|62:155,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,324,52513,6,0,L|396:324,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,53013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,53180,2,0,L|396:232,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,160,53513,2,0,L|417:160,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,53847,2,0,L|28:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,54180,2,0,L|428:76,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,54514,2,0,L|108:228,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,228,54847,2,0,L|422:135,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,55180,6,0,L|32:48,2,95,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,116,55680,2,0,L|328:116,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,80,55847,2,0,L|280:80,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,164,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,208,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,255,56346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,297,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,56513,2,0,P|428:256|400:192,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,184,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,144,57180,2,0,P|416:120|328:144,1,190,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,57680,2,0,L|84:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,58013,2,0,L|260:307,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,58347,2,0,L|4:116,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,168,58847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,58930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,255,59013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,293,59097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,312,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
24,236,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
292,248,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,172,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,184,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
140,108,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,128,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,44,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
437,326,61180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,287,61263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,241,61346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,203,61430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,187,61513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
227,148,61596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,102,61679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,15,61847,2,0,L|488:120,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,62180,2,0,L|320:240,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,62513,2,0,L|56:300,2,95,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63180,2,0,L|72:108,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,168,63513,2,0,L|276:76,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,63847,2,0,L|72:104,1,95,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,64180,2,0,L|188:28,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,64513,2,0,L|484:124,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,64847,2,0,L|344:64,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,36,65180,5,0,0:0:0:0:
270,98,65346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,188,65513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,279,65680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,320,65847,6,0,P|8:204|120:80,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,66513,2,0,P|504:204|392:80,1,285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67180,12,0,69180,0:0:0:0:
256,232,69513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,148,69680,2,0,L|144:100,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,112,69847,2,0,L|336:12,1,95,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,72,70347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
492,72,70680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,232,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,152,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
104,152,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay

koliron wrote:

by the way im still so noob at sb but, why all the lyrics appears around 1/4~1/2 later? as i understand it should be possible to read when the vocal starts, for example 00:50:263 - lyric 12392 is
code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics/12392.png",320,240
 C,0,49847,,255,255,255
 P,0,49847,,A
 F,0,49847,50247,0,0.8
 S,0,49847,50247,1,0.4
 R,2,49847,50247,1.8,0
 MX,0,49847,50247,0,20
 MY,0,49847,50247,0,360
 S,0,49847,55180,0.4
 MX,0,50247,55180,20,40
 MY,0,50247,55180,360
 F,0,54780,55180,0.8,0

shouldn't MX,0,50247,55180,20,40 and MY start around 49847?
by the way i don't think players would notice the F of collab-shini- in the beginning, i'd make that effect in 00:00:514 - until 00:00:847 -

wow this set improved a lot! ^^ call me after this
um. . .
MX,0,49847,50247,0,20 --> MX,0,50247,55180,20,40
MY,0,49847,50247,0,360 --> MY,0,50247,55180,360

i don't see any problem here.
if the 2nd MX and 2nd MY starts at 49847 just like you want, it will create a conflict to the first MX and first MY.

Correct if i'm wrong, that's my understanding to your post.
koliron
791 posts
Joined July 2014
koliron

-Sh1n1- wrote:

  1. 00:31:013 (1,2) - kejesto -___ - plz te recomiendo muchisimo cambiar ese segundo slider, el movimiento es muy incomodo, si en serio queres mantener un curva así acá hay un ejemplo que esta mucho mejor: la curva sale perfecto en auto, ademas espero que los DT farmers miseen. primero, no deberias guiarte en lo que hace el auto, probalo vos mismo, no es muy comodo :s y segundo, los mapas son mappeados para no mod, no para mods lol mucho menos con la intención de que misseen :/
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

RoseusJaeger wrote:

I was referred here from a discord chat, I'll try to be helpful but modders might have sniped my suggestions.

General

Looks good metadata wise. *-*/ yeah

Platter

00:31:680 (2) – The beat here isn't strong enough here to be anti-flow, flip this slider. Yeah, I took the advice of Koli
00:46:847 (3,1) – A 1.80x spacing jump would feel more natural here because (1) is not that prominent of a beat. Put (1) on X=476. Reduced
00:51:180 (1,2) – The beat on (2) is not very prominent and should be reduced to 1.60x spacing by putting (2) on X=80. nope, at first try this was hyper lol, but I feel that a little jump could be ok
01:10:347 (1,2) – This jump is really awkward to catch because of the spacing. Fix by putting (2) on X=88 then putting (3) on X=280 to fix the flow. this is fine, I testplayed lot of times and I still think that it's Ok, also I reduced the distance with Koli's mod before.

