TheRandomBeat wrote:

Gonna shoot a star cause why not


My stars are collecting dust anyway, and I have given up on mapping (not enough time cuz school) so here u go!

Good luck on this map! (Pretty sure I've said this b4.,, )

Nathan Kiss wrote:

hey, from my modding queue

[Normal]

1. 00:10:106 - This would play better if you had a clickable object on this beat imo. what about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/mHC2Z/d84212b4e5.jpg.
   If you plan doing this add a NC on 6 Done
2. 00:11:695 - Add a 1/2 slider here. You mapped the drums at 00:12:291 (1) but completely neglected the sound here. I does play better to have the 1/2 slider mapped there and there doesnt feel like an awkward pause either Done
3. I think the break could be mapped especially since its only a 1:30 min song a break with a lot of music playing doesnt seem right but hey its up to you
4. 00:26:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce the note density here. Its much higher here than at 00:28:185 (1,2,3,4) even though there are both the same. It does play sort of weir because of that Done
5. 00:27:192 (3,1) - Dont do this overlap, its not pretty Moved :p
6. 00:28:185 (1,3) - ^ ^
7. 00:29:973 and 00:30:371 - I think you should map theses beats since theyre quite strong Mapped :p
8. 00:32:159 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - You dont need this many NCs Removed NC
9. 00:34:543 (1,2,3) - I''d recommend you to make into a reverse slider, patterns like this are hard for beginners Done
10. 00:35:338 (1,2,3,4) - I have a suggestion for the change of rhythm here ---> http://puu.sh/mHCxZ/11bae0cbaf.jpg
    This follows the vocals and the drums and it also maps really strong beats like 00:37:126. The beat at 00:37:920 is very important imo since there is a loud finish here. I like it, Thanks :p
11. 00:41:298 (3,5) - Delete these notes. Again, these patterns are very hard to play for beginners and it would emphasize the strong hit on 00:41:497 (3). Changed to sliders, more easy for begginers
12. 00:42:689 (5) - How about turning this into a 1/2 slider? If you do this add a circle on 00:43:285 aswell I added the circle but i preffer my 00:42:689 (5)
13. 00:43:881 - I strongly, strongly, strongly recommend that you map this beat. You've mapped all the other white ticks in this section and missing this one feels empty I changed that into a reverse slider
14. 00:45:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you should remap the rhythm for this pattern. Its just too hard for a beginner to follow Changed into a slider
15. 00:49:841 (4,5) - do this? http://puu.sh/mHD12/737b8c9253.jpg
    Turning (4) into a reverse slider follows the vocals better it also maps strong beats like 00:50:238 and 00:51:033.Done
16. 00:51:430 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - You dont this this many NCs Removed some NCs
17. 00:55:007 (1) - Strongly recommend changing the rhythm here. The circles make it incredibly difficult for beginners. I recommend this http://puu.sh/mHDal/e94a1674cf.jpg Yes i have 0 ideas to that beat, your idea really helped me, thanks :'D
    You dont need clickable objects on minor beats like these 00:55:603 (2,4,6)
18. 00:59:973 (1) - Move to 00:59:775 I added other circle like this: http://puu.sh/mImQQ/9499799c9c.jpg
19. 01:00:967 (3,4) - turn these into a 1/2 slider Done
20. 01:01:563 (5) - shorten this slider to 01:02:159 Done :p
21. 01:02:556 and 01:02:954 - Map these 2 beats please. It feels empty unmapped uuh it's seems a bit weird but okay, if i dislike that i going to remove it :p
22. 01:09:311 - Same as above I preffer my pattern
23. 01:09:907 (1) - this would be hard to read for a beginner Is only a reverse slider xD nothing "hard"
24. 01:13:086 (1,2,3,4) - Changed into a reverse sider
25. 01:14:477 - add a 1/1 slider here I like it, okey
26. 01:15:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You started mapping the drums but then suddenly stopped to map the vocals. Keep with the drums all the way http://puu.sh/mHDC8/56023bf0fa.jpg Changed
27. 01:19:245 (3,4) - ctrl + g these objects. Highly recommend you make 01:20:040 clickable since 01:20:834 (5) is. I make that part like 01:15:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (with a liittle bit change on the end of the pattern)
    
    I didnt mention the DS (Distance Snap) for the individual notes since its very inconsistent through out. You can read up about DS here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Distance_Snap#A ... e_Snapping
    You also dont need to have NC spammed just to map vocals, it messes up the hp drain that way. Confirmed, I'm bad with the DS D: , thanks for the liink , it's really hellp me

[Insane]

