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__Hatsune_Miku 2016-02-26T06:39:27+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
Loli love from #modreq <3

Notes: I don't really know how to map a proper Easy, so I've only decided to map the Collaboration and SF's Hard. On the other hand, good job on the map.

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Major suggestions
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Collab Normal
00:02:800 (2) - You should make it a straight slider, to make it look a bit nicer. Like this: -> Done
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00:14:800 (2,3) - Fix this blanket. -> Done
00:33:200 (4) - You should copy 00:32:400 (3) - and ctrl+j, then ctrl+g, and then re-position it to your desire. -> Done
01:01:600 (2,3) - Fix this blanket. -> Done

is the order a rabbit?!?! Thank you ~

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-02-26T07:28:17+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
Loli love from #modreq <3

Notes: I don't really know how to map a proper Easy, so I've only decided to map the Collaboration and SF's Hard. On the other hand, good job on the map.

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues

SF's Hard
00:02:000 (1) - You should move this note to coordinates (193, 305). This makes it look better and you are able to blanket the note by using the slider 00:02:400 (2) - .
00:08:800 (2) - Instead of having this kind of slider, just copy 00:09:200 (3) - and rotate 90 degrees, then re-position the slider to make it look diagonally symmetrical.
00:10:400 (2) - Fix this blanket.
00:11:600 (1) - This slider here kind of over laps an element. I'd say make the slider 1/2 and add a 1/1 note at 00:12:000 - . Kind of like this:
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no sound no need
00:12:266 (2,3) - You have some inconsistencies here. It also plays weirdly, since you have a sudden change in pattern. You should use the same pattern as you did before for these song elements. If you do this, you can blanket 00:13:066 (1) - over a note, if possible. Like this:
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but others change pattern, check plx
00:16:266 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
00:24:000 (4) - Fix this blanket. I know 00:24:400 (1) - could overlap 00:23:466 (3) - , but if you can manage, it'll work.
00:27:200 (4,5) - You should make this a reverse slider, since transitioning from a 1/3 slider to a another 1/3 note can play weirdly.
00:27:200 (4,1) - Fix this blanket.
00:31:600 (2) - Instead of making the slider round, just make it straight and go towards slider 00:32:400 (3) - . Something like this:
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[img]00:31:600%20(2,3)%20-[/img]
how?, your modding check plx
00:33:600 (6,7) - Same here, make it a reverse slider.
00:38:800 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
00:42:400 (2) - You should make the slider end 00:42:666 - and add a note 00:42:800 - . Could give a good transition.
i think Match the words, more it is clean
00:43:200 (4,1) - Try blanketing these sliders.
not central blanket
00:52:800 (4,5) - Same thing here, make it a reverse slider.
00:59:200 (4,1) - There is such thing as blanketing a slider too. Make 00:59:600 (1) - blanket over 00:59:200 (4) - , like this:
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01:03:600 (3) - This slider is overlapping some of the song's elements. Make the slider end 01:03:866 - and add a note 01:04:000 - .
Match the words, more it is clean
01:04:400 (2,4) - Fix this blanket. If possible, make 01:04:400 (2) - better, copy it, then rotate -120 degrees, and then re-position the pattern. It'll look better.

01:05:200 (4,5,6) - This will play very awkward. I suggest two things: Make the slider 01:05:200 (4) - end at 01:05:466 - and then add a reverse slider 01:05:600 - here, OR, 01:05:733 (5,6) - change these into a 1/3 slider.
Although awkward hear, i like this pattern
01:08:800 (2,3,4) - Kind of the same here with 01:05:200 (4,5,6) - . You should change 01:08:800 (2,3,4) - into a reverse slider.
same again
01:11:200 (2) - Have the slider end 01:11:466 - and add a note 01:11:600 -
only vocal
01:14:400 (2) - Same thing here with 01:11:200 (2) - .
same again
01:15:600 (1) - You missed some of the song's element here: 01:15:866 - | 01:16:000 - . Try making the slider end 01:15:866 - and add a note 01:16:000 - . Then you can add a note 01:16:266 - .
you have not heard?, tick the notes instead
01:17:066 (1) - Kind of the same thing here with 01:15:600 (1) - . Have the slider end 01:17:466 - and add a note 01:17:600 - .
say again
01:18:800 (1) - Same thing here. Have the slider end 01:19:066 - and add a note 01:19:200 - . Then you can add a note 01:19:466 - .
01:20:266 (1) - Same here with 01:18:800 (1) - and the others.
tick the notes instead
01:24:800 (3) - You should copy slider 01:24:000 (2) - and ctrl+j, then ctrl+g, and re-position it where you desire.
not copy slider, it was ctrl+g, check plx

thanks for modding

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Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags:Sky_Future is the order a rabbit? koi ed ending yuri go chuumon wa usagi desu ka?  inori minase sora tokui gochiusa 水瀬いのり 徳井青空 村川梨衣
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__Hatsune_Miku