Good luck with you map, hopefully I'm somewhat helpful.
Thank you very much bro, I really apreciatte it, also thanks for the star <3 call me whenever u want if you need mods.

Kurokami wrote:

RoseusJaeger wrote:

I was referred here from a discord chat, I'll try to be helpful but modders might have sniped my suggestions.


Kurokami's Rain


00:23:513 (2,3,4,5) – I would have just used a long slider here because this pattern contradicts the vocals too much here and the beat isn't that strong. Somehow the timestamp just didn't match with the suggestion. :c But following the highlighted notes I don't really want to change that part because the white tick and the second red has an important beat which needs to be followed. And I used triplet at this part here I don't want to break the consistent timeline.

I tried to mod Rain but gave up once h-dashes starting happening everywhere and I couldn't even testplay it. Please, just the kiai has more Hyper. :c

Good luck with you map, hopefully I'm somewhat helpful.
Thank you.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Chronoxia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22547
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Chronoxia
TitleUnicode:Chronoxia
Artist:DJ Totoriott
ArtistUnicode:DJ Totoriott
Creator:Kyuare
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags:
BeatmapID:927266
BeatmapSetID:429184

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.6
ApproachRate:8.6
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 201426 brown_hair dress headdress isis_(p&d) long_hair maiwetea purple_eyes puzzle_&_dragons water white.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,65409,75201
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1210,333.333333333333,4,2,0,60,1,0
81209,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
102543,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,243,253
Combo2 : 130,57,57