1. 00:08:715 (1,2,3) - The decrease in DS plays sort of weird for me, increase it. Changed to 0,9x
2. 00:13:086 (1) - it would be better to have this as a triplet and a slider http://puu.sh/mHE3v/d2660de43f.jpg
   Having a clickable object on is important imo Done
3. 00:15:470 (2,3) - ctrl + g . Follows the rhythm better Better, Done
4. 00:17:457 (1,2,3) - This part is under mapped. There is no need to decrease the amount of notes hereIt Feels better with these notes only :p
5. 00:22:424 (4) - add a circle Added
6. 00:24:013 (4) - Turn this into a slider like 00:22:821 (3) Done
7. 00:36:927 (1) - Sliders like these arent pretty and just end up looking weird. Make it a normal 3 point slider Prefer my slider
8. 00:39:709 - Add a circle here. VERY strong beat Added
9. 00:42:887 - ^ ^
10. 00:50:238 - add a circle here maybe? Yep, Look good
11. 00:56:596 (5) - This long slider breaks up the flow alot for an Insane. Break it up into smaller sliders and circles Changed into 2 sliders (more fastest sliders)
12. 01:08:517 (2) - -^ Done
13. 01:21:629 (1) - add circle here then place the spinner after http://puu.sh/mHExE/d079cba63c.jpg I preffer that without thee circle :p
    I think you should try to follow the vocals less in certain parts overall

Well thats all from me, I hope this mod was helpful, GL! Really, THANKS ,your mod is so helpful to me , really Thanks xD

TurtleStuffs wrote:

Amazing! Music is awesome, not many mistakes, good luck with ranking this!

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00:58:583 (2) - Center this more between previous and next object Ok

Kyousuke:
Could change circle size to 4.5 Nah

I am probably a horrible modder for only finding two mistakes but it's probably because the map is awesome! (or both)

Electoz wrote:

Here's some useful links that you should get to them :
Some technical words. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Glossary
Some general knowledge about mapping that you should know. > p/4763558/
Some rules and guidelines about mapping. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
Guidelines for each difficulties. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
Mapping techniques, this is mostly for Hard and higher difficulties. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques
Okay that should be enough.

