GeneralDiff spread would be a lot better with an Easy diff.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable. Re-incode it to 192kbps.Your offset is too early. Use -360ms.I think soft hitsounds fit this song better. Your call though.
NormalThis diff is not beginner-friendly, because of the stacks, the numerous slider patterns, and some of the rhythm used that are unintuitive.
00:33:517 (4,5,6) - This might be confusing: two stacks in a short time with different timings.
InsaneMaximum is score is 17 million which must goes for approval. Either reduce the maximum score of this diff, either mark it as going for approval.You can acheive that by removing the streams since none of them actually plays well, especially at that high OD.
OD and AR -1.
01:43:091 (1) - This makes absolutely no sense. What is it mapped on ? The piano is on 1/4 beats, not 1/8.
02:23:295 - Make this part a break ? Since it is a break in the Normal diff, and it would help decrease the maximum score.
fbs' HardWhy does this have red sections ? They are unneeded, the BPM of the music doesn't change. You are aware that using red sections to change the slider speed is unrankable, aren't you ? Remove these. If you want to keep the slider speed change, do that:
- set global slider speed 0,9:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35718- set every single timing section (except red ones and the ones between the two red lines, which have to be 0,5x) to be 2x slider speed
- add a green section right after the very first red line with 2x slider speed, and change the third red line into a green one with 2x slider speed
- Turn the first red line into a green line with 0,5x slider speed
- Turn the second red line into a green line with 1x slider speed.
You should have this at the end:
http://puu.sh/q7IRemember to check all your sliders since they might be changed due to the speed change.
00:15:350 (1,3,5) - These make no sense. Replace them with 1/2 circles.
00:21:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:34:737 (1,2,3) - Spacing: (2) should be spaced with (1) and (3) evenly since the time gap is the same.02:36:369 (3,4,1) - ^
03:19:021 (4,5,6) - Spacing: the distance between (5) and (6) should be the same as between (4) and (5)03:29:838 (4) - This makes absolutely no sense. Delete it and map something.