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redballoon - Giniro no Sora (TV Size)

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Repo
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2020년 10월 9일 금요일 at 오후 8:34:35

Artist: redballoon
Title: Giniro no Sora (TV Size)
Source: 銀魂
Tags: gintama op opening anime japanese jrock rock j-rock jpop pop j-pop first story
BPM: 188
Filesize: 8666kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.76 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (3.41 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Insane (4.77 stars, 289 notes)
  4. Normal (2.4 stars, 151 notes)
  5. Open Sky (5.19 stars, 295 notes)
Download: redballoon - Giniro no Sora (TV Size)
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My 4th map; revival after 5 years
Sep/30/2020: mp3 file has been updated! Plz redownload it



redballon ∣ 銀色の空
Last edited by Repo , edited 74 times in total.
wasin
wasin
Hello from my modding Q


General
-Audio bitrate is higher than 192 kbps is unrankable . Your beatmap is 238 kbps must change.
-ฺฺฺBG resolution must be 1366 x 768. Your BG is 1363
-Add artist in Tags

Easy
00:10:272 (1,2) - These sliders too closer maybe you can move slider(2) to X:476 Y:256
00:15:379 (1,2) - Same above move slider(2) to X:68 Y:272 and fix the blanket with 00:17:932 (3) -
00:21:762 (2) - Spacing issue move to X:268 Y:208
00:30:060 (3) - You may add NC here
00:43:464 (1) - circle(1) closer 00:42:825 (3) - I suggest you move circle(1) to X:96 Y:268
00:46:017 (1) - X:332 Y:244 00:46:336 (2) - X:308 Y:168
00:54:953 (2) - X:212 Y:296
01:10:272 (3,1) - This is not good point to overlap in Easy diff. I suggest you change to a new pattern
01:17:613 (2,3) - ^
01:22:400 (2,3) - ^

Normal
00:07:719 (5) - You can NC here
00:20:485 (1) - In my opinion I think slider (1) stacks with 00:19:208 (6) - is fine and move circle(2) 00:21:442 (2) - to X:360 Y:68
00:28:783 (5,6) - It's so strange
00:38:038 (4,1) - Spacing issue move slider(1) a bit
00:40:911 (1,2) - ^ slider(2)
01:01:336 (1) - Add Finish hs for make a heavy sound at the begin
01:03:889 (1) - this slider is ugly for me you can make it like this and you can Ctrl+H for swap slider

Hard
00:03:730 (4) - Distance issue move to X:232 Y:312
00:04:368 (6) - X:360 Y:248
00:06:283 (4) - The blanket isn't fit with 00:05:804 (3) -
00:09:315 (5,6,7) - here the reason same above. I suggest you make a blanket with 00:08:357 (3) - for a pretty pattern like this guy 00:42:506 (6,7,8) -
00:22:400 (7) - you stack slider(7) with 00:20:485 (1) - right? I think it's not fit
00:50:166 (2,3,1) - Slider(2) overlap with slider(1) it makes disappear it's not good idea, please make it visible
00:56:070 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue make it blanket with 00:55:591 (6) -
00:57:187 (5) - Move slider(5) overlap with the end of slider(1)
01:07:560 (4,5) -Spacing issue. You don't have to put a circle at the end of slider 3
01:13:304 (6) - lolll this slider is very ugly mann i suggest to make a new slider
01:20:325 (7) - NC here

that's all .In insane diff i can mod it's to hard for me i have no experience now, will practice soon

GL rank it soon
Repo
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Joined February 2013
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Repo
wasinkingspeedq's modding

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

Hello from my modding Q


General
-Audio bitrate is higher than 192 kbps is unrankable . Your beatmap is 238 kbps must change. I'll fix it shortly.
-ฺฺฺBG resolution must be 1366 x 768. Your BG is 1363 Fixed
-Add artist in Tags I think it doesn't have to be. I just added Album name

Easy
00:10:272 (1,2) - These sliders too closer maybe you can move slider(2) to X:476 Y:256 Fixed
00:15:379 (1,2) - Same above move slider(2) to X:68 Y:272 and fix the blanket with 00:17:932 (3) - Fixed
00:21:762 (2) - Spacing issue move to X:268 Y:208 Moved (260, 208) for blanket
00:30:060 (3) - You may add NC here Sorry, I'll leave it
00:43:464 (1) - circle(1) closer 00:42:825 (3) - I suggest you move circle(1) to X:96 Y:268 Fixed
00:46:017 (1) - X:332 Y:244 00:46:336 (2) - X:308 Y:168 Moved (1) to (328, 244) and (2) to (304, 168)
00:54:953 (2) - X:212 Y:296 Moved to (208, 296). (212,296) is too distant.
01:10:272 (3,1) - This is not good point to overlap in Easy diff. I suggest you change to a new pattern Fixed
01:17:613 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:22:400 (2,3) - ^ Fixed