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Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-02-26T10:26:22+00:00

Update 2/26

Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2016-02-27T04:49:53+00:00

[SF's Hard]

00:13:600 (2) - Tip: Try to avoid the straight slider, incline it a bit http://puu.sh/nmX76/4da7e67472.jpg It will be more smooth, so improve the flow and it might recall 00:12:400 (3) -
00:16:266 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:22:666 (1,2) - ^
00:27:200 (4,1) - ^
00:38:800 (1,2) - You should reduce volume (maybe even just silence) the end of those sliders.
00:43:600 (1) - I think it would look beter if you place it this way http://puu.sh/nmXfl/6e8581e149.jpg or something
00:52:400 (3) - Remove kiai on this green line, so there's another fountain here 00:53:200 (1) - ?

Cool diff, flow is fun, I think you can improve the esthetic a bit though like blankets 01:13:866 (1,2) - because you didn't make a nice blanket, the head of (2) is actually closer to (1) than is the head of (1) to (2) ... wait might be hard to get my point

What I mean is that it's not balanced and it's visible!

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-02-28T02:00:51+00:00

Yales wrote:
[SF's Hard]

00:13:600 (2) - Tip: Try to avoid the straight slider, incline it a bit http://puu.sh/nmX76/4da7e67472.jpg It will be more smooth, so improve the flow and it might recall 00:12:400 (3) -
00:16:266 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:22:666 (1,2) - ^
00:27:200 (4,1) - ^
00:38:800 (1,2) - You should reduce volume (maybe even just silence) the end of those sliders.
no need set
00:43:600 (1) - I think it would look beter if you place it this way http://puu.sh/nmXfl/6e8581e149.jpg or something
00:52:400 (3) - Remove kiai on this green line, so there's another fountain here 00:53:200 (1) - ?
why? 00:52:400 (3) - volume 40 and 00:53:200 (1) - vollume 60, i think That the volume goes

Cool diff, flow is fun, I think you can improve the esthetic a bit though like blankets 01:13:866 (1,2) - because you didn't make a nice blanket, the head of (2) is actually closer to (1) than is the head of (1) to (2) ... wait might be hard to get my point What I mean is that it's not balanced and it's visible!
01:10:666 (1,2) - and 01:13:866 (1,2) - so special ^^

thanks for modding

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긴영어 고문당했다가 짧은영어 답변하니까 괜찮네

마치 카네키 각성할때 과정에 대한 느낌

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

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Dailycare 2016-02-29T06:41:59+00:00

Sky Future님의 모딩 요청.. 이긴 한데, 노래가 좀 저랑 안맞아서 자세하게 보진 않았어요ㅠㅠ

[SF's Hard]
00:27:600 (1) - 블랭킷 맞추는게 더 좋을법한 슬라이더입니다
00:43:600 (1) - 01:05:200 (4) - ^
01:06:400 (1,2,3) - 이 패턴은 (1)을 각각 반시계 방향으로 120도, 240도 돌려주면 더 멋진 패턴이 될 수 있어요

[Collab Normal]
00:02:000 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보를 풀거나, 아니면 여기부터 다운비트 두 개당 뉴콤보 한 번의 주기로 가시는게 일관성 있어 보이네요. 전 후자를 더 추천합니다.
01:02:400 (3) - DS
01:09:200 - 01:10:000 - 이 두 부분은 서클로 쳐 낼수 있게끔 노트를 찍었으면 더 좋았을 부분이에요. 00:40:400 (3,4) - 나 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - 를 확인해주세요
01:15:200 (3,2) - 오버랩이 되지 않게

[Easy]
전체적으로 이지는 1/1을 많이써서 박자가 단조롭고 촘촘한 느낌이었습니다. 약간의 변화를 곳곳에 주는 것도 좋을지도 모르겠네요

00:24:400 (1,2) - 특별한 이유가 없다면 ctrl+G한 리듬이 더 좋아보여요

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

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Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-02-29T08:04:01+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
Sky Future님의 모딩 요청.. 이긴 한데, 노래가 좀 저랑 안맞아서 자세하게 보진 않았어요ㅠㅠ

[Collab Normal]
00:02:000 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보를 풀거나, 아니면 여기부터 다운비트 두 개당 뉴콤보 한 번의 주기로 가시는게 일관성 있어 보이네요. 전 후자를 더 추천합니다.
01:02:400 (3) - DS -> Done
01:09:200 - 01:10:000 - 이 두 부분은 서클로 쳐 낼수 있게끔 노트를 찍었으면 더 좋았을 부분이에요. 00:40:400 (3,4) - 나 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - 를 확인해주세요 - >다른분 1분이더 바꾸라고 하면 바꿀게요
01:15:200 (3,2) - 오버랩이 되지 않게