IRC

18:32 Chekito: hey
18:32 Electoz: ok
18:32 Electoz: gimme a sec
18:32 Chekito: Im here for the in-game mod :p
18:33 Chekito: oh, no problem
18:33 Electoz: I'm applying mods for my map
18:36 Chekito: um, i really prefer a forum mod
18:38 Electoz: why's that?
18:38 Electoz: no offense, just curious
18:40 Chekito: I feel better in the forum but no matter xD
18:41 Chekito: (Sorry if my english is bad and inconsistent :( )
18:41 Electoz: well
18:41 Electoz: can't denied that
18:41 Chekito: xD
18:41 Electoz: as if it's in forum you can always take your time with a mod
18:42 Chekito: yeah
18:43 Chekito: well, let me know wen you're ready
18:43 Electoz: btw
18:43 Electoz: I was wondering
18:43 Electoz: why you named the highest diff as kyousuke
18:44 Electoz: well I can understand that the highest diff can have a custom name
18:44 Electoz: but why kyousuke?
18:44 Chekito: because in the anime/visual novel
18:44 Chekito: he is the most important character
18:44 Electoz: well
18:44 Electoz: just my opinion
18:44 Electoz: but I think refrain sounds much better tbh
18:44 Electoz: up to you
18:45 Chekito: yea i was thinking it
18:45 Chekito: probably i gonna change the name
18:45 Electoz: If I remembered correctly
18:45 Electoz: my friend modded your map
18:45 Electoz: lemme read his mod a bit
18:46 Chekito: who is your friend?
18:46 Electoz: nathan kiss
18:46 Chekito: oh
18:46 Chekito: yea, he help me a lot
18:47 Chekito: and, why your sugestion is "refrain"? (to the diff name)
18:48 Electoz: well
18:48 Electoz: as for my experience with vn maps
18:48 Electoz: I rarely see a highest diff with a character name
18:48 Electoz: even there's a diff with a character name
18:48 Chekito: ...but, why "refrain"
18:48 Electoz: I think that character must really stand out in the vn
18:49 Electoz: and I feel like
18:49 Electoz: kyousuke is sth like a "side-kick" character in vn
18:49 Electoz: and riki doesn't give much feeling of a protagonist either
18:49 Electoz: well, he is
18:49 Electoz: but
18:49 Chekito: xD
18:49 Electoz: well you know
18:49 Electoz: lol
18:49 Chekito: yea
18:49 Electoz: so I was thinking like
18:50 Chekito: but, "refrain" because is the name of the anime?
18:50 Electoz: if a diff's name is a route or something that most people will recognize immediately, that will be much better
18:50 Chekito: Because this is not Little busters Refraiin opening o.o
18:50 Electoz: mostly I think of refrain as a vn
18:50 Electoz: well, it's a climax route
18:51 Chekito: I like it , but i can't relate that with this
18:51 Electoz: hmmmm
18:52 Chekito: let's me thing later
18:52 Electoz: well, tbh if the highest diff's not a character names then there's not much a good name to think of imo
18:52 Electoz: cuz little busters didn't really gives off sth cool in terms of names
18:52 Chekito: xD
18:53 Electoz: okay
18:53 Chekito: well, we are here for the mod
18:53 Electoz: now
18:53 Electoz: back to modding
18:53 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/869781 Rita - Little Busters! [Normal]]
18:53 Electoz: I'll go with this first
18:53 Chekito: Okay
18:53 Electoz: hmm
18:53 Electoz: I see that
18:53 Electoz: nathan provided you a link
18:54 Electoz: about ds
18:54 Electoz: did you use it in Normal?
18:54 Chekito: Not already
18:54 Electoz: already?
18:55 Chekito: I need to learn how to use DS properly
18:55 Electoz: well
18:55 Electoz: that's obviously
18:55 Electoz: the most important step for Easy/Normal
18:56 Electoz: well, if most people learned about it
18:56 Chekito: :c
18:56 Electoz: they'll have to remap the entire diff
18:56 Electoz: looks like this is probably the case as well
18:56 Chekito: probably xD
18:57 Electoz: so I'll go some general comments rather than placement and stuff
18:57 Electoz: cuz you have to remap it anyway
18:58 Chekito: I had already recommended by a mod
18:59 Chekito: but i want to keep my normal diff
18:59 Chekito: for now
18:59 Chekito: (i'm gonna remap it anyway)
18:59 Electoz: well
18:59 Electoz: it's good to keep it isn't it?
18:59 Electoz: it's really hard for a new mappers to learn the basics
18:59 Electoz: cuz people just don't like giving mods to new mappers
19:00 Electoz: oh well how did I sidetrack this
19:00 Electoz: lmao
19:00 Electoz: okay
19:00 Chekito: yeah, it's hard
19:00 Chekito: xD
19:00 Electoz: starting from
19:00 Electoz: 00:12:689 - why did you put a break here?
19:00 Electoz: If I remembered correctly
19:00 Electoz: there's a ranked map that did put a break here
19:00 Electoz: but it's kinda olddd mappp
19:00 Electoz: *an old map
19:00 Chekito: I was following the vocals
19:01 Chekito: lol really?
19:01 Chekito: i didn't see the old maps of this song
19:01 Electoz: uh
19:01 Electoz: looks like
19:01 Chekito: well, only one
19:01 Electoz: yeah, my head messed up
19:01 Electoz: cuz I played an op for refrain as well
19:01 Electoz: oh whatever lol
19:02 Electoz: thing is
19:02 Chekito: o.o
19:02 Electoz: mapping based on vocal only doesn't give the best rhythm
19:03 Electoz: as for easier difficulties, map on instruments like drum or guitar is much better
19:03 Chekito: oh yeah i know that
19:03 Electoz: of course you can map on vocal