[HitObjects]
80,336,987,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,1098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,1210,6,0,P|400:224|384:112,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,1654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,1765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,1876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,256,2209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,2321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,2432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,2543,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,96,2876,2,0,L|432:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,3209,2,0,L|224:80,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,3543,2,0,L|448:240,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,3876,6,0,P|208:256|240:352,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,4321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,4432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,4543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,160,4876,2,0,L|32:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5209,6,0,P|272:128|208:32,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,5654,2,0,L|64:16,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,5987,2,0,L|181:117,1,60
80,144,6209,2,0,L|37:101,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,192,6876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,6987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,7098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,7209,2,0,P|192:192|256:288,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,7654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,7765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,7876,6,0,L|160:144,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,8321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,8432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,16,8543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,8654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,8765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,8876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,8987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,9098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,9209,6,0,P|144:272|176:384,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,336,9654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,288,9765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,9876,2,0,P|176:224|144:128,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,10321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,10432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,10543,6,0,P|32:96|64:192,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,10987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,11098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,11209,2,0,L|352:256,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,11432,2,0,L|176:192,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,11654,2,0,L|352:128,1,60
224,32,11876,6,0,P|176:64|192:176,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,12321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,12432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,12543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,112,12876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,176,12987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,13098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,13209,6,0,P|256:240|192:336,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,13654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,288,13765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,13876,2,0,L|240:192,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,14209,2,0,L|464:144,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,14543,6,0,L|96:96,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,14987,2,0,L|240:112,1,60
176,272,15209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,272,15543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,15654,2,0,L|320:224,1,60
384,160,15876,6,0,L|221:235,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,16321,2,0,L|336:304,1,60
256,288,16543,2,0,L|208:336,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,16876,2,0,L|400:192,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,240,17209,6,0,L|128:144,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,17543,2,0,L|320:208,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,17876,2,0,L|64:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,18209,2,0,L|304:288,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,18543,6,0,P|80:192|96:128,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,18876,2,0,L|304:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,19209,2,0,P|448:80|432:144,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,19543,2,0,L|224:272,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,19876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,192,20209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,20543,2,0,L|432:80,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,20765,2,0,L|400:128,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,20987,2,8,L|448:224,1,60
288,192,21209,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,96,21543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,21709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,176,21876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,21959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,22043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,22209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,304,22376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,272,22543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,192,22709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,22793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,22876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,23043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,23209,2,0,L|48:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,23543,2,0,L|128:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,240,23876,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,320,24043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,24126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,24209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,176,24376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,24543,2,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,24876,2,0,L|290:158,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,25209,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,192,25376,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,240,25459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,25543,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,25876,2,0,L|384:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,26209,2,0,L|176:96,1,90
368,64,26543,6,0,L|320:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,26793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,26876,2,0,L|240:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,288,27209,2,2,L|352:208,1,90
112,224,27543,2,0,L|160:144,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,27876,6,0,L|288:224,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,28376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,28543,2,0,L|208:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,333,28876,2,0,L|417:253,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,29209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,192,29376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,29459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,29543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,29709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,29793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,29876,2,0,L|432:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,30209,2,0,L|208:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,30543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,288,30709,2,0,L|256:304,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,31043,2,0,L|496:224,1,45
448,160,31209,2,0,L|352:128,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,31709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,31876,6,0,L|144:336,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,32209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,176,32543,1,4,0:0:0:0:
464,144,32626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,32709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,32793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,32876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,0,33043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,16,33209,6,0,L|64:80,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,33543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,33709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,33793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,33876,2,0,L|272:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,304,34209,2,0,L|176:241,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,34543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,128,34876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,64,35209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,35543,2,0,L|448:48,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35876,6,0,L|96:128,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,36376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,208,36459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,36543,2,0,L|160:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,36876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,176,37043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,37209,6,0,L|224:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,128,37876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,38043,2,0,L|240:192,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,128,38209,2,0,L|239:128,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,38376,2,0,L|240:64,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,38543,6,0,L|0:96,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,39043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,39126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,39209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,224,39376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,39543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,336,39709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,336,39876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,256,40209,2,0,L|96:192,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,40876,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,41209,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,32,41376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,41459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,41543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,41709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,41793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,41876,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,240,42043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,42126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,42209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,240,42376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,42459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,42543,6,0,L|176:240,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,42876,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,43209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,43376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,176,43543,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,160,43626,1,0,3:0:0:0:
96,112,43709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
128,64,43793,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,64,43876,6,0,L|432:64,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,44376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,44459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,44543,2,0,L|80:192,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,44876,2,0,L|336:144,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,45209,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,272,45543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,320,45876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,46209,2,0,L|464:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,46543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,144,46709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,46876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,64,47043,2,0,L|96:64,1,45
144,144,47209,2,0,L|224:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,47543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,47709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,208,47876,6,0,P|112:240|160:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,48543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,208,48709,2,0,L|224:208,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,48876,2,0,L|400:144,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,49043,2,0,L|224:80,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,80,49209,6,0,P|448:112|432:240,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,49709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,49793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,49876,2,0,P|96:240|160:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,50376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,50543,6,0,P|32:96|96:192,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,51043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,51209,2,0,L|144:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,51543,2,0,L|368:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,51876,6,0,L|112:128,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,52126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,52209,2,0,L|256:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,52459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,52543,2,0,L|112:368,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,52876,2,0,L|336:352,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,53043,2,0,L|192:288,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,53209,5,4,0:0:0:0:
496,192,53376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,160,53543,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,160,53876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,128,54043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,54210,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,64,54543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,48,54876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,55209,2,0,L|256:144,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,55543,2,0,L|256:224,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,55876,6,0,L|272:224,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,56209,2,0,L|148:304,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,56543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,56654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,208,56765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,256,56876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,80,57209,6,0,P|96:112|128:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57543,2,0,P|272:224|240:304,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,57876,2,0,P|400:240|368:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,58209,2,0,P|224:144|256:64,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,58543,6,0,L|416:16,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,58876,2,0,L|208:112,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,59209,2,2,L|96:96,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,59432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,59543,2,0,L|400:288,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,59876,6,0,L|160:288,2,60,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,60209,2,0,L|416:144,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,60543,2,0,L|240:192,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,60876,2,0,L|480:16,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,61209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,144,61321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,61432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,61543,2,0,L|352:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,61876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,256,61987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,176,62098,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,62209,2,0,L|256:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,48,62543,6,0,L|0:96,2,60,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,80,62876,2,0,L|208:32,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,63209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,176,63321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,63432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,63543,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,304,63654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,63765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,63876,6,0,L|288:224,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,64209,2,0,L|80:224,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,64543,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,64654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,112,64765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,160,64876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,112,64987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,112,65209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,304,75876,6,0,L|192:304,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,76126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,76209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,76376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,76459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,76543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,256,76709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,76793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,77043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,77126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,77209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,336,77376,6,0,L|96:320,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,77709,2,0,L|352:352,2,45,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,78043,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,78126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78209,2,0,L|240:160,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,78376,2,0,L|192:96,1,45
352,128,78543,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,78709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,78793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78876,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,240,79043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,79126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,79209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,288,79293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,79376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,79459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,79543,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,79626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,79709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,0,79793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,0,79876,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,48,79959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,80043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,80126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,80209,2,0,L|192:112,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,80376,2,0,L|288:48,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,16,80543,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,16,80709,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,112,80876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,208,81043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,240,81209,6,0,P|64:208|128:96,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,81709,2,0,L|304:128,1,45
272,160,81876,2,0,L|176:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,82209,2,0,L|432:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,82543,6,0,L|128:272,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82709,2,0,L|176:208,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,82876,2,0,L|384:208,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,83042,2,0,L|336:272,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,83209,2,0,L|256:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,48,83543,2,0,L|320:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,83876,6,0,P|48:96|96:208,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,84376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,84459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,84543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,84709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,84876,2,0,L|160:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,85209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,85376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,85543,2,0,L|432:16,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,86043,2,0,L|208:64,1,45
256,128,86209,2,0,L|352:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,86543,6,0,L|320:192,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,87043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,87126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,87209,2,0,L|240:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,340,87543,2,0,L|276:340,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,352,87876,6,0,L|96:320,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,88043,2,0,L|192:256,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,88209,2,0,L|80:224,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,88376,2,0,L|176:176,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,208,88543,2,0,L|16:144,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,88876,2,0,L|80:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,89209,6,0,L|480:160,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,16,90043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,90209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,90543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,224,90876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,304,91209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,144,91376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,96,91543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,91709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,91876,6,0,L|224:48,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,92376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,92459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,92543,2,0,L|458:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,92876,2,0,L|198:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,93209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,240,93293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,93376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,304,93459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,93543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,93626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,93709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,93876,2,0,L|144:64,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,94209,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,94543,6,0,P|80:160|144:256,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,95043,2,0,L|336:256,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,95209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,95376,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,64,95543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,64,95709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,95876,6,0,L|132:192,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,256,96376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,96543,2,0,L|416:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,96876,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,97209,6,0,P|96:160|144:48,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,97709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,97793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,97876,2,0,L|240:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,98209,2,0,L|480:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,98543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,128,98626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,98709,2,0,L|64:208,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,98876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,256,98959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,99043,2,0,L|272:336,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,336,99209,2,0,L|128:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,99543,2,0,L|416:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,99876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,288,100043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,100209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,100376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,100543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,176,100626,1,0,3:0:0:0:
32,128,100709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
48,80,100793,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,48,100876,1,0,3:0:0:0:
192,16,100959,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,0,101043,1,0,3:0:0:0:
64,0,101126,1,0,3:0:0:0:
208,0,101209,6,0,L|304:0,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,101543,2,0,L|48:48,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,101876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,160,102043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,102209,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,102543,6,0,L|160:96,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,102793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,96,102876,2,0,L|58:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,32,103209,2,0,L|304:32,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,80,103543,2,0,L|64:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,103876,6,0,L|256:112,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,104209,2,0,L|416:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,104543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,272,104709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,104876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,160,105043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,105209,6,0,L|64:160,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,105543,2,0,L|288:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,105876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,96,106043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,106209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,16,106376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,106543,6,0,L|96:272,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,106876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,80,107043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,107209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,16,107376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,107543,2,8,L|208:80,1,90
448,112,107876,6,0,L|496:192,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,108126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,108209,2,0,L|416:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,108543,2,0,L|208:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,108876,2,0,L|384:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,109209,6,0,L|192:128,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,109543,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,109876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,16,110043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,110209,2,0,L|320:32,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,32,110543,6,0,L|176:32,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,110876,2,0,L|256:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,111209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,96,111376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,111543,2,0,L|352:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,111876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,304,111959,1,0,3:0:0:0:
176,320,112043,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,336,112126,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,272,112209,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,112293,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,192,112376,1,0,3:0:0:0:
208,176,112459,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,144,112543,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,96,112626,1,0,3:0:0:0:
176,64,112709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,64,112793,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,32,112876,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,32,113043,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Wrong Code? :P
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion

RoseusJaeger wrote:

Hyperion's Cup

01:11:013 (4) – My only suggestion for this diff is that this beat is a little less prominent from from the previous of (3). I'd just put (4) where you exactly put (2). Whilst the sound is lower-pitched, the guitar and cymbal feel more intense here to me, so I'd prefer to keep the gradual build in spacing.

Good luck with you map, hopefully I'm somewhat helpful.
No changes for my diff, but thanks for taking a look!
koliron
791 posts
Joined July 2014
koliron
ok aaaaaaa finally

re-re-recheck :^)
2016-07-03 22:53 koliron: es en todas las dificultades
2016-07-03 22:53 koliron: 01:01:180 - por que el volumen es tan bajo aca?
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: lol bueno puedo subirlo un pokito
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: :c
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: yo crei que le daba buen efecto
2016-07-03 22:55 koliron: es raro porque el instrumento y el vocal esm uy fuerte
2016-07-03 22:55 koliron: subilo a al menos 35%
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: 40 esta bien?
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: aaa
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: bien
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: 35
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: *-*/
2016-07-03 22:55 -Sh1n1-: xd
2016-07-03 22:58 -Sh1n1-: listo, agregado en todas las diffs
2016-07-03 23:02 koliron: 00:31:680 (2,1) - cambiaste la curva pero no la distancia, ahora 1 esta medio lejos
2016-07-03 23:02 koliron: te recomiendo bajarle un poco por ahi
2016-07-03 23:02 koliron: podrias poner 00:32:180 (1,2) - un poco a la derecha
2016-07-03 23:02 koliron: asi depaso haria un dash a 3
2016-07-03 23:03 -Sh1n1-: platter?
2016-07-03 23:04 -Sh1n1-: si hay dash xD
2016-07-03 23:04 -Sh1n1-: pero oks le bajare la distancia
2016-07-03 23:06 -Sh1n1-: 00:31:680 (2,1) -
2016-07-03 23:06 -Sh1n1-: 1.96 es sufi no?
2016-07-03 23:06 koliron: si
2016-07-03 23:07 -Sh1n1-: oks
2016-07-03 23:07 -Sh1n1-: fixed
2016-07-03 23:10 koliron: ya esta
2016-07-03 23:10 koliron: actualiza
2016-07-03 23:10 -Sh1n1-: oks
2016-07-03 23:10 -Sh1n1-: *-*/
2016-07-03 23:11 -Sh1n1-: ready

bubbled!
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
yay Thanks Koli <3
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Hm, I just realized that even my edit was bad. Can someone kill me? Anyway, here is the correct difficulty.
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:895574
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\kuro.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
17013,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,40,0,0
17513,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
208,304,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,224,680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,847,2,0,L|112:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,1513,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,1847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,224,2013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,2180,2,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,2513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,2847,2,0,L|384:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,3347,2,0,L|125:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,144,3847,2,0,L|386:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,4347,2,0,L|64:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,4847,2,0,L|448:192,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,5180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,208,5347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,5430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,304,5847,6,0,L|48:256,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,6180,2,0,L|288:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,7013,6,0,L|384:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,7513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,7847,2,0,P|80:96|144:192,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,6,0,L|288:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,8847,2,0,L|496:288,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,256,9680,6,0,L|256:208,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,10180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,10513,2,0,P|16:272|96:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11180,6,0,L|240:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,11513,2,0,L|480:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,11847,2,0,L|208:272,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,12347,6,0,L|192:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,12847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,96,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,96,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,13847,6,0,L|96:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,14180,2,0,L|304:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,240,14847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,14930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,142,15013,6,0,L|112:96,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,15513,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,80,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,16180,2,0,L|224:256,1,45,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,16347,2,0,L|96:336,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,16513,6,0,P|256:352|304:256,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,17013,2,0,L|48:160,1,135.000005149842
208,112,17347,2,0,L|336:64,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17680,6,0,L|16:112,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18180,2,0,L|176:128,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,18513,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,64,19013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,19180,6,0,P|368:112|336:224,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,240,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,20347,6,0,L|336:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,20847,2,0,L|192:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,21097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,0,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,16,21513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,21680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,21763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,161,21847,6,0,L|272:208,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,22180,2,0,L|32:272,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,22513,2,0,L|288:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,224,23013,6,0,L|32:272,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,23513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,23847,2,0,L|160:16,1,90
272,0,24180,2,0,L|320:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,24513,6,0,L|32:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,24847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,253,25347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,288,25680,6,0,L|384:240,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,26180,2,0,L|32:144,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,32,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,32,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,16,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
32,48,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
32,144,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,27180,6,0,P|224:192|192:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,288,28013,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,28347,6,0,L|176:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,28680,2,0,L|304:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,32,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,16,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,29513,6,0,L|464:32,1,90
224,112,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,160,30013,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,256,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,256,31013,6,0,L|256:256,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,112,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
144,64,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,16,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,16,32513,6,0,P|512:48|448:144,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,33013,2,0,P|208:208|192:256,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,0,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,48,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,35180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,272,35680,6,0,L|224:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36013,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,36347,2,0,P|96:128|112:240,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,36847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,160,37180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37847,6,0,L|160:240,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,38180,2,0,L|352:304,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,38513,2,0,L|144:80,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,32,38847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,48,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,32,39347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,39513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,39680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39847,6,0,L|176:80,2,90,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,40263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,40347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,240,40430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,286,40513,6,0,P|304:240|272:144,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,41013,2,0,L|48:80,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,41513,2,0,L|224:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,41847,6,0,L|112:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,96,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,128,42513,2,0,L|128:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,42847,2,0,L|384:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43180,6,0,P|64:240|80:144,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,43680,2,0,L|320:160,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,44180,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,44513,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,44847,2,0,L|192:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,45347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,304,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,352,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,336,45847,6,0,L|208:224,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46347,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46847,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,47180,6,0,L|96:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,208,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,240,47847,2,0,L|160:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,48180,2,0,L|352:336,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,48513,6,0,L|240:160,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,49013,2,0,L|32:64,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,49513,2,0,L|176:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,112,50180,2,0,L|432:176,1,90,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,50430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,50680,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,288,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,51180,6,0,L|448:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,51513,2,0,L|208:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,51847,2,0,L|368:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,52180,2,0,L|224:144,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,224,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,272,53013,2,0,L|16:224,2,90,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,53513,2,0,L|432:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,53847,6,0,L|160:64,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,54180,2,0,L|368:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,54513,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,54847,2,0,L|352:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,208,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,112,55680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,55763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,176,55847,6,0,L|464:272,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,208,56347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,128,56513,6,0,L|448:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,57180,2,0,L|32:80,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,57847,6,0,L|304:80,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,58847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,80,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,64,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,32,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,16,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,112,61180,6,0,L|288:64,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,208,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,61847,6,0,L|128:352,2,90,4|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,62347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,224,62513,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,80,63180,6,0,L|304:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,63513,2,0,L|112:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,63847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,272,64014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,336,64347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,336,64513,6,0,L|416:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65013,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,65513,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,65847,6,0,P|48:128|128:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,66513,2,0,P|464:128|384:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,67180,6,0,L|144:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,67513,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,67847,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,68180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,68347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,68513,6,0,L|96:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,68847,2,0,L|416:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,69180,2,0,L|64:320,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,69763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,69847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,128,70013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,64,70347,2,0,L|416:112,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,111,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,176,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,176,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
Don't worry I'll kill you~~ :3

