1. Episode 1 (2.68 stars, 189 notes)
2. Episode 3 (4.55 stars, 309 notes)
3. Episode 5 (5 stars, 520 notes)

Lanttu wrote:

BPM is too fast, you should change the it from 140.02 to 140, and then resnap all notes and timing sections. Though I'm not sure about the very first bpm you have there. The first 13 seconds have a different BPM rate than the rest of the song.

00:50:236 (3,4,1,2,3) - I don't like how these notes overlap eachother, doesn't look very pretty and it isn't very comfortable to play either. Try to come up with something else? I'll figure something out.

I think you should use your new combos more like in a way that fits the music and not only the patterns. But anyways, these are just my opinions, feel free to ignore.
MASSIVE COMBO MODDING, GOOOO~ orz
00:55:814 (1) - Delete new combo
00:56:671 (7) - New combo
00:57:528 (1) - Delete new combo
00:58:385 (6) - New combo
00:59:242 (1) - Delete new combo
01:02:670 (1) - ^
01:03:526 (8) - New combo
01:04:168 (1) - Delete new combo
01:05:241 (8) - New combo
01:06:741 (1) - Delete new combo
01:07:812 (11) - New combo
01:12:096 (7) - ^
01:12:954 (1) - Delete new combo
01:16:381 (1) - ^

02:15:087 (1) - Ooooh, I like this slider~ :3

02:18:086 (1) - Delete new combo
02:21:515 (1) - ^
02:24:943 (1) - ^
02:28:371 (1) - ^
02:31:799 (1) - ^
02:35:227 (1) - ^ ..Well yeah, I think that this way goes during all this kiai.
02:56:652 (3) - New combo
03:35:647 (1) - Delete new combo
03:47:645 (1) - Delete new combo and add it to the next note
04:01:357 (7) - Flip this horizontaly
04:32:639 (4) - New combo
04:52:993 (8) - Slider nazi, move the end one grid up
04:54:064 (9) - New combo
05:45:485 (1) - New comb-- Yeah this combo thing again, just like above.
06:13:767 (1,2) - This is very unreadable, please move these some other way. ;_;Yeah, I felt so too, it was just a placeholder. Forgot to fix it.

Other than that it was pretty good, hit me when you get this to pending and I'll give you a star~ :3

Weezy wrote:

Don't have the attention snap to mod the whole song >.< but I do like it

General: For the skin, it's hard to see the numbers on the beats I'm working on fixing this, it's a known skin issue.

01:21:737 (8,9): Aling it with (7) looks better to me. I like it the way it is~
01:24:737 (6): This slider isn't the same as the next 2, align them up Done.
01:39:949 (1): move this to 1:40:163 This is an intended pattern.
01:50:019: Add a breakI'll debate doing this. I think part of the difficulty comes with the fact that there are these "draining" moments where you can't keep your HP up and you can see your doom coming at you if you don't do well enough previously. For now, there's breaks whenever this pattern comes up.
01:53:876: ^^
05:17:204 (1): remove and put a spinner?I'd really like to keep away from spinners, sorry. Besides, to keep with the pattern I'd need to put more than 1 spinner over the course of the map...

James2250 wrote:

-Did you intend to have all the selections mods in the folder and why? Would also be nice if 300g 300k etc looked different from each other more but ok
-I agree make 2nd bpm 140.000 and I get around 13,793 approx for the offset (not sure how close first timing section is
-If you have a section fail include a section pass - even though no breaks use it at the moment These will be included as part of the normal difficulties (which will have breaks).
-Do you need star in folder? It's the same as the default one and just effects the stars outside the map Mistake; my bad. Removing.
-Don't have 3 osb files in folder (1 is allowed) Seems because of name change Right. Done.
-You don't need 07th expansion in tags as its in the artist Forgot to remove them when I switched the artist from zts to 07th.
-Why no 50 in "hit50"? Because.
-Remove countdown Done.

