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Melocure - Agape
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Konnichiwa!
Sorry for delay~
[General]
1) You have an uneeded space in your SB. You need to trim/cut the transparent space, otherwise, the SB will run poorly for bad PC
2) Remove the unused lead-in right now except Insane! When I test this beatmap, I saw the audio lead-in 1 seconds. Please remove it
[Normal]
01:06:545 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
02:22:055 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
03:48:178 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
04:01:443 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1?
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick?
01:40:627 (2) - ^
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick?
[Insane]
02:42:260 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
Nice song
STAR
Sorry for delay~
[General]
1) You have an uneeded space in your SB. You need to trim/cut the transparent space, otherwise, the SB will run poorly for bad PC
2) Remove the unused lead-in right now except Insane! When I test this beatmap, I saw the audio lead-in 1 seconds. Please remove it
[Normal]
01:06:545 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
02:22:055 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
03:48:178 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
04:01:443 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1?
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick?
01:40:627 (2) - ^
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick?
[Insane]
02:42:260 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
Nice song
STAR
star~ >w</
thx modding!Leorda wrote:
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1? ok
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362 ok
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick? no
01:40:627 (2) - ^ no
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick? no,but move 30:219
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
nice map! 
Good Song!! 
ごめんなさい
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ごめんなさい
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[Storyboard] 
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
[Insane]
Looks ok, but that's about it
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
[Normal]
Nothing really impressive, i felt there were too many sliders and all sliders have the same shape all around and it starts getting old by about half the map
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
[Insane]
Looks ok, but that's about it
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
[Normal]
Nothing really impressive, i felt there were too many sliders and all sliders have the same shape all around and it starts getting old by about half the map
thx lot moddingSakura Hana wrote:
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
no
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
no.but,delete slider tick sound.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
no
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
no.but,add circle 31:035
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
no
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
いい歌やぁ・・・
（ノ゜ω゜）ノ★
（ノ゜ω゜）ノ★
Not sure on the timing..seems odd at times
-Remove (Full ver.) from the mp3 title and the thread (there was a BAT conversation about it and every song is assumed to be full version unless said otherwise, making it redundant to put)
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency
-Put a kiai fountain at 01:01:646? As well as any other parts like this. Seems to fit nicely with the song/sb
Normal:
Could use alot more hitsounds in my opinion. Sounds very empty in certain parts
Simple but no problems
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane?
00:45:321 (3) - add note
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more
01:40:831 (3) - add note
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick
Insane:
Same comments as Normal~
Pretty nice maps in general
Star'ed
-Remove (Full ver.) from the mp3 title and the thread (there was a BAT conversation about it and every song is assumed to be full version unless said otherwise, making it redundant to put)
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency
-Put a kiai fountain at 01:01:646? As well as any other parts like this. Seems to fit nicely with the song/sb
Normal:
Could use alot more hitsounds in my opinion. Sounds very empty in certain parts
Simple but no problems
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane?
00:45:321 (3) - add note
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more
01:40:831 (3) - add note
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick
Insane:
Same comments as Normal~
Pretty nice maps in general
Star'ed
muya muyaaaa~
For offset I got -366
For offset I got -366
Sakura Hana wrote:
[Storyboard]
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item Fixed~
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
MOD thanks~ >.<James2250 wrote:
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
No changed.><
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency Fixed~
http://loda.jp/patchouli/?id=35 SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya).osb
thx moddingJames2250 wrote:
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane? ok
00:45:321 (3) - add note ok
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap no
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^ no
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more no
01:40:831 (3) - add note ok
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick ok
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
o.o
Revived!
Topic Starter
thx
backup
http://puu.sh/1K9B SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [Insane].osu
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
backup
http://puu.sh/1K9B SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [Insane].osu
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
star~
Topic Starter
mp3 changed
and some hitsound added
and some hitsound added
ooo remake!!!