[General]Please use more than 2 combo colors, or if not, dont make them so similar.
[All Difficulties]Set slider tick rate to 2.
[Shattered Promise]00:21:585 (1,3) - These could look better, could you try smoothing these curves?
01:01:970 (1) - This one has a really sharp edge
http://puu.sh/Y4m could you try to make it smoother?.
02:17:201 ~ 02:23:201 - Why is this section missing hitsounds?
02:32:893 ~ 02:38:893 - ^
03:03:124 - Since you have too much kiai, start this kiai section at 03:17:893 instead, like you did for the 2nd chorus.
03:28:739 (1) - Extend by 1/2 beat, sounds better ending at the next white tick rather than on the red one.
03:34:047 (1) - Fade-out the spinner or silence it completey rather than silencing the end.
[Forsaken Promise]Finish the song please.
00:36:816 (9) - I Recommend a finish in here.
00:37:278 (1) - Reduce the claps in this slider, no one likes hearing a clap every 1/1 :<
00:41:431 (2,3) - Move the clap from (3) to (2)
00:42:355 (4) - Add a clap at slider start.
To save some time for me typing im gonna say that i recommend you use claps in the 2nd and 4th beats, this is called the Clap pattern00:50:201 (5) - Claps on 1st repeat and on end.
00:52:278 (3) - Change (3) into a circle, then make a regular slider at 00:52:508 - 00:52:970 use the beforementioned clap pattern, afterwards add a beat at 00:53:201 with new combo and continue with what you had, the reason for this is because right now you're breaking the beatflow with the slider, and doesnt seem to be following anything at all since you're forcing yourself to 1/2 beats, with this new pattern you will be able to continue following the vocals and also set a slider to link the main beats and go again into the notes without breaking your hitsound pattern.
01:03:585 (3,4) - Why are these notes stacked while 01:05:431 (6,7) these ones arent? either stack both or dont stack either, for consistency
01:17:893 (2) - Use the finish only at the start of the slider, rather than on the whole slider.
01:21:124 (1) - I dont see how the finishes are fitting the whole slider, i think at best only leave a finish on the same pattern as the clap pattern, or use claps instead of finishes as well.
01:24:585 (1,2) - I think a normal, clap, finish for each slider fits well with the changes of pitch in the vocals, but a finish or a clap at the end help as well.
01:26:431 (1,2) - Use the clap pattern in these 2 sliders, even if they are set both to red ticks the clap pattern still fits.
01:33:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont see why you're mixing finishes and claps in here, it makes it sound random, instead try deciding a spot to use for more accent for the finish, and using clap pattern with claps for the others, or just use one of the 2 on a clap pattern.
01:35:662 (1,2,3,4) - Clap pattern here, because the song is not soft enough to not hear hitsounds at all.
01:37:970 (5) - Clap on start, repeat and end, it sounds very weird being silent.
01:43:508 (1,2) - Claps on sliders start
01:44:431 (3) - Clap on end to follow the clap pattern.
01:45:585 (1) - Finish on start,repeat and end, and i recommend to add another repeat, instead of starting the next slider, you could always use a regular circle or a slider after for the rest, but just going with the flow i saw in your other difficulty so far.
02:01:047 (3) - Make this slider more symmetrical?
02:02:662 (5,6) - Whistles here?
02:13:278 (1) - I think this spinner fits better ending at 02:16:508 and remove the note you have there.
02:16:970 - Start kiai here (Unless you finish mapping the diff)
02:16:508 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of spamming so many claps you could switch between Normal/Soft sample sets, which would give you more choices of hitsounds.
02:25:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah clap pattern and all that drill.
02:34:739 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:27:816 (1) - This spinner sounds better ending at 02:30:355
02:31:278 (1) - I recommend you remove this note.
02:32:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - Once again you could use the hit-normal from the normal sample set rather than claps here.
02:34:739 (1,2,3,4) - Clap Pattern once again.
02:42:585 (1,2) - Use claps only on the start of the sliders, you can fill the ends with whistles or hitnormals from normal sample set if you so prefer.
02:44:662 (1,2) - Use finishes on slider start, repeat and end and add an extra repeat with a finish as well which will end up ending on (2) so you should remove that and continue from there, just to match up with the same hitsound and pattern flow with your other diff.
[Unfortunate Promise]Finish the map.
Approach Rate +2 (maybe even +3)
To prevent typing more wall of text, apply the hitsounding patterns i recommended on [Forsaken Promise] here.
01:24:355 (1) - Split into a slider that goes from that point into 01:24:585 and then add a slider from 01:25:047 to 01:25:278 to follow the vocal pattern better without making it weird for new players to follow the rythm.
01:28:739 (1) - End at 01:31:047 and fade it out as well.
01:32:662 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider.
02:27:816 (1) - End at 02:30:355 with a silence.
Ok this map is far from ready, and on a side note avoid making any updates while a MAT/BAT is checking your map, it's annoying :<
Star! 
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