[Easy]
전체적으로 이지는 1/1을 많이써서 박자가 단조롭고 촘촘한 느낌이었습니다. 약간의 변화를 곳곳에 주는 것도 좋을지도 모르겠네요

00:24:400 (1,2) - 특별한 이유가 없다면 ctrl+G한 리듬이 더 좋아보여요

모딩감사합니다

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-02-29T08:41:56+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
Sky Future님의 모딩 요청.. 이긴 한데, 노래가 좀 저랑 안맞아서 자세하게 보진 않았어요ㅠㅠ

[SF's Hard]
00:27:600 (1) - 블랭킷 맞추는게 더 좋을법한 슬라이더입니다
00:43:600 (1) - 01:05:200 (4) - ^
01:06:400 (1,2,3) - 이 패턴은 (1)을 각각 반시계 방향으로 120도, 240도 돌려주면 더 멋진 패턴이 될 수 있어요
이것도 충분히 멋진 패턴이라고 저는 생각해요 (이해못했음)

모딩 ㄳ

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Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-03-01T10:53:28+00:00

Sorry for late

Easy
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This song is 1/3 snapping, but you still need to follow the strong beats, just like 00:03:466 - 00:05:200 - etc.
For Easy diff, you are required to map with at least 1/1 spacing.
Please make reference with ranked version: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/406386 and https://osu.ppy.sh/b/405362

00:05:200 - This is a strong beat, it should be avoid with slider beat where strong beat lies, becasue there is a risk for disqualified, ref: p/4694342
00:18:400 (1,2) - For this, as I mentioned above, Easy should be at least 1/1 spacing. I am not sure about it, becasue 1/2 snapped can also appear in Easy diff, if not overused. BUT, for this slider 00:18:400 (1) - , I think it should be ended at 00:19:066 - as the vocal ended at here.
00:20:266 (3) - there is a strong beat at 00:20:800 -, I think the slider should end at 00:20:800 - .
00:39:600 (1) - del nc here. becasue it is Easy diff, suggested to us nc constantly.
00:46:800 - 00:50:000 - skipped strong beat.
00:48:400 (1) - del nc, easy diff suggested to use nc every TWO white tick constantly.
00:52:533 - 00:52:933 - 00:53:066 - del unused green line.
00:59:600 - 01:09:200 - skipped strong beat.
01:12:000 (6,2) - not a good overlapping, please separate this 2

Normal
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00:33:200 (4,2) - It is great if you stack this two.
00:38:800 - this is a strong beat, you should generally avoid using slider end here, but click-able things
00:40:400 (3) - curving more, um.... here is showing the ability for two mappers, really quite different. Mainly about slider curving. Please ask the other mapper how to draw it well. maybe he/she will tell you all about experience.
00:41:200 (4) - curving another side seems look better to me. Will this look better?

SPOILER

00:48:266 (1,1) - stacking them look better.
00:55:600 (2,4) - poor overlapping, please seperate them
01:08:800 - this is a pick up sound, at least you place a clickable item here
01:13:200 (2,3) - stacking them
01:15:200 (3,2) - poor overlapping
01:25:466 - map this sound with 1/3 slider?

Hard
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00:27:200 (4,1) - 00:43:600 (1) - look better with a blanket. Blanketing slider is better in looking for me, but not affect the ranking process..
01:23:200 (1,2,3) - why not use circle? a little bit jump is great here.
This hard diff is nice, it really suits the song as it maps the feeling out.

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-03-04T08:07:12+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:

Sorry for late

Normal
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00:33:200 (4,2) - It is great if you stack this two.

00:38:800 - this is a strong beat, you should generally avoid using slider end here, but click-able things

Hard
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00:27:200 (4,1) - 00:43:600 (1) - look better with a blanket. Blanketing slider is better in looking for me, but not affect the ranking process..

01:23:200 (1,2,3) - why not use circle? a little bit jump is great here.
This hard diff is nice, it really suits the song as it maps the feeling out.

thanks for modding

collab normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Poppin Jump.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 39600
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Poppin Jump
TitleUnicode:ぽっぴんジャンプ♪
Artist:Chimame tai
ArtistUnicode:チマメ隊
Creator:_ Hatsune Miku
Version:Collab Normal
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags:Sky_Future is the order a rabbit? koi ed ending yuri go chuumon wa usagi desu ka?  inori minase sora tokui gochiusa 水瀬いのり 徳井青空 村川梨衣
BeatmapID:884036
BeatmapSetID:403058