/me slaps Kurokami
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
soon
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
/me is dancing*
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
hi there just some quick things

[
Hyperion's Cup
]

General



  1. 00:09:180 (2,3,4) - has an odd rhythm that you haven't really used before. There's two suggestions. You can either copy the rhythm you've used at 00:05:847 (1,2,3,4,5) - , or you can try changing to something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607541
  2. 00:14:513 (2) - a bit minor, but maybe you could tilt this more towards 3?
  3. 00:34:513 (1) - maybe a bit too dense for a cup? I'd just go with a more simple slider tbh
  4. 00:49:847 (3) - I'd make this 1/1 also, considering you don't do anything like this with the vocals earlier or later in this section.

[
Q-H's Salad
]

General



best salad I've seen in a long time holy moly

  1. 00:05:013 (5,6) - I'd give a more distinguished dash here, maybe 00:05:180 (6) - to x:368?
  2. 00:13:847 (1,2) - I'd swap these to put the slider first and have a dash to the circle since it's the stronger emphasized sound.
  3. Same as above with 00:14:680 (2,3) - . Having the slider end on a strong note isn't really reccomended.
  4. 00:21:097 (2,3,4,5) - a bit overmapped tbh, I'd just make it a 1/2 slider starting on 00:21:180 -
  5. 00:21:513 (6) - Split this into 1/2 slider + dash to circle? You have a strong noise on a slider end again :(
  6. 01:01:680 (2) - Finish with no emphasis ;; make it two circles and dash !!
  7. moving 01:11:513 (5) - to x:336 would be a great way to end the song :D

[
Platter
]

General



  1. 00:05:013 - tbh you could add stream notes here (thats where the drumroll starts) and add an hdash between there and 00:05:013 - for some added emphasis into the tempo change :D
  2. 00:37:847 (1,2) - I really dislike these vertical hold sliders in lower difficulties, since players might not have the catcher control to move at the right times. If you really want to keep this stream, I'd really suggest to curve these notes so that the track is easier to follow.
  3. 00:39:847 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than doing this stream, I think following the vocals here sounds much better to be honest. I think the way it is doesn't give the same amount of emphasis as a vocal lead-in.
  4. 00:55:847 (1) - kill this slider and just make a curve D:D:D:

[
Kurokami's Rain
]

General



  1. 00:15:013 (1) - not a fan of this direct transition into the lighter notes, since it detracts emphasis from the main rhythm by leading right into something thats much much lighter. I'd follow a timeline like this. Don't mind the placement of the notes, just the timeline.
  2. 00:16:347 (6,1) - No hdash here? Would be a good lead-in to the tempo change.
  3. 00:51:097 (6,1,2) - 1/4 -> 1/2 consecutive hdash snaps aren't recommended per the new ranking criteria, so I'd just remove the hdash between 00:51:097 (6,1) - .
  4. 00:56:180 (2,3,4,5) - these are really easy to overstream, why not make them a curve going into 00:56:513 (1) - ?