Normal
00:07:719 (5) - You can NC here Fixed
00:20:485 (1) - In my opinion I think slider (1) stacks with 00:19:208 (6) - is fine and move circle(2) 00:21:442 (2) - to X:360 Y:68 Fixed
00:28:783 (5,6) - It's so strange Fixed
00:38:038 (4,1) - Spacing issue move slider(1) a bit Fixed
00:40:911 (1,2) - ^ slider(2) Fixed
01:01:336 (1) - Add Finish hs for make a heavy sound at the begin Fixed
01:03:889 (1) - this slider is ugly for me you can make it like this and you can Ctrl+H for swap slider Fixed

Hard
00:03:730 (4) - Distance issue move to X:232 Y:312 Fixed
00:04:368 (6) - X:360 Y:248 Fixed
00:06:283 (4) - The blanket isn't fit with 00:05:804 (3) - Fixed
00:09:315 (5,6,7) - here the reason same above. I suggest you make a blanket with 00:08:357 (3) - for a pretty pattern like this guy 00:42:506 (6,7,8) - Fixed
00:22:400 (7) - you stack slider(7) with 00:20:485 (1) - right? I think it's not fit I didn't mean to stack. Anyway, Fixed
00:50:166 (2,3,1) - Slider(2) overlap with slider(1) it makes disappear it's not good idea, please make it visible Sorry, I'll leave it. I just moved slider a little, it maybe better for reading
00:56:070 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue make it blanket with 00:55:591 (6) - Fixed
00:57:187 (5) - Move slider(5) overlap with the end of slider(1) Fixed
01:07:560 (4,5) -Spacing issue. You don't have to put a circle at the end of slider 3 Fixed
01:13:304 (6) - lolll this slider is very ugly mann i suggest to make a new slider Fixed
01:20:325 (7) - NC here Fixed

that's all .In insane diff i can mod it's to hard for me i have no experience now, will practice soon

GL rank it soon

Thanks for modding!
Some personal matters happened suddenly, I might check and fix it after this Friday.
I'm so sorry for that. :(
Have a nice day!

edit: I'm sorry for late. I checked it.
My feedback was lost in the middle of writing, I rewrote feedback. There could be omissions and look too simple.
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:07:719 (3) - I would use a copy-paste slider from 00:05:166 (1) instead for a better symmetry.
  2. 00:10:272 (1,1,1) - Try stacking them if possible.
  3. 00:26:868 - You could have mapped sth here since it's a downbeat.
  4. 01:08:357 (3,2) - You should avoid this overlap.
[Normal]

  1. There are few weird overlaps tho. > 00:03:251 (2,3,1) - 00:56:708 (2,3,4) - 01:08:996 (1,2) - 01:12:506 (2,3,5) - These overlaps could have been improved visually for the sake of neatness.
  2. 00:50:804 (5,1,2) - 00:53:357 (4,1,2) - I'm not sure that this pattern is too difficult for normal tho.
  3. 01:07:400 (2,3) - Why not do a 1/2 stack like what you used to do in earlier parts of the song?
[Hard]

  1. Well, I won't spam weird overlaps anymore, I hope you get my concept of what a "weird overlap" is in Normal and try taking a look in Hard as well.
  2. 00:03:091 - I would put a circle here so it would be come a triplet, fits the rhythm better that way.
  3. 00:17:932 (9,1) - Considering how smoothly the flow is, some players might miss here because they would interpret this as a 1/2 beat spacing.
Well, I guess I didn't point out things much, sry for that in advance. But basically, this map flows really well. You just need to improve some visual stuff and this map has a quite potential in my opinion, keep up the good work!
Good luck~
Repo
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Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Repo
Electoz's modding

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:07:719 (3) - I would use a copy-paste slider from 00:05:166 (1) instead for a better symmetry. Sorry, I'll leave it.
  2. 00:10:272 (1,1,1) - Try stacking them if possible. Fixed
  3. 00:26:868 - You could have mapped sth here since it's a downbeat. Fixed
  4. 01:08:357 (3,2) - You should avoid this overlap. Fixed
[Normal]