19:03 Electoz: but only when it's really dominant
19:03 Electoz: depends on each part of the song
19:03 Chekito: hm not vocal at all but
19:03 Chekito: i need to put a break anyway
19:03 Chekito: or not?
19:04 Electoz: hmm I don't think it's a big issue for now
19:04 Electoz: if people just complain about it then you can just map it
19:04 Electoz: nothing that serious
19:04 Chekito: okay i'm gonna keep it
19:04 Chekito: okey
19:05 Electoz: some tips for mapping on instruments
19:05 Electoz: 00:07:722 (2) - here for example
19:05 Electoz: you can see that the end of that slider there's a guitar there
19:05 Chekito: hyes
19:05 Chekito: yes*
19:05 Electoz: while the head of that slider has a weaker sound
19:05 Electoz: so the stronger sound
19:05 Electoz: should be clickable
19:06 Electoz: this is for a better emphasis
19:06 Electoz: 00:29:576 (3) - long slider like these, which you're following the vocal
19:06 Chekito: hm but , really, i want to learn some patterns
19:06 Chekito: to help me in that cases
19:07 Electoz: you can cut it off to a shorter sliders and map on some guitar there
19:07 Electoz: patterns?
19:07 Chekito: yes
19:07 Electoz: hmmm
19:07 Electoz: that word
19:07 Electoz: is really wide in terms of meaning
19:07 Electoz: can you explain it more pls?
19:07 Chekito: hm
19:07 Chekito: like, more options
19:07 Chekito: combinations
19:08 Chekito: uh
19:08 Electoz: you mean like
19:08 Electoz: placement, visual appearance
19:08 Electoz: something like that?
19:08 Electoz: *placement/visual appearance of the objects
19:08 Chekito: For things are not repeated
19:09 Chekito: no no, keep out visual appearance
19:09 Electoz: things are not repeated?
19:09 Chekito: for example
19:09 Chekito: 00:07:722 (2) -
19:10 Chekito: if in that slider i want the end was clickable
19:11 Chekito: uh anyway continue xD
19:11 Chekito: It's hard to me to explain it in english xD
19:12 Electoz: grr
19:12 Electoz: I don't really want to push this aside tho
19:12 Electoz: did you mean
19:13 Chekito: ?
19:13 Electoz: oh well
19:13 Electoz: I can't find my words either
19:13 Electoz: LOL
19:13 Chekito: HAHA
19:14 Chekito: we are bad x'D, continue plz it's getting hilarious
19:15 Electoz: 01:09:907 (1) - We don't see repeat sliders with 2 reverses or more nowadays, in Easy and Normal
19:15 Electoz: Because it's confusing for beginners
19:15 Electoz: oh hey I got an idea
19:16 Chekito: tell me it
19:16 Electoz: type what you wanted to know in spanish
19:16 Electoz: in google translate
19:16 Electoz: then copy it, I might get sth from there
19:16 Chekito: i waas doing that
19:16 Electoz: lol
19:16 Electoz: LMAO
19:16 Chekito: LOL
19:16 Chekito: the translation is bad
19:17 Chekito: very vad
19:17 Chekito: bad*
19:17 Electoz: Well, not much to talk about Normal, since it's only about rhythm and DS stuff
19:17 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/884522 Rita - Little Busters! [Hard]]
19:17 Electoz: lemme test it for a min
19:19 Chekito: oh, I just completed that
19:19 Chekito: 31 minutes ago
19:19 Chekito: x'D probably that needs a lot of mod
19:19 Chekito: *or not Kappa*
19:19 Chekito: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/15496 old maps are insulting my diff names (?
19:20 Electoz: lol
19:20 Electoz: well it's an old map
19:20 Electoz: also
19:20 Electoz: Rin doesn't only related to little busters only
19:20 Electoz: but also related to the creator as well
19:20 Chekito: If i put the last name :DDD
19:20 Chekito: okay no
19:20 Electoz: please
19:21 Electoz: lol
19:21 Chekito: XDDDD
19:21 Electoz: my modding is kinda lazy
19:21 Electoz: so
19:21 Electoz: I'll point out some stuff so you can get some ideas from it
19:21 Chekito: okay
19:21 Electoz: rather than pointing out everything
19:22 Electoz: well, I'm not nathan at the very least
19:22 Electoz: that guy has too much energy
19:22 Electoz: he doesn't even tired when he finished modding
19:22 Chekito: XD
19:22 Chekito: and his mods are good
19:22 Chekito: and helpful
19:23 Electoz: in my opinion his mod is a bit gamble for new mappers
19:23 Electoz: if you learned something from his mod, then it's worth it
19:23 Electoz: if you just fixed what he mentioned without thinking
19:23 Chekito: xD
19:23 Electoz: then it's just nothing but a nazi mod
19:23 Electoz: 00:02:159 (3,4,5) - Okay, here goes
19:24 Electoz: 00:02:159 (3,4) - You can see that between these two circles, have a 1/2 beat spacing
19:24 Chekito: i feel that's a little bit weird every time i play it
19:24 Electoz: 00:02:358 (4,5) - And this has a 1/1 spacing
19:24 Electoz: generally
19:24 Electoz: 00:02:358 (4,5) - The spacing here should be bigger than 00:02:159 (3,4) - 
19:24 Electoz: because they have a different beat spacing
19:25 Chekito: yes i know it and i'm changing it
19:25 Electoz: ok
19:25 Chekito: hm how spacing i need?
19:25 Electoz: Depends on your preference
19:25 Electoz: generally in Hard
19:26 Electoz: we still use DS often
19:26 Electoz: but we won't use it when we want to do jumps/patterns etc.
19:26 Electoz: 00:04:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
19:26 Chekito: yeah but i mean if it's better to use 1,2x or 1x
19:26 Chekito: like that
