Hey!
[Immortal]
00:11:961 (1,1) - You blanket one part, but you neglect the other part (start of first slider, end of 2nd)
00:24:646 (5) - Not a fan of the 3/2 usage here. 1/1 would be much better
00:30:132 (5,5,4) - ^^
00:39:046 (1) - You use 2 circles in the previous parts, but 1 slider here. Why?
01:06:132 (1,2,3) - Due to the dark color of the objects, (and the fact that a lot of people use BG dim) this is really hard to read. They see a sliderbody, but does it belong to (1) or (3). Please colorhax it a bit to make it a bit brighter
01:27:046 (1,2) - This is completely impossible to read. Black approachcircles and a blackened BG
01:38:019 (1,2) - ^^
04:00:646 (1,2) - ^^
04:11:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The SB's Y coordinate should be moved down by 18 due to how the SB editor's playfield is different compared to the compose editor. Alternatively, you can move all these objects up by 18
06:13:332 - 06:46:246 - Add an extra kiai? It sounds really kiai-like
07:29:789 (8) - I think this works better as 1/2
God this song is terrible
Good Luck!