Bernkastel's Marathon:
-I don't follow combos some of the time but not in the mood for a combo mod atm~
-I am guessing you know you have to add alot more hitsounds These are in progress.
-If this is going to be the hardest difficulty going for approval you are going to need to make it slightly more interesting in my opinion. I never thought I would say it but might be nice if you added some more jumps where they fit/ more streams/ some more pattens etc. I was trying to avoid it, but I can certainly ramp up the difficulty. The plan is to have 3 regular difficulties (Normal/Hard/Insane) as rankables, this being the only approved one.
-Resnap all notes (check AIMod)
02:15:087 (1) - I would change the shape of this it could be confusing the first time playing I'm leaving this. It looks nice and is shaped in such a way that I think it's obvious it's not going to be a fast slider.
02:44:648 (1,2,1,2) - watch your spacing on stuff like this Ack, totally forgot about that bit. Them's the downsides of a 7 minute map, checking the whole thing is a bitch.

The map isn't bad but it sticks to distance snap too much at the moment, you could make it much more exciting during kiai especially with this type of song. Once again; I'll ramp up the difficulty of things during kiai.

Needs to become more active before I can star this sorry~

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Episode 5:
00:20:650 (1) - I don't think this is very well as 2.0... keep as 1.0? Changed&Shortened
00:59:863 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Space these a bit better? Theyre really clustered when playing. Moved around.
01:23:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ Same, looks like 1 big stream with dumb spacing instead of 3 seperate stacksChanged.
01:39:721 - Keep as 1.0 here? Changed.
01:47:007 - Remove this break. There isn't one...At least; there shouldn't be.
02:17:221 - Put the kiai timing here, it doesnt start on the measure as it should (or?) Changed, was a few MS off somehow.
02:46:364 (3,4,5,6,7) - Wouldn't do this, its practically unreadable imo. I'll think about this. It's very hard to read; but such was the intention.
02:56:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - All i have to say is wtf lol. I'd redo this somehow. And dont rape me with claps D: Yeah, this is just to be mean. I'll probably change it before some serious rank-searching.

other stuff was technically fine. Though, could do some rework in terms of patterns or slider. Some of the sliders seem half-done, they could look nicer imo. Also, your combos seems kinda random, IDK if you want to look at them a bit more, but combo moding is gay so ill leave you to that.

• There are the unused mod-selection buttons from the skin, please remove them.
  The images you used for the BG have different resolution, i think it's better for you to use the same for them all (and to recompress them to JPG because some are over 1MB and that's a waste)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:54:078 (1) - i thought this was going to be silent.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:22:364 (1,2,3) - really inconsistent spacing for such a "regular" map.
  01:44:650 (3,4,5,6,7) - the stack here looks ugly while playing, move them down-right a bit?

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:27:078 (1) - i think this is ok, i just hope you won't get yelled at. (this for every diff)
  01:26:650 (1,2) - i was like "hey inconsistent spacing, but actually the approach circles make it easy to read. Just letting you know btw.
  01:54:078 (1) - i thought this was going to be silent.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:41:221 (4) - new combo; 00:42:078 (1) - remove new combo
  00:59:864 (5) - hidden by the hitburst (have it face the other way and it will be much better)
  02:52:792 (3) - move 1 square to the right (nazi, but it's really noticeable while playing)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:01:578 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit weird, but not so noticeable.
  01:07:149 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - why would you do that? ç_ç There are quite a lot of things like these, i suppose it's your own intention so i won't bring them up anymore.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:59:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - i don't like this... it seems out of place because it suddently becomes crowded
  01:23:863 (5) - add new combo; 01:23:434 (1) - remove new combo
  01:31:364 (1,5) - make these match the pattern?
  02:56:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - i think that a 1/4 stream is better here.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  01:23:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - sorry, but these no. The others are playable and actually pretty fun after you get used to them (and they're quite intuitive thanks to the approach circles, i should say), but the spacing (especially between 01:23:434 (1,2,3,4) and 01:23:863 (5,6,7,8)) is totally misunderstandable for a continuous 1/4 stream. Please make all three stacks a bit more spaced like the rest of the map, the approach circles are not reliable enough in this case.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Uh, the first 4 sliders are on "nothing", i don't know if they're alright...
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:59:864 (5) - 01:13:578 (4) - same as Episode 3
  01:41:650 (5) - move 1 square to the right (again, nazi but really noticeable)
  02:52:792 (3) - move 1 square down (again, nazi but really noticeable)
  02:04:792 (4,5) - quite misreadable for a 1/2 spacing
  02:43:364 (2) - why the random whistle?
  03:54:078 (7) - please make this one end at the white (preferred) or the red line, it sounds and plays better that way.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• There are the unused mod-selection buttons from the skin, please remove them.
  The images you used for the BG have different resolution, i think it's better for you to use the same for them all (and to recompress them to JPG because some are over 1MB and that's a waste) I could have fucking sworn I deleted the unused backgrounds.

