1. ReFaller's Hard (3,62 stars, 974 notes)
2. The World (5,68 stars, 2077 notes)

Nya Nya Neko wrote:

Maybe I'll try making a background to this map
if you don't mind <3

Exile- wrote:

Nya Nya Neko wrote:

Maybe I'll try making a background to this map
if you don't mind <3

My friend will make BG ^_^

Skull Kid wrote:

PORRA

Neoskylove wrote:

00:16:469 (2,4) - awkward stack
Changed to sliders
00:30:636 (7,8) - ^ This stack actually fits here IMO
00:50:442 (4,5) - distance is too near.. Doesn't matter as it is a part of the pattern
01:02:693 (2,3,4) - It's awkward stack, too I tried a lot of options here and this stack still feels the best here
01:41:180 (3) - http://puu.sh/mJOQ6/12d4a549a5.jpg sure
02:35:151 (1,2,3) - bad rhythm,. How is this bad? It follow the piano sound. Otherwise there would be a huge gap
02:41:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all stream please. This is not a piano sound. Sliders are the best to build an emphasize for these kind of sounds
02:45:265 (4) - avoid overlap please. Moved it a bit from the first note although this overlap was made on purpose
04:36:887 (1,2,3) - blanket Sure
05:18:220 (1) - http://puu.sh/mJP1g/b6eb666c40.jpg ^_^
07:21:846 (3,3) - stack Sure

GL

bobbybobsenpwned wrote:

Can't download the map D:

TheDarkPure wrote:

Fantastic map. Good luck

Aden wrote:

This is amazing.

livezi wrote:

masterpiece

Spaghetti wrote:

hype

Kotori-Chan wrote:

i´m really surprised how well you did the halozy songs and actually everything ! :3


good luck with the map,because its really amazing
pls never give up on it ;w;
<3

Cubzy wrote:

if ya wanna a GD, I can do it :3
BTW, nice maep man

_Gezo_ wrote:

requested timing check

319,333.518621456365,4,2,0,30,1,0
33622,314.13612565445,4,2,0,30,1,0
90155,285.714285714286,4,2,0,30,1,0
145019,284.900284900285,4,2,0,30,1,0
199754,1137.44075829384,4,2,0,30,1,0
213403,1126.76056338028,4,2,0,30,1,0
217910,1134.75177304965,4,2,0,30,1,0
236038,283.755024828565,4,2,0,30,1,0
272349,282.752120640905,4,2,0,30,1,0
288183,288.461538461538,4,2,0,30,1,0
290522,461.538461538462,4,1,0,50,1,0
371528,741.89156626506,4,2,0,70,1,0
374495,697.674418604651,4,2,0,30,1,0
381119,337.078651685393,4,2,0,30,1,0
402711,327.868852459016,4,2,0,30,1,0
424932,348.837209302326,4,2,0,5,1,0
425804,348.837209302326,4,2,0,5,1,0
473245,355.029585798817,4,2,0,5,1,0
478519,352.941176470588,4,2,0,30,1,0
478903,352.381511716685,4,2,0,30,1,0

Anxient wrote:

remember when i said that i was gonna mod this map?
yep.

btw~
BEFORE WE GET TO THE MOD, heres my play of the song.
my replay: (please watch it LMAO) http://puu.sh/mVtly/c0f74e76b4.osr

fix tags for (t+pazolite

2015
00:18:996 (5,6,7,8) - i think you should add 1/2 notes here to reflect "End Time". feels empty here. if you insist on having the singletap feel, at least put sliders. Im following the vocal here and it feels like the original map
00:39:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a friendly reminder for you to make perfect squares ^^ These are perfect o.O
00:47:758 (3) - i expected more spacing coz of emphasis lmao. I can emphasize it but 00:48:072 (5,6,7,8) - these notes need a lot more emphasize and I cant do this for both
00:58:752 (1) - because of momentum caused by the previous note, i think it would be better to place this in the left side of the playboard http://puu.sh/mV7al/d9ef230607.jpg Nah, but I changed this slider into a snail slider
01:00:873 - silence sliderend Sure
01:16:030 (1) - make this slider curved. plays better and feels less stiff and more woosh http://puu.sh/mV7fV/308691d61f.jpg Okay
01:56:726 (3,4,5,6) - just make it a normal supershort stream man ;a; this looks hideous NOPE, I LOVE THIS STREAM, anyways nerfed previous notes in orger to make it easier to aim
02:11:869 (3) - this should be more spaced coz emphasis http://puu.sh/mV7nC/3d4b74fb8d.jpg i dont need an emphasize between 02:11:583 (2,3) - since im doing it on 02:11:869 (3,4,5) - and your solution has a terrible flow
02:17:869 (4,5) - ctrl g so that 02:18:155 (1) - gets the emphasis it deserves ^
02:22:726 - add a hitcircle Actually, this is a really nice idea
02:22:797 - start spinner here ^
02:56:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl g coz the piano is on a low tone. so the stream goes down. I don't follow the piano here, man
03:06:614 (3,4,5,6) - perfect squares pls Idk how I made this, thanks ^^
03:08:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - place these somewhere else so that the emphasis is clear Somewhere else? Emphasize? That's a different sound and pattern (also on 1/6). There's no reason to emphasize it with previous combos.
04:19:589 (7) - why is this a 3/4 slider? make it 1/2. Okay
im gonna ignore the gangsta part coz i freaking hate that song.