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Title:Poppin Jump
TitleUnicode:ぽっぴんジャンプ♪
Artist:Chimame tai
ArtistUnicode:チマメ隊
Creator:_ Hatsune Miku
Version:SF's Hard
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags:Sky_Future is the order a rabbit? koi ed ending yuri go chuumon wa usagi desu ka?  inori minase sora tokui gochiusa 水瀬いのり 徳井青空 村川梨衣
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484,332,48000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,68,56400,6,0,P|424:124|392:228,2,176.000005371094,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,188,57466,2,0,L|332:268,1,58.6666684570313,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,304,58400,2,0,P|112:308|24:376,1,176.000005371094,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,244,59066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,244,59200,2,0,P|56:168|32:132,1,117.333336914063,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,340,60400,2,0,P|244:328|280:302,1,117.333336914063,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,44,65066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,44,65200,2,0,P|326:102|265:179,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,204,65733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,248,65866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,340,68800,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,340,68933,1,0,1:0:0:0:
28,304,69066,1,0,1:0:0:0:
16,252,69200,6,0,P|16:188|96:132,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,70266,2,0,L|184:192,1,53.3333333333333,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,72,70666,6,0,P|128:28|40:44,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,104,71200,2,0,P|158:148|246:132,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,152,73466,2,0,L|276:152,1,53.3333333333333,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,73866,6,0,P|196:288|272:336,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,40,76400,2,0,P|440:48|472:112,1,106.666666666667,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-03-05T10:06:34+00:00

#modreqs attention, here ya go o/

Collab Normal

00:18:800 (2) - Change it or not, changing it to straight slider might be neat
00:22:266 (2) - if this non-blanket is intentional, feel free to ignore this
00:32:400 (1) - = 00:18:800 (2)

No big problem here

Sky Future's Hard

00:07:200 (2) - This blanket is neat, but can be neater than this
00:13:600 (2) - Careful over here. There's an overlap that collide with 00:14:400 (4) -
00:07:200 (2) = 00:07:200 (2) - But feel free to ignore it if you're lazy

Rank please

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-03-05T12:56:44+00:00

님 이거 하드가 랭퀄되기 힘든듯
블랭킷도 대놓고 깨져있고 전반적으로 다 이상함

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-03-06T03:55:44+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Sky Future's Hard
00:07:200 (2) - This blanket is neat, but can be neater than this
00:13:600 (2) - Careful over here. There's an overlap that collide with 00:14:400 (4) -
00:07:200 (2) = 00:07:200 (2) - But feel free to ignore it if you're lazy

Rank please

re check plx

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-06T08:29:15+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
#modreqs attention, here ya go o/

Collab Normal
00:18:800 (2) - Change it or not, changing it to straight slider might be neat
00:22:266 (2) - if this non-blanket is intentional, feel free to ignore this
00:32:400 (1) - = 00:18:800 (2)

Fix all
Rank please

Thank you ~

Last edited by __Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-06T08:29:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-03-06T08:29:39+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
님 이거 하드가 랭퀄되기 힘든듯
블랭킷도 대놓고 깨져있고 전반적으로 다 이상함

맵 괜찮은뎅 ㅋㅋ 스타일 존중해줍시당 랭퀄은되보임 블랭킷은 제가 이상한거 전부 지적해서 ㅋㅋ 패턴은나쁘지않음

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-06T08:38:30+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:

Sorry for late

Normal
[]
00:40:400 (3) - curving more, um.... here is showing the ability for two mappers, really quite different. Mainly about slider curving. Please ask the other mapper how to draw it well. maybe he/she will tell you all about experience. ->Done
00:41:200 (4) - curving another side seems look better to me. Will this look better? ->Done
SPOILER
00:48:266 (1,1) - stacking them look better. ->Done
00:55:600 (2,4) - poor overlapping, please seperate them
01:08:800 - this is a pick up sound, at least you place a clickable item here
01:13:200 (2,3) - stacking them
01:15:200 (3,2) - poor overlapping ->Done
01:25:466 - map this sound with 1/3 slider? ->Done

This hard diff is nice, it really suits the song as it maps the feeling out.

Thank you !

Luel Roseline

1,034 posts

Joined February 2014

Luel Roseline 2016-03-07T12:51:14+00:00

모딩 자체를 한 지 오래되가지고 정확하지 않을 수 있습니다.
참고로 최첨단 형식으로 한 건 안비밀

[Normal]
00:32:000 (2,1) 움직임이 약간 부자연스럽네요.

안본 사이에 실력이 팍 올라갔네요.

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-11T13:07:39+00:00

S A V E R Y wrote:
모딩 자체를 한 지 오래되가지고 정확하지 않을 수 있습니다.
참고로 최첨단 형식으로 한 건 안비밀

[Normal]
00:32:000 (2,1) 움직임이 약간 부자연스럽네요. -> 이대로가 괜찬은거 같습니다!