- Episode 1:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:54:078 (1) - i thought this was going to be silent. Extended the silent timing section.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:22:364 (1,2,3) - really inconsistent spacing for such a "regular" map.
  01:44:650 (3,4,5,6,7) - the stack here looks ugly while playing, move them down-right a bit?

Every suggestion followed.

- Episode 3:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:27:078 (1) - i think this is ok, i just hope you won't get yelled at. (this for every diff) I've checked with several mats, they all agreed that it's fine.
  01:26:650 (1,2) - i was like "hey inconsistent spacing, but actually the approach circles make it easy to read. Just letting you know btw. The spacing is intended
  01:54:078 (1) - i thought this was going to be silent. seems like I forgot to extend the silence.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:41:221 (4) - new combo; 00:42:078 (1) - remove new combo
  00:59:864 (5) - hidden by the hitburst (have it face the other way and it will be much better) Fixed; I never use hitburst while I play personally so this was an oversight.
  02:52:792 (3) - move 1 square to the right (nazi, but it's really noticeable while playing)Done.

- Episode 5:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:01:578 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit weird, but not so noticeable. Mentioned by Yeahx3, also moved around a bit.
  01:07:149 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - why would you do that? ç_ç There are quite a lot of things like these, i suppose it's your own intention so i won't bring them up anymore. I don't follow you =D
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:59:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - i don't like this... it seems out of place because it suddently becomes crowded Mentioned by yeahx3, also fixed.
  01:23:863 (5) - add new combo; 01:23:434 (1) - remove new combo
  01:31:364 (1,5) - make these match the pattern? Done.
  02:56:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - i think that a 1/4 stream is better here. You're the first to not complain about the claps; hah. I'm planning on redoing that entire part, regardless.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  01:23:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - sorry, but these no. The others are playable and actually pretty fun after you get used to them (and they're quite intuitive thanks to the approach circles, i should say), but the spacing (especially between 01:23:434 (1,2,3,4) and 01:23:863 (5,6,7,8)) is totally misunderstandable for a continuous 1/4 stream. Please make all three stacks a bit more spaced like the rest of the map, the approach circles are not reliable enough in this case. This was pointed out by yeahx3, and was (hopefully) fixed to satisfaction.

- Bernkastel's Marathon:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Uh, the first 4 sliders are on "nothing", i don't know if they're alright... Dunno, don't care. I like 'em, and it'll need a BAT to say otherwise for me to remove them.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:59:864 (5) - 01:13:578 (4) - same as Episode 3 Done.
  01:41:650 (5) - move 1 square to the right (again, nazi but really noticeable) Done.
  02:52:792 (3) - move 1 square down (again, nazi but really noticeable) Done.
  02:04:792 (4,5) - quite misreadable for a 1/2 spacing This is staying.
  02:43:364 (2) - why the random whistle? Leftover from a bugged hitsound. Fixed.
  03:54:078 (7) - please make this one end at the white (preferred) or the red line, it sounds and plays better that way. Changed and moved to fit new spacing.