06:42:711 (1,4) - stack properly Stacked. If you mean snap then its snapped to the next bpm point
06:45:006 - try adding a triple. its a nice touch, and the beat for it exists. Naah, I dont feel it
06:50:251 (7,8) - woah dont do this. http://puu.sh/mVsBp/e517fbfcb3.jpg try this instead. the antijump is a SUPER bad idea. Normally I wouldn't do this but since its Hollow Wings style I want to keep it
06:51:563 (6,1) - why stop the players movement? place this somewhere else. make the player move around! its the climax of the song. Remapped this part
07:12:780 (1) - ctrl g for emphasis. or space out more. No need
08:02:426 (1,2,3,4) - reverse the starting point of the sliders. plays aLOT better like this. http://puu.sh/mVsI8/c76c761f86.jpg. recommended. Okay
08:03:131 (1,2,3,4) - on HW's version, she used this pattern on the beginning of the song. So i recommend you to use the pattern in the link, since she uses this pattern on the ending of the song. also forces the player to move more, since this is the climax of the song.http://puu.sh/mVsK3/25dd4d9826.jpg Changed it even more
08:03:836 (1,2,3,4) - this stays tho, coz variety. but if you wanna change it to the above, it also works. ^
08:16:522 (8) - make this slider faster than the others for aesthetics. use the taiko editor to do this. change the map mode to taiko and change the SV from there. YASH, I DIDNT KNOW IT WAS POSSIBLE
08:16:522 (8) - ^ just think hollow wings when she mapped this part. she made the slider faster than the others right? YASH, FASTER FASTER
08:20:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - now this is a pattern i havent seen in a VERY long time. FASTER
08:26:741 (1,2,3,4,1) - make it more spaced! speed speed speed! FASTER FASTER FASTER! Actually, star rating goes crazy on these notes so I won't change them
08:32:731 - add spinner :^) Sure

this map made me go back in time tbh. so many different styles of mapping, from symmetry to other stuff. nice work with this map!
seriously fun shit right here.

Mindwaves wrote:

hey There.
Here's some random shitty nitpicking mods, cause i would really like to see this go for rank since i love the song(or is it the songs? First world problem right here)

01:12:260 (1,2,3,4) - Kind off a weird placement here, i feel putting them above the slider instead of under flow way better, very personal opinion here. Hmm, its possible but not really necessary
01:27:339 (1) - Spinner should start 1/4 sooner to follow the song perfectly I'll start him 1/2 sooner. Its really hard to tell the exact time when it starts
02:21:869 (6) - reverse the starting point of the sliders for symmetry? It was symmetric anyways but ok
02:42:184 (1) - Spinner should should end 1/4 later to follow the song perfectly
02:53:793 (2) - make this slider curved, plays better and feels more natural Just a little bit
02:54:363 (4) - same thing as above ^
03:08:893 (1) - new combo to follow the songs better? Sure
03:28:853 (5) - make this slider curved? i feel it emphasis more with the song. Nah
05:13:598 (4) - make this slider curved a little upward, plays better and feels more natural I cant because of 05:14:059 (5,6) - these and I cant curve it downward because of 05:12:675 (1) - this slider
05:37:944 (3,4) - I really feel like reversing these two position flow way better and emphasis more with the song, but very personal opinion here too I want to keep the rotative motion here
06:11:528 (5) - Hum why is this a new combo? seem kinda weird. Fixed
06:11:620 (1) - Spinner shoud start 1/8 sooner to follow the song perfectly Sure
06:22:088 - Till 06:53:202 - i find the HitSound a Little too Loud on this entire section. try reducing there volume by 5-10%? Decreased volume on Demetori part by 5%
06:53:038 (4,1) - Remplace these Two by a slider. Flow way better, and emphasis more with the song. I don't think so. I want to emphasize the last note
06:53:284 (1) - Spinner shoud end 1/8 later to follow the song perfectly its snapped on a white tick...
07:23:943 (5,6,7,8,9) - Try something like this instead? http://puu.sh/mVBhd/1159255b9d.jpgmay seem random, but I feel it's emphasis Way more with the song. I love this stream and it looks more interesting to play
08:10:531 (4) - Add Clap Hitsound? Im adding claps on 1/2 in this song
08:11:236 (4) - Same ^
08:11:941 (4) - Same ^
08:11:941 (4) - Same ^



Hope at least some of it help!


