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Minato - Destiny Girl (TV Size)

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Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 ноября 2010 г. at 19:01:18

Artist: Minato
Title: Destiny Girl (TV Size)
Source: 009-1
Tags: Zero Zero Nine-One
BPM: 153
Filesize: 3685kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,99 stars, 264 notes)
  2. Normal (2,85 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Minato - Destiny Girl (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Opening from 009-1 (Zero Zero Nine - One)

Enjoy ; )
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 15 times in total.
Max300
42 posts
Joined August 2010
Max300
Suggestion
Must do

Normal

No errors found on quick check


Hard

SPOILER
01:08:776 (4) - The spacing isn't similiar to the other, i'd suggest you to use Level 3 Grid
01:17:992 (7) - ^
Wow!, great map, Star!
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Thank you for modding, but nothing changed XD
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
:)
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2009
IceBeam
rawr

irc modding
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[insane]
0:54:070 (4) down 1 grid

[Normal]
0:18:384 (4) left+up 1 grid?
1:03:874 (6) up 1 grid

nicely spaced, star~
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Remember that these are all suggestions and that you can ignore any of them. Major issues are in bold.

General
Consider adding a Hard diff at least, the mapset would be way better.
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is considered unrankable.
Remove countdown. It barely has enough time to be displayed.

Normal
00:23:874 (4) - Make it match the approach circle ? It will look better. Like this:

272,272,23874,2,0,B|273:200|348:175,2,120,8|0|8

Insane
Circle size +1 ? Right now it feels way too small. Also OD-1.
00:07:796 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need all these new combos nor these jumps (I'd see anti-jumps rather than jumps here).
00:32:894 (1,2,3) - These jumps are too much imo, reduce them a bit ?
00:41:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:47:599 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - These jumps are too unexpected, it just makes this part confusing.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Fixed :3
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Sunny Holic
you need better quality audio. this mp3 even not nomalized(volume)
use tiny grid nap please~ (ctrl+1)

[Normal]
00:40:933 (1) - start point move to 00:40:737?

good map~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Sorry nothing changed and thanks for modding :3
Mizu_banned
Mizu_banned
naranaainaaa :3
i`m created mp3-file o.o
Star, >;D
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Updated, thank you ^_~
Berncastell
137 posts
Joined January 2010
Berncastell
star~
Roddie
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Roddie
Worth a star. 8-)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
^_~
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello there!
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Normal:
00:14:395 - Note here?
00:20:474 - A note here, if you decide not to, then fix spacing plz.
00:27:924 (4,1) - Spacing
00:40:866 - Note here?
-----------------------
Insane:
00:19:690 (6) - Delete plz
00:33:416 (2,3) - Spacing the the nth degree
00:43:220 (4,5) - Please be kind to humanity and bring these two closer
01:05:278 (6) - Delete plz
01:11:161 (4) - ^
01:23:710 (4) - ^
-------------------------
Besides all that, the maps are great Although:
~Suggest you make a Hard diff to help balance the huge diff. gap between Normal and Insane.

Star~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Nothing changed and thanks for modding ^_^
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
-Normal-
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here >_>

-Insane-
check all notes' spacing please
00:10:278 (3) - this jump is bad,move(3) father or closer
00:19:592 (5) - remove this circle?
00:47:140 - Kiai time start here ._.
01:11:258 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:11:356 will be better.
01:12:141 (11) - remove this circle?
01:23:807 (5) - remove this circle, and add a circle at 01:23:905 will be better.

*star*
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
fixed =P
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
Wow, I'm really late.

General
That BG is suggestive. :3
Add another difficulty? (Hard)

Normal
Woah, these circles are awfully big
00:55:768 The way those sliders overlap is ugly
Combo Modding
SPOILER
00:25:179 New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
00:33:023 Remove New Combo?
00:44:003 New Combo?
00:44:787 Remove New Combo?
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:532 New Combo
01:08:709 Remove New Combo
01:13:415 ^^
01:13:807 New Combo
01:19:297 Remove New Combo
01:20:474 New Combo
Insane
00:47:140 to 00:50:081
   Those jumps are really brutal; I don't think they work well.
Bad Combo Modding, you can skip this
SPOILER
00:25:375 New Combo
00:25:572 Remove New Combo
01:01:258 New Combo
01:05:768 ^^
01:06:748 Remove New Combo
01:07:728 New Combo
01:08:317 Remove New Combo
01:13:807 New Combo
01:14:395 Remove New Combo
01:19:297 ^^
01:20:277 New Combo
01:20:474 Remove New Combo

There's really not much to say. It's a well done beatmap and no surprise from you. Star for you and best of luck.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
thanks for modding, but nothing changed =/
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]
I suggest to increase the volume at least 10-20%. I can't hear any hitsound while playing!!
the "-" in Zero Zero Nine-One would not work when search, delete it.
3 combos color in Normal, 4 in Insane?... Make the combo color same?

[Normal]
Since you have 00:54:591 (2) with finish, why don't you add more?
00:50:277 (1) - Finish
00:56:160 (2) - ^
00:56:552 (1) - ^
01:23:611 (1,2,3,4) - Clap?

And...maybe you can try this hitsound.

Mapset is pretty nice.