Let's say this needs some "Manteinance" but it's a good work.
Consider this starred after fixes are applied (especially those about unused elements/uncompressed BGs)

EDIT: since me and yeahyeahyeahhh modded this at the same time, something may be "repeated"

Sunny Holic wrote:

[General]
selection-mod-autoplay.png
selection-mod-doubletime.png
selection-mod-easy.png
selection-mod-flashlight.png
selection-mod-halftime.png
selection-mod-hardrock.png
selection-mod-hidden.png
selection-mod-nofail.png
selection-mod-novideo.png
selection-mod-relax.png
selection-mod-relax2.png
selection-mod-spunout.png
selection-mod-suddendeath.png
~what these files for? When you select these mods and play, they show up instead of the default icons. They shouldn't be there; I deleted them...


[Episode 1]
-combo check-
01:44:650 (3) - new combo(because of distance change) Done.
-note placement check(nazi)-
00:51:078 (4) - 1 gird right? Done.

[Episode 3]
-combo check-
fine
-note placement check(nazi)-
00:33:293 (3) - 1 grid right and _
00:33:721 (4) - 1 grid up and _
00:34:150 (5) - 2 grid up
01:26:650 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 tick right. (in 1/1 beat snap divisor)
All of these done.

[Episode 5]
-combo check-
01:28:364 (2) - new combo
01:44:650 (4) - ^
02:27:507 (7) - ^
Done.
-note placement check(nazi)-
00:24:721 (3,4,5) - 1 grid left Actually moved 5 one grid right. Still works.
00:58:577 (2) - reverse (ctrl+r) and use 0.0x distance snap to stack better and reverse back Reversing does some real weird shit to it, but I was able to get it working.
00:59:220 (3) - ^ Done
00:59:650 (4) - 1 grid up Done.

James2250 wrote:

Delete selection mods in folder (I thought you already did but maybe forgot?)
All the maps could use some more hitsounds in my opinion, add some claps or something? I'm working on it. I generally suck at hitsounds..
Do you need both JPEG and PNG version of bg in folder? Yes. Discussed in IRC.
Remove audio lead-in? (for the ranked ones) Done.

Episode 1:
Don't follow new combos some of the time...will do quick modding of it but not much (mostly up to you)
I would prefer a lower slider velovity for the easiest difficulty I'll work on that.
00:27:935 (2) - new combo Done.
01:00:935 (1,2) - all of the combos around here would look better starting on the first beat of the measure (big white tick) - same for almost all the map Done.
01:29:650 (4) - would sound alot better if the repeat was on 01:30:935 (then you could add a note after the slider) Done.

Episode 3:
(combo's would still work better focusing around main beat of the song)
00:51:293 (5) - add note? Done.
01:26:650 (1,2,3) - spacing Intended. 1 is seperated enough on the timeline that by the time 2 shows up, 1 will have disappeared.

Episode 5:
I like the hitsounds at the start, make the rest of the map have stuff like that~ I gotta brainstorm this.
Resnap all notes (check AIMod) Fuck you, BSS. Fuck you. You make my maps have the strangest bugs...
HP -1? It's pretty hard as it is Done.
01:01:578 (1,2,3,4) - spacing Fixed
01:08:864 (4,1) - bad anti jump Fixed.
01:09:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing Intended.
01:14:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Intended.
01:23:221 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - ^ Intended.
01:32:650 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal Fixed.
02:29:864 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Fixed.
I don't mind the jumps (well I do but they can stay) but keep spacing consistent in general. Go through and double check some stuff (I expect I didn't list them all)

You basically know my opinions on the marathon so
Star'ed

Jeffro wrote:

[Episode 1]
00:40:364 (3,4) - Perhaps you could break the spacing rule once to get this symmetrical? Done.
01:29:650 (4) - ^ Done.

[Bernkastel's Marathon]
01:35:221 (9) - Not symmetrical It is now.
02:15:078 (1) - Not really nice looking and it COULD be unrankable. It isn't rankable. It's approvable; though. I've talked with several bats and they agreed once I argued my point - even if you can't tell which way to go, it doesn't matter since the circle will still cover your mouse if you go straight up, and it's slow enough that someone who remembers this very unique slider (Say, someone who would be doing this difficulty with hard rock - EXTREMELY UNRECOMMENDED) would pass it with ease.
03:18:292 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move one pixel to the right? Done.

