doneMizu wrote:
[fbs`s Hard]
03:06:573 - Add.
03:08:206 - Delete.
03:09:022 - Add.
but,other suggestion is not done. sorry
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but,other suggestion is not done. sorry
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
Mizu_banned
Topic Starter
This bleak time is very short.Mizu wrote:
[Normal]
1:35:744 - 01:37:580 - Too add break time.
[Insane]
00:46:560 - 00:47:581 - Add Break time! =^-^=
01:42:070 - 01:43:091 - ^
02:23:295 - 02:24:315 - ^
02:27:173 - 02:28:193 - ^
02:29:826 - 02:30:846 - ^
02:33:703 - 02:34:724 - ^ T-T
I think its a unrankeble.
doesn't add it.
other some fixed.
thx
Mizu_banned
Really?Muya wrote:
This bleak time is very short.Mizu wrote:
[Normal]
1:35:744 - 01:37:580 - Too add break time.
[Insane]
00:46:560 - 00:47:581 - Add Break time! =^-^=
01:42:070 - 01:43:091 - ^
02:23:295 - 02:24:315 - ^
02:27:173 - 02:28:193 - ^
02:29:826 - 02:30:846 - ^
02:33:703 - 02:34:724 - ^ T-T
I think its a unrankeble.
doesn't add it.
other some fixed.
thx
Uh...sorry
Topic Starter
no problem
General
Diff spread would be a lot better with an Easy diff.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable. Re-incode it to 192kbps.
Your offset is too early. Use -360ms.
I think soft hitsounds fit this song better. Your call though.
Normal
This diff is not beginner-friendly, because of the stacks, the numerous slider patterns, and some of the rhythm used that are unintuitive.
00:33:517 (4,5,6) - This might be confusing: two stacks in a short time with different timings.
Insane
Maximum is score is 17 million which must goes for approval. Either reduce the maximum score of this diff, either mark it as going for approval.
You can acheive that by removing the streams since none of them actually plays well, especially at that high OD.
OD and AR -1.
01:43:091 (1) - This makes absolutely no sense. What is it mapped on ? The piano is on 1/4 beats, not 1/8.
02:23:295 - Make this part a break ? Since it is a break in the Normal diff, and it would help decrease the maximum score.
fbs' Hard
Why does this have red sections ? They are unneeded, the BPM of the music doesn't change. You are aware that using red sections to change the slider speed is unrankable, aren't you ? Remove these. If you want to keep the slider speed change, do that:
- set global slider speed 0,9: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35718
- set every single timing section (except red ones and the ones between the two red lines, which have to be 0,5x) to be 2x slider speed
- add a green section right after the very first red line with 2x slider speed, and change the third red line into a green one with 2x slider speed
- Turn the first red line into a green line with 0,5x slider speed
- Turn the second red line into a green line with 1x slider speed.
You should have this at the end: http://puu.sh/q7I
Remember to check all your sliders since they might be changed due to the speed change.
00:15:350 (1,3,5) - These make no sense. Replace them with 1/2 circles.
00:21:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:34:737 (1,2,3) - Spacing: (2) should be spaced with (1) and (3) evenly since the time gap is the same.
02:36:369 (3,4,1) - ^
03:19:021 (4,5,6) - Spacing: the distance between (5) and (6) should be the same as between (4) and (5)
03:29:838 (4) - This makes absolutely no sense. Delete it and map something.
Diff spread would be a lot better with an Easy diff.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable. Re-incode it to 192kbps.
Your offset is too early. Use -360ms.
I think soft hitsounds fit this song better. Your call though.
Normal
This diff is not beginner-friendly, because of the stacks, the numerous slider patterns, and some of the rhythm used that are unintuitive.
00:33:517 (4,5,6) - This might be confusing: two stacks in a short time with different timings.
Insane
Maximum is score is 17 million which must goes for approval. Either reduce the maximum score of this diff, either mark it as going for approval.
You can acheive that by removing the streams since none of them actually plays well, especially at that high OD.
OD and AR -1.
01:43:091 (1) - This makes absolutely no sense. What is it mapped on ? The piano is on 1/4 beats, not 1/8.
02:23:295 - Make this part a break ? Since it is a break in the Normal diff, and it would help decrease the maximum score.
fbs' Hard
Why does this have red sections ? They are unneeded, the BPM of the music doesn't change. You are aware that using red sections to change the slider speed is unrankable, aren't you ? Remove these. If you want to keep the slider speed change, do that:
- set global slider speed 0,9: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35718
- set every single timing section (except red ones and the ones between the two red lines, which have to be 0,5x) to be 2x slider speed
- add a green section right after the very first red line with 2x slider speed, and change the third red line into a green one with 2x slider speed
- Turn the first red line into a green line with 0,5x slider speed
- Turn the second red line into a green line with 1x slider speed.