EDIT: Oh and yeah don't change the end to much, it's already the hardest part of the map

Delk wrote:

Hi! just one small suggestion. Add on be aware of a dot that says: Hollow Wings like suicidal ending. It is WAY more difficult than the entirity of the map

E n d wrote:

Am I the only one that finds the Hollow Wings part easier than the worldwide choppers/gangsta part
Either way great map and amazing storyboard glad to see it going for rank

zshadowjon wrote:

mod

00:18:996 (5,6,7,8) - might look nicer if it was like before ( 00:13:659 (1,2,3,4) - ) Why? I want to use different patterns to make this map more interesting
addition to ^, 00:18:996 (5) - should be a NC because 00:13:659 (1) - was Sure

00:30:669 (7) - weird placement because of 00:30:169 (4) - . would be better if it was stacked on (4) I've changed this pattern way too many times. Now it should look better

00:49:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i watched some people play this pattern (as well as play myself) and it looks un-belonging i guess... why not do something like 00:47:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but spread out more to keep constancy Remapped this part

01:14:459 (1) - slider's curve looks a bit off Fixed

01:38:440 (2) - ^ and fix the blanket please Idk how to blanket that but I tried my best

01:39:869 (3) - spacing looks off a bit Its for emphasize

01:52:726 (2) - red beat after this is audible enough to map, why not? It sounds better for me and also its for ephasize

02:59:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is really compact and doesn't look so good considering its in the kiai... change it? something like this looks good Too compact? Its 211 BPM deathstream! Just image how hard it would be if I space it more.
03:05:902 (6) - no need for this Why not? I like it

03:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same as before stream problem, space it out Same as above

04:09:374 (4) - curvy slider looks un-belonging after 2 of them in a row USA USA USA TEI TEI TEI Ok. It will look better I guess

04:47:758 (9) - fix curve Yeah, it looks bad

05:27:329 (5) - doesnt belong Why not? I like 05:27:213 (4,5) - this little jump on this legendary gangsta sentence

05:40:540 (3) - this second note in this note note slider pattern seems to make sense but it's questionable whether it's audible enough to play.. consider removing but your decision entirely on this It is audible imo

06:33:759 (3,4,5) - based on last triplet, it doesn't work well. deleting 06:33:843 (4) - seems to work very well I used it before and its the same pattern as in the ranked one

07:09:292 (3,4,5,6) - why is this a square, but 07:10:687 (3,4,5,6) - and the following patten are completely different... changing it into something like 07:10:687 (3,4,5,6) - flows better As I said before I want to use different patterns. About the flow it keeps rotative motion so its fine imo

08:18:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streams looks bad (sorry). mostly it's because of 08:18:900 (4,5,6) - , try looking at HW's genryuu kaiko once more and then remapping that stream Yup, remapped this part

i have to say this was a really short mod, but there's a reason for that

i loved this map so much, i really wish you luck with it

holy crud this was way harder than i thought it would be! genryuu kaiko and the 2 gangsta mix were the hardest for me :3

Exile- wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4892052

RIP THIS MAP

1. 00:08:323 (1) - If I move it to x376 y240 it fits perefectly with the storyboard?
2. 00:31:002 (1) - If you reduce it to the previous white tick it would sound more natural
3. 00:45:559 (1) - I would maybe reduce SV to 0.60 the same as you did 00:44:616 (1) - here, would give more impact to 00:45:873 (1) -
4. 00:58:752 (1) - Add soft at the end ?
5. 01:00:637 (3,1) - ^
6. 01:03:150 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:27:182 (1) - Why this song has only a spinner? XD
8. 01:43:012 (2) - I find the shape a bit tricky to add a reverse on it
9. 02:43:252 (1) - I find a bit tricky to start a stream right after a spinner tbh :c
10. 02:54:078 (3) - Add NC for readability
11. 03:06:614 (3,4,5,6) - Don't if it's supposed to be a square but if it is, it feels unbalanced.
12. 03:07:754 (1) - About this part I know you want to stay constant with your comboing, but it does need a new combo every 2 sliders (like make them go by 2) it will improve readability a lot!
13. 03:53:040 (3) - Um... Not sure to understand it, I think there should be only a note on reck tick
14. 03:56:038 (1) - Love the storyboard on this section xD
15. 04:05:118 (1) - Stack it properly with 04:04:266 (2) - would look neater
16. 04:20:582 (6) - I don't find the flow of the reverse that great :c
17. 05:49:599 (1) - Cool SB
18. 06:42:711 (1) - ^ looks awesome until the really end 06:53:284 (1) -
19. 07:58:519 (1) - wo, I would actually see a real slow down here instead. Would give way more impact on the following then it would be less tricky to play..