Rest is fine.

ErufenRito wrote:

SB:

Mind telling me what are the exact reasons for using both versions of bg? The vibration uses the smaller BG size.
The effects are not exactly on time. You should consider fixing it. Also try split the loop in 2. Seeing at the number of loops it have and depending on the timing, they could add up making the effects go off by 40 ms, and thats quite a lot. :T
Oh and also consider doing a fade in of the purple crystals. Seeing them appearing so drastically doesn't look so pretty. I'll work on that.

I really fail to see what the hell is bg.png is doing in the sb. Only moving a 2-5 pixels every once in a while, it's not like everybody is going to notice it. Hurp.

Also seeing as the sb is the same in all your difficulties, why not add the sb to the .osb file instead of each difficulty? It was in the first difficulty and move to each difficulty after. I can certainly move it to the .osb.

You're not using the following file:
crystalsColorblue.png
crystals.png

You should consider deleting them. They should be gone. I've deleted them before.

Remember that any changes to .osb file and files deletion requires a full submit. So if youre following my suggestions remember to do a full submit. I've done six since then.

Episode 5:

01:32:650 (1,2) - What the hell with them. At least shorten 01:32:650 (1,2) - so it ends at 01:33:078 - Sorry; this must have escaped people's attention. Fixed.
02:46:364 (3,4) - Probably unrankable? But if after all these mods nobody said anything about them, then i guess its alright. I'll check and see; if it isn't I can change it. It's probably the hardest part of the map; I agree.

Episode 3:

00:51:507 - Consider adding a circle here, and then start the spinner later. I shall consider it, since that circle wasn't there to begin with, was modded in.
00:51:721 (1) - Hmm, consider ending the spinner at 00:54:507, and then add a circle at 00:54:721 - This is...not likely. I'll think about it.

Episode 1:

Found nothing

Marathon:

01:34:685 - Consider adding a circle here? The entire map is in 1/6th. A 1/4th note there would be confusing.
01:35:007 - Consider adding a circle here? No, there's actually a pattern going on here, believe it or not.
01:35:114 - Consider adding a circle here? ^
05:44:650 - Why not add a loop of purplecrystals here like in 02:17:221 ? Honestly? I forgot. I didn't add the hitsounds to the latter part of the map either. I needa do that. Thanks.

-------------------------------------------

Sighs to be honest, this map could have been so much better, and there's no easy fix for them case it will require pretty much a complete remap (and i'm not that kind of person of posting a long wall telling you exactly what to do in every object :T), and at this stage, it is not worth it, cause it would mean to find mods again. Opinion is duly noted. Not paid any attention to; but duly noted.

The entire map is in 1/6th. A 1/4th note there would be confusing.

ErufenRito wrote:

[Clipped for shorter text]

rust45 wrote:

[SB]
Why is it that none of the SB is in the osb? Diff specific stuff can be put in the diff. I'll get right on that.

[Skin]
The spinner meter has a yellow spot in the upper-left corner, I don't think this is intended. It's not.
Why is it that the "x" and "%" are skinned, but not the numbers, with the Xi skin, this looks really awkward. Leftovers just like the mod icons.

[Episode 1]
01:44:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - These anti-jumps are kinda unexpected, but I was able to pull them off.
01:48:078 (1) - This slider's reverse arrow is pointing in the wrong direction. Can be fixed by just moving the endpoint up one grid. Done.
02:20:650 (5) - ^ Same basic method to fix. Done.
02:51:078 (7) - ^ Done.

[Episode 3]
00:47:007 (2) - Reverse arrow pointing wrong direction. Done.
01:01:793 (2) - ^ Done.
01:04:793 (2,3) - ^ Except plural. Done.
Do you even see these? It could be that the BSS is messing with you again. I see them; but I figured that it was just a bug on my side since nobody ever mentioned them.

[Episode 5]
I don't really like the spacing of this maps, it jumps around like crazy (the actual jumps and the spacing) and in some areas where there are huge spaces, it doesn't really feel right to me. But this is all entirely subjective. I feel a bit bad about it as well; but friends have found the difficulty fun without thinking about it too much so I'm not as worried as I should be.