Download: normal-hitnormal.rar
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
i like your modding and i have fixed something from that.
Thank you very much, fixed.
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Only two difficulties? =(

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Insane random jumps you got in here.
HP Drain +1?

Nothing else to say.
Star.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Why random? T_T

thanks for modding
Shana
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Shana
star!
Jeya_old
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Jeya_old
I give a star!!!!!!!!
Stake
12 posts
Joined September 2009
Stake
Star~
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
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La Cataline
.
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
Star<#
Kuzino
Former osu!catch Champion: 2014
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Kuzino
this is STAR~~~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
thanks for stars :)
Zekira
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Zekira
Offset: 7935
Mokka_old
26 posts
Joined March 2009
Mokka_old
love it! its really good!!
fightoo ~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Thank you Zekira for modding
And thank you Mokka for star :3
Mok
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Mok
Sorry for my delay >_<

Map is okay, so i'll just star, good job Louis-chan :3
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Thank you ^_~
Kurai
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Kurai
[General]
Hum... the sound of the mp3 is a bit low. Amplify the sound by 200%~250% will be better. If you want, I can do it for you.
I think the kiai time is too long. I sugest you to end it at 01:00:091.


[Normal]
Remove all unused timing section
01:23:621 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds a bit noisy, better if you remove the finish on (1) and (3)
01:26:758 - Why there are a non-inhinerited timing section here ? o_o

That's all I guess :)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Remove all unused timing section
For example? O_o

01:23:621 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds a bit noisy, better if you remove the finish on (1) and (3)
According to the music, there must be finish hitsounds =/
01:26:758 - Why there are a non-inhinerited timing section here ? o_o
and this fixed : )
I think the kiai time is too long. I sugest you to end it at 01:00:091.
40 seconds of Kiai is not too long you know.
Hum... the sound of the mp3 is a bit low. Amplify the sound by 200%~250% will be better. If you want, I can do it for you.
Sounds fine for me, so no X )

Thank you for modding ^_~
GladiOol
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Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]
  1. The kiai timing placement is really horrible if you'd ask me. 1/2 of the map is kiai time.
Make the kiai time start here: 01:01:258 and 01:13:807.
And make it end here: 01:12:630 and 01:26:748.

That seems to be better in my opinion.
  1. Offset 7.925
  2. mp3 quality is a bit dull like mentioned above. I would recommend getting a better one or to 'upgrade' this one.
[Insane]
  1. Rename this to [Hard] ?
01:01:258 (3) - Add new combo.
01:07:738 (4) - ^
01:13:817 (3) - ^
01:14:405 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:601 (5) - Add new combo.
01:15:385 (5) - ^
01:20:287 (2) - ^
01:20:484 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Normal]

01:01:258 (2) - Add new combo.
01:06:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:532 (2) - Add new combo.
01:08:709 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:415 (1) - ^
01:13:807 (7) - Add new combo.
01:19:297 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:20:474 (5) - Add new combo.


- Star.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
fixed
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
Insane :

RENAME TO HARD!

00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like this


Normal :

00:12:248 (4) - Add a note
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052

~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052
I put that according to vocal

RENAME TO HARD!
<_<

00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like this
better for you =P

thanks for modding, but nothing changed ^_~
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena

Louis Cyphre wrote:

00:28:523 (1) - Star this slider in 00:28:327 and finish in 00:29:503
00:41:072 (1) - Star this slider in 00:40:876 and finish in 00:42:052
I put that according to vocal

RENAME TO HARD!
<_<

00:11:464 (7,8,9) - Better like this
better for you =P

thanks for modding, but nothing changed ^_~
ಠ_ಠ
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira

Gladi wrote:

Offset 7.925
You gotta be kidding me, it sounds early IMO
Soaprman
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Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Nothing wrong with the maps. The mp3 is really quiet though. Have you considered getting an mp3 that isn't so quiet? If you want me to, I can make it louder. PM me if you want. (I respond faster to PMs than to queue)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
PM'd
Thanks for modding : )
Soaprman
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Soaprman
ka-pow! replace your mp3 with this and full resubmit. I think the offset is unaffected but you might want to play the map a couple times to make sure. (I tried settling the offset debate when I last posted but it's hard for me to tell in this particular song... oh well)

http://up.ppy.sh/files/009-1op.mp3
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Fixed and thanks :3
Sakura
osu! Alumni
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Sakura
Even tho she's wearing clothes, you can clearly see her tits so that BG is NSFW sorry.
Do not use pure white combo color, it's blindind during kiai time (and sliderticks can barely be seen on white sliders)

[Insane]
00:33:033 (1,2,3) - I do not agree with these jumps, they are a bit too excessive even for an Insane.
00:42:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:484 (1,2,1) - ^
01:03:033 (2,3) - Spacing too close
01:17:935 (6,7,8) - ^

[Normal]
Double slider tick rate to avoid awkward tick positions.
00:18:523 (4,1) - Spacing too far.
And there are a few more instances when spacing goes off by 1 grid, considering you're using grid Lv 2 that's quite a bit of distance and it's confusing on an easier diff i recommend you manually adjust the off-spacings by checking through your whole diff and make sure each spacing is coherent, the reason these happened is most probably because sliders end off-grid but your notes are grid snapped.

The spacing problems are quite small but noticeable during gameplay, shouldn't be too hard to fix, so just fix all that and i'll bubble.
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