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[insane]
0:54:070 (4) down 1 grid
[Normal]
0:18:384 (4) left+up 1 grid?
1:03:874 (6) up 1 grid
nicely spaced, star~
0:54:070 (4) down 1 grid
[Normal]
0:18:384 (4) left+up 1 grid?
1:03:874 (6) up 1 grid
nicely spaced, star~
Remember that these are all suggestions and that you can ignore any of them. Major issues are in bold.
General
Consider adding a Hard diff at least, the mapset would be way better.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is considered unrankable.
Remove countdown. It barely has enough time to be displayed.
Normal
00:23:874 (4) - Make it match the approach circle ? It will look better. Like this:
Insane
Circle size +1 ? Right now it feels way too small. Also OD-1.
00:07:796 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need all these new combos nor these jumps (I'd see anti-jumps rather than jumps here).
00:32:894 (1,2,3) - These jumps are too much imo, reduce them a bit ?
00:41:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:47:599 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - These jumps are too unexpected, it just makes this part confusing.
General
Consider adding a Hard diff at least, the mapset would be way better.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is considered unrankable.
Remove countdown. It barely has enough time to be displayed.
Normal
00:23:874 (4) - Make it match the approach circle ? It will look better. Like this:
272,272,23874,2,0,B|273:200|348:175,2,120,8|0|8
Insane
Circle size +1 ? Right now it feels way too small. Also OD-1.
00:07:796 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need all these new combos nor these jumps (I'd see anti-jumps rather than jumps here).
00:32:894 (1,2,3) - These jumps are too much imo, reduce them a bit ?
00:41:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:47:599 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - These jumps are too unexpected, it just makes this part confusing.
Topic Starter
Fixed :3
you need better quality audio. this mp3 even not nomalized(volume)
use tiny grid nap please~ (ctrl+1)
[Normal]
00:40:933 (1) - start point move to 00:40:737?
good map~
use tiny grid nap please~ (ctrl+1)
[Normal]
00:40:933 (1) - start point move to 00:40:737?
good map~
Topic Starter
Sorry nothing changed and thanks for modding :3
Topic Starter
Updated, thank you ^_~
star~
Worth a star. 
Topic Starter
^_~
Hello there!
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Normal:
00:14:395 - Note here?
00:20:474 - A note here, if you decide not to, then fix spacing plz.
00:27:924 (4,1) - Spacing
00:40:866 - Note here?
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Insane:
00:19:690 (6) - Delete plz
00:33:416 (2,3) - Spacing the the nth degree
00:43:220 (4,5) - Please be kind to humanity and bring these two closer
01:05:278 (6) - Delete plz
01:11:161 (4) - ^
01:23:710 (4) - ^
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Besides all that, the maps are great Although:
~Suggest you make a Hard diff to help balance the huge diff. gap between Normal and Insane.
Star~
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Normal:
00:14:395 - Note here?
00:20:474 - A note here, if you decide not to, then fix spacing plz.
00:27:924 (4,1) - Spacing
00:40:866 - Note here?
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Insane:
00:19:690 (6) - Delete plz
00:33:416 (2,3) - Spacing the the nth degree
00:43:220 (4,5) - Please be kind to humanity and bring these two closer
01:05:278 (6) - Delete plz
01:11:161 (4) - ^
01:23:710 (4) - ^
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Besides all that, the maps are great Although:
~Suggest you make a Hard diff to help balance the huge diff. gap between Normal and Insane.
Star~
Topic Starter
Nothing changed and thanks for modding ^_^
-Normal-
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here >_>
-Insane-
check all notes' spacing please
00:10:278 (3) - this jump is bad,move(3) father or closer
00:19:592 (5) - remove this circle?
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here ._.
01:11:258 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:11:356 will be better.
01:12:141 (11) - remove this circle?
01:23:807 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:23:905 will be better.
*star*
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here >_>
-Insane-
check all notes' spacing please
00:10:278 (3) - this jump is bad,move(3) father or closer
00:19:592 (5) - remove this circle?
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here ._.