[Marathon]
That drain rate seems a tad high for a marathon map. This is intended.
05:50:864 (5) - Guess what? The reverse arrow is pointing the wrong direction. Done.
06:08:007 (3) - ^ Done.
07:01:793 (1) - ^ Done.

Yeah, the real only problems are with the reverse arrows, so the maps are basically fine. You get a star from me.

Wiinter wrote:

Hello ^.^

General
As said in pvt, the name of the marathon's diff can make confusions, I suggest changing it.
Also, as soon as most things in this skin are blue, maybe your section pass could be blue as well, like this, for example:I'll do some final changes to the skin and stuff soon enough. Thanks for the suggestion; I'll probably follow it. (But won't use your actual image since I think I can do it better and it needs to be a darker blue anyway.

SPOILER

Episode1

00:22:364 (3) - move it one grid to the right (http://puu.sh/wfp) and than ajust 00:23:221 (4). Done.
01:34:793 (2) - move it one grid to the left and than ajust 01:35:221 (3) Moved 1 instead since it was barely noticeable of an anti-jump.

Episode 3

02:12:507 (1) - the end of this spinner sounds a little weird Silenced the entire spinner since it fits better.

Bernkastel's Marathon and Episode 5

Perfect imo, couldnt find any problem here. That's a first. Maybe it's finally starting to look like a ranked map.

Star for this amazing map and song, good luck to get it approved/ranked.

Haneii wrote:

Just did a quick glance + test play

~Episode 1~
00:48:935 (7,8) - feels a bit awkward since they're so close to the previous notes (compared to the spacing from 1-6). Since its the easiest diff i suggest you keep it consistent.

An example

Done.

01:44:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing (Technically it's okay, but since its the easiest diff I would suggest you change it.) Expanded a bit.

~Episode 2~
Feels like a normal - if it is then i suggest you go through spacing. Although I didn't notice this/it didn't bother me when playing so its really up to you. It is a normal. It's the "true" difficulty.

~Bernkastel's Marathon~
02:15:078 (1) - this slider's unrankable (can't tell what direction its going in) It's not rankable. But the mats and bats seem to have varying opinions on whether it's approvable. I like creating discussions.
stopped playing after 3 min XD


Its getting together, Good luck

Don't Kudosu As you wish.

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Mok wrote:

Hiiii :3

[General]
Nice BG ;3

[1]
Why there are lot's of distance sanpings? D:
01:28:364 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe like this it would be prettier: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41241
01:47:221 (1,1) - Remove New Combo.

[3]
01:53:221 (1,2) - Make them like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41255
Everything above done.
[marathon]
You should start at the same point as the others. Nah. I like it this way.
01:29:650 (1) - Change this with a slider that finishes at 01:30:507, then a triplet at 01:30:721 - 01:30:935
04:57:078 - ^. These exceed the difficulty the marathon is based at. Plus, it doesn't feel right.

Good job, song is so cool

wmfchris wrote:

Unless pecified, grid = lv 3

[general]
There're two BG image in the osz. delete one of them. Make sure the remaining one is in standard size. This is intentional. The smaller BG image is used as part of the storyboard.

[episode 5]
0:14:650 (5,6) not symmetrical, 1 (lv4) grid left? It's symmetrical to me...
0:20:007 (6) left+up 1 grid Done.
SB around 0:27: not smooth @ about 0:27:335, try to fix it or find SB prosI'll go bug a pro.
1:00:721 (13,14) left 1 grid Done.
1:45:078 (3) up 1 grid Done.

... Good map but the spacing varies too much? o_o
Like 1:14:435 (1,2,3), 1:22:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6), are in the same combo but their spacing are diffenernt obviously (with no reason) 1:14 was an oversight on my part, 1:22 is intentional.

go and resnap and ask for rechecks

wmfchris wrote:

lol BTW, this song is like the remix of Battle of Four Fiends XDDDDD

jericho2442 wrote:

i cant read the combos.......thats never a good thing :/, maybe make them flow more to the music, also you really need some more hitsounds

Episode 1 its more a normal

01:46:364 (5,1) - put the new comb on (5) insted so it flows with your pattern Done.