You should have this at the end: http://puu.sh/q7I
Remember to check all your sliders since they might be changed due to the speed change.
00:15:350 (1,3,5) - These make no sense. Replace them with 1/2 circles.
00:21:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:34:737 (1,2,3) - Spacing: (2) should be spaced with (1) and (3) evenly since the time gap is the same.
02:36:369 (3,4,1) - ^
03:19:021 (4,5,6) - Spacing: the distance between (5) and (6) should be the same as between (4) and (5)
03:29:838 (4) - This makes absolutely no sense. Delete it and map something.
Topic Starter
thx modOdaril wrote:
General
Diff spread would be a lot better with an Easy diff. :(
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable. Re-incode it to 192kbps. ok
Your offset is too early. Use -360ms. ok
I think soft hitsounds fit this song better. Your call though. ok
Normal
This diff is not beginner-friendly, because of the stacks, the numerous slider patterns, and some of the rhythm used that are unintuitive.
00:33:517 (4,5,6) - This might be confusing: two stacks in a short time with different timings. ok
Insane
Maximum is score is 17 million which must goes for approval. Either reduce the maximum score of this diff, either mark it as going for approval. Score : 16,887,520 to fix
You can acheive that by removing the streams since none of them actually plays well, especially at that high OD.
OD and AR -1. OD -1
01:43:091 (1) - This makes absolutely no sense. What is it mapped on ? The piano is on 1/4 beats, not 1/8. ok
02:23:295 - Make this part a break ? Since it is a break in the Normal diff, and it would help decrease the maximum score. no
Hi hi~
Overall
Except for frost-b-spec's diff, try to use more hitsounds. (You know MAT/BAT's gonna pick on this. )
I know that the background drumming is not really in sync with the metronome, so softer hitsounds should be used, ex. soft-whistle.
[Normal]
Not very intuitive, but good.
[fbs's Hard]
00:25:966 (2) - I'd try to put this note anywhere except to the right of (1).
00:29:027 (1) - silence end of spinner?
00:49:844 (5,6) - shape these better
01:35:354 (3) - curve this slider?
01:44:129 (1) - make this symmetrical with 01:47:395 (1)?
02:08:415 (7) - doesn't look nice...
02:10:252 (1) - silence end of spinner?
02:23:313 (1) to 03:10:659 (1) - I am not sure if using un-inherited timing section to slow down sliders is rankable now. From what I know, allowed slider speeds are "Slider Velocity x 0.5 ~ x 2.0". Try not to use un-inherited timing sections other than for offset. You know you can set custom slider speeds in Timing Setup?
02:43:720 (x) - copy and paste (3) here?
03:28:005 (5) - spacing
03:29:842 (4) - don't repeat this much, map it.
03:58:413 (2) - flip vertical?
03:59:230 (4) - flip horizontal?
[Insane]
OMG this diff is so satisfying
I wonder why you set slider velocity to 1.92. Nothing wrong, just curious.
01:14:946 (2) - Just an observation. I personally feel that stacking triplets is harder than spacing them out like here 02:10:456 (2) because players have to "stop and go". If you know what I mean lol.
Good song and good map!
Star~
Overall
Except for frost-b-spec's diff, try to use more hitsounds. (You know MAT/BAT's gonna pick on this.
)I know that the background drumming is not really in sync with the metronome, so softer hitsounds should be used, ex. soft-whistle.
[Normal]
Not very intuitive, but good.
[fbs's Hard]
00:25:966 (2) - I'd try to put this note anywhere except to the right of (1).
00:29:027 (1) - silence end of spinner?
00:49:844 (5,6) - shape these better
01:35:354 (3) - curve this slider?
01:44:129 (1) - make this symmetrical with 01:47:395 (1)?
02:08:415 (7) - doesn't look nice...
02:10:252 (1) - silence end of spinner?
02:23:313 (1) to 03:10:659 (1) - I am not sure if using un-inherited timing section to slow down sliders is rankable now. From what I know, allowed slider speeds are "Slider Velocity x 0.5 ~ x 2.0". Try not to use un-inherited timing sections other than for offset. You know you can set custom slider speeds in Timing Setup?
02:43:720 (x) - copy and paste (3) here?