01:11:258 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:11:356 will be better.
01:12:141 (11) - remove this circle?
01:23:807 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:23:905 will be better.
*star*
Topic Starter
fixed =P
Wow, I'm really late.
General
That BG is suggestive. :3
Add another difficulty? (Hard)
Normal
Woah, these circles are awfully big
00:55:768 The way those sliders overlap is ugly
Combo Modding
00:47:140 to 00:50:081
Those jumps are really brutal; I don't think they work well.
Bad Combo Modding, you can skip this
There's really not much to say. It's a well done beatmap and no surprise from you. Star for you and best of luck.
General
That BG is suggestive. :3
Add another difficulty? (Hard)
Normal
Woah, these circles are awfully big
00:55:768 The way those sliders overlap is ugly
Combo Modding
SPOILER
Insane00:25:179 New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
00:33:023 Remove New Combo?
00:44:003 New Combo?
00:44:787 Remove New Combo?
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:532 New Combo
01:08:709 Remove New Combo
01:13:415 ^^
01:13:807 New Combo
01:19:297 Remove New Combo
01:20:474 New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
00:33:023 Remove New Combo?
00:44:003 New Combo?
00:44:787 Remove New Combo?
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:532 New Combo
01:08:709 Remove New Combo
01:13:415 ^^
01:13:807 New Combo
01:19:297 Remove New Combo
01:20:474 New Combo
00:47:140 to 00:50:081
Those jumps are really brutal; I don't think they work well.
Bad Combo Modding, you can skip this
SPOILER
00:25:375 New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
01:01:258 New Combo
01:05:768 ^^
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:728 New Combo
01:08:317 Remove New Combo
01:13:807 New Combo
01:14:395 Remove New Combo
01:19:297 ^^
01:20:277 New Combo
01:20:474 Remove New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
01:01:258 New Combo
01:05:768 ^^
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:728 New Combo
01:08:317 Remove New Combo
01:13:807 New Combo
01:14:395 Remove New Combo
01:19:297 ^^
01:20:277 New Combo
01:20:474 Remove New Combo
There's really not much to say. It's a well done beatmap and no surprise from you. Star for you and best of luck.
Topic Starter
thanks for modding, but nothing changed =/
[General]
I suggest to increase the volume at least 10-20%. I can't hear any hitsound while playing!!
the "-" in Zero Zero Nine-One would not work when search, delete it.
3 combos color in Normal, 4 in Insane?... Make the combo color same?
[Normal]
Since you have 00:54:591 (2) with finish, why don't you add more?
00:50:277 (1) - Finish
00:56:160 (2) - ^
00:56:552 (1) - ^
01:23:611 (1,2,3,4) - Clap?
And...maybe you can try this hitsound.
Mapset is pretty nice.
Download: normal-hitnormal.rar
I suggest to increase the volume at least 10-20%. I can't hear any hitsound while playing!!
the "-" in Zero Zero Nine-One would not work when search, delete it.
3 combos color in Normal, 4 in Insane?... Make the combo color same?
[Normal]
Since you have 00:54:591 (2) with finish, why don't you add more?
00:50:277 (1) - Finish
00:56:160 (2) - ^
00:56:552 (1) - ^
01:23:611 (1,2,3,4) - Clap?
And...maybe you can try this hitsound.
Mapset is pretty nice.
Download: normal-hitnormal.rar
Topic Starter
i like your modding and i have fixed something from that.
Thank you very much, fixed.
Thank you very much, fixed.
Hai, here's my mod~
[Overall]
Only two difficulties? =(
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
Insane random jumps you got in here.
HP Drain +1?
Nothing else to say.
Star.
[Overall]
Only two difficulties? =(
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
Insane random jumps you got in here.
HP Drain +1?
Nothing else to say.
Star.