[
Sh1senkyo's World
]

General



  1. 00:10:180 (1,2) - I really don't like the 1/4 sliders here, they feel out of place in comparison to the 1/2 sliders you've been using so far. I'd just shorten them for the 1/2 consistency value at the beginning of the difficulty.
  2. 00:34:847 (1,2) - Really high distance here D: Either shorten it to the point where it isn't such a harsh dash, or my personal recommendation of just making it an hdash.
  3. 00:59:347 (2,3,4) - 2,3 has way too high of a distance between them, making it easy to over or undershoot to get to 4 in time. I moved 00:59:680 (3) - to x:216 and it was much better.

call me back~
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

Ascendance wrote:

hi there just some quick things

[
Kurokami's Rain
]

General



  1. 00:15:013 (1) - not a fan of this direct transition into the lighter notes, since it detracts emphasis from the main rhythm by leading right into something thats much much lighter. I'd follow a timeline like this. Don't mind the placement of the notes, just the timeline. Changed the repeat slider into a 1/1 one because the sound on red tick is not strong enough to support a circle.
  2. 00:16:347 (6,1) - No hdash here? Would be a good lead-in to the tempo change. I think the stream pattern is hard enough to cover that 1/4 Hyper. Plus I want to avoid using them on a Rain which aimed to be easier.
  3. 00:51:097 (6,1,2) - 1/4 -> 1/2 consecutive hdash snaps aren't recommended per the new ranking criteria, so I'd just remove the hdash between 00:51:097 (6,1) - . Well, instead os removing, I changed the way of the slider to make the flow much better. I think its plays better this way.