Episode 3
00:42:078 (2,3) - space these abit more to make the flow better Done.

ok this map needs what i call a clean up ;p look at the spacing on parts like these 00:59:864 (5,6,7,8) you will notice that even though they are meant to be the same, the spacing is kinda different between the notes, you need to go through the map and find all these inconsistent parts and fix them up "if" you want the map to look better The spacing is a bit off, yes, but it seems to fit the flow of the map and plays well.

00:59:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - like here too and on ;p
02:50:007 (2,3) - not keen on this overlap, maybe make the ends of these sliders line up? it will break DS but to me it does make it play better if you then make the rest of the combo suit it too Modded a bit, looks far better in my opinion.

Episode 5
00:59:221 (3) - new combo to help the player kno to break here for abit Done.
01:02:007 (3,4) - make (4) closer to (3) this jump really dont feel nice and plays better without it Done. This was actually yet another oversight.
01:26:650 (1) - this slider speed feels waaaay to fast to suit here to me, maybe give it one fo the slower speeds :/ Changed to a different speed. Feels pretty good.
01:46:364 (1) - same here Done.
02:41:435 (5,6) - this jump dont really suit again Done. Another oversight? This shouldn't happen, I'm certain I...

Bernkastel's Marathon

02:15:078 (1) - .......yea same as the other ppl said but meh If a BAT says that this needs to be SBed, I'll make some red-truthish image telling you which way to go.
03:01:578 (4,5) - you need to move (5) closer to (4) to suit the spacing better Done.
06:29:007 (4,5) - same here Done.
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nice worth a star, but you could do with some more hitsounds and abit better comboing

dkun wrote:

lalala~

key:
suggestions
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praise

Episode 1
Nothing out of the ordinary. Plays out very well.

Episode 3
Nothing out of the ordinary.

Episode 5
I would say knock the AR up to 9, due to the high enough SV to give that insane effect. But that's just me.
If not.. OD at 7, AR at 8. Why not just knock up OD to 8 as well?
For that mini 1/6th stream of 4 beats at the end of the song, you could alternate between repeating sliders.
This plays out very sexy though! I have no complaints except what's been mentioned above.
Modified a bit.

Bernkastel's Marathon
Knock the HP drain a tick, it seems a bit high for a marathon. This is intended; the beat is flowing enough that if you're ever going to miss enough notes to fail anyway, you're screwed regardless. The only issue with this is at the start of the map, where failing one of the slow sliders on accident leads you to fail due to the drain.
There is no set.. "style" in this diff. It feels as though it was live mapped throughout the entire diff., but this is only from my personal experiences of maps. This makes the mapping incredibly hard and annoying to read, tbh. But as you said, I think that was your goal to begin with. Not exactly sure what you mean by "live mapped", but that was the goal. A map that requires more concentration and endurance than sheer clicking power.
Combos aren't consistent every now and then, too many to mention. This is the main issue I want to have a BAT check this out for.
For those mini sliders that repeat ~4 times, why not make them end on the direction of the next beat? It's really heard to notice the difference. As same as above, too many to mention examples. Require clarification.
Also, you don't need to stick to distance snap all the time. Alternate your snapping, and a new combo can be placed a bit farther away, with reason and common sense. Will be considered.
Some nice patterns would be nice, but I think it's a bit too late for that. Require clarification.
05:20:650 (1,2) - A bit nazi on my part, but align it equally from each other on Y axis? 1 is a bit farther to the left compared to 2. Done.
05:24:935 (3,4) - You could flip this horizontally to create a bit more rhythm.
06:14:435 (2) - I'm sure you could be a little more creative..
06:50:881 (1,2) - A bit more nazi, but align on Y axis for both of these? Done.
For a marathon, this isn't too bad though.