안본 사이에 실력이 팍 올라갔네요.

ㅎㅎ 모딩감사합니다

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-11T13:08:45+00:00

No longer Sk'sHard & Collab-Normal On My Mapset (Removed)

I Don't Need Any GD Now
Ignore SF Mod

Need More Mod. Thank you

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-13T01:16:08+00:00

Hi , from #modreq M4M

General

BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓ , but check for normal.
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓ , there 2 are ranked maps with different metadata , but I think the one you have now (no -tv size-) is correct. Source
Hitsound : ✓ , good
Video : -

Normal

First thing I noticed , distance spacing should be strictly followed in Normal. Right now.
Some ^ doesn't make sense , so I will list them. 00:07:600 (2) , 00:19:466 (1) , 00:24:000 (1) ..
From the start of the song to 00:27:600 (1) , your rhythm is really weird. But from 00:27:600 (1) , it is really good , what happened?
00:22:800 (5) - If you're mapping to 1/3 , you missed an important beat at 00:22:666 .
00:26:000 (5) - Similarly , you missed an important beat at 00:25:866 and 00:26:666 .
From here it's good.

Hard

00:14:400 (4) - Don't curve this too much , maybe something like this is good enough , and flows well too.
00:18:400 (2,3,4) - They are too close even though you're following DS , try something like this.
00:24:400 (1) - Shift this slider up a bit , it's touching 00:23:466 (3) slightly.
00:31:600 (2) - Why not just ctrl-c + ctrl-v 00:30:800 (1) , and ctrl-j + ctrl-h.
00:33:066 (4,5) - You didn't stack this , but you did for other similar rhythms. (00:07:600 (3,4) , 00:10:800 (3,4) , etc) Consider stacking for consistency.
01:14:400 (2) - Unnecessary NC.

Overall

Besides fixing rhythm in Normal , this map is pretty good itself. Good luck to you!!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-03-13T01:27:57+00:00

NM time

[Normal]
00:06:666 (1,2,3) - Make the angle of 2 face towards 00:08:400 (4) and fix the overlap of 1,3

SPOILER

00:12:666 (4) - Should be the same slider as 00:12:000 (3) just rotated accordingly
00:18:400 (6,7,1) - Spacing. 7 should be closer to 1
00:22:800 (5) - Should start at 00:22:666
00:25:866 (5,6) - Extend these sliders by 1/3 beat and make them start 1/3 beat earlier

SPOILER

00:48:266 (1) - Should be same as 00:47:466 (2) just CTRL + H + J
01:25:866 (1) - Spinners need to be a NC

[Hard]
00:23:466 (3) - Move the top point of the slider down 1 in the grid so it isn't touching 00:24:400 (1)
00:28:400 (3) - This blanket needs work
00:31:600 (2) - Make this slider the same as 00:30:800 (1) just with CTRL + H + G
00:33:066 (4,5) - Stack
00:34:800 (3,4) - Blanket?
00:42:400 (2) - Make it the same as 00:41:866 (1) just rotate -90
00:46:266 (4,5) - Stack
00:46:800 (1) - The clap should be at the end of the slider not the start

[Overall]
Such a cool map! Really clean and neat I love it

Great hitsounds too

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-13T11:12:55+00:00

Chocox wrote:
Hi , from #modreq M4M

General
BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓ , but check for normal.
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓ , there 2 are ranked maps with different metadata , but I think the one you have now (no -tv size-) is correct. Source
Hitsound : ✓ , good
Video : -

Normal
First thing I noticed , distance spacing should be strictly followed in Normal. Right now.
Some ^ doesn't make sense , so I will list them. 00:07:600 (2) , 00:19:466 (1) , 00:24:000 (1) .. -> Fixed
From the start of the song to 00:27:600 (1) , your rhythm is really weird. But from 00:27:600 (1) , it is really good , what happened?
00:22:800 (5) - If you're mapping to 1/3 , you missed an important beat at 00:22:666 .-> Fixed
00:26:000 (5) - Similarly , you missed an important beat at 00:25:866 and 00:26:666 . -> Fixed
From here it's good.

Hard
00:14:400 (4) - Don't curve this too much , maybe something like this is good enough , and flows well too.-> Fixed
00:18:400 (2,3,4) - They are too close even though you're following DS , try something like this.-> Fixed
00:24:400 (1) - Shift this slider up a bit , it's touching 00:23:466 (3) slightly. -> Move up bit
00:31:600 (2) - Why not just ctrl-c + ctrl-v 00:30:800 (1) , and ctrl-j + ctrl-h.-> Fixed
00:33:066 (4,5) - You didn't stack this , but you did for other similar rhythms. (00:07:600 (3,4) , 00:10:800 (3,4) , etc) Consider stacking for consistency.
01:14:400 (2) - Unnecessary NC. ].-> Fixed/*:m:1337]

Overall
Besides fixing rhythm in Normal , this map is pretty good itself. Good luck to you!!