call me back~
Thank you.
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
TitleUnicode:BEAUTIFUL WORLD
Artist:Koike Joanna
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:それでも世界は美しい
Tags:soredemo sekai wa utsukushii Still is opening op tv size shini Kurokami QHideaki13 JBHyperion Jusenkyo arviejhay
BeatmapID:895574
BeatmapSetID:407435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PurpleBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Names\kuro.png",320,240
 M,0,5847,,231,359
 S,0,5847,,0.5458066
 P,0,5847,,A
 F,0,5847,6180,0,1
 F,0,6180,13847,1,0.987988
 F,0,13847,14180,0.987988,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
514,333.333333333333,4,2,2,15,1,0
3180,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
5013,-100,4,3,0,30,0,0
5513,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13847,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15847,-100,4,3,0,35,0,0
16180,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
17013,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,40,0,0
17513,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
27180,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
33847,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
34847,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40513,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
51180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
56513,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
59180,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61180,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
61847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
69847,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
208,304,514,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,224,680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,847,2,0,L|112:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,1180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,1347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,1513,2,0,L|400:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,1847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,224,2013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,2180,2,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,2513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,2847,2,0,L|384:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,3180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,3347,2,0,L|125:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,3680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,144,3847,2,0,L|386:97,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,4180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,4347,2,0,L|64:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,4680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,112,4847,2,0,L|448:192,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,5180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,5263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,208,5347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,5430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,5513,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,304,5847,6,0,L|48:256,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,6180,2,0,L|288:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,6680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,112,6847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,7013,6,0,L|384:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,7513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,7847,2,0,P|80:96|144:192,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,8513,6,0,L|288:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,8847,2,0,L|496:288,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,9347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,9513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,256,9680,6,0,L|256:208,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,10180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,10513,2,0,P|16:272|96:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11180,6,0,L|240:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,11513,2,0,L|480:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,11847,2,0,L|208:272,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,12347,6,0,L|192:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,12847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,96,13180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,96,13513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,13847,6,0,L|96:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,14097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,14180,2,0,L|304:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,14513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,14680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,240,14847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,14930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,142,15013,6,0,P|144:208|192:288,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,15513,2,0,L|272:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,15847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,80,15930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,16013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,16097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,16180,2,0,L|224:256,1,45,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,16347,2,0,L|96:336,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,16513,6,0,P|256:352|304:256,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,17013,2,0,L|48:160,1,135.000005149842
208,112,17347,2,0,L|336:64,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17680,6,0,L|16:112,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18180,2,0,L|176:128,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,18513,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,18847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,64,19013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,19180,6,0,P|368:112|336:224,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,19680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,19847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,240,20180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,20347,6,0,L|336:176,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,20847,2,0,L|192:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,21097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,21180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,21263,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,0,21347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,16,21513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,48,21597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,21680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,21763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,161,21847,6,0,L|272:208,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,22180,2,0,L|32:272,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,22513,2,0,L|288:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,22847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,224,23013,6,0,L|32:272,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,23513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,23680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,23847,2,0,L|160:16,1,90
272,0,24180,2,0,L|320:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,24513,6,0,L|32:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,24847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,253,25347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,25513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,288,25680,6,0,L|384:240,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,26180,2,0,L|32:144,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,26430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,32,26513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,32,26680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,16,26847,5,8,0:3:0:0:
32,48,26930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,27013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
32,144,27097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,27180,6,0,P|224:192|192:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,27680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,27847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,288,28013,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,28347,6,0,L|176:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,28680,2,0,L|304:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,32,29013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,16,29180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,29513,6,0,L|464:32,1,90
224,112,29847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,160,30013,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,30347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,256,30680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,256,31013,6,0,L|256:256,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,31680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,112,32013,5,8,0:3:0:0:
144,64,32180,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,16,32347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,16,32513,6,0,P|512:48|448:144,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,33013,2,0,P|208:208|192:256,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,33847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,34013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,34180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,34347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,0,34513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,48,34680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,34847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,35013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,35180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,35513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,272,35680,6,0,L|224:176,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36013,2,0,L|416:96,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,36347,2,0,P|96:128|112:240,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,36847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,160,37180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37847,6,0,L|160:240,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,224,38097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,38180,2,0,L|352:304,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,38430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,38513,2,0,L|144:80,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,38763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,32,38847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,48,39013,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,32,39347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,39513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,39680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39847,6,0,L|176:80,2,90,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,40263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,40347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,240,40430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,286,40513,6,0,P|304:240|272:144,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,41013,2,0,L|48:80,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,41513,2,0,L|224:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,41847,6,0,L|112:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,42180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,96,42347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,128,42513,2,0,L|128:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,42847,2,0,L|384:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43180,6,0,P|64:240|80:144,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,43680,2,0,L|320:160,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,44180,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,44513,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,44847,2,0,L|192:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,45180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,45347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,304,45513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,352,45680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,336,45847,6,0,L|208:224,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46347,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46847,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,47180,6,0,L|96:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,47513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,208,47680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,240,47847,2,0,L|160:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,48180,2,0,L|352:336,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,48513,6,0,L|240:160,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,49013,2,0,L|32:64,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,49513,2,0,L|176:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,49847,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,50013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,112,50180,2,0,L|432:176,1,90,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,50430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,50513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,50680,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,288,50763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,256,50847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,208,50930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,51013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,128,51097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,112,51180,6,0,L|496:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51513,2,0,L|176:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,51847,2,0,L|368:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,52180,2,0,L|192:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,52513,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,224,52680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,272,53013,2,0,L|16:224,2,90,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,53513,2,0,L|432:192,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,53847,6,0,L|160:64,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,54180,2,0,L|368:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,54513,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,54847,2,0,L|352:256,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,55180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,208,55347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,55513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,112,55680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,55763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,176,55847,6,0,L|464:272,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,56180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,256,56263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,208,56347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,56430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,176,56513,6,0,P|448:160|432:48,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,57013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,57180,2,0,L|32:80,2,90,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,57680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,57847,6,0,L|304:80,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,58347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,58513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,58680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,58847,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,59180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,59347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,80,59847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,96,60180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
400,64,60347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,32,60680,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,16,60847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,112,61180,6,0,L|288:64,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,208,61680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,61763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,61847,6,0,L|128:352,2,90,4|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,62347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,224,62513,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,62847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,63013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,80,63180,6,0,L|304:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,63513,2,0,L|112:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,63847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,272,64014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,64180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,336,64347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,336,64513,6,0,L|416:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,64847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65013,2,0,L|464:144,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,65513,2,0,L|320:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,65847,6,0,P|48:128|128:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,66513,2,0,P|464:128|384:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,67180,6,0,L|144:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,67513,2,0,L|352:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,67847,2,0,L|176:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,68180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,68347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,68513,6,0,L|96:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,68847,2,0,L|416:272,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,69180,2,0,L|64:320,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,69680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,69763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,69847,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,128,70013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,64,70347,2,0,L|416:112,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,111,71013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,176,71347,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,176,71513,1,10,0:0:0:0:
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
37 / 92