19:26 Electoz: hmmm
19:27 Electoz: I think
19:27 Electoz: it depends on the mapper themselves
19:27 Electoz: try it out and you'll see what suits the best
19:27 Chekito: okay
19:27 Electoz: 00:04:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, about this thing
19:28 Electoz: 00:04:940 (1,2,3,4) - The first four circles here, has a guitar landed on them
19:28 Electoz: while the fifth one doesn't have a guitar on it
19:28 Electoz: so it gives off a weird feeling when you click on 00:05:735 (5) - 
19:29 Chekito: hm, that's to add more rhythm
19:29 Electoz: try not to include other objects in the same pattern if they aren't following the same thing
19:29 Electoz: for this case
19:29 Electoz: you may just change 00:05:536 (4) - to a slider
19:29 Electoz: or maybe
19:29 Chekito: okay
19:30 Electoz: you can just place 00:05:735 (5) - somewhere that isn't in the pattern
19:30 Chekito: hm
19:30 Chekito: I'm going to erase that 5
19:30 Electoz: so the players can recognize that this thing isn't following the guitar
19:30 Electoz: up to you
19:30 Chekito: but without the slider in 00:05:536 (4) -
19:30 Electoz: yeah
19:31 Chekito: okay done
19:32 Chekito: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413308
19:32 Chekito: and i changed the ds to 1,1x
19:32 Electoz: 00:32:755 (4,5) - Just a nazi stuff
19:32 Electoz: but
19:32 Electoz: blanket properly pls
19:32 Electoz: lol
19:32 Chekito: lol
19:32 Chekito: i didn't see that
19:32 Chekito: Now is weird
19:32 Electoz: 00:33:947 (1,3) - And you can go for a symmetry here
19:32 Electoz: you can make them pararell
19:33 Chekito: yes
19:33 Chekito: I do tat
19:33 Chekito: that*
19:33 Electoz: 00:33:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The combo
19:33 Electoz: is kinda long
19:33 Electoz: can you just put an NC somewhere?
19:33 Chekito: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413311
19:33 Chekito: Better now?
19:33 Electoz: better
19:34 Chekito: yeah i want put a nc but where
19:35 Electoz: What is your criteria for putting an NC?
19:35 Chekito: hm
19:35 Electoz: some people
19:35 Electoz: put an NC every 2 downbeats
19:35 Electoz: while some put an NC on every stanza
19:35 Electoz: it depends on mapper
19:36 Chekito: I put a NC when i think is good
19:36 Electoz: instinct?
19:36 Chekito: yes
19:36 Chekito: I know that's bad but
19:37 Chekito: is my style
19:37 Electoz: oh well, then I guess I can't complain about it anymore
19:37 Electoz: the biggest problem is
19:37 Electoz: just to make sure that "your style" is understandable and acceptable by most people
19:38 Electoz: alright, let's move on
19:38 Chekito: hm
19:38 Chekito: I use the NC when the followpoints  are visible
19:39 Electoz: 00:37:523 (13,1) - 
19:39 Chekito: or when i hear a new beat
19:39 Electoz: 00:46:662 (6,1) - 
19:39 Chekito: 00:35:536 (1) -  probably here
19:39 Electoz: these two I pointed out above
19:39 Electoz: well, up to you
19:39 Electoz: about the NC stugg
19:39 Electoz: *stuff
19:40 Chekito: hm
19:40 Electoz: ok, shall we move on?
19:40 Chekito: ok
19:40 Electoz: 00:37:523 (13,1) - Here is the between stanzas
19:40 Electoz: and you left some spaces there because there's no vocal
19:41 Electoz: I strongly recommend you
19:41 Chekito: follow the bg sounds?
19:41 Electoz: to map something there, follow the instruments there is fine too
19:41 Electoz: yeah
19:41 Electoz: 00:30:967 (1,2,3,4) - You did it here before
19:41 Chekito: lol
19:41 Chekito: is the same?
19:42 Electoz: Just the other parts don't have a guitar
19:42 Electoz: yeah
19:42 Chekito: *same sounds i mean*
19:42 Electoz: you can just follow the drums or sth
19:42 Chekito: lolz i really don't hear that
19:42 Electoz: if you're not sure where it's landed on
19:42 Electoz: just use the 25% speed thing
19:42 Chekito: I'm gonna do the same thing i do before
19:42 Chekito: oh yes i use it a lot
19:42 Chekito: i have 2 cases in this diff
19:43 Chekito: when i can't follow the vocals because is in a blue point
19:44 Chekito: Okay, done that
19:44 Electoz: 00:53:020 (2,3,4,5) - Just curious, but what you're following with these circles?
19:44 Electoz: *what are you
19:44 Electoz: rip English
19:44 Chekito: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413355
19:45 Chekito: XD rip english
19:45 Electoz: hmm
19:45 Electoz: sounds much better
19:45 Chekito: To add some rhythm, without notes there, the map gets boring
19:45 Chekito: and probably is not a good idea put sliders there
19:46 Electoz: true
19:46 Chekito: probably the 00:53:616 (5) -  is bad there
19:46 Electoz: hmmm
19:46 Chekito: It's better without the 5
19:46 Chekito: look it
19:47 Chekito: It'ss like the first part
19:47 Chekito: It's*
19:47 Chekito: 00:04:940 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:47 Electoz: yeah
19:47 Electoz: btw
19:47 Chekito: In your perspective
19:47 Electoz: 00:56:596 (1) - You have to leave a 1/1 space after the spinner
19:47 Chekito: 00:52:026 (2,3) -  this is a bad idea, no?
19:47 Electoz: in Hard
19:48 Electoz: hmmm
19:48 Electoz: actually
19:49 Electoz: it's pretty much about aesthetic stuff
19:49 Electoz: If I were mapping this
19:49 Electoz: I would make this a small jump 00:52:026 (2,3) - 