Thank you so much !!

Wishkey

774 posts

Joined September 2011

Wishkey 2016-03-13T17:43:42+00:00

Heya from my Q

Cool map, cute song

Normal

-00:02:400 (1) - would makes this a little less curvy doesn't look that good imo
-00:07:600 (2) - since its the only kickslider of this kind you have in the diff I'd just replace it with a normal slider instead
-00:40:400 (1) - you can maybe make some of these into 2 circles instead because it is the kiai so a bit harder would be normal
-01:15:600 (1,2) -

this rythm suits it a bit better

Hard

-AR7 might be better here only 2.5 stars and very readible map
-00:07:600 (3,4) - switch places, you want 4 to be clickable here
-00:09:866 (1,2) - same spacing for the double blanket here
-00:10:800 (3,4) - same as 00:07:600 (3,4)
-00:50:800 (3) - blanket can be improved here
-01:15:600 (1,2,3) - maybe this rythm instead because the trumpet you're following ends a note sooner

-01:23:200 (1,2) - Cntrl + g these so you got it downwards and upwards with the music

GL on ranked!

teko8

108 posts

Joined July 2012

teko8 2016-03-14T05:59:38+00:00

From my NM modding queue.

General Modding

Normal:

Check AiMod for distance snaps. Usually Normals have all their objects distance snapped (especially for combo).
00:05:600 (6) - NC here.
00:06:666 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:08:400 (4) - NC here.
00:18:400 (6) - NC here.
00:19:200 (7) - I would move this to 00:19:066 - .
00:19:466 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:21:066 (3) - NC here.
00:22:666 (5) - NC here.
00:24:000 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:24:400 (2) - NC here.
01:25:466 (1) - Apply Drum sampleset (hitsounding).
NC changes: Done to increase the # of combos in the map (for a Normal, you generally want more combos). These changes also take into account at what time in the song it would make the most sense. Though that's up to you to decide

Hard:

00:29:200 (4) - NC here.
00:30:800 (7) - Remove NC here.
00:33:200 (5) - Maybe NC here, not sure though.
00:46:266 (4) - This is the only beat that's not directly on top of a slider. Should move it so that it is.
01:14:400 (1) - Remove NC here.

Other Possible Changes

Normal:

00:39:600 (5) - NC here?

All difficulties:

Kiai Timing:
00:51:600 - Split the kiai here and start it again at 00:53:200 - .

Good luck on getting it ranked~

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-15T10:32:23+00:00

teko8 wrote:
From my NM modding queue.

General Modding
Normal:
Check AiMod for distance snaps. Usually Normals have all their objects distance snapped (especially for combo).
00:05:600 (6) - NC here.
00:06:666 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:08:400 (4) - NC here.
00:18:400 (6) - NC here.
00:19:200 (7) - I would move this to 00:19:066 - .->Fix
00:19:466 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:21:066 (3) - NC here.
00:22:666 (5) - NC here.
00:24:000 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:24:400 (2) - NC here.
01:25:466 (1) - Apply Drum sampleset (hitsounding).->Done
NC changes: Done to increase the # of combos in the map (for a Normal, you generally want more combos). These changes also take into account at what time in the song it would make the most sense. Though that's up to you to decide -> Some one say 'use 2beat down combo' so i ask him to how can i use NC
Hard:
00:29:200 (4) - NC here.
00:30:800 (7) - Remove NC here.
00:33:200 (5) - Maybe NC here, not sure though.
00:46:266 (4) - This is the only beat that's not directly on top of a slider. Should move it so that it is.->Move
01:14:400 (1) - Remove NC here.

Other Possible Changes
Normal:
00:39:600 (5) - NC here?
All difficulties:
Kiai Timing:
00:51:600 - Split the kiai here and start it again at 00:53:200 - .->Done

Good luck on getting it ranked~

Thank you so Much

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-15T10:40:12+00:00

Pentori wrote:
NM time

[Normal]
00:06:666 (1,2,3) - Make the angle of 2 face towards 00:08:400 (4) and fix the overlap of 1,3 ->Fix
SPOILER
00:12:666 (4) - Should be the same slider as 00:12:000 (3) just rotated accordingly
00:18:400 (6,7,1) - Spacing. 7 should be closer to 1
00:22:800 (5) - Should start at 00:22:666
00:25:866 (5,6) - Extend these sliders by 1/3 beat and make them start 1/3 beat earlier -> [b]is Good but ,More thoughts and i[ Fix/b]
SPOILER
00:48:266 (1) - Should be same as 00:47:466 (2) just CTRL + H + J
01:25:866 (1) - Spinners need to be a NC -> Done