  1. There are few weird overlaps tho. > 00:03:251 (2,3,1) - 00:56:708 (2,3,4) - 01:08:996 (1,2) - 01:12:506 (2,3,5) - These overlaps could have been improved visually for the sake of neatness.
    I can't understand well - it appear after prior one disappeared... Anyway, I will leave first one, others were subtly changed.
  2. 00:50:804 (5,1,2) - 00:53:357 (4,1,2) - I'm not sure that this pattern is too difficult for normal tho. Fixed
  3. 01:07:400 (2,3) - Why not do a 1/2 stack like what you used to do in earlier parts of the song?
    Prior one was not 1/2 stack, it was one time half length of slider and one circle. I changed to that.
[Hard]

  1. Well, I won't spam weird overlaps anymore, I hope you get my concept of what a "weird overlap" is in Normal and try taking a look in Hard as well. I'll check them
  2. 00:03:091 - I would put a circle here so it would be come a triplet, fits the rhythm better that way. Fixed
  3. 00:17:932 (9,1) - Considering how smoothly the flow is, some players might miss here because they would interpret this as a 1/2 beat spacing.Fixed
Well, I guess I didn't point out things much, sry for that in advance. But basically, this map flows really well. You just need to improve some visual stuff and this map has a quite potential in my opinion, keep up the good work!
Good luck~

Thanks for modding! I appreciate it :)
Potato-chii
39 posts
Joined July 2015
Potato-chii
Hi, from my queue :D

[General]
The hitsounds are too loud

[Easy]
00:12:830 (1) – going back to where a slider was previously isn’t good for Easy diffs.
01:03:894 (3) - ^
00:34:533 (2) – I think put more distance about this and 00:32:618 (3) this slider’s end to make it less confusing for beginners.
00:43:788 (2,3,1,2) – These are so close to each other, they’re confusing.
00:58:788 (1) – Maybe move the spinner to 00:58:469 and end it here 01:00:463 I guess that’s enough recovery time, I’m not sure, but I’m just making the spinner fit the rhythm, but if it’s not enough, I think you should just remove it.
01:07:724 (2) – Beginner players are going to be confused about which one is the slider start.
01:09:001 (1) – This one too.
01:23:043 (3) - ^ Well, I don’t think blankets are really fit for beginners. They’re pretty confusing.
01:12:830 (2,4) – Make them symmetrical.
People are going to hit 01:14:426 (4) first instead of 01:14:107 (3) because sliders are more attractive than circles.
01:28:113 – Spinner’s end isn’t snapped.

[Normal]
Maybe CS 3.5 just to make it smaller than Easy diff.
00:17:937 (1) – This overlaps the previous slider, this is still confusing even for normal diffs. You can overlap slider, but slightly. Normal players are still new.
00:17:937 (1) – Going back and forth isn’t fit for normal either.
00:28:788 (5) – I think it’s better to stack this.

[Hard]
Maybe include more patterns and lessen random overlapping because they don’t look very good.
00:08:841 (4) – Better if you turn this into a blanket.

[Insane]
00:09:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Maybe put a pattern into these circles, maybe put it like this 00:19:533 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ?
01:19:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Put this into a pattern because it’s very confusing.

That’s all. Sorry if this didn’t help and good luck :)
Spiraler
152 posts
Joined November 2014
Spiraler
From my queue

Their faces are so creepy how they smile

Insane
00:03:735 (4,5) - this close spacing might be confusing given the previous 3 spacings of equal time difference
00:09:001 (1,2) - don't like the way these overlap the previous slider, move them together (and maybe with 3) down and to the left
00:10:277 (1) - if you move the middle point one grid mark (in grid size 4) to the right, it will blanket better with the tail of 00:10:916 (3)
00:15:384 (1) - I wouldn't stack this on the previous slider, probably move it down and right a little bit
00:16:979 (5) - stack this on the head of 00:16:022 (3)
00:26:235 (3) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:25:277 (1)
00:27:352 (6) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:26:554 (4)
00:32:139 (7) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:30:862 (2)
00:34:533 (5,6) - I don't like it when you have these circles hidden under a previous slider
00:34:852 (7) - overlap looks weird, have it flipped horizontally
00:39:320 (5) - stack this on the tail of 00:38:362 (1)
00:43:788 (3) - put this a little more to the right, overlap looks weird
01:02:937 (5) - stack this on the tail of 01:01:979 (3)
01:03:894 (1) - moving this up about half a gridmark will blanket it better with 01:03:416 (7)
01:05:650 (6) - stack this on the head of 01:04:533 (3)
01:08:203 (6) - stack the head of this on the head of 01:07:086 (3)
01:10:756 (3,4) - don't stack like this for a 1/2 time difference
01:20:330 (1) - if you move the starting point (not the whole slider, just the star point) one gridmark to the right (grid size 4) it will blanket better
01:21:288 (4,5,6) - move these together to stack 01:21:607 (6) on the tail of 01:20:330 (1)

good map!
Repo
38 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Repo
Potato-chii's modding