19:49 Electoz: 00:53:219 (3,4) - And this with a bit bigger jump, like 0.2 DS more than what I did above
19:49 Electoz: not sure if you'll really get my point cuz this is kinda complicated
19:50 Chekito: 00:52:026 (2,3) -  http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413367 like this?
19:50 Chekito: yeah i get it.
19:50 Chekito: like 1,6x DS?
19:50 Electoz: You don't have to follow what I say tho
19:51 Electoz: it's just a personal creativity
19:51 Electoz: *what I said
19:51 Chekito: 00:53:020 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413371
19:51 Electoz: rip English again
19:51 Chekito: But i like your creativity
19:51 Chekito: xDDD
19:53 Chekito: If I see that your opinions will improve the map, Im going to apply them
19:54 Electoz: This is roughly of what I think
19:54 Electoz: http://puu.sh/mLrr9/a81daa633a.jpg
19:55 Electoz: and then
19:55 Electoz: http://puu.sh/mLrsi/2d86a73833.jpg
19:55 Chekito: oooooh
19:55 Electoz: of course I changed that slider into a circle
19:55 Chekito: hmmmmmm
19:55 Chekito: I'm not sure
19:56 Electoz: thing is
19:56 Electoz: about the creativity stuff
19:56 Electoz: you should think about it by yourself
19:56 Electoz: so you would have your own "mindset"
19:56 Electoz: for different parts in the song
19:56 Electoz: well, it's kinda something that needs experience
19:57 Electoz: and takes some time to learn
19:57 Electoz: also
19:58 Electoz: I'm not a fan
19:58 Electoz: of lowering slider velocity on a high-pitch vocal
19:58 Chekito: hm
19:58 Electoz: in my opinion the vocal is high there, but it's not enough to call off for a change in slider velocity
19:58 Chekito: I use it only when is necesary
19:58 Electoz: up to you
19:58 Electoz: but I think someone might mention this later
19:59 Electoz: 00:56:596 (1) - Generally in some diffs, you have to leave some empty space after the spinner
19:59 Electoz: so the player could recover from the spinning
20:00 Electoz: in Hard, you have to leave at least 1 white tick
20:00 Electoz: to be considered rankable
20:00 Electoz: 2 for Normal, and 4 for Easy
20:00 Chekito: yes
20:00 Chekito: and if i erase that spiner
20:01 Electoz: putting a spinner in the middle of kiai
20:01 Electoz: is pretty uncommon
20:01 Chekito: ummmmm
20:01 Electoz: it would be easier
20:01 Electoz: if you could just map sth there
20:01 Electoz: instead of a spinner
20:01 Chekito: And what i do then?
20:02 Electoz: well, according to your style
20:02 Electoz: maybe a slider with lower velocity?
20:02 Electoz: like what you used to do before
20:02 Chekito: oh shit
20:02 Chekito: that's "my style" now? D: xD
20:02 Chekito: Really, i don't like very much the slow velocity sliders
20:02 Electoz: lmao
20:02 Chekito: XDDD
20:02 Electoz: up to you then
20:03 Chekito: but
20:03 Chekito: Normal sliders gets very longest
20:03 Chekito: It's feel weird S:
20:04 Electoz: 01:08:517 (2) - Then why you did it here lol
20:04 Electoz: if you don't like lowering velocity
20:04 Chekito: ................................................................
20:04 Electoz: lmao
20:04 Chekito: xD
20:04 Chekito: I don't like it
20:04 Chekito: but when it say necesary, i mean this
20:04 Chekito: I*
20:04 Chekito: (no it, I , rip english)
20:04 Electoz: there's a drum going on there
20:05 Electoz: if you think a slider is too long
20:05 Electoz: try breaking it off into shorter beats and follow the drums
20:05 Chekito: okay im gonna tr
20:05 Chekito: try
20:06 Chekito: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413402
20:06 Chekito: 01:08:517 -  better or not?
20:07 Chekito: (6 note too)
20:07 Electoz: much better
20:08 Chekito: :D
20:08 Electoz: when some beat gets longer
20:08 Electoz: you can always do it like this
20:08 Electoz: one of the useful common techniques ever
20:08 Chekito: Good to know :D
20:08 Electoz: 01:01:166 (4,5) - minor overlap lol
20:09 Chekito: and
20:09 Chekito: here
20:09 Chekito: 00:56:596 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413409
20:10 Chekito: try this
20:10 Chekito: It's look better for me
20:10 Chekito: (with 2 circles after the slider)
20:11 Electoz: up to you
20:11 Chekito: 01:01:166 (4,5) -  separated :p
20:11 Chekito: (done)
20:11 Electoz: lol
20:11 Electoz: ok
20:11 Electoz: so
20:11 Electoz: pretty much general stuff covered in Hard now
20:11 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/869183 Rita - Little Busters! [Kyousuke]]
20:11 Chekito: yes xD all of this is because i just finish this
20:11 Electoz: I'm not good at modding Insane though
20:11 Electoz: let see how we can go for this
20:13 Chekito: jaja okey
20:13 Chekito: :)
20:13 Electoz: meh
20:13 Electoz: well, it's all pretty much stuff I already mentioned
20:14 Chekito: :p
20:14 Electoz: and there's also something that needed to fix
20:14 Chekito: ds?
20:14 Electoz: but I'm not confident
20:14 Electoz: in modding it cuz it's insane
20:14 Electoz: I guess I'll throw some useful links in the forum then
20:14 Electoz: that way'd easier
20:14 Chekito: better for me
20:14 Chekito: :D
20:14 Electoz: lmao
20:15 Electoz: ok, so let's stop here for now
20:15 Electoz: I'll post in your thread soon