Topic Starter
Why random? T_T
thanks for modding
thanks for modding
Star<#
this is STAR~~~
Topic Starter
thanks for stars
Offset: 7935
Topic Starter
Thank you Zekira for modding
And thank you Mokka for star :3
And thank you Mokka for star :3
Sorry for my delay >_<
Map is okay, so i'll just star, good job Louis-chan :3
Map is okay, so i'll just star, good job Louis-chan :3
Topic Starter
Thank you ^_~
[General]
Hum... the sound of the mp3 is a bit low. Amplify the sound by 200%~250% will be better. If you want, I can do it for you.
I think the kiai time is too long. I sugest you to end it at 01:00:091.
[Normal]
Remove all unused timing section
01:23:621 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds a bit noisy, better if you remove the finish on (1) and (3)
01:26:758 - Why there are a non-inhinerited timing section here ? o_o
That's all I guess
Hum... the sound of the mp3 is a bit low. Amplify the sound by 200%~250% will be better. If you want, I can do it for you.
I think the kiai time is too long. I sugest you to end it at 01:00:091.
[Normal]
Remove all unused timing section
01:23:621 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds a bit noisy, better if you remove the finish on (1) and (3)
01:26:758 - Why there are a non-inhinerited timing section here ? o_o
That's all I guess
Topic Starter
Remove all unused timing sectionFor example? O_o
01:23:621 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds a bit noisy, better if you remove the finish on (1) and (3)According to the music, there must be finish hitsounds =/
01:26:758 - Why there are a non-inhinerited timing section here ? o_oand this fixed : )
I think the kiai time is too long. I sugest you to end it at 01:00:091.40 seconds of Kiai is not too long you know.
Hum... the sound of the mp3 is a bit low. Amplify the sound by 200%~250% will be better. If you want, I can do it for you.Sounds fine for me, so no X )
Thank you for modding ^_~
[General]
And make it end here: 01:12:630 and 01:26:748.
That seems to be better in my opinion.
01:07:738 (4) - ^
01:13:817 (3) - ^
01:14:405 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:601 (5) - Add new combo.
01:15:385 (5) - ^
01:20:287 (2) - ^
01:20:484 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
01:01:258 (2) - Add new combo.
01:06:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:532 (2) - Add new combo.
01:08:709 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:415 (1) - ^
01:13:807 (7) - Add new combo.
01:19:297 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:20:474 (5) - Add new combo.
- Star.
- The kiai timing placement is really horrible if you'd ask me. 1/2 of the map is kiai time.
And make it end here: 01:12:630 and 01:26:748.
That seems to be better in my opinion.
- Offset 7.925
- mp3 quality is a bit dull like mentioned above. I would recommend getting a better one or to 'upgrade' this one.
- Rename this to [Hard] ?
01:07:738 (4) - ^
01:13:817 (3) - ^
01:14:405 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:601 (5) - Add new combo.
01:15:385 (5) - ^
01:20:287 (2) - ^
01:20:484 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
01:01:258 (2) - Add new combo.
01:06:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:532 (2) - Add new combo.
01:08:709 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:415 (1) - ^
01:13:807 (7) - Add new combo.
01:19:297 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:20:474 (5) - Add new combo.
- Star.
Topic Starter
fixed
Insane :
RENAME TO HARD!
00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like this
Normal :
00:12:248 (4) - Add a note
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052
~
RENAME TO HARD!
00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like this
Normal :
00:12:248 (4) - Add a note
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052
~
Topic Starter
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503I put that according to vocal
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052
RENAME TO HARD!<_<
00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like thisbetter for you =P
thanks for modding, but nothing changed ^_~
ಠ_ಠLouis Cyphre wrote:
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503I put that according to vocal
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052RENAME TO HARD!<_<00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like thisbetter for you =P
thanks for modding, but nothing changed ^_~
You gotta be kidding me, it sounds early IMOGladi wrote:
Offset 7.925
Nothing wrong with the maps. The mp3 is really quiet though. Have you considered getting an mp3 that isn't so quiet? If you want me to, I can make it louder. PM me if you want. (I respond faster to PMs than to queue)
Topic Starter
PM'd
Thanks for modding : )
Thanks for modding : )
ka-pow! replace your mp3 with this and full resubmit. I think the offset is unaffected but you might want to play the map a couple times to make sure. (I tried settling the offset debate when I last posted but it's hard for me to tell in this particular song... oh well)
http://up.ppy.sh/files/009-1op.mp3
http://up.ppy.sh/files/009-1op.mp3
Topic Starter
Fixed and thanks :3
Even tho she's wearing clothes, you can clearly see her tits so that BG is NSFW sorry.