[Hard]
00:23:466 (3) - Move the top point of the slider down 1 in the grid so it isn't touching 00:24:400 (1)->Fix
00:28:400 (3) - This blanket needs work->Fix
00:31:600 (2) - Make this slider the same as 00:30:800 (1) just with CTRL + H + G
00:33:066 (4,5) - Stack
00:34:800 (3,4) - Blanket?->Fix
00:42:400 (2) - Make it the same as 00:41:866 (1) just rotate -90
00:46:266 (4,5) - Stack
00:46:800 (1) - The clap should be at the end of the slider not the start->Done

[Overall]
Such a cool map! Really clean and neat I love it Great hitsounds too

Thank you so Much mod my map ~

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-16T10:36:28+00:00

Wishkey wrote:
Heya from my Q

Cool map, cute song

Normal

-00:02:400 (1) - would makes this a little less curvy doesn't look that good imo
-00:07:600 (2) - since its the only kickslider of this kind you have in the diff I'd just replace it with a normal slider instead
-00:40:400 (1) - you can maybe make some of these into 2 circles instead because it is the kiai so a bit harder would be normal
-01:15:600 (1,2) - >Fix

this rythm suits it a bit better

Hard

-AR7 might be better here only 2.5 stars and very readible map >Done
-00:07:600 (3,4) - switch places, you want 4 to be clickable here
-00:09:866 (1,2) - same spacing for the double blanket here >Fix
-00:10:800 (3,4) - same as 00:07:600 (3,4)
-00:50:800 (3) - blanket can be improved here >Fix
-01:15:600 (1,2,3) - maybe this rythm instead because the trumpet you're following ends a note sooner
-01:23:200 (1,2) - Cntrl + g these so you got it downwards and upwards with the music >Fix

GL on ranked!

Thank you so much

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-16T10:41:10+00:00

Update all 3/16 2016

TheLeviathan

271 posts

Joined December 2014

TheLeviathan 2016-03-19T09:29:22+00:00

From my modding queue

INSANE

00:08:400 (1, 2, 3) - i personaly don't like how 1st note too high distance gaped from to, i would recommend to make spacing like it is inbetween 2 and 3 , maybe move to X:129 Y:295
00:11:600 (1) - make this

SPOILER

spacing equal
00:25:466 (4) - same here

SPOILER

00:28:266 (2, 3) - so here look, 2 is overlaping the slider, like on 00:29:066 (4) - does, but then 00:29:866 (2) - have spacing, so i would recommend change 00:29:066 (4) - to this

SPOILER

HARD

00:39:600 (3) - move to X:386 Y:267
00:46:266 (4) - it's the only time in the map where you overlap like this, consider stacking it with begin of the slider like all the other pattern of the map

NORMAL

00:21:066 (3) - and like on previous difficulty, on this one you have only this part when you stacked two notes, maybe just move it to overlap slader start point like

SPOILER

and that's it from me, good luck further

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-25T10:24:26+00:00

TheLeviathan wrote:
From my modding queue

HARD

00:39:600 (3) - move to X:386 Y:267->Fix
00:46:266 (4) - it's the only time in the map where you overlap like this, consider stacking it with begin of the slider like all the other pattern of the map

NORMAL

00:21:066 (3) - and like on previous difficulty, on this one you have only this part when you stacked two notes, maybe just move it to overlap slader start point like ->Fix
SPOILER

and that's it from me, good luck further

Sorry for delay,,, Thanks for mod

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

burstlimit2 2016-03-27T07:23:29+00:00

INSANE diff:
First of all, ar7 looks unreadable. Think about ar8
Second, sliders are slower than the rhythm. Change overall slider velocity to 1.70

sorciere

147 posts

Joined April 2013

sorciere 2016-03-28T14:30:25+00:00

ohello

Normal

00:09:866 (8) - The rhythm of the slider do capture the lyrics except one at 00:10:400 , which also has a strong beat on it. I feel like this works better (look at the rhythm, not the pattern!).
00:12:000 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is also super weird, like, there is a sudden change from lyrics to instrumentals to lyrics again (1&2 -> 3 -> 4) and I don't hear anything at the start of slider 5. I'd recommend you to follow the lyrics by shortening slider 3 till 00:12:266 and change slider 5 to a 1/1 slider from 00:13:600 to 00:14:000 .
00:21:066 (3) - Ehhh why is the spacing smaller now?
00:26:666 (6,7) - I don't think there's sound where the start of slider 7 is. Maybe just 1 slider for this entire part should feel better.
00:35:600 (3) - I hear a strong beat at 00:35:466 , perhaps have this slider start from there instead.