Potato-chii wrote:

Hi, from my queue :D

[General]
The hitsounds are too loud I'll adjust it

[Easy]
00:12:830 (1) – going back to where a slider was previously isn’t good for Easy diffs. Just moved them more visible place
01:03:894 (3) - ^ ^
00:34:533 (2) – I think put more distance about this and 00:32:618 (3) this slider’s end to make it less confusing for beginners. Fixed
00:43:788 (2,3,1,2) – These are so close to each other, they’re confusing. Sorry, I'll leave it
00:58:788 (1) – Maybe move the spinner to 00:58:469 and end it here 01:00:463 I guess that’s enough recovery time, I’m not sure, but I’m just making the spinner fit the rhythm, but if it’s not enough, I think you should just remove it. Those are weird for me... sorry i'll leave it.
01:07:724 (2) – Beginner players are going to be confused about which one is the slider start. Fixed
01:09:001 (1) – This one too. Fixed
01:23:043 (3) - ^ Well, I don’t think blankets are really fit for beginners. They’re pretty confusing. Fixed
01:12:830 (2,4) – Make them symmetrical. Fixed
People are going to hit 01:14:426 (4) first instead of 01:14:107 (3) because sliders are more attractive than circles.
01:28:113 – Spinner’s end isn’t snapped. Fixed

[Normal]
Maybe CS 3.5 just to make it smaller than Easy diff. Fixed
00:17:937 (1) – This overlaps the previous slider, this is still confusing even for normal diffs. You can overlap slider, but slightly. Normal players are still new. Fixed
00:17:937 (1) – Going back and forth isn’t fit for normal either.
00:28:788 (5) – I think it’s better to stack this. Fixed

[Hard]
Maybe include more patterns and lessen random overlapping because they don’t look very good.
That's hard for me cuz those are closely related with my mapping style. Anyway, I'll check it.
00:08:841 (4) – Better if you turn this into a blanket. Sorry, I'll leave it

[Insane]
00:09:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Maybe put a pattern into these circles, maybe put it like this 00:19:533 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ? Sorry, I'll leave it
01:19:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Put this into a pattern because it’s very confusing. Fixed to star pattern

That’s all. Sorry if this didn’t help and good luck :)

Thanks for modding! Have a nice day! :)
Repo
38 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Repo

Spiral527 wrote:

From my queue

Their faces are so creepy how they smile

Insane
00:03:735 (4,5) - this close spacing might be confusing given the previous 3 spacings of equal time difference
Sorry, I'll leave it. In fact, I intended that.
00:09:001 (1,2) - don't like the way these overlap the previous slider, move them together (and maybe with 3) down and to the left Fixed
00:10:277 (1) - if you move the middle point one grid mark (in grid size 4) to the right, it will blanket better with the tail of 00:10:916 (3) Fixed
00:15:384 (1) - I wouldn't stack this on the previous slider, probably move it down and right a little bit I adjusted differently. Anyway it's not stacked now.
00:16:979 (5) - stack this on the head of 00:16:022 (3) Fixed
00:26:235 (3) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:25:277 (1) Sorry, I'll leave it
00:27:352 (6) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:26:554 (4) Sorry, I'll leave it
00:32:139 (7) - stack the head of this on the tail of 00:30:862 (2) Fixed
00:34:533 (5,6) - I don't like it when you have these circles hidden under a previous slider Fixed
00:34:852 (7) - overlap looks weird, have it flipped horizontally Sorry, I'll leave it
00:39:320 (5) - stack this on the tail of 00:38:362 (1) Fixed
00:43:788 (3) - put this a little more to the right, overlap looks weird Fixed
01:02:937 (5) - stack this on the tail of 01:01:979 (3) Fixed
01:03:894 (1) - moving this up about half a gridmark will blanket it better with 01:03:416 (7) Fixed
01:05:650 (6) - stack this on the head of 01:04:533 (3) Fixed
01:08:203 (6) - stack the head of this on the head of 01:07:086 (3) Fixed
01:10:756 (3,4) - don't stack like this for a 1/2 time difference I will ponder over it...
01:20:330 (1) - if you move the starting point (not the whole slider, just the star point) one gridmark to the right (grid size 4) it will blanket better Fixed
01:21:288 (4,5,6) - move these together to stack 01:21:607 (6) on the tail of 01:20:330 (1) Fixed

good map!
How fast
Thanks for modding! :) (creepy smiling)
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