Do not use pure white combo color, it's blindind during kiai time (and sliderticks can barely be seen on white sliders)
[Insane]
00:33:033 (1,2,3) - I do not agree with these jumps, they are a bit too excessive even for an Insane.
00:42:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:484 (1,2,1) - ^
01:03:033 (2,3) - Spacing too close
01:17:935 (6,7,8) - ^
[Normal]
Double slider tick rate to avoid awkward tick positions.
00:18:523 (4,1) - Spacing too far.
And there are a few more instances when spacing goes off by 1 grid, considering you're using grid Lv 2 that's quite a bit of distance and it's confusing on an easier diff i recommend you manually adjust the off-spacings by checking through your whole diff and make sure each spacing is coherent, the reason these happened is most probably because sliders end off-grid but your notes are grid snapped.
The spacing problems are quite small but noticeable during gameplay, shouldn't be too hard to fix, so just fix all that and i'll bubble.
Do not use pure white combo color, it's blindind during kiai time (and sliderticks can barely be seen on white sliders)
[Insane]
00:33:033 (1,2,3) - I do not agree with these jumps, they are a bit too excessive even for an Insane.
00:42:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:484 (1,2,1) - ^
01:03:033 (2,3) - Spacing too close
01:17:935 (6,7,8) - ^
[Normal]
Double slider tick rate to avoid awkward tick positions.
00:18:523 (4,1) - Spacing too far.
And there are a few more instances when spacing goes off by 1 grid, considering you're using grid Lv 2 that's quite a bit of distance and it's confusing on an easier diff i recommend you manually adjust the off-spacings by checking through your whole diff and make sure each spacing is coherent, the reason these happened is most probably because sliders end off-grid but your notes are grid snapped.
The spacing problems are quite small but noticeable during gameplay, shouldn't be too hard to fix, so just fix all that and i'll bubble.
Topic Starter
01:03:033 (2,3) - Spacing too close0.5 section halves Distance Snap devisor. That's why i put that in 2x to make it 1x. (0.5*2 = 1 )
01:17:935 (6,7,8) - ^I can't find anything wrong with spacing O_o
Double slider tick rate to avoid awkward tick positions.There are slider tick hitsound file in folder. I put such tick rate for custom claps for ticks in sliders, take a look. I can rePut that sections if it is really needed. well put double tick and you will understand what i said X_x
Other mistakes fixed. But BG D: ... fixed too ><
Sorry for taking so long to reply, was busy the entire weekend
Edit: And after those fixesBubbled~
Wait why did i say "close" they are actually "far" X_X and i dont see any difference in speed between 1,2 and 2,3?Louis Cyphre wrote:
01:03:033 (2,3) - Spacing too close0.5 section halves Distance Snap devisor. That's why i put that in 2x to make it 1x. (0.5*2 = 1 )
Spacing between 7,8 is higher than between 6,7 even tho they are all 1/2 snap apart.Louis Cyphre wrote:
01:17:935 (6,7,8) - ^I can't find anything wrong with spacing O_o
If they are added to hitsound sliderticks then they are really what i'm against since i don't like hitsounded sliderticks with claps and stuff, but i do not enforce it, however tick rate still needs to be doubled so you can create a workaround by moving the sections so they sound only on the intended slidertickLouis Cyphre wrote:
Double slider tick rate to avoid awkward tick positions.There are slider tick hitsound file in folder. I put such tick rate for custom claps for ticks in sliders, take a look. I can rePut that sections if it is really needed. well put double tick and you will understand what i said X_x
Edit: And after those fixesBubbled~
ehhhh ranked~
Topic Starter
thanks)