03:28:005 (5) - spacing
03:29:842 (4) - don't repeat this much, map it.
03:58:413 (2) - flip vertical?
03:59:230 (4) - flip horizontal?
[Insane]
OMG this diff is so satisfying
I wonder why you set slider velocity to 1.92. Nothing wrong, just curious.
01:14:946 (2) - Just an observation. I personally feel that stacking triplets is harder than spacing them out like here 02:10:456 (2) because players have to "stop and go". If you know what I mean lol.
Good song and good map!
Star~
ok the timing on this song is COMPLETELY out at 01:14:844 to 01:27:803 and out at 02:10:252 to 02:23:313
i tried and failed to time it, its horridly hard, it really needs timing properly though, i advise to get some pro timers to help you out with it,
once its in time call me back and i will mod it :/
i tried and failed to time it, its horridly hard, it really needs timing properly though, i advise to get some pro timers to help you out with it,
once its in time call me back and i will mod it :/
Topic Starter
thx mod
Odaril wrote:
00:15:350 (1,3,5) - These make no sense. Replace them with 1/2 circles.
00:21:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
this suggestion is not done. other is ok.
thx modding!yongtw123 wrote:
Except for frost-b-spec's diff, try to use more hitsounds. (You know MAT/BAT's gonna pick on this.
I know that the background drumming is not really in sync with the metronome, so softer hitsounds should be used, ex. soft-whistle.
uhh...The idea doesn't come out...and i don't like hitosounds...
[fbs's Hard]
00:25:966 (2) - I'd try to put this note anywhere except to the right of (1). no
00:29:027 (1) - silence end of spinner? ok
00:49:844 (5,6) - shape these better no
01:35:354 (3) - curve this slider? ok
01:44:129 (1) - make this symmetrical with 01:47:395 (1)? ok
02:08:415 (7) - doesn't look nice... ok
02:10:252 (1) - silence end of spinner? ok
02:23:313 (1) to 03:10:659 (1) - I am not sure if using un-inherited timing section to slow down sliders is rankable now. From what I know, allowed slider speeds are "Slider Velocity x 0.5 ~ x 2.0". Try not to use un-inherited timing sections other than for offset. You know you can set custom slider speeds in Timing Setup? ok
02:43:720 (x) - copy and paste (3) here? ok
03:28:005 (5) - spacing ok?
03:29:842 (4) - don't repeat this much, map it. ...ok
03:58:413 (2) - flip vertical? ...?
03:59:230 (4) - flip horizontal? ...?
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
starrr
iwayuru god song
Topic Starter
thx for star
http://www.mediafire.com/?4e15zpe1cgra8qf
SB完成しました！
何か不具合とかあればいつでも言って下さいー
あと補足txtにも書いてあるんですがdbファイルだけ削除のほうお願いします><
SB完成しました！
何か不具合とかあればいつでも言って下さいー
あと補足txtにも書いてあるんですがdbファイルだけ削除のほうお願いします><
Topic Starter
thxPatchouli wrote:
http://www.mediafire.com/?4e15zpe1cgra8qf
SB完成しました！
何か不具合とかあればいつでも言って下さいー
あと補足txtにも書いてあるんですがdbファイルだけ削除のほうお願いします><
dbファイルは入ってなかったです！
maybe ... I think offset is 33~35 
Konnichiwa!
Sorry for delay~
[General]
1) You have an uneeded space in your SB. You need to trim/cut the transparent space, otherwise, the SB will run poorly for bad PC
2) Remove the unused lead-in right now except Insane! When I test this beatmap, I saw the audio lead-in 1 seconds. Please remove it
[Normal]
01:06:545 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
02:22:055 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
03:48:178 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
04:01:443 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1?
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick?
01:40:627 (2) - ^
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick?
[Insane]
02:42:260 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
Nice song
STAR
Sorry for delay~
[General]
1) You have an uneeded space in your SB. You need to trim/cut the transparent space, otherwise, the SB will run poorly for bad PC
2) Remove the unused lead-in right now except Insane! When I test this beatmap, I saw the audio lead-in 1 seconds. Please remove it
[Normal]
01:06:545 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
02:22:055 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
03:48:178 (x) - Add note here? So the object are following vocal?
04:01:443 (1) - This spinner are not silenced correctly!
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1?
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick?
01:40:627 (2) - ^
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick?