We did some general stuff about creativity and rhythms.

Cozaar wrote:

Kyousuke

- 00:24:808 (1,2,3,1,2) - i think this should be distance snapped like this to compliment the beat from my perspective http://s14.postimg.org/q10rfrw0h/screenshot2766.jpg to compliment the beat w/e Done :3
others i think its fine

Tatsumaki wrote:

hi

Last Hope:

00:07:523 (4) - This slider doesn't really end on a note. I would really stick to the pattern you've done here: 00:04:940 (1,2,3,4) - as the music is pretty much the same, and the current ones don't really fit well with the notes of the song. I like my pattern :p
00:08:914 (2) - Remove this circle. Have a sound in that beat S:
00:11:099 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:298 (6) - Move this circle half a beat ahead Done
00:52:026 (3) - Remove NC Ok (all NC's)
00:52:424 (5) - Add NC
00:53:020 (3) - ^
00:54:609 (4) - Remove NC
00:55:007 (6) - Add NC
00:56:596 (5,6) - I would suggest making these one huge slider, as there's no real note in the song that warrants two sliders and the vocals is just one continuous note. I changed it but to a better and consistent pattern
01:08:517 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:01:563 (1,1,2) - Going from this really slow slider to moderately spaced single taps is a little jarring to say the least, flow can absolutely be improved here. Changed speed to 0,75x
01:03:351 (1) - Add NC
01:03:748 (1) - Remove NC
01:04:543 (6) - Add NC
01:04:940 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:735 (6) - Add NC
01:06:132 (1) - Remove NC
01:06:927 (6) - Add NC
01:07:523 (1) - Remove NC
(These are all really important as the current state of these sections regarding combo colours is just a mess.)
01:15:271 (1) - Shorten this by 1/4th of a beat (end goes on blue tick) blue tick isn't good ;-;
01:18:450 (1) - ^ ^

Good luck

TheRandomBeat wrote:

Seen this many a time already, but I still don't know what the heck it means.

...

What's an NC?

Is it new combo?

Nathan Kiss wrote:

TheRandomBeat wrote:

Seen this many a time already, but I still don't know what the heck it means.

...

What's an NC?

Is it new combo?

yes

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play :D
[Last Hope]
NC on the long white tick, or special flow, dont NC on red tick or short white tick
00:04:742 - dont need to hitsound here.. sound weird Done
00:11:199 (1) - delete Ok
00:14:477 (1) - NC off Ok ALL NC's
00:16:861 (1) - ^
00:16:463 (3) - 68 140 Ok
00:17:060 (2,1) - bigger DS, 1/1 here not 1/2 :D Done
00:17:457 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:36:530 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:39:510 (3,4) - stick together xP Sure
00:49:046 (1) - NC off
00:52:424 (1) - ^
01:04:940 (1) - ^
01:06:927 (1) - ^
01:12:887 (5,1) - ^
01:15:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - dont match the vocal, is hard to play, match the music Hmmm i like it, anyway i'm gonna keep it

GL~ Thanks

dark_assassin16 wrote:

Normal
Nothing that I see is wrong here!

Hard
01:03:947 - Add a circle there to match up the vocals. Ok
01:05:139 - Also add another circle here. Ok

Last Hope
Nothing that I see is wrong here!

Nothing much is wrong here, except for some vocals but that's it.

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue

General

1. Normal is the only difficulty that has 2 Kiai times
2. Disable Letterbox In Breaks in all of your diffs Done
3. Idk but shouldn't Last Hope be harder than the Insane GD? eh )? uh okay

Normal

1. AR, OD and HP is too low Buffed
2. Ummm hey?

   Im gonna try to fix it xC
3. 00:06:927 (1,2,3) - Remove the extra sliderpoints on the middle of the slider Done
4. 00:10:106 (6) - NC Done
5. 00:26:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this rhythm instead Good idea, changed
6. 00:32:159 (1) - Remove this circle. You have to follow either the vocals or the drums. You're following both here Done
7. 00:33:351 - ^ ^
8. 00:32:358 (2) - No more than one repeat in Normal Ok (Done with all rof these)
9. 00:41:894 (4) - Unclear corner here. Any curve or corner must be clear in Normal. Make it more visible. Done
10. 00:43:483 (2,3) - Fix overlap Done
11. 00:49:046 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
12. 00:51:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use this rhythm Yee i like it c:
13. 00:56:596 (4) - Remove SV change. They are not recommended in Normal I changed it to 0,75x
14. 00:59:775 (1) - Remove this circle Ok
15. 01:02:954 (2) - ^ ^
16. 01:04:543 (1,2,3) - Do like 00:51:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Done but unless the circle at the end (circle - long slider)
17. 01:08:517 (1) - Same SV issue Same than before
18. 01:09:907 (1) - No more than one repeat
19. 01:14:278 (6) - Remove this circle and start (7) here Ok