Hard

00:38:800 (1,2,3) - Gah slider 2 not blanketing 1 makes this pattern so messy.
00:54:266 (2) - If you want to make the jump this far at least have this slider point to the next one, not pointing it downwards to nowhere.

Gameplay-wise, this is solid, like it's just pure, simple fun. That's why I didn't find many problems about it.

Insane

00:11:600 (1,2,3) - The jump is significant enough from 2 to 3 that it's hard to understand the rhythm change, that is 1/1 (1 -> 2) to 2/3 (2 -> 3). Hence, I propose this pattern (or something else similar, the important change is the slider) to both make the pattern more simpler to read and to capture the sound at 00:11:866 .
00:13:066 (5,6,7,8,9) - How to clean up the pattern with cool, simple blankets.
00:22:266 (2,3) - A little too close to each other aren't they?
00:35:466 (5) - Hmm, is this a good place to NC?
00:52:400 (8) - Yo you made the rhythm so much more complex in Hard than in Insane, and that's the easier difficulty.. please do consider adding streams or something that's 1/3 rhythm. (applies to some other parts too)
01:02:400 (5,6) - I feel like you should either make all these 3 beats clickable or just have 1 reverse 1/3 sliders there due to the beats being the same hitsound. Current pattern just feels weird to me.
01:04:666 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This kickslider pattern is a killer jump pattern and cursor movement to do them right feels so awful to me. I feel like just a simple back and forth pattern, like this, should do.
01:06:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh yeah, these jumps aren't really 3.4 star level jumps really, try to reduce the distance a little more.
01:09:200 (1,2,3) - Maybe space them out more, the overlap is pretty distracting.
01:13:600 (4) - Having this circle up when the slider is pointing downwards doesn't make sense to me, perhaps move it to where the slider end of 2 is.

I quite liked how you made the patterns feel like jumps despite them usually following a specific distance spacing. Good luck!

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-03-29T11:07:53+00:00

copy hard diff plz remove that ^^
if don't want i'll report u

this mapper copy SF' hard http://puu.sh/nY7La/fd29de7d44.osz this
pls ignore _ Hatsune Miku
카피 하지말라고 몇번을 말했는데 이럼 ㅋ 이제 이맵은 매핑할 생각마셈

Last edited by Moa 2016-03-30T10:35:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-03-29T15:31:12+00:00

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
No longer Sk'sHard & Collab-Normal On My Mapset (Removed)

I Don't Need Any GD Now
Ignore SF Mod

Need More Mod. Thank you

이전에 스카이퓨처님이 올린 SF's Hard 긁어서 넣기만 해도 아예 동일한 비트맵인데, 정말로 삭제하신것 맞나요?
겟난 매퍼의 요청으로 겟난을 삭제하시는 것은 맵 전체를 삭제하는 거지, 겟난 매퍼의 이름만 삭제하는게 아닙니다.

합의하에 겟난을 삭제하기로 결정하신거라면 하드를 삭제하고 새로이 매핑을 하시거나, 매퍼분과 다시 상의해서 겟난의 형태로 넣어주시기 바랍니다. 하드 난이도의 제작자는 하츠네미쿠님이 아니십니다.

__Hatsune_Miku

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Topic Starter

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-30T12:08:14+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
No longer Sk'sHard & Collab-Normal On My Mapset (Removed)

I Don't Need Any GD Now
Ignore SF Mod

Need More Mod. Thank you
이전에 스카이퓨처님이 올린 SF's Hard 긁어서 넣기만 해도 아예 동일한 비트맵인데, 정말로 삭제하신것 맞나요?
겟난 매퍼의 요청으로 겟난을 삭제하시는 것은 맵 전체를 삭제하는 거지, 겟난 매퍼의 이름만 삭제하는게 아닙니다.

합의하에 겟난을 삭제하기로 결정하신거라면 하드를 삭제하고 새로이 매핑을 하시거나, 매퍼분과 다시 상의해서 겟난의 형태로 넣어주시기 바랍니다. 하드 난이도의 제작자는 하츠네미쿠님이 아니십니다.

Okay, I'm so Sorry about That. Sorry for the inconvenience my demerit.

Remove Hard Diif

__Hatsune_Miku

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__Hatsune_Miku 2016-03-30T12:11:32+00:00

Moa wrote:
copy hard diff plz remove that ^^
if don't want i'll report u

this mapper copy SF' hard http://puu.sh/nY7La/fd29de7d44.osz this
pls ignore _ Hatsune Miku
카피 하지말라고 몇번을 말했는데 이럼 ㅋ 이제 이맵은 매핑할 생각마셈

I never heard what you saying. SF say about that. So , Okay i never mapping this shit againg

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