[Insane]
02:42:260 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
Nice song
STAR
star~ >w</
thx modding!Leorda wrote:
[fbs's Hard]
AR +1? ok
00:26:953 (4) - The end of slider are not snapped on timeline. Please end at 00:27:362 ok
01:40:423 (1) - Move forward to blue tick? Since the vocal sound start at blue tick? no
01:40:627 (2) - ^ no
03:30:117 (1) - Move forward to white tick? no,but move 30:219
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
nice map! 
Good Song!!
ごめんなさい
こんなこと一言も言ってませんw
↑Qrool wrote:
私の★を越えて行け…ッ！
ごめんなさい
こんなこと一言も言ってませんw
[Storyboard] 
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
[Insane]
Looks ok, but that's about it
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
[Normal]
Nothing really impressive, i felt there were too many sliders and all sliders have the same shape all around and it starts getting old by about half the map
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
[Insane]
Looks ok, but that's about it
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
[Normal]
Nothing really impressive, i felt there were too many sliders and all sliders have the same shape all around and it starts getting old by about half the map
thx lot moddingSakura Hana wrote:
[fbs' Hard]
The 2x > 1/2 speed really caught me off hard, kinda harsh i must say, that aside, i suggest you use the same speed for the slow section, or make a less sudden increase as it can throw people off when it goes from 0.5x to 1x since the song is still slow.
no
02:25:525 (2) - On that note, this slider has a weird located slidertick and that's because it's 1.5 beats length when your tick rate is 1. I recommend you turn it into 2 hitcircles instead.
no.but,delete slider tick sound.
02:28:178 (1) - This could be 2 hitcircles too but for a different reason, and that is, the song doesn't lead me to think there's a slider here considering there's 2 strong notes.
no
02:31:443 (2) - This slider feels off, use the same timing than on 02:25:525 (2) and use 2 hitcircles here as well.
no.but,add circle 31:035
02:33:127 (4) - Try moving it 1/8 later?
no
Feels pretty simple except at the end, you could try adding in more patterns.
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
いい歌やぁ・・・
（ノ゜ω゜）ノ★
（ノ゜ω゜）ノ★
Not sure on the timing..seems odd at times
-Remove (Full ver.) from the mp3 title and the thread (there was a BAT conversation about it and every song is assumed to be full version unless said otherwise, making it redundant to put)
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency
-Put a kiai fountain at 01:01:646? As well as any other parts like this. Seems to fit nicely with the song/sb
Normal:
Could use alot more hitsounds in my opinion. Sounds very empty in certain parts
Simple but no problems
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane?
00:45:321 (3) - add note
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more
01:40:831 (3) - add note
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick
Insane:
Same comments as Normal~
Pretty nice maps in general
Star'ed
-Remove (Full ver.) from the mp3 title and the thread (there was a BAT conversation about it and every song is assumed to be full version unless said otherwise, making it redundant to put)
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency
-Put a kiai fountain at 01:01:646? As well as any other parts like this. Seems to fit nicely with the song/sb
Normal:
Could use alot more hitsounds in my opinion. Sounds very empty in certain parts
Simple but no problems
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane?
00:45:321 (3) - add note
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more
01:40:831 (3) - add note
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick
Insane:
Same comments as Normal~
Pretty nice maps in general
Star'ed
muya muyaaaa~
For offset I got -366
For offset I got -366
Sakura Hana wrote:
[Storyboard]
The lyrics feel slightly off
Remove unnecessary transparencies from pretty much every storyboard item Fixed~
Pretty nice storyboard, i like it
MOD thanks~ >.<James2250 wrote:
-Might want to put sb with title/artist etc in a break later in the song. Most people skip the start and will miss it, no big deal though
No changed.><
-Cut the lyrics down in the folder to remove any unnecessary transparency Fixed~
http://loda.jp/patchouli/?id=35 SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya).osb
thx moddingJames2250 wrote:
fbs's Hard:
The short repeating sliders at the beginning could be more creative but ok
Make HP/OD less than Insane? ok
00:45:321 (3) - add note ok
00:50:627 (6,1,2) - would look nicer if they didn't overlap no
01:12:872 (7,8) - ^ no
01:30:423 (4,1) - spread out more no
01:40:831 (3) - add note ok
03:30:117 (1) - I wouldn't start this on a blue tick ok
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
o.o
Revived!
Topic Starter
thx
backup
http://puu.sh/1K9B SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [Insane].osu
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu
backup
http://puu.sh/1K9B SB file
Download: Melocure - Agape (Full ver.) (Muya) [Insane].osu
Download: Melocure - Agape (Muya) [fbs's Hard].osu