Yales wrote:

Hello, M4M!
[The world]

1. 00:08:323 (1) - If I move it to x376 y240 it fits perefectly with the storyboard? It fits perfectly with the storyboard in the game
2. 00:31:002 (1) - If you reduce it to the previous white tick it would sound more natural Ok
3. 00:45:559 (1) - I would maybe reduce SV to 0.60 the same as you did 00:44:616 (1) - here, would give more impact to 00:45:873 (1) - Sure, idk if it looks good tho
4. 00:58:752 (1) - Add soft at the end ? Sure! I didn't know this trick. I was always silencing it
5. 01:00:637 (3,1) - ^ ^
6. 01:03:150 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 01:27:182 (1) - Why this song has only a spinner? XD Spinner fits here and this map doesn't have that many breaks. and this guy sings poorly
8. 01:43:012 (2) - I find the shape a bit tricky to add a reverse on it Yeah, I didn't like it either because of the flow. Fixed
9. 02:43:252 (1) - I find a bit tricky to start a stream right after a spinner tbh :c Its fine...
10. 02:54:078 (3) - Add NC for readability Sure
11. 03:06:614 (3,4,5,6) - Don't if it's supposed to be a square but if it is, it feels unbalanced. This pattern again... xD, now its a PERFECT square
12. 03:07:754 (1) - About this part I know you want to stay constant with your comboing, but it does need a new combo every 2 sliders (like make them go by 2) it will improve readability a lot! Combos should follow the rhythm of the song. Here im following the lyrics and these sequences are starting every 3rd slider so I wont change that
13. 03:53:040 (3) - Um... Not sure to understand it, I think there should be only a note on reck tick I can clearly hear 2 beats here, even 3 of them but the last one is not audible enough
14. 03:56:038 (1) - Love the storyboard on this section xD ^_^
15. 04:05:118 (1) - Stack it properly with 04:04:266 (2) - would look neater Sure
16. 04:20:582 (6) - I don't find the flow of the reverse that great :c As long as it creates the angle of 90 degrees with 04:20:440 (5) - this note
17. 05:49:599 (1) - Cool SB
18. 06:42:711 (1) - ^ looks awesome until the really end 06:53:284 (1) - Whats wrong with the end?
19. 07:58:519 (1) - wo, I would actually see a real slow down here instead. Would give way more impact on the following then it would be less tricky to play.. Changing this for now although the faster one feels better for me

That's it, not that big of a mod but the map is pretty clean already and the storyboard is really cool too! *-*
Check AiMod there's something about the storyboard by the way. I know, i know ^_^

Good luck ><

Exile- wrote:

Delk wrote:

Hi! just one small suggestion. Add on be aware of a dot that says: Hollow Wings like suicidal ending. It is WAY more difficult than the entirity of the map

E n d wrote:

Am I the only one that finds the Hollow Wings part easier than the worldwide choppers/gangsta part
Either way great map and amazing storyboard glad to see it going for rank

Some parts might be easier for others and some harder. Depends on skill.
Would you like to tell me which patterns are the most difficult for you?

Delk wrote:

I think that you are doing something good while inspiring the mapstyle from those original maps, but in comparission with Hollow Wing's original map or BD's, those sections feel unpolished. I think that you could ask HW permission to copy the exact placement of the section of genryuu you are mapping (since you are not mapping anything from plasma), of course that can't be done with pensamento tipico de worldwide choppers since you map both ends

Exile- wrote:

Delk wrote:

I think that you are doing something good while inspiring the mapstyle from those original maps, but in comparission with Hollow Wing's original map or BD's, those sections feel unpolished. I think that you could ask HW permission to copy the exact placement of the section of genryuu you are mapping (since you are not mapping anything from plasma), of course that can't be done with pensamento tipico de worldwide choppers since you map both ends

I don't wanna copy anything. I didn't create this map as a complication of the original ones but as my own map.
If it looks unpolished then I'll try my best to improve it.
That's why im trying to get mods.

Delk wrote:

Allright, other than that the map and sb is really, reaaaaally good! I play it daily twice

Exile- wrote:

Delk wrote:

Allright, other than that the map and sb is really, reaaaaally good! I play it daily twice

Thanks! ^_^

Be sure to update it from time to time.
It's almost completed but scripting takes a lot of time with my laziness.

Extra

Fun, but harder than everything else, maybe this should be a biiit less spaced. I know it's inspired by the HW diff, but her diff is like 6,6*