Hard

1. OD 5.5/6 Done
2. 00:02:755 (4) - Unnessecary slider change I wont more long sliders S:
3. 00:05:934 (5) - ^ ^
4. 00:11:298 (1) - Remove NC Done
5. 00:13:483 (2,3,4,5,1,3) - This can bring some reading issues imo Gonna keep it for now
6. 00:14:675 (2,4) - Fix slight overlap Fixed
7. 00:18:649 (3,5,1) - Don't stack please Ok
8. 00:26:000 (4) - NC Ok
9. 00:26:596 (6,1,2,3) - Please stack properly Done
10. 00:32:358 (1,2,3) - Remove this triple. It's clearly overmapped Changed into 2 circles
11. 00:32:755 (4,5) - Fix blanket ok
12. 00:35:536 (2,3,4) - Overmapped ok
13. 00:38:715 (2,4,2) - Fix slight overlap yeah
14. 00:40:503 (3,5) - ^ Done
15. 00:44:477 (6,3) - Stack properly. ok
16. 00:48:848 (3,4,5) - Remove triple Changed into 2 circles again
17. 00:49:642 - Triple note here. Why would you ignore the vocals' 1/4 beat but randomly put your own 1/4 beat where it's not really in the song? xP done
18. 00:51:430 (1,2) - Move this pattern somewhere up so that 00:51:629 (2,3) - can stack Ok
19. 00:54:411 (2,3,4) - Overmapped same than others
20. 00:56:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - All these overlaps are really messy. Please fix them Fixed
21. 00:58:384 (2,6) - Stack properly ok
22. 01:00:271 (8,9) - Overmapped uh fixed
23. 01:08:914 (5) - Remove SV change. Really hard to read 0,50 to 0,75x
24. 01:13:682 (3,4) - Blanket is slightly off Fixed maybe

Last Hope

1. 00:03:550 (2) - Remove this Is not overmapped ._.
2. 00:08:715 (1,2,3) - Space them Done
3. 00:11:298 (6,7) - ^ Spaced a little but
4. 00:17:457 (1,2,3) - Suddenly reducing the number of beats is just weird here. Plus you made a jump right after that Changed the pattern s:
5. 00:26:000 (3,1) - Whaa? Please remove the SV change. It's just ridiculous rofl, ill gonna keep the SV change but in 1,5x now
6. 00:34:742 (1,2,2) - Fix overlap Done
7. 00:36:927 (1) - Curve properly please Deleted anchor points and fixed
8. 00:55:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space them hmmm ok
9. 01:13:285 (3,5) - Fix overlap tried

Well that's all for my mod. Good luck on this map! Thanks

General

Last hope...

Firedigger

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. From my queue

I give u power mod because many warnings in this map

General

1. I would preview point should be at 00:51:430. Your preview point just like HW (Hollow Wings)

Last hope...

1. I don't like insane has AR8. All diff insane recommend for AR8.5 and AR9 I guess I wanna keep ar8
2. 00:04:344 (6) - I would like this slider stop at 00:04:940 (1) and circle would delete ok
3. 00:09:907 (2) - Add clap/whistle coz sound drum here Done
4. 00:11:695 (7,8,9,10) - Add clap coz look above comment :)
5. 00:13:285 (3) - NC here Ok
6. 00:17:854 (2) - I would dislike this circle didn't use DS. Please use normally ds Fixed
7. 00:22:622 (1,2,3) - Triple stack would be nice Added triple stack + 00:22:424 (4) - blanket
8. 00:25:205 (3) - Delete slider into triple circle or triple slider because sound drum 1/4 I like it
9. 00:26:000 (3) - NC here and u should add finish at here Added NC without finish
10. 00:28:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess jump star will confused if someone see this. Please use DS Changed positions, check again and tell me if you like it
11. 00:30:371 - Add note because sound drum/bass whatever blabla xD
12. 00:32:358 (1) - Add finish here ok
13. 00:41:695 - Add note because sound vocal and u didn't follow a vocal >.> Added
14. 00:42:887 (2) - Use DS normally xD XD
15. 00:44:477 (7) - I would dislike a slider stop at big white tick. Please stop sliderendcircle at white tick and add stream fourfold stop at big white tick because sound drum no x3
16. 00:55:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would too confusing about your style. Why these note didn't use DS! Please use DS or stack only my style... is shit )? I changed the pattern
17. 00:57:192 (1) - Delete this circle because I don't hear rhythm is here true D:
18. 01:01:563 (1) - Use DS and Fix overlap because I guess this is random slider. Sliderwave will be nice overlap? (applied DS but still there the slider)
19. 01:08:914 (1) - Add finish here Added
20. 01:11:497 - Add triple note because rhythm triple are here Added + circle
21. 01:21:629 (2) - Add finish! I see u not good add hitsound I didn't do the hitsounds so dont bully me xC
22. 01:29:377 - I would add inhereted points and volume will slow for example 5% Changed

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/ \:D/
sorry /me run away ay lmao

-Sh1n1- wrote:

wowowowow nice songg!!
I feel so nostalgic~~ I'll make my CtB version :3 Best of lucks on this project *-*/