General
I am thrilled to see this get ranked. It's pretty good overall!
❤ = ★; you know it.
dkun out

Odaril wrote:

General
Add Bernkastel to the tags in all difficulties ?
Why are there both "bg.jpg" and "bg.png" in the folder (not even having the same size) ? bg.png is used for a SB vibration. Using the full-sized image caused an issue in a few of my friend's plays where they couldn't see the beats at all...

Episode 1
The diff felt a bit bland in the beginning due to the constant 1/1 rhythm, but it played better in the end. Easys generally don't pass "Bland" anyway.
00:25:792 (2,1) - The spacing here surprised me because I expected (1) a bit later. Moved 2 a bit to better fit the timing.
00:27:078 (1,1) - ^ Intended.
00:30:507 (4,1) - Although I should probably point it out as spacing issue, it does play fine and is easy to read imo. So... your call Leaving it. It's a good pattern.
01:00:935 (3) - Move it a bit down so that the spacing with (2) matches the one between (1) and (2) ? Done.
01:25:793 (5) - This clap sounds weird here imo The hell is that doing there? Nixed.
01:29:650 (4) - Make it symmetrical ? Fixed.
01:48:078 (1) - I personnally don't like such kick sliders in Normal diffs or lower, because I find them confusing to play and sometimes pretty bad. And since this is the easiest diff of the mapset, and it's supposed to be beginner-friendly (at least a bit) I'd suggest you change it ? I'll brainstorm this, but there's very little chance it'll be changed - even though it's a kickback, it's basically a hold slider. And since there's nothing after it, it's an easy one.
02:51:078 (7,8,1) - This pattern sounds a bit off, because the three 1/2 notes come too early, then there's that slider where the song has 1/2 notes.
The whole diff lacked hitsounds imo. Try to get a custom clap ? I'd love to find one.

Episode 3
I like how you used Finishes at the end of the diff. It sounds great.
However, the beginning lacks hitsounds. Here's a possible hitsound pattern, only add it if you like it. Or feel free to add some and not others, you do what you want. It's kind of basic but it doesn't sound bad.

hitsounds

00:27:721 (2) - clap on the end
00:28:578 (4) - clap on the end
00:29:435 (6) - clap on the end
00:30:293 (8) - clap on both beginning and end
00:31:150 (2) - clap on the end
00:32:007 (4) - clap on the end
00:32:864 (2) - clap on the end
00:33:721 (4) - clap on both beginning and end
00:34:578 (6) - clap on end
00:35:221 (1,2,3,4) - clap on end
and so on until the spinner

00:32:435 (1) - no new combo so that it is consistent with the previous pattern ?
00:34:150 (5) - new combo for the same reason ?

Episode 5
I find the beginning unncessarily jumpy. but it plays fine
(and I hate small circles ;_; )Circles are the same size as Episode 3, hah!
Also the 4 stacks confused me a lot, I expected 3 notes, and when I saw I had missed one I didn't understand at all. Also, expecting 3 notes made the spacing harder to read. Intended. The music follows the quad notes to a T, and holds the difficulty standing.
01:10:150 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very weird spacing, although it reads and plays fine Intended as an experiment and left there because it worked so well.
01:32:650 (1,2,3) - oh, huh... spacing issue: space them evenly please (ok it reads fine but it looks really bad) Fixed.
01:34:150 (4,5,6) - same, except this time the spacing makes (6) confusing to play Fixed a bit. 1:32 was as well.
02:18:507 (3,1) - Very confusing spacing: they're spaced the same way as (2) and (3) and the time gap is not the same Not much I can do, it adheres to a defined pattern.

Bernkastel's Marathon
I'm not sure the first red section is allowed at all. Is there an actual timing change there ? I don't think the three first sliders add anything at all to the difficulty anyway, so I would just suggest to delete them and start the difficulty where the actual offset is. :/
yaaaaaaaaay FC first try o/
I like this, it's not tiring even for a marathon, and the difficulty level is pretty well chosen. Good job.
Yes, the beginning 13 seconds actually have a separate bpm, and the sliders were originally there to distinguish it from the other difficulties completely. You're probably the first to FC it first try as well.